Comments received on poems by baj-a
Bits and Pieces
bigwolf said:
good write, I tried do write down my thoughts, but they disappear before I find my pen
March 11th, 2013 07:18
bigwolf said:
good write, I tried do write down my thoughts, but they disappear before I find my pen
March 11th, 2013 07:18
Nature's Remains
BrokenWordsPoet said:
Bonnie... This is almost morbid to sit there and turn such a sad part of nature into a poem, I would be out rescuing little birds. I am smiling... BWP... James... We are planing on raising some Cornish Rocks to butcher this spring. Meow...
March 9th, 2013 19:03
BrokenWordsPoet said:
Bonnie... This is almost morbid to sit there and turn such a sad part of nature into a poem, I would be out rescuing little birds. I am smiling... BWP... James... We are planing on raising some Cornish Rocks to butcher this spring. Meow...
March 9th, 2013 19:03
Nature's Remains
bigwolf said:
A well written poem and all too real. Too bad cats can't just stick to mice.
March 9th, 2013 08:33
bigwolf said:
A well written poem and all too real. Too bad cats can't just stick to mice.
March 9th, 2013 08:33
Nature's Remains
duneman said:
not the prettiest poem about nature but one of the most honest ones I've read. the cycle of life continues and sometimes to us humans it can seem downright cruel. well written.
March 9th, 2013 08:20
duneman said:
not the prettiest poem about nature but one of the most honest ones I've read. the cycle of life continues and sometimes to us humans it can seem downright cruel. well written.
March 9th, 2013 08:20
My Father's Legacy
diamonddagger said:
Very beautifully written baja. Everything went into place so well.
March 8th, 2013 17:57
diamonddagger said:
Very beautifully written baja. Everything went into place so well.
March 8th, 2013 17:57
My Father's Legacy
sokibgb said:
Touching, beautiful and truthful tribute to your father. Nobody is perfect and in showing him as he really was you showed us that you inherited the best part of him, talent, kindness and forgiveness, soki
March 8th, 2013 08:25
sokibgb said:
Touching, beautiful and truthful tribute to your father. Nobody is perfect and in showing him as he really was you showed us that you inherited the best part of him, talent, kindness and forgiveness, soki
March 8th, 2013 08:25
My Father's Legacy
baj-a said:
I should add the mural on the wall behind my father was painted by him.
March 8th, 2013 07:57
baj-a said:
I should add the mural on the wall behind my father was painted by him.
March 8th, 2013 07:57
My Father's Legacy
BrokenWordsPoet said:
Bonnie, this is a beautiful tribute to your father at lease you did share some good times with yours. The structure of your put together so well. In the second stanza you missed the a before childhood.
BWP... James...
March 7th, 2013 18:41
BrokenWordsPoet said:
Bonnie, this is a beautiful tribute to your father at lease you did share some good times with yours. The structure of your put together so well. In the second stanza you missed the a before childhood.
BWP... James...
March 7th, 2013 18:41
And So I Wonder
diamonddagger said:
Wow, i have to admit that this is a very power packed poem. Well thought out and well written. diamond
March 6th, 2013 18:32
diamonddagger said:
Wow, i have to admit that this is a very power packed poem. Well thought out and well written. diamond
March 6th, 2013 18:32
And So I Wonder
colin said:
Very insightfull Baj-a we have simular problems in our own country,sadly it seems to extend from greed Excellent poem
March 6th, 2013 17:18
colin said:
Very insightfull Baj-a we have simular problems in our own country,sadly it seems to extend from greed Excellent poem
March 6th, 2013 17:18
The Flag Still Flies
sokibgb said:
I'm with you all the way.Proud to be an American, the best country in the world.
March 5th, 2013 16:45
sokibgb said:
I'm with you all the way.Proud to be an American, the best country in the world.
March 5th, 2013 16:45
The Flag Still Flies
diamonddagger said:
I'm a patriot of the United States of America. If we stand together we hold together. Well written.
March 5th, 2013 13:30
diamonddagger said:
I'm a patriot of the United States of America. If we stand together we hold together. Well written.
March 5th, 2013 13:30
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