Comments received on poems by baj-a
Justice? (a villanelle)
sokibgb said:
Very sad and very tragic. You said it well. Let justice be served, soki
April 19th, 2013 08:27
sokibgb said:
Very sad and very tragic. You said it well. Let justice be served, soki
April 19th, 2013 08:27
Whimper in Defeat
sokibgb said:
Today your poem is very sad but full of beauty. Tomorrow i hope there will be a song in your life and a heart full of happiness, soki
April 16th, 2013 06:52
sokibgb said:
Today your poem is very sad but full of beauty. Tomorrow i hope there will be a song in your life and a heart full of happiness, soki
April 16th, 2013 06:52
Have You Heard About Jenny Lee?
Spirit_Of_Freedom said:
Well addressed ba-ja! A gentle reminder to everyone. Good poem baj-a :)
April 10th, 2013 18:44
Spirit_Of_Freedom said:
Well addressed ba-ja! A gentle reminder to everyone. Good poem baj-a :)
April 10th, 2013 18:44
Tripped
Spirit_Of_Freedom said:
The actions in the present is what matters. Replace your fears with love. Continue cultivating your faith and the Universal Father will show you what true mercy is, something humans are yet to discover and act upon, when needed. I like the humanism of this poem ba-ja :)
April 10th, 2013 18:38
Spirit_Of_Freedom said:
The actions in the present is what matters. Replace your fears with love. Continue cultivating your faith and the Universal Father will show you what true mercy is, something humans are yet to discover and act upon, when needed. I like the humanism of this poem ba-ja :)
April 10th, 2013 18:38
Tripped
nair36 said:
I enjoyed the read. Thank you for sharing your' work. I especially enjoyed this line, "his words like fine Irish lance". Something about that makes me go numb inside.
April 8th, 2013 14:50
nair36 said:
I enjoyed the read. Thank you for sharing your' work. I especially enjoyed this line, "his words like fine Irish lance". Something about that makes me go numb inside.
April 8th, 2013 14:50
Tripped
Cheeky Missy said:
Rather intensely thought-provoking with excellent imagery, this heart-breaking plea reaches as it were for the soul, asking questions from the abyss that I find seems many these days allude to struggling in, sans relief. Poignant and haunting, it begs an answer, which I only know in the LORD Jesus Christ. Thanks for sharing, richly laden, 'tis deep, to say the least.
ttfn,
Jenny
April 4th, 2013 19:30
Cheeky Missy said:
Rather intensely thought-provoking with excellent imagery, this heart-breaking plea reaches as it were for the soul, asking questions from the abyss that I find seems many these days allude to struggling in, sans relief. Poignant and haunting, it begs an answer, which I only know in the LORD Jesus Christ. Thanks for sharing, richly laden, 'tis deep, to say the least.
ttfn,
Jenny
April 4th, 2013 19:30
Tripped
diamonddagger said:
This is one of those "WOW" poem where I just don't have the right words to say! Fantastic imagery, a work of art!
April 4th, 2013 13:30
diamonddagger said:
This is one of those "WOW" poem where I just don't have the right words to say! Fantastic imagery, a work of art!
April 4th, 2013 13:30
Tripped
sokibgb said:
Baj-a your poems are always full of beauty, but today's poem is one of the most beautifully written , realistic and heart breaking. It is so true
we all have to pay restitution but I hope most peoples wings are only a little burnt and with a loving father's hand and some loving salve they can once again heal enough to fly home. soki
April 4th, 2013 08:45
sokibgb said:
Baj-a your poems are always full of beauty, but today's poem is one of the most beautifully written , realistic and heart breaking. It is so true
we all have to pay restitution but I hope most peoples wings are only a little burnt and with a loving father's hand and some loving salve they can once again heal enough to fly home. soki
April 4th, 2013 08:45
In The Quiet Moment
bigwolf said:
very well written, I feel light I have been there many times
March 29th, 2013 19:32
bigwolf said:
very well written, I feel light I have been there many times
March 29th, 2013 19:32
Have You Heard About Jenny Lee?
diamonddagger said:
I got a real charge out of this poem. Don't we all know about that vicious grapevine that spreads the gossip as it grows and grows till no one knows the truth... well written!!!!
March 25th, 2013 18:24
diamonddagger said:
I got a real charge out of this poem. Don't we all know about that vicious grapevine that spreads the gossip as it grows and grows till no one knows the truth... well written!!!!
March 25th, 2013 18:24
Have You Heard About Jenny Lee?
sokibgb said:
I have not heard about Jenny Lee yet. But I'm sure I will soon, from my neighbor who all the rest of us call CNN (not kidding she thinks she knows everything even before it happens)
March 25th, 2013 08:16
sokibgb said:
I have not heard about Jenny Lee yet. But I'm sure I will soon, from my neighbor who all the rest of us call CNN (not kidding she thinks she knows everything even before it happens)
March 25th, 2013 08:16
Velvet Twilight
sokibgb said:
Beautiful ,very well written poem about my favorite time of the day.
March 24th, 2013 11:13
sokibgb said:
Beautiful ,very well written poem about my favorite time of the day.
March 24th, 2013 11:13
Preparing for His Finals
sokibgb said:
Beautiful baj-a, also very sad to wait until the end to take his finals when the rest of us know that every little quiz counts toward the final grades. I always enjoy your poems, especially this one for the way you approached the subject, soki
March 20th, 2013 09:56
sokibgb said:
Beautiful baj-a, also very sad to wait until the end to take his finals when the rest of us know that every little quiz counts toward the final grades. I always enjoy your poems, especially this one for the way you approached the subject, soki
March 20th, 2013 09:56
Preparing for His Finals
diamonddagger said:
such a sad but true story of not knowing and thinking you've known all these years...suddenly it's upon you and you have to worry. was I wrong and then make up for lost time. Very well penned.
March 20th, 2013 09:38
diamonddagger said:
such a sad but true story of not knowing and thinking you've known all these years...suddenly it's upon you and you have to worry. was I wrong and then make up for lost time. Very well penned.
March 20th, 2013 09:38
Old Black Men
diamonddagger said:
awwwww this is so real that I could see and hear and feel the reverence of the scene. So sweet and innocent. Beautifully written!!!!
March 18th, 2013 23:35
diamonddagger said:
awwwww this is so real that I could see and hear and feel the reverence of the scene. So sweet and innocent. Beautifully written!!!!
March 18th, 2013 23:35
Old Black Men
colin said:
Beautifull memmories Baj-athe times when men were men
March 18th, 2013 14:39
colin said:
Beautifull memmories Baj-athe times when men were men
March 18th, 2013 14:39
Silence of the Hooves
bigwolf said:
I can see it all happening in front of me, nice write
March 16th, 2013 12:04
bigwolf said:
I can see it all happening in front of me, nice write
March 16th, 2013 12:04
Silence of the Hooves
diamonddagger said:
Very powerful poem. It kept my heart pounding till the very end!!! All I can say is Wow!!!
March 16th, 2013 08:45
diamonddagger said:
Very powerful poem. It kept my heart pounding till the very end!!! All I can say is Wow!!!
March 16th, 2013 08:45
In The Quiet Moment
sarah said:
beautiful poetry! cud u publish one of those written about love? i'd be thankful...
March 15th, 2013 01:37
sarah said:
beautiful poetry! cud u publish one of those written about love? i'd be thankful...
March 15th, 2013 01:37
In The Quiet Moment
BrokenWordsPoet said:
Beautiful little moment; my thoughts are with you. BWP... James...
March 14th, 2013 09:01
BrokenWordsPoet said:
Beautiful little moment; my thoughts are with you. BWP... James...
March 14th, 2013 09:01
My Father's Legacy
colin said:
Baj-a this a beautifull honest tribute of your father
March 13th, 2013 15:12
colin said:
Baj-a this a beautifull honest tribute of your father
March 13th, 2013 15:12
Bits and Pieces
colin said:
Excellent poem I never write down on bits & pieces beacause I go insane later trying to turn them into poems
March 12th, 2013 14:52
colin said:
Excellent poem I never write down on bits & pieces beacause I go insane later trying to turn them into poems
March 12th, 2013 14:52
Nature's Remains
diamonddagger said:
this is part of nature too. You wrote it very well. You thought it out and covered the act of the carnivore killing it's prey quite well, I loved it. hugs.
March 11th, 2013 20:13
diamonddagger said:
this is part of nature too. You wrote it very well. You thought it out and covered the act of the carnivore killing it's prey quite well, I loved it. hugs.
March 11th, 2013 20:13
Bits and Pieces
diamonddagger said:
I never throw any bit and pieces away. I hoard them like a miser and on a rainy day I find them and try to do something with them. I cherish these little insignificant pieces of tissue and envelopes like they were gold. LOL Fun write. diamond
March 11th, 2013 10:43
diamonddagger said:
I never throw any bit and pieces away. I hoard them like a miser and on a rainy day I find them and try to do something with them. I cherish these little insignificant pieces of tissue and envelopes like they were gold. LOL Fun write. diamond
March 11th, 2013 10:43
Bits and Pieces
BrokenWordsPoet said:
Bonnie you brought a smile to my face, you also know how to describe poet; well done... BWP... James...
March 11th, 2013 10:00
BrokenWordsPoet said:
Bonnie you brought a smile to my face, you also know how to describe poet; well done... BWP... James...
March 11th, 2013 10:00
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