Comments received on poems by David De La Cruz



By now
Goldfinch60 said:

Very emotive write.

November 2nd, 2019 02:06

Enough
Nicholas Browning said:

One of my best skills is holding a grudge. \"Sinister laughter.\"
Anyways, props to your brother.

August 19th, 2017 08:37

I\'m Sorry
myself and me said:

We can not change what had been done, right or wrong, just leave them behind. We can only do our best from now on.

August 12th, 2017 22:51

Rope Don\'t Break
David De La Cruz said:

I appreciate that guys thanks for viewing,....

June 4th, 2017 10:20

Rope Don\'t Break
Augustus said:

\"Creamed in a guitar\" cool

June 3rd, 2017 14:16

Damaged life
David De La Cruz said:

Sorry for the miss spelling and the technical problems in this poem.
I had to use my cell phone to write this one..... but thanks for viewing it...

May 21st, 2017 09:19

Once of Sadness
LML said:

Love your rimes and ur story is well told. Good job

May 12th, 2017 23:01

I\'m your n your my
Frank Prem said:

Nice David. I like the way this works. Well done.

May 2nd, 2017 02:33

I\'m your n your my
Goldfinch60 said:

Stars are the holes on heavens floor.

May 2nd, 2017 02:15

Better Place
Tony36 said:

Well written and expressed great write

April 19th, 2017 13:53

Ma Ma
starr_ said:

awesome poem, so emotional!

April 15th, 2017 18:19

I Miss You
Pls JUST LISTEN!!!!!! said:

Awwwwwwww who ever you wrpte that for let me say that was very sweet.

April 13th, 2017 19:25

A Childs Nitemare
Alethia said:

So sad. Good poem

April 12th, 2017 14:36

A Childs Nitemare
Aamina said:

That\'s a really sad poem but I really love how you\'ve done it from a child\'s point of view x

April 12th, 2017 13:55

A Childs Nitemare
David De La Cruz said:

I dedicate this poem to my child hood
friend Kevin, for he just had it tuff if not hard as a kid......Here\'s to you buddy

April 12th, 2017 13:06

Counting the Stars
Hopey_xx said:

Welcome to mps! Great first poem

April 12th, 2017 04:38