Comments received on poems by mydesirelines



Crows of Banaras
Goldfinch60 said:

May your sins be forever stay away from you.

Andy

September 30th, 2020 00:23

finding her
Michael Edwards said:

Once you have found her never let her go - I didn\'t thankfully. Enjoyed the read.

September 19th, 2020 10:40

finding her
dusk arising said:

Oh no....she\'ll only break your heart ..... well, she will if you want to continue as a poet.... happens to us all.

September 19th, 2020 02:16

finding her
Goldfinch60 said:

Poetry can fill our lives with such love as yours does, good write.

Andy

September 19th, 2020 01:43

Old Town Walk
Goldfinch60 said:

Those memories can always be awoken when you return to places of one\'s passed, some best forgotten but many bringing joy.

Welcome to MPS.

September 19th, 2020 00:10

Old Town Walk
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

BRIAN HERE (I share this site with my Wife ANGELA) ~ Good afternoon FRIEND welcome to MPS ~ it is a proactive site and operates by reading & commenting on each others poems. Please visit our site ~ Thanks\'
Thanks for your First Poem ~ it is an Epic. It describes an experience ~ most of us cn empathise with ! We all have OLD TOWNS ~ Where we were Born - Educated in - Worked in - Fell in Love in - Married in etc etc. Your Poem highlights MEMORIES which are etched into our subconsciences Analysis In a word ~ V 1. Memories V 2. Hide & Seek V 3. Close Encounter ? V 4. Or is it ? V 5. Magical dust of a Memory Cloud ! Loved the Poem ~ more PLEASE !

Love # Joy & Peace
Angela & Brian ! !

September 18th, 2020 09:16