Comments received on poems by mydesirelines
Crows of Banaras
Goldfinch60 said:
May your sins be forever stay away from you.
Andy
September 30th, 2020 00:23
Goldfinch60 said:
May your sins be forever stay away from you.
Andy
September 30th, 2020 00:23
finding her
Michael Edwards said:
Once you have found her never let her go - I didn\'t thankfully. Enjoyed the read.
September 19th, 2020 10:40
Michael Edwards said:
Once you have found her never let her go - I didn\'t thankfully. Enjoyed the read.
September 19th, 2020 10:40
finding her
dusk arising said:
Oh no....she\'ll only break your heart ..... well, she will if you want to continue as a poet.... happens to us all.
September 19th, 2020 02:16
dusk arising said:
Oh no....she\'ll only break your heart ..... well, she will if you want to continue as a poet.... happens to us all.
September 19th, 2020 02:16
finding her
Goldfinch60 said:
Poetry can fill our lives with such love as yours does, good write.
Andy
September 19th, 2020 01:43
Goldfinch60 said:
Poetry can fill our lives with such love as yours does, good write.
Andy
September 19th, 2020 01:43
Old Town Walk
Goldfinch60 said:
Those memories can always be awoken when you return to places of one\'s passed, some best forgotten but many bringing joy.
Welcome to MPS.
September 19th, 2020 00:10
Goldfinch60 said:
Those memories can always be awoken when you return to places of one\'s passed, some best forgotten but many bringing joy.
Welcome to MPS.
September 19th, 2020 00:10
Old Town Walk
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN HERE (I share this site with my Wife ANGELA) ~ Good afternoon FRIEND welcome to MPS ~ it is a proactive site and operates by reading & commenting on each others poems. Please visit our site ~ Thanks\'
Thanks for your First Poem ~ it is an Epic. It describes an experience ~ most of us cn empathise with ! We all have OLD TOWNS ~ Where we were Born - Educated in - Worked in - Fell in Love in - Married in etc etc. Your Poem highlights MEMORIES which are etched into our subconsciences Analysis In a word ~ V 1. Memories V 2. Hide & Seek V 3. Close Encounter ? V 4. Or is it ? V 5. Magical dust of a Memory Cloud ! Loved the Poem ~ more PLEASE !
Love # Joy & Peace
Angela & Brian ! !
September 18th, 2020 09:16
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN HERE (I share this site with my Wife ANGELA) ~ Good afternoon FRIEND welcome to MPS ~ it is a proactive site and operates by reading & commenting on each others poems. Please visit our site ~ Thanks\'
Thanks for your First Poem ~ it is an Epic. It describes an experience ~ most of us cn empathise with ! We all have OLD TOWNS ~ Where we were Born - Educated in - Worked in - Fell in Love in - Married in etc etc. Your Poem highlights MEMORIES which are etched into our subconsciences Analysis In a word ~ V 1. Memories V 2. Hide & Seek V 3. Close Encounter ? V 4. Or is it ? V 5. Magical dust of a Memory Cloud ! Loved the Poem ~ more PLEASE !
Love # Joy & Peace
Angela & Brian ! !
September 18th, 2020 09:16
