Comments received on poems by pberko1



Give me attention
L. B. Mek said:

look in the mirror, find that gaze that judges you so harshly, smile back at it - come back another day, find it again stare at it a little more intensely, for longer maybe: again, smile at it,
third time pays for all, as the saying goes - so next day, when you come back - this time barely give it a glimpse, then turn your back to it and try to listen, do you feel like smiling, crying or are you just still? Behold my friend, in three days you have introduced your true self, to yourself: now, continue and begin to see the truth you hide deep within - all that untapped power waiting,
deep breaths, small steps, let it all sink-in, one moment to the next - for you are alive and it is \'Life\' that needs \'Your Attention!\' Live it, live it well with whatever you have to give and rejoice, in all the tears and laughter that frame the cornerstones to your tale,
forward - ever forward, let the ghost consume the past you shed,
\'You\' are future: unravelling fate - yet to be defined...

and thank you for inspiring my little scribble, stay safe

November 17th, 2020 05:04

Give me attention
Goldfinch60 said:

That normality in your life will soon be found as your attention is now seen within your words.

Andy

November 17th, 2020 01:35

The Secrets To My Heart 🖤
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write, when you find true love it grows and grows.

Welcome to MPS.

November 14th, 2020 02:04