Comments received on poems by Jerry Reynolds
Haibun Odyssey-3
Neville said:
... you must surely be the master of this particular form Jerry .. at least here @ MPS ...
I am seriously considering trying my hand at least once before I lay down my pen ..
July 30th, 2021 12:30
Neville said:
... you must surely be the master of this particular form Jerry .. at least here @ MPS ...
I am seriously considering trying my hand at least once before I lay down my pen ..
July 30th, 2021 12:30
Haibun Odyssey-2
L. B. Mek said:
\'nature will be\'
\'the vision of her\'
\'in dark hollows,
a chauvinist mind strokes\'
\'fucking with a boy’s mother
came with consequences.\'
\'His lust for her was better known
than his contempt.\'
\'select a wrong pitch
a ruthless critic of your choice\'
\'\'nature will be\'
\'the vision of her\'
(forgive my overzealous and rude
reimagining of your
poignant and heartachingly empathetic write, Jerry
I just, wanted to share with you
those insightful lines
which impacted me the most)..
thank you! for choosing to share
your poetic wisdom, dear poet
July 30th, 2021 04:15
L. B. Mek said:
\'nature will be\'
\'the vision of her\'
\'in dark hollows,
a chauvinist mind strokes\'
\'fucking with a boy’s mother
came with consequences.\'
\'His lust for her was better known
than his contempt.\'
\'select a wrong pitch
a ruthless critic of your choice\'
\'\'nature will be\'
\'the vision of her\'
(forgive my overzealous and rude
reimagining of your
poignant and heartachingly empathetic write, Jerry
I just, wanted to share with you
those insightful lines
which impacted me the most)..
thank you! for choosing to share
your poetic wisdom, dear poet
July 30th, 2021 04:15
Haibun Odyssey-2
Neville said:
who was it said two into one dont go
......................... dunno .......................
... but they sure got that one wrong...
Never known two in a row sir, not from anyone ... well done ..
Neville
July 29th, 2021 11:57
Neville said:
who was it said two into one dont go
......................... dunno .......................
... but they sure got that one wrong...
Never known two in a row sir, not from anyone ... well done ..
Neville
July 29th, 2021 11:57
A Haibun Odyssey
L. B. Mek said:
\'a Jim Crow way of life: collapsing\'..
and buried away, it shall forever stay!
hopefully...
\'let us all endeavour, to turn History\'s
Ugly
into Poetry\'s: transcendent beauty\'...
(\'Jim Crow was more
than a series of rigid anti-black laws.
It was a way of life. Under Jim Crow\')
from: Jim Crow Museum*
(a poignant read Jerry
and such a vivid scene;
you know you\'ve executed
your depiction, well
when we all, walk away
with a bad taste, lingering - within us
all fckng Day!)
July 29th, 2021 03:15
L. B. Mek said:
\'a Jim Crow way of life: collapsing\'..
and buried away, it shall forever stay!
hopefully...
\'let us all endeavour, to turn History\'s
Ugly
into Poetry\'s: transcendent beauty\'...
(\'Jim Crow was more
than a series of rigid anti-black laws.
It was a way of life. Under Jim Crow\')
from: Jim Crow Museum*
(a poignant read Jerry
and such a vivid scene;
you know you\'ve executed
your depiction, well
when we all, walk away
with a bad taste, lingering - within us
all fckng Day!)
July 29th, 2021 03:15
A Haibun Odyssey
Neville said:
you are a clever so and so ..
Haibuns are as rare as rocking horse poo around these parts ..
I have always enjoyed the mix of prose n haiku and the way they often interrelate ... yours is a great example sir .... :)
July 28th, 2021 14:32
Neville said:
you are a clever so and so ..
Haibuns are as rare as rocking horse poo around these parts ..
I have always enjoyed the mix of prose n haiku and the way they often interrelate ... yours is a great example sir .... :)
July 28th, 2021 14:32
A Haibun Odyssey
Jerry Reynolds said:
Thanks, Dusk.
I really appreciate you taking the time to look. I wrote the poem for my baby sister, a student of Greek myth, who wanted me to write something about growing up in the 1950s in the south.
July 28th, 2021 08:50
Jerry Reynolds said:
Thanks, Dusk.
I really appreciate you taking the time to look. I wrote the poem for my baby sister, a student of Greek myth, who wanted me to write something about growing up in the 1950s in the south.
July 28th, 2021 08:50
A Haibun Odyssey
dusk arising said:
Initially i read this enthralling piece not knowing what a haibun or a bleacher were. Google clarified for me. Reading again i really like the way you have put this together and it\'s story line.
July 28th, 2021 08:28
dusk arising said:
Initially i read this enthralling piece not knowing what a haibun or a bleacher were. Google clarified for me. Reading again i really like the way you have put this together and it\'s story line.
July 28th, 2021 08:28
Unfinished Dream
Goldfinch60 said:
May that metaphor show complete understanding and togetherness Jerry.
Andy
July 28th, 2021 00:59
Goldfinch60 said:
May that metaphor show complete understanding and togetherness Jerry.
Andy
July 28th, 2021 00:59
Unfinished Dream
Accidental Poet said:
Understanding dreams not an easy task. But as Sax said, a great metaphor always comes into play. 😉
July 27th, 2021 14:43
Accidental Poet said:
Understanding dreams not an easy task. But as Sax said, a great metaphor always comes into play. 😉
July 27th, 2021 14:43
Walking the dog
Goldfinch60 said:
There smell takes them to many places for you to follow Jerry.
Andy
July 27th, 2021 00:43
Goldfinch60 said:
There smell takes them to many places for you to follow Jerry.
Andy
July 27th, 2021 00:43
Walking the dog
deep_carrot said:
This describes my pup’s gremlin crawl/leash pulling so perfectly! Good stuff!!
July 26th, 2021 18:26
deep_carrot said:
This describes my pup’s gremlin crawl/leash pulling so perfectly! Good stuff!!
July 26th, 2021 18:26
Walking the dog
Fay Slimm. said:
Nothing like a dog to smell out your past and resurrect those memories Jerry - - - grass everywhere holds many a secret and oh what tales it could tell.
July 26th, 2021 16:54
Fay Slimm. said:
Nothing like a dog to smell out your past and resurrect those memories Jerry - - - grass everywhere holds many a secret and oh what tales it could tell.
July 26th, 2021 16:54
Walking the dog
Accidental Poet said:
A dog\'s nose is 20 times more sensitive than a human\'s nose. They can\'t help but smell everything around them. Great write Jerry.
July 26th, 2021 11:47
Accidental Poet said:
A dog\'s nose is 20 times more sensitive than a human\'s nose. They can\'t help but smell everything around them. Great write Jerry.
July 26th, 2021 11:47
Old Love Song
Accidental Poet said:
I hear that siren call everyday Jerry. Great write.
July 24th, 2021 08:47
Accidental Poet said:
I hear that siren call everyday Jerry. Great write.
July 24th, 2021 08:47
Dead from the start
Goldfinch60 said:
Love is always there Jerry but many just do not see it.
Andy
July 24th, 2021 00:23
Goldfinch60 said:
Love is always there Jerry but many just do not see it.
Andy
July 24th, 2021 00:23
Dead from the start
Doggerel Dave said:
No dispute there, Jerry - when it comes to the human condition, I\'m a pessimist too.
July 23rd, 2021 19:14
Doggerel Dave said:
No dispute there, Jerry - when it comes to the human condition, I\'m a pessimist too.
July 23rd, 2021 19:14
Dead from the start
Neville said:
it happens ........... and sometimes, just like that ......... Neat mate, very neat indeed :)
July 23rd, 2021 17:13
Neville said:
it happens ........... and sometimes, just like that ......... Neat mate, very neat indeed :)
July 23rd, 2021 17:13
Dead from the start
Saxon Crow said:
I completely get what you\'re not saying Jerry.
July 23rd, 2021 14:06
Saxon Crow said:
I completely get what you\'re not saying Jerry.
July 23rd, 2021 14:06
Dead from the start
Jerry Reynolds said:
Thanks, Orchi.
Good see.
Perish the thought (even though I had it.)
It’s limited- should have chosen another category.
There it\'s edited.
July 23rd, 2021 09:55
Jerry Reynolds said:
Thanks, Orchi.
Good see.
Perish the thought (even though I had it.)
It’s limited- should have chosen another category.
There it\'s edited.
July 23rd, 2021 09:55
Dead from the start
orchidee said:
I\'m \'liking\' the poem Jerry, though not the thought that there may be no love at all.
July 23rd, 2021 09:22
orchidee said:
I\'m \'liking\' the poem Jerry, though not the thought that there may be no love at all.
July 23rd, 2021 09:22
Line Dancing
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Woah wow this is sensational and sublime sassy muse. Kudos!
Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.
July 22nd, 2021 11:27
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Woah wow this is sensational and sublime sassy muse. Kudos!
Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.
July 22nd, 2021 11:27
Line Dancing
Neville said:
the mind boggles .. in a nice way .. probably ............... :)
July 18th, 2021 07:30
Neville said:
the mind boggles .. in a nice way .. probably ............... :)
July 18th, 2021 07:30
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