Comments received on poems by Jerry Reynolds



A Haibun Odyssey
Jerry Reynolds said:

Thanks, Neville.
Glad you enjoyed it.

July 28th, 2021 14:43

A Haibun Odyssey
Neville said:


you are a clever so and so ..

Haibuns are as rare as rocking horse poo around these parts ..

I have always enjoyed the mix of prose n haiku and the way they often interrelate ... yours is a great example sir .... :)


July 28th, 2021 14:32

A Haibun Odyssey
Jerry Reynolds said:

Thanks, Dusk.
I really appreciate you taking the time to look. I wrote the poem for my baby sister, a student of Greek myth, who wanted me to write something about growing up in the 1950s in the south.

July 28th, 2021 08:50

A Haibun Odyssey
dusk arising said:

Initially i read this enthralling piece not knowing what a haibun or a bleacher were. Google clarified for me. Reading again i really like the way you have put this together and it\'s story line.

July 28th, 2021 08:28

Unfinished Dream
Goldfinch60 said:

May that metaphor show complete understanding and togetherness Jerry.

Andy

July 28th, 2021 00:59

Unfinished Dream
Accidental Poet said:

Understanding dreams not an easy task. But as Sax said, a great metaphor always comes into play. 😉

July 27th, 2021 14:43

Unfinished Dream
Saxon Crow said:

Nothing like a good metaphor Jerry. Nice one

July 27th, 2021 14:41

Walking the dog
Goldfinch60 said:

There smell takes them to many places for you to follow Jerry.

Andy

July 27th, 2021 00:43

Walking the dog
deep_carrot said:

This describes my pup’s gremlin crawl/leash pulling so perfectly! Good stuff!!

July 26th, 2021 18:26

Walking the dog
Fay Slimm. said:

Nothing like a dog to smell out your past and resurrect those memories Jerry - - - grass everywhere holds many a secret and oh what tales it could tell.

July 26th, 2021 16:54

Walking the dog
Accidental Poet said:

A dog\'s nose is 20 times more sensitive than a human\'s nose. They can\'t help but smell everything around them. Great write Jerry.

July 26th, 2021 11:47

Walking the dog
dusk arising said:

Beware lest the chain becomes a choker.

July 26th, 2021 10:52

Walking the dog
Neville said:



its a dogs life innit ... :)

July 26th, 2021 10:12

Old Love Song
Goldfinch60 said:

So true Jerry.

Andy

July 25th, 2021 00:16

Old Love Song
Accidental Poet said:

I hear that siren call everyday Jerry. Great write.

July 24th, 2021 08:47

Old Love Song
orchidee said:

Good write Jerry.

July 24th, 2021 08:30

Dead from the start
Goldfinch60 said:

Love is always there Jerry but many just do not see it.

Andy

July 24th, 2021 00:23

Dead from the start
Doggerel Dave said:

No dispute there, Jerry - when it comes to the human condition, I\'m a pessimist too.

July 23rd, 2021 19:14

Dead from the start
Neville said:



it happens ........... and sometimes, just like that ......... Neat mate, very neat indeed :)

July 23rd, 2021 17:13

Dead from the start
Saxon Crow said:

I completely get what you\'re not saying Jerry.

July 23rd, 2021 14:06

Dead from the start
Jerry Reynolds said:

Thanks, Orchi.
Good see.
Perish the thought (even though I had it.)
It’s limited- should have chosen another category.
There it\'s edited.



July 23rd, 2021 09:55

Dead from the start
orchidee said:

I\'m \'liking\' the poem Jerry, though not the thought that there may be no love at all.

July 23rd, 2021 09:22

Line Dancing
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:

Woah wow this is sensational and sublime sassy muse. Kudos!

Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.

July 22nd, 2021 11:27

Line Dancing
SureshG said:

Dancing on the line, is your poems’ every line

July 19th, 2021 13:05

Line Dancing
Neville said:


the mind boggles .. in a nice way .. probably ............... :)

July 18th, 2021 07:30

Active Messaging
Goldfinch60 said:

Good fun write Jerry.

Andy

July 17th, 2021 00:22

Active Messaging
Accidental Poet said:

Everyday the page waiting to be filled. And so you did jerry. Well penned my friend. ; )

July 16th, 2021 20:32

Active Messaging
Doggerel Dave said:

All that luxury, Jerry.....

July 16th, 2021 19:37

Active Messaging
Neville said:



its amazing what ya can find laying in the sidewalk these days ..

see it, write it down quick before another comes along ...

pretty darn neat sir if you ask me .. :)

July 16th, 2021 16:18

Active Messaging
Saxon Crow said:

Amusing and melancholic all at once. Nicely written Jerry

July 16th, 2021 14:23



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