Comments received on poems by Jerry Reynolds
One Fry Short
FineB said:
A fun write Jerry.
Just what I needed after the PM\'s further lockdowns.
Keep writing ✍ and safe during these challenging times.
FineB
December 30th, 2020 16:09
FineB said:
A fun write Jerry.
Just what I needed after the PM\'s further lockdowns.
Keep writing ✍ and safe during these challenging times.
FineB
December 30th, 2020 16:09
Pain Leaves
dusk arising said:
Then the missus awakens you, and the pain is back. Thank heavens for the single life.
December 29th, 2020 11:21
dusk arising said:
Then the missus awakens you, and the pain is back. Thank heavens for the single life.
December 29th, 2020 11:21
Dentophobia
Jerry Reynolds said:
Thanks, Guys. It really occupies your time.
December 29th, 2020 10:37
Jerry Reynolds said:
Thanks, Guys. It really occupies your time.
December 29th, 2020 10:37
Dante’s Wake
L. B. Mek said:
so many different elements to highlight in your perfectly measured dedication Jerry, but for me - in my naïve attempt to grasp at what hopeful tone I can excavate:
\'fierce brightness
take all over acheron\'
are the words I gravitate towards, that image of unyielding fierce loyalty - penetrating, that most bleak of rivers to let all know: at least this one boat harbours a love so intense, even its final passage glows defiantly bright,
just as those heart\'s it leaves behind with a shard of itself - imbued: so unshakeably-tight...
December 29th, 2020 04:42
L. B. Mek said:
so many different elements to highlight in your perfectly measured dedication Jerry, but for me - in my naïve attempt to grasp at what hopeful tone I can excavate:
\'fierce brightness
take all over acheron\'
are the words I gravitate towards, that image of unyielding fierce loyalty - penetrating, that most bleak of rivers to let all know: at least this one boat harbours a love so intense, even its final passage glows defiantly bright,
just as those heart\'s it leaves behind with a shard of itself - imbued: so unshakeably-tight...
December 29th, 2020 04:42
Dante’s Wake
Samer Amin said:
In spite of the horrific tragedy of this ordeal, I feel a strong pulse of admiration for his faithful wife, I wish I could find someone who would feel sorry for me whether I am alive or not.
December 28th, 2020 10:27
Samer Amin said:
In spite of the horrific tragedy of this ordeal, I feel a strong pulse of admiration for his faithful wife, I wish I could find someone who would feel sorry for me whether I am alive or not.
December 28th, 2020 10:27
Dante’s Wake
Goldfinch60 said:
This resonates with me Jerry as in two days time it is the first anniversary of my wife\'s demise.
Andy
December 28th, 2020 01:34
Goldfinch60 said:
This resonates with me Jerry as in two days time it is the first anniversary of my wife\'s demise.
Andy
December 28th, 2020 01:34
Dante’s Wake
Robert Southwick Richmond said:
I don\'t know of any \"Carina\" in Dante Alighieri\'s writings - do I have the wrong Dante? - Carina is the Latin word for the keel of a ship - the contellation Carina was one of the smaller constellations the overlarge constellation Argo was broken up into. It\'s used metaphorically in anatomic terminology - the carina is the place where the trachea divides into the two main bronchi.
December 27th, 2020 14:01
Robert Southwick Richmond said:
I don\'t know of any \"Carina\" in Dante Alighieri\'s writings - do I have the wrong Dante? - Carina is the Latin word for the keel of a ship - the contellation Carina was one of the smaller constellations the overlarge constellation Argo was broken up into. It\'s used metaphorically in anatomic terminology - the carina is the place where the trachea divides into the two main bronchi.
December 27th, 2020 14:01
Merry Christmas
FineB said:
Merry Xmas Jerry.
A wonderful write.
Keep writing ✍ and safe during these challenging times.
FineB
December 27th, 2020 11:58
FineB said:
Merry Xmas Jerry.
A wonderful write.
Keep writing ✍ and safe during these challenging times.
FineB
December 27th, 2020 11:58
Contour of Gone
Robert Southwick Richmond said:
I learned the word calibrachoa just a few months ago, for a flower related to petunias. Introduced only within the last 30 years. Often called \"million bells\".
Named after a Mexican pharmacist-botanist, Antonio de la Cal y Bracho (1764-1833), so it should be pronounced kahl-ee-BROTCH-oa, but apparently the usual pronunciation is kahl-ee-bra-KO-a.
December 26th, 2020 19:29
Robert Southwick Richmond said:
I learned the word calibrachoa just a few months ago, for a flower related to petunias. Introduced only within the last 30 years. Often called \"million bells\".
Named after a Mexican pharmacist-botanist, Antonio de la Cal y Bracho (1764-1833), so it should be pronounced kahl-ee-BROTCH-oa, but apparently the usual pronunciation is kahl-ee-bra-KO-a.
December 26th, 2020 19:29
Contour of Gone
Neville said:
...... This is so deceptively massive, I take my hat off to ya pen............. All Good Things, Neville
December 26th, 2020 13:43
Neville said:
...... This is so deceptively massive, I take my hat off to ya pen............. All Good Things, Neville
December 26th, 2020 13:43
Merry Christmas
Samer Amin said:
It is so amazing, how you could, in a very concise way, make a kind of figurative similarity between the Spiritual Rebirth that we feel on Christmas, and the tree itself, which is still nude and pure, completely free from the Original Sin.
December 25th, 2020 11:53
Samer Amin said:
It is so amazing, how you could, in a very concise way, make a kind of figurative similarity between the Spiritual Rebirth that we feel on Christmas, and the tree itself, which is still nude and pure, completely free from the Original Sin.
December 25th, 2020 11:53
Renga with Linda
Jerry Reynolds said:
Can\'t take credit for it participation renga has been around for over a 1,000 years. They can be a lot of fun, challenging and go on sometimes for months. Somebody writes a three line Haiku, Senryu or Lune and someone else writes a two line stanza then another writes a three line stanza every fifth stanza mentions the moon. Give it a try you might like it. Here is a short seasonal start.
JR-1
Christmas tree
nude and fragrant
potential pure
December 24th, 2020 11:28
Jerry Reynolds said:
Can\'t take credit for it participation renga has been around for over a 1,000 years. They can be a lot of fun, challenging and go on sometimes for months. Somebody writes a three line Haiku, Senryu or Lune and someone else writes a two line stanza then another writes a three line stanza every fifth stanza mentions the moon. Give it a try you might like it. Here is a short seasonal start.
JR-1
Christmas tree
nude and fragrant
potential pure
December 24th, 2020 11:28
Renga with Linda
L. B. Mek said:
how wonderfully imaginative Jerry, would never have thought to utilise these form\'s in a conversational format
🍻
December 24th, 2020 05:53
L. B. Mek said:
how wonderfully imaginative Jerry, would never have thought to utilise these form\'s in a conversational format
🍻
December 24th, 2020 05:53
Wisdom
dusk arising said:
Odd isn\'t it that when man began to speak of god, he began to speak of evil at that time.
December 21st, 2020 14:49
dusk arising said:
Odd isn\'t it that when man began to speak of god, he began to speak of evil at that time.
December 21st, 2020 14:49
Freedom
L. B. Mek said:
2nd one was written with the zeal of a bitter postman I think Jerry, lol
a fun read
December 21st, 2020 05:35
L. B. Mek said:
2nd one was written with the zeal of a bitter postman I think Jerry, lol
a fun read
December 21st, 2020 05:35
Freedom
orchidee said:
Good writes Jerry.
I try to let insects - especially wasps - out of bus windows, if I can. If I\'m on the bus of course, that is! lol.
December 20th, 2020 03:01
orchidee said:
Good writes Jerry.
I try to let insects - especially wasps - out of bus windows, if I can. If I\'m on the bus of course, that is! lol.
December 20th, 2020 03:01
Freedom
RDS said:
Those are great, the second made me laugh...I\'ve met those dogs.
December 19th, 2020 18:59
RDS said:
Those are great, the second made me laugh...I\'ve met those dogs.
December 19th, 2020 18:59
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