Comments received on poems by Lexbry
His ocean and the sinking ships
L. B. Mek said:
really creative, I like how you reinforced the dramatic elements with structure and layout instead of punctuation, makes the read flow that bit better and binds it all together,
a good read, strong voice
February 25th, 2021 04:27
L. B. Mek said:
really creative, I like how you reinforced the dramatic elements with structure and layout instead of punctuation, makes the read flow that bit better and binds it all together,
a good read, strong voice
February 25th, 2021 04:27
Street Talk
Goldfinch60 said:
You never lose those good times of childhood as you walk along the roads of the past.
Andy
January 16th, 2021 01:58
Goldfinch60 said:
You never lose those good times of childhood as you walk along the roads of the past.
Andy
January 16th, 2021 01:58
Answers
Poetic Dan said:
Wow.. Thank you for sharing this soulful out poor!
I don\'t think anyones heart can handle the truth, if we can\'t grow from it!
Much peace and respect!
Enjoy your castle and the land between your feet, keep up the write!
December 8th, 2020 14:28
Poetic Dan said:
Wow.. Thank you for sharing this soulful out poor!
I don\'t think anyones heart can handle the truth, if we can\'t grow from it!
Much peace and respect!
Enjoy your castle and the land between your feet, keep up the write!
December 8th, 2020 14:28
I hated that moment when
dusk arising said:
Wow, so much passion for the negative in your post. Is that all there is?
You\'ll find positivity is better all round and wow do you feel all the better for it.
Don\'t stay down, the world is waiting to smile back at your smile.
December 6th, 2020 06:39
dusk arising said:
Wow, so much passion for the negative in your post. Is that all there is?
You\'ll find positivity is better all round and wow do you feel all the better for it.
Don\'t stay down, the world is waiting to smile back at your smile.
December 6th, 2020 06:39
I hated that moment when
Goldfinch60 said:
That new you is so much stronger and will go on in life a much better person.
Andy
December 6th, 2020 01:48
Goldfinch60 said:
That new you is so much stronger and will go on in life a much better person.
Andy
December 6th, 2020 01:48
The story of Aya
Goldfinch60 said:
Such an emotive write but you have come through those times and are here writing words. Words always help, the more you write the more freedom comes into yopur life and life will eventually be good.
Andy
December 6th, 2020 01:37
Goldfinch60 said:
Such an emotive write but you have come through those times and are here writing words. Words always help, the more you write the more freedom comes into yopur life and life will eventually be good.
Andy
December 6th, 2020 01:37
The story of Aya
Jerry Reynolds said:
You are a child of the universe you have the right to be here. None of this is your fault, your support system failed you. Take a breath stay in the moment write the moment looking forward to reading it.
December 5th, 2020 15:22
Jerry Reynolds said:
You are a child of the universe you have the right to be here. None of this is your fault, your support system failed you. Take a breath stay in the moment write the moment looking forward to reading it.
December 5th, 2020 15:22
