Comments received on poems by Mister V
A Trailing Past
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good emotive write, one day those good memories will become good again and life will be wonderful.
Andy
May 20th, 2021 00:04
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good emotive write, one day those good memories will become good again and life will be wonderful.
Andy
May 20th, 2021 00:04
A Trailing Past
rosiedm said:
That\'s deep words I espeacially like the way you wrote towards the last verses even though how tortured it sounds rotton apple and
rotten cabbage addition is a bit humorous I hope you can leave it all behind you now here and forget past .. think of now and tomorrow .
May 19th, 2021 17:31
rosiedm said:
That\'s deep words I espeacially like the way you wrote towards the last verses even though how tortured it sounds rotton apple and
rotten cabbage addition is a bit humorous I hope you can leave it all behind you now here and forget past .. think of now and tomorrow .
May 19th, 2021 17:31
Intoxicated
L. B. Mek said:
firstly, thank you for what is a hauntingly revealing
and bravely honest description
of what is essentially, a confronted choice
of self-harming, as a utility for escaping
life\'s, far-too-commonly experienced cycle of suffering;
and the resulting disillusionment it festers
to our own feeble grasp: of self-worth..
you clearly have a wonderful talent for impactfully worded poetry!
but secondly
and far more importantly, I hope
\'this write was just your creatively worded format for self-expression..
if-not, I pray
you find the source of help your words are seemingly, calling-out for\'..
in the words of Dylan Thomas
\'Do not go gentle into that good night.
Rage, rage against the dying of the light.\'
( https://mypoeticside.com/show-classic-poem-30915 )
( https://www.recovery.org.uk/addiction/addiction-helpline/ )
( https://americanaddictioncenters.org/rehab-guide/alcohol-drug-hotline )
May 3rd, 2021 06:20
L. B. Mek said:
firstly, thank you for what is a hauntingly revealing
and bravely honest description
of what is essentially, a confronted choice
of self-harming, as a utility for escaping
life\'s, far-too-commonly experienced cycle of suffering;
and the resulting disillusionment it festers
to our own feeble grasp: of self-worth..
you clearly have a wonderful talent for impactfully worded poetry!
but secondly
and far more importantly, I hope
\'this write was just your creatively worded format for self-expression..
if-not, I pray
you find the source of help your words are seemingly, calling-out for\'..
in the words of Dylan Thomas
\'Do not go gentle into that good night.
Rage, rage against the dying of the light.\'
( https://mypoeticside.com/show-classic-poem-30915 )
( https://www.recovery.org.uk/addiction/addiction-helpline/ )
( https://americanaddictioncenters.org/rehab-guide/alcohol-drug-hotline )
May 3rd, 2021 06:20
To Proceed
L. B. Mek said:
\'When following your dreams means I\'m destined to take orders
or when assimilating, feeling obligated to cut corners.\'
insightful words, inked by a gifted wordsmith
January 28th, 2021 04:44
L. B. Mek said:
\'When following your dreams means I\'m destined to take orders
or when assimilating, feeling obligated to cut corners.\'
insightful words, inked by a gifted wordsmith
January 28th, 2021 04:44
When I Look Back
Amon said:
when you look back and realise your past mistakes you will find that the steps of your ladder are clear and start steping up
January 6th, 2021 07:39
Amon said:
when you look back and realise your past mistakes you will find that the steps of your ladder are clear and start steping up
January 6th, 2021 07:39
When I Look Back
Goldfinch60 said:
When you look it shows that you have gained experience to move onto where you are now.
Andy
January 6th, 2021 03:40
Goldfinch60 said:
When you look it shows that you have gained experience to move onto where you are now.
Andy
January 6th, 2021 03:40
Life\'s Handbook
Goldfinch60 said:
You are you MIster V and all you can do is be the best you can in your own mind, I have reached that seventy and I have modified who I am over those years and am still happy within myself.
Welcome to MPS.
January 6th, 2021 01:22
Goldfinch60 said:
You are you MIster V and all you can do is be the best you can in your own mind, I have reached that seventy and I have modified who I am over those years and am still happy within myself.
Welcome to MPS.
January 6th, 2021 01:22
