Comments received on poems by Poem by ink
Somewhere In Limbo
L. B. Mek said:
a sombre and harrowing feel to your write,
but I like your first line especially, a direct gateway to your subject matter
January 18th, 2021 04:19
L. B. Mek said:
a sombre and harrowing feel to your write,
but I like your first line especially, a direct gateway to your subject matter
January 18th, 2021 04:19
The Bite to Seal All Fates
dusk arising said:
Temptation is temptation per se but did humanity need it camoflaged in the mumbo jumbo version christianity inflicted upon us in the bible?
January 14th, 2021 09:10
dusk arising said:
Temptation is temptation per se but did humanity need it camoflaged in the mumbo jumbo version christianity inflicted upon us in the bible?
January 14th, 2021 09:10
The Bite to Seal All Fates
orchidee said:
Good write Ink.
I\'m not sure if it was the tallest tree, or if it was an apple tree (it don\'t say!). I think it was set in the middle of the garden though.
January 14th, 2021 02:48
orchidee said:
Good write Ink.
I\'m not sure if it was the tallest tree, or if it was an apple tree (it don\'t say!). I think it was set in the middle of the garden though.
January 14th, 2021 02:48
The Bite to Seal All Fates
Goldfinch60 said:
There are so many temptations in this world but age teaches us which are good or bad.
Andy
January 14th, 2021 01:47
Goldfinch60 said:
There are so many temptations in this world but age teaches us which are good or bad.
Andy
January 14th, 2021 01:47
Peace of Mind
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'d vote for you L.B. (I think) Far too much fatalistic introspection, not just here but on MPS generally.
If those poets need answers and right now are unable to get out there and experience the world, then the vast literature within the Social Sciences ( in particular Sociology and Psychology) may have something to offer for starters.
Dave
January 11th, 2021 06:10
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'d vote for you L.B. (I think) Far too much fatalistic introspection, not just here but on MPS generally.
If those poets need answers and right now are unable to get out there and experience the world, then the vast literature within the Social Sciences ( in particular Sociology and Psychology) may have something to offer for starters.
Dave
January 11th, 2021 06:10
Peace of Mind
L. B. Mek said:
may I humbly suggest, giving up: trying to find that peace of mind,
likeliness that even if you find it you can maintain it for any length of time seems highly unlikely - to me,
maybe better, to look for avenues of \'healthy\' coping methods for the struggles you\'re facing, even if they end-up being merely momentary temporary distractions - you\'ll find they can offer some relief,
if you then find the resolve to sustain and repeatedly seek-out various forms of such avenues to help relieve your anxieties (however temporary or seemingly miniscule their yield - initially), soon you may find them adding-up and offering a more concrete path to sustainable pillars of solace,
maybe worth a try?
or maybe I\'m just adding - on, to that noise of \'toxic positivity\' you yearn to evade - to insure your continued dwelling within misery\'s grasps is not disrupted and you\'re back: staring at that hollowness of solitude\'s abyss you fear the most,
in which case: I apologise for adding to your troubles dear Poet, trust in yourself above all else, you are equipped with the necessary tools to overcome your obstacles, just choose to survive one day to the next and see if you can glean what available tether to a \'better\' within that future of possibility, only existence can guarantee!
January 11th, 2021 05:49
L. B. Mek said:
may I humbly suggest, giving up: trying to find that peace of mind,
likeliness that even if you find it you can maintain it for any length of time seems highly unlikely - to me,
maybe better, to look for avenues of \'healthy\' coping methods for the struggles you\'re facing, even if they end-up being merely momentary temporary distractions - you\'ll find they can offer some relief,
if you then find the resolve to sustain and repeatedly seek-out various forms of such avenues to help relieve your anxieties (however temporary or seemingly miniscule their yield - initially), soon you may find them adding-up and offering a more concrete path to sustainable pillars of solace,
maybe worth a try?
or maybe I\'m just adding - on, to that noise of \'toxic positivity\' you yearn to evade - to insure your continued dwelling within misery\'s grasps is not disrupted and you\'re back: staring at that hollowness of solitude\'s abyss you fear the most,
in which case: I apologise for adding to your troubles dear Poet, trust in yourself above all else, you are equipped with the necessary tools to overcome your obstacles, just choose to survive one day to the next and see if you can glean what available tether to a \'better\' within that future of possibility, only existence can guarantee!
January 11th, 2021 05:49
Peace of Mind
Goldfinch60 said:
May that peace of mind come back and all will be well.
Andy
January 10th, 2021 02:02
Goldfinch60 said:
May that peace of mind come back and all will be well.
Andy
January 10th, 2021 02:02
My Greatest Weakness
L. B. Mek said:
wonderful, its those simple truth\'s we mined from within that clear the mists from our paths of choice and realised self-worth,
thanks for sharing
Happy New Year
January 8th, 2021 07:58
L. B. Mek said:
wonderful, its those simple truth\'s we mined from within that clear the mists from our paths of choice and realised self-worth,
thanks for sharing
Happy New Year
January 8th, 2021 07:58
I Long For That Plane of Existence
L. B. Mek said:
wonderfully worded subtle ripples of acceptance to owned fate,
a lovely write
Happy New Year dear Poet
January 8th, 2021 07:36
L. B. Mek said:
wonderfully worded subtle ripples of acceptance to owned fate,
a lovely write
Happy New Year dear Poet
January 8th, 2021 07:36
I Long For That Plane of Existence
Poetic Dan said:
Be free dear poet, spread thoses words endless and may they continue to be as soulful as you\'ve provided so far!
Always appreciated
Keep up the write
Much peace and respect.
January 8th, 2021 07:17
Poetic Dan said:
Be free dear poet, spread thoses words endless and may they continue to be as soulful as you\'ve provided so far!
Always appreciated
Keep up the write
Much peace and respect.
January 8th, 2021 07:17
My Greatest Weakness
Poetic Dan said:
Brilliantly done and so true, the only real battle is to keep the beauty we once saw in the world before the conditioning begun..... Maybe that\'s the journey to return back!
Thanks again for sharing!
Much peace and respect
January 8th, 2021 07:12
Poetic Dan said:
Brilliantly done and so true, the only real battle is to keep the beauty we once saw in the world before the conditioning begun..... Maybe that\'s the journey to return back!
Thanks again for sharing!
Much peace and respect
January 8th, 2021 07:12
My Greatest Weakness
Goldfinch60 said:
When you look deep into others eyes you can see what they really mean.
Andy
January 8th, 2021 01:47
Goldfinch60 said:
When you look deep into others eyes you can see what they really mean.
Andy
January 8th, 2021 01:47
I Long For That Plane of Existence
Goldfinch60 said:
Those days are full of moments and every moment in your life is special as they will not come again. Enjoy every moment.
Your words are fine, keep going.
Welcome to MPS.
January 8th, 2021 01:41
Goldfinch60 said:
Those days are full of moments and every moment in your life is special as they will not come again. Enjoy every moment.
Your words are fine, keep going.
Welcome to MPS.
January 8th, 2021 01:41
I Long For That Plane of Existence
orchidee said:
Erm, yes, I suppose we can favourite our own poems as well as others!
A fine write.
January 7th, 2021 12:03
orchidee said:
Erm, yes, I suppose we can favourite our own poems as well as others!
A fine write.
January 7th, 2021 12:03
I Long For That Plane of Existence
Poem by ink said:
Please feel free to give me any advice on structuring or any tips will be greatly appreciated. Im 23 yr and i aspire to be a great poet
- Poembyink
January 7th, 2021 11:28
Poem by ink said:
Please feel free to give me any advice on structuring or any tips will be greatly appreciated. Im 23 yr and i aspire to be a great poet
- Poembyink
January 7th, 2021 11:28
