Comments received on poems by caitlinn02
heterochromia
Robert Southwick Richmond said:
Heterochromia iridis, to give it its full title. It does have an English equivalent, odd-eyed, a word I\'ve however seen only applied to cats. (It\'s common in cats, where if a white spot falls over an eye, the iris is blue.)
A photograph of your eyes would enhance this poem in the MyPoeticSide format. I need for the poem to make some distinction of right and left.
January 9th, 2021 11:25
Robert Southwick Richmond said:
Heterochromia iridis, to give it its full title. It does have an English equivalent, odd-eyed, a word I\'ve however seen only applied to cats. (It\'s common in cats, where if a white spot falls over an eye, the iris is blue.)
A photograph of your eyes would enhance this poem in the MyPoeticSide format. I need for the poem to make some distinction of right and left.
January 9th, 2021 11:25
perfectionist
RDS said:
Nice flow caitlinn, haha you use the same technique as me for dealing with issues, poeticising the experience and tracing something from it.
A good entrance, hope to see more of your work.
J
January 9th, 2021 09:03
RDS said:
Nice flow caitlinn, haha you use the same technique as me for dealing with issues, poeticising the experience and tracing something from it.
A good entrance, hope to see more of your work.
J
January 9th, 2021 09:03
heterochromia
Goldfinch60 said:
We are all unique in our own selves caitlinn and may that always be so.
Good words and may those diamonds always shine.
Andy
January 9th, 2021 06:06
Goldfinch60 said:
We are all unique in our own selves caitlinn and may that always be so.
Good words and may those diamonds always shine.
Andy
January 9th, 2021 06:06
perfectionist
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words caitlinn, being self critical can take us to strange places, we may do things wrong and be critical about them but those errors are part of our experience of life so use that experience to move forward as experience cannot be taught.
Welcome to MPS.
January 9th, 2021 01:32
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words caitlinn, being self critical can take us to strange places, we may do things wrong and be critical about them but those errors are part of our experience of life so use that experience to move forward as experience cannot be taught.
Welcome to MPS.
January 9th, 2021 01:32
