Comments received on poems by Nancy Rdz LL
CROWN MADE OF TEARS
Soman Ragavan said:
My comments on the poem \"Crown made of tears” by Nancy Rdz LL
I am the third to view the poem and the first to Like it and the first to Comment. It is clear you are in the grip of depression. Hope things will work out well for you soon. Best wishes. Soman Ragavan. 7 June, 2023. //
June 7th, 2023 06:53
Soman Ragavan said:
My comments on the poem \"Crown made of tears” by Nancy Rdz LL
I am the third to view the poem and the first to Like it and the first to Comment. It is clear you are in the grip of depression. Hope things will work out well for you soon. Best wishes. Soman Ragavan. 7 June, 2023. //
June 7th, 2023 06:53
\"OH PENNYWISE\"
Saxon Crow said:
You gotta love it! They all float down here!
August 7th, 2021 00:21
Saxon Crow said:
You gotta love it! They all float down here!
August 7th, 2021 00:21
DIVINITY TREE
L. B. Mek said:
a very warming and reassuring read, you bring an insightful perspective that adds meaningful depth to your aesthetically pleasing rhythmic style,
thank you for sharing dear Poet:
\'But my mind wonders in lost
Let me dream with your wisdom perpetually
I know if I tell you my secrets in you I can trust
Fireflies light your enigmas truth
Beauty never seen
Distance is heard by enchanting flutes
Dressing with gold petals that glow without fin
Giving power to your growing roots
Divinity tree
can you please talk to me...
speak of words that sound strangely
Reaching to your highest leaf...
the only one that will never flee\'
February 15th, 2021 05:01
L. B. Mek said:
a very warming and reassuring read, you bring an insightful perspective that adds meaningful depth to your aesthetically pleasing rhythmic style,
thank you for sharing dear Poet:
\'But my mind wonders in lost
Let me dream with your wisdom perpetually
I know if I tell you my secrets in you I can trust
Fireflies light your enigmas truth
Beauty never seen
Distance is heard by enchanting flutes
Dressing with gold petals that glow without fin
Giving power to your growing roots
Divinity tree
can you please talk to me...
speak of words that sound strangely
Reaching to your highest leaf...
the only one that will never flee\'
February 15th, 2021 05:01
DIVINITY TREE
orchidee said:
A fine write Nancy.
If that gal wasn\'t a tree, she\'d be having a very bad hair day! lol.
February 14th, 2021 03:38
orchidee said:
A fine write Nancy.
If that gal wasn\'t a tree, she\'d be having a very bad hair day! lol.
February 14th, 2021 03:38
SINGLE MUSICAL ART
FredPeyer said:
Nancy, you did it again after the excellent \"Radio\" we now have two excellent poems! And I do like the presentation, and the ending is great.
January 30th, 2021 21:33
FredPeyer said:
Nancy, you did it again after the excellent \"Radio\" we now have two excellent poems! And I do like the presentation, and the ending is great.
January 30th, 2021 21:33
SINGLE MUSICAL ART
Spiritual wanderer said:
So well written and phrased, Loved it Nancy...
January 30th, 2021 14:48
Spiritual wanderer said:
So well written and phrased, Loved it Nancy...
January 30th, 2021 14:48
SINGLE MUSICAL ART
Goldfinch60 said:
Poetry and art together in wonder.
Andy
January 30th, 2021 02:51
Goldfinch60 said:
Poetry and art together in wonder.
Andy
January 30th, 2021 02:51
THE SECRET POLTERGEIST
FredPeyer said:
I am usually not too much into \'scary\' things, but Nancy, your poem is not only well written, I do like the presentation as well. It is different and engaging.
January 25th, 2021 19:21
FredPeyer said:
I am usually not too much into \'scary\' things, but Nancy, your poem is not only well written, I do like the presentation as well. It is different and engaging.
January 25th, 2021 19:21
THE WRITER\'S MIND
FredPeyer said:
Nancy, you expressed the writers problem real well. Sometimes it does feel like we are drowning, but alas, we do come up for air and voila.....
January 25th, 2021 19:17
FredPeyer said:
Nancy, you expressed the writers problem real well. Sometimes it does feel like we are drowning, but alas, we do come up for air and voila.....
January 25th, 2021 19:17
RADIO
dusk arising said:
That was fun and quite complex. I\'m glad i read your notes beforehand.
I know only too well the frustrations of forming relationships of any meaning over the web. I was a frequenter of chat rooms for chat but romances would come through occasionally.
January 25th, 2021 02:10
dusk arising said:
That was fun and quite complex. I\'m glad i read your notes beforehand.
I know only too well the frustrations of forming relationships of any meaning over the web. I was a frequenter of chat rooms for chat but romances would come through occasionally.
January 25th, 2021 02:10
THE SECRET POLTERGEIST
Nancy Rdz LL said:
Lol well you the first to point that out and I\'m impressed as the story leaves you hanging in wondering ha ha... But you right, well i think a specialist medium with ultra-strong faith cause after all faith conquers it all right?
January 24th, 2021 13:20
Nancy Rdz LL said:
Lol well you the first to point that out and I\'m impressed as the story leaves you hanging in wondering ha ha... But you right, well i think a specialist medium with ultra-strong faith cause after all faith conquers it all right?
January 24th, 2021 13:20
THE SECRET POLTERGEIST
orchidee said:
Oohh, I had a similar thing happen. Then I woke up and realised it was all a nightmare. Too much cheese (or whatever) before bed!
I wish I would shut up sometimes. lol. That\'s put the tin hat on it? Taken the edge off the scariness?! lol.
I\'m gonna write a scary poem: \'Beware of my singing!\'
January 23rd, 2021 03:09
orchidee said:
Oohh, I had a similar thing happen. Then I woke up and realised it was all a nightmare. Too much cheese (or whatever) before bed!
I wish I would shut up sometimes. lol. That\'s put the tin hat on it? Taken the edge off the scariness?! lol.
I\'m gonna write a scary poem: \'Beware of my singing!\'
January 23rd, 2021 03:09
THE WRITER\'S MIND
L. B. Mek said:
an inspiring read, really well thought-out
thanks for sharing
January 22nd, 2021 06:04
L. B. Mek said:
an inspiring read, really well thought-out
thanks for sharing
January 22nd, 2021 06:04
THE WRITER\'S MIND
orchidee said:
Good write Nancy. I never knew there was so much in our minds (or did I?). well, I know now! lol.
What\'s in me mind? Nothing. \'Touch wood\' as they say - *touches me head!*
January 22nd, 2021 02:41
orchidee said:
Good write Nancy. I never knew there was so much in our minds (or did I?). well, I know now! lol.
What\'s in me mind? Nothing. \'Touch wood\' as they say - *touches me head!*
January 22nd, 2021 02:41
THE WRITER\'S MIND
Goldfinch60 said:
That muse an be found in so many places where words are hidden and are then found to put onto paper.
May your muse never fail you Nancy.
Andy
January 22nd, 2021 02:11
Goldfinch60 said:
That muse an be found in so many places where words are hidden and are then found to put onto paper.
May your muse never fail you Nancy.
Andy
January 22nd, 2021 02:11
THE WRITER\'S MIND
Nancy Rdz LL said:
Thank you Dusk rising,
I\'m glad you liked. It\'s usually long my poetry cause not only is it a poem but it\'s telling a story is why some are long.
It\'s one if my favorite this poem.
January 22nd, 2021 01:40
Nancy Rdz LL said:
Thank you Dusk rising,
I\'m glad you liked. It\'s usually long my poetry cause not only is it a poem but it\'s telling a story is why some are long.
It\'s one if my favorite this poem.
January 22nd, 2021 01:40
THE WRITER\'S MIND
dusk arising said:
Im knackered after reading all that. That was a long one, I often give up in boredom with long pieces but not today. Loved the swimming interlude which gave me a big grin..... nice one.
January 22nd, 2021 01:27
dusk arising said:
Im knackered after reading all that. That was a long one, I often give up in boredom with long pieces but not today. Loved the swimming interlude which gave me a big grin..... nice one.
January 22nd, 2021 01:27
WE ARE THE WEIRDOS AND THE STRANGE
dusk arising said:
Hey Nancy welcome to this collective of weirdos and poets and weird poets too.
I think we all have the weird in us but most smile and walk a \'normal\' life.... and I bet you do too lol.
Nice first post from you, was a fun read.
This place works best if we comment on each others poetry etc and give feedback etc. I know that doing this helped me so much in developing new ways to write my stuff. Please feel free to comment or abuse any of my stuff and hoping to see more from you.
January 22nd, 2021 01:00
dusk arising said:
Hey Nancy welcome to this collective of weirdos and poets and weird poets too.
I think we all have the weird in us but most smile and walk a \'normal\' life.... and I bet you do too lol.
Nice first post from you, was a fun read.
This place works best if we comment on each others poetry etc and give feedback etc. I know that doing this helped me so much in developing new ways to write my stuff. Please feel free to comment or abuse any of my stuff and hoping to see more from you.
January 22nd, 2021 01:00
WE ARE THE WEIRDOS AND THE STRANGE
FredPeyer said:
Welcome to MPS, Nancy!
If you are a \'weirdo and strange...welcome to the club.
Love your writing.
January 21st, 2021 21:43
FredPeyer said:
Welcome to MPS, Nancy!
If you are a \'weirdo and strange...welcome to the club.
Love your writing.
January 21st, 2021 21:43
WE ARE THE WEIRDOS AND THE STRANGE
Goldfinch60 said:
We are each our own person and therefore unique and are heading for our own destiny.
Keep following that yellow brick road Nancy.
Welcome to MPS.
January 21st, 2021 01:35
Goldfinch60 said:
We are each our own person and therefore unique and are heading for our own destiny.
Keep following that yellow brick road Nancy.
Welcome to MPS.
January 21st, 2021 01:35
