Comments received on poems by DarkSoul98
Poison in my heart
L. B. Mek said:
a good read,
summed-up your message with that poignant last line
January 28th, 2021 04:24
L. B. Mek said:
a good read,
summed-up your message with that poignant last line
January 28th, 2021 04:24
Poison in my heart
Bragee said:
I felt this one instantly.
Enjoyed the read
Sorry for the pain
January 27th, 2021 11:38
Bragee said:
I felt this one instantly.
Enjoyed the read
Sorry for the pain
January 27th, 2021 11:38
Poison in my heart
FredPeyer said:
Love sometimes feels this way. Well said.
January 27th, 2021 11:16
FredPeyer said:
Love sometimes feels this way. Well said.
January 27th, 2021 11:16
Until We Meet Again
Doggerel Dave said:
I get that - You have very well encapsulated the feelings of loss and regrets at missed moments.
For myself I cannot believe the idea expressed in your last two lines, which makes it all the more important to value those we know and love while we can.
Regards Dave
January 23rd, 2021 17:33
Doggerel Dave said:
I get that - You have very well encapsulated the feelings of loss and regrets at missed moments.
For myself I cannot believe the idea expressed in your last two lines, which makes it all the more important to value those we know and love while we can.
Regards Dave
January 23rd, 2021 17:33
Until We Meet Again
Goldfinch60 said:
That loss is so emotive but you will meet again and all will be well - see my poem today about a similar subject.
Andy
January 23rd, 2021 02:21
Goldfinch60 said:
That loss is so emotive but you will meet again and all will be well - see my poem today about a similar subject.
Andy
January 23rd, 2021 02:21
Until We Meet Again
dusk arising said:
Such feelings of loss begin to teach us to be more sensitive to the needs and wellbeing of those within our circle.
January 23rd, 2021 02:15
dusk arising said:
Such feelings of loss begin to teach us to be more sensitive to the needs and wellbeing of those within our circle.
January 23rd, 2021 02:15
No Fear of Death
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good words, death may be there but it is not at all frightening as we can go beyond death in our lives.
Andy
January 22nd, 2021 02:08
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good words, death may be there but it is not at all frightening as we can go beyond death in our lives.
Andy
January 22nd, 2021 02:08
No Fear of Death
dusk arising said:
Well done, I have never seen death depicted as a live entity before, To be honest i cant quite get my head around the concept of frightening death to death so much so that he will beg for his life, but hey.... who am I anyway.
I enjoyed reading your piece, taking me someplace i hadn\'t imagined.
January 22nd, 2021 01:04
dusk arising said:
Well done, I have never seen death depicted as a live entity before, To be honest i cant quite get my head around the concept of frightening death to death so much so that he will beg for his life, but hey.... who am I anyway.
I enjoyed reading your piece, taking me someplace i hadn\'t imagined.
January 22nd, 2021 01:04