Comments received on poems by Xander/Elyse
Smoke and Mirrors
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, X.E. We are all Chameleons it\'s nature, try not to miss use the skill.
March 29th, 2021 08:31
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, X.E. We are all Chameleons it\'s nature, try not to miss use the skill.
March 29th, 2021 08:31
Smoke and Mirrors
Goldfinch60 said:
It is so good to be just yourself on your own but when we go out we all put on different mask for differing situations.
Andy
March 29th, 2021 02:56
Goldfinch60 said:
It is so good to be just yourself on your own but when we go out we all put on different mask for differing situations.
Andy
March 29th, 2021 02:56
If Fate Was Kind
L. B. Mek said:
baby steps: yielding great rewards,
beauty of \'Poetry\' is that you can disguise a lifetime\'s worth of laments in your depiction of ice cream and cake, if you so choose
dive-in and let your pen guide your path to that relief, accumulated by voicing once hidden truth\'s...
take your time, read the masters and write
till your pen glides with that \'ease of mind\'
you\'ve mined: from within...
thanks for sharing, enjoy the journey!
(please forgive me if you consider yourself an experienced wordsmith and my words read condescending or rude,
I do not mean to judge or demean, merely trying to encourage, as best as I can, nothing more: but also, nothing less)
January 25th, 2021 06:28
L. B. Mek said:
baby steps: yielding great rewards,
beauty of \'Poetry\' is that you can disguise a lifetime\'s worth of laments in your depiction of ice cream and cake, if you so choose
dive-in and let your pen guide your path to that relief, accumulated by voicing once hidden truth\'s...
take your time, read the masters and write
till your pen glides with that \'ease of mind\'
you\'ve mined: from within...
thanks for sharing, enjoy the journey!
(please forgive me if you consider yourself an experienced wordsmith and my words read condescending or rude,
I do not mean to judge or demean, merely trying to encourage, as best as I can, nothing more: but also, nothing less)
January 25th, 2021 06:28
If Fate Was Kind
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good words Xander, one day that person will see you and that love will abound.
Welcome to MPS.
January 25th, 2021 01:53
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good words Xander, one day that person will see you and that love will abound.
Welcome to MPS.
January 25th, 2021 01:53
If Fate Was Kind
FredPeyer said:
Welcome to MPS, Xander. Well written, engaging. Putting yourself out there, making the first move....it is scary. But hey, all you have to do is show that person this poem!
January 24th, 2021 19:31
FredPeyer said:
Welcome to MPS, Xander. Well written, engaging. Putting yourself out there, making the first move....it is scary. But hey, all you have to do is show that person this poem!
January 24th, 2021 19:31
