Comments received on poems by Olivia.
Brick by brick
dusk arising said:
The building blocks of our character are within the bricks of your words today.
How we build ourselves as we build a future for security and family.
A well built piece of poetry too.
March 5th, 2021 08:33
dusk arising said:
The building blocks of our character are within the bricks of your words today.
How we build ourselves as we build a future for security and family.
A well built piece of poetry too.
March 5th, 2021 08:33
Brick by brick
L. B. Mek said:
\'brick by brick within each laboured breath of hopeful dreams,
we all - strive to achieve our \'goals\', praying - \'they\' too deliver
that salvation of self-worth and belonging,
we ultimately spend our lives: aspiring to realise..\'
a wonderfully insightful depiction of those painstakingly gradual years, spent accumulating our meagre success\' arduous journey of which only we are previewed to,
while other\'s drive-by our sweat-forged \'legacy bricks\', commenting on our \'lucky break\'..
an intriguing take and an engaging topic, accessibly worded
thanks for sharing dear poet and for inspiring my little scribbled reply
March 5th, 2021 05:09
L. B. Mek said:
\'brick by brick within each laboured breath of hopeful dreams,
we all - strive to achieve our \'goals\', praying - \'they\' too deliver
that salvation of self-worth and belonging,
we ultimately spend our lives: aspiring to realise..\'
a wonderfully insightful depiction of those painstakingly gradual years, spent accumulating our meagre success\' arduous journey of which only we are previewed to,
while other\'s drive-by our sweat-forged \'legacy bricks\', commenting on our \'lucky break\'..
an intriguing take and an engaging topic, accessibly worded
thanks for sharing dear poet and for inspiring my little scribbled reply
March 5th, 2021 05:09
You are there in my thoughts
L. B. Mek said:
what a wonderful write, so accessibly worded, I simply smiled following your poignant musings from line to line and let out a small sigh at the end, thank you for penning such comforting words and choosing to share them,
March 4th, 2021 06:02
L. B. Mek said:
what a wonderful write, so accessibly worded, I simply smiled following your poignant musings from line to line and let out a small sigh at the end, thank you for penning such comforting words and choosing to share them,
March 4th, 2021 06:02
You are there in my thoughts
Goldfinch60 said:
I can relate very much to your words Olivia.
Andy
March 4th, 2021 01:29
Goldfinch60 said:
I can relate very much to your words Olivia.
Andy
March 4th, 2021 01:29
Too much water under the bridge
Goldfinch60 said:
As you go forward into your new life Olivia there will be good memories of those gone but there will be even better ones to come as you move forward.
Andy
February 24th, 2021 01:48
Goldfinch60 said:
As you go forward into your new life Olivia there will be good memories of those gone but there will be even better ones to come as you move forward.
Andy
February 24th, 2021 01:48
Too much water under the bridge
Doggerel Dave said:
Keep at it. In this and your previous similarly well written poems, you\'ve certainly got this experience covered nicely.
Where to now?
February 23rd, 2021 19:07
Doggerel Dave said:
Keep at it. In this and your previous similarly well written poems, you\'ve certainly got this experience covered nicely.
Where to now?
February 23rd, 2021 19:07
Too much water under the bridge
AlitaOpal said:
I\'ve been in this situation and it took a little while to get over.. Great write 🎈
February 23rd, 2021 16:50
AlitaOpal said:
I\'ve been in this situation and it took a little while to get over.. Great write 🎈
February 23rd, 2021 16:50
Too much water under the bridge
dusk arising said:
When troubles have mounted it is good and wholesome to be able to look to a better future where all are freed of mutual burden.
February 23rd, 2021 12:22
dusk arising said:
When troubles have mounted it is good and wholesome to be able to look to a better future where all are freed of mutual burden.
February 23rd, 2021 12:22
Too much water under the bridge
FredPeyer said:
Don\'t worry Olivia, I was born confused and still am! :-)
February 23rd, 2021 10:39
FredPeyer said:
Don\'t worry Olivia, I was born confused and still am! :-)
February 23rd, 2021 10:39
Too much water under the bridge
Jerry Reynolds said:
Sad, write a good one Olivia.
February 23rd, 2021 09:11
Jerry Reynolds said:
Sad, write a good one Olivia.
February 23rd, 2021 09:11
I am worth more
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
\'They take me higher
To another frequency
A stepping stone
in the journey of me\'
February 23rd, 2021 04:23
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
\'They take me higher
To another frequency
A stepping stone
in the journey of me\'
February 23rd, 2021 04:23
I am worth more
Goldfinch60 said:
We must always be true to ourselves and in that truth we will find others that are worth trusting.
Andy
February 23rd, 2021 01:51
Goldfinch60 said:
We must always be true to ourselves and in that truth we will find others that are worth trusting.
Andy
February 23rd, 2021 01:51
I am worth more
FredPeyer said:
A beautiful poem again, Olivia! I don\'t know you, but anybody who can write like you do IS worth more!
February 22nd, 2021 21:50
FredPeyer said:
A beautiful poem again, Olivia! I don\'t know you, but anybody who can write like you do IS worth more!
February 22nd, 2021 21:50
I am worth more
Doggerel Dave said:
Interesting read. Seems you\'ve got personal relationships, romance and so on sorted, Olivia. At least that aspect of your life should go well.
Now for the rest....
February 22nd, 2021 16:18
Doggerel Dave said:
Interesting read. Seems you\'ve got personal relationships, romance and so on sorted, Olivia. At least that aspect of your life should go well.
Now for the rest....
February 22nd, 2021 16:18
I am worth more
Noah Malice said:
yes you are, keep being true to yourself!
February 22nd, 2021 14:24
Noah Malice said:
yes you are, keep being true to yourself!
February 22nd, 2021 14:24
Enjoying my own company
L. B. Mek said:
\'The snowdrops sprouting say hello to me
As I sit quietly enjoying my own company\'
\'This new found love for quiet I don’t want to loose
I think these things sat beneath this beautiful tree
Here content in my own company.\'..
what a wonderfully worded depiction of self-mined tranquillity, so reassuringly comforting
a great write dear poet!
thank you for sharing
February 22nd, 2021 05:30
L. B. Mek said:
\'The snowdrops sprouting say hello to me
As I sit quietly enjoying my own company\'
\'This new found love for quiet I don’t want to loose
I think these things sat beneath this beautiful tree
Here content in my own company.\'..
what a wonderfully worded depiction of self-mined tranquillity, so reassuringly comforting
a great write dear poet!
thank you for sharing
February 22nd, 2021 05:30
Enjoying my own company
Goldfinch60 said:
You describe such a wonderful life that I enjoy as well, especially when I walk with My River.
Andy
February 22nd, 2021 01:25
Goldfinch60 said:
You describe such a wonderful life that I enjoy as well, especially when I walk with My River.
Andy
February 22nd, 2021 01:25
Enjoying my own company
FredPeyer said:
Beautiful, Olivia! I am with you about having some \'alone time\'. And you know why I like to talk to myself? Because I like to talk to intelligent people!!!
February 21st, 2021 18:56
FredPeyer said:
Beautiful, Olivia! I am with you about having some \'alone time\'. And you know why I like to talk to myself? Because I like to talk to intelligent people!!!
February 21st, 2021 18:56
Enjoying my own company
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'ll vote for this. Great picture painted here.
So long as it doesn\'t go on for too long....
February 21st, 2021 18:01
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'ll vote for this. Great picture painted here.
So long as it doesn\'t go on for too long....
February 21st, 2021 18:01
Enjoying my own company
Jerry Reynolds said:
True that, Olivia. Good write.
February 21st, 2021 14:50
Jerry Reynolds said:
True that, Olivia. Good write.
February 21st, 2021 14:50
Sister
Goldfinch60 said:
Siblings can mean such a great deal as we grow up and when we get older. Good words for your sister Olivia.
Andy
February 20th, 2021 02:19
Goldfinch60 said:
Siblings can mean such a great deal as we grow up and when we get older. Good words for your sister Olivia.
Andy
February 20th, 2021 02:19
Sister
FredPeyer said:
What a great tribute to your sister, Olivia. I am sure she liked it!
February 19th, 2021 20:59
FredPeyer said:
What a great tribute to your sister, Olivia. I am sure she liked it!
February 19th, 2021 20:59
A fine line between love and hate
L. B. Mek said:
a perfect example of the healing medium poetry can be utilised for, however personal a write this may be, you still managed to make your message relatable, kudos
thanks for sharing, stay strong
February 19th, 2021 05:57
L. B. Mek said:
a perfect example of the healing medium poetry can be utilised for, however personal a write this may be, you still managed to make your message relatable, kudos
thanks for sharing, stay strong
February 19th, 2021 05:57
A fine line between love and hate
Goldfinch60 said:
Yes there is but hate can always be dispersed with true love.
Andy
February 19th, 2021 02:12
Goldfinch60 said:
Yes there is but hate can always be dispersed with true love.
Andy
February 19th, 2021 02:12
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