Comments received on poems by Methmi Mandara
The Girl at the Window
L. B. Mek said:
sadly, there are too many concerning themes and wording issues with your write, for me to ignore
But, the original book you\'re writing about \'Madogiwa no Totto-chan\'
is one that represents a monumental shift and achievement in the rich Japanese literature tradition,
and I laud your choice to bring attention/awareness to that book.
Thanks for sharing
October 11th, 2021 04:17
L. B. Mek said:
sadly, there are too many concerning themes and wording issues with your write, for me to ignore
But, the original book you\'re writing about \'Madogiwa no Totto-chan\'
is one that represents a monumental shift and achievement in the rich Japanese literature tradition,
and I laud your choice to bring attention/awareness to that book.
Thanks for sharing
October 11th, 2021 04:17
Apple Picking
Goldfinch60 said:
Plucking apples is so rewarding in many ways Methmi.
Andy
September 28th, 2021 00:21
Goldfinch60 said:
Plucking apples is so rewarding in many ways Methmi.
Andy
September 28th, 2021 00:21
Apple Picking
Caring dove said:
Lovely and interesting words 🙂 I especially like these words
Ruby red apples shining ripe
Some smile pink as a blush of a bride
Crystal pellet of water droplets
Is a bead necklace embellishing the fruits
Such pretty words )
September 27th, 2021 12:28
Caring dove said:
Lovely and interesting words 🙂 I especially like these words
Ruby red apples shining ripe
Some smile pink as a blush of a bride
Crystal pellet of water droplets
Is a bead necklace embellishing the fruits
Such pretty words )
September 27th, 2021 12:28
Wonderful View of the Hills
Goldfinch60 said:
Those views of Nature\'s wonder are so important in our lives Methmi.
Andy
September 21st, 2021 00:56
Goldfinch60 said:
Those views of Nature\'s wonder are so important in our lives Methmi.
Andy
September 21st, 2021 00:56
Crystal
dusk arising said:
Methmi, you\'ve posted ten poems on here but your profile page reveals you don\'t read other poets work on here... not interested?
September 21st, 2021 00:25
dusk arising said:
Methmi, you\'ve posted ten poems on here but your profile page reveals you don\'t read other poets work on here... not interested?
September 21st, 2021 00:25
Jungkook
Goldfinch60 said:
May that nightingale always make you euphoric Methmi.
Andy
September 2nd, 2021 01:35
Goldfinch60 said:
May that nightingale always make you euphoric Methmi.
Andy
September 2nd, 2021 01:35
Waiting for Olaf
Lorna said:
Love your yearning for the snow little Methmi - it\'s very magical indeed (i hope you\'ve seen it somewhere by now) - but one certainly has enough of it after a month or two - just saying to ease your disappointment!
September 1st, 2021 06:09
Lorna said:
Love your yearning for the snow little Methmi - it\'s very magical indeed (i hope you\'ve seen it somewhere by now) - but one certainly has enough of it after a month or two - just saying to ease your disappointment!
September 1st, 2021 06:09
Taehyung
Lorna said:
How I loved this beautiful tribute - and your last stanza carried me away little Methmi!
August 31st, 2021 05:32
Lorna said:
How I loved this beautiful tribute - and your last stanza carried me away little Methmi!
August 31st, 2021 05:32
A Balcony Night
Caring dove said:
Beautiful words “ as the soft wind touches me like gentle kisses all around “
August 30th, 2021 03:05
Caring dove said:
Beautiful words “ as the soft wind touches me like gentle kisses all around “
August 30th, 2021 03:05
