Comments received on poems by bhoover56
Suicide
Goldfinch60 said:
The courage is needed to go forward in your life as life is so wonderful.
Andy
April 10th, 2021 00:22
Goldfinch60 said:
The courage is needed to go forward in your life as life is so wonderful.
Andy
April 10th, 2021 00:22
Depression
L. B. Mek said:
when you choose to write than slice, you\'re rewarding your own fight: to survive
when you choose to share your pain with others, then you\'ve taken a step
when your momentum falters, as everyone\'s does: come back
to these very words and remind yourself, what your great mind is capable of...
I congratulate your choice to fight, than surrender and wish you all the best for the future!
try to remember, however crippling the situation
one way or another: this too shall pass and will one day be your past
you need only survive today, to escape into your tomorrow\'s
(one gifted day, at a time)
April 8th, 2021 03:57
L. B. Mek said:
when you choose to write than slice, you\'re rewarding your own fight: to survive
when you choose to share your pain with others, then you\'ve taken a step
when your momentum falters, as everyone\'s does: come back
to these very words and remind yourself, what your great mind is capable of...
I congratulate your choice to fight, than surrender and wish you all the best for the future!
try to remember, however crippling the situation
one way or another: this too shall pass and will one day be your past
you need only survive today, to escape into your tomorrow\'s
(one gifted day, at a time)
April 8th, 2021 03:57
Depression
orchidee said:
A thoughtful write B. Getting out of bed is one step, to start the day.
April 8th, 2021 01:59
orchidee said:
A thoughtful write B. Getting out of bed is one step, to start the day.
April 8th, 2021 01:59
Depression
Goldfinch60 said:
Good emotive write, I do hope that you can come out of your current life and into the wonderful life that is around us all.
Welcome to MPS.
April 8th, 2021 00:19
Goldfinch60 said:
Good emotive write, I do hope that you can come out of your current life and into the wonderful life that is around us all.
Welcome to MPS.
April 8th, 2021 00:19
Depression
Liam Power said:
I like the meter and the rhyme. Gives a sense of relentlessness to the depression.
April 7th, 2021 16:03
Liam Power said:
I like the meter and the rhyme. Gives a sense of relentlessness to the depression.
April 7th, 2021 16:03
Depression
aDarkerMind said:
the truth of real pain. a pain we are given, even though we don\'t deserve it; hang in there, it will come...one day.
April 7th, 2021 12:01
aDarkerMind said:
the truth of real pain. a pain we are given, even though we don\'t deserve it; hang in there, it will come...one day.
April 7th, 2021 12:01
