Comments received on poems by Rebeccaclara



Dear George
L. B. Mek said:

what a wonderful dedication
genuinely, such a gifted singer/songwriter
could blend his voice with the greats
of so many different genre\'s..
still, he did shine his candle bright
for a few decades
a life worth celebrating, much more
than his loss is worth lamenting, I think
lyrics from round here:
\'I hear my mama call in Kingsbury Park
Just me and David and a football that glowed in the dark
Waiting patiently to make my mark
Round here\'
\'So come with me, let me show you where I\'ve lived
I want to put my hands in this earth again
Music fell like rain to the streets
The Specials and The Jam, to The Beat
Even though I think I\'ve seen
everything there is to see of this world\'
\'I gotta be thankful that this crowded space
Is the place of my birth

My birth,
In this town,
Yes I guess I got to be someone

To be somebody
In the Beautiful city\'
(and how, he was True to his word
surpassing his dreams
becoming a Somebody: in the World
with a legacy
that will survive his wildest hopes!)

July 6th, 2021 02:47

Dear George
dusk arising said:

There would have been so much more from him.

July 5th, 2021 10:10

Remembering
Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful words and remembrances of those places with my loved one.

Andy

July 2nd, 2021 00:23

Remembering
dusk arising said:

Thats quite beautiful.

Into my favourites.

July 1st, 2021 07:36

Cloud Illusions
Accidental Poet said:

The good thing about clouds is they\'re always changing, bringing you a new perspective every time you look up. Great write Rebecca. ; )

July 1st, 2021 07:32

Remembering
Accidental Poet said:

And resonate it does Rebeccaclara. I lost someone 50 years ago when they moved to across the country. But...they\'re still in my heart today and always. Excellently penned. ; )

July 1st, 2021 07:26

Cloud Illusions
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good words Rebecca, each cloud is unique and the one for you will be there for you.

Andy

May 17th, 2021 23:58

Cloud Illusions
Classicmister said:

Very expressive but sad words Rebecca - I too often gaze at clouds and sometimes see shapes of faces and mythical creatures etc.

May 17th, 2021 03:58

Cloud Illusions
orchidee said:

Good write Rebecca.

May 17th, 2021 01:45

Cloud Illusions
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

Lovely words 🙂 nicely expressed

May 17th, 2021 01:25