Comments received on poems by ravale06
A Mysterious Beauty
Dan Williams said:
Short, sincere, uplifting. Nice work.
October 12th, 2024 23:39
Dan Williams said:
Short, sincere, uplifting. Nice work.
October 12th, 2024 23:39
A Mysterious Beauty
peet said:
Lovely. Why did you stop ? There is a great hidden talent waiting to be unleashed. Looking forward to seeing more from you.
October 11th, 2024 13:52
peet said:
Lovely. Why did you stop ? There is a great hidden talent waiting to be unleashed. Looking forward to seeing more from you.
October 11th, 2024 13:52
The Deep Dark Hole
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful metaphor and a powerful write. Nicely done
July 26th, 2024 05:54
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful metaphor and a powerful write. Nicely done
July 26th, 2024 05:54
The Deep Dark Hole
Mase ♪ said:
Powerful write Ravale!
Love the meaning behind this poem. ❤️
July 25th, 2024 17:30
Mase ♪ said:
Powerful write Ravale!
Love the meaning behind this poem. ❤️
July 25th, 2024 17:30
I was Here
sorenbarrett said:
I think we all have felt this way and maybe written a poem like this. It is a feeling that I can equate with.
December 28th, 2023 08:57
sorenbarrett said:
I think we all have felt this way and maybe written a poem like this. It is a feeling that I can equate with.
December 28th, 2023 08:57
Journey to the Underworld
NinjaGirl said:
So cool! You\'re a fantastic writer!
October 6th, 2023 21:35
NinjaGirl said:
So cool! You\'re a fantastic writer!
October 6th, 2023 21:35
Journey to the Underworld
Bobby O said:
So he has regrets and climbs hills and won’t settle but his future may have promise ? I’m in , my ex girlfriend has me ready for this ablaze and bliss
August 19th, 2023 03:28
Bobby O said:
So he has regrets and climbs hills and won’t settle but his future may have promise ? I’m in , my ex girlfriend has me ready for this ablaze and bliss
August 19th, 2023 03:28
Sitting in a Sunny Grassy Field
Bobby O said:
Vigor w self realization is that shield that gifts w ease to cope. Nice honest write. Good read. The sequel my spring differently?
June 9th, 2023 22:36
Bobby O said:
Vigor w self realization is that shield that gifts w ease to cope. Nice honest write. Good read. The sequel my spring differently?
June 9th, 2023 22:36
The Lovliest Lies of All
Goldfinch60 said:
But nostalgia can also tell us of the wonderful times we DID have.
Andy
July 3rd, 2021 11:54
Goldfinch60 said:
But nostalgia can also tell us of the wonderful times we DID have.
Andy
July 3rd, 2021 11:54
Somewhere in the Distant Past
L. B. Mek said:
a wonderful read
thanks for sharing
June 21st, 2021 05:31
L. B. Mek said:
a wonderful read
thanks for sharing
June 21st, 2021 05:31
Somewhere in the Distant Past
Goldfinch60 said:
Family is so important in our lives Ravale and you obviously have a wonderful family.
Andy
June 21st, 2021 00:05
Goldfinch60 said:
Family is so important in our lives Ravale and you obviously have a wonderful family.
Andy
June 21st, 2021 00:05
Somewhere in the Distant Past
Goddess of the Mist said:
A sweet poem. I\'ve lived in some small places myself. Isn\'t it funny how tiny houses are \"in\" now? :-)
June 20th, 2021 21:18
Goddess of the Mist said:
A sweet poem. I\'ve lived in some small places myself. Isn\'t it funny how tiny houses are \"in\" now? :-)
June 20th, 2021 21:18
Thoughts
dusk arising said:
One spirit dwells within me, the spirit of life. It needs not any revered book, no fone robes or wealthy church going middle class hypocrits to support it. It is the joyous spirit of creation.
June 19th, 2021 12:01
dusk arising said:
One spirit dwells within me, the spirit of life. It needs not any revered book, no fone robes or wealthy church going middle class hypocrits to support it. It is the joyous spirit of creation.
June 19th, 2021 12:01
The Final Breath
Goldfinch60 said:
That final breath will carry not regret but will take your happiness to another place.
Andy
June 19th, 2021 00:57
Goldfinch60 said:
That final breath will carry not regret but will take your happiness to another place.
Andy
June 19th, 2021 00:57
The Final Breath
Doggerel Dave said:
I agree with every line of that - and have mentioned my impending end on several occasions here. I don\'t make it an obsession beyond the hope I go quietly.
June 18th, 2021 18:53
Doggerel Dave said:
I agree with every line of that - and have mentioned my impending end on several occasions here. I don\'t make it an obsession beyond the hope I go quietly.
June 18th, 2021 18:53
The Final Breath
dusk arising said:
Accepting a final breath will come as we transit is a signal of your own inner strength and acceptance of reality.
Few among us will be regarded as having moved the world one step on whereas we all live our existence as the world moves and we all depart with the world bustling on around us.
June 18th, 2021 10:26
dusk arising said:
Accepting a final breath will come as we transit is a signal of your own inner strength and acceptance of reality.
Few among us will be regarded as having moved the world one step on whereas we all live our existence as the world moves and we all depart with the world bustling on around us.
June 18th, 2021 10:26
Leaving
L. B. Mek said:
truly profound
to realise our handy work of self-hindering trait\'s
in the now
of our traumatic lives, real-time scenes..
unlike most of us who realise, belatedly
and reject
its inconvenient truth\'s, so quickly...
a great read, thanks for sharing
May 28th, 2021 04:18
L. B. Mek said:
truly profound
to realise our handy work of self-hindering trait\'s
in the now
of our traumatic lives, real-time scenes..
unlike most of us who realise, belatedly
and reject
its inconvenient truth\'s, so quickly...
a great read, thanks for sharing
May 28th, 2021 04:18
The Run
L. B. Mek said:
\'Before your legs turn into sludge,
You trudge, and you trudge, and you trudge.
And this is when you realised,
The war was just idealised.
The emotions of the past
Have finally left at last,\'..
insightful, a write of immense empathy
wording anguish in such a succinct and accessible way
takes a lot of practise and skill..
thanks for sharing such an emotive read, dear poet
May 27th, 2021 04:10
L. B. Mek said:
\'Before your legs turn into sludge,
You trudge, and you trudge, and you trudge.
And this is when you realised,
The war was just idealised.
The emotions of the past
Have finally left at last,\'..
insightful, a write of immense empathy
wording anguish in such a succinct and accessible way
takes a lot of practise and skill..
thanks for sharing such an emotive read, dear poet
May 27th, 2021 04:10
