Comments received on poems by Bernard Gabriel Okurut
A Shithole Of A City
Gregstarandgoff said:
Powerful and impressive poem. Really found this striking so well done.
August 16th, 2023 09:19
Gregstarandgoff said:
Powerful and impressive poem. Really found this striking so well done.
August 16th, 2023 09:19
I am only a mortal thing.
L. B. Mek said:
wonderfully creative, I like the tolerance theme as well
indeed, aren\'t we all just fallible human\'s
warped Gollum by those obstacles in our fate..
thanks for sharing
October 28th, 2022 06:10
L. B. Mek said:
wonderfully creative, I like the tolerance theme as well
indeed, aren\'t we all just fallible human\'s
warped Gollum by those obstacles in our fate..
thanks for sharing
October 28th, 2022 06:10
For without you, I don\'t know who I am.
orchidee said:
How come without me you don\'t know who you are?! heehee.
Ohh, you don\'t mean me. Note to self: Do shut up Orchi. lol.
October 9th, 2022 09:02
orchidee said:
How come without me you don\'t know who you are?! heehee.
Ohh, you don\'t mean me. Note to self: Do shut up Orchi. lol.
October 9th, 2022 09:02
Farewell to the woman I loved - and love still
L. B. Mek said:
yeah, words I can relate to
thanks for sharing
\'on to the next\'
happy fishing!
July 7th, 2022 02:44
L. B. Mek said:
yeah, words I can relate to
thanks for sharing
\'on to the next\'
happy fishing!
July 7th, 2022 02:44
Tomb of the living dead
dusk arising said:
Nice to read such an encouraging piece. May peace find it\'s way into your writing one day.
June 29th, 2021 14:53
dusk arising said:
Nice to read such an encouraging piece. May peace find it\'s way into your writing one day.
June 29th, 2021 14:53
Good people in chains
Goldfinch60 said:
One day maybe the \'Orders from above\' become silent and all will be well.
Andy
June 19th, 2021 01:12
Goldfinch60 said:
One day maybe the \'Orders from above\' become silent and all will be well.
Andy
June 19th, 2021 01:12
Good people in chains
iAli said:
The reality from the Ancient history to the modern age! 🙂
June 18th, 2021 23:12
iAli said:
The reality from the Ancient history to the modern age! 🙂
June 18th, 2021 23:12
A Salty Kiss
iAli said:
My heart going warm while reading this poem.❣
Good work, poet! 😄
June 18th, 2021 23:02
iAli said:
My heart going warm while reading this poem.❣
Good work, poet! 😄
June 18th, 2021 23:02
Good people in chains
dusk arising said:
Show me why the unthinking footsoldier does this to his fellow man. Why does one sickness follow another sickness. Are all sick.?
June 18th, 2021 10:39
dusk arising said:
Show me why the unthinking footsoldier does this to his fellow man. Why does one sickness follow another sickness. Are all sick.?
June 18th, 2021 10:39
Pain unspoken.
ShnMchlStoops76 said:
Very nice! Love conquers all, it can build you up so high, it can tear you down just the same. Thank you for sharing your work!
June 17th, 2021 16:29
ShnMchlStoops76 said:
Very nice! Love conquers all, it can build you up so high, it can tear you down just the same. Thank you for sharing your work!
June 17th, 2021 16:29
Shoot On Sight
Doggerel Dave said:
Seen before. I left what I consider to be a positive comment to this.
You evidently have deleted your poem, removed my comment and republished. Well Done. You will go far here on MPS.
June 16th, 2021 02:00
Doggerel Dave said:
Seen before. I left what I consider to be a positive comment to this.
You evidently have deleted your poem, removed my comment and republished. Well Done. You will go far here on MPS.
June 16th, 2021 02:00
I hate dawn.
Goldfinch60 said:
Dawn is the most wonderful time in my day as when I rise at dawn I know I am going to have a good day.
June 16th, 2021 00:32
Goldfinch60 said:
Dawn is the most wonderful time in my day as when I rise at dawn I know I am going to have a good day.
June 16th, 2021 00:32
I hate dawn.
Doggerel Dave said:
Sorry Bernard - apart from anything else, there is a complete disparity between your poem and your Comment from author.
Is there any connection?
What in particular within your poem warrants a +18 rating?
What have you done with your first poem (Was it \'Shoot on Sight\'?)?
June 15th, 2021 19:53
Doggerel Dave said:
Sorry Bernard - apart from anything else, there is a complete disparity between your poem and your Comment from author.
Is there any connection?
What in particular within your poem warrants a +18 rating?
What have you done with your first poem (Was it \'Shoot on Sight\'?)?
June 15th, 2021 19:53
A Salty Kiss
Neville said:
I thoroughly enjoyed this introduction to your craft ...
June 15th, 2021 01:44
Neville said:
I thoroughly enjoyed this introduction to your craft ...
June 15th, 2021 01:44
