Comments received on poems by Shantha Teldeniya



Let Me Share Your Shade With Girl
sorenbarrett said:

A beautiful gesture of caring and sensitivity expressed in this poem. Nicely done.

August 10th, 2024 15:45

Man on the over-bridge
Doggerel Dave said:

More shelter under the bridge - or have I not understood the architecture/engineering?

Neat little poem about being down and out... Where?.... Or does it matter?

March 10th, 2024 04:39

LOVERS AND FLOWERS HOW JOINT FOREVER?
Akash said:

♥️

April 8th, 2023 02:34

You Can Win The Game.
Akash said:

Bens win the game ♥️

March 17th, 2023 02:44

A Well Dressed Monkey Never Be A Gentleman.
Akash said:

Feels like a real situation in the society.
Well done sir.

July 19th, 2022 09:18

A Well Dressed Monkey Never Be A Gentleman.
L. B. Mek said:

this is deep!
so well written, thanks for sharing
(\'that tail - end
of a \'gentlemen\'s\', suit
sure offers room, to hide
a lot of his insidious, deeds...\'
and we be
the wannabe monkey-wrench, presence
trying to stem, his venomous legacy
from bleeding into that next
unsuspecting, generation..
Empire\'s and their never ending
grip
on a nation\'s, capacity to free
its mind
from shadow-less chains
and showcase, its full potential!)

July 19th, 2022 06:22

A Well Dressed Monkey Never Be A Gentleman.
evenwheniLie said:

Lol India is filled with monkeys. Interesting.

July 19th, 2022 05:08

The Nature Lover\'s Dream
L. B. Mek said:

well written
wonderful imagery, such
a lovely read
thank you!

July 5th, 2022 02:49



Pleasing Cooling Whole My Soul.
voices of ghosts said:

very nice nature is a great gift

April 8th, 2022 23:31

STOP THE WAR!
Paul Bell said:

Well put, beats why civilised countries allow this outrage.

March 3rd, 2022 09:07

The Wealthiest Man In A Shrinking World
Suman_Bhattacharya said:

No one can hide in the world

Someone says that knowledge is wealth

Important words in today\'s world...


January 4th, 2022 12:36

Christmas poem
thennapita said:

Best poem of the year (2021)

December 26th, 2021 10:28

Christmas poem
jayatissa said:

Imagination+brief

December 24th, 2021 10:34

Christmas poem
Ndubuisi Agbandu said:

👏

November 16th, 2021 19:26

Day Of The Dead, We Remember Lovely Hearts...
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write and message Shantha.

Andy

November 6th, 2021 01:44

Day Of The Dead, We Remember Lovely Hearts...
Paul Bell said:

Great message.
For a time, mum and dad are back.

November 5th, 2021 12:41


Whole Numbers - New Nursery Rhymes.
Lorna said:

Clearly the love of math shines through as almost a living thing.

October 24th, 2021 05:38

How can I forget My Poetic Side ?
orchidee said:

Good write S.
Oohh no, you won\'t forget us!
How could you ever miss us?! heehee.

October 21st, 2021 02:24

I Miss You, My Darling, Don\'t Let Covid Spread .
Tissa Jayawardana said:

ප්‍රතිභාප්‍රර්ණබව කියන්නෙ මෙන්න මේකට....හිත පෑරෙන නිර්මාණයක්...හරිම සංවේදියි.

August 31st, 2021 10:38

I Miss You, My Darling, Don\'t Let Covid Spread .
Dove said:

Heartfelt

August 31st, 2021 06:00

I Miss You, My Darling, Don\'t Let Covid Spread .
Lorna said:

Beautiful fear for a loved one....

August 31st, 2021 05:19

Little Lamp, Little Lamp... New Nursery Rhyme
Lorna said:

So sweet!

August 23rd, 2021 06:15

Little Lamp, Little Lamp... New Nursery Rhyme
orchidee said:

Good write S.

August 23rd, 2021 01:55

What Is The Meaning Of Life?
L. B. Mek said:

some insightfully introspective, reflections
thanks for sharing

August 10th, 2021 06:07

Timmy, Timmy Pussy Cat... New Nursery Rhyme
orchidee said:

Good write S.

August 1st, 2021 04:49

What Is The Meaning Of His Love?
jayatissa said:

A nice thought! it is just like the early age of the affair. Not all early age affairs are broken away. Here, the writer has overlooked it. I think that is where the specialty of this poem.

July 26th, 2021 19:16

Where is the Real Sight?
jayatissa said:

Yes true!

July 18th, 2021 13:32

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