Comments received on poems by Shantha Teldeniya
Man on the over-bridge
Doggerel Dave said:
More shelter under the bridge - or have I not understood the architecture/engineering?
Neat little poem about being down and out... Where?.... Or does it matter?
March 10th, 2024 04:39
Doggerel Dave said:
More shelter under the bridge - or have I not understood the architecture/engineering?
Neat little poem about being down and out... Where?.... Or does it matter?
March 10th, 2024 04:39
A Well Dressed Monkey Never Be A Gentleman.
Akash said:
Feels like a real situation in the society.
Well done sir.
July 19th, 2022 09:18
Akash said:
Feels like a real situation in the society.
Well done sir.
July 19th, 2022 09:18
A Well Dressed Monkey Never Be A Gentleman.
L. B. Mek said:
this is deep!
so well written, thanks for sharing
(\'that tail - end
of a \'gentlemen\'s\', suit
sure offers room, to hide
a lot of his insidious, deeds...\'
and we be
the wannabe monkey-wrench, presence
trying to stem, his venomous legacy
from bleeding into that next
unsuspecting, generation..
Empire\'s and their never ending
grip
on a nation\'s, capacity to free
its mind
from shadow-less chains
and showcase, its full potential!)
July 19th, 2022 06:22
L. B. Mek said:
this is deep!
so well written, thanks for sharing
(\'that tail - end
of a \'gentlemen\'s\', suit
sure offers room, to hide
a lot of his insidious, deeds...\'
and we be
the wannabe monkey-wrench, presence
trying to stem, his venomous legacy
from bleeding into that next
unsuspecting, generation..
Empire\'s and their never ending
grip
on a nation\'s, capacity to free
its mind
from shadow-less chains
and showcase, its full potential!)
July 19th, 2022 06:22
A Well Dressed Monkey Never Be A Gentleman.
evenwheniLie said:
Lol India is filled with monkeys. Interesting.
July 19th, 2022 05:08
evenwheniLie said:
Lol India is filled with monkeys. Interesting.
July 19th, 2022 05:08
The Nature Lover\'s Dream
L. B. Mek said:
well written
wonderful imagery, such
a lovely read
thank you!
July 5th, 2022 02:49
L. B. Mek said:
well written
wonderful imagery, such
a lovely read
thank you!
July 5th, 2022 02:49
Raise Your Hand With A Black Flag Against The Easter Sunday Attack.
Shantha Teldeniya said:
Thank you Akash!
April 21st, 2022 10:20
Shantha Teldeniya said:
Thank you Akash!
April 21st, 2022 10:20
Raise Your Hand With A Black Flag Against The Easter Sunday Attack.
Akash said:
Good points sir
April 21st, 2022 09:29
Akash said:
Good points sir
April 21st, 2022 09:29
Pleasing Cooling Whole My Soul.
voices of ghosts said:
very nice nature is a great gift
April 8th, 2022 23:31
voices of ghosts said:
very nice nature is a great gift
April 8th, 2022 23:31
STOP THE WAR!
Paul Bell said:
Well put, beats why civilised countries allow this outrage.
March 3rd, 2022 09:07
Paul Bell said:
Well put, beats why civilised countries allow this outrage.
March 3rd, 2022 09:07
The Wealthiest Man In A Shrinking World
Suman_Bhattacharya said:
No one can hide in the world
Someone says that knowledge is wealth
Important words in today\'s world...
January 4th, 2022 12:36
Suman_Bhattacharya said:
No one can hide in the world
Someone says that knowledge is wealth
Important words in today\'s world...
January 4th, 2022 12:36
Day Of The Dead, We Remember Lovely Hearts...
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write and message Shantha.
Andy
November 6th, 2021 01:44
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write and message Shantha.
Andy
November 6th, 2021 01:44
Day Of The Dead, We Remember Lovely Hearts...
Paul Bell said:
Great message.
For a time, mum and dad are back.
November 5th, 2021 12:41
Paul Bell said:
Great message.
For a time, mum and dad are back.
November 5th, 2021 12:41
Whole Numbers - New Nursery Rhymes.
Lorna said:
Clearly the love of math shines through as almost a living thing.
October 24th, 2021 05:38
Lorna said:
Clearly the love of math shines through as almost a living thing.
October 24th, 2021 05:38
How can I forget My Poetic Side ?
orchidee said:
Good write S.
Oohh no, you won\'t forget us!
How could you ever miss us?! heehee.
October 21st, 2021 02:24
orchidee said:
Good write S.
Oohh no, you won\'t forget us!
How could you ever miss us?! heehee.
October 21st, 2021 02:24
I Miss You, My Darling, Don\'t Let Covid Spread .
Tissa Jayawardana said:
ප්රතිභාප්රර්ණබව කියන්නෙ මෙන්න මේකට....හිත පෑරෙන නිර්මාණයක්...හරිම සංවේදියි.
August 31st, 2021 10:38
Tissa Jayawardana said:
ප්රතිභාප්රර්ණබව කියන්නෙ මෙන්න මේකට....හිත පෑරෙන නිර්මාණයක්...හරිම සංවේදියි.
August 31st, 2021 10:38
I Miss You, My Darling, Don\'t Let Covid Spread .
Lorna said:
Beautiful fear for a loved one....
August 31st, 2021 05:19
Lorna said:
Beautiful fear for a loved one....
August 31st, 2021 05:19
What Is The Meaning Of Life?
L. B. Mek said:
some insightfully introspective, reflections
thanks for sharing
August 10th, 2021 06:07
L. B. Mek said:
some insightfully introspective, reflections
thanks for sharing
August 10th, 2021 06:07
What Is The Meaning Of His Love?
jayatissa said:
A nice thought! it is just like the early age of the affair. Not all early age affairs are broken away. Here, the writer has overlooked it. I think that is where the specialty of this poem.
July 26th, 2021 19:16
jayatissa said:
A nice thought! it is just like the early age of the affair. Not all early age affairs are broken away. Here, the writer has overlooked it. I think that is where the specialty of this poem.
July 26th, 2021 19:16
Where is the Real Sight?
flyingfish said:
The eyes of the beholder matters. We only ever see one face of the moon, the side that faces us. Very thought provoking poem. Thanks
July 13th, 2021 13:05
flyingfish said:
The eyes of the beholder matters. We only ever see one face of the moon, the side that faces us. Very thought provoking poem. Thanks
July 13th, 2021 13:05
