Dear Mary Beth
L. B. Mek said:

wonderfully creative, may I dare
to guess, if this has that T. S. Elliot
Alfred Prufrock - playfulness, woven
into its scene depicted: realism..
a wonderful reading experience
thanks for sharing dear poet
I really admire your diverse range
and artistic courage to experiment

July 23rd, 2021 04:16

The Walker
Goldfinch60 said:

So you\'ve seen me during the night Jack. 😈😈😈.

Andy

July 17th, 2021 00:24

A Stillbeat Heart
L. B. Mek said:

in one of my write\'s, I think I wrote
\'dear self, forgive me
for falling in love with each syllable
of those lies: just, so-as to survive\'
(or something similar),
and I can\'t help but recognise that same theme
or message in your write as well;
it\'s so true how we like to twist ourselves
into knots, just by layering our lies
one on top of the other, fearing
if we admit to ourselves, our capacity
to distort our own reality, we won\'t
have anywhere to hide
and blame
and hate
then, what would we do
with all that repressed, festering resentment...
\'In confines
it moans and cries
led horribly astray.\'

\'In the dark
a stillbeat heart
imprisoned by the lie.\'
(a wonderful read, dear poet
with an important message,
thanks for choosing to share)

July 16th, 2021 03:37

The Dread Beast
L. B. Mek said:

I like the level of dramatic intensity
you\'ve managed to craft, within such a short write
showcases your practised skill of word placement
and pacing..
an intriguing read, thanks for sharing

July 15th, 2021 03:12

At Worlds End
aDarkerMind said:

welcome to MPS Jack;
and what a start!
an outstanding write;

July 14th, 2021 05:51