Comments received on poems by kingdomcleeves
A Letter From A Retired Party Girl
L. B. Mek said:
\'retire the shoes
never
the dance steps\'
lol
(your last line
is everything we need
to realise our worth)
thanks for sharing, dear poet
July 31st, 2023 05:32
L. B. Mek said:
\'retire the shoes
never
the dance steps\'
lol
(your last line
is everything we need
to realise our worth)
thanks for sharing, dear poet
July 31st, 2023 05:32
Loud Women
Doggerel Dave said:
Not loud round here though...haven\'t seen a whisper...
March 14th, 2023 06:06
Doggerel Dave said:
Not loud round here though...haven\'t seen a whisper...
March 14th, 2023 06:06
strangers to lovers to strangers
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Sweet words ) I like your poem .
October 27th, 2021 15:40
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Sweet words ) I like your poem .
October 27th, 2021 15:40
I\'m Jealous of Mary Jane
Doggerel Dave said:
Not only is he a dope head, he\'s a dope as well - doesn\'t know what he\'s missing.
Keep at it Val (neat write), you\'ll get there.
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August 30th, 2021 05:14
Doggerel Dave said:
Not only is he a dope head, he\'s a dope as well - doesn\'t know what he\'s missing.
Keep at it Val (neat write), you\'ll get there.
Has no one formally welcomed you toMPS? Very remiss. - It goes like this: Welcome to MPS. Please feel free to comment on this and other poems; help keep MPS an interesting vibrant place it already is.
August 30th, 2021 05:14
Wrong Turn
Arvy said:
Unfortunately it\'s the evil that is scary not the dark ally. walking at night can be as deadly as being in a cage with a tiger. Thank you for shedding the light on this!
August 15th, 2021 01:10
Arvy said:
Unfortunately it\'s the evil that is scary not the dark ally. walking at night can be as deadly as being in a cage with a tiger. Thank you for shedding the light on this!
August 15th, 2021 01:10
strangers to lovers to strangers
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine loving words Valerie.
Andy
August 3rd, 2021 00:33
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine loving words Valerie.
Andy
August 3rd, 2021 00:33
