Comments received on poems by kingdomcleeves



A Letter From A Retired Party Girl
L. B. Mek said:

\'retire the shoes
never
the dance steps\'
lol
(your last line
is everything we need
to realise our worth)
thanks for sharing, dear poet


July 31st, 2023 05:32

Loud Women
Doggerel Dave said:

Not loud round here though...haven\'t seen a whisper...

March 14th, 2023 06:06

strangers to lovers to strangers
Caring dove said:

Sweet words ) I like your poem .

October 27th, 2021 15:40

I\'m Jealous of Mary Jane
Lorna said:

Cute one.........

August 30th, 2021 07:58

I\'m Jealous of Mary Jane
Doggerel Dave said:

Not only is he a dope head, he\'s a dope as well - doesn\'t know what he\'s missing.

Keep at it Val (neat write), you\'ll get there.

Has no one formally welcomed you toMPS? Very remiss. - It goes like this: Welcome to MPS. Please feel free to comment on this and other poems; help keep MPS an interesting vibrant place it already is.

August 30th, 2021 05:14

Wrong Turn
Arvy said:

Unfortunately it\'s the evil that is scary not the dark ally. walking at night can be as deadly as being in a cage with a tiger. Thank you for shedding the light on this!

August 15th, 2021 01:10

strangers to lovers to strangers
Goldfinch60 said:

Fine loving words Valerie.

Andy

August 3rd, 2021 00:33