Comments received on poems by DLewis88
lies
sorenbarrett said:
That pretty well sums up the term just like the poem on paper black and white
September 16th, 2025 08:14
sorenbarrett said:
That pretty well sums up the term just like the poem on paper black and white
September 16th, 2025 08:14
God help Us
Fina Elara 🌙 -Petra Patrice said:
Sad and Beautifully written. We all need to pray.🙏🏻 Love it.
September 14th, 2025 22:18
Fina Elara 🌙 -Petra Patrice said:
Sad and Beautifully written. We all need to pray.🙏🏻 Love it.
September 14th, 2025 22:18
God help Us
sorenbarrett said:
A supplicatory poem that ends as a prayer. Nicely worded it speaks of peace in a violent world. A great wish.
September 14th, 2025 17:00
sorenbarrett said:
A supplicatory poem that ends as a prayer. Nicely worded it speaks of peace in a violent world. A great wish.
September 14th, 2025 17:00
Dance Fever
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful tripple of five five five. Nicely said
August 29th, 2025 13:48
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful tripple of five five five. Nicely said
August 29th, 2025 13:48
Echoes In My Steps
sorenbarrett said:
Defiance and rebellion ring out in this poem resounding in a cry for freedom. Nicely written
August 27th, 2025 06:59
sorenbarrett said:
Defiance and rebellion ring out in this poem resounding in a cry for freedom. Nicely written
August 27th, 2025 06:59
Puzzle Piece
Doggerel Dave said:
I identify with the shrink from conformity - know it well.
August 26th, 2025 21:13
Doggerel Dave said:
I identify with the shrink from conformity - know it well.
August 26th, 2025 21:13
Cancel, Click, Repeat
Doggerel Dave said:
With you nearly all the way there. a well versed argument re the many who have fixed ideas and cannot examine them. (beyond this site I\'m not on line so you may have a very different perspective here).
For me, you would need to define what you mean by \'political correctness\' though.
August 26th, 2025 21:05
Doggerel Dave said:
With you nearly all the way there. a well versed argument re the many who have fixed ideas and cannot examine them. (beyond this site I\'m not on line so you may have a very different perspective here).
For me, you would need to define what you mean by \'political correctness\' though.
August 26th, 2025 21:05
Cancel, Click, Repeat
sorenbarrett said:
As the population grows so do laws of control and now we are too damn crowed with both. Good poem
August 26th, 2025 05:03
sorenbarrett said:
As the population grows so do laws of control and now we are too damn crowed with both. Good poem
August 26th, 2025 05:03
The Quiet Room
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely rhymed but more its metaphors are well done. Very nice and a fave
August 25th, 2025 19:40
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely rhymed but more its metaphors are well done. Very nice and a fave
August 25th, 2025 19:40
Power To The Common People
ElizabethMoroz said:
A sprawling commentary on the gap and division between the rich and poor and so much emotional nuance in between dwell done on maintaining the rhythm throughout. I enjoyed this song of resistance. Sincerely, Elizabeth
July 17th, 2025 11:03
ElizabethMoroz said:
A sprawling commentary on the gap and division between the rich and poor and so much emotional nuance in between dwell done on maintaining the rhythm throughout. I enjoyed this song of resistance. Sincerely, Elizabeth
July 17th, 2025 11:03
Power To The Common People
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that emphasizes the struggle between the rich and the poor with an emphasis on the oppression. A strong and powerful poem
July 17th, 2025 09:40
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that emphasizes the struggle between the rich and the poor with an emphasis on the oppression. A strong and powerful poem
July 17th, 2025 09:40
The Quiet Place
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem that casts its mood of aa soft and gentle world. The line (I wear the wind like a second skin,) is magnificent and I wish that I had thought of it. Very poetic. Loved it
July 16th, 2025 06:56
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem that casts its mood of aa soft and gentle world. The line (I wear the wind like a second skin,) is magnificent and I wish that I had thought of it. Very poetic. Loved it
July 16th, 2025 06:56
Puzzle Piece
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of trying to bend to fit into the shape that is needed to be excepted, nicely expressed and written
July 16th, 2025 01:24
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of trying to bend to fit into the shape that is needed to be excepted, nicely expressed and written
July 16th, 2025 01:24
Puzzle Piece
sorenbarrett said:
A tough puzzle DLewis and the first thing that came to mind was nature. But then I would guess it would not be that easy. Well done
July 15th, 2025 19:30
sorenbarrett said:
A tough puzzle DLewis and the first thing that came to mind was nature. But then I would guess it would not be that easy. Well done
July 15th, 2025 19:30
We Rise Like Sunshine
Poetic Licence said:
A nicely crafted write expressing the struggles they have faced going back generations, and the strength they have to continue facing those challenges, enjoyed the read
July 9th, 2025 11:54
Poetic Licence said:
A nicely crafted write expressing the struggles they have faced going back generations, and the strength they have to continue facing those challenges, enjoyed the read
July 9th, 2025 11:54
We Rise Like Sunshine
sorenbarrett said:
My favorite part of this poem was the first three lines that flowed so well and caught my attention and carried me away.
July 9th, 2025 09:47
sorenbarrett said:
My favorite part of this poem was the first three lines that flowed so well and caught my attention and carried me away.
July 9th, 2025 09:47
Funny Bunny
sorenbarrett said:
Good write. Keep moving it\'s hard to hit a moving target. Fun read
July 6th, 2025 09:41
sorenbarrett said:
Good write. Keep moving it\'s hard to hit a moving target. Fun read
July 6th, 2025 09:41
Threads Of Dream
Poetic Licence said:
I get a sense that the dream is having the chance to make a life for themselves i.e immigration, where once they had that opportunity now they do not, nicely expressed and written
July 5th, 2025 22:37
Poetic Licence said:
I get a sense that the dream is having the chance to make a life for themselves i.e immigration, where once they had that opportunity now they do not, nicely expressed and written
July 5th, 2025 22:37
Threads Of Dream
sorenbarrett said:
With this poem I see immigration past and present where once there were opened doors now they are locked. A poem of a dream that has now awoken. Powerful and a fave
July 5th, 2025 13:56
sorenbarrett said:
With this poem I see immigration past and present where once there were opened doors now they are locked. A poem of a dream that has now awoken. Powerful and a fave
July 5th, 2025 13:56
Out of place
Poetic Licence said:
An emotional plee to be excepted for who they are and be from the emotional prison they are in, nicely expressed and written
June 24th, 2025 22:42
Poetic Licence said:
An emotional plee to be excepted for who they are and be from the emotional prison they are in, nicely expressed and written
June 24th, 2025 22:42
Out of place
sorenbarrett said:
An interesting and thought provoking poem where freedom is a relative word. Very nice
June 24th, 2025 09:10
sorenbarrett said:
An interesting and thought provoking poem where freedom is a relative word. Very nice
June 24th, 2025 09:10
Stop!
Poetic Licence said:
A welcome call and so needed, peace and love to all, enjoyed the read
May 30th, 2025 10:13
Poetic Licence said:
A welcome call and so needed, peace and love to all, enjoyed the read
May 30th, 2025 10:13
Stop!
sorenbarrett said:
A great poem for peace and love that is sadly lacking. Nicely done
May 30th, 2025 08:53
sorenbarrett said:
A great poem for peace and love that is sadly lacking. Nicely done
May 30th, 2025 08:53
Hi God
BlessedbyGod said:
God hears you and sees you and knows your heart
But it’s more than just being a good person.
You’ve got to have faith and believe even when everything is falling apart , you’ve got to repent and ask for forgiveness for the sins that we commit on a daily basis , which we all sin and fall short of the glory of God,
I’m a very strong believer and still sin even though I try not to - I still do - it’s our human ways and humans influences that we continuously fall but as long as our eyes are on our Lord and we ask for forgiveness , truly believe in Him and that Jesus Christ is his son and our redeemer - we will be saved
You are never alone my friend -
May 26th, 2025 07:52
BlessedbyGod said:
God hears you and sees you and knows your heart
But it’s more than just being a good person.
You’ve got to have faith and believe even when everything is falling apart , you’ve got to repent and ask for forgiveness for the sins that we commit on a daily basis , which we all sin and fall short of the glory of God,
I’m a very strong believer and still sin even though I try not to - I still do - it’s our human ways and humans influences that we continuously fall but as long as our eyes are on our Lord and we ask for forgiveness , truly believe in Him and that Jesus Christ is his son and our redeemer - we will be saved
You are never alone my friend -
May 26th, 2025 07:52
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