Comments received on poems by DLewis88
Never Enough
sorenbarrett said:
Fellings of inadequacy take us all from time to time and I hear them in this rhyme. When we feel small and no good at all we need to reassess our priorities and look at the poetry you make that brightens others days. This poem was written in good rhyme and flowed well nicely done
January 10th, 2025 08:49
sorenbarrett said:
Fellings of inadequacy take us all from time to time and I hear them in this rhyme. When we feel small and no good at all we need to reassess our priorities and look at the poetry you make that brightens others days. This poem was written in good rhyme and flowed well nicely done
January 10th, 2025 08:49
Never Enough
TobaniNataiella said:
Try to be you just the way you are, emotional word well written
January 10th, 2025 01:39
TobaniNataiella said:
Try to be you just the way you are, emotional word well written
January 10th, 2025 01:39
Never Enough
Mutley Ravishes said:
We\'re still in the game
Someone\'s waiting for us
To get in our own lane
These days
I work on
The effortless way!
January 9th, 2025 23:50
Mutley Ravishes said:
We\'re still in the game
Someone\'s waiting for us
To get in our own lane
These days
I work on
The effortless way!
January 9th, 2025 23:50
Mother Nature
TobaniNataiella said:
Mother Nature is a wonderful thing, i hope we start to look after it better, very soon. Enjoyed the read
December 29th, 2024 08:53
TobaniNataiella said:
Mother Nature is a wonderful thing, i hope we start to look after it better, very soon. Enjoyed the read
December 29th, 2024 08:53
Mother Nature
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely look at the mother of us all. Very nicely written
December 29th, 2024 08:16
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely look at the mother of us all. Very nicely written
December 29th, 2024 08:16
What is the point
TobaniNataiella said:
I echo the sentiment of Soren, this can appear to be very hard to do but it is something you must try to do, all the best
December 7th, 2024 01:18
TobaniNataiella said:
I echo the sentiment of Soren, this can appear to be very hard to do but it is something you must try to do, all the best
December 7th, 2024 01:18
What is the point
sorenbarrett said:
A sad poem of the loss of hope. It is well written with a dark tone and end. To have others love you, you must love yourself and in this is the paradox.
December 6th, 2024 19:31
sorenbarrett said:
A sad poem of the loss of hope. It is well written with a dark tone and end. To have others love you, you must love yourself and in this is the paradox.
December 6th, 2024 19:31
Sexual Frustration
Mutley Ravishes said:
Nothing beats
Transmutation
For regeneration
Can it be done
While making love?
Well, there`s no doubt
One night stands are out
Of the question
November 13th, 2024 18:35
Mutley Ravishes said:
Nothing beats
Transmutation
For regeneration
Can it be done
While making love?
Well, there`s no doubt
One night stands are out
Of the question
November 13th, 2024 18:35
World Piece
sorenbarrett said:
A great write just before the US election. A message that goes unheeded. Nicely written with good rhyme
October 22nd, 2024 20:23
sorenbarrett said:
A great write just before the US election. A message that goes unheeded. Nicely written with good rhyme
October 22nd, 2024 20:23
The Trickster
Doggerel Dave said:
Yeh? Cover me in egg yolk, and sadly I have to inform you.....
Change the last word to \'perhaps...\' and I can say I maybe enjoyed your shortie just a little, lol.
September 26th, 2024 06:00
Doggerel Dave said:
Yeh? Cover me in egg yolk, and sadly I have to inform you.....
Change the last word to \'perhaps...\' and I can say I maybe enjoyed your shortie just a little, lol.
September 26th, 2024 06:00
The Trickster
Cassie58 said:
We all need humour in our lives. Anything which takes our minds off politics and world conflict has to be a blessing. Though being the butt of practical jokes doesn’t seem much like fun for the one at the receiving end. The trickster would be in his element though:) Nicely penned.
September 25th, 2024 21:40
Cassie58 said:
We all need humour in our lives. Anything which takes our minds off politics and world conflict has to be a blessing. Though being the butt of practical jokes doesn’t seem much like fun for the one at the receiving end. The trickster would be in his element though:) Nicely penned.
September 25th, 2024 21:40
Jellyfish Dream
Teddy.15 said:
So very clever and felt like I was actually watching one in action, having been stung a few times, I\'m not frightened of them but I like you an fascinated. 🌹
September 18th, 2024 07:28
Teddy.15 said:
So very clever and felt like I was actually watching one in action, having been stung a few times, I\'m not frightened of them but I like you an fascinated. 🌹
September 18th, 2024 07:28
Beneath the Wave
Mutley Ravishes said:
Great write.
I was so afraid of the dark
I couldn`t even enter Noah`s Ark!
September 11th, 2024 19:22
Mutley Ravishes said:
Great write.
I was so afraid of the dark
I couldn`t even enter Noah`s Ark!
September 11th, 2024 19:22
What A Woman means to me
Neville said:
if you can keep sight of all the virtues you have listed and wrapped in a poem then you will probably go far and always have a smile on your face .. Neville
September 10th, 2024 13:56
Neville said:
if you can keep sight of all the virtues you have listed and wrapped in a poem then you will probably go far and always have a smile on your face .. Neville
September 10th, 2024 13:56
Pizza
Neville said:
You can beat an egg & a drum but you just can\'t beat a pizza made & served up in Napoli .. can ya .. Neville
September 10th, 2024 13:55
Neville said:
You can beat an egg & a drum but you just can\'t beat a pizza made & served up in Napoli .. can ya .. Neville
September 10th, 2024 13:55
Pizza
sorenbarrett said:
Is this really about pizza? Or is it a metaphor? Nicely said in very few words.
September 5th, 2024 13:55
sorenbarrett said:
Is this really about pizza? Or is it a metaphor? Nicely said in very few words.
September 5th, 2024 13:55
The Arcade
Maplespal said:
I am 50 but still remember those days. Thank you for the write.
September 1st, 2024 17:04
Maplespal said:
I am 50 but still remember those days. Thank you for the write.
September 1st, 2024 17:04
The Arcade
Cheeky Missy said:
Bravo! La, you have prettily rendered, dare I say it? The eighties into the nineties in a heartbeat. And what kind of pizza? Pepperoni?!
The curious reality is that I gravitated towards the race car games.... and I\'ve always driven like that was life. Ergo,...?!
September 1st, 2024 15:23
Cheeky Missy said:
Bravo! La, you have prettily rendered, dare I say it? The eighties into the nineties in a heartbeat. And what kind of pizza? Pepperoni?!
The curious reality is that I gravitated towards the race car games.... and I\'ve always driven like that was life. Ergo,...?!
September 1st, 2024 15:23
Anger
Cheeky Missy said:
Yep. Mine is horrifically explosive and damaging. Excellent tribute!
August 30th, 2024 18:44
Cheeky Missy said:
Yep. Mine is horrifically explosive and damaging. Excellent tribute!
August 30th, 2024 18:44
What A Woman means to me
Cassie58 said:
A woman can be complex. Written by someone who appreciates all the aspects of womanhood. A lovely tribute.
August 25th, 2024 01:16
Cassie58 said:
A woman can be complex. Written by someone who appreciates all the aspects of womanhood. A lovely tribute.
August 25th, 2024 01:16
What A Woman means to me
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed all of those and just as you say so much more. Lovely
August 24th, 2024 18:30
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed all of those and just as you say so much more. Lovely
August 24th, 2024 18:30
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