Comments received on poems by DLewis88
Whiskers in the Moonlight
sorenbarrett said:
A feline tribute and a lovely write in good rhyme and flow with wonderful images.
January 17th, 2026 21:07
sorenbarrett said:
A feline tribute and a lovely write in good rhyme and flow with wonderful images.
January 17th, 2026 21:07
Wake Up People
2781 said:
The Lord is known by the judgement which he executes: the wicked is snared in the work of his own hands.
Higgaion,
Selah.
January 14th, 2026 07:43
2781 said:
The Lord is known by the judgement which he executes: the wicked is snared in the work of his own hands.
Higgaion,
Selah.
January 14th, 2026 07:43
Wake Up People
sorenbarrett said:
After atrocities, idiots in the road, violation of human rights we have not moved far from the view of the disadvantaged as disposable and disregard of authority. Laws seen as only a recommendation no respect no consideration every man for himself. Sad.
January 14th, 2026 06:45
sorenbarrett said:
After atrocities, idiots in the road, violation of human rights we have not moved far from the view of the disadvantaged as disposable and disregard of authority. Laws seen as only a recommendation no respect no consideration every man for himself. Sad.
January 14th, 2026 06:45
Friendship
sorenbarrett said:
The support of friends is most important. Nicely said
January 12th, 2026 20:12
sorenbarrett said:
The support of friends is most important. Nicely said
January 12th, 2026 20:12
Merry Christmas
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely Christmas wish nicely written. Well done
December 21st, 2025 19:09
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely Christmas wish nicely written. Well done
December 21st, 2025 19:09
Blueprints and Bruises
sorenbarrett said:
Wonderful rhyme in a very moving message that carries on the feet of great meter. Lovely and a fave
November 20th, 2025 20:56
sorenbarrett said:
Wonderful rhyme in a very moving message that carries on the feet of great meter. Lovely and a fave
November 20th, 2025 20:56
The weight of Silence
Freedom4 said:
I love this! The words easily turn to images in my mind as they are read. I have often felt the same. I like \'I wear my quiet like a suit,
tailored, sharp, and neat.\' The metaphors are beautifully woven through the fabric of the poem. I am looking forward to reading more of your poetry.
November 19th, 2025 22:20
Freedom4 said:
I love this! The words easily turn to images in my mind as they are read. I have often felt the same. I like \'I wear my quiet like a suit,
tailored, sharp, and neat.\' The metaphors are beautifully woven through the fabric of the poem. I am looking forward to reading more of your poetry.
November 19th, 2025 22:20
The weight of Silence
sorenbarrett said:
Lovely wording making use of great metaphors in this poem. Very nicely done in most poetic style a fave
November 19th, 2025 18:11
sorenbarrett said:
Lovely wording making use of great metaphors in this poem. Very nicely done in most poetic style a fave
November 19th, 2025 18:11
Bats
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read, they fly through my bedroom each night, when they started walking on my pillow I drew the line and put up a mosquito net.
October 19th, 2025 17:24
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read, they fly through my bedroom each night, when they started walking on my pillow I drew the line and put up a mosquito net.
October 19th, 2025 17:24
Fame
sorenbarrett said:
Everything has its ups and downs money and fame are no different and what ever any one says death is the great leveler. A good read
October 14th, 2025 18:22
sorenbarrett said:
Everything has its ups and downs money and fame are no different and what ever any one says death is the great leveler. A good read
October 14th, 2025 18:22
God help Us
RSM0812 said:
This envokes to me the power of prayer and the importance of prayer in ones life. Nicely done.
October 14th, 2025 05:53
RSM0812 said:
This envokes to me the power of prayer and the importance of prayer in ones life. Nicely done.
October 14th, 2025 05:53
lies
sorenbarrett said:
That pretty well sums up the term just like the poem on paper black and white
September 16th, 2025 08:14
sorenbarrett said:
That pretty well sums up the term just like the poem on paper black and white
September 16th, 2025 08:14
God help Us
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
Sad and Beautifully written. We all need to pray.🙏🏻 Love it.
September 14th, 2025 22:18
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
Sad and Beautifully written. We all need to pray.🙏🏻 Love it.
September 14th, 2025 22:18
God help Us
sorenbarrett said:
A supplicatory poem that ends as a prayer. Nicely worded it speaks of peace in a violent world. A great wish.
September 14th, 2025 17:00
sorenbarrett said:
A supplicatory poem that ends as a prayer. Nicely worded it speaks of peace in a violent world. A great wish.
September 14th, 2025 17:00
Dance Fever
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful tripple of five five five. Nicely said
August 29th, 2025 13:48
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful tripple of five five five. Nicely said
August 29th, 2025 13:48
Echoes In My Steps
sorenbarrett said:
Defiance and rebellion ring out in this poem resounding in a cry for freedom. Nicely written
August 27th, 2025 06:59
sorenbarrett said:
Defiance and rebellion ring out in this poem resounding in a cry for freedom. Nicely written
August 27th, 2025 06:59
Puzzle Piece
Doggerel Dave said:
I identify with the shrink from conformity - know it well.
August 26th, 2025 21:13
Doggerel Dave said:
I identify with the shrink from conformity - know it well.
August 26th, 2025 21:13
Cancel, Click, Repeat
Doggerel Dave said:
With you nearly all the way there. a well versed argument re the many who have fixed ideas and cannot examine them. (beyond this site I\'m not on line so you may have a very different perspective here).
For me, you would need to define what you mean by \'political correctness\' though.
August 26th, 2025 21:05
Doggerel Dave said:
With you nearly all the way there. a well versed argument re the many who have fixed ideas and cannot examine them. (beyond this site I\'m not on line so you may have a very different perspective here).
For me, you would need to define what you mean by \'political correctness\' though.
August 26th, 2025 21:05
Cancel, Click, Repeat
sorenbarrett said:
As the population grows so do laws of control and now we are too damn crowed with both. Good poem
August 26th, 2025 05:03
sorenbarrett said:
As the population grows so do laws of control and now we are too damn crowed with both. Good poem
August 26th, 2025 05:03
The Quiet Room
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely rhymed but more its metaphors are well done. Very nice and a fave
August 25th, 2025 19:40
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely rhymed but more its metaphors are well done. Very nice and a fave
August 25th, 2025 19:40
Power To The Common People
ElizabethMoroz said:
A sprawling commentary on the gap and division between the rich and poor and so much emotional nuance in between dwell done on maintaining the rhythm throughout. I enjoyed this song of resistance. Sincerely, Elizabeth
July 17th, 2025 11:03
ElizabethMoroz said:
A sprawling commentary on the gap and division between the rich and poor and so much emotional nuance in between dwell done on maintaining the rhythm throughout. I enjoyed this song of resistance. Sincerely, Elizabeth
July 17th, 2025 11:03
Power To The Common People
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that emphasizes the struggle between the rich and the poor with an emphasis on the oppression. A strong and powerful poem
July 17th, 2025 09:40
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that emphasizes the struggle between the rich and the poor with an emphasis on the oppression. A strong and powerful poem
July 17th, 2025 09:40
The Quiet Place
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem that casts its mood of aa soft and gentle world. The line (I wear the wind like a second skin,) is magnificent and I wish that I had thought of it. Very poetic. Loved it
July 16th, 2025 06:56
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem that casts its mood of aa soft and gentle world. The line (I wear the wind like a second skin,) is magnificent and I wish that I had thought of it. Very poetic. Loved it
July 16th, 2025 06:56
Puzzle Piece
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of trying to bend to fit into the shape that is needed to be excepted, nicely expressed and written
July 16th, 2025 01:24
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of trying to bend to fit into the shape that is needed to be excepted, nicely expressed and written
July 16th, 2025 01:24
Puzzle Piece
sorenbarrett said:
A tough puzzle DLewis and the first thing that came to mind was nature. But then I would guess it would not be that easy. Well done
July 15th, 2025 19:30
sorenbarrett said:
A tough puzzle DLewis and the first thing that came to mind was nature. But then I would guess it would not be that easy. Well done
July 15th, 2025 19:30
We Rise Like Sunshine
Poetic Licence said:
A nicely crafted write expressing the struggles they have faced going back generations, and the strength they have to continue facing those challenges, enjoyed the read
July 9th, 2025 11:54
Poetic Licence said:
A nicely crafted write expressing the struggles they have faced going back generations, and the strength they have to continue facing those challenges, enjoyed the read
July 9th, 2025 11:54
We Rise Like Sunshine
sorenbarrett said:
My favorite part of this poem was the first three lines that flowed so well and caught my attention and carried me away.
July 9th, 2025 09:47
sorenbarrett said:
My favorite part of this poem was the first three lines that flowed so well and caught my attention and carried me away.
July 9th, 2025 09:47
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