Comments received on poems by DLewis88
Sexual Frustration
Mutley Ravishes said:
Nothing beats
Transmutation
For regeneration
Can it be done
While making love?
Well, there`s no doubt
One night stands are out
Of the question
November 13th, 2024 18:35
Mutley Ravishes said:
Nothing beats
Transmutation
For regeneration
Can it be done
While making love?
Well, there`s no doubt
One night stands are out
Of the question
November 13th, 2024 18:35
World Piece
sorenbarrett said:
A great write just before the US election. A message that goes unheeded. Nicely written with good rhyme
October 22nd, 2024 20:23
sorenbarrett said:
A great write just before the US election. A message that goes unheeded. Nicely written with good rhyme
October 22nd, 2024 20:23
The Trickster
Doggerel Dave said:
Yeh? Cover me in egg yolk, and sadly I have to inform you.....
Change the last word to \'perhaps...\' and I can say I maybe enjoyed your shortie just a little, lol.
September 26th, 2024 06:00
Doggerel Dave said:
Yeh? Cover me in egg yolk, and sadly I have to inform you.....
Change the last word to \'perhaps...\' and I can say I maybe enjoyed your shortie just a little, lol.
September 26th, 2024 06:00
The Trickster
Cassie58 said:
We all need humour in our lives. Anything which takes our minds off politics and world conflict has to be a blessing. Though being the butt of practical jokes doesn’t seem much like fun for the one at the receiving end. The trickster would be in his element though:) Nicely penned.
September 25th, 2024 21:40
Cassie58 said:
We all need humour in our lives. Anything which takes our minds off politics and world conflict has to be a blessing. Though being the butt of practical jokes doesn’t seem much like fun for the one at the receiving end. The trickster would be in his element though:) Nicely penned.
September 25th, 2024 21:40
Jellyfish Dream
Teddy.15 said:
So very clever and felt like I was actually watching one in action, having been stung a few times, I\'m not frightened of them but I like you an fascinated. 🌹
September 18th, 2024 07:28
Teddy.15 said:
So very clever and felt like I was actually watching one in action, having been stung a few times, I\'m not frightened of them but I like you an fascinated. 🌹
September 18th, 2024 07:28
Beneath the Wave
Mutley Ravishes said:
Great write.
I was so afraid of the dark
I couldn`t even enter Noah`s Ark!
September 11th, 2024 19:22
Mutley Ravishes said:
Great write.
I was so afraid of the dark
I couldn`t even enter Noah`s Ark!
September 11th, 2024 19:22
What A Woman means to me
Neville said:
if you can keep sight of all the virtues you have listed and wrapped in a poem then you will probably go far and always have a smile on your face .. Neville
September 10th, 2024 13:56
Neville said:
if you can keep sight of all the virtues you have listed and wrapped in a poem then you will probably go far and always have a smile on your face .. Neville
September 10th, 2024 13:56
Pizza
Neville said:
You can beat an egg & a drum but you just can\'t beat a pizza made & served up in Napoli .. can ya .. Neville
September 10th, 2024 13:55
Neville said:
You can beat an egg & a drum but you just can\'t beat a pizza made & served up in Napoli .. can ya .. Neville
September 10th, 2024 13:55
Pizza
sorenbarrett said:
Is this really about pizza? Or is it a metaphor? Nicely said in very few words.
September 5th, 2024 13:55
sorenbarrett said:
Is this really about pizza? Or is it a metaphor? Nicely said in very few words.
September 5th, 2024 13:55
The Arcade
Maplespal said:
I am 50 but still remember those days. Thank you for the write.
September 1st, 2024 17:04
Maplespal said:
I am 50 but still remember those days. Thank you for the write.
September 1st, 2024 17:04
The Arcade
Cheeky Missy said:
Bravo! La, you have prettily rendered, dare I say it? The eighties into the nineties in a heartbeat. And what kind of pizza? Pepperoni?!
The curious reality is that I gravitated towards the race car games.... and I\'ve always driven like that was life. Ergo,...?!
September 1st, 2024 15:23
Cheeky Missy said:
Bravo! La, you have prettily rendered, dare I say it? The eighties into the nineties in a heartbeat. And what kind of pizza? Pepperoni?!
The curious reality is that I gravitated towards the race car games.... and I\'ve always driven like that was life. Ergo,...?!
September 1st, 2024 15:23
Anger
Cheeky Missy said:
Yep. Mine is horrifically explosive and damaging. Excellent tribute!
August 30th, 2024 18:44
Cheeky Missy said:
Yep. Mine is horrifically explosive and damaging. Excellent tribute!
August 30th, 2024 18:44
What A Woman means to me
Cassie58 said:
A woman can be complex. Written by someone who appreciates all the aspects of womanhood. A lovely tribute.
August 25th, 2024 01:16
Cassie58 said:
A woman can be complex. Written by someone who appreciates all the aspects of womanhood. A lovely tribute.
August 25th, 2024 01:16
What A Woman means to me
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed all of those and just as you say so much more. Lovely
August 24th, 2024 18:30
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed all of those and just as you say so much more. Lovely
August 24th, 2024 18:30
Feeling Happy
Cassie58 said:
A lovely haiku brimful of happiness. A painting in words.
August 23rd, 2024 06:37
Cassie58 said:
A lovely haiku brimful of happiness. A painting in words.
August 23rd, 2024 06:37
Black Void
sorenbarrett said:
So nicely worded this poem of metaphor takes one into the depths of life through both night and day. Nicely done
August 19th, 2024 14:41
sorenbarrett said:
So nicely worded this poem of metaphor takes one into the depths of life through both night and day. Nicely done
August 19th, 2024 14:41
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