Comments received on poems by DLewis88
We Rise Like Sunshine
Poetic Licence said:
A nicely crafted write expressing the struggles they have faced going back generations, and the strength they have to continue facing those challenges, enjoyed the read
July 9th, 2025 11:54
Poetic Licence said:
A nicely crafted write expressing the struggles they have faced going back generations, and the strength they have to continue facing those challenges, enjoyed the read
July 9th, 2025 11:54
We Rise Like Sunshine
sorenbarrett said:
My favorite part of this poem was the first three lines that flowed so well and caught my attention and carried me away.
July 9th, 2025 09:47
sorenbarrett said:
My favorite part of this poem was the first three lines that flowed so well and caught my attention and carried me away.
July 9th, 2025 09:47
Funny Bunny
sorenbarrett said:
Good write. Keep moving it\'s hard to hit a moving target. Fun read
July 6th, 2025 09:41
sorenbarrett said:
Good write. Keep moving it\'s hard to hit a moving target. Fun read
July 6th, 2025 09:41
Threads Of Dream
Poetic Licence said:
I get a sense that the dream is having the chance to make a life for themselves i.e immigration, where once they had that opportunity now they do not, nicely expressed and written
July 5th, 2025 22:37
Poetic Licence said:
I get a sense that the dream is having the chance to make a life for themselves i.e immigration, where once they had that opportunity now they do not, nicely expressed and written
July 5th, 2025 22:37
Threads Of Dream
sorenbarrett said:
With this poem I see immigration past and present where once there were opened doors now they are locked. A poem of a dream that has now awoken. Powerful and a fave
July 5th, 2025 13:56
sorenbarrett said:
With this poem I see immigration past and present where once there were opened doors now they are locked. A poem of a dream that has now awoken. Powerful and a fave
July 5th, 2025 13:56
Out of place
Poetic Licence said:
An emotional plee to be excepted for who they are and be from the emotional prison they are in, nicely expressed and written
June 24th, 2025 22:42
Poetic Licence said:
An emotional plee to be excepted for who they are and be from the emotional prison they are in, nicely expressed and written
June 24th, 2025 22:42
Out of place
sorenbarrett said:
An interesting and thought provoking poem where freedom is a relative word. Very nice
June 24th, 2025 09:10
sorenbarrett said:
An interesting and thought provoking poem where freedom is a relative word. Very nice
June 24th, 2025 09:10
Stop!
Poetic Licence said:
A welcome call and so needed, peace and love to all, enjoyed the read
May 30th, 2025 10:13
Poetic Licence said:
A welcome call and so needed, peace and love to all, enjoyed the read
May 30th, 2025 10:13
Stop!
sorenbarrett said:
A great poem for peace and love that is sadly lacking. Nicely done
May 30th, 2025 08:53
sorenbarrett said:
A great poem for peace and love that is sadly lacking. Nicely done
May 30th, 2025 08:53
Hi God
BlessedbyGod said:
God hears you and sees you and knows your heart
But it’s more than just being a good person.
You’ve got to have faith and believe even when everything is falling apart , you’ve got to repent and ask for forgiveness for the sins that we commit on a daily basis , which we all sin and fall short of the glory of God,
I’m a very strong believer and still sin even though I try not to - I still do - it’s our human ways and humans influences that we continuously fall but as long as our eyes are on our Lord and we ask for forgiveness , truly believe in Him and that Jesus Christ is his son and our redeemer - we will be saved
You are never alone my friend -
May 26th, 2025 07:52
BlessedbyGod said:
God hears you and sees you and knows your heart
But it’s more than just being a good person.
You’ve got to have faith and believe even when everything is falling apart , you’ve got to repent and ask for forgiveness for the sins that we commit on a daily basis , which we all sin and fall short of the glory of God,
I’m a very strong believer and still sin even though I try not to - I still do - it’s our human ways and humans influences that we continuously fall but as long as our eyes are on our Lord and we ask for forgiveness , truly believe in Him and that Jesus Christ is his son and our redeemer - we will be saved
You are never alone my friend -
May 26th, 2025 07:52
Hi God
sorenbarrett said:
This poem gives the feel of an intimacy with God yet an insecurity that what one does is not sufficient. There is a friendliness that extends from God to fellow man but is not always reciprocated and out of human flaw is not met with adequate response. A humble piece that inspires compassion for others that try but don\'t always come up to expectation. Lovely
May 26th, 2025 06:18
sorenbarrett said:
This poem gives the feel of an intimacy with God yet an insecurity that what one does is not sufficient. There is a friendliness that extends from God to fellow man but is not always reciprocated and out of human flaw is not met with adequate response. A humble piece that inspires compassion for others that try but don\'t always come up to expectation. Lovely
May 26th, 2025 06:18
No Love
sorenbarrett said:
I hear a yearning and a hunger for love in this poem. If one is hungry one must go to the tree where the honey is stored and suffer the sting of angry bees. Today to meet someone in such an isolated world the tree seems the internet and there lies the potential stings of angry bees and only wax not honey. A lovely and longing write well done
May 19th, 2025 04:01
sorenbarrett said:
I hear a yearning and a hunger for love in this poem. If one is hungry one must go to the tree where the honey is stored and suffer the sting of angry bees. Today to meet someone in such an isolated world the tree seems the internet and there lies the potential stings of angry bees and only wax not honey. A lovely and longing write well done
May 19th, 2025 04:01
Wishing Star
2781 said:
And his tail drew the third part of the stars of heaven, and did cast them to the earth:
May 15th, 2025 10:32
2781 said:
And his tail drew the third part of the stars of heaven, and did cast them to the earth:
May 15th, 2025 10:32
Wishing Star
sorenbarrett said:
We all have wishes and many are not reachable making them dreams not reality. A fun read
May 15th, 2025 05:40
sorenbarrett said:
We all have wishes and many are not reachable making them dreams not reality. A fun read
May 15th, 2025 05:40
Words
sorenbarrett said:
A strong message sent in this piece. The effects of bullying and how it effects the victim. Nicely stated
May 14th, 2025 06:45
sorenbarrett said:
A strong message sent in this piece. The effects of bullying and how it effects the victim. Nicely stated
May 14th, 2025 06:45
The Pac-Attack Rap
sorenbarrett said:
Song it could be. I remember the game well when it first came out. Well done
May 13th, 2025 19:37
sorenbarrett said:
Song it could be. I remember the game well when it first came out. Well done
May 13th, 2025 19:37
The Pac-Attack Rap
Muse of Calliope said:
Cool poem; I enjoyed the read and it has a nice swing in my opinion 😀
May 13th, 2025 19:18
Muse of Calliope said:
Cool poem; I enjoyed the read and it has a nice swing in my opinion 😀
May 13th, 2025 19:18
Pac-Attack
Poetic Licence said:
That brings back some fond memories, enjoyed the read
May 11th, 2025 02:30
Poetic Licence said:
That brings back some fond memories, enjoyed the read
May 11th, 2025 02:30
Pac-Attack
sorenbarrett said:
How I remember playing that game at the Pizza Hut and in arcades. A classic that has memories of my younger years. A fun read
May 10th, 2025 18:39
sorenbarrett said:
How I remember playing that game at the Pizza Hut and in arcades. A classic that has memories of my younger years. A fun read
May 10th, 2025 18:39
Lifeless
Poetic Licence said:
You get war of the world feel in this write, enjoyed the read
April 7th, 2025 13:48
Poetic Licence said:
You get war of the world feel in this write, enjoyed the read
April 7th, 2025 13:48
Lifeless
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of strange thoughts and mental reflections. Most interesting.
April 7th, 2025 13:38
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of strange thoughts and mental reflections. Most interesting.
April 7th, 2025 13:38
Lifeless
DLewis88 said:
It\'s a relection and warning what will happen if people keeping destroying nature.
April 7th, 2025 12:01
DLewis88 said:
It\'s a relection and warning what will happen if people keeping destroying nature.
April 7th, 2025 12:01
New Leaf
sorenbarrett said:
Fresh and new the old saying turning over a new leaf. Nicely said
March 27th, 2025 03:53
sorenbarrett said:
Fresh and new the old saying turning over a new leaf. Nicely said
March 27th, 2025 03:53
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