Comments received on poems by DLewis88
Late Bloomer
sorenbarrett said:
And the first shall be last so goes the saying. Nicely written
October 4th, 2026 10:23
sorenbarrett said:
And the first shall be last so goes the saying. Nicely written
October 4th, 2026 10:23
Broken Robot
Durdica Porobija said:
Since robots feel neither love nor dislike, this poem seems to say more about people who serve without signs of respect and kindness. The main figure is personification, successfully applied.
September 28th, 2026 02:42
Durdica Porobija said:
Since robots feel neither love nor dislike, this poem seems to say more about people who serve without signs of respect and kindness. The main figure is personification, successfully applied.
September 28th, 2026 02:42
Land of darkness
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic call for greater good in life for caring for others, giving to others and being a better person oneself. Nicely done
September 21st, 2026 13:13
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic call for greater good in life for caring for others, giving to others and being a better person oneself. Nicely done
September 21st, 2026 13:13
Disconnected
sorenbarrett said:
Sad D. an existential nightmare. Well written and a question only you can answer.
September 7th, 2026 14:38
sorenbarrett said:
Sad D. an existential nightmare. Well written and a question only you can answer.
September 7th, 2026 14:38
The Joy of Music
sorenbarrett said:
Music does all of those things. Nicely written
September 4th, 2026 06:11
sorenbarrett said:
Music does all of those things. Nicely written
September 4th, 2026 06:11
Shut Down
sorenbarrett said:
Dark and with implications of terror. Nicely done
August 31st, 2026 20:30
sorenbarrett said:
Dark and with implications of terror. Nicely done
August 31st, 2026 20:30
Broken Robot
sorenbarrett said:
Such is the life of any that serve. Taken for granted and shown no charity. Well done
August 28th, 2026 19:39
sorenbarrett said:
Such is the life of any that serve. Taken for granted and shown no charity. Well done
August 28th, 2026 19:39
Slugglish
sorenbarrett said:
I feel exhaustion with this poem and it is very draining. Well written
August 20th, 2026 15:59
sorenbarrett said:
I feel exhaustion with this poem and it is very draining. Well written
August 20th, 2026 15:59
Inner beauty
sorenbarrett said:
Do not judge a book by its cover seems to be the message here. Well done
August 17th, 2026 11:13
sorenbarrett said:
Do not judge a book by its cover seems to be the message here. Well done
August 17th, 2026 11:13
The curse of envy
sorenbarrett said:
Pity a weapon more potent than any blow. Well written
August 12th, 2026 11:43
sorenbarrett said:
Pity a weapon more potent than any blow. Well written
August 12th, 2026 11:43
Heat wave
sorenbarrett said:
A good write about excessive heat. Nicely written Drew
August 11th, 2026 11:17
sorenbarrett said:
A good write about excessive heat. Nicely written Drew
August 11th, 2026 11:17
Long Road Ahead
sorenbarrett said:
Short but well describes the title. Nicely done
August 5th, 2026 09:58
sorenbarrett said:
Short but well describes the title. Nicely done
August 5th, 2026 09:58
Time Flies
sorenbarrett said:
Clever wording with rhyme make this a fave since I feel it in myself.
July 27th, 2026 04:00
sorenbarrett said:
Clever wording with rhyme make this a fave since I feel it in myself.
July 27th, 2026 04:00
The Disheartened Reality
RSM0812 said:
You write well. Art can be frivolous i guess.
July 23rd, 2026 05:46
RSM0812 said:
You write well. Art can be frivolous i guess.
July 23rd, 2026 05:46
Dancing to the beat
sorenbarrett said:
The only comfortable way to be is oneself. Nicely written Drew
July 15th, 2026 12:00
sorenbarrett said:
The only comfortable way to be is oneself. Nicely written Drew
July 15th, 2026 12:00
What being American means to me
Doggerel Dave said:
Very provocative. And since it is a special day for you....
July 3rd, 2026 18:06
Doggerel Dave said:
Very provocative. And since it is a special day for you....
July 3rd, 2026 18:06
What being American means to me
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely belief that I would like to believe is true. Well said
July 3rd, 2026 12:30
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely belief that I would like to believe is true. Well said
July 3rd, 2026 12:30
Unwell
sorenbarrett said:
A nice use of rhyme to convey a thought of celestial support and no need to worry. Well done
June 29th, 2026 11:00
sorenbarrett said:
A nice use of rhyme to convey a thought of celestial support and no need to worry. Well done
June 29th, 2026 11:00
Out Class
sorenbarrett said:
This poem tells of the selling of values, people and souls for gain. It is graphic and vivid in its imagery using allegory and metaphor very well. It has some great lines that make their point so nicely. \"They draft the laws to lock the cellar door, ensuring that the bottom stays below.\" a valid social comment on a cast system in capitalism. \"A plastic cup is filled with lead and woe.\" whether lead is bullets from violence or in the water of the poor makes little difference here and may be taken both ways for even greater effect. Very clever. \"The distance isn\'t measured out in miles, but by the thickness of a wallet\'s fold.\" Nicely said. A well written poem in good rhyme and a fave
June 28th, 2026 16:53
sorenbarrett said:
This poem tells of the selling of values, people and souls for gain. It is graphic and vivid in its imagery using allegory and metaphor very well. It has some great lines that make their point so nicely. \"They draft the laws to lock the cellar door, ensuring that the bottom stays below.\" a valid social comment on a cast system in capitalism. \"A plastic cup is filled with lead and woe.\" whether lead is bullets from violence or in the water of the poor makes little difference here and may be taken both ways for even greater effect. Very clever. \"The distance isn\'t measured out in miles, but by the thickness of a wallet\'s fold.\" Nicely said. A well written poem in good rhyme and a fave
June 28th, 2026 16:53
I love Her
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of love in the sense of attraction, passion, \"lust\", and the question is it love. Well done
June 23rd, 2026 10:13
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of love in the sense of attraction, passion, \"lust\", and the question is it love. Well done
June 23rd, 2026 10:13
Comfort in the Dark
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
the beauty of solitude that we all need time to time
June 22nd, 2026 13:24
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
the beauty of solitude that we all need time to time
June 22nd, 2026 13:24
Comfort in the Dark
Paul Bell said:
Yes, little Jack Horner was definitely onto something with his corner.
Now everyone wants a corner.
June 22nd, 2026 13:00
Paul Bell said:
Yes, little Jack Horner was definitely onto something with his corner.
Now everyone wants a corner.
June 22nd, 2026 13:00
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