Comments received on poems by DLewis88
Left Behind
NinjaGirl said:
I\'m a lonely virgin with no biceps! We make it out here, we make it just fine (:
April 11th, 2026 20:15
NinjaGirl said:
I\'m a lonely virgin with no biceps! We make it out here, we make it just fine (:
April 11th, 2026 20:15
Left Behind
sorenbarrett said:
In this poem of self comparisons to others there is the feeling of inadequacy. It feels hollow and sad.
April 11th, 2026 19:27
sorenbarrett said:
In this poem of self comparisons to others there is the feeling of inadequacy. It feels hollow and sad.
April 11th, 2026 19:27
These Filthy Hand
Doggerel Dave said:
Genuine hard work... sounds like some soap and a plentiful amount of water wouldn\'t come amiss lol.
April 2nd, 2026 22:42
Doggerel Dave said:
Genuine hard work... sounds like some soap and a plentiful amount of water wouldn\'t come amiss lol.
April 2nd, 2026 22:42
How will I know
Doggerel Dave said:
Only one way to find out.... I hope you will act on this, because it took me far too long to learn, myself.
April 2nd, 2026 22:39
Doggerel Dave said:
Only one way to find out.... I hope you will act on this, because it took me far too long to learn, myself.
April 2nd, 2026 22:39
These Filthy Hand
sorenbarrett said:
And out of filth comes honest labor to be proud of. Nicely written with good contrast.
April 2nd, 2026 12:09
sorenbarrett said:
And out of filth comes honest labor to be proud of. Nicely written with good contrast.
April 2nd, 2026 12:09
How will I know
sorenbarrett said:
A great question from one that has never felt it but like asking how will I know when something tastes good when you have never tasted it. Taste it you will know. Well done
March 20th, 2026 11:36
sorenbarrett said:
A great question from one that has never felt it but like asking how will I know when something tastes good when you have never tasted it. Taste it you will know. Well done
March 20th, 2026 11:36
Stuck in the Middle
sorenbarrett said:
I\'m with you What is the left used to be the right what is the right used to be fascist then there are those like me that are for none and are called nihilists and anti democratic and I would have to agree with both. Nothing works. Good write
March 12th, 2026 10:57
sorenbarrett said:
I\'m with you What is the left used to be the right what is the right used to be fascist then there are those like me that are for none and are called nihilists and anti democratic and I would have to agree with both. Nothing works. Good write
March 12th, 2026 10:57
An Ode to Ginger Ale
Friendship said:
Well-written.I love Ginger Ale. Your poem “An Ode to Ginger Ale” celebrates the unique qualities and refreshing nature of ginger ale. The central idea revolves around the joy of enjoying this beverage, emphasizing its crispness and comfort while also suggesting that it is best enjoyed in moderation.
March 8th, 2026 06:09
Friendship said:
Well-written.I love Ginger Ale. Your poem “An Ode to Ginger Ale” celebrates the unique qualities and refreshing nature of ginger ale. The central idea revolves around the joy of enjoying this beverage, emphasizing its crispness and comfort while also suggesting that it is best enjoyed in moderation.
March 8th, 2026 06:09
An Ode to Ginger Ale
sorenbarrett said:
Whether the drink, life, adventure or passion it all applies. Nicely written
March 8th, 2026 06:05
sorenbarrett said:
Whether the drink, life, adventure or passion it all applies. Nicely written
March 8th, 2026 06:05
Zany Zebra
sorenbarrett said:
Zebras a prime target for a lion here the lion is scared off. A fanciful and fun read
March 4th, 2026 11:30
sorenbarrett said:
Zebras a prime target for a lion here the lion is scared off. A fanciful and fun read
March 4th, 2026 11:30
Who or What hat Am I
sorenbarrett said:
Existential to the max this poem wanders and searches for meaning where there is none. A lovely write
March 3rd, 2026 11:21
sorenbarrett said:
Existential to the max this poem wanders and searches for meaning where there is none. A lovely write
March 3rd, 2026 11:21
My missing half
HerTime said:
Your words resonate with me. I think soulmates can be anyone, anywhere. Whether romantic or platonic. Have hope that you will find them!
February 28th, 2026 19:55
HerTime said:
Your words resonate with me. I think soulmates can be anyone, anywhere. Whether romantic or platonic. Have hope that you will find them!
February 28th, 2026 19:55
My missing half
sorenbarrett said:
We all look for someone to fit with us but maybe we need to look for someone that we would want to fit with and mold ourselves to fit where we belong. A wonderful write
February 28th, 2026 12:07
sorenbarrett said:
We all look for someone to fit with us but maybe we need to look for someone that we would want to fit with and mold ourselves to fit where we belong. A wonderful write
February 28th, 2026 12:07
Whiskers in the Moonlight
sorenbarrett said:
A feline tribute and a lovely write in good rhyme and flow with wonderful images.
January 17th, 2026 21:07
sorenbarrett said:
A feline tribute and a lovely write in good rhyme and flow with wonderful images.
January 17th, 2026 21:07
Wake Up People
2781 said:
The Lord is known by the judgement which he executes: the wicked is snared in the work of his own hands.
Higgaion,
Selah.
January 14th, 2026 07:43
2781 said:
The Lord is known by the judgement which he executes: the wicked is snared in the work of his own hands.
Higgaion,
Selah.
January 14th, 2026 07:43
Wake Up People
sorenbarrett said:
After atrocities, idiots in the road, violation of human rights we have not moved far from the view of the disadvantaged as disposable and disregard of authority. Laws seen as only a recommendation no respect no consideration every man for himself. Sad.
January 14th, 2026 06:45
sorenbarrett said:
After atrocities, idiots in the road, violation of human rights we have not moved far from the view of the disadvantaged as disposable and disregard of authority. Laws seen as only a recommendation no respect no consideration every man for himself. Sad.
January 14th, 2026 06:45
Friendship
sorenbarrett said:
The support of friends is most important. Nicely said
January 12th, 2026 20:12
sorenbarrett said:
The support of friends is most important. Nicely said
January 12th, 2026 20:12
Merry Christmas
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely Christmas wish nicely written. Well done
December 21st, 2025 19:09
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely Christmas wish nicely written. Well done
December 21st, 2025 19:09
Blueprints and Bruises
sorenbarrett said:
Wonderful rhyme in a very moving message that carries on the feet of great meter. Lovely and a fave
November 20th, 2025 20:56
sorenbarrett said:
Wonderful rhyme in a very moving message that carries on the feet of great meter. Lovely and a fave
November 20th, 2025 20:56
The weight of Silence
Freedom4 said:
I love this! The words easily turn to images in my mind as they are read. I have often felt the same. I like \'I wear my quiet like a suit,
tailored, sharp, and neat.\' The metaphors are beautifully woven through the fabric of the poem. I am looking forward to reading more of your poetry.
November 19th, 2025 22:20
Freedom4 said:
I love this! The words easily turn to images in my mind as they are read. I have often felt the same. I like \'I wear my quiet like a suit,
tailored, sharp, and neat.\' The metaphors are beautifully woven through the fabric of the poem. I am looking forward to reading more of your poetry.
November 19th, 2025 22:20
The weight of Silence
sorenbarrett said:
Lovely wording making use of great metaphors in this poem. Very nicely done in most poetic style a fave
November 19th, 2025 18:11
sorenbarrett said:
Lovely wording making use of great metaphors in this poem. Very nicely done in most poetic style a fave
November 19th, 2025 18:11
Bats
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read, they fly through my bedroom each night, when they started walking on my pillow I drew the line and put up a mosquito net.
October 19th, 2025 17:24
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read, they fly through my bedroom each night, when they started walking on my pillow I drew the line and put up a mosquito net.
October 19th, 2025 17:24
Fame
sorenbarrett said:
Everything has its ups and downs money and fame are no different and what ever any one says death is the great leveler. A good read
October 14th, 2025 18:22
sorenbarrett said:
Everything has its ups and downs money and fame are no different and what ever any one says death is the great leveler. A good read
October 14th, 2025 18:22
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