Comments received on poems by DLewis88
Pizza
sorenbarrett said:
Is this really about pizza? Or is it a metaphor? Nicely said in very few words.
September 5th, 2024 13:55
sorenbarrett said:
Is this really about pizza? Or is it a metaphor? Nicely said in very few words.
September 5th, 2024 13:55
The Arcade
Maplespal said:
I am 50 but still remember those days. Thank you for the write.
September 1st, 2024 17:04
Maplespal said:
I am 50 but still remember those days. Thank you for the write.
September 1st, 2024 17:04
The Arcade
Cheeky Missy said:
Bravo! La, you have prettily rendered, dare I say it? The eighties into the nineties in a heartbeat. And what kind of pizza? Pepperoni?!
The curious reality is that I gravitated towards the race car games.... and I\'ve always driven like that was life. Ergo,...?!
September 1st, 2024 15:23
Cheeky Missy said:
Bravo! La, you have prettily rendered, dare I say it? The eighties into the nineties in a heartbeat. And what kind of pizza? Pepperoni?!
The curious reality is that I gravitated towards the race car games.... and I\'ve always driven like that was life. Ergo,...?!
September 1st, 2024 15:23
Anger
Cheeky Missy said:
Yep. Mine is horrifically explosive and damaging. Excellent tribute!
August 30th, 2024 18:44
Cheeky Missy said:
Yep. Mine is horrifically explosive and damaging. Excellent tribute!
August 30th, 2024 18:44
What A Woman means to me
Cassie58 said:
A woman can be complex. Written by someone who appreciates all the aspects of womanhood. A lovely tribute.
August 25th, 2024 01:16
Cassie58 said:
A woman can be complex. Written by someone who appreciates all the aspects of womanhood. A lovely tribute.
August 25th, 2024 01:16
What A Woman means to me
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed all of those and just as you say so much more. Lovely
August 24th, 2024 18:30
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed all of those and just as you say so much more. Lovely
August 24th, 2024 18:30
Feeling Happy
Cassie58 said:
A lovely haiku brimful of happiness. A painting in words.
August 23rd, 2024 06:37
Cassie58 said:
A lovely haiku brimful of happiness. A painting in words.
August 23rd, 2024 06:37
Black Void
sorenbarrett said:
So nicely worded this poem of metaphor takes one into the depths of life through both night and day. Nicely done
August 19th, 2024 14:41
sorenbarrett said:
So nicely worded this poem of metaphor takes one into the depths of life through both night and day. Nicely done
August 19th, 2024 14:41
Full Solitude
sorenbarrett said:
A rhyme pattern that I chose to use in tomorrows poem. A great message and done so well
August 12th, 2024 17:39
sorenbarrett said:
A rhyme pattern that I chose to use in tomorrows poem. A great message and done so well
August 12th, 2024 17:39
Ice cream
Cassie58 said:
That is both cute and mouth watering. Can’t beat ice cream. Love it. Happy Saturday.
August 10th, 2024 13:02
Cassie58 said:
That is both cute and mouth watering. Can’t beat ice cream. Love it. Happy Saturday.
August 10th, 2024 13:02
Beauty of Water
sorenbarrett said:
Very Taoist deep and profound a wonderful write.
August 7th, 2024 14:13
sorenbarrett said:
Very Taoist deep and profound a wonderful write.
August 7th, 2024 14:13
I\'m A Faliure
Cassie58 said:
You convey your despair here well. Dig in deep and don’t give up on your dreams.
July 15th, 2024 16:11
Cassie58 said:
You convey your despair here well. Dig in deep and don’t give up on your dreams.
July 15th, 2024 16:11
lend a hand
Cassie58 said:
Even more important during the hostile days of our current living, we remember to show kindness. I like the sentiment expressed.
May 19th, 2024 16:39
Cassie58 said:
Even more important during the hostile days of our current living, we remember to show kindness. I like the sentiment expressed.
May 19th, 2024 16:39
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