Comments received on poems by DLewis88
The Disheartened Reality
arqios said:
Twice as long here and realised lately that it is the art and not the audience that calls the shots, deep within the artist.
The outward validation can and does drown and it is an ongoing struggle to look within through the outside noise.
As yet El Dorado of art has not been found. And if it has, then it\'s kept under wraps and not has not been shared. ๐๐๏ธ
June 18th, 2026 20:54
arqios said:
Twice as long here and realised lately that it is the art and not the audience that calls the shots, deep within the artist.
The outward validation can and does drown and it is an ongoing struggle to look within through the outside noise.
As yet El Dorado of art has not been found. And if it has, then it\'s kept under wraps and not has not been shared. ๐๐๏ธ
June 18th, 2026 20:54
The Disheartened Reality
sorenbarrett said:
The younger generation upset that the boomers are using too much resources have proposed higher taxes on the old so that they will not be able to afford their houses and that these houses will be made more affordable to the young. A great write.
June 18th, 2026 19:14
sorenbarrett said:
The younger generation upset that the boomers are using too much resources have proposed higher taxes on the old so that they will not be able to afford their houses and that these houses will be made more affordable to the young. A great write.
June 18th, 2026 19:14
The Disheartened Reality
Syd said:
Chin up Drew. I know I\'m a total stranger but I\'m always here to talk mate. Just send me a message. I\'d love to see your artwork.
Sincerely - Syd
June 18th, 2026 15:34
Syd said:
Chin up Drew. I know I\'m a total stranger but I\'m always here to talk mate. Just send me a message. I\'d love to see your artwork.
Sincerely - Syd
June 18th, 2026 15:34
The Disheartened Reality
Caring dove said:
Iโm sorry you feel so critical towards yourself
Youโve tried .. prob isnโt your fault . Life can feel hard ..
Take care
June 18th, 2026 15:00
Caring dove said:
Iโm sorry you feel so critical towards yourself
Youโve tried .. prob isnโt your fault . Life can feel hard ..
Take care
June 18th, 2026 15:00
The Lone Traveler
sorenbarrett said:
A good write where I have often wondered what that might be like. Bear apex preditor but then there are other bears to fight and like everything else there is always a bigger and stronger one. A fun write
June 11th, 2026 10:01
sorenbarrett said:
A good write where I have often wondered what that might be like. Bear apex preditor but then there are other bears to fight and like everything else there is always a bigger and stronger one. A fun write
June 11th, 2026 10:01
Rain Drops
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful image painted in this poem in tear drops as rain. Whether joy or pain. Lovely
June 10th, 2026 17:49
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful image painted in this poem in tear drops as rain. Whether joy or pain. Lovely
June 10th, 2026 17:49
Bad Apples
sorenbarrett said:
Such a great metaphor and true it is. It only takes one bad apple to ruing the day. Nicely written with good rhyme as well it is catchy
May 28th, 2026 18:38
sorenbarrett said:
Such a great metaphor and true it is. It only takes one bad apple to ruing the day. Nicely written with good rhyme as well it is catchy
May 28th, 2026 18:38
Where the Drum Remembers
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful write of origin the cradle of humanity. Nicely written and a fave
May 24th, 2026 17:02
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful write of origin the cradle of humanity. Nicely written and a fave
May 24th, 2026 17:02
Free Love
sorenbarrett said:
There seems to be a prejudice against all things that fall out of the norm jealousy for those more beautiful and revulsion for those deemed more ugly, acceptance for those like us and hatred for those different. Other animals the same chickens have a pecking order where some will be pecked to death. Well written
May 23rd, 2026 05:58
sorenbarrett said:
There seems to be a prejudice against all things that fall out of the norm jealousy for those more beautiful and revulsion for those deemed more ugly, acceptance for those like us and hatred for those different. Other animals the same chickens have a pecking order where some will be pecked to death. Well written
May 23rd, 2026 05:58
The Last First Thing
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic statement of being and strength. Well written
May 20th, 2026 10:42
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic statement of being and strength. Well written
May 20th, 2026 10:42
My Cat and Me
sorenbarrett said:
Have had several cats never a loyal one but love them just the same. A fun read
May 15th, 2026 18:41
sorenbarrett said:
Have had several cats never a loyal one but love them just the same. A fun read
May 15th, 2026 18:41
Drake the Snake
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read that could be for my grand kids and may make a good kids story
May 14th, 2026 12:12
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read that could be for my grand kids and may make a good kids story
May 14th, 2026 12:12
Blessed
sorenbarrett said:
Those are pretty much the ingredients of a satisfied life. Well written
May 4th, 2026 21:22
sorenbarrett said:
Those are pretty much the ingredients of a satisfied life. Well written
May 4th, 2026 21:22
Forgotten
NafisaSB said:
This is so sad. Itโs a cry for being seen and recognized and I hope the cry is heard- I did ๐๐ผ
April 25th, 2026 10:28
NafisaSB said:
This is so sad. Itโs a cry for being seen and recognized and I hope the cry is heard- I did ๐๐ผ
April 25th, 2026 10:28
Forgotten
RSM0812 said:
The feeling of lonliness gets ever person from time to time. People ignoring you, talking about you like your not their etc. This is short and sweer and nicely written.
April 25th, 2026 04:13
RSM0812 said:
The feeling of lonliness gets ever person from time to time. People ignoring you, talking about you like your not their etc. This is short and sweer and nicely written.
April 25th, 2026 04:13
Forgotten
ms.divine said:
Self love is the best love and real true love will follow โค๏ธ๐๐ฟ๐ชถ๐ซถ๐พ๐ซ
April 24th, 2026 23:05
ms.divine said:
Self love is the best love and real true love will follow โค๏ธ๐๐ฟ๐ชถ๐ซถ๐พ๐ซ
April 24th, 2026 23:05
Forgotten
sorenbarrett said:
A poem about a feeling that many of us get from time to time when we feel that no one cares or notices us. Well written
April 24th, 2026 18:39
sorenbarrett said:
A poem about a feeling that many of us get from time to time when we feel that no one cares or notices us. Well written
April 24th, 2026 18:39
An Ode To Trees
sorenbarrett said:
This seems a tribute to the importance of trees. Nicely written as an acknowledgement of how important they are to us as humans
April 16th, 2026 17:40
sorenbarrett said:
This seems a tribute to the importance of trees. Nicely written as an acknowledgement of how important they are to us as humans
April 16th, 2026 17:40
Left Behind
NinjaGirl said:
I\'m a lonely virgin with no biceps! We make it out here, we make it just fine (:
April 11th, 2026 20:15
NinjaGirl said:
I\'m a lonely virgin with no biceps! We make it out here, we make it just fine (:
April 11th, 2026 20:15
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