Comments received on poems by DLewis88



The Disheartened Reality
arqios said:

Twice as long here and realised lately that it is the art and not the audience that calls the shots, deep within the artist.
The outward validation can and does drown and it is an ongoing struggle to look within through the outside noise.
As yet El Dorado of art has not been found. And if it has, then it\'s kept under wraps and not has not been shared. ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ•Š๏ธ

June 18th, 2026 20:54

The Disheartened Reality
sorenbarrett said:

The younger generation upset that the boomers are using too much resources have proposed higher taxes on the old so that they will not be able to afford their houses and that these houses will be made more affordable to the young. A great write.

June 18th, 2026 19:14

Bad Apples
Syd said:

An agreeable write.

- Syd

June 18th, 2026 15:36

The Disheartened Reality
Syd said:

Chin up Drew. I know I\'m a total stranger but I\'m always here to talk mate. Just send me a message. I\'d love to see your artwork.

Sincerely - Syd

June 18th, 2026 15:34

The Disheartened Reality
Caring dove said:

Iโ€™m sorry you feel so critical towards yourself

Youโ€™ve tried .. prob isnโ€™t your fault . Life can feel hard ..

Take care



June 18th, 2026 15:00

The Lone Traveler
sorenbarrett said:

A good write where I have often wondered what that might be like. Bear apex preditor but then there are other bears to fight and like everything else there is always a bigger and stronger one. A fun write

June 11th, 2026 10:01

Rain Drops
sorenbarrett said:

A beautiful image painted in this poem in tear drops as rain. Whether joy or pain. Lovely

June 10th, 2026 17:49

Not Enough
sorenbarrett said:

A poetic sad view of self. Well written

June 9th, 2026 20:28

Bad Apples
sorenbarrett said:

Such a great metaphor and true it is. It only takes one bad apple to ruing the day. Nicely written with good rhyme as well it is catchy

May 28th, 2026 18:38

Where the Drum Remembers
sorenbarrett said:

A beautiful write of origin the cradle of humanity. Nicely written and a fave

May 24th, 2026 17:02

Free Love
Friendship said:

Nicely written

May 23rd, 2026 09:37

Free Love
sorenbarrett said:

There seems to be a prejudice against all things that fall out of the norm jealousy for those more beautiful and revulsion for those deemed more ugly, acceptance for those like us and hatred for those different. Other animals the same chickens have a pecking order where some will be pecked to death. Well written

May 23rd, 2026 05:58

The Last First Thing
sorenbarrett said:

A poetic statement of being and strength. Well written

May 20th, 2026 10:42

My Cat and Me
sorenbarrett said:

Have had several cats never a loyal one but love them just the same. A fun read

May 15th, 2026 18:41

My Cat and Me
Katie B. said:

Really sweet and cute write

May 15th, 2026 17:07

Drake the Snake
sorenbarrett said:

A fun read that could be for my grand kids and may make a good kids story

May 14th, 2026 12:12

Blessed
sorenbarrett said:

Those are pretty much the ingredients of a satisfied life. Well written

May 4th, 2026 21:22

I shall rise up
sorenbarrett said:

A beautiful pledge and promise. Nicely worded

May 3rd, 2026 11:38

I shall rise up
Demar Desu said:

Nice rhymes

May 3rd, 2026 11:28

I shall rise up
Friendship said:

Nice write

May 3rd, 2026 10:40

I shall rise up
GoddessEYES said:

Exactly ๐Ÿ’ฏ

May 3rd, 2026 10:32

Forgotten
NafisaSB said:

This is so sad. Itโ€™s a cry for being seen and recognized and I hope the cry is heard- I did ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿผ

April 25th, 2026 10:28

Forgotten
RSM0812 said:

The feeling of lonliness gets ever person from time to time. People ignoring you, talking about you like your not their etc. This is short and sweer and nicely written.

April 25th, 2026 04:13

Forgotten
Priya Tomar said:

Good write .

April 24th, 2026 23:07

Forgotten
ms.divine said:

Self love is the best love and real true love will follow โค๏ธ๐Ÿ––๐Ÿฟ๐Ÿชถ๐Ÿซถ๐Ÿพ๐Ÿซ‚

April 24th, 2026 23:05

Forgotten
Doggerel Dave said:

Poor fellow........๐Ÿ™ƒ

April 24th, 2026 22:00

Forgotten
sorenbarrett said:

A poem about a feeling that many of us get from time to time when we feel that no one cares or notices us. Well written

April 24th, 2026 18:39

Toxic
sorenbarrett said:

Truth in verse of rhyme and well done

April 19th, 2026 19:48

An Ode To Trees
sorenbarrett said:

This seems a tribute to the importance of trees. Nicely written as an acknowledgement of how important they are to us as humans

April 16th, 2026 17:40

Left Behind
NinjaGirl said:

I\'m a lonely virgin with no biceps! We make it out here, we make it just fine (:

April 11th, 2026 20:15

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