Comments received on poems by DLewis88



Where Do I Go?
sorenbarrett said:

All the makings of an existential crisis in this poem. Well expressed it shouts out for the touch of a relationship. Well written

February 21st, 2025 09:00

Where Do I Go?
2781 said:

To cry Abba Father.

February 21st, 2025 08:38

Inner peace
Distant View said:

A nice peaceful and calm poem, expressing things we should all wish for!

February 9th, 2025 16:11

Autisum Embrace
Lorenz said:

good tapestry chat gpt !

February 8th, 2025 13:07

Autisum Embrace
Cheeky Missy said:

Goodnight! How very gorgeously rendered with delightful imagery and a charming poignancy. To think I found myself framed herein, not surprisingly since I\'ve been told multiple times I\'ve apparently got Asperger\'s...and I knew I was autistic. Wow. Thank you very much for sharing!

February 7th, 2025 09:03

Autisum Embrace
Poetic Licence said:

I have close ties to people this caring piece relates to, and they are some of the most intelligent, artistic and creative people i have ever known. Enjoyed the read

February 7th, 2025 04:44

Autisum Embrace
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

February 6th, 2025 21:41

The Goofy Gold Fish
Tony36 said:

Love it

January 27th, 2025 20:48

The Goofy Gold Fish
Poetic Licence said:

What a lovely way to live, just do as you wish, enjoyed the read

January 27th, 2025 16:48

Inner peace
Poetic Licence said:

Just chilled, lovely feeling

January 27th, 2025 02:53

Inner peace
sorenbarrett said:

Peace, rest, no stress are all images I get from this.

January 26th, 2025 17:48

Inner peace
arqios said:

Serenely tranquil 🙏🏻🕊

January 26th, 2025 16:07

I\'m Sorry
sorenbarrett said:

Dark. The pressures felt from others are felt in this poem and the inability to be oneself.

January 14th, 2025 20:04

I\'m Sorry
Thomas W Case said:

Don\'t be so hard on yourself. Good writing.

January 14th, 2025 18:49

I\'m Sorry
Tony36 said:

Great write

January 14th, 2025 18:30

My Black Goddess: A Tale of Passion and Desire
Poetic Licence said:

A great piece of evening reading , enjoyed the read

January 12th, 2025 07:07

My Black Goddess: A Tale of Passion and Desire
Kevin Hulme said:

Reading this Poem under a Cold Shower. Nice One.

January 11th, 2025 19:38

My Black Goddess: A Tale of Passion and Desire
sorenbarrett said:

Some men measure their virility in inches you in feet. A fun read sensuous and erotic it sparkled with polish.

January 11th, 2025 18:44

Never Enough
sorenbarrett said:

Fellings of inadequacy take us all from time to time and I hear them in this rhyme. When we feel small and no good at all we need to reassess our priorities and look at the poetry you make that brightens others days. This poem was written in good rhyme and flowed well nicely done

January 10th, 2025 08:49

Never Enough
Poetic Licence said:

Try to be you just the way you are, emotional word well written

January 10th, 2025 01:39

Never Enough
Mutley Ravishes said:

We\'re still in the game
Someone\'s waiting for us
To get in our own lane
These days
I work on
The effortless way!


January 9th, 2025 23:50

Mother Nature
Tony36 said:

Great write

December 29th, 2024 10:41

Mother Nature
Poetic Licence said:

Mother Nature is a wonderful thing, i hope we start to look after it better, very soon. Enjoyed the read

December 29th, 2024 08:53

Mother Nature
sorenbarrett said:

A lovely look at the mother of us all. Very nicely written

December 29th, 2024 08:16

What is the point
Poetic Licence said:

I echo the sentiment of Soren, this can appear to be very hard to do but it is something you must try to do, all the best

December 7th, 2024 01:18

What is the point
sorenbarrett said:

A sad poem of the loss of hope. It is well written with a dark tone and end. To have others love you, you must love yourself and in this is the paradox.

December 6th, 2024 19:31

Sexual Frustration
Mutley Ravishes said:

Nothing beats
Transmutation
For regeneration
Can it be done
While making love?
Well, there`s no doubt
One night stands are out
Of the question

November 13th, 2024 18:35

Boy, I Say, Boy
A Boy With Roses said:

:)

November 12th, 2024 16:31

World Piece
sorenbarrett said:

A great write just before the US election. A message that goes unheeded. Nicely written with good rhyme

October 22nd, 2024 20:23

World Piece
Tony36 said:

Great write

October 22nd, 2024 09:58

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