Comments received on poems by Isabel Szurlej



PAIN IS A SEPARATE SOUL
sorenbarrett said:

This poem deserves a fave and I had to hit the button ten times before it would register. Nicely worded and imaged this poem sends its message in mythical figures and as is the case with myths they carry archetypal messages buried deep in the human psyche. It is full of meaning to those that will listen. Very nicely done

June 11th, 2026 20:48

DEMON’S SPEECH
sorenbarrett said:

Ghostly and haunting it speaks form beyond and whispers in the wind echoing in storms. It is a cold voice and feels almost gothic. Well done

June 10th, 2026 14:55

GOD: PENDING
sorenbarrett said:

This poem emerges from the fantastic and imagined to the real with voices behind the scenes. Well worded and imaged it appears metaphoric in nature. Well written.

June 7th, 2026 10:51

HEAT CYCLE ACTIVE
sorenbarrett said:

There is something magical about the structure and wording in this poem. It captures the interest and carries it prisoner a hostage for ransom well written

May 26th, 2026 08:11

HEAT CYCLE ACTIVE
2781 said:

But there shall be showers of blessing...

May 26th, 2026 08:02

TAG: UNKNOWN
sorenbarrett said:

This poem seems somehow industrial, urban, surreal and hard. It is a song that works its way along to the end. Well done

May 22nd, 2026 07:45

THE BONDAGE
Paul Bell said:

I like it. Maybe add to the line. Turning inward, aimed at me, aimed at me.
Good to see the write in song, adds to it brilliantly.
Be looking for your autograph soon.

May 21st, 2026 09:50

THE BONDAGE
sorenbarrett said:

Wow! what a powerful message sent in such poetic lines. Very nice a fave

May 21st, 2026 08:15

SAINT OF STATIC
sorenbarrett said:

A surreal poem that takes one on a journey through mythical kingdoms of color. Well written

May 19th, 2026 18:16

UNLIVING, I WALK
sorenbarrett said:

Whether poem of song this write is beautiful and powerful, compelling it pulls the reader along. Nicely done

May 16th, 2026 03:56

KING OF THE VOID
sorenbarrett said:

Cleverly worded this poem uses metaphor after metaphor building its structure. Nicely done

May 12th, 2026 05:30

KING OF THE VOID
Abdullah123 said:

great write. enjoyed

May 12th, 2026 04:50

PSALM OF ASPHODEL
sorenbarrett said:

Surreal and well done it takes one to another world

May 11th, 2026 10:23

THE SERAPHIM
sorenbarrett said:

A proclamation in poetic form of redemption. Nicely worded

March 31st, 2026 06:21

MY MADNESS
sorenbarrett said:

Biblical reminiscent of Moses on Sinai such lovely poetic wording makes this a fave

March 28th, 2026 04:10

WHERE SOUND DID NOT LINGER
Katie B. said:

Love! Well done!

March 27th, 2026 07:47

WHERE SOUND DID NOT LINGER
sorenbarrett said:

Mythical, metaphorical it rolls forth with classic dignity a most wonderful poem that to me speaks of internal drives and motivations. Nicely written a fave

March 27th, 2026 07:24

BRINGING YOU WAR
sorenbarrett said:

A well written piece that makes its claims against war and the forces that drive it. Having good structure and flow it tells its tale with good meter in a free form style. Nicely done

March 27th, 2026 03:45