Comments received on poems by Lukian.haid



Twin Flames
Rainbow said:

This is lovely so full of emotion

October 7th, 2021 13:55

Twin Flames
L. B. Mek said:

\'if you love them, let them go
and if it\'s true love, they\'ll find their way back...\'
that\'s the concept you\'ve unfurled so delicately
in this write, I think
I really liked your pacing, utilised your stanza breaks to full effect, and it added to the stories gripping feel of unravelling,
thanks for sharing!
\'Patiently waited for each other
To slowly grow
*separated, yet together
As to allow *their better, to blossom
And darkness, to shed its skin

Twin flames, *although
Alone, their flames are weak and dim
Together, they could burn down the world!\'

October 7th, 2021 02:49

Twin Flames
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful words Lukian, may their flames be forever combined into the glory of their love.

Andy

October 7th, 2021 00:42

The Void
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

There is so much sadness in this writing , I’m sorry that you feel this way

But you have expressed it so well

Emotional words
Difficult way to feel I’m sure

October 6th, 2021 14:16

Twin Flames
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

Twin flames ... I know about these type of connections .

This is a very lovely poem ...

October 6th, 2021 11:52

The Void
L. B. Mek said:

\'Numbness is like a disease
Never fully satisfied, until
it consumes you completely\'..
there\'s a Space between Depressed and Disillusioned -
its a tipping point, precipice
that few, talk about..
I\'ve come across it a few times in others and in that unforgiving mirror,
its a gap in realisation-Time
between, the You
Fighting
and the who, You always thought
you would become...
there\'s no easy avenue for escape, since
few recognise its symptoms bars on that, jail cell island;
instead, what hope we have to traverse and overcome
this moment of bewilderment in our lives
exists entirely: within, ourselves
since only we can identify its ravenous appetite, for our complete destruction.
so those of us lucky enough, to catch it early - before
it festers and warps our capacity to wage a war:
must Fight!
\'And I am a thunderous rain cloud

I learned to unlove
When the people I held close
hurt me
I became an empty void\'..
Empty, by choice
so as to be Ready
for the Better, You deserve!
\'We must first
get rid of the poison, before
we look for a cure...\'
A brave, intense and intimate write
thanks for sharing!




October 5th, 2021 05:12

To the person I loved
Goldfinch60 said:

May that love be mutual.

Welcome to MPS.

September 22nd, 2021 00:31