Comments received on poems by writteninthestars
Whispered Words
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
Beautiful,do you mind if I steal it for a very special girl in my life right now,lol I\'m kidding of course. Great piece,hope you don\'t mind if I fav it. Cheers🍻😀✌️🕊
February 4th, 2022 17:55
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
Beautiful,do you mind if I steal it for a very special girl in my life right now,lol I\'m kidding of course. Great piece,hope you don\'t mind if I fav it. Cheers🍻😀✌️🕊
February 4th, 2022 17:55
Whispered Words
Rocky Lagou said:
I love the synesthetic ending. \"Taste all the words\" Really goes to show the intensity of love, intense enough that words of endearment becomes sensorial. Nice. 👍
February 4th, 2022 09:26
Rocky Lagou said:
I love the synesthetic ending. \"Taste all the words\" Really goes to show the intensity of love, intense enough that words of endearment becomes sensorial. Nice. 👍
February 4th, 2022 09:26
Whispered Words
L. B. Mek said:
ermm, dear poet
if you\'re waking up, next
to the person
you\'re enamoured by
then simply, look
at them, and then
there\'s no need need to wonder
\'what your face would look like\'...
lol
(forgive me, I get silly
on Friday morning\'s..
thank you! for sharing such a poetic wording
of a feeling, we can all relate to)
a great read!
February 4th, 2022 05:40
L. B. Mek said:
ermm, dear poet
if you\'re waking up, next
to the person
you\'re enamoured by
then simply, look
at them, and then
there\'s no need need to wonder
\'what your face would look like\'...
lol
(forgive me, I get silly
on Friday morning\'s..
thank you! for sharing such a poetic wording
of a feeling, we can all relate to)
a great read!
February 4th, 2022 05:40
Whispered Words
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Lovely poem .
February 4th, 2022 01:41
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Lovely poem .
February 4th, 2022 01:41
Unattainable Paradise
L. B. Mek said:
why must, our most illuminating
Poetry
be born of pain and strife, for once
I wish
you words depicted, frivolity instead
and
I was writing you words of congratulations
than my empathetic commiserations...
(a Great write
sorry for your struggles
thank you! for choosing to share)
December 6th, 2021 05:33
L. B. Mek said:
why must, our most illuminating
Poetry
be born of pain and strife, for once
I wish
you words depicted, frivolity instead
and
I was writing you words of congratulations
than my empathetic commiserations...
(a Great write
sorry for your struggles
thank you! for choosing to share)
December 6th, 2021 05:33
Sunflower On Fire
Lorna said:
So poignant and I especially loved the last stanza.......
December 2nd, 2021 08:54
Lorna said:
So poignant and I especially loved the last stanza.......
December 2nd, 2021 08:54
Sunflower On Fire
L. B. Mek said:
thanks for sharing,
try looking-up, \'The Scream\'
by Edvard Munch
maybe even, plan a weekend getaway
to Oslo, and visit the collection
in person
it might be, somewhat cathartic
just a thought, a mere sample
at how: even our despair
can be utilised
to bring something productive
in-to our life...
\'we can always: Choose
to no longer
be, such easy targets
to the inevitable
and hope crushingly, abundant
consequences and happenstances
in our lives\'
December 2nd, 2021 04:28
L. B. Mek said:
thanks for sharing,
try looking-up, \'The Scream\'
by Edvard Munch
maybe even, plan a weekend getaway
to Oslo, and visit the collection
in person
it might be, somewhat cathartic
just a thought, a mere sample
at how: even our despair
can be utilised
to bring something productive
in-to our life...
\'we can always: Choose
to no longer
be, such easy targets
to the inevitable
and hope crushingly, abundant
consequences and happenstances
in our lives\'
December 2nd, 2021 04:28
Flames of October,
L. B. Mek said:
wonderfully immersive imagery, and overall just so well written..
(forgive my limited IQ, but are the numbers a gauge of age progression?)
thanks for sharing
October 22nd, 2021 04:33
L. B. Mek said:
wonderfully immersive imagery, and overall just so well written..
(forgive my limited IQ, but are the numbers a gauge of age progression?)
thanks for sharing
October 22nd, 2021 04:33
Flames of October,
Lyriclitty said:
“Brain and heart stroking against one another” !!!!!! Wow you killed me and brought me back to life to hear more in that first line ! I had to stop and comment before I could even finish lol I know I will love the rest as well. Keep the heat coming your appreciated
October 22nd, 2021 00:37
Lyriclitty said:
“Brain and heart stroking against one another” !!!!!! Wow you killed me and brought me back to life to hear more in that first line ! I had to stop and comment before I could even finish lol I know I will love the rest as well. Keep the heat coming your appreciated
October 22nd, 2021 00:37
I Have A Stalker And His Name Is Death
L. B. Mek said:
wow!
you\'re one talented wordsmith
keep writing, exploring, expressing..
and thanks for sharing
October 12th, 2021 05:04
L. B. Mek said:
wow!
you\'re one talented wordsmith
keep writing, exploring, expressing..
and thanks for sharing
October 12th, 2021 05:04
I Have A Stalker And His Name Is Death
orchidee said:
Oohh, not today thanks - don\'t want to meet him today! heehee.
October 12th, 2021 02:08
orchidee said:
Oohh, not today thanks - don\'t want to meet him today! heehee.
October 12th, 2021 02:08
