Comments received on poems by cheyw



human
L. B. Mek said:

Brilliant!
thanks for sharing
love your philosophical angle
even if I disagree
with that reductive, conceptualisation
of our complex, sentient humanity
being marginalised, to mere machinery..
forgive me, but for me
Rene Descartes, stunted hypothesis
\'cogito, ergo sum\'
or \"I think, therefore I am\"..
is a distorted, culmination
of his, illogically simplistic theory
that humanity\'s
thoughts, actions, choices
are merely, resultant
of inputs and formulaic, outputs..
I mean
I don\'t know where to start, to unravel
such a limiting, axiom
see, to me
if we were indeed, machines
so easily, programable
and predictable..
we wouldn\'t have benefited
from the \'enlightening\', insight\'s
from such Great, unique
Geniuses
voicing opinions, in direct opposition
to the beliefs and governing theories of their age..
maybe there is an underlying
\'code\', governing
all - of \'matter\'
or the Universe
but that \'code\'
is so unimaginably, incomprehensibly
complex
the word, machine
can\'t begin to shade
even a percent of its colours...
(I hope you don\'t find
me responding/commenting
on your art, in this way
as being, inflammatory or disrespectful
I\'m just an overtly opinionated , fool
please, forgive me
if my words cause you, any offence)



April 7th, 2022 05:48

untitled
Rocky Lagou said:

Racial justice is honestly a fight that we must never stop fighting. You portrayed this message very richly and it surely touched my heart. Great job!

March 30th, 2022 10:13

Spiral🌀
L. B. Mek said:

really like the style and flow, there\'s a layer of desperation reinforced by your pacing,
a well thought-out write, thanks for sharing

October 15th, 2021 04:10