Comments received on poems by Finchy
MEDIA
L. B. Mek said:
cross reference your sources
and make them accountable
for their bull sht
and take it all, with a pinch of fallacy\'s salt...
(I relate with your fury
but the issue is only, \'seemingly\'
overbearing, because
they don\'t want us to know, how simple
the solution is)
thanks for sharing!
February 3rd, 2022 08:26
L. B. Mek said:
cross reference your sources
and make them accountable
for their bull sht
and take it all, with a pinch of fallacy\'s salt...
(I relate with your fury
but the issue is only, \'seemingly\'
overbearing, because
they don\'t want us to know, how simple
the solution is)
thanks for sharing!
February 3rd, 2022 08:26
ANOTHER
Finchy said:
Thank you
Yes its a fine line between letting go and being happy for them, or developing anger towards them, luckily I don\'t have anger within me (well at least not yet) lol
Thank you again
January 31st, 2022 10:56
Finchy said:
Thank you
Yes its a fine line between letting go and being happy for them, or developing anger towards them, luckily I don\'t have anger within me (well at least not yet) lol
Thank you again
January 31st, 2022 10:56
ANOTHER
L. B. Mek said:
life is strange
if we truly loved that person, from our past
wouldn\'t we naturally want them to be happy
even without us, and yet
one glimpse
of them lost in joy\'s, comforting
smiles and hands
and our jealousy, grants us
the anger needed
to throttle our happiness, for them
and instead
let our selfishness, define
our thoughts and emotions...
unless, of-course
their past disloyal actions, dictates
we hate them, with every last breath we get
(crazy, how both mindsets
can be simultaneously applicable
to such differing situation/relationship
endings...)
a thought provoking read, thanks for sharing
January 31st, 2022 07:39
L. B. Mek said:
life is strange
if we truly loved that person, from our past
wouldn\'t we naturally want them to be happy
even without us, and yet
one glimpse
of them lost in joy\'s, comforting
smiles and hands
and our jealousy, grants us
the anger needed
to throttle our happiness, for them
and instead
let our selfishness, define
our thoughts and emotions...
unless, of-course
their past disloyal actions, dictates
we hate them, with every last breath we get
(crazy, how both mindsets
can be simultaneously applicable
to such differing situation/relationship
endings...)
a thought provoking read, thanks for sharing
January 31st, 2022 07:39
DARTS
Goldfinch60 said:
I used to play darts in my younger years and I do have a dartboard set up in my garage where I throw the odd dart.
When the film \'Carrie\' came out I saw it in the cinema and when Carrie sends three knives at her mother a guy in the audience shouted out \"ONE HUNDRED AND EIGHTY\" as the last one landed, the audience laughed their heads off.
Andy
January 22nd, 2022 01:40
Goldfinch60 said:
I used to play darts in my younger years and I do have a dartboard set up in my garage where I throw the odd dart.
When the film \'Carrie\' came out I saw it in the cinema and when Carrie sends three knives at her mother a guy in the audience shouted out \"ONE HUNDRED AND EIGHTY\" as the last one landed, the audience laughed their heads off.
Andy
January 22nd, 2022 01:40
DARTS
L. B. Mek said:
no other number has been celebrated so boisterously in the history of sports
than that, 180
(love the dramatics
when the camera zooms-in
after the first two 60\'s
have been landed)
great fun, just like your write
thanks for sharing
January 21st, 2022 08:20
L. B. Mek said:
no other number has been celebrated so boisterously in the history of sports
than that, 180
(love the dramatics
when the camera zooms-in
after the first two 60\'s
have been landed)
great fun, just like your write
thanks for sharing
January 21st, 2022 08:20
DARTS
Paul Bell said:
Used to love playing darts in the smokey pub. What ever happened.
January 21st, 2022 08:20
Paul Bell said:
Used to love playing darts in the smokey pub. What ever happened.
January 21st, 2022 08:20
WIFE
Paul Bell said:
Tough one, she\'s left you, and she\'ll probably leave him. Sometimes the rosiness ain\'t as rosy as they think.
January 16th, 2022 09:15
Paul Bell said:
Tough one, she\'s left you, and she\'ll probably leave him. Sometimes the rosiness ain\'t as rosy as they think.
January 16th, 2022 09:15
ALONE
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
All I could picture through this whole read was Tom Hanks in Castaway😀 Is Wilson with you?lol
Bravo! Take a bow and shine bright 🌟
January 15th, 2022 14:39
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
All I could picture through this whole read was Tom Hanks in Castaway😀 Is Wilson with you?lol
Bravo! Take a bow and shine bright 🌟
January 15th, 2022 14:39
PLANETS
Finchy said:
Ha ha I was going to include Pluto but decided to go with the current thinking
January 13th, 2022 08:11
Finchy said:
Ha ha I was going to include Pluto but decided to go with the current thinking
January 13th, 2022 08:11
PLANETS
Buzz Bray said:
Unless you count the \"dwarf\" planets. I\'m holding out for Pluto.
January 13th, 2022 07:37
Buzz Bray said:
Unless you count the \"dwarf\" planets. I\'m holding out for Pluto.
January 13th, 2022 07:37
RESPECT
Finchy said:
Thank you
Yes unfortunately i think Respect is sadly missing in this modern life
January 11th, 2022 17:12
Finchy said:
Thank you
Yes unfortunately i think Respect is sadly missing in this modern life
January 11th, 2022 17:12
RESPECT
woundedheart said:
Respect ones elders an idea instilled in to us in our day and one that made much sense, great poem
January 11th, 2022 17:07
woundedheart said:
Respect ones elders an idea instilled in to us in our day and one that made much sense, great poem
January 11th, 2022 17:07
WAKE
Finchy said:
Thank you for your comments
Yes unfortunately a tragedy that happens much to often
January 10th, 2022 12:13
Finchy said:
Thank you for your comments
Yes unfortunately a tragedy that happens much to often
January 10th, 2022 12:13
WAKE
L. B. Mek said:
such a sad, part
of our commonly experienced
everyday, reality..
and seemingly, no amount
of adverts, campaigns
school speaker efforts
can curb those morbidly
ever-rising numbers
year on year...
just one more, costly \'plague\'
to add to our societal, list...
(thanks for sharing
really well written)
January 10th, 2022 08:23
L. B. Mek said:
such a sad, part
of our commonly experienced
everyday, reality..
and seemingly, no amount
of adverts, campaigns
school speaker efforts
can curb those morbidly
ever-rising numbers
year on year...
just one more, costly \'plague\'
to add to our societal, list...
(thanks for sharing
really well written)
January 10th, 2022 08:23
MOTORWAY
geekslutnerdgirl said:
devastating. felt every minute of it. the anxious and ready, the in a hurry, the love, the calm, the transcendence.
January 9th, 2022 11:16
geekslutnerdgirl said:
devastating. felt every minute of it. the anxious and ready, the in a hurry, the love, the calm, the transcendence.
January 9th, 2022 11:16
HEARTBEAT
A.D. Small said:
This is very strong an deep as well keep up the good work!!!
January 5th, 2022 09:23
A.D. Small said:
This is very strong an deep as well keep up the good work!!!
January 5th, 2022 09:23
OLD MAN
Goldfinch60 said:
Powerful words Ray, and so very true. It is so sad the way those who have fought for our country are so awfully ignored by those in power who went them out to fight in the first palce.
Welcome to MPS.
November 29th, 2021 02:16
Goldfinch60 said:
Powerful words Ray, and so very true. It is so sad the way those who have fought for our country are so awfully ignored by those in power who went them out to fight in the first palce.
Welcome to MPS.
November 29th, 2021 02:16
OLD MAN
dusk arising said:
You\'re right, it\'s not half bad, in fact it\'s very good. Hard to believe it is your first poem. You obviously have been harbouring a great talent. I hope you are going to write more for us.
For me there are no rules in poetry, do your own thing. We use language and that is a fluid thing which is constantly changing, the old rules go out of the window.
Welcome to MPS a friendly place to post your poetry. This place works best if we read each others stuff and leave a comment where we think it\'s appropriate. Along the way you\'ll get to make friends if youre anything like me. Please feel free to throw stones (or bricks) at anything I post on here. Enjoy yourself.
November 28th, 2021 08:43
dusk arising said:
You\'re right, it\'s not half bad, in fact it\'s very good. Hard to believe it is your first poem. You obviously have been harbouring a great talent. I hope you are going to write more for us.
For me there are no rules in poetry, do your own thing. We use language and that is a fluid thing which is constantly changing, the old rules go out of the window.
Welcome to MPS a friendly place to post your poetry. This place works best if we read each others stuff and leave a comment where we think it\'s appropriate. Along the way you\'ll get to make friends if youre anything like me. Please feel free to throw stones (or bricks) at anything I post on here. Enjoy yourself.
November 28th, 2021 08:43
OLD MAN
Nicholas Browning said:
Often times it\'s difficult to be critical of someone else\'s poetry, especially when experience or subject clashes with form. There aren\'t a lot of people on this site that will tell you a poem is downright bad, but some might. This poem gives me the feeling of an American soldier coming back from Vietnam. Them being shunned, and all that. It\'s quite good for a first attempt; a few grammatical errors but in poetry that\'s no crime. I\'d say it\'s a fine example of a man\'s reflection on his life as he searches for something new. I enjoyed the read, and welcome to MPS.
November 28th, 2021 06:39
Nicholas Browning said:
Often times it\'s difficult to be critical of someone else\'s poetry, especially when experience or subject clashes with form. There aren\'t a lot of people on this site that will tell you a poem is downright bad, but some might. This poem gives me the feeling of an American soldier coming back from Vietnam. Them being shunned, and all that. It\'s quite good for a first attempt; a few grammatical errors but in poetry that\'s no crime. I\'d say it\'s a fine example of a man\'s reflection on his life as he searches for something new. I enjoyed the read, and welcome to MPS.
November 28th, 2021 06:39
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