Comments received on poems by Thejaswini
THE FALLING LEAF
Doggerel Dave said:
Would you care to review your 18+ ratings?
March 29th, 2022 08:32
Doggerel Dave said:
Would you care to review your 18+ ratings?
March 29th, 2022 08:32
THE FALLING LEAF
L. B. Mek said:
\'Dusk set-in and the zephyr was mellow,
While the leaf embraced its tint of vibrant yellow.
And then I watched the pretty leaf fall in a might of grace,
As it was swinging free in a boundless, peaceful space.\'
simply beautiful!
thanks for sharing
March 29th, 2022 05:09
L. B. Mek said:
\'Dusk set-in and the zephyr was mellow,
While the leaf embraced its tint of vibrant yellow.
And then I watched the pretty leaf fall in a might of grace,
As it was swinging free in a boundless, peaceful space.\'
simply beautiful!
thanks for sharing
March 29th, 2022 05:09
THE FALLING LEAF
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Theja ! Autumn speaks volumes and you really captured it so vividly !! Great write !!
my fav ..
My eyes gazed upon the beauty of this falling leaf,
That enjoyed its free fall without any sense of grief.
March 29th, 2022 01:12
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Theja ! Autumn speaks volumes and you really captured it so vividly !! Great write !!
my fav ..
My eyes gazed upon the beauty of this falling leaf,
That enjoyed its free fall without any sense of grief.
March 29th, 2022 01:12
Free as a Bird
M. J. Smith said:
Such imagery... Beautiful words full of a longing so many have felt. It is this that drives every drifter, wanderlust, a quest for freedom. Just once to have wings...
March 25th, 2022 16:15
M. J. Smith said:
Such imagery... Beautiful words full of a longing so many have felt. It is this that drives every drifter, wanderlust, a quest for freedom. Just once to have wings...
March 25th, 2022 16:15
Free as a Bird
Vamsi Sudha said:
Penned elegantly and a for a while I felt really liberated !!
Thanks and took a great flight !!
March 16th, 2022 11:58
Vamsi Sudha said:
Penned elegantly and a for a while I felt really liberated !!
Thanks and took a great flight !!
March 16th, 2022 11:58
Free as a Bird
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow your imagery is very vivid and captivating. I can totally relate to this message as I always admire when birds would gracefully fly by just wishing to be as free as them. It seems so refreshing.
March 16th, 2022 08:58
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow your imagery is very vivid and captivating. I can totally relate to this message as I always admire when birds would gracefully fly by just wishing to be as free as them. It seems so refreshing.
March 16th, 2022 08:58
Free as a Bird
dean langmuir said:
It would sure change are perspections,nice poem
March 16th, 2022 08:09
dean langmuir said:
It would sure change are perspections,nice poem
March 16th, 2022 08:09
Since I\'ve Been Gone
Vamsi Sudha said:
Nice one Poet !! Wishing you both get back soon...!!!
January 26th, 2022 21:41
Vamsi Sudha said:
Nice one Poet !! Wishing you both get back soon...!!!
January 26th, 2022 21:41
Soaking in Silence
Souvik said:
Lovely poem Thejaswini. This is a wonderful capture of nature and solitude! Words that are both succinct and eloquent! Please continue to write!
December 1st, 2021 03:17
Souvik said:
Lovely poem Thejaswini. This is a wonderful capture of nature and solitude! Words that are both succinct and eloquent! Please continue to write!
December 1st, 2021 03:17
Soaking in Silence
Vamsi Sudha said:
Nice one Thejaswini. !! very expressive !!! Keep writing !!
October 25th, 2021 04:30
Vamsi Sudha said:
Nice one Thejaswini. !! very expressive !!! Keep writing !!
October 25th, 2021 04:30
Soaking in Silence
spilleronsheet said:
Well crafted dear poet
Welcome to mps
It’s a wonderful insight
Your words so lyrical to read
Well tuned
Keep going
Thanks for sharing….
Nature so well chorused
Sang and gave respite
Somewhere my heart began to sing too
But it was the sound of heartbreaking inside
October 25th, 2021 03:00
spilleronsheet said:
Well crafted dear poet
Welcome to mps
It’s a wonderful insight
Your words so lyrical to read
Well tuned
Keep going
Thanks for sharing….
Nature so well chorused
Sang and gave respite
Somewhere my heart began to sing too
But it was the sound of heartbreaking inside
October 25th, 2021 03:00
