Poppy fields
Natalie Gladmir said:

\"I grew up surrounded by a suffocating warmth.\"
If you only knew how many children lack parental care and warmth. Suffocating warmth... Years will pass and you will be nostalgic for your mother\'s warmth.
Any misunderstanding can be resolved over a cup of tea. I think so.

October 10th, 2023 05:43

10 Steps to learn how to smoke, a guide by someone who gave up their addiction
geekslutnerdgirl said:

very creative. love it

May 20th, 2022 01:18

Writing
Alexander J. Wolfe said:

\"Tell my why I am addicted to my own haunting.\" This part is very insightful, sometimes I ask myself the same question. Thank you for sharing and I\'m glad you\'re willing to help yourself through therapy, we can only overcome when we have the will to do so.

January 5th, 2022 19:03

Tuesdays
L. B. Mek said:

\'Feel like shit,
can\'t cope,
won\'t drink,
Can\'t smoke.

Who the fuck am I
to pretend to be sad?
I mean happy.
I mean mad.

I can\'t remember.\'
(oft, there is but a few lane\'s
to traverse in our lives
that, which we can\'t ignore
and those
that build a wall, to our awareness;
if ever, we choose
to walk: with eyes, that question
and heart\'s that never shirk
we\'ll belong to that evolutionary heritage
of inquisitive ancestry
that lost, its capacity - to observe and accept
a role:
as part of \'the mindless herd...\'
There-in, lies
your mind\'s: endless nightmares
questing, for whatever meaning
you can glean of life;
and these Poetry of yours, reads
like a hymn
to the chaos, in your life
a hope for fleeting mercy
from the abundance of hurt, in your inherited circumstances
a chance, to sip a breadth
that doesn\'t ache
once or twice, in a day;
a worded wish, to ease
all the suffering, we
can\'t find the words: to express
let alone, confront!)
thank you for choosing to share, such sincere words
and for inspiring, my little scribbled reply..
I laud your bravery in these brilliant write!

November 8th, 2021 08:05

Tuesdays
Lorna said:

Maybe it\'s poets and introverts that do this kind of introspection but these are the kind of thoughts that run through so many of us. Your poem takes us into those thoughts....

November 8th, 2021 06:38

Little girl
spilleronsheet said:

It’s sad
I hope you find that girl again
Maybe she still resides inside
It’s intriguing that we can’t go back to who we were
Maybe the circumstances change is too much

November 5th, 2021 15:42

Laundry
L. B. Mek said:

\'My future home looks a lot
like my childhood bedroom.\'

\'Give me a meaning,
I have tried stealing it
but now
I’m handcuffed to a career.\'
(I laud, your dedication
the sheer respect and joy you have for your Art
to produce such a well considered and polished
nuanced work, of profound Poetry)
thank you! or choosing to share
your unquestionable
poetic genius, dear Poet
its a privilege to read your work
and learn
from your wordsmithing prowess

November 4th, 2021 03:42

Laundry
spilleronsheet said:

Wow
what cleverly you crafted the lines
A ritual got such intense thoughts
A true poet
Hail and cheers 🥂 to you dear friend
And the last lines made me smile
Should I hang my dreams along
Well crafted dear poet


November 3rd, 2021 14:18

Laundry
The BlackShakespeare said:

Very descriptive use of words.

November 3rd, 2021 13:41

Remainder
spilleronsheet said:

I got mixed emotions dear poet…I believe it hurts when people act like that, when they hurt us when we give all to them…it’s true kindness many a times may be faked…but I truly believe hiding among the dark clouds there is a sun whose sending his gleams to you…in your days somebody might be hiding and protecting you….If there is bad, then surely there will be good…I guess humanity has not purely died…it’s true to be realistic but the heart inside tells me since your alive never let the fantasies die…great day ahead dear poet

November 2nd, 2021 11:25

Kill Me Ugly
Paul Bell said:

Some might think hell ain\'t so beautiful, well, not compared to heaven anyway. I always think getting buried is dying ugly, though the worms may disagree. The world is fine, apart from my neighbour who for some reason doesn\'t like rocknroll at 4 in the morning.

October 28th, 2021 08:20