Comments received on poems by Meg



10 Steps to learn how to smoke, a guide by someone who gave up their addiction
L. B. Mek said:

\'Now, place it on your lips.
Hold it there, like
unspoken truths that now live
among your regrets.
The pressure light and comforting.\'
this, is an important write!
that\'s been beautifully realised
\'in my humble opinion\'
and I laud, that you stated
it was one to come back to
because your poem
is a diamond, that\'s very close
to its polished best!
thank you! for choosing to share

May 20th, 2022 03:56


Writing
bittersweet said:

i love this
also \"dare defy my words and you\'ll suffer the rage of someone who can no longer inflict harm.\" is amazing

January 5th, 2022 19:34

Writing
Alexander J. Wolfe said:

\"Tell my why I am addicted to my own haunting.\" This part is very insightful, sometimes I ask myself the same question. Thank you for sharing and I\'m glad you\'re willing to help yourself through therapy, we can only overcome when we have the will to do so.

January 5th, 2022 19:03

Writing
Buzz Bray said:

Wow! \"and I\'ll bleed ink.\" Very powerful! And it rhymes! Nicely done.

January 5th, 2022 11:45

Tuesdays
L. B. Mek said:

\'Feel like shit,
can\'t cope,
won\'t drink,
Can\'t smoke.

Who the fuck am I
to pretend to be sad?
I mean happy.
I mean mad.

I can\'t remember.\'
(oft, there is but a few lane\'s
to traverse in our lives
that, which we can\'t ignore
and those
that build a wall, to our awareness;
if ever, we choose
to walk: with eyes, that question
and heart\'s that never shirk
we\'ll belong to that evolutionary heritage
of inquisitive ancestry
that lost, its capacity - to observe and accept
a role:
as part of \'the mindless herd...\'
There-in, lies
your mind\'s: endless nightmares
questing, for whatever meaning
you can glean of life;
and these Poetry of yours, reads
like a hymn
to the chaos, in your life
a hope for fleeting mercy
from the abundance of hurt, in your inherited circumstances
a chance, to sip a breadth
that doesn\'t ache
once or twice, in a day;
a worded wish, to ease
all the suffering, we
can\'t find the words: to express
let alone, confront!)
thank you for choosing to share, such sincere words
and for inspiring, my little scribbled reply..
I laud your bravery in these brilliant write!

November 8th, 2021 08:05

Tuesdays
Garth Rakumakoe said:

When life\'s big questions marks stare us in the face, at our most vulnerable. I love how you so easily highlight the invisible. Great poem!

November 8th, 2021 06:46

Tuesdays
Lorna said:

Maybe it\'s poets and introverts that do this kind of introspection but these are the kind of thoughts that run through so many of us. Your poem takes us into those thoughts....

November 8th, 2021 06:38

Tuesdays
dusk arising said:

Welcome to the club called humanity and learning to accept that superheroes are fiction. Those questions have burned in us all. We just put them away and get on with our shit-load of life making the best of it we can.

November 8th, 2021 06:15

Little girl
spilleronsheet said:

It’s sad
I hope you find that girl again
Maybe she still resides inside
It’s intriguing that we can’t go back to who we were
Maybe the circumstances change is too much

November 5th, 2021 15:42

Little girl
dusk arising said:

Mind bending torment of regret. How life can shape us into places we dont want to be, things we\'d better not see, people we don\'t want to be. And there are memories which are our backbone, the joy of childhood ingrained in our souls.

November 4th, 2021 06:41

Laundry
L. B. Mek said:

\'My future home looks a lot
like my childhood bedroom.\'

\'Give me a meaning,
I have tried stealing it
but now
I’m handcuffed to a career.\'
(I laud, your dedication
the sheer respect and joy you have for your Art
to produce such a well considered and polished
nuanced work, of profound Poetry)
thank you! or choosing to share
your unquestionable
poetic genius, dear Poet
its a privilege to read your work
and learn
from your wordsmithing prowess

November 4th, 2021 03:42

Laundry
Goldfinch60 said:

Good words Meg, it is surprising from where we get our thoughts to put into words.

Andy

November 4th, 2021 01:23

Laundry
spilleronsheet said:

Wow
what cleverly you crafted the lines
A ritual got such intense thoughts
A true poet
Hail and cheers 🥂 to you dear friend
And the last lines made me smile
Should I hang my dreams along
Well crafted dear poet


November 3rd, 2021 14:18

Laundry
Garth Rakumakoe said:

Very multilayered and reflective. Speaks to a lot of complexities through simple objects. If only detergents and softeners could purge and soften everyday worries and troubles. Absolutely stunning!

November 3rd, 2021 13:50

Laundry
The BlackShakespeare said:

Very descriptive use of words.

November 3rd, 2021 13:41

Laundry
Paul Bell said:

Wonder how many people look out their office window and just wonder what the hell happened to them.

November 3rd, 2021 13:12

Laundry
Teddy.15 said:

You just took the mundane boredom out of clothes washing, what a very inspiring poetry treat so much reflection and such powerful last lines. Wonderful dear Meg.

November 3rd, 2021 12:57

Remainder
spilleronsheet said:

I got mixed emotions dear poet…I believe it hurts when people act like that, when they hurt us when we give all to them…it’s true kindness many a times may be faked…but I truly believe hiding among the dark clouds there is a sun whose sending his gleams to you…in your days somebody might be hiding and protecting you….If there is bad, then surely there will be good…I guess humanity has not purely died…it’s true to be realistic but the heart inside tells me since your alive never let the fantasies die…great day ahead dear poet

November 2nd, 2021 11:25

Remainder
The BlackShakespeare said:

Very true

November 2nd, 2021 08:23

Kill Me Ugly
Paul Bell said:

Some might think hell ain\'t so beautiful, well, not compared to heaven anyway. I always think getting buried is dying ugly, though the worms may disagree. The world is fine, apart from my neighbour who for some reason doesn\'t like rocknroll at 4 in the morning.

October 28th, 2021 08:20

Kill Me Ugly
Teddy.15 said:

Hello Meg, I think we live in a terrible world if you feel you cannot \"be yourself\" actually for me the beauty is always seen from the heart. I have never considered myself beautiful nor ugly, I think this poem is amazing, full of powerful thoughts and questioning, what we are really dealing with is probably jealousy envy so on, just be yourself and be who you want to be. Your title is very powerful too, I hear your desperation. A very very warm welcome to MPS 🤗

October 28th, 2021 07:49

Kill Me Ugly
Neville said:


Hello & welcome Meg .. I sincerely hope your post today is the product of a very vivid and creative poets imagination rather than an autobiographical self disclosive bit of well crafted prose ...

A splendid introduction Meg & I hope to see more of you ...... Neville


October 28th, 2021 07:46