Comments received on poems by Will Kevin



A Letter To My Love
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

Nice writing ) although it’s not always about how someone looks .. personality counts too . Anyway ., nobody’s perfect ..

January 25th, 2022 13:14

My Pocahontas
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

Sweet words . This is a lovely poem )

November 21st, 2021 09:43

Night Goddess
Goldfinch60 said:

May that moon always shine on you Will.

Andy

November 12th, 2021 01:27

Doubt
orchidee said:

Good write Will. I doubt I will dislike this poem! heehee.
Yes, doubts can be small - hopefully.
But - more fear, more doubt?

November 9th, 2021 02:48

Doubt
Goldfinch60 said:

May that doubt soon be smoothed out and the lake shines like a mirror once more.

Welcome to MPS.

November 9th, 2021 02:17

Doubt
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

I like this poem ) everyone wants to feel calm and balanced in their centre in a nice place like that clear lake )

November 8th, 2021 15:23

Doubt
Paul Bell said:

I like it. When mother nature bubbles, beware.

November 8th, 2021 15:18

Doubt
Will Kevin said:

Please i want to get better and know where i am on this ladder so i please be frank

November 8th, 2021 15:09