Comments received on poems by Will Kevin
DESPAIR
sorenbarrett said:
The feeling is such a common one but an overreaction. Caution yes but to never trust is a burden to heavy to bear. Well written and so well done
December 1st, 2025 15:47
sorenbarrett said:
The feeling is such a common one but an overreaction. Caution yes but to never trust is a burden to heavy to bear. Well written and so well done
December 1st, 2025 15:47
DESPAIR
Friendship said:
Well written, I think we all can relate to this. The poem explores the feelings of despair and mistrust that arise from past pain and betrayal. It reflects on the struggle between the desire for help and the instinct to push it away due to previous experiences of hurt.
December 1st, 2025 13:00
Friendship said:
Well written, I think we all can relate to this. The poem explores the feelings of despair and mistrust that arise from past pain and betrayal. It reflects on the struggle between the desire for help and the instinct to push it away due to previous experiences of hurt.
December 1st, 2025 13:00
OUR NIGHT
sorenbarrett said:
Love is nature and here it is framed in nature. Nicely worded it is most romantic and there is a soft feel to it. Most lovely
November 27th, 2025 17:51
sorenbarrett said:
Love is nature and here it is framed in nature. Nicely worded it is most romantic and there is a soft feel to it. Most lovely
November 27th, 2025 17:51
Phantom Pain
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful realization of past errors and present consequences. The what ifs and the as is. Nicely combined a fave
August 23rd, 2025 15:12
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful realization of past errors and present consequences. The what ifs and the as is. Nicely combined a fave
August 23rd, 2025 15:12
Refuge
Poetic Licence said:
That\'s a Lovely write of a love still brightly burning, nicely expressed, enjoyed the read
August 3rd, 2025 16:12
Poetic Licence said:
That\'s a Lovely write of a love still brightly burning, nicely expressed, enjoyed the read
August 3rd, 2025 16:12
Refuge
sorenbarrett said:
Great imagery for a love that continues to burn bright. Lovely
August 3rd, 2025 15:24
sorenbarrett said:
Great imagery for a love that continues to burn bright. Lovely
August 3rd, 2025 15:24
Refuge
Alan R said:
Beautiful imagery, i could see the slow motion burning of a cotton ball threads while reading the start of this poem!
August 3rd, 2025 14:43
Alan R said:
Beautiful imagery, i could see the slow motion burning of a cotton ball threads while reading the start of this poem!
August 3rd, 2025 14:43
CALL OF THE SEA
arqios said:
The big sound of the Ocean is a voice all its own! Wonderful 🌊
December 17th, 2024 17:47
arqios said:
The big sound of the Ocean is a voice all its own! Wonderful 🌊
December 17th, 2024 17:47
A Letter To My Love
Caring dove said:
Nice writing ) although it’s not always about how someone looks .. personality counts too . Anyway ., nobody’s perfect ..
January 25th, 2022 13:14
Caring dove said:
Nice writing ) although it’s not always about how someone looks .. personality counts too . Anyway ., nobody’s perfect ..
January 25th, 2022 13:14
Night Goddess
Goldfinch60 said:
May that moon always shine on you Will.
Andy
November 12th, 2021 01:27
Goldfinch60 said:
May that moon always shine on you Will.
Andy
November 12th, 2021 01:27
Doubt
orchidee said:
Good write Will. I doubt I will dislike this poem! heehee.
Yes, doubts can be small - hopefully.
But - more fear, more doubt?
November 9th, 2021 02:48
orchidee said:
Good write Will. I doubt I will dislike this poem! heehee.
Yes, doubts can be small - hopefully.
But - more fear, more doubt?
November 9th, 2021 02:48
Doubt
Goldfinch60 said:
May that doubt soon be smoothed out and the lake shines like a mirror once more.
Welcome to MPS.
November 9th, 2021 02:17
Goldfinch60 said:
May that doubt soon be smoothed out and the lake shines like a mirror once more.
Welcome to MPS.
November 9th, 2021 02:17
Doubt
Caring dove said:
I like this poem ) everyone wants to feel calm and balanced in their centre in a nice place like that clear lake )
November 8th, 2021 15:23
Caring dove said:
I like this poem ) everyone wants to feel calm and balanced in their centre in a nice place like that clear lake )
November 8th, 2021 15:23
Doubt
Will Kevin said:
Please i want to get better and know where i am on this ladder so i please be frank
November 8th, 2021 15:09
Will Kevin said:
Please i want to get better and know where i am on this ladder so i please be frank
November 8th, 2021 15:09
