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I honestly think with time
Paul Bell said:
Definitely, if at first you don\'t succeed, delicate to someone who knows what they\'re doing. Well, that\'s what I do, and it seems to work.
November 25th, 2021 10:34
Paul Bell said:
Definitely, if at first you don\'t succeed, delicate to someone who knows what they\'re doing. Well, that\'s what I do, and it seems to work.
November 25th, 2021 10:34
My Dearest
Paul Bell said:
Sometimes you just have to move on.
That\'s when people come back into your life when they see you shine.
November 24th, 2021 12:44
Paul Bell said:
Sometimes you just have to move on.
That\'s when people come back into your life when they see you shine.
November 24th, 2021 12:44
Faceless monsters are calling me names
L. B. Mek said:
\'Why are they on my mind?\'
be weary:
its murky, deciphering
between our \'learnt\' bad habits
and our \'own\' nature\'s, bad habits...
see, we are perfectly fine
walking alone, in life
its only when someone
stands by our side, matches
us step for step, and then
exits - abruptly, inevitably
we realise, there\'s a sense of emptiness
by our side...
(good read, thanks for sharing)
November 23rd, 2021 05:21
L. B. Mek said:
\'Why are they on my mind?\'
be weary:
its murky, deciphering
between our \'learnt\' bad habits
and our \'own\' nature\'s, bad habits...
see, we are perfectly fine
walking alone, in life
its only when someone
stands by our side, matches
us step for step, and then
exits - abruptly, inevitably
we realise, there\'s a sense of emptiness
by our side...
(good read, thanks for sharing)
November 23rd, 2021 05:21
A few lonely souls
L. B. Mek said:
really like the way you captured
the \'feel\' of the \'moment\';
there is no insightful retrospective outlook, to your wording
of what are just raw intense, realisations
appearing to you, as your write each line of self-excavated, reasoned: sensation\'s;
depicting, being engulfed in this chaos of emotions, wondering
somewhere - how ludicrous
that just a few hours ago
we were two lovebirds, embracing our seemingly faultless romance...
indeed, that\'s how slippery
our connections can become
and inevitably, when
our grip - slips
this is indeed how we feel:
\'Hard to drive while I\'m
Drinking a cup of my tears,
Shovel is in the back,
Knives are in my back.
My trunk is full of you -
I\'m drunk, but I\'m trying
My best - against the odds -
Keeping the car on the road.\'
November 22nd, 2021 06:59
L. B. Mek said:
really like the way you captured
the \'feel\' of the \'moment\';
there is no insightful retrospective outlook, to your wording
of what are just raw intense, realisations
appearing to you, as your write each line of self-excavated, reasoned: sensation\'s;
depicting, being engulfed in this chaos of emotions, wondering
somewhere - how ludicrous
that just a few hours ago
we were two lovebirds, embracing our seemingly faultless romance...
indeed, that\'s how slippery
our connections can become
and inevitably, when
our grip - slips
this is indeed how we feel:
\'Hard to drive while I\'m
Drinking a cup of my tears,
Shovel is in the back,
Knives are in my back.
My trunk is full of you -
I\'m drunk, but I\'m trying
My best - against the odds -
Keeping the car on the road.\'
November 22nd, 2021 06:59
Two souls, two body
Paul Bell said:
I think the ghosts never leave you.
Mind you, would you want to.
November 20th, 2021 06:30
Paul Bell said:
I think the ghosts never leave you.
Mind you, would you want to.
November 20th, 2021 06:30
I have a dusty attic
Paul Bell said:
It all happens in the attic.
Good sort of stealing, I hope.
November 16th, 2021 11:03
Paul Bell said:
It all happens in the attic.
Good sort of stealing, I hope.
November 16th, 2021 11:03
Like the man with fire
Paul Bell said:
Think no arrow can reach into the human soul, probably why we drink.
November 15th, 2021 05:25
Paul Bell said:
Think no arrow can reach into the human soul, probably why we drink.
November 15th, 2021 05:25
Death doesn’t wait for me
Nicholas Browning said:
To me, (The ignorant), a playfully cryptic depiction of death seeking its rightful possession.
November 14th, 2021 08:24
Nicholas Browning said:
To me, (The ignorant), a playfully cryptic depiction of death seeking its rightful possession.
November 14th, 2021 08:24
I\'m dancing with Pain
anna_noday said:
Thank you for your kind comment 🥺
November 14th, 2021 02:30
anna_noday said:
Thank you for your kind comment 🥺
November 14th, 2021 02:30
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