Comments received on poems by anna_noday
I\'m sitting in my car
woundedheart said:
The old tieing the shoelace routine a cop out without the embarrassment. Nicely penned.
December 21st, 2021 06:30
woundedheart said:
The old tieing the shoelace routine a cop out without the embarrassment. Nicely penned.
December 21st, 2021 06:30
I\'m sitting in my car
L. B. Mek said:
poems like this
take me back, to old Great\'s
like Li Bai
the way they effortlessly, described
themselves doing something
or just, waiting
and made the reader, experience so much more;
its such a unique trait in a writer
a beautiful way of weaving a story,
thanks for choosing to share, dear poet
December 21st, 2021 06:14
L. B. Mek said:
poems like this
take me back, to old Great\'s
like Li Bai
the way they effortlessly, described
themselves doing something
or just, waiting
and made the reader, experience so much more;
its such a unique trait in a writer
a beautiful way of weaving a story,
thanks for choosing to share, dear poet
December 21st, 2021 06:14
I\'m sitting in my car
dusk arising said:
This is called stalking LOL We\'ve all done it to some degree or another. Eventually we gain the maturity to realise that when a relationship isn\'t working we are better off staying away from it completely, whatever the reason it has failed.
December 21st, 2021 04:48
dusk arising said:
This is called stalking LOL We\'ve all done it to some degree or another. Eventually we gain the maturity to realise that when a relationship isn\'t working we are better off staying away from it completely, whatever the reason it has failed.
December 21st, 2021 04:48
Not long ago I walked alone
dusk arising said:
I read in your words the pains of a love\'s ending made more especially painful when so much effort was made to put right a partners wrongness.
It is through being in situations which are wrong for us that we may learn to recognise when the right one faces us. Not easy though is it. And we must beware of becoming bitter.
December 19th, 2021 11:27
dusk arising said:
I read in your words the pains of a love\'s ending made more especially painful when so much effort was made to put right a partners wrongness.
It is through being in situations which are wrong for us that we may learn to recognise when the right one faces us. Not easy though is it. And we must beware of becoming bitter.
December 19th, 2021 11:27
The year has gone
dusk arising said:
I picked up a life wearyness of \"I knew it was going to happen all along\" when i read this..... there\'s sometimes no explaining what we mentally \'see\' when reading another persons choice of word.
December 18th, 2021 04:14
dusk arising said:
I picked up a life wearyness of \"I knew it was going to happen all along\" when i read this..... there\'s sometimes no explaining what we mentally \'see\' when reading another persons choice of word.
December 18th, 2021 04:14
When I sneeze I please
Paul Bell said:
Nothing worse than man flu, though I\'m thinking you\'ll not milk it the way I do. Speedy recovery.
December 8th, 2021 14:04
Paul Bell said:
Nothing worse than man flu, though I\'m thinking you\'ll not milk it the way I do. Speedy recovery.
December 8th, 2021 14:04
When I sneeze I please
dusk arising said:
Now THAT is nursing... sat by your bed comforting you by holding your hand.... thats caring and devotion, sharing the anguish of illness.
Aaaaaaa ttt-- chooooo... oh no...
December 8th, 2021 10:42
dusk arising said:
Now THAT is nursing... sat by your bed comforting you by holding your hand.... thats caring and devotion, sharing the anguish of illness.
Aaaaaaa ttt-- chooooo... oh no...
December 8th, 2021 10:42
When I sneeze I please
spilleronsheet said:
It’s a sad write
Get well soon my dear friend
Hope to see you spring back soon
Well written though
December 8th, 2021 04:44
spilleronsheet said:
It’s a sad write
Get well soon my dear friend
Hope to see you spring back soon
Well written though
December 8th, 2021 04:44
What if we run away until
dusk arising said:
I\'m game for that leap of faith.
December 7th, 2021 15:03
dusk arising said:
I\'m game for that leap of faith.
December 7th, 2021 15:03
There\'s so much I want to say
L. B. Mek said:
even you can\'t voice these words
I hope, they
read your actions
that can\'t help
but speak your heart..
thanks for choosing to share
December 6th, 2021 05:39
L. B. Mek said:
even you can\'t voice these words
I hope, they
read your actions
that can\'t help
but speak your heart..
thanks for choosing to share
December 6th, 2021 05:39
I\'m telling you
Lorna said:
Well done.... a little grim at the end but says what you intend I think.....
December 5th, 2021 08:28
Lorna said:
Well done.... a little grim at the end but says what you intend I think.....
December 5th, 2021 08:28
The face we choose to miss
Paul Bell said:
I\'m not sure if this person has passed, or it\'s a lost love, but I like it.
December 4th, 2021 04:42
Paul Bell said:
I\'m not sure if this person has passed, or it\'s a lost love, but I like it.
December 4th, 2021 04:42
All day the rain\' pouring
L. B. Mek said:
really clever,
I like how it all adds up
\'as do the pouring days
and bugs, in our lives
still, we have our Mugs
to wage our defiance!\'
December 3rd, 2021 05:59
L. B. Mek said:
really clever,
I like how it all adds up
\'as do the pouring days
and bugs, in our lives
still, we have our Mugs
to wage our defiance!\'
December 3rd, 2021 05:59
Light thunder\' blowing
L. B. Mek said:
(teasing mist, peaking
amongst, from unshed droplets
we, claim back: defiantly
restraint of self
to retain
that semblance of ourselves
we still, recognise
nature imagery
fits snug, like well-worn jeans
knows us, better
than our mirror\'s of life
ever will...)
December 2nd, 2021 05:04
L. B. Mek said:
(teasing mist, peaking
amongst, from unshed droplets
we, claim back: defiantly
restraint of self
to retain
that semblance of ourselves
we still, recognise
nature imagery
fits snug, like well-worn jeans
knows us, better
than our mirror\'s of life
ever will...)
December 2nd, 2021 05:04
Shallow shadow\' hiding
Nicholas Browning said:
\"I\'m a shadow in a corner, just playing along.\"
A nice read, me likes shadows.
December 1st, 2021 02:28
Nicholas Browning said:
\"I\'m a shadow in a corner, just playing along.\"
A nice read, me likes shadows.
December 1st, 2021 02:28
You found my fuming ashes
spilleronsheet said:
Beautiful poetry with strong imagery
Such well contrast
Very well crafted dear poet
November 30th, 2021 12:54
spilleronsheet said:
Beautiful poetry with strong imagery
Such well contrast
Very well crafted dear poet
November 30th, 2021 12:54
You found my fuming ashes
anna_noday said:
Thank you all for your kind words 🥰
November 30th, 2021 06:59
anna_noday said:
Thank you all for your kind words 🥰
November 30th, 2021 06:59
You found my fuming ashes
L. B. Mek said:
penetrating imagery, well written
thanks for sharing
(and I\'m sorry if you feel I\'m just \'saying\' things,
and that my comments on your work, lack integrity
at the very least, try to believe
I mean well)
November 30th, 2021 06:50
L. B. Mek said:
penetrating imagery, well written
thanks for sharing
(and I\'m sorry if you feel I\'m just \'saying\' things,
and that my comments on your work, lack integrity
at the very least, try to believe
I mean well)
November 30th, 2021 06:50
You found my fuming ashes
Lorna said:
Good one - and let her rise like a Phoenix from those ashes!
November 30th, 2021 05:07
Lorna said:
Good one - and let her rise like a Phoenix from those ashes!
November 30th, 2021 05:07
You found my fuming ashes
Goldfinch60 said:
Your own bay will be there for you soon anna.
Andy
November 30th, 2021 03:42
Goldfinch60 said:
Your own bay will be there for you soon anna.
Andy
November 30th, 2021 03:42
Between reality and needs
Nicholas Browning said:
This one poked me in the brain stem a little too hard. It\'s a work of art, prodding and poking in the right places. I thought of what the \"Shields\" might be, and I like what I concluded. Thanks for sharing this, it hit the spot.
November 29th, 2021 07:11
Nicholas Browning said:
This one poked me in the brain stem a little too hard. It\'s a work of art, prodding and poking in the right places. I thought of what the \"Shields\" might be, and I like what I concluded. Thanks for sharing this, it hit the spot.
November 29th, 2021 07:11
Between reality and needs
L. B. Mek said:
a very intriguing write,
I like how you just, punctured
the outlines in your themes
allowing us to delve deeper
into what we want, on our own..
thanks for sharing
November 29th, 2021 06:28
L. B. Mek said:
a very intriguing write,
I like how you just, punctured
the outlines in your themes
allowing us to delve deeper
into what we want, on our own..
thanks for sharing
November 29th, 2021 06:28
Theories about marriage
Goldfinch60 said:
I found the one in my life and we were together for almost 40 loving years before she passed into heaven nearly two years ago. In our time together our love grew moment by moment all the time.
When you find the right person it is so wonderful.
Andy
November 28th, 2021 01:32
Goldfinch60 said:
I found the one in my life and we were together for almost 40 loving years before she passed into heaven nearly two years ago. In our time together our love grew moment by moment all the time.
When you find the right person it is so wonderful.
Andy
November 28th, 2021 01:32
Theories about marriage
Paul Bell said:
This is why I married a marriage councillor. She knew what side her contract was buttered.
November 27th, 2021 06:28
Paul Bell said:
This is why I married a marriage councillor. She knew what side her contract was buttered.
November 27th, 2021 06:28
Theories about marriage
Doggerel Dave said:
Your thoughts (From a 23 year old\'s pen –) leave me unsure as to your opinion of the whole thing; But there is enough ambivalence there for me to advise against it for now (I could argue forever, but I\'m trying very hard to be gentle).
November 27th, 2021 04:59
Doggerel Dave said:
Your thoughts (From a 23 year old\'s pen –) leave me unsure as to your opinion of the whole thing; But there is enough ambivalence there for me to advise against it for now (I could argue forever, but I\'m trying very hard to be gentle).
November 27th, 2021 04:59
Theories about marriage
kitty the naughty poet said:
Very true words. If you are going to get married, make sure they are the one.
November 27th, 2021 04:19
kitty the naughty poet said:
Very true words. If you are going to get married, make sure they are the one.
November 27th, 2021 04:19
I thought I know you
Nicholas Browning said:
People that build you up only to break you down are scum, in my opinion.
I felt every line of your heart-wrenching outcry, and it was pain-inducing in a good way. I enjoyed the read. Best regards.
November 26th, 2021 10:52
Nicholas Browning said:
People that build you up only to break you down are scum, in my opinion.
I felt every line of your heart-wrenching outcry, and it was pain-inducing in a good way. I enjoyed the read. Best regards.
November 26th, 2021 10:52
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