Comments received on poems by jim56
bird of prey
sorenbarrett said:
This paints a familiar picture from younger days and feels very peaceful. Lovely
July 26th, 2024 05:04
sorenbarrett said:
This paints a familiar picture from younger days and feels very peaceful. Lovely
July 26th, 2024 05:04
we all need someone
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed we all do being social animals some of us more than others. Nicely written
July 25th, 2024 05:31
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed we all do being social animals some of us more than others. Nicely written
July 25th, 2024 05:31
washing day
sorenbarrett said:
Been there done that. There needs to be another line about it starting to rain and taking them in only to have the sun come back out again. Fun read
July 24th, 2024 06:06
sorenbarrett said:
Been there done that. There needs to be another line about it starting to rain and taking them in only to have the sun come back out again. Fun read
July 24th, 2024 06:06
is it really there
𓆩Mase𓆪 said:
What a question! Do we know?
Other religions believe there god is just as real as we believe ours is? Do we know?
Good write Jim, sounds amazing!
July 23rd, 2024 20:30
𓆩Mase𓆪 said:
What a question! Do we know?
Other religions believe there god is just as real as we believe ours is? Do we know?
Good write Jim, sounds amazing!
July 23rd, 2024 20:30
is it really there
sorenbarrett said:
A common question nicely put to verse. The flow is smooth and it seems to roll of the tongue as it is read.
July 23rd, 2024 05:46
sorenbarrett said:
A common question nicely put to verse. The flow is smooth and it seems to roll of the tongue as it is read.
July 23rd, 2024 05:46
sunshine happiness
Cassie58 said:
Your lovely poem sums up a beautiful sunny day yesterday. It was short lived. Today is cloudy Jim. At least there is no rain. Enjoy the day.
July 20th, 2024 12:26
Cassie58 said:
Your lovely poem sums up a beautiful sunny day yesterday. It was short lived. Today is cloudy Jim. At least there is no rain. Enjoy the day.
July 20th, 2024 12:26
rhytthm of the rain
Dan Williams said:
The world has a shortage of optimists, thanks for this effort.
July 19th, 2024 23:56
Dan Williams said:
The world has a shortage of optimists, thanks for this effort.
July 19th, 2024 23:56
country living
Cassie58 said:
Enjoyed the imagery Jim. So nice to live in the country. Hope you have had a good day.
July 19th, 2024 15:59
Cassie58 said:
Enjoyed the imagery Jim. So nice to live in the country. Hope you have had a good day.
July 19th, 2024 15:59
country living
sorenbarrett said:
A great message with rhyme and one that I echo. Great imagery.
July 19th, 2024 05:08
sorenbarrett said:
A great message with rhyme and one that I echo. Great imagery.
July 19th, 2024 05:08
rhytthm of the rain
Cassie58 said:
Drawn in by your first line Jim. Remembered the song, listen to the rhythm of the falling rain. A lovely 60’s number. Rain drops remind me of tears, but we all need the rain fall to allow the crops to flourish. It is a beautiful day today. I hope you are smiling.
July 18th, 2024 10:04
Cassie58 said:
Drawn in by your first line Jim. Remembered the song, listen to the rhythm of the falling rain. A lovely 60’s number. Rain drops remind me of tears, but we all need the rain fall to allow the crops to flourish. It is a beautiful day today. I hope you are smiling.
July 18th, 2024 10:04
rhytthm of the rain
sorenbarrett said:
Always loved the rain but like tears enough is enough whether joy or sadness a change is always welcome/ Good write
July 18th, 2024 05:14
sorenbarrett said:
Always loved the rain but like tears enough is enough whether joy or sadness a change is always welcome/ Good write
July 18th, 2024 05:14
natures view
Cassie58 said:
Your poem is rich in imagery Jim. Nature is a very special part of my life. I find it spiritually enriching and I like writing about it too. Hope you are having a grand Wednesday. I enjoyed my visit here.
July 17th, 2024 12:00
Cassie58 said:
Your poem is rich in imagery Jim. Nature is a very special part of my life. I find it spiritually enriching and I like writing about it too. Hope you are having a grand Wednesday. I enjoyed my visit here.
July 17th, 2024 12:00
natures view
sorenbarrett said:
Always am intrigued by nature and her beauty. This uses a good deal of imagery to convey that feeling. Very nice
July 17th, 2024 10:23
sorenbarrett said:
Always am intrigued by nature and her beauty. This uses a good deal of imagery to convey that feeling. Very nice
July 17th, 2024 10:23
somedays
Cassie58 said:
That is such a good way to live Jim. Go with the flow. Good days, bad days, we still have to get through them. Hope your Tuesday has been bright and happy.
July 16th, 2024 14:05
Cassie58 said:
That is such a good way to live Jim. Go with the flow. Good days, bad days, we still have to get through them. Hope your Tuesday has been bright and happy.
July 16th, 2024 14:05
life goes on
Cassie58 said:
Hello Jim. Life can throw some real nasties our way and often without notice. We don’t have any choice. We can’t stop the world and get off. We have to learn how to deal with it. How to take the rough with the smooth. And that can be difficult. Pouring with rain. Really heavy rain. Keep dry.
July 15th, 2024 14:47
Cassie58 said:
Hello Jim. Life can throw some real nasties our way and often without notice. We don’t have any choice. We can’t stop the world and get off. We have to learn how to deal with it. How to take the rough with the smooth. And that can be difficult. Pouring with rain. Really heavy rain. Keep dry.
July 15th, 2024 14:47
garden fun
Cassie58 said:
That is what I have been doing this Sunday morning Jim, tending the garden. You have to put the work in to get results. Have a beautiful day. I bet your garden looks lovely.
July 14th, 2024 07:17
Cassie58 said:
That is what I have been doing this Sunday morning Jim, tending the garden. You have to put the work in to get results. Have a beautiful day. I bet your garden looks lovely.
July 14th, 2024 07:17
if there was no violence
Cassie58 said:
So sad to find that violence is on the increase. Crime is climbing and I for one reflect on years ago when it was far more peaceful in the UK. It’s everywhere though. The world today is a world of conflict. Will it ever change? Have a happy Saturday Jim. Your words reflect so well current affairs.
July 13th, 2024 10:11
Cassie58 said:
So sad to find that violence is on the increase. Crime is climbing and I for one reflect on years ago when it was far more peaceful in the UK. It’s everywhere though. The world today is a world of conflict. Will it ever change? Have a happy Saturday Jim. Your words reflect so well current affairs.
July 13th, 2024 10:11
roanhead shore
Cassie58 said:
A lovely nostalgic write Jim. Beautiful memories. Such a pity areas of beauty aren’t left for others to enjoy. Once built on, there’s no going back. A fine write. Nicely conveyed.
July 12th, 2024 15:35
Cassie58 said:
A lovely nostalgic write Jim. Beautiful memories. Such a pity areas of beauty aren’t left for others to enjoy. Once built on, there’s no going back. A fine write. Nicely conveyed.
July 12th, 2024 15:35
when the smoke rises
Cassie58 said:
A moving poem Jim. We scattered my mum’s ashes at sea, as she wished, in a favourite spot. At rest now for eternity. I still feel her presence. Free of pain and no more suffering. What a blessing that is for her. So difficult to see loved ones suffering. Hope Thursday has been good. A thoughtful and reflective poem you have penned here.
July 11th, 2024 14:21
Cassie58 said:
A moving poem Jim. We scattered my mum’s ashes at sea, as she wished, in a favourite spot. At rest now for eternity. I still feel her presence. Free of pain and no more suffering. What a blessing that is for her. So difficult to see loved ones suffering. Hope Thursday has been good. A thoughtful and reflective poem you have penned here.
July 11th, 2024 14:21
mistakes
Cassie58 said:
Good afternoon Jim. Your poem reminds me that all of us make mistakes. That is how we learn and progress on our journey through life. It would be nice to think we are forgiven for our mistakes, it would also be good not to beat ourselves up too much for our own errors. I enjoyed reading your poem. Chilly here, but at least we don’t have rain. Happy Wednesday.
July 10th, 2024 11:15
Cassie58 said:
Good afternoon Jim. Your poem reminds me that all of us make mistakes. That is how we learn and progress on our journey through life. It would be nice to think we are forgiven for our mistakes, it would also be good not to beat ourselves up too much for our own errors. I enjoyed reading your poem. Chilly here, but at least we don’t have rain. Happy Wednesday.
July 10th, 2024 11:15
take a look at life
Cassie58 said:
We have one life, we have to make the most of it, whatever comes our way. Nicely penned Jim, and sound advice too. All the best.
July 9th, 2024 15:45
Cassie58 said:
We have one life, we have to make the most of it, whatever comes our way. Nicely penned Jim, and sound advice too. All the best.
July 9th, 2024 15:45
pet friend
Cassie58 said:
So true Jim. A pet, particularly a dog gives forever love and loyalty. Cats, just don’t cut the mustard. Another really wet day here. No gardening today , but have taken Solo out for her walk.
July 9th, 2024 11:35
Cassie58 said:
So true Jim. A pet, particularly a dog gives forever love and loyalty. Cats, just don’t cut the mustard. Another really wet day here. No gardening today , but have taken Solo out for her walk.
July 9th, 2024 11:35
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