Comments received on poems by jim56
hey mr sunshine
sorenbarrett said:
The beat of this poem together with the opening wording made me think of Mr. Tamborine man by Bob Dylan. This more cheery in its wording. Good job Jim
July 4th, 2026 07:16
sorenbarrett said:
The beat of this poem together with the opening wording made me think of Mr. Tamborine man by Bob Dylan. This more cheery in its wording. Good job Jim
July 4th, 2026 07:16
beauty in my garden
sorenbarrett said:
Another beautiful picture created in poetic words Jim
July 3rd, 2026 04:53
sorenbarrett said:
Another beautiful picture created in poetic words Jim
July 3rd, 2026 04:53
summer morn
sorenbarrett said:
Nothing like a choir of birds to open the morning. Nicely written Jim
July 2nd, 2026 06:12
sorenbarrett said:
Nothing like a choir of birds to open the morning. Nicely written Jim
July 2nd, 2026 06:12
tide watch
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely write Jim of the sea and shore that holds so many beauties unseen. Well done my friend
July 1st, 2026 09:22
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely write Jim of the sea and shore that holds so many beauties unseen. Well done my friend
July 1st, 2026 09:22
everyone loves dogs
2781 said:
They have been man\'s second best friend, for a very long time.
June 30th, 2026 08:24
2781 said:
They have been man\'s second best friend, for a very long time.
June 30th, 2026 08:24
everyone loves dogs
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely poem of man\'s best friend. Well done Jim
June 30th, 2026 04:42
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely poem of man\'s best friend. Well done Jim
June 30th, 2026 04:42
robin song
sorenbarrett said:
Birds and nature a favorite topic of mine and this another good write Jim
June 29th, 2026 06:32
sorenbarrett said:
Birds and nature a favorite topic of mine and this another good write Jim
June 29th, 2026 06:32
new dawn
sorenbarrett said:
Such a lovely image created Jim in this aviary chorus. Nicely written my friend
June 28th, 2026 07:57
sorenbarrett said:
Such a lovely image created Jim in this aviary chorus. Nicely written my friend
June 28th, 2026 07:57
when love has gone
sorenbarrett said:
Clever Jim the rhyme carries this poem that asks to give space and time to an injured heart
June 27th, 2026 05:11
sorenbarrett said:
Clever Jim the rhyme carries this poem that asks to give space and time to an injured heart
June 27th, 2026 05:11
faith and hope
sorenbarrett said:
Faith and hope will often carry you through. A lovely poem Jim
June 26th, 2026 04:27
sorenbarrett said:
Faith and hope will often carry you through. A lovely poem Jim
June 26th, 2026 04:27
river dream
sorenbarrett said:
Lovely Jim another ideal paradise like dreamscape kept in good rhyme and meter. Nicely done Jim
June 25th, 2026 04:34
sorenbarrett said:
Lovely Jim another ideal paradise like dreamscape kept in good rhyme and meter. Nicely done Jim
June 25th, 2026 04:34
rainbow forest
sorenbarrett said:
Cute and charming a child\'s fantasy nicely conceived and well written Jim
June 24th, 2026 06:33
sorenbarrett said:
Cute and charming a child\'s fantasy nicely conceived and well written Jim
June 24th, 2026 06:33
voice of an angel
sorenbarrett said:
A most innocent and pure poem that would appeal to any child. Nicely done Jim
June 23rd, 2026 06:27
sorenbarrett said:
A most innocent and pure poem that would appeal to any child. Nicely done Jim
June 23rd, 2026 06:27
olive tree
ms.divine said:
I be glad when I get to that level of peace
Great read
June 22nd, 2026 09:42
ms.divine said:
I be glad when I get to that level of peace
Great read
June 22nd, 2026 09:42
olive tree
sorenbarrett said:
Nice use of symbols Jim in this poem of nature too that leaves a most peaceful feeling. Well done
June 22nd, 2026 04:55
sorenbarrett said:
Nice use of symbols Jim in this poem of nature too that leaves a most peaceful feeling. Well done
June 22nd, 2026 04:55
changing world
Thomas W Case said:
This has a simple, direct honesty to it—like someone trying to name a feeling of instability without dressing it up.
What stands out is the repetition of “not like it used to be”—it gives the piece a circling, almost weary rhythm, like the mind trying to settle on something familiar but finding everything shifting underneath it.
June 21st, 2026 08:16
Thomas W Case said:
This has a simple, direct honesty to it—like someone trying to name a feeling of instability without dressing it up.
What stands out is the repetition of “not like it used to be”—it gives the piece a circling, almost weary rhythm, like the mind trying to settle on something familiar but finding everything shifting underneath it.
June 21st, 2026 08:16
changing world
sorenbarrett said:
A good write Jim and for us older that have seen other times it is more evident than for the young that know nothing else.
June 21st, 2026 05:53
sorenbarrett said:
A good write Jim and for us older that have seen other times it is more evident than for the young that know nothing else.
June 21st, 2026 05:53
there for you
sorenbarrett said:
A pledge of fidelity and friendship of love and commitment. Nicely done
June 20th, 2026 05:45
sorenbarrett said:
A pledge of fidelity and friendship of love and commitment. Nicely done
June 20th, 2026 05:45
dolphin dance
sorenbarrett said:
Lovely Jim I am not sure that I have seen a dolphin dance but I have seen them swim and jump following a boat and barge and I have seen them help fishermen by herding fish into their nets. Well written my friend
June 19th, 2026 05:01
sorenbarrett said:
Lovely Jim I am not sure that I have seen a dolphin dance but I have seen them swim and jump following a boat and barge and I have seen them help fishermen by herding fish into their nets. Well written my friend
June 19th, 2026 05:01
world cup time
Kevin Hulme said:
I remember 66 Jim. But I never get carried away with England since. We live in hope.
June 18th, 2026 08:48
Kevin Hulme said:
I remember 66 Jim. But I never get carried away with England since. We live in hope.
June 18th, 2026 08:48
world cup time
sorenbarrett said:
A good poem Jim I have been following it and its stories. Sports can be such a wonderful way to address rivalries.
June 18th, 2026 05:24
sorenbarrett said:
A good poem Jim I have been following it and its stories. Sports can be such a wonderful way to address rivalries.
June 18th, 2026 05:24
badger beauty
sorenbarrett said:
A great write of a creature that looks cute but can chase off a bear. Don\'t mess with the badger my friend
June 17th, 2026 04:38
sorenbarrett said:
A great write of a creature that looks cute but can chase off a bear. Don\'t mess with the badger my friend
June 17th, 2026 04:38
single daffodil
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful image painted here Jim most lovely
June 16th, 2026 04:44
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful image painted here Jim most lovely
June 16th, 2026 04:44
unconditional love
sorenbarrett said:
This to me Jim is a mother\'s love for there seems to be no love greater than that.
June 15th, 2026 05:57
sorenbarrett said:
This to me Jim is a mother\'s love for there seems to be no love greater than that.
June 15th, 2026 05:57
when the sun is shining
NafisaSB said:
I am sure many of us will share these sentiments 👏
June 13th, 2026 07:07
NafisaSB said:
I am sure many of us will share these sentiments 👏
June 13th, 2026 07:07
parrot friend
sorenbarrett said:
Cute Jim parrots not the best of pets they tend to bond to one person of whom they can be very defensive, live longer than most owners, and can make a lot of noise learning to swear Andrew Jackson while president had one that would swear a blue streak and made scandal, Had a friend as a child that had one and the minister could never come over for the words it used.
June 13th, 2026 06:41
sorenbarrett said:
Cute Jim parrots not the best of pets they tend to bond to one person of whom they can be very defensive, live longer than most owners, and can make a lot of noise learning to swear Andrew Jackson while president had one that would swear a blue streak and made scandal, Had a friend as a child that had one and the minister could never come over for the words it used.
June 13th, 2026 06:41
when the sun is shining
sorenbarrett said:
Reflections in memory\'s pond of a past that was bright and warm now stimulated by suns rays. A lovely poem Jim
June 12th, 2026 04:18
sorenbarrett said:
Reflections in memory\'s pond of a past that was bright and warm now stimulated by suns rays. A lovely poem Jim
June 12th, 2026 04:18
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