Comments received on poems by jim56
olive tree
ms.divine said:
I be glad when I get to that level of peace
Great read
June 22nd, 2026 09:42
ms.divine said:
I be glad when I get to that level of peace
Great read
June 22nd, 2026 09:42
olive tree
sorenbarrett said:
Nice use of symbols Jim in this poem of nature too that leaves a most peaceful feeling. Well done
June 22nd, 2026 04:55
sorenbarrett said:
Nice use of symbols Jim in this poem of nature too that leaves a most peaceful feeling. Well done
June 22nd, 2026 04:55
changing world
Thomas W Case said:
This has a simple, direct honesty to it—like someone trying to name a feeling of instability without dressing it up.
What stands out is the repetition of “not like it used to be”—it gives the piece a circling, almost weary rhythm, like the mind trying to settle on something familiar but finding everything shifting underneath it.
June 21st, 2026 08:16
Thomas W Case said:
This has a simple, direct honesty to it—like someone trying to name a feeling of instability without dressing it up.
What stands out is the repetition of “not like it used to be”—it gives the piece a circling, almost weary rhythm, like the mind trying to settle on something familiar but finding everything shifting underneath it.
June 21st, 2026 08:16
changing world
sorenbarrett said:
A good write Jim and for us older that have seen other times it is more evident than for the young that know nothing else.
June 21st, 2026 05:53
sorenbarrett said:
A good write Jim and for us older that have seen other times it is more evident than for the young that know nothing else.
June 21st, 2026 05:53
there for you
sorenbarrett said:
A pledge of fidelity and friendship of love and commitment. Nicely done
June 20th, 2026 05:45
sorenbarrett said:
A pledge of fidelity and friendship of love and commitment. Nicely done
June 20th, 2026 05:45
dolphin dance
sorenbarrett said:
Lovely Jim I am not sure that I have seen a dolphin dance but I have seen them swim and jump following a boat and barge and I have seen them help fishermen by herding fish into their nets. Well written my friend
June 19th, 2026 05:01
sorenbarrett said:
Lovely Jim I am not sure that I have seen a dolphin dance but I have seen them swim and jump following a boat and barge and I have seen them help fishermen by herding fish into their nets. Well written my friend
June 19th, 2026 05:01
world cup time
Kevin Hulme said:
I remember 66 Jim. But I never get carried away with England since. We live in hope.
June 18th, 2026 08:48
Kevin Hulme said:
I remember 66 Jim. But I never get carried away with England since. We live in hope.
June 18th, 2026 08:48
world cup time
sorenbarrett said:
A good poem Jim I have been following it and its stories. Sports can be such a wonderful way to address rivalries.
June 18th, 2026 05:24
sorenbarrett said:
A good poem Jim I have been following it and its stories. Sports can be such a wonderful way to address rivalries.
June 18th, 2026 05:24
badger beauty
sorenbarrett said:
A great write of a creature that looks cute but can chase off a bear. Don\'t mess with the badger my friend
June 17th, 2026 04:38
sorenbarrett said:
A great write of a creature that looks cute but can chase off a bear. Don\'t mess with the badger my friend
June 17th, 2026 04:38
single daffodil
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful image painted here Jim most lovely
June 16th, 2026 04:44
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful image painted here Jim most lovely
June 16th, 2026 04:44
unconditional love
sorenbarrett said:
This to me Jim is a mother\'s love for there seems to be no love greater than that.
June 15th, 2026 05:57
sorenbarrett said:
This to me Jim is a mother\'s love for there seems to be no love greater than that.
June 15th, 2026 05:57
when the sun is shining
NafisaSB said:
I am sure many of us will share these sentiments 👏
June 13th, 2026 07:07
NafisaSB said:
I am sure many of us will share these sentiments 👏
June 13th, 2026 07:07
parrot friend
sorenbarrett said:
Cute Jim parrots not the best of pets they tend to bond to one person of whom they can be very defensive, live longer than most owners, and can make a lot of noise learning to swear Andrew Jackson while president had one that would swear a blue streak and made scandal, Had a friend as a child that had one and the minister could never come over for the words it used.
June 13th, 2026 06:41
sorenbarrett said:
Cute Jim parrots not the best of pets they tend to bond to one person of whom they can be very defensive, live longer than most owners, and can make a lot of noise learning to swear Andrew Jackson while president had one that would swear a blue streak and made scandal, Had a friend as a child that had one and the minister could never come over for the words it used.
June 13th, 2026 06:41
when the sun is shining
sorenbarrett said:
Reflections in memory\'s pond of a past that was bright and warm now stimulated by suns rays. A lovely poem Jim
June 12th, 2026 04:18
sorenbarrett said:
Reflections in memory\'s pond of a past that was bright and warm now stimulated by suns rays. A lovely poem Jim
June 12th, 2026 04:18
life can be lonely
sorenbarrett said:
Loneliness is a sad condition in a species meant to be gregarious. Well done Jim
June 10th, 2026 05:52
sorenbarrett said:
Loneliness is a sad condition in a species meant to be gregarious. Well done Jim
June 10th, 2026 05:52
homeless
Syd said:
Hi Jim, I thought this poem looked familiar 🤔. I read it on Hello Poetry this morning. I\'m Falsesense on HP. Nice to read it again.
- Syd
June 9th, 2026 12:49
Syd said:
Hi Jim, I thought this poem looked familiar 🤔. I read it on Hello Poetry this morning. I\'m Falsesense on HP. Nice to read it again.
- Syd
June 9th, 2026 12:49
homeless
sorenbarrett said:
A most compassionate poem that addresses the issue of homelessness. A sad situation. Well said Jim
June 9th, 2026 04:35
sorenbarrett said:
A most compassionate poem that addresses the issue of homelessness. A sad situation. Well said Jim
June 9th, 2026 04:35
thing called love
sorenbarrett said:
A very nice description Jim of what most of us call love. Well done
June 8th, 2026 05:14
sorenbarrett said:
A very nice description Jim of what most of us call love. Well done
June 8th, 2026 05:14
i like it
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful and bright poem that is joyful and light. Nicely done Jim
June 7th, 2026 07:06
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful and bright poem that is joyful and light. Nicely done Jim
June 7th, 2026 07:06
lovebird love
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely poem Jim it reminded me of the song Yellow Bird sung by the Mills brothers. A fun read
June 6th, 2026 06:06
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely poem Jim it reminded me of the song Yellow Bird sung by the Mills brothers. A fun read
June 6th, 2026 06:06
lifes journey
sorenbarrett said:
Well said Jim life is a journey and it can be difficult or easy, attractive or painful. None of us know where the end of the road will be only that there will be one. A lovely write my friend
June 5th, 2026 05:43
sorenbarrett said:
Well said Jim life is a journey and it can be difficult or easy, attractive or painful. None of us know where the end of the road will be only that there will be one. A lovely write my friend
June 5th, 2026 05:43
respect
sorenbarrett said:
A great message Jim respect is something that the world is lacking now days. Nicely said
June 4th, 2026 07:06
sorenbarrett said:
A great message Jim respect is something that the world is lacking now days. Nicely said
June 4th, 2026 07:06
live in harmony
sorenbarrett said:
And so it is Jim it is either learn harmony or destroy ourselves. Great message
June 3rd, 2026 06:30
sorenbarrett said:
And so it is Jim it is either learn harmony or destroy ourselves. Great message
June 3rd, 2026 06:30
watch the children play
Katie B. said:
Lovely Jim! Reminds me of my daughter\'s tender years and those of the young preschoolers I work with.
June 2nd, 2026 06:12
Katie B. said:
Lovely Jim! Reminds me of my daughter\'s tender years and those of the young preschoolers I work with.
June 2nd, 2026 06:12
watch the children play
sorenbarrett said:
There is nothing like the innocence of a child or their energy. Well done Jim
June 2nd, 2026 05:29
sorenbarrett said:
There is nothing like the innocence of a child or their energy. Well done Jim
June 2nd, 2026 05:29
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