Comments received on poems by woundedheart



Excuses Excuses
woundedheart said:

Thanks would have replied earlier but my dog are my pencil lol ๐Ÿ˜‚

December 28th, 2021 17:17

Excuses Excuses
orchidee said:

Oh lol, good write WH.

December 28th, 2021 15:10

Excuses Excuses
Goldfinch60 said:

Good fun write wh, so many excuses were given to try and not go to school back in my school days but the parents new better.

Andy

December 28th, 2021 02:11

Excuses Excuses
Rozina said:

These are great excuses! But have to remember which have been recycled too often. Good one.

December 27th, 2021 23:21

Excuses Excuses
spilleronsheet said:

A very good poetry
Lol
Reminded me of the excuses I made back then
We made excuses to not go to school and today we remember those as the best days of life
Life is really too funny to live

December 27th, 2021 22:33

Shaking my Spear
kitty the naughty poet said:

This is great. Naughty but nice all in one. Great work ๐Ÿ‘

December 27th, 2021 12:12

Silence is Golden
Rozina said:

Yes, beautiful words.

December 26th, 2021 21:25

Silence is Golden
Goldfinch60 said:

Those kisses are so silently meaningful wh.

Andy

December 26th, 2021 16:24

Silence is Golden
orchidee said:

Good write WH.

December 26th, 2021 08:01

Shaking my Spear
Goldfinch60 said:

You obviously need to sing her a love song to get her attention.

https://youtu.be/QxidjMJK9f4

Andy

December 26th, 2021 01:47

Moonlight Dancer
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

Very lovely ! )

December 24th, 2021 01:57

Moonlight Dancer
Goldfinch60 said:

May that dancer be forever with you wh.

Andy

December 24th, 2021 01:56

Moonlight Dancer
Rozina said:

Such a pretty picture. Beautiful words. Thank you.

December 23rd, 2021 22:03

Never More
Garth Rakumakoe said:

A storm coming in a few hard hitting words. The ache soaked nostalgia is so vivid! - Master craftsmanship writer!

December 23rd, 2021 13:55

Never More
LADYHOLMES said:

Your writing is so good wh. Silky and satin-like..

December 23rd, 2021 07:16

Never More
Goldfinch60 said:

Dry emotive words wh, I agree with you.

Andy

December 22nd, 2021 16:23

Never More
orchidee said:

A poignant write WH.

December 22nd, 2021 06:53

Bedroom Games.
Goldfinch60 said:

Very fine sensual write wh now waiting for the next part.

Andy

December 22nd, 2021 01:55

Bedroom Games.
kitty the naughty poet said:

this is great i love a good naughty poem

December 21st, 2021 11:32

Bedroom Games.
dusk arising said:

Look I\'m already knackered from Katie earlier.... she WILL insist on tieing me up for round two, but i\'m worn out by round eight.....

December 21st, 2021 06:48

Bedtime Ballet
orchidee said:

Glad some one(s) having fun there! Poor old Orchi don\'t get much salacious stuff personally! heehee. (me being daft).

December 20th, 2021 09:44

Bedtime Ballet
kitty the naughty poet said:

Love this full of lust and deviant desire

December 20th, 2021 08:40

Where is my Teddy Bear
L. B. Mek said:

what a sweet lullaby
for adults, nursing
their sips of regret wine..
or children
smiling away
their confusion\'s, in life..
a great shorty,
thanks for sharing

December 17th, 2021 03:53

Where is my Teddy Bear
orchidee said:

I saw a huge cute teddy for ยฃ40.
Not exactly the Pound Shop, but good price!

December 17th, 2021 03:09

Where is my Teddy Bear
Rozina said:

Lovely. I hope you find your teddy bear soon. Christmas present maybe?!

December 16th, 2021 18:32

Where is my Teddy Bear
Coyote said:

A very touching write that tugs at the heartstrings. Very nicely done๐Ÿ™‚

December 16th, 2021 16:54

Self induced Insomnia
spilleronsheet said:

Living on hooks
Whether to leap
Or to be safe
Whether to let go or keep hidden inside
Your poetry made me realise that I have been living on tenterhooks of time
The title so apt, keeps me in resonance
In urge of holding my dreams I let insomnia be a part of me
Only to realise life and dream both are fading

December 16th, 2021 15:19

Where is my Teddy Bear
spilleronsheet said:

Teddy my dearest who accompanied me
With warmth and hugs
Often in cold winters
In my nightmares
Those were the days
Years passed by
I lost in my chaotic life
Today tumbling upon your write
I am left wondering upon your insight
My little teddy where did I loose you behind ?
Very intriguing poetry dear Woundedheart
It made me nostalgic to my Mr Teddy, my best friend whom I donโ€™t know where I kept

December 16th, 2021 15:16

Where is my Teddy Bear
woundedheart said:

Well the thought of Irish music alcohol and Xmas made my mind run to prezzie giving and teddy bears are always sought after at Xmas lol ๐ŸŽ…

December 16th, 2021 14:56

Self induced Insomnia
L. B. Mek said:

a wonderful write
captures that surreal feel
upon realising,
something yearned for, so desperately
is now within reach,
succinctly accessible wording makes it all, even more relatable..
(a great read, thanks for sharing)


December 16th, 2021 04:33

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