Comments received on poems by G REMADEVI



Music Dreams
L. B. Mek said:

\'Music vibrates in the strings of heart\'
(I feel like you are good at shuffling cards)
thanks for sharing, a wonderful read

July 3rd, 2023 04:27

Rain rhythms
L. B. Mek said:

(a great write!
thanks for sharing, dear poet)
I love driving, playing, walking
and most especially, sleeping
in the rain
\'droplets of respite
drumming windows, to serenade
invite, that melancholic
sweet embrace of our worries
allowing us, moody
moments of serenity\'s, reprieve\'

May 1st, 2023 03:37

Rain rhythms
Audrey A. said:

I\'ve always loved storms until I didn\'t, then I remembered what I knew and am back on track.

April 28th, 2023 07:49

Rain rhythms
Bobby O said:

Really nice. Too many great aspects to list. It felt real and also like an analogous metaphor. So cool
We get to choose. “ instead of sighs “
“Sway to sleep in silence”
Very rich Thank you.

April 28th, 2023 07:31

Rain rhythms
2781 said:

I used to dread rain storms but now appreciate the cleansing and life giving effects they bring. Stay dry!

April 28th, 2023 07:17

Morning tunes
G REMADEVI said:

Thank you so much dear poet

March 15th, 2023 03:12

Morning tunes
L. B. Mek said:

\'Wander in cosmos as a wave of music\'
wonderful wording
indeed, there is a peaceful stillness
complimented
by a sense of anticipatory vivacity
for the day ahead of us
only early morning\'s scenery, can deliver..
(thanks for sharing)

February 27th, 2023 03:30

Morning tunes
Addy said:

Beautiful writing!


February 24th, 2023 06:55

Morning tunes
Mello said:

the bliss of life they say.

February 24th, 2023 06:46

Words spoken
L. B. Mek said:

\'Poesy, teaches us
words have Power\'
thanks for sharing

February 10th, 2023 06:40

Words spoken
Mello said:

Well written

February 10th, 2023 04:02

When this year ends
amepiesces said:

wishing you health and prosperity for the next year.and also well written..

December 25th, 2022 10:40

Experiments
L. B. Mek said:

\'Experiments are experiences too\'
wise words, thanks for sharing
(I fear we\'ve all devolved
from arguing over mind or matter
to being subjugated
by theoretically, assumptive
\'low fruit\' algorithms
based on, \'halo effect\' \'stereotypes\'
of trending \'progressively
consumer driven psychology\'s, warped
short term memories
forget heeding from history\'s lessons
we\'ll be lucky to remember, life\'s
footnotes
between our blink-n-miss reality
live streams;
what purpose awareness, when
even our subconscious
downloads its prompt, before forming
thought...!)

December 19th, 2022 07:47

Tides
Mara \"Marzipan\" said:

Oh, I love this. Awesome job.

December 13th, 2022 09:27

Once again
L. B. Mek said:

(Expressing gratitude in that now, before
it all becomes belatedly late
is a clear symbol of wisdom
oft
we wait, to ink transparent
our appreciation and love
for those who guide our personal growth in life)
such a relatable write, thanks for sharing

October 28th, 2022 06:31

Leaves remind the pulses...
MoMurray said:

loved: touched all leaves without sound

October 18th, 2022 15:21

Tears
L. B. Mek said:

an interesting read
thanks for sharing

August 11th, 2022 03:47

The Flashes
L. B. Mek said:

\'Though of no use, disenchanting
Thoughts and wishes changing
Next moment, but past same intact
Leaving memories for the present\'..
the day I can fully
unravel and heed these words
the day, I begin to treasure
this gifted life, a little more..
thanks for sharing
(the present, represents
those memories
we chose to curate
into existence)

July 7th, 2022 02:41

Everyday
Dahlia said:

excellent, indeed very true to how aware of time we are!
Happy Sunday,
Dahlia

March 27th, 2022 12:22

The Time between
Rocky Lagou said:

Preach! This was such a message delivered so grandly! I love the way you expressed this! Bravo! 💖👍

February 16th, 2022 11:16

Recreations
Paul Bell said:

This feels like a man at peace with the world, pipe lit, nature on show.

December 31st, 2021 04:54

December thoughts
spilleronsheet said:

A great one dear poet
You marked the passing time
The time which ran sooner than expected
Now leaving memories beside
If those days were good
Hope the future days be super good
Have a great weekend dear poet

December 18th, 2021 12:08

The Resonance
L. B. Mek said:

indeed nature is full of musical opportunities
for those who take a second, to notice
a wonderfully upbeat read, thanks for sharing

December 14th, 2021 05:19

Warm Smile
L. B. Mek said:

really well written,
thanks for sharing

December 10th, 2021 06:22

Warm Smile
TaraSeri_9of9 said:

Wonderful

December 10th, 2021 05:38