Comments received on poems by GiftedT17
Questions
peto said:
Such a sad write
And here was I thinking you were gifted
Loved the rhyme though
Keep writing it out
March 7th, 2024 08:43
peto said:
Such a sad write
And here was I thinking you were gifted
Loved the rhyme though
Keep writing it out
March 7th, 2024 08:43
Whispering Thoughts
peto said:
Really enjoy the subtlety of your rhyme
I sometimes have to bite my tongue
But keep your pen wet
Great content
March 5th, 2024 12:34
peto said:
Really enjoy the subtlety of your rhyme
I sometimes have to bite my tongue
But keep your pen wet
Great content
March 5th, 2024 12:34
Pieces Of Me
peto said:
Got a more you give the more you get vibe
You did what you set out to do
Very inspiring
Loving your positivity
March 2nd, 2024 20:06
peto said:
Got a more you give the more you get vibe
You did what you set out to do
Very inspiring
Loving your positivity
March 2nd, 2024 20:06
Pieces Of Me
NinjaGirl said:
This is very beautiful I love reading the pieces of yourself
March 2nd, 2024 16:52
NinjaGirl said:
This is very beautiful I love reading the pieces of yourself
March 2nd, 2024 16:52
Powerless
Cloie said:
Your words offer solace to others facing similar battles. Keep writing, keep expressing, and hold onto hope.
March 2nd, 2024 10:47
Cloie said:
Your words offer solace to others facing similar battles. Keep writing, keep expressing, and hold onto hope.
March 2nd, 2024 10:47
Powerless
peto said:
Hold on to your talent for writing
\"To survive my lie is a thought provoking line
Glad to discover your writing
Emotional and real
March 2nd, 2024 08:43
peto said:
Hold on to your talent for writing
\"To survive my lie is a thought provoking line
Glad to discover your writing
Emotional and real
March 2nd, 2024 08:43
The Simple Life
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
How true it is; that once you pull back, you see who is for you and who is against you
November 4th, 2023 05:41
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
How true it is; that once you pull back, you see who is for you and who is against you
November 4th, 2023 05:41
Daddy\'s Little Girl
Garth Rakumakoe said:
Endearing and honest... I feel the humbling spirit flowing through this write.
November 4th, 2023 00:22
Garth Rakumakoe said:
Endearing and honest... I feel the humbling spirit flowing through this write.
November 4th, 2023 00:22
Daddy\'s Little Girl
David Wakeling said:
This was okay.Memories.However it is a bit confusing.I\'m not sure what it means??
July 27th, 2023 17:13
David Wakeling said:
This was okay.Memories.However it is a bit confusing.I\'m not sure what it means??
July 27th, 2023 17:13
Just Know
evenwheniLie said:
A nice poem written by a quiet and delicate soul; you should know you have feelings, but you are not your feelings, you can have feelings about your feelings therefore you are not your feelings, like we have thoughts, but yet and still; we can have thoughts about our thoughts, again because we are not our thoughts. Find yourself in the mist of it all, and know no unworthy individual deserve your attention.
June 16th, 2022 16:40
evenwheniLie said:
A nice poem written by a quiet and delicate soul; you should know you have feelings, but you are not your feelings, you can have feelings about your feelings therefore you are not your feelings, like we have thoughts, but yet and still; we can have thoughts about our thoughts, again because we are not our thoughts. Find yourself in the mist of it all, and know no unworthy individual deserve your attention.
June 16th, 2022 16:40
The Person I Created
L. B. Mek said:
more power to you, sister!
what encouraging words
to share with our broken world
more young minds
need access to such empowering words
to let them know, that within them
exists enough potential
to create a person
full of all the things they value
and devoid of those things
they want, nothing to do with..
a beautiful read
of such a life-affirming, message
Brilliant!
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
May 12th, 2022 03:16
L. B. Mek said:
more power to you, sister!
what encouraging words
to share with our broken world
more young minds
need access to such empowering words
to let them know, that within them
exists enough potential
to create a person
full of all the things they value
and devoid of those things
they want, nothing to do with..
a beautiful read
of such a life-affirming, message
Brilliant!
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
May 12th, 2022 03:16
The Person I Created
voices of ghosts said:
Nicely crafted and most importantly how your spirit came through during difficult times! 👌🙏
May 11th, 2022 23:08
voices of ghosts said:
Nicely crafted and most importantly how your spirit came through during difficult times! 👌🙏
May 11th, 2022 23:08
A Strange Feeling
Crowns4Christ said:
I\'m so sorry that you\'re going through this,it is heartbreaking when who are supposed to be family are anything but, I am truly sorry sister, take care of yourself and your grandma, God loves you and He hurts when you hurt,but His will,will be done, you seem like such a strong woman, because I am,and we seem alot alike,if you ever want to talk to somebody,you can talk to me
April 19th, 2022 21:09
Crowns4Christ said:
I\'m so sorry that you\'re going through this,it is heartbreaking when who are supposed to be family are anything but, I am truly sorry sister, take care of yourself and your grandma, God loves you and He hurts when you hurt,but His will,will be done, you seem like such a strong woman, because I am,and we seem alot alike,if you ever want to talk to somebody,you can talk to me
April 19th, 2022 21:09
Still waiting
Crowns4Christ said:
Sad yet sweet,if God said it, don\'t give up on Him, I heard the same thing about Dion, foreverjesus6, and the Lord is never wrong
April 2nd, 2022 21:05
Crowns4Christ said:
Sad yet sweet,if God said it, don\'t give up on Him, I heard the same thing about Dion, foreverjesus6, and the Lord is never wrong
April 2nd, 2022 21:05
God Has Called Upon You
Cedrick said:
wow very wonderful poem written with easy words and sentence but has deeper meanings, I feel like paragraph 5 line 9 and 10 was written for me. God sees you sister, have a blessed day.
March 31st, 2022 14:36
Cedrick said:
wow very wonderful poem written with easy words and sentence but has deeper meanings, I feel like paragraph 5 line 9 and 10 was written for me. God sees you sister, have a blessed day.
March 31st, 2022 14:36
God Has Called Upon You
Crowns4Christ said:
May he trust in God and overcome the desires of Man and live for God
March 30th, 2022 19:18
Crowns4Christ said:
May he trust in God and overcome the desires of Man and live for God
March 30th, 2022 19:18
God Has Called Upon You
Dahlia said:
very beautiful & empowering
enjoyed through & through
Dahlia
March 30th, 2022 16:10
Dahlia said:
very beautiful & empowering
enjoyed through & through
Dahlia
March 30th, 2022 16:10
Make Me Over
Crowns4Christ said:
Very good heartfelt prayer my dear friend, He will answer everything that is truly heartfelt like this prayer, I can imagine tears running out of those beautiful eyes and soul
March 28th, 2022 16:27
Crowns4Christ said:
Very good heartfelt prayer my dear friend, He will answer everything that is truly heartfelt like this prayer, I can imagine tears running out of those beautiful eyes and soul
March 28th, 2022 16:27
Make Me Over
L. B. Mek said:
even devoid of any theological alignment
I can\'t help but relate
to your questing words, yearning
to pull on those threads of belief
you utilize
to anchor, your life\'s worth
in these chaotic world
with its endless
seemingly meaningless, happenstance
and coin flipped chance of fate
as that only recognisable, influence
on our lives
indeed, we all need to hope
there\'s something more
and
if you\'ve found, your path
then good on you
just remember, it\'s Your path
and no one else\'s
Your deity, to engage with as you wish...
I wish you, all the best! dear poet
March 28th, 2022 05:33
L. B. Mek said:
even devoid of any theological alignment
I can\'t help but relate
to your questing words, yearning
to pull on those threads of belief
you utilize
to anchor, your life\'s worth
in these chaotic world
with its endless
seemingly meaningless, happenstance
and coin flipped chance of fate
as that only recognisable, influence
on our lives
indeed, we all need to hope
there\'s something more
and
if you\'ve found, your path
then good on you
just remember, it\'s Your path
and no one else\'s
Your deity, to engage with as you wish...
I wish you, all the best! dear poet
March 28th, 2022 05:33
The Mind Feels
Crowns4Christ said:
I can feel the peace that you portray here,very nice
March 19th, 2022 13:35
Crowns4Christ said:
I can feel the peace that you portray here,very nice
March 19th, 2022 13:35
Help Me
Crowns4Christ said:
I\'m so sorry you feel this way, I do to nobody really understands unless they feel it to,might say they do,but unless they experience the pain, anxiety depression,not to mention the anguish because nobody believes, think it\'s fake,
I completely understand,keep your faith
March 9th, 2022 19:59
Crowns4Christ said:
I\'m so sorry you feel this way, I do to nobody really understands unless they feel it to,might say they do,but unless they experience the pain, anxiety depression,not to mention the anguish because nobody believes, think it\'s fake,
I completely understand,keep your faith
March 9th, 2022 19:59
Help Me
sally said:
nice wroten poem i like it, i beleive you are strong enough to go trough this,dont\' give up : )
March 9th, 2022 06:52
sally said:
nice wroten poem i like it, i beleive you are strong enough to go trough this,dont\' give up : )
March 9th, 2022 06:52
Help Me
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
I’m sorry you feel this way .. it’s not nice to be hurting whilst feeling very alone at the same time
March 9th, 2022 04:55
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
I’m sorry you feel this way .. it’s not nice to be hurting whilst feeling very alone at the same time
March 9th, 2022 04:55
The Results
L. B. Mek said:
stay strong, dear Poet
I\'m sorry for your suffering
and I hope your faith, will guide you
and I trust, the strength
you showcase
in your writing
will allow you to withstand
whatever results/news you receive
and please, remember
whatever your faith or belief system
you don\'t need any conduit\'s
to have your prayers and wishes heard
believe in yourself, at all times
listen to your heart
before seeking anyone\'s interpretive words
of what your faith, should be
for
you, yourself
can interpret the words of your chosen deity
better than any, and the answers you discover
for yourself
will provide you a more lasting, pool of solace
to call upon in your time\'s of need...
I wish you the very best!
March 7th, 2022 05:39
L. B. Mek said:
stay strong, dear Poet
I\'m sorry for your suffering
and I hope your faith, will guide you
and I trust, the strength
you showcase
in your writing
will allow you to withstand
whatever results/news you receive
and please, remember
whatever your faith or belief system
you don\'t need any conduit\'s
to have your prayers and wishes heard
believe in yourself, at all times
listen to your heart
before seeking anyone\'s interpretive words
of what your faith, should be
for
you, yourself
can interpret the words of your chosen deity
better than any, and the answers you discover
for yourself
will provide you a more lasting, pool of solace
to call upon in your time\'s of need...
I wish you the very best!
March 7th, 2022 05:39
The Results
Crowns4Christ said:
Amen sister, I will pray for you, I too struggle with multiple health problems,we need to stay strong and trust in God
March 6th, 2022 23:17
Crowns4Christ said:
Amen sister, I will pray for you, I too struggle with multiple health problems,we need to stay strong and trust in God
March 6th, 2022 23:17
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