The Path I Chose
Crowns4Christ said:

This is great, I can really relate to this, God has completely changed my life,he led me to my husband, foreverjesus6. And gave me great friends like you and bright angel

March 4th, 2022 21:55

Memories
L. B. Mek said:

forgive my rude rant
in your wonderfully nostalgic Poetry\'s comments, dear Poet
this is a topic that triggers me, see
I find it absurd
one child can come into the world
with silver spoons, to be spoonfed, from
while other\'s, have wooden spoons
shoved down their throat
for daring to ask for a little food, at night....
(just goes to show
how diversely opposed
that biological lottery, can be
I was blessed and lucky, like you
but I need not read, books
like \'A child called it\'
for me to understand, for some
those very scenes you depict
were warped into horror realities
of abuse and neglect..
that\'s why, family trees are crumbling
and that sense of unity with kin is fading
it\'s because other adults and elders
chose to abuse their power
subjected their own blood relatives
to the most heinous of cruel crimes...
so yes, lets indeed
Praise those good ones, that raised us right
but still remember
the millions, who ruined the lives of so many
before it even began...!)

March 1st, 2022 04:39

The Love We Once Had
MDStone said:

Oh the pain to be with someone who is not the same someone. Well Done! Keep on writing.

February 17th, 2022 07:05

First Love
GiftedT17 said:

I appreciate that.We met back in 1999 but were able to remain the best of friends til he passed in 2017 while i was giving birth he died at his bed side same day...Memories for a lifetime...

February 16th, 2022 21:36

First Love
Crowns4Christ said:

This is so sweet,and true for my husband and me also.
Very beautiful,it emits you love

February 15th, 2022 19:41

Anxiety and depression
Rozina said:

I\'m sorry you are going through this. You are your own person. You will survive. All the very best to you.

February 3rd, 2022 00:29

Would You?
sadietessa said:

i really admire this one, you really brought zeal and passion to choosing gods path for our lifes.

January 31st, 2022 01:48

I Am Me
Paul Bell said:

Ying and yang, they can\'t live together, but can still have a mutual respect for each other. Nothing wrong with being original, keeps you focussed.

January 29th, 2022 07:11

Hope and Dreams
L. B. Mek said:

even devoid of any theological alignment
I am so happy for you! what a beautiful story to share
may your faith, continue to give you strength
and may your child, be forever blessed!

January 27th, 2022 04:50

In Your Shoes
L. B. Mek said:

a wonderful dedication,
thanks for sharing

January 25th, 2022 06:20

I Am Butterfly
orchidee said:

Good write G.

January 23rd, 2022 03:29

The Ocean
Daydream Believer said:

Your poem washed over me with its stunning words. Transporting me to the sea, where its wonders could be heard 🌷

January 22nd, 2022 04:44

The Ocean
jarcher54 said:

Your poem moves from little ripples to a pulsing surf. Your long couplets come rolling in one after the other like long breaking waves... just as one settles into silence the next one comes in with its slowly building power and enchanting spell. Brava!

January 22nd, 2022 01:18

While Your Sleeping
L. B. Mek said:

well, this is definitely one sure-fire way
to guarantee
someone\'s gonna have sweet dreams...
a lovely read and dedication
thanks for sharing

January 21st, 2022 06:19

Patiently Waiting
Garth Rakumakoe said:

I feel the loneliness, pain and longing in the words. Thank you for sharing.

January 6th, 2022 05:20