Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Amare
Doggerel Dave said:
Good for you, Soren. Most telling was your comment above ‘what we call love …. may be something else.’ And it certainly is not mostly what we find hanging about here.
I have my own view of ‘love’ here at MPS:
https://mypoeticside.com/show-poem-129135
November 11th, 2022 21:10
Doggerel Dave said:
Good for you, Soren. Most telling was your comment above ‘what we call love …. may be something else.’ And it certainly is not mostly what we find hanging about here.
I have my own view of ‘love’ here at MPS:
https://mypoeticside.com/show-poem-129135
November 11th, 2022 21:10
Amare
L. B. Mek said:
(your words spoke to me dear Poet
and I couldn\'t help scribbling a little poetic reply of my own, thank you!)
I truly believe that which is ethereal
can never be lost, merely surrendered or forgotten
thus, we may traverse in and out of love
but that\'s merely a state or passage
in time
once we choose to love
that love, however bitter its yield
is a love that stays by our side
see, people may come n go
but the love we cultivate while at each other\'s side
goes nowhere, it lingers
in each remembered smile or tear...
love prevails!
that\'s why it\'s worth investing in
November 11th, 2022 07:55
L. B. Mek said:
(your words spoke to me dear Poet
and I couldn\'t help scribbling a little poetic reply of my own, thank you!)
I truly believe that which is ethereal
can never be lost, merely surrendered or forgotten
thus, we may traverse in and out of love
but that\'s merely a state or passage
in time
once we choose to love
that love, however bitter its yield
is a love that stays by our side
see, people may come n go
but the love we cultivate while at each other\'s side
goes nowhere, it lingers
in each remembered smile or tear...
love prevails!
that\'s why it\'s worth investing in
November 11th, 2022 07:55
Amare
arqios said:
Looking out for love in whatever manner it may choose to manifest itself, that appears to be a life quest for many.
November 11th, 2022 07:21
arqios said:
Looking out for love in whatever manner it may choose to manifest itself, that appears to be a life quest for many.
November 11th, 2022 07:21
Truth
Goldfinch60 said:
Such true words soren, I have spent hours in front of some artworks just becoming part of them.
Andy
November 10th, 2022 02:50
Goldfinch60 said:
Such true words soren, I have spent hours in front of some artworks just becoming part of them.
Andy
November 10th, 2022 02:50
Truth
Bella Shepard said:
You have expressed so beautifully, that truth is in the eye of the beholder. The last two lines are such a wonderful summation. You have weaved this poem so well, and the truth is that it\'s a definite fav.
November 9th, 2022 16:00
Bella Shepard said:
You have expressed so beautifully, that truth is in the eye of the beholder. The last two lines are such a wonderful summation. You have weaved this poem so well, and the truth is that it\'s a definite fav.
November 9th, 2022 16:00
Truth
arqios said:
What is true and being truthful is quite nuanced more so when applied to human interaction and is something assailed or corrupted when injustice and unrighteousness is committed.
November 9th, 2022 09:05
arqios said:
What is true and being truthful is quite nuanced more so when applied to human interaction and is something assailed or corrupted when injustice and unrighteousness is committed.
November 9th, 2022 09:05
Truth
sorenbarrett said:
Thank you dusk so good to hear from you your comments are always so welcome
November 9th, 2022 08:36
sorenbarrett said:
Thank you dusk so good to hear from you your comments are always so welcome
November 9th, 2022 08:36
Truth
dusk arising said:
to thine own self be true before all others.
truth is a much undervalued commodity.
November 9th, 2022 08:27
dusk arising said:
to thine own self be true before all others.
truth is a much undervalued commodity.
November 9th, 2022 08:27
Eridu
Bella Shepard said:
Thank you my friend for this piece of history, I\'ve learned something new which I love to do. Our world is built upon the civilizations that came before us, and it is fitting that we honor them. You have done this beautifully and I have truly enjoyed this wonderful lesson!
November 7th, 2022 14:06
Bella Shepard said:
Thank you my friend for this piece of history, I\'ve learned something new which I love to do. Our world is built upon the civilizations that came before us, and it is fitting that we honor them. You have done this beautifully and I have truly enjoyed this wonderful lesson!
November 7th, 2022 14:06
Eridu
arqios said:
This is the new frontier, the beginnings of civilisation now erased by centuries of forgetfulness.
November 7th, 2022 09:24
arqios said:
This is the new frontier, the beginnings of civilisation now erased by centuries of forgetfulness.
November 7th, 2022 09:24
Go!
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Gosh i wanted to edit typos then it got deleted so i retype:
I said Yeah taking it out and ranting in poetry is better than taking it out live on people so this was an enjoyable sarcastic snubbing and sort of venting. Thumbs up.!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too.
November 6th, 2022 14:23
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Gosh i wanted to edit typos then it got deleted so i retype:
I said Yeah taking it out and ranting in poetry is better than taking it out live on people so this was an enjoyable sarcastic snubbing and sort of venting. Thumbs up.!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too.
November 6th, 2022 14:23
Go!
arqios said:
What has occurred Soren? Hope all is well else it’s going, going, gone.
November 6th, 2022 06:56
arqios said:
What has occurred Soren? Hope all is well else it’s going, going, gone.
November 6th, 2022 06:56
Go!
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'m off; I\'m a sensitive soul and can take a hint, however subtle....
November 6th, 2022 06:17
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'m off; I\'m a sensitive soul and can take a hint, however subtle....
November 6th, 2022 06:17
Go!
orchidee said:
You mean me?!
What have I done to upset you? Why all this aggro? Do I have to go? Can I stay?! heehee.
November 6th, 2022 03:11
orchidee said:
You mean me?!
What have I done to upset you? Why all this aggro? Do I have to go? Can I stay?! heehee.
November 6th, 2022 03:11
English
Doggerel Dave said:
Cannot be more glad, given its almost universal use everywhere, that English is my native tongue. My heart goes out to all for whom it is a second language.
Despite that, let me tell ya that without spellchecker and the word processer embodied within my PC, I would be a useless illiterate slob.
November 5th, 2022 08:05
Doggerel Dave said:
Cannot be more glad, given its almost universal use everywhere, that English is my native tongue. My heart goes out to all for whom it is a second language.
Despite that, let me tell ya that without spellchecker and the word processer embodied within my PC, I would be a useless illiterate slob.
November 5th, 2022 08:05
Mea Culpa
arqios said:
Perhaps not to the 3rd to the last line but the postponement is real. And the reasons aren\'t always the logical kind. TFS Soren.
November 5th, 2022 00:33
arqios said:
Perhaps not to the 3rd to the last line but the postponement is real. And the reasons aren\'t always the logical kind. TFS Soren.
November 5th, 2022 00:33
Tree
L. B. Mek said:
I have always found trees to be calming
knowing how many, stood and reached their fingers, to feel
that connection
thereby surpassing our finite perspective of life,
and so your image of tree as friend resonates with me..
a wonderful read, thank you
November 4th, 2022 03:50
L. B. Mek said:
I have always found trees to be calming
knowing how many, stood and reached their fingers, to feel
that connection
thereby surpassing our finite perspective of life,
and so your image of tree as friend resonates with me..
a wonderful read, thank you
November 4th, 2022 03:50
Poetic relationship
L. B. Mek said:
indeed, i can so relate
there\'s a hint of the poetic, in most relationships
even those disasters we try to forget..
thanks for sharing dear Poet
November 4th, 2022 03:43
L. B. Mek said:
indeed, i can so relate
there\'s a hint of the poetic, in most relationships
even those disasters we try to forget..
thanks for sharing dear Poet
November 4th, 2022 03:43
Tree
Doggerel Dave said:
You\'ver just about covered it all, Soren. in the urban setting where I live, a combination of local councils, electricity suppliers (overhead power lines)and some residents who seem threatened by anything taller than themselves (trees are triffids or wot?) mean vigilance and the willingness to speak up are always necessary.
November 2nd, 2022 17:34
Doggerel Dave said:
You\'ver just about covered it all, Soren. in the urban setting where I live, a combination of local councils, electricity suppliers (overhead power lines)and some residents who seem threatened by anything taller than themselves (trees are triffids or wot?) mean vigilance and the willingness to speak up are always necessary.
November 2nd, 2022 17:34
Tree
Bella Shepard said:
This one hits me where I live, literally. My home is pretty much surrounded by tall trees, and my morning walk is through tree lined roads. I\'ve hugged a lot of trees on vacation, and go outside to say goodnight before bedtime. So for me, you couldn\'t have chosen a better or more beautiful subject. We see them and we take them for granted. Thank you dear poet for extolling all of their virtues, for without them we would not live. This such a fav!
November 2nd, 2022 12:40
Bella Shepard said:
This one hits me where I live, literally. My home is pretty much surrounded by tall trees, and my morning walk is through tree lined roads. I\'ve hugged a lot of trees on vacation, and go outside to say goodnight before bedtime. So for me, you couldn\'t have chosen a better or more beautiful subject. We see them and we take them for granted. Thank you dear poet for extolling all of their virtues, for without them we would not live. This such a fav!
November 2nd, 2022 12:40
Tree
arqios said:
Nice. My bonsai are long gone, to much a vagabond and the lack of a homebase didn\'t help.
November 2nd, 2022 09:57
arqios said:
Nice. My bonsai are long gone, to much a vagabond and the lack of a homebase didn\'t help.
November 2nd, 2022 09:57
Tree
arqios said:
It doesn\'t bark or claw or cost a fortune at the vet or grocery store, and shall we ever \"never see a poem as lovely as a tree;\" my agreement wholly given my friend to thee.
November 2nd, 2022 07:39
arqios said:
It doesn\'t bark or claw or cost a fortune at the vet or grocery store, and shall we ever \"never see a poem as lovely as a tree;\" my agreement wholly given my friend to thee.
November 2nd, 2022 07:39
Ted, Tell A Vision
Doggerel Dave said:
I now note, having been distracted by Ted K, that I didn\'t give adequate note to your actual post.
As usual I enjoyed your poetic form, though intrigued by the content.
Though by the end you\'ve focused on technology, at the start it would appear that your attention is on the perils of science. Come on Soren, there have to be some benefits...LOL!
November 1st, 2022 17:07
Doggerel Dave said:
I now note, having been distracted by Ted K, that I didn\'t give adequate note to your actual post.
As usual I enjoyed your poetic form, though intrigued by the content.
Though by the end you\'ve focused on technology, at the start it would appear that your attention is on the perils of science. Come on Soren, there have to be some benefits...LOL!
November 1st, 2022 17:07
Ted, Tell A Vision
Doggerel Dave said:
Not sure what to make of this. Actually don\'t recall hearing anything about Ted Kaczynski before. Investigated - sent me down an extensive rabbit hole.... Brother David seems to have remained on the right side...
Thanks Soren.
November 1st, 2022 07:24
Doggerel Dave said:
Not sure what to make of this. Actually don\'t recall hearing anything about Ted Kaczynski before. Investigated - sent me down an extensive rabbit hole.... Brother David seems to have remained on the right side...
Thanks Soren.
November 1st, 2022 07:24
Raindrop
arqios said:
Faint is the memory and familiar the awareness of consciousness and recall. That is given structure in the weaving of and progression of detail and feel throughout the poem. A triumph Soren! Rik.
October 31st, 2022 22:32
arqios said:
Faint is the memory and familiar the awareness of consciousness and recall. That is given structure in the weaving of and progression of detail and feel throughout the poem. A triumph Soren! Rik.
October 31st, 2022 22:32
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