Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Darkness before dawn
Neilton said:
This poem conveys a lot of sadness! I hope everything is okay! But as always it is beautifully written
May 13th, 2026 04:10
Neilton said:
This poem conveys a lot of sadness! I hope everything is okay! But as always it is beautifully written
May 13th, 2026 04:10
Darkness before dawn
orchidee said:
Good write SB. I too was lost, going down a one-way street. heehee.
May 13th, 2026 02:42
orchidee said:
Good write SB. I too was lost, going down a one-way street. heehee.
May 13th, 2026 02:42
Nervous
Dan Williams said:
What an absolutely charming welcome to springtime. Short and suite.
May 13th, 2026 02:17
Dan Williams said:
What an absolutely charming welcome to springtime. Short and suite.
May 13th, 2026 02:17
Darkness before dawn
Goldfinch60 said:
The light will soon be there soren to show you the way.
Andy
May 13th, 2026 01:52
Goldfinch60 said:
The light will soon be there soren to show you the way.
Andy
May 13th, 2026 01:52
Nervous
Kevin Hulme said:
Birth is in so many things on this Planet.
New Buds being just one.
Like it.
May 12th, 2026 18:47
Kevin Hulme said:
Birth is in so many things on this Planet.
New Buds being just one.
Like it.
May 12th, 2026 18:47
Nervous
orchidee said:
Good write SB. Yes, bit crowded in our house. I bring the tree from the garden indoors each night. Well, it\'s a bit chilly for it out there all night. Then I have to re-pant it each morning. Doh! lol.
May 12th, 2026 10:32
orchidee said:
Good write SB. Yes, bit crowded in our house. I bring the tree from the garden indoors each night. Well, it\'s a bit chilly for it out there all night. Then I have to re-pant it each morning. Doh! lol.
May 12th, 2026 10:32
Nervous
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is incredibly moving. The trembling leaf becomes so much more than a leaf here…it feels like mortality itself clinging to the branch a little longer. And that “umbilical stem” image paired with being spurned for new leaves gives the ending such bittersweet inevitability. Quietly devastating work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 12th, 2026 10:14
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is incredibly moving. The trembling leaf becomes so much more than a leaf here…it feels like mortality itself clinging to the branch a little longer. And that “umbilical stem” image paired with being spurned for new leaves gives the ending such bittersweet inevitability. Quietly devastating work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 12th, 2026 10:14
Nervous
Thomas W Case said:
Clinging on by a thread while the sky tries to tear you loose—there’s something raw and honest in that fight to stay.
Even as it’s being pushed out, there’s a quiet dignity in the leaf knowing it’s part of a cycle that doesn’t ask permission.
May 12th, 2026 08:35
Thomas W Case said:
Clinging on by a thread while the sky tries to tear you loose—there’s something raw and honest in that fight to stay.
Even as it’s being pushed out, there’s a quiet dignity in the leaf knowing it’s part of a cycle that doesn’t ask permission.
May 12th, 2026 08:35
Nervous
Saxon Crow said:
It clings with umbilical stem bound to the hem of mother nature\'s womb
What a beautiful verse. Love the poem
May 12th, 2026 08:04
Saxon Crow said:
It clings with umbilical stem bound to the hem of mother nature\'s womb
What a beautiful verse. Love the poem
May 12th, 2026 08:04
Nervous
Waiting for Silence said:
The leaf feels almost human — fearful, aging, yet still deeply connected to life even as change becomes inevitable. Good one
May 12th, 2026 07:34
Waiting for Silence said:
The leaf feels almost human — fearful, aging, yet still deeply connected to life even as change becomes inevitable. Good one
May 12th, 2026 07:34
Nervous
David Wakeling said:
For me this is about Life Death and Renewal. All life is subject to this process.Enjoyable read compadre
May 12th, 2026 06:53
David Wakeling said:
For me this is about Life Death and Renewal. All life is subject to this process.Enjoyable read compadre
May 12th, 2026 06:53
You are everything
Teddy.15 said:
I\'d say, memories is what lives in all these things, beautiful dear sorrenbarret 🌹
May 12th, 2026 03:25
Teddy.15 said:
I\'d say, memories is what lives in all these things, beautiful dear sorrenbarret 🌹
May 12th, 2026 03:25
You are everything
arqios said:
The poem and the reader are both encompassed! Fantastic dear friend 🙏🕊️
May 11th, 2026 20:45
arqios said:
The poem and the reader are both encompassed! Fantastic dear friend 🙏🕊️
May 11th, 2026 20:45
You are everything
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this has such a graceful emotional flow to it. The poem keeps widening outward from physical objects into memory, spirit, absence, and finally mortality itself. By the end, the beloved feels omnipresent…woven into both the beauty and emptiness of the world. “You are in the trees, birds, breeze” is such a strong and immediate opening for that journey. Wonderful piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 11th, 2026 19:36
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this has such a graceful emotional flow to it. The poem keeps widening outward from physical objects into memory, spirit, absence, and finally mortality itself. By the end, the beloved feels omnipresent…woven into both the beauty and emptiness of the world. “You are in the trees, birds, breeze” is such a strong and immediate opening for that journey. Wonderful piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 11th, 2026 19:36
You are everything
Kevin Hulme said:
A nice Poem on how much that Special Someone means to a Person.
Like it.
May 11th, 2026 19:08
Kevin Hulme said:
A nice Poem on how much that Special Someone means to a Person.
Like it.
May 11th, 2026 19:08
You are everything
orchidee said:
Good write SB. This could be about a spirit - our own spirit - or the Holy Spirit, or all of these, I would say.
May 11th, 2026 11:12
orchidee said:
Good write SB. This could be about a spirit - our own spirit - or the Holy Spirit, or all of these, I would say.
May 11th, 2026 11:12
You are everything
Paul Bell said:
Feels like a special woman, one who left her mark and her presence.
Quite a reflective poem, the memories linger.
May 11th, 2026 09:18
Paul Bell said:
Feels like a special woman, one who left her mark and her presence.
Quite a reflective poem, the memories linger.
May 11th, 2026 09:18
You are everything
David Wakeling said:
This is a wonderful tribute and personification of someone well admired.Forf mr it represents the Holy spirit but it could be different things for different readers
May 11th, 2026 06:53
David Wakeling said:
This is a wonderful tribute and personification of someone well admired.Forf mr it represents the Holy spirit but it could be different things for different readers
May 11th, 2026 06:53
You are everything
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
a lovely piece, much enjoyed
May 11th, 2026 05:10
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
a lovely piece, much enjoyed
May 11th, 2026 05:10
Lunacy in a bottle
Goldfinch60 said:
There is no Rioja in it soren so I will not be drinking it. LOL
Andy
May 11th, 2026 01:13
Goldfinch60 said:
There is no Rioja in it soren so I will not be drinking it. LOL
Andy
May 11th, 2026 01:13
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