Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
The collector
Cini Dasan said:
All of us have that box of worthless things, worthless relationships but we still hold on to them.. Sometimes it gives us hurt but sometimes it does love us a little.
August 2nd, 2026 08:46
Cini Dasan said:
All of us have that box of worthless things, worthless relationships but we still hold on to them.. Sometimes it gives us hurt but sometimes it does love us a little.
August 2nd, 2026 08:46
Memories
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
a deep and thoughtful piece my friend and a fav
August 2nd, 2026 07:26
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
a deep and thoughtful piece my friend and a fav
August 2nd, 2026 07:26
Memories
Thomas W Case said:
This poem feels raw and unflinching, tracing the arc from tenderness and creation into something more strained and disillusioned. The contrast between nurturing imagery and the harder emotional turn at the end gives it a powerful, almost unsettling resonance.
August 2nd, 2026 07:19
Thomas W Case said:
This poem feels raw and unflinching, tracing the arc from tenderness and creation into something more strained and disillusioned. The contrast between nurturing imagery and the harder emotional turn at the end gives it a powerful, almost unsettling resonance.
August 2nd, 2026 07:19
Memories
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a devastating poem, Soren. That sharp reversal from complete devotion to cold entitlement hits terribly hard...especially because I have seen families arrive at precisely this kind of estrangement. Brilliantly constructed, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 2nd, 2026 07:00
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a devastating poem, Soren. That sharp reversal from complete devotion to cold entitlement hits terribly hard...especially because I have seen families arrive at precisely this kind of estrangement. Brilliantly constructed, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 2nd, 2026 07:00
Memories
soheil khodaparasti said:
A celebration of motherhood while reflecting on the sacrifices of parenthood and the pain of love that may end in distance or rejection.
August 2nd, 2026 05:36
soheil khodaparasti said:
A celebration of motherhood while reflecting on the sacrifices of parenthood and the pain of love that may end in distance or rejection.
August 2nd, 2026 05:36
Memories
Salvia.S said:
The way you captured love, time, and change in so few lines is incredible. Beautifully written!
August 2nd, 2026 05:06
Salvia.S said:
The way you captured love, time, and change in so few lines is incredible. Beautifully written!
August 2nd, 2026 05:06
Weaving
Syd said:
Hi Sorenbarret, this is a very clever piece. It reminds me of a work place slogan (I mean this a compliment really, even though I detest work place slogans. I hope you get what I mean) \"Don\'t let your yesterday ruin today!\"
Excellent writing as always 👏
- Syd 🍄
August 2nd, 2026 02:12
Syd said:
Hi Sorenbarret, this is a very clever piece. It reminds me of a work place slogan (I mean this a compliment really, even though I detest work place slogans. I hope you get what I mean) \"Don\'t let your yesterday ruin today!\"
Excellent writing as always 👏
- Syd 🍄
August 2nd, 2026 02:12
The walk
FrasMac said:
Now that paints a picture very eloquently. Love the descriptions you\'ve chosen so much that I want to be there!
August 2nd, 2026 01:47
FrasMac said:
Now that paints a picture very eloquently. Love the descriptions you\'ve chosen so much that I want to be there!
August 2nd, 2026 01:47
Weaving
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words soren, we all sew a new day each day.
Andy
August 2nd, 2026 01:09
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words soren, we all sew a new day each day.
Andy
August 2nd, 2026 01:09
Weaving
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, what a beautifully woven piece. The garment becomes more than clothing…it becomes memory itself, stitched together from joy, loss, and everything in between. Those hidden knots and the lingering itch make the metaphor feel especially human. Excellent write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 1st, 2026 20:38
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, what a beautifully woven piece. The garment becomes more than clothing…it becomes memory itself, stitched together from joy, loss, and everything in between. Those hidden knots and the lingering itch make the metaphor feel especially human. Excellent write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 1st, 2026 20:38
Weaving
Kevin Hulme said:
I suppose we are all the Sum of our Past .
It makes us the Person we are today.
A good Discriptive Write.
August 1st, 2026 19:37
Kevin Hulme said:
I suppose we are all the Sum of our Past .
It makes us the Person we are today.
A good Discriptive Write.
August 1st, 2026 19:37
Busted
Poetic Dan said:
Is that about me? You? Or some random soul it doesn\'t even matter each line was gold. Thank you with all of my heart and soul! Keep up the write and mind as you go!
August 1st, 2026 07:34
Poetic Dan said:
Is that about me? You? Or some random soul it doesn\'t even matter each line was gold. Thank you with all of my heart and soul! Keep up the write and mind as you go!
August 1st, 2026 07:34
Weaving
Poetic Dan said:
Wow.. I\'ve read it twice and now going for a 3rd time to see where it takes me but what a ride! As the kids play in the park your words are truly helping the beat of my heart!
August 1st, 2026 04:42
Poetic Dan said:
Wow.. I\'ve read it twice and now going for a 3rd time to see where it takes me but what a ride! As the kids play in the park your words are truly helping the beat of my heart!
August 1st, 2026 04:42
Weaving
Paul Bell said:
Something lost, but found years later stirring memories, good or bad.
I suppose we really are what we collect in our younger years.
Quite thought provoking this write, takes you to the cellar and the attic.
August 1st, 2026 04:42
Paul Bell said:
Something lost, but found years later stirring memories, good or bad.
I suppose we really are what we collect in our younger years.
Quite thought provoking this write, takes you to the cellar and the attic.
August 1st, 2026 04:42
Isis
Durdica Porobija said:
A nocturne filled with light and love instead of darkness-hate. Very striking images. It depends a lot on the eye that observes the universe.
August 1st, 2026 03:31
Durdica Porobija said:
A nocturne filled with light and love instead of darkness-hate. Very striking images. It depends a lot on the eye that observes the universe.
August 1st, 2026 03:31
Weaving
Lorenz said:
A landscape of memory that wanders through a fragmented color palette...
August 1st, 2026 03:25
Lorenz said:
A landscape of memory that wanders through a fragmented color palette...
August 1st, 2026 03:25
Weaving
soheil khodaparasti said:
A beautiful and thought-provoking poem. The weaving metaphor vividly captures how our past becomes part of who we are today. I was especially struck by the image of the hidden knots and the \"itch of memory\'s wool,\" a powerful reminder that unresolved experiences continue to shape us in quiet, often unseen ways. The closing line leaves a lasting impression, suggesting that we all wear a garment woven from the fragments of our past, whether we realize it or not.
August 1st, 2026 03:02
soheil khodaparasti said:
A beautiful and thought-provoking poem. The weaving metaphor vividly captures how our past becomes part of who we are today. I was especially struck by the image of the hidden knots and the \"itch of memory\'s wool,\" a powerful reminder that unresolved experiences continue to shape us in quiet, often unseen ways. The closing line leaves a lasting impression, suggesting that we all wear a garment woven from the fragments of our past, whether we realize it or not.
August 1st, 2026 03:02
Weaving
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Good write my friend, I have an allergy to wool almost made me scratch
August 1st, 2026 02:47
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Good write my friend, I have an allergy to wool almost made me scratch
August 1st, 2026 02:47
Reminiscing
cellinic said:
A good reflection, deep and overwhelming, a fave, my friend
July 31st, 2026 17:54
cellinic said:
A good reflection, deep and overwhelming, a fave, my friend
July 31st, 2026 17:54
Reminiscing
peto said:
Excellent soren
Took me back to when we had a 9 planet solar system
And 5 continents
July 31st, 2026 11:41
peto said:
Excellent soren
Took me back to when we had a 9 planet solar system
And 5 continents
July 31st, 2026 11:41
Reminiscing
Lorenz said:
I\'ve heard about a country where the supreme leader\'s face will appear on passeports and banknotes !
the good old days aren\'t over yet !
July 31st, 2026 10:48
Lorenz said:
I\'ve heard about a country where the supreme leader\'s face will appear on passeports and banknotes !
the good old days aren\'t over yet !
July 31st, 2026 10:48
Reminiscing
orchidee said:
Good write SB. I\'m considering a poem with that anthem tune - rather long lines though.
July 31st, 2026 10:04
orchidee said:
Good write SB. I\'m considering a poem with that anthem tune - rather long lines though.
July 31st, 2026 10:04
Where
gray0328 said:
waiting for someone who promised to return—each small sound makes you think it’s them, but over time even your ability to hope starts to wear out. Eventually, you stop waiting and begin to clear space for something else, even if that act feels heavy. Well Done Soren
July 31st, 2026 09:39
gray0328 said:
waiting for someone who promised to return—each small sound makes you think it’s them, but over time even your ability to hope starts to wear out. Eventually, you stop waiting and begin to clear space for something else, even if that act feels heavy. Well Done Soren
July 31st, 2026 09:39
Reminiscing
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is a wonderfully nostalgic piece, Soren. The steady accumulation of everyday memories allows an entire vanished way of life to emerge through ordinary details. It is remarkable how those seemingly small things become landmarks in memory...often carrying the greatest emotional weight. Beautifully done, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 31st, 2026 08:14
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is a wonderfully nostalgic piece, Soren. The steady accumulation of everyday memories allows an entire vanished way of life to emerge through ordinary details. It is remarkable how those seemingly small things become landmarks in memory...often carrying the greatest emotional weight. Beautifully done, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 31st, 2026 08:14
Reminiscing
arqios said:
That was my growing up view of that United States. So much has changed since then. 🙏🏻🕊️
July 31st, 2026 08:00
arqios said:
That was my growing up view of that United States. So much has changed since then. 🙏🏻🕊️
July 31st, 2026 08:00
Reminiscing
Kevin Hulme said:
I Remember when there was only 3 TV Channels. Now there\'s Countless, and all showing Rubbish. Times Change but sometimes not for the Better.
Enjoyed.
July 31st, 2026 06:25
Kevin Hulme said:
I Remember when there was only 3 TV Channels. Now there\'s Countless, and all showing Rubbish. Times Change but sometimes not for the Better.
Enjoyed.
July 31st, 2026 06:25
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