Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Perfume of war
Friendship said:
Your poem \"Perfume of War\" explores the grotesque aftermath of violence and death, using vivid imagery to evoke the horror and decay associated with war. The subject matter revolves around the brutal realities of life and death in a war-torn environment, where nature\'s cycle of consumption and decay becomes a metaphor for the destruction caused by human conflict. The use of terms like \"dead cat,\" \"hog carcasse,\" and \"vulture clouds\" emphasizes the grim realities faced in such scenarios, highlighting both the physical and emotional toll of warfare.
October 8th, 2025 07:49
Friendship said:
Your poem \"Perfume of War\" explores the grotesque aftermath of violence and death, using vivid imagery to evoke the horror and decay associated with war. The subject matter revolves around the brutal realities of life and death in a war-torn environment, where nature\'s cycle of consumption and decay becomes a metaphor for the destruction caused by human conflict. The use of terms like \"dead cat,\" \"hog carcasse,\" and \"vulture clouds\" emphasizes the grim realities faced in such scenarios, highlighting both the physical and emotional toll of warfare.
October 8th, 2025 07:49
Heaven\'s rain
Soman Ragavan said:
The poet\'s eye catches what others miss. Hidden wonders reveal themselves.
October 8th, 2025 07:10
Soman Ragavan said:
The poet\'s eye catches what others miss. Hidden wonders reveal themselves.
October 8th, 2025 07:10
Relationships, everything has a price
Bustillos said:
That\'s an interesting poem.
Everything is for sale, and ultimately, we are for sale too, even if it goes unnoticed
October 8th, 2025 05:21
Bustillos said:
That\'s an interesting poem.
Everything is for sale, and ultimately, we are for sale too, even if it goes unnoticed
October 8th, 2025 05:21
Relationships, everything has a price
Goldfinch60 said:
Purchase what you need not what you desire soren.
Andy
October 8th, 2025 01:06
Goldfinch60 said:
Purchase what you need not what you desire soren.
Andy
October 8th, 2025 01:06
Relationships, everything has a price
NinjaGirl said:
A difficult question...I\'ll take a used car, thrifted clothing, and a top-of-the-line quality man! It will never be one or the other. Very well-written, I enjoyed reading...a deepened experience for sure.
October 7th, 2025 12:22
NinjaGirl said:
A difficult question...I\'ll take a used car, thrifted clothing, and a top-of-the-line quality man! It will never be one or the other. Very well-written, I enjoyed reading...a deepened experience for sure.
October 7th, 2025 12:22
Relationships, everything has a price
Friendship said:
The poem explores the complexities and considerations involved in purchasing a vehicle, using it as a metaphor for broader life decisions and relationships. The speaker ultimately reflects on the pressures and confusion of consumer choices, leading to a humorous conclusion that walking may be the simplest option.
October 7th, 2025 08:23
Friendship said:
The poem explores the complexities and considerations involved in purchasing a vehicle, using it as a metaphor for broader life decisions and relationships. The speaker ultimately reflects on the pressures and confusion of consumer choices, leading to a humorous conclusion that walking may be the simplest option.
October 7th, 2025 08:23
Relationships, everything has a price
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, like a dealership of desire...slick talk, smart rhythm, and hard truth under the shine. The humor hits, but the insight sticks. Excellent work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 7th, 2025 07:49
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, like a dealership of desire...slick talk, smart rhythm, and hard truth under the shine. The humor hits, but the insight sticks. Excellent work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 7th, 2025 07:49
Relationships, everything has a price
Ellen Marsell said:
So witty and true — sometimes walking really is the best option😊
October 7th, 2025 05:32
Ellen Marsell said:
So witty and true — sometimes walking really is the best option😊
October 7th, 2025 05:32
Nuts
RSM0812 said:
Im pretty much fucking blown away by this one. Nice write Sorrenbarett!!!
October 6th, 2025 20:25
RSM0812 said:
Im pretty much fucking blown away by this one. Nice write Sorrenbarett!!!
October 6th, 2025 20:25
Some day
arqios said:
What a powerful ending! “Toilet paper,” in contrast to the rest of the poem entire, is just superlative! 🙏🏻🕊👍🏻🪶
October 6th, 2025 19:37
arqios said:
What a powerful ending! “Toilet paper,” in contrast to the rest of the poem entire, is just superlative! 🙏🏻🕊👍🏻🪶
October 6th, 2025 19:37
Some day
Lorenz said:
Man of toilet paper are you reffering to a french president ?
October 6th, 2025 11:32
Lorenz said:
Man of toilet paper are you reffering to a french president ?
October 6th, 2025 11:32
Fire, earth, air and water
Lorenz said:
I hope to remain ageless for eternity ! Happy gemini cricket !
October 6th, 2025 11:18
Lorenz said:
I hope to remain ageless for eternity ! Happy gemini cricket !
October 6th, 2025 11:18
Some day
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this moves from cosmic collapse to quiet human irony…the light gone, the world spent, and yet rebirth hums beneath it. You captured the end as transformation. Well done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 6th, 2025 10:57
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this moves from cosmic collapse to quiet human irony…the light gone, the world spent, and yet rebirth hums beneath it. You captured the end as transformation. Well done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 6th, 2025 10:57
Some day
2781 said:
Until then, what more should a man do, but eat and drink, and enjoy the good of all his labour.
October 6th, 2025 09:21
2781 said:
Until then, what more should a man do, but eat and drink, and enjoy the good of all his labour.
October 6th, 2025 09:21
Some day
Friendship said:
A bit of a brain twister for me this morning, yet a unique way of writing! Your poem revolves around the inevitability of change and decay in love and life. It reflects on the transient nature of passion and the eventual fading of light, both literally and metaphorically. The poem suggests a cycle of destruction and rebirth, highlighting how memories and experiences can be reinterpreted over time. Yet your poem serves as a reminder to readers of the impermanence of love and the inevitability of change. It encourages reflection on personal experiences and how individuals adapt and redefine themselves in the face of loss.
October 6th, 2025 07:22
Friendship said:
A bit of a brain twister for me this morning, yet a unique way of writing! Your poem revolves around the inevitability of change and decay in love and life. It reflects on the transient nature of passion and the eventual fading of light, both literally and metaphorically. The poem suggests a cycle of destruction and rebirth, highlighting how memories and experiences can be reinterpreted over time. Yet your poem serves as a reminder to readers of the impermanence of love and the inevitability of change. It encourages reflection on personal experiences and how individuals adapt and redefine themselves in the face of loss.
October 6th, 2025 07:22
Some day
Paul Bell said:
That some day seems to be getting closer and closer.
Even the bucket list has done a runner.
Do traffic wardens turn to toilet paper, maiden of gold, writing out my ticket.
That\'s when you know life doesn\'t stop.
October 6th, 2025 04:42
Paul Bell said:
That some day seems to be getting closer and closer.
Even the bucket list has done a runner.
Do traffic wardens turn to toilet paper, maiden of gold, writing out my ticket.
That\'s when you know life doesn\'t stop.
October 6th, 2025 04:42
Fire, earth, air and water
Goldfinch60 said:
We are born into that life soren and must always do the best we can.
Andy
October 6th, 2025 01:20
Goldfinch60 said:
We are born into that life soren and must always do the best we can.
Andy
October 6th, 2025 01:20
Fire, earth, air and water
Neville said:
This would appear to have pretty much got the lot, it sure covers all the bases .. it ticks all the write boxes 😎⭐👍👍
October 5th, 2025 11:10
Neville said:
This would appear to have pretty much got the lot, it sure covers all the bases .. it ticks all the write boxes 😎⭐👍👍
October 5th, 2025 11:10
Fire, earth, air and water
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Elemental! Love it! Soren, this breathes like an ancient incantation — fire and soil, dream and hunger intertwined. You captured the sacred metaphor between birth and becoming perfectly. Excellent and a must fave for me, my friend (which is, admittedly, pretty much all of yours. What can I say, I\'m a fan! 🤣) 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
October 5th, 2025 07:57
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Elemental! Love it! Soren, this breathes like an ancient incantation — fire and soil, dream and hunger intertwined. You captured the sacred metaphor between birth and becoming perfectly. Excellent and a must fave for me, my friend (which is, admittedly, pretty much all of yours. What can I say, I\'m a fan! 🤣) 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
October 5th, 2025 07:57
Fire, earth, air and water
Poetic Licence said:
The questioning of destiny and do our parents help shaped it, probably whether that be good or bad, but if there no parent\'s, is it just destiny anyway, enjoyed my Sunday read
October 5th, 2025 06:02
Poetic Licence said:
The questioning of destiny and do our parents help shaped it, probably whether that be good or bad, but if there no parent\'s, is it just destiny anyway, enjoyed my Sunday read
October 5th, 2025 06:02
Fire, earth, air and water
Friendship said:
Your poem explores the interconnectedness of the four classical elements—fire, earth, air, and water—and reflects on the duality of human existence, contrasting dreams and poverty, life and death, and the roles of parents in shaping destiny.
October 5th, 2025 05:46
Friendship said:
Your poem explores the interconnectedness of the four classical elements—fire, earth, air, and water—and reflects on the duality of human existence, contrasting dreams and poverty, life and death, and the roles of parents in shaping destiny.
October 5th, 2025 05:46
Fire, earth, air and water
orchidee said:
\'Skirt of dirt\' is surely metaphorical, but it\'s what I\'m literally gonna do to KP. I\'m not gonna do her washing for a year! lol.
October 5th, 2025 04:25
orchidee said:
\'Skirt of dirt\' is surely metaphorical, but it\'s what I\'m literally gonna do to KP. I\'m not gonna do her washing for a year! lol.
October 5th, 2025 04:25
To an old dog
Goldfinch60 said:
Dogs can always be in our memories soren, I certainly remember the dogs in my life.
Andy
October 5th, 2025 01:18
Goldfinch60 said:
Dogs can always be in our memories soren, I certainly remember the dogs in my life.
Andy
October 5th, 2025 01:18
To an old dog
Poetic Licence said:
I feel there is way more to this than I want to get involved in, but on a lighter note,years ago my Alsatian put me in hospital when we were playing football, I went to head the ball, she went to head it, I lost she bit into my head. Enjoy the rest of your weekend
October 4th, 2025 09:13
Poetic Licence said:
I feel there is way more to this than I want to get involved in, but on a lighter note,years ago my Alsatian put me in hospital when we were playing football, I went to head the ball, she went to head it, I lost she bit into my head. Enjoy the rest of your weekend
October 4th, 2025 09:13
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