Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Ghost riders
gray0328 said:
What remains is not the past itself, but a softened, unreliable memory of it—like a photograph fading to gray. Well Done Soren
July 5th, 2026 09:27
gray0328 said:
What remains is not the past itself, but a softened, unreliable memory of it—like a photograph fading to gray. Well Done Soren
July 5th, 2026 09:27
I swear
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a sharp, fractured rhythm here—like language itself is being made to stand trial and hesitate at every command.
It feels tense in a controlled way, as if truth and authority are circling each other without ever fully landing.
July 5th, 2026 07:45
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a sharp, fractured rhythm here—like language itself is being made to stand trial and hesitate at every command.
It feels tense in a controlled way, as if truth and authority are circling each other without ever fully landing.
July 5th, 2026 07:45
Taken
RSM0812 said:
This write has some grotesque imagery written and well contrived of. Enjoyed another read.
July 5th, 2026 06:14
RSM0812 said:
This write has some grotesque imagery written and well contrived of. Enjoyed another read.
July 5th, 2026 06:14
Ghost riders
RSM0812 said:
Sometimes your poetry is so complicated, I\'m lost for words. Guess its a good thing I\'m not a very good interpreter. I liked the write very much.
July 5th, 2026 06:12
RSM0812 said:
Sometimes your poetry is so complicated, I\'m lost for words. Guess its a good thing I\'m not a very good interpreter. I liked the write very much.
July 5th, 2026 06:12
Ghost riders
Soman Ragavan said:
Depicts how life changes. Scenes of the past disappear little by little. Colours fade. Even the gun made of metal evaporated. Changes are beyond our control.
July 5th, 2026 06:11
Soman Ragavan said:
Depicts how life changes. Scenes of the past disappear little by little. Colours fade. Even the gun made of metal evaporated. Changes are beyond our control.
July 5th, 2026 06:11
I swear
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, I really enjoyed this. It begins with familiar courtroom commands, then quietly shifts into a deeper reflection on judgment itself. That final question lingered with me well after I\'d finished reading. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 5th, 2026 06:00
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, I really enjoyed this. It begins with familiar courtroom commands, then quietly shifts into a deeper reflection on judgment itself. That final question lingered with me well after I\'d finished reading. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 5th, 2026 06:00
I swear
arqios said:
Perhaps they forgot to say, \"Simon says...\" A very apt metaphor to our contemporary situation. 🙏🕊️
July 5th, 2026 05:32
arqios said:
Perhaps they forgot to say, \"Simon says...\" A very apt metaphor to our contemporary situation. 🙏🕊️
July 5th, 2026 05:32
I swear
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
the justice system sometimes me laugh
July 5th, 2026 04:36
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
the justice system sometimes me laugh
July 5th, 2026 04:36
Ghost riders
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true soren, the ghosts of the past are only in our memories now.
Andy
July 5th, 2026 01:18
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true soren, the ghosts of the past are only in our memories now.
Andy
July 5th, 2026 01:18
Ghost riders
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this really resonated with me. There’s a wistfulness running through it that feels less like mourning and more like quietly acknowledging that every generation leaves something behind. Beautiful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 4th, 2026 23:04
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this really resonated with me. There’s a wistfulness running through it that feels less like mourning and more like quietly acknowledging that every generation leaves something behind. Beautiful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 4th, 2026 23:04
Ghost riders
Kevin Hulme said:
A fine Poem on the Passage of time and the way it shapes our life\'s. On the 250th Birthday of the U.S , it tells of the journey that has been made . From Wagons to Automobiles. Good Write.
July 4th, 2026 19:09
Kevin Hulme said:
A fine Poem on the Passage of time and the way it shapes our life\'s. On the 250th Birthday of the U.S , it tells of the journey that has been made . From Wagons to Automobiles. Good Write.
July 4th, 2026 19:09
Ghost riders
Friendship said:
Nicely written. Your poem focuses on the fading memories of a time when horses, trains, and the vast American plains defined life, contrasting this with contemporary imagery of cars, highways, and suburban life. You highlight the transition from a rugged, adventurous past to a more mundane, settled present.
July 4th, 2026 12:38
Friendship said:
Nicely written. Your poem focuses on the fading memories of a time when horses, trains, and the vast American plains defined life, contrasting this with contemporary imagery of cars, highways, and suburban life. You highlight the transition from a rugged, adventurous past to a more mundane, settled present.
July 4th, 2026 12:38
I sit listening for sounds around me
Divya Dansena said:
You just heard nicely, the things , which just passes by our ears . What we see is the thing that you just sense by your whole body . You’r a great observer and a poet .
July 4th, 2026 11:42
Divya Dansena said:
You just heard nicely, the things , which just passes by our ears . What we see is the thing that you just sense by your whole body . You’r a great observer and a poet .
July 4th, 2026 11:42
Little one
Divya Dansena said:
You have just expressed people’s ultimate fear into your poem . Some fear it . Some dive deep into it .
July 4th, 2026 11:37
Divya Dansena said:
You have just expressed people’s ultimate fear into your poem . Some fear it . Some dive deep into it .
July 4th, 2026 11:37
Taken
NafisaSB said:
That is so unjust and unfair and disgusting and the results speak for themselves
July 4th, 2026 10:15
NafisaSB said:
That is so unjust and unfair and disgusting and the results speak for themselves
July 4th, 2026 10:15
Ghost riders
soheil khodaparasti said:
As memory and history fade, they leave behind more than absence—they reshape the lives that follow.
July 4th, 2026 08:15
soheil khodaparasti said:
As memory and history fade, they leave behind more than absence—they reshape the lives that follow.
July 4th, 2026 08:15
Ghost riders
arqios said:
The country used to feel so much bigger than. And funny how the peopleness and community can feel more distanced in the ever-growing urban density. 🙏🕊️
July 4th, 2026 07:35
arqios said:
The country used to feel so much bigger than. And funny how the peopleness and community can feel more distanced in the ever-growing urban density. 🙏🕊️
July 4th, 2026 07:35
Ghost riders
Syd said:
Hi Sorenbarret. I feel like I can relate to this piece. Very well written 👏
- Syd 🍄
July 4th, 2026 06:53
Syd said:
Hi Sorenbarret. I feel like I can relate to this piece. Very well written 👏
- Syd 🍄
July 4th, 2026 06:53
Ghost riders
Nerd said:
I like this poem imagery is very deep, and very relatable. I also like how it makes me think the everyday objects can remind me of something that happened in the past.
July 4th, 2026 03:50
Nerd said:
I like this poem imagery is very deep, and very relatable. I also like how it makes me think the everyday objects can remind me of something that happened in the past.
July 4th, 2026 03:50
Ghost riders
Paul Bell said:
Yes, the past has surely gone, and like the gun, evaporated away.
The rise in human population is frightning, space is running out, animals are testimony to that.
Prime land is king now, and they don\'t care what land it is.
July 4th, 2026 03:27
Paul Bell said:
Yes, the past has surely gone, and like the gun, evaporated away.
The rise in human population is frightning, space is running out, animals are testimony to that.
Prime land is king now, and they don\'t care what land it is.
July 4th, 2026 03:27
Whisps of love
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write soren, i used to smoke but gave up 16th October 1982, not that I am counting of course. LOL
Andy
July 4th, 2026 01:17
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write soren, i used to smoke but gave up 16th October 1982, not that I am counting of course. LOL
Andy
July 4th, 2026 01:17
Whisps of love
Kevin Hulme said:
When Love lands with a Thundering Splash:
Those Ripples keep moving when the Passion is Past.
Enjoyed this.
July 3rd, 2026 18:45
Kevin Hulme said:
When Love lands with a Thundering Splash:
Those Ripples keep moving when the Passion is Past.
Enjoyed this.
July 3rd, 2026 18:45
Be willing to give what you ask
DLewis88 said:
It\'s well written. You did a amazing job.
July 3rd, 2026 10:29
DLewis88 said:
It\'s well written. You did a amazing job.
July 3rd, 2026 10:29
Whisps of love
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, what a poignant piece. I love how the image of smoke evolves into a meditation on time, memory, and relationships. By the end, the discarded cigarette may be gone, but its lingering scent becomes the perfect metaphor for the traces some experiences leave behind. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 3rd, 2026 08:47
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, what a poignant piece. I love how the image of smoke evolves into a meditation on time, memory, and relationships. By the end, the discarded cigarette may be gone, but its lingering scent becomes the perfect metaphor for the traces some experiences leave behind. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 3rd, 2026 08:47
Conditional
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, what a thoughtful piece. I love how you build the poem around fire as both possibility and responsibility. The imagery is simple, yet it carries a deeper reflection on the care we should give our words. Wonderfully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 3rd, 2026 08:32
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, what a thoughtful piece. I love how you build the poem around fire as both possibility and responsibility. The imagery is simple, yet it carries a deeper reflection on the care we should give our words. Wonderfully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 3rd, 2026 08:32
Whisps of love
Paul Bell said:
Never try and rekindle a failed relationship.
Men for some reason are more guilty than this than women.
Smoke your cigarette, and who knows, when the smoke clears, a new woman might be waiting.
July 3rd, 2026 07:11
Paul Bell said:
Never try and rekindle a failed relationship.
Men for some reason are more guilty than this than women.
Smoke your cigarette, and who knows, when the smoke clears, a new woman might be waiting.
July 3rd, 2026 07:11
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