Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Sloth of the present
Neville said:
There are those who give up far too easily .. and those who by virtue of this or that don\'t have the choice .. I know what side of the fence I choose to be & although it gets harder, I hope it pays off in the end .. Another good un sir .. Neville
March 21st, 2026 12:16
Neville said:
There are those who give up far too easily .. and those who by virtue of this or that don\'t have the choice .. I know what side of the fence I choose to be & although it gets harder, I hope it pays off in the end .. Another good un sir .. Neville
March 21st, 2026 12:16
Sloth of the present
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this hits with a heavy, dragging weight…like the body itself is resisting motion at every turn. It feels stuck in a way that’s almost physical. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 21st, 2026 08:50
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this hits with a heavy, dragging weight…like the body itself is resisting motion at every turn. It feels stuck in a way that’s almost physical. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 21st, 2026 08:50
Sloth of the present
cellinic said:
Rather a serious statement, which may be interpreted somehow ambivalently! Best wishes,
March 21st, 2026 07:55
cellinic said:
Rather a serious statement, which may be interpreted somehow ambivalently! Best wishes,
March 21st, 2026 07:55
Spilt criticism
Awam said:
mind under pressure where words and images tumble over each other....and metaphors scraping the reader.
March 21st, 2026 06:29
Awam said:
mind under pressure where words and images tumble over each other....and metaphors scraping the reader.
March 21st, 2026 06:29
Sloth of the present
arqios said:
Hope you are doing well. This is so moving and thus arousing concern.🕊️🙏🏻
March 21st, 2026 06:23
arqios said:
Hope you are doing well. This is so moving and thus arousing concern.🕊️🙏🏻
March 21st, 2026 06:23
Sloth of the present
Prachi Dalvi said:
Each word weighs so much that u described it in a unique way.Nicely framed and worded!
March 21st, 2026 04:11
Prachi Dalvi said:
Each word weighs so much that u described it in a unique way.Nicely framed and worded!
March 21st, 2026 04:11
We are all one
Goldfinch60 said:
We come from afar soren and it all started with the \"Big Bang\" that is still enlarging the Universe.
Andy
March 21st, 2026 02:21
Goldfinch60 said:
We come from afar soren and it all started with the \"Big Bang\" that is still enlarging the Universe.
Andy
March 21st, 2026 02:21
Society a hitcher
Vipassana said:
I have sold my soul for a piece of bread and a soft bed
Unfortunately the society / world we live in forces this (and much of what you say in the poem) upon us. It\'s really difficult to escape it, in any material sense. Only in the mind, the heart, is there a possibility of true autonomy. End of speech.
You poem doesn\'t pull any punches. It\'s relentless, and has a powerful vitality of honesty.
March 21st, 2026 01:01
Vipassana said:
I have sold my soul for a piece of bread and a soft bed
Unfortunately the society / world we live in forces this (and much of what you say in the poem) upon us. It\'s really difficult to escape it, in any material sense. Only in the mind, the heart, is there a possibility of true autonomy. End of speech.
You poem doesn\'t pull any punches. It\'s relentless, and has a powerful vitality of honesty.
March 21st, 2026 01:01
We are all one
Kevin Hulme said:
Reminds me of \'Breath of Caesar\'.
Another Fave.
March 20th, 2026 20:05
Kevin Hulme said:
Reminds me of \'Breath of Caesar\'.
Another Fave.
March 20th, 2026 20:05
We are all one
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren this carries both scale and weight…moving from distant stars to shared atoms, then grounding it in bone and blood. “Atoms shed from bodies of the dead” really anchors that idea. It leaves me thinking about how connected everything truly is. Fantastic write and a fave.🌹🖤🙏🕯️
March 20th, 2026 10:03
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren this carries both scale and weight…moving from distant stars to shared atoms, then grounding it in bone and blood. “Atoms shed from bodies of the dead” really anchors that idea. It leaves me thinking about how connected everything truly is. Fantastic write and a fave.🌹🖤🙏🕯️
March 20th, 2026 10:03
We are all one
Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏 said:
The other day a person told me we all are breathing the same air recycled from centuries and now… great poem to reflect our interconnection
March 20th, 2026 08:22
Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏 said:
The other day a person told me we all are breathing the same air recycled from centuries and now… great poem to reflect our interconnection
March 20th, 2026 08:22
Adrift
RSM0812 said:
This poem reminds me of taking a beating from the nature of the world but yet getting another chance to get back on healed feet and begin anew. Nice ✍️
March 20th, 2026 06:27
RSM0812 said:
This poem reminds me of taking a beating from the nature of the world but yet getting another chance to get back on healed feet and begin anew. Nice ✍️
March 20th, 2026 06:27
We are all one
Carmen Luca said:
Beautiful reflections. Maybe we are star dust temporarily clumped together in human form, too focused on the separation from other beings.
March 20th, 2026 04:17
Carmen Luca said:
Beautiful reflections. Maybe we are star dust temporarily clumped together in human form, too focused on the separation from other beings.
March 20th, 2026 04:17
We are all one
orchidee said:
Yes, KP\'s just a pile of dust. \'Who you calling a pile of dust?\' she asks me! lol.
March 20th, 2026 03:38
orchidee said:
Yes, KP\'s just a pile of dust. \'Who you calling a pile of dust?\' she asks me! lol.
March 20th, 2026 03:38
Cuts
Goldfinch60 said:
Those cuts in our life may always be there soren but in life they teach us how to move on in a better way.
Andy
March 20th, 2026 02:19
Goldfinch60 said:
Those cuts in our life may always be there soren but in life they teach us how to move on in a better way.
Andy
March 20th, 2026 02:19
Cuts
Kevin Hulme said:
Is there an equal balance between Good and Bad Memories? Depends on the person.
Maybe we focus on the Bad ones
Nice one again.
March 19th, 2026 19:23
Kevin Hulme said:
Is there an equal balance between Good and Bad Memories? Depends on the person.
Maybe we focus on the Bad ones
Nice one again.
March 19th, 2026 19:23
Cuts
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this carries a raw, physical sense of pain…from “shells of memory’s beaches” to those scars worn as trophies. It feels like movement through damage rather than away from it. And by the end…“Blood long dried seals pain inside” just closes it in. Powerful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 19th, 2026 10:25
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this carries a raw, physical sense of pain…from “shells of memory’s beaches” to those scars worn as trophies. It feels like movement through damage rather than away from it. And by the end…“Blood long dried seals pain inside” just closes it in. Powerful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 19th, 2026 10:25
Cuts
orchidee said:
Good write SB. I wondered if this would be about people \'cutting up\', which makes me shudder if reading anything on that theme.
March 19th, 2026 03:21
orchidee said:
Good write SB. I wondered if this would be about people \'cutting up\', which makes me shudder if reading anything on that theme.
March 19th, 2026 03:21
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