Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
To be or not to bee
Vipassana said:
a metaphor for being an outcast, a misunderstood creature?
No longer accepted it sits rejected emptiness east and west
April 2nd, 2026 00:25
Vipassana said:
a metaphor for being an outcast, a misunderstood creature?
No longer accepted it sits rejected emptiness east and west
April 2nd, 2026 00:25
To be or not to bee
Kevin Hulme said:
I think People care more about Bees than Wasps.
If the Bee was abandoned, then it would find Help.
April 1st, 2026 18:29
Kevin Hulme said:
I think People care more about Bees than Wasps.
If the Bee was abandoned, then it would find Help.
April 1st, 2026 18:29
To be or not to bee
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Sore, love this. That image of the wasp on a deserted nest really locks it in. It’s not just empty space…it’s abandonment. Everything that once gave it purpose is gone, and it’s left with nothing but itself. That lands deep. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 1st, 2026 14:17
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Sore, love this. That image of the wasp on a deserted nest really locks it in. It’s not just empty space…it’s abandonment. Everything that once gave it purpose is gone, and it’s left with nothing but itself. That lands deep. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 1st, 2026 14:17
I knew the man
Goldfinch60 said:
Such strong words soren, nobody should end like that.
Andy
April 1st, 2026 01:06
Goldfinch60 said:
Such strong words soren, nobody should end like that.
Andy
April 1st, 2026 01:06
What\'s left
Vipassana said:
very nice poem
Sleeping off life\'s banquet under a coffin lid table
great line
March 31st, 2026 19:19
Vipassana said:
very nice poem
Sleeping off life\'s banquet under a coffin lid table
great line
March 31st, 2026 19:19
Ritual
Vipassana said:
It is behind, a smile that we grind our food of the day
Fish or mammal, altars of enamel dedicated to sacrificial prey
That says it all, I think.
March 31st, 2026 19:10
Vipassana said:
It is behind, a smile that we grind our food of the day
Fish or mammal, altars of enamel dedicated to sacrificial prey
That says it all, I think.
March 31st, 2026 19:10
Stories
Vipassana said:
A cover song of an angel with lyrics they couldn\'t remember
Auto tuned and pitch corrected his performance they dismember
That says it all, I think.
March 31st, 2026 19:06
Vipassana said:
A cover song of an angel with lyrics they couldn\'t remember
Auto tuned and pitch corrected his performance they dismember
That says it all, I think.
March 31st, 2026 19:06
Dreams of yesterday
Vipassana said:
A mind that will not accept today takes me to dreams distantly
Feelings unburied, not felt for so long, in an ailing heart once so strong
That haunts me.
March 31st, 2026 19:03
Vipassana said:
A mind that will not accept today takes me to dreams distantly
Feelings unburied, not felt for so long, in an ailing heart once so strong
That haunts me.
March 31st, 2026 19:03
I knew the man
Vipassana said:
you can kill the man but feelings still survive
That haunts me.
March 31st, 2026 18:59
Vipassana said:
you can kill the man but feelings still survive
That haunts me.
March 31st, 2026 18:59
I knew the man
Kevin Hulme said:
Terrible about your Neighbour.
Powerful Piece.
March 31st, 2026 18:43
Kevin Hulme said:
Terrible about your Neighbour.
Powerful Piece.
March 31st, 2026 18:43
I knew the man
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this hits hard…there’s no distance here, no softening. It comes straight at you and stays there. The brutality isn’t dressed up, it just is…and that makes it land heavier. That last turn into reflection just sits there, uncomfortable and real. Powerful write, my dear friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 31st, 2026 09:30
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this hits hard…there’s no distance here, no softening. It comes straight at you and stays there. The brutality isn’t dressed up, it just is…and that makes it land heavier. That last turn into reflection just sits there, uncomfortable and real. Powerful write, my dear friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 31st, 2026 09:30
I knew the man
Friendship said:
Your writing style has undergone a notable transformation. Your story contains very dark, violent, and horrifying elements, and is both graphic and emotional. This poem grapples with the themes of violence, mortality, and the lasting impact of trauma. It explores the brutal fate of an individual—a man subjected to horrific acts of violence—while highlighting the juxtaposition between physical death and the persistence of emotional and psychological pain. Yet it revolves around the aftermath of extreme violence and the haunting memories that linger even when a person is gone. You painted a graphic picture of violence and suffering.
March 31st, 2026 08:26
Friendship said:
Your writing style has undergone a notable transformation. Your story contains very dark, violent, and horrifying elements, and is both graphic and emotional. This poem grapples with the themes of violence, mortality, and the lasting impact of trauma. It explores the brutal fate of an individual—a man subjected to horrific acts of violence—while highlighting the juxtaposition between physical death and the persistence of emotional and psychological pain. Yet it revolves around the aftermath of extreme violence and the haunting memories that linger even when a person is gone. You painted a graphic picture of violence and suffering.
March 31st, 2026 08:26
I knew the man
Thomas W Case said:
Raw, relentless, and unflinching—this one hits like a fist to the gut.
The horror lingers on the page, and your voice carries the ashes of memory with grim precision.
March 31st, 2026 07:30
Thomas W Case said:
Raw, relentless, and unflinching—this one hits like a fist to the gut.
The horror lingers on the page, and your voice carries the ashes of memory with grim precision.
March 31st, 2026 07:30
I knew the man
arqios said:
We’ve been watching reruns of Bones and yesterday’s episode just happened to be a guy stuffed into the trunk of a car. That has compounded the punch of your poem. Most touched🕊️🙏🏻
March 31st, 2026 06:54
arqios said:
We’ve been watching reruns of Bones and yesterday’s episode just happened to be a guy stuffed into the trunk of a car. That has compounded the punch of your poem. Most touched🕊️🙏🏻
March 31st, 2026 06:54
I knew the man
Lorenz said:
The wingless angels falling from the skies keep the memory of the pyres alive...
March 31st, 2026 03:39
Lorenz said:
The wingless angels falling from the skies keep the memory of the pyres alive...
March 31st, 2026 03:39
I knew the man
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
a powerful piece my friend enjoyed the read immensely
March 31st, 2026 03:25
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
a powerful piece my friend enjoyed the read immensely
March 31st, 2026 03:25
Dreams of yesterday
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words soren, those dreams will always be there for you.
Andy
March 31st, 2026 01:22
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words soren, those dreams will always be there for you.
Andy
March 31st, 2026 01:22
Dreams of yesterday
Kevin Hulme said:
A fine write. It\'s amazing how the Past figures in Dreams, where Parents and other Folk past still live.
March 30th, 2026 19:15
Kevin Hulme said:
A fine write. It\'s amazing how the Past figures in Dreams, where Parents and other Folk past still live.
March 30th, 2026 19:15
Dreams of yesterday
Doggerel Dave said:
They fade so fast, though enjoyably surreal....
March 30th, 2026 16:59
Doggerel Dave said:
They fade so fast, though enjoyably surreal....
March 30th, 2026 16:59
Dreams of yesterday
Neville said:
there is a point where the past, present and future each co-exist albeit in a less tangible form .. somewhere between memory & perception .. I think .. nice stuff this brother s .. Neville
March 30th, 2026 16:38
Neville said:
there is a point where the past, present and future each co-exist albeit in a less tangible form .. somewhere between memory & perception .. I think .. nice stuff this brother s .. Neville
March 30th, 2026 16:38
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