Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Little one
Kevin Hulme said:
That wouldn\'t be one of Disney\'s better Films.
A good Write.
May 26th, 2026 19:34
Kevin Hulme said:
That wouldn\'t be one of Disney\'s better Films.
A good Write.
May 26th, 2026 19:34
Little one
soheil khodaparasti said:
A touching and haunting poem that beautifully captures the fragility of a lost fledgling, reflecting the universal human experience of feeling helplessly lost and desperately in need of protection. The vivid imagery and growing sense of danger create a deeply sad and powerful ending — a very well-written piece.
May 26th, 2026 14:28
soheil khodaparasti said:
A touching and haunting poem that beautifully captures the fragility of a lost fledgling, reflecting the universal human experience of feeling helplessly lost and desperately in need of protection. The vivid imagery and growing sense of danger create a deeply sad and powerful ending — a very well-written piece.
May 26th, 2026 14:28
Little one
Neville said:
Ouch, it seems there was more than just little old me that neva saw that coming .. 👍
May 26th, 2026 13:01
Neville said:
Ouch, it seems there was more than just little old me that neva saw that coming .. 👍
May 26th, 2026 13:01
Little one
Paul Bell said:
Nature and the life she provides, or doesn\'t in some cases.
We see nature at work, but we probably don\'t see the darkside of it.
The finch won\'t survive without its mother, but maybe feed another.
That\'s nature in the raw, unassuming, moving on.
May 26th, 2026 11:44
Paul Bell said:
Nature and the life she provides, or doesn\'t in some cases.
We see nature at work, but we probably don\'t see the darkside of it.
The finch won\'t survive without its mother, but maybe feed another.
That\'s nature in the raw, unassuming, moving on.
May 26th, 2026 11:44
Little one
Lorenz said:
Nature is just in its ruthless way.Only humans no longer respect its laws .
May 26th, 2026 09:27
Lorenz said:
Nature is just in its ruthless way.Only humans no longer respect its laws .
May 26th, 2026 09:27
Little one
Katie B. said:
The swallow of a cruel world. We can often be oblivious, naively expecting the best out of our fellow man. Well written and thoughtfully crafted.
May 26th, 2026 08:59
Katie B. said:
The swallow of a cruel world. We can often be oblivious, naively expecting the best out of our fellow man. Well written and thoughtfully crafted.
May 26th, 2026 08:59
Little one
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a tender ache in this—the smallness of that finch against a world that doesn’t pause for him.
And that ending lands quiet and cold… nature moving on, even when something fragile disappears into it.
May 26th, 2026 07:15
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a tender ache in this—the smallness of that finch against a world that doesn’t pause for him.
And that ending lands quiet and cold… nature moving on, even when something fragile disappears into it.
May 26th, 2026 07:15
Little one
arqios said:
The state and condition that reverse anthropomorphisation elevates is stunning. 🙏🕊️
May 26th, 2026 06:20
arqios said:
The state and condition that reverse anthropomorphisation elevates is stunning. 🙏🕊️
May 26th, 2026 06:20
Little one
David Wakeling said:
I think this is clever.It can be taken as a simple but sad story of a lost bird.Or as a statement about the human condition.We are all lost birds swallowed byt he dark.Very poetic mi amigo
May 26th, 2026 03:13
David Wakeling said:
I think this is clever.It can be taken as a simple but sad story of a lost bird.Or as a statement about the human condition.We are all lost birds swallowed byt he dark.Very poetic mi amigo
May 26th, 2026 03:13
The chase
Goldfinch60 said:
I hope they did not catch him soren. Good words.
Andy
May 26th, 2026 01:44
Goldfinch60 said:
I hope they did not catch him soren. Good words.
Andy
May 26th, 2026 01:44
The chase
Kevin Hulme said:
If the Hare was chased by \'The Tortoise\' it would have been the same result. So it couldn\'t win.
Good Write here.
May 25th, 2026 19:21
Kevin Hulme said:
If the Hare was chased by \'The Tortoise\' it would have been the same result. So it couldn\'t win.
Good Write here.
May 25th, 2026 19:21
The chase
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, wow…this one runs on pure sound and momentum, my friend. The rhyme and internal rhythm feel almost breathless…like the chase itself never slows long enough to think. There’s something primal and unsettling woven through the whole thing. Powerful write and a fave for the sound and momentum of it. Just wow. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 25th, 2026 15:30
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, wow…this one runs on pure sound and momentum, my friend. The rhyme and internal rhythm feel almost breathless…like the chase itself never slows long enough to think. There’s something primal and unsettling woven through the whole thing. Powerful write and a fave for the sound and momentum of it. Just wow. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 25th, 2026 15:30
The chase
Teddy.15 said:
Forgive my ignorance if they were hares where does the rabbit fur come from? 🤣
May 25th, 2026 13:29
Teddy.15 said:
Forgive my ignorance if they were hares where does the rabbit fur come from? 🤣
May 25th, 2026 13:29
The chase
arqios said:
Never hunted except for food. So that affects me even when by nature hounds do what comes natural for game. Very effective poem. 🕊️🙏
May 25th, 2026 06:20
arqios said:
Never hunted except for food. So that affects me even when by nature hounds do what comes natural for game. Very effective poem. 🕊️🙏
May 25th, 2026 06:20
The chase
David Wakeling said:
A wonderful description of the dogs chasing a hare.An interesting read amigo
May 25th, 2026 05:40
David Wakeling said:
A wonderful description of the dogs chasing a hare.An interesting read amigo
May 25th, 2026 05:40
Cold
Teddy.15 said:
I feel the strong metaphor here that this is the dream like sense of having that special person close even if they are not, it\'s very beautiful dear. sorrenbarret 🌹
May 25th, 2026 00:09
Teddy.15 said:
I feel the strong metaphor here that this is the dream like sense of having that special person close even if they are not, it\'s very beautiful dear. sorrenbarret 🌹
May 25th, 2026 00:09
Thar she blows
mohammad ali said:
Such a beautiful metaphor describing a natural phenomenon at the geographical location of a living place in the face of a woman, perhaps bearing fertility besides a simultaneous disaster!
May 24th, 2026 21:37
mohammad ali said:
Such a beautiful metaphor describing a natural phenomenon at the geographical location of a living place in the face of a woman, perhaps bearing fertility besides a simultaneous disaster!
May 24th, 2026 21:37
Cold
Kevin Hulme said:
Trying to end a Bad relationship? A unique way of expressing it. Good Write.
May 24th, 2026 18:43
Kevin Hulme said:
Trying to end a Bad relationship? A unique way of expressing it. Good Write.
May 24th, 2026 18:43
Unrepented
mohammad ali said:
So beautiful, dear! So beautifully described a deep fact of paradox!
May 24th, 2026 17:36
mohammad ali said:
So beautiful, dear! So beautifully described a deep fact of paradox!
May 24th, 2026 17:36
Cold
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren…there’s a real mastery of atmosphere in this piece. Every image reinforces the emotional climate…frost, wind, snow, steel, static, lightning, winter glare. The cold becomes more than temperature here…it becomes relational, psychological, almost existential. I especially admired how the poem never erupts into melodrama. Instead, it remains restrained and frozen right up until the final retreat: “My emotions I pack, turn my back and retire.” That quiet withdrawal lands harder because of everything held in beforehand. Powerful and haunting work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 24th, 2026 12:17
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren…there’s a real mastery of atmosphere in this piece. Every image reinforces the emotional climate…frost, wind, snow, steel, static, lightning, winter glare. The cold becomes more than temperature here…it becomes relational, psychological, almost existential. I especially admired how the poem never erupts into melodrama. Instead, it remains restrained and frozen right up until the final retreat: “My emotions I pack, turn my back and retire.” That quiet withdrawal lands harder because of everything held in beforehand. Powerful and haunting work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 24th, 2026 12:17
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