Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett



Perfection
jarcher54 said:

I am still working on it though!! And I bet you are too...

April 20th, 2026 10:49

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Tristan Robert Lange said:

Soren, this is a wild ride…there’s a chaotic, almost playful frustration running through it that just keeps building. It feels like everything piling on at once and not letting up. That energy carries. Strong piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

April 20th, 2026 10:32

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GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀 said:

All of us have had unwanted guests lol

April 20th, 2026 09:32

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orchidee said:

Good write SB. Ahh, one who overstayed their welcome, and didn\'t say \'I\'ll get my coat!\' (to leave, that is).
KP never says it, even though I feed her sewage still. lol. I suffer for it though. She gets out her endless photo albums to bore me. Of course, there\'s no one else in the albums but her! lol.

April 20th, 2026 08:28

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Joseph M Marion said:

I absolutely love this this fits in many ways more than way you write it very good Great discipline of the pen andthat\'s why I love reading you

April 20th, 2026 07:20

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Priya Tomar said:

Nice poem .
Your internal rhyming scheme so good .

April 20th, 2026 07:07

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arqios said:

Like gremlins, sidekicks and hangers on, stalkers and trolls even. Like little voices in the head that pester without ceasing 🕊️🙏

April 20th, 2026 06:52

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nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:

good write, we all know of unwanted guests

April 20th, 2026 05:32

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Waiting for Silence said:

feels like someone quietly good in a world that doesn’t know what to do with such people anymore.

April 20th, 2026 04:56

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Goldfinch60 said:

Intriguing words soren but as I say if we were all the same it would be a boring world.

Andy

April 20th, 2026 00:46

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Kevin Hulme said:

I get the message here . Compassion is in short supply sometimes.
Good one.

April 19th, 2026 19:54

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GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀 said:

Great write my friend

April 19th, 2026 14:36

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orchidee said:

Good write SB.

April 19th, 2026 12:09

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ms.divine said:

Nicely written 👏🏿

April 19th, 2026 11:01

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April 19th, 2026 09:16

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Tristan Robert Lange said:

Soren, this carries a quiet, grounded weight…like a life stripped down to what matters, yet still set apart from everything else. That moment of shaking the only hand extended…a clock…really stayed with me. I’ve felt that kind of distance too, where being different doesn’t mean being wrong…just alone. This lands as both honest and haunting. Powerful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

April 19th, 2026 09:13

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Thomas W Case said:

Strange and tender portrait—like a mythic outsider built from compassion and refusal.
The grit sits in the isolation: kindness so rigid it no longer fits the world around it.

April 19th, 2026 08:30

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arqios said:

In a sense we are all peculiarly ourselves and somehow that is a strength and a distinguishing mark of individuality. It seems though that for the most part these qualities are no longer in vogue; personality cloning can be such a compelling thing these days. 🕊️🙏

April 19th, 2026 06:08

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Friendship said:

Nicely done, you painted a picture of the man\'s simple life and the contrasting greed of society. Yet he is so selfish.

April 19th, 2026 05:34

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Katie B. said:

This is lovely and moving. A man alone, unwanted in this world with the only hand extended to him the clock (love it). Also love \"old glue of compassion.\"
Excellent write, Soren and a definite fave. Well, done!!

April 19th, 2026 05:27

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nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:

simple deep and poignant enjoyed the read

April 19th, 2026 04:39

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Doggerel Dave said:

...And a peculiar poem... but there\'s something going on there I could... I think I\'ll have to wait for more poetic minds than mine further down the thread....

Thanks Soren.

April 19th, 2026 04:31

Top and bottom sonnet
Goldfinch60 said:

Fine words soren, we all see things differently.

Andy

April 19th, 2026 01:14

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Tristan Robert Lange said:

Soren, this carries that firm realization that perspective shapes everything…what’s seen in motion, what’s seen at rest, and how both can hold truth at the same time. The image of the wings shifting between views ties it all together in a clean, thoughtful way. Strong piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

April 18th, 2026 20:36

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Kevin Hulme said:

Yes we all see things differently. Different points of View.
As long as we respect others views and not lead in to War. A Good Poem.

April 18th, 2026 18:50

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Jerry Reynolds said:

A fine write, Sorenbarrett. Great imagery.

April 18th, 2026 15:32

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marissa said:

You are everything!!You need to take this up as a profession

April 18th, 2026 14:54

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Doggerel Dave said:

Yes each brain does its own filling in of detail when it comes to visual perception; now an account still has to me made in relation to testable ideas. Enjoyed the write, Soren.

April 18th, 2026 09:50

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orchidee said:

Good write SB.

April 18th, 2026 08:42

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arqios said:

Right up my reading alley here, Soren. A definite fave 🤩🙏🏻🕊️

April 18th, 2026 06:20

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