Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Time
soheil khodaparasti said:
Really beautiful. I can trace a Dickinson-like conceit: something invisible and intangible—in this case, a moment in time—is imagined as a physical thing that can be cut, split, wounded, and examined.
September 4th, 2026 15:15
soheil khodaparasti said:
Really beautiful. I can trace a Dickinson-like conceit: something invisible and intangible—in this case, a moment in time—is imagined as a physical thing that can be cut, split, wounded, and examined.
September 4th, 2026 15:15
Time
orchidee said:
Good write SB. You spent that extra second we had one year? We must take care not to spend it all at once. lol.
September 4th, 2026 07:54
orchidee said:
Good write SB. You spent that extra second we had one year? We must take care not to spend it all at once. lol.
September 4th, 2026 07:54
Desolate
Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS said:
They say the best way to get over an old love is to fall in a new one, and who knows what life has in store for you.
As the saying goes, love is sometimes in the air—you just have to know where to look.
Who knows, a spark might just fly... Besides, loneliness, when embraced, can be deeply creative; we just need to learn to enjoy our own company.
Best regards.
September 4th, 2026 06:30
Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS said:
They say the best way to get over an old love is to fall in a new one, and who knows what life has in store for you.
As the saying goes, love is sometimes in the air—you just have to know where to look.
Who knows, a spark might just fly... Besides, loneliness, when embraced, can be deeply creative; we just need to learn to enjoy our own company.
Best regards.
September 4th, 2026 06:30
Closed door
NafisaSB said:
a wealth of grief in this beautiful poem - well described.
September 4th, 2026 02:18
NafisaSB said:
a wealth of grief in this beautiful poem - well described.
September 4th, 2026 02:18
A pill when you\'re ill
mylastwrites said:
I have extensive knowledge in what you write about. Great write. You hit it.
September 3rd, 2026 16:47
mylastwrites said:
I have extensive knowledge in what you write about. Great write. You hit it.
September 3rd, 2026 16:47
Desolate
Kevin Hulme said:
This is apparently, a sign of things to come.
The unfeeling Winter . A good Write.
September 3rd, 2026 10:39
Kevin Hulme said:
This is apparently, a sign of things to come.
The unfeeling Winter . A good Write.
September 3rd, 2026 10:39
Desolate
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a haunting piece, Soren. Every image deepens the cold isolation until the ending quietly reveals that renewal has been preserved beneath the barrenness...bleak, vivid, and ultimately hopeful. Excellent write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 3rd, 2026 10:34
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a haunting piece, Soren. Every image deepens the cold isolation until the ending quietly reveals that renewal has been preserved beneath the barrenness...bleak, vivid, and ultimately hopeful. Excellent write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 3rd, 2026 10:34
Values
Rhan Sterling Henry said:
Isn\'t poetic license great? Nice word play.
September 3rd, 2026 10:30
Rhan Sterling Henry said:
Isn\'t poetic license great? Nice word play.
September 3rd, 2026 10:30
Desolate
Paul Bell said:
I suppose in a way there\'s two loves.
The love that dies through time.
The love that goes to sleep through winter but comes alive in the spring.
September 3rd, 2026 07:44
Paul Bell said:
I suppose in a way there\'s two loves.
The love that dies through time.
The love that goes to sleep through winter but comes alive in the spring.
September 3rd, 2026 07:44
Desolate
soheil khodaparasti said:
Hauntingly beautiful—where love lies frozen, waiting for spring to breathe again.
September 3rd, 2026 03:29
soheil khodaparasti said:
Hauntingly beautiful—where love lies frozen, waiting for spring to breathe again.
September 3rd, 2026 03:29
Desolate
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Love like buses, one after another
September 3rd, 2026 03:25
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Love like buses, one after another
September 3rd, 2026 03:25
A pill when you\'re ill
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a blistering piece, Soren! You tear into the machinery that monetizes sickness while the people needing help are pushed further beneath it…angry, relentless, and painfully relevant. Powerful write, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 2nd, 2026 21:40
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a blistering piece, Soren! You tear into the machinery that monetizes sickness while the people needing help are pushed further beneath it…angry, relentless, and painfully relevant. Powerful write, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 2nd, 2026 21:40
A pill when you\'re ill
Kevin Hulme said:
\'Theres Gold in them there Ills\'. Your not wrong.
There\'s plenty of money to be made from being Ill. These People are Raking it in.
An enjoyable Write.
September 2nd, 2026 19:25
Kevin Hulme said:
\'Theres Gold in them there Ills\'. Your not wrong.
There\'s plenty of money to be made from being Ill. These People are Raking it in.
An enjoyable Write.
September 2nd, 2026 19:25
A pill when you\'re ill
Doggerel Dave said:
I have insulin dependent diabetes. The industry around that is staggering - even in a country midway between the UK and the\' States in terms of health care. Well writ, Soren.
The soren/soheil exchange (above) is well worth an extra read.
September 2nd, 2026 19:12
Doggerel Dave said:
I have insulin dependent diabetes. The industry around that is staggering - even in a country midway between the UK and the\' States in terms of health care. Well writ, Soren.
The soren/soheil exchange (above) is well worth an extra read.
September 2nd, 2026 19:12
A pill when you\'re ill
orchidee said:
Good write SB. I gave KP some weed - not THAT weed, but garden weeds for supper! heehee.
September 2nd, 2026 10:40
orchidee said:
Good write SB. I gave KP some weed - not THAT weed, but garden weeds for supper! heehee.
September 2nd, 2026 10:40
A pill when you\'re ill
Lorenz said:
the serial dispenser doesn\'t pay the bill !
September 2nd, 2026 10:13
Lorenz said:
the serial dispenser doesn\'t pay the bill !
September 2nd, 2026 10:13
A pill when you\'re ill
Paul Bell said:
Lets face it, it\'s not in the pharmaceutical industry\'s interests to get you healthy, that don\'t sell pills.
Doctors are no better, they give you five minutes of their time, give you a prescription for more pills.
Once upon a time fruit would be good for you, but even that\'s got drugs sprayed all over it.
We\'re doomed, all doomed.
September 2nd, 2026 08:15
Paul Bell said:
Lets face it, it\'s not in the pharmaceutical industry\'s interests to get you healthy, that don\'t sell pills.
Doctors are no better, they give you five minutes of their time, give you a prescription for more pills.
Once upon a time fruit would be good for you, but even that\'s got drugs sprayed all over it.
We\'re doomed, all doomed.
September 2nd, 2026 08:15
A pill when you\'re ill
arqios said:
The old Rx still making its rounds 🙏🏻🕊️
September 2nd, 2026 07:15
arqios said:
The old Rx still making its rounds 🙏🏻🕊️
September 2nd, 2026 07:15
A pill when you\'re ill
Syd said:
Hi Sorenbarret,
Fortunately here in England, the doctors don\'t prescribe strong opiods like they do in the US. I watched a very good series a couple of years ago called Dope Sick, it\'s about the Oxycontin epidemic. I recommend it if you ever have time.
A very good write.
- Syd 🍄
September 2nd, 2026 06:27
Syd said:
Hi Sorenbarret,
Fortunately here in England, the doctors don\'t prescribe strong opiods like they do in the US. I watched a very good series a couple of years ago called Dope Sick, it\'s about the Oxycontin epidemic. I recommend it if you ever have time.
A very good write.
- Syd 🍄
September 2nd, 2026 06:27
A pill when you\'re ill
soheil khodaparasti said:
A powerful and poignant critique of the healthcare system, exposing its corruption and profit-driven nature through scathing satire, a caustic tone, and vivid religious, gambling, and drug-related imagery.
September 2nd, 2026 03:39
soheil khodaparasti said:
A powerful and poignant critique of the healthcare system, exposing its corruption and profit-driven nature through scathing satire, a caustic tone, and vivid religious, gambling, and drug-related imagery.
September 2nd, 2026 03:39
A pill when you\'re ill
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
A definite fav my friend
September 2nd, 2026 03:23
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
A definite fav my friend
September 2nd, 2026 03:23
Too late
Neville said:
to suggest that this in its entirety is intriguing is an understatement .. to suggest anything less would be both completely wrong and a literary insult .. I like it a lot for what it evidently is and what it clearly is not .. Neville
September 2nd, 2026 01:35
Neville said:
to suggest that this in its entirety is intriguing is an understatement .. to suggest anything less would be both completely wrong and a literary insult .. I like it a lot for what it evidently is and what it clearly is not .. Neville
September 2nd, 2026 01:35
Too late
Kevin Hulme said:
I think we all relate to this Poem of Chances Missed. Let\'s look at what we have.
Enjoyed.
September 1st, 2026 18:26
Kevin Hulme said:
I think we all relate to this Poem of Chances Missed. Let\'s look at what we have.
Enjoyed.
September 1st, 2026 18:26
Too late
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a dark little piece, Soren. The missed chances keep stacking up until the whole poem feels like watching doors close one after another...and by the end, the timing itself becomes the tragedy. Excellent write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 1st, 2026 12:35
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a dark little piece, Soren. The missed chances keep stacking up until the whole poem feels like watching doors close one after another...and by the end, the timing itself becomes the tragedy. Excellent write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 1st, 2026 12:35
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