Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
State of mind
Kevin Hulme said:
A fine Poem on the Contrast of Mind and Body.
👍
July 27th, 2026 17:59
Kevin Hulme said:
A fine Poem on the Contrast of Mind and Body.
👍
July 27th, 2026 17:59
State of mind
Paul Bell said:
There\'s a realisation here that the end is soon, but also an acceptence of the situation.
The mind is moving into peace mode, and hopefully the end is a good one.
July 27th, 2026 15:38
Paul Bell said:
There\'s a realisation here that the end is soon, but also an acceptence of the situation.
The mind is moving into peace mode, and hopefully the end is a good one.
July 27th, 2026 15:38
State of mind
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this really moved me. The body is under siege, but the spirit refuses to surrender its sanctuary...a devastating reminder that illness never possesses the whole person. One hell of a powerful poem, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 27th, 2026 09:07
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this really moved me. The body is under siege, but the spirit refuses to surrender its sanctuary...a devastating reminder that illness never possesses the whole person. One hell of a powerful poem, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 27th, 2026 09:07
State of mind
orchidee said:
Good write SB but I feel woozy at the first two lines. A horrific disease to have. Yet finding peace, pleasantness, etc in the last two lines.
July 27th, 2026 08:13
orchidee said:
Good write SB but I feel woozy at the first two lines. A horrific disease to have. Yet finding peace, pleasantness, etc in the last two lines.
July 27th, 2026 08:13
State of mind
Friendship said:
The imagery you painted for me is of physical decay, which contrasts sharply with the serene mental landscapes, suggesting that even in dire circumstances, one can find solace and beauty.
July 27th, 2026 07:07
Friendship said:
The imagery you painted for me is of physical decay, which contrasts sharply with the serene mental landscapes, suggesting that even in dire circumstances, one can find solace and beauty.
July 27th, 2026 07:07
State of mind
David Wakeling said:
A very clever piece of optimism in the state of harsh reality. The mind has the amazing ability to adapt and survive.Enjoyable to read
July 27th, 2026 06:54
David Wakeling said:
A very clever piece of optimism in the state of harsh reality. The mind has the amazing ability to adapt and survive.Enjoyable to read
July 27th, 2026 06:54
State of mind
arqios said:
the state of the body reads like a metaphoric inversion of the state of mind. It could most possibly that the body is symbolic of suffering and the mind is the true condition hence the self is not where suffering occurs, but where renewal continues and lives on. 🙏🕊️
July 27th, 2026 05:08
arqios said:
the state of the body reads like a metaphoric inversion of the state of mind. It could most possibly that the body is symbolic of suffering and the mind is the true condition hence the self is not where suffering occurs, but where renewal continues and lives on. 🙏🕊️
July 27th, 2026 05:08
State of mind
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
a no nonsense write my friend, much enjoyed
July 27th, 2026 04:21
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
a no nonsense write my friend, much enjoyed
July 27th, 2026 04:21
Too much
Dan Williams said:
I see in this another of the all too common human deficits, disregard for genuine heroics.
July 27th, 2026 01:37
Dan Williams said:
I see in this another of the all too common human deficits, disregard for genuine heroics.
July 27th, 2026 01:37
Too much
Goldfinch60 said:
Giving to others can sometime have a drawback as well soren but it must still be done.
Andy
July 27th, 2026 01:05
Goldfinch60 said:
Giving to others can sometime have a drawback as well soren but it must still be done.
Andy
July 27th, 2026 01:05
Too much
Teddy.15 said:
My dear Sorrenbarret, darkly beautiful my friend. I know a woman like this. 💜
July 26th, 2026 23:53
Teddy.15 said:
My dear Sorrenbarret, darkly beautiful my friend. I know a woman like this. 💜
July 26th, 2026 23:53
Too much
James Michael said:
A common mistake amongst writers is to misspell losing as loosing. No worries, an interesting write overall.
I do hate myself for being a jerk! ChatGPT said that I am.
July 26th, 2026 19:44
James Michael said:
A common mistake amongst writers is to misspell losing as loosing. No worries, an interesting write overall.
I do hate myself for being a jerk! ChatGPT said that I am.
July 26th, 2026 19:44
Too much
David Wakeling said:
This is quite sad but a tale of loosing yourself in the needs of others.A common tale but tragic.I like the clever rhyme and the cadence is impeccable as usual compadre..
July 26th, 2026 19:33
David Wakeling said:
This is quite sad but a tale of loosing yourself in the needs of others.A common tale but tragic.I like the clever rhyme and the cadence is impeccable as usual compadre..
July 26th, 2026 19:33
Too much
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this hit me hard. There is nothing noble about disappearing beneath everyone else’s needs…and you expose that tragedy with brutal clarity. Powerful piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 26th, 2026 18:12
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this hit me hard. There is nothing noble about disappearing beneath everyone else’s needs…and you expose that tragedy with brutal clarity. Powerful piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 26th, 2026 18:12
Bouquet
mohammad ali said:
Marvelous, dear friend! I wonder how beautifully composed the dead truth.
July 26th, 2026 16:19
mohammad ali said:
Marvelous, dear friend! I wonder how beautifully composed the dead truth.
July 26th, 2026 16:19
Touch
mohammad ali said:
So beautifully composed and described, dear! I love it, the nostalgic feeling, the fascinating rhyming, and the heart-beating rhythm of the truth.
July 26th, 2026 15:13
mohammad ali said:
So beautifully composed and described, dear! I love it, the nostalgic feeling, the fascinating rhyming, and the heart-beating rhythm of the truth.
July 26th, 2026 15:13
Too much
Paul Bell said:
Some do play the martyr as if that\'s the role they\'ve been given in life.
The only thing is, once you start, people expect it from you, and in the end, you actually are the martyr.
July 26th, 2026 14:50
Paul Bell said:
Some do play the martyr as if that\'s the role they\'ve been given in life.
The only thing is, once you start, people expect it from you, and in the end, you actually are the martyr.
July 26th, 2026 14:50
Too much
orchidee said:
Good write SB.
Why, yes, I gave away most of KP\'s clothes. I said to her \'But I thought they were old rags, dear!\' lol.
July 26th, 2026 11:51
orchidee said:
Good write SB.
Why, yes, I gave away most of KP\'s clothes. I said to her \'But I thought they were old rags, dear!\' lol.
July 26th, 2026 11:51
Too much
Friendship said:
Your poem explores the theme of self-sacrifice and the consequences of giving too much of oneself to others. It reflects on the emotional and physical toll that such selflessness can take, ultimately leading to a loss of identity and well-being. This is a woman who dedicates her life to caring for her family and loved ones at the expense of her own needs and desires. The societal expectations placed on women to be selfless caregivers highlight the pain and emptiness that can accompany such a role.
July 26th, 2026 11:47
Friendship said:
Your poem explores the theme of self-sacrifice and the consequences of giving too much of oneself to others. It reflects on the emotional and physical toll that such selflessness can take, ultimately leading to a loss of identity and well-being. This is a woman who dedicates her life to caring for her family and loved ones at the expense of her own needs and desires. The societal expectations placed on women to be selfless caregivers highlight the pain and emptiness that can accompany such a role.
July 26th, 2026 11:47
Too much
Kevin Hulme said:
There are some Selfless People about. They do some good Work : but make sure you keep sight of Yourself every now and then.
Good Write.
July 26th, 2026 11:46
Kevin Hulme said:
There are some Selfless People about. They do some good Work : but make sure you keep sight of Yourself every now and then.
Good Write.
July 26th, 2026 11:46
Too much
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a hard, unflinching look at devotion turned into self-erasure, where giving becomes a slow kind of burning.
It aches with the cost of love without balance, leaving behind a quiet warning stitched into every line.
July 26th, 2026 08:09
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a hard, unflinching look at devotion turned into self-erasure, where giving becomes a slow kind of burning.
It aches with the cost of love without balance, leaving behind a quiet warning stitched into every line.
July 26th, 2026 08:09
Too much
arqios said:
Reminds me of mom. She disappeared from self too soon. 🙏🕊️
July 26th, 2026 07:30
arqios said:
Reminds me of mom. She disappeared from self too soon. 🙏🕊️
July 26th, 2026 07:30
Too much
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
some are too generous for their own good my friend, much enjoyed
July 26th, 2026 03:54
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
some are too generous for their own good my friend, much enjoyed
July 26th, 2026 03:54
Too much
2781 said:
Not sure about the last line but I read that greatest among you will be your servant.
July 26th, 2026 03:23
2781 said:
Not sure about the last line but I read that greatest among you will be your servant.
July 26th, 2026 03:23
No direction
Joseph M Marion said:
Very deeply written a parable to life how things can become set in stone to disciplines and to forgetting and love the way you write
July 25th, 2026 19:41
Joseph M Marion said:
Very deeply written a parable to life how things can become set in stone to disciplines and to forgetting and love the way you write
July 25th, 2026 19:41
Stain of the past
Teddy.15 said:
Perspective to see the positive even when it\'s dark, I see it, sorrenbarret you\'re a genius 🌹
July 25th, 2026 17:25
Teddy.15 said:
Perspective to see the positive even when it\'s dark, I see it, sorrenbarret you\'re a genius 🌹
July 25th, 2026 17:25
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