Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
History according to the administration
Tristan Robert Lange said:
All of that and more! Damn. One cannot make it up, but it is happening real time and...truthfully...I fear that is all just the tip of the iceberg. What\'s going on that we aren\'t aware of? That question has always existed, but now it is juiced up on steroids. Poignant, powerful, observational, and direct. Exactly what a poem of this caliber ought to be. Well done, my friend! ๐๐ฆโโฌ๐ค
March 25th, 2025 08:00
Tristan Robert Lange said:
All of that and more! Damn. One cannot make it up, but it is happening real time and...truthfully...I fear that is all just the tip of the iceberg. What\'s going on that we aren\'t aware of? That question has always existed, but now it is juiced up on steroids. Poignant, powerful, observational, and direct. Exactly what a poem of this caliber ought to be. Well done, my friend! ๐๐ฆโโฌ๐ค
March 25th, 2025 08:00
History according to the administration
Friendship said:
Well written, your poem provides a critical commentary on the perceived absurdities and dangers of the Trump administration\'s approach to governance, using satire to provoke thought and discussion about these issues.
March 25th, 2025 07:49
Friendship said:
Well written, your poem provides a critical commentary on the perceived absurdities and dangers of the Trump administration\'s approach to governance, using satire to provoke thought and discussion about these issues.
March 25th, 2025 07:49
History according to the administration
Poetic Licence said:
Well that fits like a glove to what I released today, when you at what he has achieved so far aren\'t we all looking forward to the next few years!!!, by the time he has finished if allowed to, we will not recognize the world we live in, great write
March 25th, 2025 05:40
Poetic Licence said:
Well that fits like a glove to what I released today, when you at what he has achieved so far aren\'t we all looking forward to the next few years!!!, by the time he has finished if allowed to, we will not recognize the world we live in, great write
March 25th, 2025 05:40
History according to the administration
David Wakeling said:
Oh my God there is a lunatic in the White House. Probably not the first time. I mean Nixon abd bush were a whackjobs. I am certain that Trump will be assassinated so no need to worry.An impoertant poem.Made me aware
March 25th, 2025 05:17
David Wakeling said:
Oh my God there is a lunatic in the White House. Probably not the first time. I mean Nixon abd bush were a whackjobs. I am certain that Trump will be assassinated so no need to worry.An impoertant poem.Made me aware
March 25th, 2025 05:17
History according to the administration
arqios said:
Alice has got nothing to this wonderland, and the wonders never cease๐๐๐ป
March 25th, 2025 04:05
arqios said:
Alice has got nothing to this wonderland, and the wonders never cease๐๐๐ป
March 25th, 2025 04:05
Winged shoes or meat mittens
Goldfinch60 said:
We must survive and hopefully one day peace and love will be all around our world soren.
Andy
March 25th, 2025 02:46
Goldfinch60 said:
We must survive and hopefully one day peace and love will be all around our world soren.
Andy
March 25th, 2025 02:46
Winged shoes or meat mittens
GenXer Shamrocker โ๏ธ said:
Well penned. Always love reading your work
March 24th, 2025 13:24
GenXer Shamrocker โ๏ธ said:
Well penned. Always love reading your work
March 24th, 2025 13:24
Winged shoes or meat mittens
FredPeyer said:
Great poem, beautifully written and I love the rhyming. Somehow (don\'t ask why, the mind is a curious thing) the lyrics of the song \'the gambler\' by Kenny Rogers popped into my head when reading. \"Know when to hold, know when to fold....\"
March 24th, 2025 10:33
FredPeyer said:
Great poem, beautifully written and I love the rhyming. Somehow (don\'t ask why, the mind is a curious thing) the lyrics of the song \'the gambler\' by Kenny Rogers popped into my head when reading. \"Know when to hold, know when to fold....\"
March 24th, 2025 10:33
Hands that grasp
Tom Dylan said:
A thought-provoking piece. Thanks for sharing.
March 24th, 2025 08:30
Tom Dylan said:
A thought-provoking piece. Thanks for sharing.
March 24th, 2025 08:30
Winged shoes or meat mittens
Friendship said:
Well written, I enjoy the title of your poem,sorenbarrett,Your poem revolves around the instinctual responses to dangerโfight or flightโand the contemplation of survival strategies. The speaker reflects on their choice not to engage in confrontation or escape, opting for passive survival. Your lesson is to know the different responses to fear and danger, encouraging reflection on human instinct\'s complexities.
March 24th, 2025 07:05
Friendship said:
Well written, I enjoy the title of your poem,sorenbarrett,Your poem revolves around the instinctual responses to dangerโfight or flightโand the contemplation of survival strategies. The speaker reflects on their choice not to engage in confrontation or escape, opting for passive survival. Your lesson is to know the different responses to fear and danger, encouraging reflection on human instinct\'s complexities.
March 24th, 2025 07:05
Winged shoes or meat mittens
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This flows so beautifully, the rhyming, the internal rhyming. Beautiful. As for me, I used to think I would have no courage when I was younger but it turns out I am much more meat mittens than winged shoes. Still, I have also found myself sitting like stone...and you\'re right, regardless of the way chosen, you either survive or you don\'t! Part luck and part how good you are at your choice. Well done on this, Soren. A fave for sure! ๐น๐
March 24th, 2025 06:59
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This flows so beautifully, the rhyming, the internal rhyming. Beautiful. As for me, I used to think I would have no courage when I was younger but it turns out I am much more meat mittens than winged shoes. Still, I have also found myself sitting like stone...and you\'re right, regardless of the way chosen, you either survive or you don\'t! Part luck and part how good you are at your choice. Well done on this, Soren. A fave for sure! ๐น๐
March 24th, 2025 06:59
Winged shoes or meat mittens
Poetic Licence said:
The write got with the wonderful title, enjoyed the read
March 24th, 2025 05:49
Poetic Licence said:
The write got with the wonderful title, enjoyed the read
March 24th, 2025 05:49
Winged shoes or meat mittens
David Wakeling said:
This is remarkable.So well constructed.The rhyme and cadence are impectible.Well done commendatore
March 24th, 2025 05:13
David Wakeling said:
This is remarkable.So well constructed.The rhyme and cadence are impectible.Well done commendatore
March 24th, 2025 05:13
Winged shoes or meat mittens
arqios said:
Or in my case, sometimes freeze, maybe more so when I was younger๐๐ป๐๏ธ
March 24th, 2025 03:40
arqios said:
Or in my case, sometimes freeze, maybe more so when I was younger๐๐ป๐๏ธ
March 24th, 2025 03:40
Hands that grasp
Goldfinch60 said:
Such true words soren, rancour must not exist in life.
Andy
March 24th, 2025 02:43
Goldfinch60 said:
Such true words soren, rancour must not exist in life.
Andy
March 24th, 2025 02:43
Too bad (metaphor)
Accidental Poet said:
A sad way to win, a sad way to loose. But a wonderful way to have a war. Great write soren. ๐๐
March 23rd, 2025 22:36
Accidental Poet said:
A sad way to win, a sad way to loose. But a wonderful way to have a war. Great write soren. ๐๐
March 23rd, 2025 22:36
Too bad (metaphor)
whats write for me said:
A wonderful lyrical write. Very enjoyable.
March 23rd, 2025 09:20
whats write for me said:
A wonderful lyrical write. Very enjoyable.
March 23rd, 2025 09:20
Hands that grasp
Salvia.S said:
Powerful and thought-provoking! Your poem masterfully explores the destructive nature of jealousy and the liberating power of forgiveness and love.
March 23rd, 2025 07:45
Salvia.S said:
Powerful and thought-provoking! Your poem masterfully explores the destructive nature of jealousy and the liberating power of forgiveness and love.
March 23rd, 2025 07:45
Hands that grasp
RSM0812 said:
Visually astonishing. It captures so many emotions nicely. My favorite of the day.
March 23rd, 2025 07:09
RSM0812 said:
Visually astonishing. It captures so many emotions nicely. My favorite of the day.
March 23rd, 2025 07:09
Hands that grasp
Friendship said:
the nature of love and the transformative power of forgiveness, A powerful painting, sorenbarrett, Your poem seems to explore the destructive nature of jealousy and ownership in relationships, contrasting it with the liberating power of forgiveness. It critiques the possessive aspects of love, suggesting that true love should be free and unencumbered by greed, revenge, and hate. You serve to provoke thought about the nature of love and the importance of forgiveness, encouraging readers to reflect on their own relationships and emotional struggles
March 23rd, 2025 06:52
Friendship said:
the nature of love and the transformative power of forgiveness, A powerful painting, sorenbarrett, Your poem seems to explore the destructive nature of jealousy and ownership in relationships, contrasting it with the liberating power of forgiveness. It critiques the possessive aspects of love, suggesting that true love should be free and unencumbered by greed, revenge, and hate. You serve to provoke thought about the nature of love and the importance of forgiveness, encouraging readers to reflect on their own relationships and emotional struggles
March 23rd, 2025 06:52
Hands that grasp
Poetic Licence said:
That will put the cat among the pigeons, jealously, love, hate, control, for some controlling the green eyed monster is incredibly difficult, are they seeking or expecting forgiveness, one to ponder over my Sunday cup of tea, enjoyed
March 23rd, 2025 05:38
Poetic Licence said:
That will put the cat among the pigeons, jealously, love, hate, control, for some controlling the green eyed monster is incredibly difficult, are they seeking or expecting forgiveness, one to ponder over my Sunday cup of tea, enjoyed
March 23rd, 2025 05:38
Hands that grasp
David Wakeling said:
Jealousy,Love Hate and Forgiveness.This poem has it all. Well done.
March 23rd, 2025 04:59
David Wakeling said:
Jealousy,Love Hate and Forgiveness.This poem has it all. Well done.
March 23rd, 2025 04:59
Hands that grasp
arqios said:
Makes one wonder and ponder with much interest wherein the metaphor lies and points. ๐๐ป๐
March 23rd, 2025 03:50
arqios said:
Makes one wonder and ponder with much interest wherein the metaphor lies and points. ๐๐ป๐
March 23rd, 2025 03:50
Too bad (metaphor)
Goldfinch60 said:
It can be so awful when others don\'t show up soren but go away believing you are better than them as you were there.
Andy
March 23rd, 2025 02:31
Goldfinch60 said:
It can be so awful when others don\'t show up soren but go away believing you are better than them as you were there.
Andy
March 23rd, 2025 02:31
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