Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Life
cully45 said:
Thanks Soren as usual your comments are much appreciated . regards Owen
August 28th, 2026 07:58
cully45 said:
Thanks Soren as usual your comments are much appreciated . regards Owen
August 28th, 2026 07:58
Old door
soheil khodaparasti said:
A beautiful and poignant reflection. The door becomes more than wood—it carries a century of stories, scars, and memories. Sometimes what is worn and weathered is precisely what makes something worth preserving.
August 28th, 2026 07:40
soheil khodaparasti said:
A beautiful and poignant reflection. The door becomes more than wood—it carries a century of stories, scars, and memories. Sometimes what is worn and weathered is precisely what makes something worth preserving.
August 28th, 2026 07:40
Old door
delusions said:
Something is haunting about giving decay a structure, then letting the silence around it become part of the testimony. The door feels less like an object and more like a witness that outlived its own language.
Well written
August 28th, 2026 03:55
delusions said:
Something is haunting about giving decay a structure, then letting the silence around it become part of the testimony. The door feels less like an object and more like a witness that outlived its own language.
Well written
August 28th, 2026 03:55
Traitor
soheil khodaparasti said:
A powerful reflection on betrayal and the question of whether a person is destined to become infamous or simply shaped by their choices.
August 27th, 2026 22:06
soheil khodaparasti said:
A powerful reflection on betrayal and the question of whether a person is destined to become infamous or simply shaped by their choices.
August 27th, 2026 22:06
Magic
soheil khodaparasti said:
A beautiful description of a mysterious, enchanted forest where reality becomes distorted and the natural world takes on supernatural qualities.
August 27th, 2026 22:01
soheil khodaparasti said:
A beautiful description of a mysterious, enchanted forest where reality becomes distorted and the natural world takes on supernatural qualities.
August 27th, 2026 22:01
Magic
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, what a wonderfully strange journey. The beauty keeps drawing us deeper while the growing unease warns that we may already have gone too far. It brings back the mysterious woods of childhood imagination, only with something much darker waiting beneath them. Fantastic write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 27th, 2026 16:28
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, what a wonderfully strange journey. The beauty keeps drawing us deeper while the growing unease warns that we may already have gone too far. It brings back the mysterious woods of childhood imagination, only with something much darker waiting beneath them. Fantastic write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 27th, 2026 16:28
Magic
Kevin Hulme said:
Good wordplay. Paints a fine Picture for the Mind. The Countryside and Woods are very Therapeutic.
August 27th, 2026 10:12
Kevin Hulme said:
Good wordplay. Paints a fine Picture for the Mind. The Countryside and Woods are very Therapeutic.
August 27th, 2026 10:12
Magic
Lorenz said:
I venture off the trail to take a chance on magic ! Maybe risky poetry...
August 27th, 2026 09:49
Lorenz said:
I venture off the trail to take a chance on magic ! Maybe risky poetry...
August 27th, 2026 09:49
Magic
orchidee said:
Good write SB. KP\'s nicked me magic wand! lol. She\'s gonna change the sewage into roast dinners and scoff the lot.
August 27th, 2026 09:15
orchidee said:
Good write SB. KP\'s nicked me magic wand! lol. She\'s gonna change the sewage into roast dinners and scoff the lot.
August 27th, 2026 09:15
Magic
Jamiano said:
\"Butterflies erupt into flight\". Great imagery of communal flight.
August 27th, 2026 04:23
Jamiano said:
\"Butterflies erupt into flight\". Great imagery of communal flight.
August 27th, 2026 04:23
Magic
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
A very dream like imagery much enjoyed
August 27th, 2026 04:01
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
A very dream like imagery much enjoyed
August 27th, 2026 04:01
Magic
delusions said:
The imagery in this is genuinely haunting. “animals turn into sticks” and “butterflies erupt into flight” are such strange, beautiful images, and the whole poem feels like wandering somewhere you really shouldn’t be. Very nice
August 27th, 2026 03:56
delusions said:
The imagery in this is genuinely haunting. “animals turn into sticks” and “butterflies erupt into flight” are such strange, beautiful images, and the whole poem feels like wandering somewhere you really shouldn’t be. Very nice
August 27th, 2026 03:56
Traitor
Kevin Hulme said:
Quite a Rogues Gallery.
As for the Cause\'s? It\'s all debatable.
A good Write.
August 26th, 2026 20:35
Kevin Hulme said:
Quite a Rogues Gallery.
As for the Cause\'s? It\'s all debatable.
A good Write.
August 26th, 2026 20:35
Values
rrodriguez said:
Soren, this sounds like the Ten Commandments being reduced to a fable. What you have written carries the message of a society that has lowered God’s commands to a lesser level—something once sacred and authoritative now treated as an ancient story or artifact. I find the imagery powerful and thought-provoking. Thank you for sharing. Be blessed!
August 26th, 2026 18:50
rrodriguez said:
Soren, this sounds like the Ten Commandments being reduced to a fable. What you have written carries the message of a society that has lowered God’s commands to a lesser level—something once sacred and authoritative now treated as an ancient story or artifact. I find the imagery powerful and thought-provoking. Thank you for sharing. Be blessed!
August 26th, 2026 18:50
Traitor
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, I often wonder where moral collapse truly begins. One decision may define a life forever, but countless unseen choices usually lead toward it. This left me thinking, Soren. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 26th, 2026 15:55
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, I often wonder where moral collapse truly begins. One decision may define a life forever, but countless unseen choices usually lead toward it. This left me thinking, Soren. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 26th, 2026 15:55
You will be offended
Syd said:
Hi Sorenbarret, there\'s me worried at times that some of my writes are a bit risqué 😂
Cheese hog? I love that one, I\'ll have to pinch it. And Fugly? I\'ll have to change the name of our dog. It\'s a pug, you see, and... you get it.
The whole thing is quite unhinged, which is right up my street. I especially like the last stanza.
- Syd 🍄
August 26th, 2026 14:43
Syd said:
Hi Sorenbarret, there\'s me worried at times that some of my writes are a bit risqué 😂
Cheese hog? I love that one, I\'ll have to pinch it. And Fugly? I\'ll have to change the name of our dog. It\'s a pug, you see, and... you get it.
The whole thing is quite unhinged, which is right up my street. I especially like the last stanza.
- Syd 🍄
August 26th, 2026 14:43
Traitor
Lorenz said:
In my opinion that poor Judas did the dirty job for 30 bucks ...
August 26th, 2026 09:15
Lorenz said:
In my opinion that poor Judas did the dirty job for 30 bucks ...
August 26th, 2026 09:15
Closed door
Doggerel Dave said:
The feeling of loss as a relationship, a part of you is no more. Emptiness well expressed there, Soren.
August 26th, 2026 07:23
Doggerel Dave said:
The feeling of loss as a relationship, a part of you is no more. Emptiness well expressed there, Soren.
August 26th, 2026 07:23
Traitor
David Wakeling said:
An interesting essay on nature vs nuture and destiny.Made me think about betrayal
August 26th, 2026 06:26
David Wakeling said:
An interesting essay on nature vs nuture and destiny.Made me think about betrayal
August 26th, 2026 06:26
Traitor
David Wakeling said:
An interesting piece that raises the question of nature vs nuture,Fascinating
August 26th, 2026 06:24
David Wakeling said:
An interesting piece that raises the question of nature vs nuture,Fascinating
August 26th, 2026 06:24
Right off the shelf
cully45 said:
Short but to the point liked it a lot. Regards Owen
August 26th, 2026 05:09
cully45 said:
Short but to the point liked it a lot. Regards Owen
August 26th, 2026 05:09
Traitor
Teddy.15 said:
lol I did have a chuckle 🤭 wonderful dear sorrenbarret timeless and most amusing. 🌹
August 26th, 2026 03:26
Teddy.15 said:
lol I did have a chuckle 🤭 wonderful dear sorrenbarret timeless and most amusing. 🌹
August 26th, 2026 03:26
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