Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Choices of when and where
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Great title for this poem. Soren…that lack of direction…no signs, no timing…that’s what really drives this. It keeps everything unsettled in a way that lands. Well done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 14th, 2026 09:02
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Great title for this poem. Soren…that lack of direction…no signs, no timing…that’s what really drives this. It keeps everything unsettled in a way that lands. Well done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 14th, 2026 09:02
Choices of when and where
orchidee said:
Good write SB.
Meanwhile, KP will never starve - plenty of sewage around! heehee.
April 14th, 2026 08:09
orchidee said:
Good write SB.
Meanwhile, KP will never starve - plenty of sewage around! heehee.
April 14th, 2026 08:09
Choices of when and where
Friendship said:
You painted, the pressures of making choices and fulfilling responsibilities, with a sense of uncertainty. nicely done Soren
April 14th, 2026 07:38
Friendship said:
You painted, the pressures of making choices and fulfilling responsibilities, with a sense of uncertainty. nicely done Soren
April 14th, 2026 07:38
Choices of when and where
Thomas W Case said:
Gritty and urgent—pressure building with no clear way out.
The tension rides hard, duty pushing forward against the unknown.
April 14th, 2026 07:15
Thomas W Case said:
Gritty and urgent—pressure building with no clear way out.
The tension rides hard, duty pushing forward against the unknown.
April 14th, 2026 07:15
Choices of when and where
Katie B. said:
To me, this is life. We are on one path, we don\'t know where we are going and no one gives us directions. We are on our own to figure out the destination and it\'s important we get there in a timely manner.
April 14th, 2026 06:27
Katie B. said:
To me, this is life. We are on one path, we don\'t know where we are going and no one gives us directions. We are on our own to figure out the destination and it\'s important we get there in a timely manner.
April 14th, 2026 06:27
Choices of when and where
Abdullah123 said:
Great write. If you could just tell me where to go exactly, it would save me some brainpower wouldn\'t it?
April 14th, 2026 04:56
Abdullah123 said:
Great write. If you could just tell me where to go exactly, it would save me some brainpower wouldn\'t it?
April 14th, 2026 04:56
Choices of when and where
Lorenz said:
In a timely fashion somewhere in the fishbowl .
April 14th, 2026 04:43
Lorenz said:
In a timely fashion somewhere in the fishbowl .
April 14th, 2026 04:43
Choices of when and where
Priya Tomar said:
The poem describes sense of uncertainty....
Nicely done .
April 14th, 2026 04:18
Priya Tomar said:
The poem describes sense of uncertainty....
Nicely done .
April 14th, 2026 04:18
Choices of when and where
Teddy.15 said:
Kudos, on the emotion and the trauma 🌹
April 14th, 2026 04:08
Teddy.15 said:
Kudos, on the emotion and the trauma 🌹
April 14th, 2026 04:08
Levels
Goldfinch60 said:
The rules of life will always change soren but they will always eventually change for the better.
Andy
April 14th, 2026 01:17
Goldfinch60 said:
The rules of life will always change soren but they will always eventually change for the better.
Andy
April 14th, 2026 01:17
Rebellion
Sviatoslav Zhabotynskyi said:
Good poem, you do this very well. It feels close to me.
April 14th, 2026 00:23
Sviatoslav Zhabotynskyi said:
Good poem, you do this very well. It feels close to me.
April 14th, 2026 00:23
Levels
thinkerbell said:
A great meditation on the complexity of the human mind
April 14th, 2026 00:19
thinkerbell said:
A great meditation on the complexity of the human mind
April 14th, 2026 00:19
Sensations
Sviatoslav Zhabotynskyi said:
It feels like there is something alive and true in this rough atmosphere.
April 14th, 2026 00:18
Sviatoslav Zhabotynskyi said:
It feels like there is something alive and true in this rough atmosphere.
April 14th, 2026 00:18
Resciprocity’s warning
Sviatoslav Zhabotynskyi said:
This is very good fire-starting.
April 14th, 2026 00:12
Sviatoslav Zhabotynskyi said:
This is very good fire-starting.
April 14th, 2026 00:12
Levels
cellinic said:
This is really very brilliant, sensible and emotional. A fave, my friend.
April 13th, 2026 19:25
cellinic said:
This is really very brilliant, sensible and emotional. A fave, my friend.
April 13th, 2026 19:25
Levels
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren… I’ve wrestled with that space where things don’t divide cleanly…where everything blends and resists definition. This brings that feeling through clearly. Well written, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 13th, 2026 08:39
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren… I’ve wrestled with that space where things don’t divide cleanly…where everything blends and resists definition. This brings that feeling through clearly. Well written, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 13th, 2026 08:39
Levels
Friendship said:
Nicely said . Your poem aims to provoke thought and reflection on the nature of reality, the fluidity of perception, and the complexity of humans.
April 13th, 2026 07:06
Friendship said:
Nicely said . Your poem aims to provoke thought and reflection on the nature of reality, the fluidity of perception, and the complexity of humans.
April 13th, 2026 07:06
Levels
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
a great write, arent we all a little mad ?
April 13th, 2026 06:36
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
a great write, arent we all a little mad ?
April 13th, 2026 06:36
Levels
Abdullah123 said:
Love the last 2 lines. This poem really challenges the boundaries we have made. Beautifully penned, a fave.
April 13th, 2026 06:20
Abdullah123 said:
Love the last 2 lines. This poem really challenges the boundaries we have made. Beautifully penned, a fave.
April 13th, 2026 06:20
Levels
arqios said:
What is reality and what conduits does it go through and get interpreted, sometimes it feels like a lot is left to chance and too many factors. But that’s just me being slung from this engaging poem🙏🏻🕊️
April 13th, 2026 05:53
arqios said:
What is reality and what conduits does it go through and get interpreted, sometimes it feels like a lot is left to chance and too many factors. But that’s just me being slung from this engaging poem🙏🏻🕊️
April 13th, 2026 05:53
Levels
Lorenz said:
Sometimes you have to accept
to following the path of genius
in order to survive the fools .
April 13th, 2026 05:22
Lorenz said:
Sometimes you have to accept
to following the path of genius
in order to survive the fools .
April 13th, 2026 05:22
Levels
orchidee said:
Good write SB. Yes, it\'s said that in autism, etc, the brain may go into some sort of overload.
On a lighter level, KP insults me, and says to me \'No danger there then of your brain going into overload; you\'ve only got 3 brain cells!\' Just for saying that, extra helpings of sewage for you today KP. Even then I\'m still being too generous - all that protein, nourishment, etc, that I feed ya! lol.
April 13th, 2026 03:27
orchidee said:
Good write SB. Yes, it\'s said that in autism, etc, the brain may go into some sort of overload.
On a lighter level, KP insults me, and says to me \'No danger there then of your brain going into overload; you\'ve only got 3 brain cells!\' Just for saying that, extra helpings of sewage for you today KP. Even then I\'m still being too generous - all that protein, nourishment, etc, that I feed ya! lol.
April 13th, 2026 03:27
Oncoming traffic
Kevin Hulme said:
Friendship\'s Review said it for me . You could also add in drivers that don\'t indicate when turning . An unexpected event in life that could mean. Liked it.
April 12th, 2026 18:54
Kevin Hulme said:
Friendship\'s Review said it for me . You could also add in drivers that don\'t indicate when turning . An unexpected event in life that could mean. Liked it.
April 12th, 2026 18:54
Gift return
Doggerel Dave said:
Somehow I missed this (time zones and all).
The word forgiveness is fine, but what does it mean? Something delivered to the transgressor? Do they deserve it? Where does the anger go? Not internalised, it is better out there until it dissipates.
April 12th, 2026 17:43
Doggerel Dave said:
Somehow I missed this (time zones and all).
The word forgiveness is fine, but what does it mean? Something delivered to the transgressor? Do they deserve it? Where does the anger go? Not internalised, it is better out there until it dissipates.
April 12th, 2026 17:43
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