Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Bones
Friendship said:
Enjoy your writing. Your poem reflects on the themes of love, hate, memory, and the haunting presence of the past.
October 21st, 2026 07:54
Friendship said:
Enjoy your writing. Your poem reflects on the themes of love, hate, memory, and the haunting presence of the past.
October 21st, 2026 07:54
Bones
Paul Bell said:
The big fight live. God v Satan, and a knockout for God wins the day.
Religion, the word always portrays love, but for some reason, a lot of people always die around it.
Not a lot has changed it seems.
October 21st, 2026 07:53
Paul Bell said:
The big fight live. God v Satan, and a knockout for God wins the day.
Religion, the word always portrays love, but for some reason, a lot of people always die around it.
Not a lot has changed it seems.
October 21st, 2026 07:53
Pussy
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write soren which shows that the strong in nature can win but is it right?
Andy
October 21st, 2026 01:11
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write soren which shows that the strong in nature can win but is it right?
Andy
October 21st, 2026 01:11
Pussy
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Damn, Soren! Nature can be downright brutal, can\'t it? Certainly not the Disney version of the animal kingdom! LOL! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 20th, 2026 16:00
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Damn, Soren! Nature can be downright brutal, can\'t it? Certainly not the Disney version of the animal kingdom! LOL! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 20th, 2026 16:00
Pussy
Teddy.15 said:
😺 meow lol 🤣 sorrenbarret did your mother never tell you it was rude to use the word pussy 😂 this is like porno for cats!
October 20th, 2026 10:36
Teddy.15 said:
😺 meow lol 🤣 sorrenbarret did your mother never tell you it was rude to use the word pussy 😂 this is like porno for cats!
October 20th, 2026 10:36
Pussy
Kevin Hulme said:
There\'s times when I hear a Cat Squalling in the Night. And it\'s not Sounding like \'Memory\' either.
This Poem could also relate- Sadly - to Human Behaviour.
Good Write.
October 20th, 2026 09:42
Kevin Hulme said:
There\'s times when I hear a Cat Squalling in the Night. And it\'s not Sounding like \'Memory\' either.
This Poem could also relate- Sadly - to Human Behaviour.
Good Write.
October 20th, 2026 09:42
Pussy
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Soren,
The purring pussycat we\'ve come to know and love, but when it comes to mating, the claws are out, there\'s no romance here, brutal and unforgiving. A pet that\'s wild at heart in another fine poem from your wonderful insight into the ways of nature.
Wishing you much happiness, my friend,
Tony.
October 20th, 2026 09:33
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Soren,
The purring pussycat we\'ve come to know and love, but when it comes to mating, the claws are out, there\'s no romance here, brutal and unforgiving. A pet that\'s wild at heart in another fine poem from your wonderful insight into the ways of nature.
Wishing you much happiness, my friend,
Tony.
October 20th, 2026 09:33
Cheese
apete90 said:
I especially liked \"a little taste of constipated maternal heaven\" it summarizes or gets to a bottom line and the imagery in this gives a vivid familiarity.
October 20th, 2026 08:07
apete90 said:
I especially liked \"a little taste of constipated maternal heaven\" it summarizes or gets to a bottom line and the imagery in this gives a vivid familiarity.
October 20th, 2026 08:07
Pussy
Friendship said:
Well written. The poem\'s language is vivid and evocative, with a clear emphasis on the physical and instinctual aspects of mating. Your phrase “nature\'s romance is a rape” serves as a powerful metaphor for the often brutal realities of reproduction in the animal kingdom.
October 20th, 2026 07:49
Friendship said:
Well written. The poem\'s language is vivid and evocative, with a clear emphasis on the physical and instinctual aspects of mating. Your phrase “nature\'s romance is a rape” serves as a powerful metaphor for the often brutal realities of reproduction in the animal kingdom.
October 20th, 2026 07:49
Pussy
Thomas W Case said:
Brilliant. There’s a deliberately unsettling collision here between the language of seduction and the harsh mechanics of animal instinct, with the poem turning a familiar mating call into something much darker by confronting the difference between biological drive and genuine consent. The keeper is “nature\'s romance is a rape,” because that final line strips away the romantic language that came before it, forcing the reader to face the disturbing gap between how nature is often described and what the vulnerable creature may actually endure. One of my cats is in heat now. She dives me crazy. lol
October 20th, 2026 06:26
Thomas W Case said:
Brilliant. There’s a deliberately unsettling collision here between the language of seduction and the harsh mechanics of animal instinct, with the poem turning a familiar mating call into something much darker by confronting the difference between biological drive and genuine consent. The keeper is “nature\'s romance is a rape,” because that final line strips away the romantic language that came before it, forcing the reader to face the disturbing gap between how nature is often described and what the vulnerable creature may actually endure. One of my cats is in heat now. She dives me crazy. lol
October 20th, 2026 06:26
Pussy
Paul Bell said:
Nature dictates the strong get the spoils, and this seems to be excepted by the females.
Though when you see two animals practically kill themselves to mate with a female, you might be thinking, that female sure has a lot of power.
October 20th, 2026 05:46
Paul Bell said:
Nature dictates the strong get the spoils, and this seems to be excepted by the females.
Though when you see two animals practically kill themselves to mate with a female, you might be thinking, that female sure has a lot of power.
October 20th, 2026 05:46
Pussy
orchidee said:
Good write SB. Aww, why they say to me: \'Are you singing or is that two cats fighting?\' lol.
October 20th, 2026 05:22
orchidee said:
Good write SB. Aww, why they say to me: \'Are you singing or is that two cats fighting?\' lol.
October 20th, 2026 05:22
Black Widow
Tristan Robert Lange said:
SCARLETT JOHANSSON!!! Sorry, Soren, that\'s literally where my brain went the moment I saw your title! LOL! And frankly, I wasn\'t disappointed by the mental image OR the poem! Though I\'m suddenly feeling considerably less adventurous about dating in the arachnid kingdom! 🤣🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 19th, 2026 23:02
Tristan Robert Lange said:
SCARLETT JOHANSSON!!! Sorry, Soren, that\'s literally where my brain went the moment I saw your title! LOL! And frankly, I wasn\'t disappointed by the mental image OR the poem! Though I\'m suddenly feeling considerably less adventurous about dating in the arachnid kingdom! 🤣🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 19th, 2026 23:02
Black Widow
Kevin Hulme said:
Reminds me of the Scene in \'The Incredible Shrinking Man: Shiver\'s.
A going Metaphor.
October 19th, 2026 19:00
Kevin Hulme said:
Reminds me of the Scene in \'The Incredible Shrinking Man: Shiver\'s.
A going Metaphor.
October 19th, 2026 19:00
Black Widow
Teddy.15 said:
One of my worst fears to meet the black widow 🕷️ a wonderful poem my dear friend. 🌹
October 19th, 2026 12:13
Teddy.15 said:
One of my worst fears to meet the black widow 🕷️ a wonderful poem my dear friend. 🌹
October 19th, 2026 12:13
Black Widow
Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS said:
Sometimes we go hunting, only to be hunted... among the fabrics and sheets lie true, enticing traps... made to fall into
October 19th, 2026 11:06
Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS said:
Sometimes we go hunting, only to be hunted... among the fabrics and sheets lie true, enticing traps... made to fall into
October 19th, 2026 11:06
Black Widow
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Soren,
To see the danger and yet enter her realm. The overwhelming power of lust and the temptress\'s skill of seduction to please both her desire and hunger. Talk about two birds with the one stone. Fine dining this one, Soren.
Fond regards,
Tony.
October 19th, 2026 10:56
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Soren,
To see the danger and yet enter her realm. The overwhelming power of lust and the temptress\'s skill of seduction to please both her desire and hunger. Talk about two birds with the one stone. Fine dining this one, Soren.
Fond regards,
Tony.
October 19th, 2026 10:56
Black Widow
orchidee said:
Good write SB. I might swoon at the last line! heehee.
October 19th, 2026 08:16
orchidee said:
Good write SB. I might swoon at the last line! heehee.
October 19th, 2026 08:16
Black Widow
Friendship said:
Well done, you use the metaphor of the black widow spider—known for its lethal mating habits—to illustrate how some women may manipulate and dominate men in relationships, leading to their downfall.
October 19th, 2026 05:40
Friendship said:
Well done, you use the metaphor of the black widow spider—known for its lethal mating habits—to illustrate how some women may manipulate and dominate men in relationships, leading to their downfall.
October 19th, 2026 05:40
Black Widow
Paul Bell said:
It just shows you what guys do for sex.
In saying that, big Mary did the same.
Mind you, friends like that, who needs enemies.
October 19th, 2026 04:28
Paul Bell said:
It just shows you what guys do for sex.
In saying that, big Mary did the same.
Mind you, friends like that, who needs enemies.
October 19th, 2026 04:28
Black Widow
Lorenz said:
This amorous courtier is always that willing prey at the moment of fatal desire ...
October 19th, 2026 03:48
Lorenz said:
This amorous courtier is always that willing prey at the moment of fatal desire ...
October 19th, 2026 03:48
The fragrance of a dead bouquet
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, the astronomy connection really spoke to me. We\'re looking at stars that might not even exist anymore, yet their light is still reaching us. Makes you wonder how much of our existence works the same way. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 19th, 2026 00:24
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, the astronomy connection really spoke to me. We\'re looking at stars that might not even exist anymore, yet their light is still reaching us. Makes you wonder how much of our existence works the same way. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 19th, 2026 00:24
Missing pages
Joseph M Marion said:
I can sort of put this up against what\'s happening politically very well written
October 18th, 2026 18:42
Joseph M Marion said:
I can sort of put this up against what\'s happening politically very well written
October 18th, 2026 18:42
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