Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett



Framed
Kevin Hulme said:

Yes it\'s understandable why a Mother would constantly look at Photos of their Sons, Daughters when young. To try and take-in the Passage of Time.
And finding it hard to Let Go of those times.
Well said.

September 11th, 2026 19:46

What is left
Joseph M Marion said:

I absolutely love this lyrical this is great I love this

September 11th, 2026 17:45

Framed
Paul Bell said:

I suppose with camera phones now, the photo album has gone, which is a shame.
Did like the black and white photos, they showed charactor.


September 11th, 2026 13:34

Corrosion
cully45 said:

Thanks for your comments Soren thy are always appreciated - Regards Owen

September 11th, 2026 12:54

Framed
orchidee said:

Good write SB.

September 11th, 2026 11:24

Framed
Jabberwocky said:

There are worse places to be. My mum\'s mind is very clean. She\'s a very innocent 84 yo mother of 6. Not sure how she managed that.
I\'ll have to move out sometime, but until then it\'s a comfy place to be.
I liked your poem.

September 11th, 2026 10:40

Framed
Lorenz said:

These final lines sound like a lethal lullaby...

September 11th, 2026 09:25

Framed
Tristan Robert Lange said:

What a clever and poignant piece, my friend. Those photographs preserve something precious, but they also reveal how easily parental love can hold an adult inside an identity they have long outgrown. This really lands. πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸ™πŸ•―οΈπŸ¦β€β¬›

September 11th, 2026 09:12

Framed
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:

definite fav

September 11th, 2026 03:42

Candy Bars
Goldfinch60 said:

Some candy bars can bring lust to us which can lead us to disaster Soren.

Andy

September 11th, 2026 01:02

Candy Bars
Tristan Robert Lange said:

My friend, this is playful, sharp, and thoroughly unapologetic. The candy-shop conceit carries the reader from physical temptation into complete disillusionment...with a wonderfully wicked finish. Great write! πŸ«πŸ¬πŸ˜‚πŸ™

September 10th, 2026 21:29

Candy Bars
Kevin Hulme said:

Nice One. A Chocolate bar being a good discripion. I fancy a nibble now.

September 10th, 2026 15:42

Candy Bars
orchidee said:

Good write SB.

September 10th, 2026 13:40

Candy Bars
arqios said:

There is much politics and powerplay in human relations and some use/abuse/misuse their wiles to whatever advantage or gain they aim at. And many willingly play even in the direst of odds. Perhaps it’s related to the old adage of everything being fair in love and war. πŸ‘πŸ»πŸ•ŠοΈ

September 10th, 2026 07:49

Candy Bars
soheil khodaparasti said:

A striking comparison of physical attraction and inner reality, using food imagery to create a cynical, satirical, and provocative tone.

September 10th, 2026 04:04

Candy Bars
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:

Femme fatale

September 10th, 2026 03:54

Candy Bars
Paul Bell said:

Come into my web said the spider to the fly.
Men will go into that web in a minute, and we know why.
Does that make us dumb, desperate, not saying.
It\'s a fav.

September 10th, 2026 03:28

What is left
mylastwrites said:

In the end all flames burn out and most wannabes never make it. Very good write. Enjoyed it.

September 9th, 2026 15:02

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mylastwrites said:



September 9th, 2026 15:00

Dinner show
William Hromada said:



September 9th, 2026 14:43

Dinner show
William Hromada said:

I like the references of music

September 9th, 2026 14:43

You will be offended
Jabberwocky said:

I don\'t offend easily, but good try.
Guess I\'m a poet, and maybe a crypto-nazi... well, according to \"liberals\", jeez but hasn\'t the centre moved way to the left, we\'re all Nazis now!
I\'m not going to tell you how many of those terms apply to me!
πŸ˜›

September 9th, 2026 14:31

What is left
soheil khodaparasti said:

A poignant reflection on how fame burns brightly for a moment, fades into ashes, and leaves behind another generation waiting to chase the same fleeting flame.

September 9th, 2026 12:53

Habit
Jaryyn said:

Addicted, we are all addicted to something or someone, for better or worse. But when does it become too much? Good write

September 9th, 2026 12:24

What is left
Paul Bell said:

Yes, it doesn\'t take long to be yesterday\'s man, only the great live forever.
Still, the ground will benefit from the ash.

September 9th, 2026 11:19

What is left
Tristan Robert Lange said:

What a sharp piece, my friend. The fiery imagery, driving sound, and relentless movement reduce celebrity to its inevitable remains...then pass the illusion straight to the next generation. Loved this, Soren! πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸ™πŸ•―οΈπŸ¦β€β¬›

September 9th, 2026 08:20

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orchidee said:

Good write SB.

September 9th, 2026 08:12

What is left
arqios said:

Being celebrated and famous does warp our sense of reality and durability. πŸ™πŸ»πŸ•ŠοΈ

September 9th, 2026 07:26

What is left
Kevin Hulme said:

#FAME: I want to live for ever , I want the Press going through my Bins. FAME: I want my Privacy invaded, I want drugs and Scandal part of my Sins. FAME.# Good Write. Fave.

September 9th, 2026 06:34

What is left
Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS said:

It must be awful to be famous, having everyone point at you wherever you go.
But having money to live on β€”that must be the good part.
Very well written.

September 9th, 2026 05:38

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