Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Darkness before dawn
NafisaSB said:
It may have dimmed or is hidden temporarily but will surely be back and the road will be clear to see and follow
May 19th, 2026 13:02
NafisaSB said:
It may have dimmed or is hidden temporarily but will surely be back and the road will be clear to see and follow
May 19th, 2026 13:02
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🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
An awesome poem on motherhood and children which can be trying indeed. Kudos for the fab muse!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too
May 19th, 2026 12:11
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
An awesome poem on motherhood and children which can be trying indeed. Kudos for the fab muse!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too
May 19th, 2026 12:11
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Paul Bell said:
Having conquered many a tree in my youth, and been punished by the tree for missing a branch in climbing, I feel you have to congratulate the tree for the indignity it must have felt, but also the little victories it won bringing up the youth of the day sending them into adulthood.
May 19th, 2026 10:51
Paul Bell said:
Having conquered many a tree in my youth, and been punished by the tree for missing a branch in climbing, I feel you have to congratulate the tree for the indignity it must have felt, but also the little victories it won bringing up the youth of the day sending them into adulthood.
May 19th, 2026 10:51
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orchidee said:
Good write SB. KP was looking grumpy, so I gave her some literal sour grapes! lol.
May 19th, 2026 10:25
orchidee said:
Good write SB. KP was looking grumpy, so I gave her some literal sour grapes! lol.
May 19th, 2026 10:25
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Lorenz said:
Adults have so many emotions and so little judgment .Could we say they\'ve remained in the stage of childhood ?
May 19th, 2026 09:42
Lorenz said:
Adults have so many emotions and so little judgment .Could we say they\'ve remained in the stage of childhood ?
May 19th, 2026 09:42
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Thomas W Case said:
There’s a raw, almost biological honesty in this—growth laid out like weather turning from storm into fruit.
And underneath it all, a quiet sense of irreversibility, like nothing ripens without being changed forever.
May 19th, 2026 09:14
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a raw, almost biological honesty in this—growth laid out like weather turning from storm into fruit.
And underneath it all, a quiet sense of irreversibility, like nothing ripens without being changed forever.
May 19th, 2026 09:14
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arqios said:
Excellent metaphoric. Loving the images and movement of maturation🙏🏻🕊️
May 19th, 2026 08:06
arqios said:
Excellent metaphoric. Loving the images and movement of maturation🙏🏻🕊️
May 19th, 2026 08:06
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Friendship said:
Nicely written, from growth, maturity, and the emotional journey from infancy to adulthood.
May 19th, 2026 07:19
Friendship said:
Nicely written, from growth, maturity, and the emotional journey from infancy to adulthood.
May 19th, 2026 07:19
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David Wakeling said:
Here we have the stages of a person from infant to maturity. Starting with lack of control and reaching full control.I find the poem enlightening.Excellent
May 19th, 2026 04:33
David Wakeling said:
Here we have the stages of a person from infant to maturity. Starting with lack of control and reaching full control.I find the poem enlightening.Excellent
May 19th, 2026 04:33
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Priya Tomar said:
The poem describes different stages of life .
Brilliant write .
May 19th, 2026 03:33
Priya Tomar said:
The poem describes different stages of life .
Brilliant write .
May 19th, 2026 03:33
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nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
good write my friend, much enjoyed
May 19th, 2026 03:20
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
good write my friend, much enjoyed
May 19th, 2026 03:20
Open page
Kevin Hulme said:
I love it when some Writing on Walls are discovered in an Cathedral or Castle. Voices from the Past.
A good Poem.
May 18th, 2026 19:34
Kevin Hulme said:
I love it when some Writing on Walls are discovered in an Cathedral or Castle. Voices from the Past.
A good Poem.
May 18th, 2026 19:34
Open page
Doggerel Dave said:
Both great and interesting that you document a change in values towards wear in objects. Indeed most antique dealers today mark as a selling point \'In untouched original condition\', this a positive. I like the thought very much, Soren.
My only reservation would be those marks indicative of violence in some instances.
May 18th, 2026 18:26
Doggerel Dave said:
Both great and interesting that you document a change in values towards wear in objects. Indeed most antique dealers today mark as a selling point \'In untouched original condition\', this a positive. I like the thought very much, Soren.
My only reservation would be those marks indicative of violence in some instances.
May 18th, 2026 18:26
Gingerbread men
Alex Arnot said:
My only regret in reading this is that I\'m a day late! Great metaphor and extremely cleverly written!
May 18th, 2026 13:56
Alex Arnot said:
My only regret in reading this is that I\'m a day late! Great metaphor and extremely cleverly written!
May 18th, 2026 13:56
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Katie B. said:
Beautiful thought provoking write of how marks leave behind memories. Well written!
May 18th, 2026 11:23
Katie B. said:
Beautiful thought provoking write of how marks leave behind memories. Well written!
May 18th, 2026 11:23
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Friendship said:
Nicely done. The imagery you painted of a worn floor serves as a canvas for the memories and experiences of those who have walked upon it. Your poem reflects on the interplay between physical space and emotional history, revealing how the mundane can hold profound significance. that every mark and scuff tells a story, capturing moments of joy, sorrow, love, and conflict.
May 18th, 2026 10:50
Friendship said:
Nicely done. The imagery you painted of a worn floor serves as a canvas for the memories and experiences of those who have walked upon it. Your poem reflects on the interplay between physical space and emotional history, revealing how the mundane can hold profound significance. that every mark and scuff tells a story, capturing moments of joy, sorrow, love, and conflict.
May 18th, 2026 10:50
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Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this makes me think about how places absorb us over time whether we notice it or not. Floors, walls, furniture…they quietly carry evidence of our living long after the moments themselves have passed. There’s something deeply human in that realization. Excellent piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 18th, 2026 09:38
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this makes me think about how places absorb us over time whether we notice it or not. Floors, walls, furniture…they quietly carry evidence of our living long after the moments themselves have passed. There’s something deeply human in that realization. Excellent piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 18th, 2026 09:38
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arqios said:
The scuffs and damage record the history of decades; our lives written out in the environments that we live in. 🙏🏻🕊️
May 18th, 2026 06:26
arqios said:
The scuffs and damage record the history of decades; our lives written out in the environments that we live in. 🙏🏻🕊️
May 18th, 2026 06:26
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David Wakeling said:
The evidence of time passing.I see a church floor at Christmas but there is a lot more in this Excellent
May 18th, 2026 02:58
David Wakeling said:
The evidence of time passing.I see a church floor at Christmas but there is a lot more in this Excellent
May 18th, 2026 02:58
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orchidee said:
Good write SB. KP gives me some verbal \'hieroglyphics\' cos I keep dishing up sewage for her! lol.
May 18th, 2026 02:17
orchidee said:
Good write SB. KP gives me some verbal \'hieroglyphics\' cos I keep dishing up sewage for her! lol.
May 18th, 2026 02:17
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nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Marks left upon time and places, much enjoyed
May 18th, 2026 02:11
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Marks left upon time and places, much enjoyed
May 18th, 2026 02:11
Gingerbread men
Goldfinch60 said:
One day humanity will used the correct recipe soren and love will rule the world.
Andy
May 18th, 2026 01:29
Goldfinch60 said:
One day humanity will used the correct recipe soren and love will rule the world.
Andy
May 18th, 2026 01:29
Unrepented
Waiting for Silence said:
Loved how honestly this piece reflects on our inner struggles while still feeling deeply human and relatable.
May 17th, 2026 23:56
Waiting for Silence said:
Loved how honestly this piece reflects on our inner struggles while still feeling deeply human and relatable.
May 17th, 2026 23:56
Gingerbread men
Waiting for Silence said:
Creative metaphor that powerfully reflects on human nature and transformation. Good one
May 17th, 2026 23:55
Waiting for Silence said:
Creative metaphor that powerfully reflects on human nature and transformation. Good one
May 17th, 2026 23:55
Gingerbread men
Kevin Hulme said:
Yes . Something went wrong in Heaven\'s Kitchen that day.
Good way of putting things.
May 17th, 2026 18:43
Kevin Hulme said:
Yes . Something went wrong in Heaven\'s Kitchen that day.
Good way of putting things.
May 17th, 2026 18:43
Gingerbread men
GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀 said:
A catastrophe; for salt to be mistaken for sugar. It also is a powerful message of being mindful of who you let in your life.
May 17th, 2026 16:49
GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀 said:
A catastrophe; for salt to be mistaken for sugar. It also is a powerful message of being mindful of who you let in your life.
May 17th, 2026 16:49
Is this the best you got?
Hadeed musa said:
I just want to say one thing
OH MY GOD !!!
May 17th, 2026 14:11
Hadeed musa said:
I just want to say one thing
OH MY GOD !!!
May 17th, 2026 14:11
Gingerbread men
Teddy.15 said:
You have me doubting Adam and Eve maybe it was just play dough with salt and sugar after all 🤣 I love salt my husband loves sugar. 🌹
May 17th, 2026 13:32
Teddy.15 said:
You have me doubting Adam and Eve maybe it was just play dough with salt and sugar after all 🤣 I love salt my husband loves sugar. 🌹
May 17th, 2026 13:32
Gingerbread men
orchidee said:
Good write SB. Ahh, good another recipe idea for KP - gingerbread men made with sewage. Thank you muchly. lol.
May 17th, 2026 12:18
orchidee said:
Good write SB. Ahh, good another recipe idea for KP - gingerbread men made with sewage. Thank you muchly. lol.
May 17th, 2026 12:18
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