Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Burnt perspectives
Syd said:
Hi Sorenbarret, this is a very clever well written poem.
- Syd
May 30th, 2026 10:35
Syd said:
Hi Sorenbarret, this is a very clever well written poem.
- Syd
May 30th, 2026 10:35
Burnt perspectives
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, I love this metaphor. Turning a difficult conversation into something baked, served, and ultimately rejected is both clever and painfully relatable. The imagery makes the emotional dynamic immediately accessible. Wonderful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 30th, 2026 10:23
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, I love this metaphor. Turning a difficult conversation into something baked, served, and ultimately rejected is both clever and painfully relatable. The imagery makes the emotional dynamic immediately accessible. Wonderful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 30th, 2026 10:23
Outlived
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is a heartbreaking portrait of aging and abandonment. The old tomcat feels like far more than a cat here...he becomes a symbol of what happens when usefulness fades but dignity remains. Beautifully written, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 30th, 2026 10:13
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is a heartbreaking portrait of aging and abandonment. The old tomcat feels like far more than a cat here...he becomes a symbol of what happens when usefulness fades but dignity remains. Beautifully written, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 30th, 2026 10:13
Thar she blows
Durdica Porobija said:
I see gradation as a stylistic basis - the wind gradually gets stronger to hurricane force, and then it seems to be a personification. Is the wind she - a woman? Who blows warmly, and then in the end destroys?
May 30th, 2026 07:27
Durdica Porobija said:
I see gradation as a stylistic basis - the wind gradually gets stronger to hurricane force, and then it seems to be a personification. Is the wind she - a woman? Who blows warmly, and then in the end destroys?
May 30th, 2026 07:27
Vermin
Durdica Porobija said:
Very lively, playful, with functional and witty rhymes, this song stylishly confirms the theme of an unwanted guest. Very convincing!
May 30th, 2026 07:11
Durdica Porobija said:
Very lively, playful, with functional and witty rhymes, this song stylishly confirms the theme of an unwanted guest. Very convincing!
May 30th, 2026 07:11
Burnt perspectives
Katie B. said:
I read it several times but I\'m struggling with it. Operator error. Have trouble understanding the underlying meaning.
May 30th, 2026 06:50
Katie B. said:
I read it several times but I\'m struggling with it. Operator error. Have trouble understanding the underlying meaning.
May 30th, 2026 06:50
Burnt perspectives
David Wakeling said:
This is a fascinating metaphorical write. On the one hand there is a conflict and on the other there is a bakery.For me the message is clear that you have to be careful when you cook up an argument. An enjoyable read compadre
May 30th, 2026 03:34
David Wakeling said:
This is a fascinating metaphorical write. On the one hand there is a conflict and on the other there is a bakery.For me the message is clear that you have to be careful when you cook up an argument. An enjoyable read compadre
May 30th, 2026 03:34
Burnt perspectives
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
buyers remorse, good write
May 30th, 2026 02:51
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
buyers remorse, good write
May 30th, 2026 02:51
Outlived
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words soren, many animals end up like that.
Andy
May 30th, 2026 01:09
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words soren, many animals end up like that.
Andy
May 30th, 2026 01:09
Outlived
Kevin Hulme said:
The Stark Realties of the Ageing Process.
Good Write.
May 29th, 2026 19:57
Kevin Hulme said:
The Stark Realties of the Ageing Process.
Good Write.
May 29th, 2026 19:57
Outlived
arqios said:
Oh, there was a time, but no longer. I feel that, both in a physical and metaphorical level. 🙏🏻🕊️
May 29th, 2026 07:23
arqios said:
Oh, there was a time, but no longer. I feel that, both in a physical and metaphorical level. 🙏🏻🕊️
May 29th, 2026 07:23
Outlived
Paul Bell said:
The cat that no longer gets the cream.
We all know how that feels, and reminiscing doesn\'t bring the cream either.
Where did the time go to.
May 29th, 2026 06:31
Paul Bell said:
The cat that no longer gets the cream.
We all know how that feels, and reminiscing doesn\'t bring the cream either.
Where did the time go to.
May 29th, 2026 06:31
Outlived
David Wakeling said:
Oh I know the feeling.Not able to do the things I did many years ago, For me this is a metaphor for aging. WE certainly can\'t do the same things now as we did years ago but it there is an inevitability to the end
May 29th, 2026 05:09
David Wakeling said:
Oh I know the feeling.Not able to do the things I did many years ago, For me this is a metaphor for aging. WE certainly can\'t do the same things now as we did years ago but it there is an inevitability to the end
May 29th, 2026 05:09
Outlived
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
I have seen a few such cats, and people, good write
May 29th, 2026 03:43
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
I have seen a few such cats, and people, good write
May 29th, 2026 03:43
Renewal
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this feels vast and elemental. The whole poem moves like a tide between creation and dissolution, dawn and dusk, life and death. There’s something almost mythic in the way the natural world becomes a living ritual here. Beautiful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 28th, 2026 20:37
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this feels vast and elemental. The whole poem moves like a tide between creation and dissolution, dawn and dusk, life and death. There’s something almost mythic in the way the natural world becomes a living ritual here. Beautiful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 28th, 2026 20:37
Renewal
Kevin Hulme said:
Very descriptive as always. A Painting by Turner came to mind. Good Write .
May 28th, 2026 18:33
Kevin Hulme said:
Very descriptive as always. A Painting by Turner came to mind. Good Write .
May 28th, 2026 18:33
Renewal
Paul Bell said:
Record tempertures in Britain, some are now praying for dewdrops.
Seemingly we can\'t live without the rain in a country that prays for the sun.
May 28th, 2026 08:04
Paul Bell said:
Record tempertures in Britain, some are now praying for dewdrops.
Seemingly we can\'t live without the rain in a country that prays for the sun.
May 28th, 2026 08:04
Renewal
arqios said:
This reading left me enjoying the thought of endings and losses being part of a natural cycle that from darkness comes rebirth and new beginnings.🕊️🙏
May 28th, 2026 07:00
arqios said:
This reading left me enjoying the thought of endings and losses being part of a natural cycle that from darkness comes rebirth and new beginnings.🕊️🙏
May 28th, 2026 07:00
Renewal
Lorenz said:
A watercolorist who captures the ever-changing nuances of words over time and seasons...
May 28th, 2026 04:38
Lorenz said:
A watercolorist who captures the ever-changing nuances of words over time and seasons...
May 28th, 2026 04:38
Renewal
David Wakeling said:
Very powerful images here. From tides and ocean waves to sacrificial blood. Sounds like my 21st.Just kidding.A wonderfully poetic piece.Enjoyable
May 28th, 2026 04:37
David Wakeling said:
Very powerful images here. From tides and ocean waves to sacrificial blood. Sounds like my 21st.Just kidding.A wonderfully poetic piece.Enjoyable
May 28th, 2026 04:37
The shape of a tree
Goldfinch60 said:
There are many puzzles in life soren, hopefully we can solve most of them.
Andy
May 28th, 2026 01:26
Goldfinch60 said:
There are many puzzles in life soren, hopefully we can solve most of them.
Andy
May 28th, 2026 01:26
The shape of a tree
Syd said:
True perfection is Imperfect. Nicely written.
- Syd
May 27th, 2026 16:58
Syd said:
True perfection is Imperfect. Nicely written.
- Syd
May 27th, 2026 16:58
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