Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Freewill in determinism
RSM0812 said:
So many educational rhymes my mind almost blew up. Nice job.
February 23rd, 2026 14:05
RSM0812 said:
So many educational rhymes my mind almost blew up. Nice job.
February 23rd, 2026 14:05
Midas
orchidee said:
Good write SB. Yes, I take away the roast dinners from KP, and give to others - more to Fido and myself, that is! Meanwhile, she has the sewage. Dunno why she complains. I\'m so generous in giving her Fido and my shares of it too! heehee.
February 23rd, 2026 12:19
orchidee said:
Good write SB. Yes, I take away the roast dinners from KP, and give to others - more to Fido and myself, that is! Meanwhile, she has the sewage. Dunno why she complains. I\'m so generous in giving her Fido and my shares of it too! heehee.
February 23rd, 2026 12:19
Midas
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, I’ve seen how fear can twist into the very thing it tries to avoid. That turn inward, that realization at the end…it feels honest. No excuses, just recognition. That clarity is what gives it weight. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 23rd, 2026 10:08
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, I’ve seen how fear can twist into the very thing it tries to avoid. That turn inward, that realization at the end…it feels honest. No excuses, just recognition. That clarity is what gives it weight. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 23rd, 2026 10:08
Freewill in determinism
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, the propulsion of this is what grabbed me. “Physics spoke, forces poke” keeps it grounded, almost mechanical…then you open it wide with infinity and divinity. That final claim that free will is seen in all…that’s the real spark. Tight, thoughtful, and powerful, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 23rd, 2026 09:51
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, the propulsion of this is what grabbed me. “Physics spoke, forces poke” keeps it grounded, almost mechanical…then you open it wide with infinity and divinity. That final claim that free will is seen in all…that’s the real spark. Tight, thoughtful, and powerful, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 23rd, 2026 09:51
Midas
David Wakeling said:
Oh this is interesting. Einstein said he hated authority and was surprised when he became the authority. I enjoyed this poem.it certainly made me think.Many of us turn into the people we avoided. Although it can be the opposite as well.I did everything I could do to be opposite to my father but hey thats just me. A wonderful piece
February 23rd, 2026 05:27
David Wakeling said:
Oh this is interesting. Einstein said he hated authority and was surprised when he became the authority. I enjoyed this poem.it certainly made me think.Many of us turn into the people we avoided. Although it can be the opposite as well.I did everything I could do to be opposite to my father but hey thats just me. A wonderful piece
February 23rd, 2026 05:27
Midas
Paul Bell said:
Yes, Mr Midas now lives in the Whitehouse screwing every country he can for his greater good.
Sadly, countries are now trading differently now, leaving the buffoon isolated.
February 23rd, 2026 04:42
Paul Bell said:
Yes, Mr Midas now lives in the Whitehouse screwing every country he can for his greater good.
Sadly, countries are now trading differently now, leaving the buffoon isolated.
February 23rd, 2026 04:42
Midas
Lorenz said:
Our friend should have made the wise choice to obtain the precious gift of transforming reality into poetry !
February 23rd, 2026 04:36
Lorenz said:
Our friend should have made the wise choice to obtain the precious gift of transforming reality into poetry !
February 23rd, 2026 04:36
Midas
Atticus_made said:
Is it referencing to Midas from the greek legends, no? I enjoy this poem, short and simple!
February 23rd, 2026 03:58
Atticus_made said:
Is it referencing to Midas from the greek legends, no? I enjoy this poem, short and simple!
February 23rd, 2026 03:58
Freewill in determinism
Goldfinch60 said:
We will all end up in infinity soren, see you there.
Andy
February 23rd, 2026 01:59
Goldfinch60 said:
We will all end up in infinity soren, see you there.
Andy
February 23rd, 2026 01:59
Freewill in determinism
arqios said:
Loved the brevity and pointedness of feel in this 🕊️🙏🏻
February 22nd, 2026 18:31
arqios said:
Loved the brevity and pointedness of feel in this 🕊️🙏🏻
February 22nd, 2026 18:31
Freewill in determinism
Lorenz said:
I believe in the freedom that determinism allows us !
February 22nd, 2026 11:35
Lorenz said:
I believe in the freedom that determinism allows us !
February 22nd, 2026 11:35
Freewill in determinism
Thomas W Case said:
You let science wrestle the sky until it tips its hat to something larger.
There’s grit in that last turn—where equations fray and mystery steps in.
February 22nd, 2026 08:58
Thomas W Case said:
You let science wrestle the sky until it tips its hat to something larger.
There’s grit in that last turn—where equations fray and mystery steps in.
February 22nd, 2026 08:58
Freewill in determinism
Paul Bell said:
Maths runs the world and nature is at the top of the tree doing what she does brilliantly.
Her greatest job will be rebuilding when the humans finally obliterate each other.
February 22nd, 2026 05:16
Paul Bell said:
Maths runs the world and nature is at the top of the tree doing what she does brilliantly.
Her greatest job will be rebuilding when the humans finally obliterate each other.
February 22nd, 2026 05:16
Freewill in determinism
David Wakeling said:
A thoughtful piece. I have never been able to choose between free will and determinism. Like the great American Philosopher Forrest Gump once said: \"I think both are happening at the same time.\" Clever how you linked it all to Physics. Wonderful
February 22nd, 2026 05:02
David Wakeling said:
A thoughtful piece. I have never been able to choose between free will and determinism. Like the great American Philosopher Forrest Gump once said: \"I think both are happening at the same time.\" Clever how you linked it all to Physics. Wonderful
February 22nd, 2026 05:02
Freewill in determinism
soheil khodaparasti said:
Nature’s endless complexity defying exact prediction and chaos giving rise to a sense of the divine and hints of free will. Nicely written.
February 22nd, 2026 03:47
soheil khodaparasti said:
Nature’s endless complexity defying exact prediction and chaos giving rise to a sense of the divine and hints of free will. Nicely written.
February 22nd, 2026 03:47
Candy unwrapped
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write soren. All that glitters is not gold.
Andy
February 22nd, 2026 02:48
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write soren. All that glitters is not gold.
Andy
February 22nd, 2026 02:48
Candy unwrapped
Kevin Hulme said:
Quite erotic then the Cold Shower half way through.
Enjoyed.
February 21st, 2026 21:17
Kevin Hulme said:
Quite erotic then the Cold Shower half way through.
Enjoyed.
February 21st, 2026 21:17
Candy unwrapped
Doggerel Dave said:
Your friend must be the author of one of the oldest sickest jokes in a whole library of sick jokes, Soren. Good to know you can identify him.
February 21st, 2026 19:47
Doggerel Dave said:
Your friend must be the author of one of the oldest sickest jokes in a whole library of sick jokes, Soren. Good to know you can identify him.
February 21st, 2026 19:47
Candy unwrapped
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this blends caricature, caution, and grotesque comedy into one escalating narrative. You lean fully into the absurd to expose shallow assumptions. It’s provocative, irreverent, and intentionally over-the-top. A bold, theatrical piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 21st, 2026 10:41
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this blends caricature, caution, and grotesque comedy into one escalating narrative. You lean fully into the absurd to expose shallow assumptions. It’s provocative, irreverent, and intentionally over-the-top. A bold, theatrical piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 21st, 2026 10:41
Did you know it\'s all true
Samprikta Paul said:
I love how the rhythm flows throughout the poem.
February 21st, 2026 09:45
Samprikta Paul said:
I love how the rhythm flows throughout the poem.
February 21st, 2026 09:45
Candy unwrapped
Paul Bell said:
This is why you shouldn\'t drink more than ten pints at a time, cos everything looks great in stupor.
In saying that, this is why you go back to the pub the next day and drink another ten pints to forget what the hell you woke up to.
February 21st, 2026 06:33
Paul Bell said:
This is why you shouldn\'t drink more than ten pints at a time, cos everything looks great in stupor.
In saying that, this is why you go back to the pub the next day and drink another ten pints to forget what the hell you woke up to.
February 21st, 2026 06:33
Candy unwrapped
Lorenz said:
Disturbing story dude...This image of teeth in a glass of water s a total love killer ...
February 21st, 2026 05:16
Lorenz said:
Disturbing story dude...This image of teeth in a glass of water s a total love killer ...
February 21st, 2026 05:16
Candy unwrapped
David Wakeling said:
This is an amazing write.I love the rhyme very musical.The story is captivating.It keeps you guessing all along.Beware of that which glitters it is not always gold.Very entertaining.
February 21st, 2026 05:08
David Wakeling said:
This is an amazing write.I love the rhyme very musical.The story is captivating.It keeps you guessing all along.Beware of that which glitters it is not always gold.Very entertaining.
February 21st, 2026 05:08
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