Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
I swear
Friendship said:
Nicely written. Your poem delves into the dynamics of power and persuasion, examining how individuals navigate conflicting directives while grappling with their own sense of duty and truth.
July 5th, 2026 19:36
Friendship said:
Nicely written. Your poem delves into the dynamics of power and persuasion, examining how individuals navigate conflicting directives while grappling with their own sense of duty and truth.
July 5th, 2026 19:36
I swear
Doggerel Dave said:
...truth, the whole truth and nothing but the...\" The whole racket is based on bullshit (or if you need to, think societal hierarchies.)
Point worth making, Soren.
July 5th, 2026 18:27
Doggerel Dave said:
...truth, the whole truth and nothing but the...\" The whole racket is based on bullshit (or if you need to, think societal hierarchies.)
Point worth making, Soren.
July 5th, 2026 18:27
I swear
GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀 said:
It’s all about control today isn’t it? A well written write!
July 5th, 2026 16:15
GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀 said:
It’s all about control today isn’t it? A well written write!
July 5th, 2026 16:15
Change
Joseph M Marion said:
We both try to explain and nobody sees the pain You write beautifully my brother and love reading your work God bless you and your family always
July 5th, 2026 16:00
Joseph M Marion said:
We both try to explain and nobody sees the pain You write beautifully my brother and love reading your work God bless you and your family always
July 5th, 2026 16:00
Ghost riders
gray0328 said:
What remains is not the past itself, but a softened, unreliable memory of it—like a photograph fading to gray. Well Done Soren
July 5th, 2026 09:27
gray0328 said:
What remains is not the past itself, but a softened, unreliable memory of it—like a photograph fading to gray. Well Done Soren
July 5th, 2026 09:27
I swear
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a sharp, fractured rhythm here—like language itself is being made to stand trial and hesitate at every command.
It feels tense in a controlled way, as if truth and authority are circling each other without ever fully landing.
July 5th, 2026 07:45
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a sharp, fractured rhythm here—like language itself is being made to stand trial and hesitate at every command.
It feels tense in a controlled way, as if truth and authority are circling each other without ever fully landing.
July 5th, 2026 07:45
Taken
RSM0812 said:
This write has some grotesque imagery written and well contrived of. Enjoyed another read.
July 5th, 2026 06:14
RSM0812 said:
This write has some grotesque imagery written and well contrived of. Enjoyed another read.
July 5th, 2026 06:14
Ghost riders
RSM0812 said:
Sometimes your poetry is so complicated, I\'m lost for words. Guess its a good thing I\'m not a very good interpreter. I liked the write very much.
July 5th, 2026 06:12
RSM0812 said:
Sometimes your poetry is so complicated, I\'m lost for words. Guess its a good thing I\'m not a very good interpreter. I liked the write very much.
July 5th, 2026 06:12
Ghost riders
Soman Ragavan said:
Depicts how life changes. Scenes of the past disappear little by little. Colours fade. Even the gun made of metal evaporated. Changes are beyond our control.
July 5th, 2026 06:11
Soman Ragavan said:
Depicts how life changes. Scenes of the past disappear little by little. Colours fade. Even the gun made of metal evaporated. Changes are beyond our control.
July 5th, 2026 06:11
I swear
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, I really enjoyed this. It begins with familiar courtroom commands, then quietly shifts into a deeper reflection on judgment itself. That final question lingered with me well after I\'d finished reading. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 5th, 2026 06:00
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, I really enjoyed this. It begins with familiar courtroom commands, then quietly shifts into a deeper reflection on judgment itself. That final question lingered with me well after I\'d finished reading. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 5th, 2026 06:00
I swear
arqios said:
Perhaps they forgot to say, \"Simon says...\" A very apt metaphor to our contemporary situation. 🙏🕊️
July 5th, 2026 05:32
arqios said:
Perhaps they forgot to say, \"Simon says...\" A very apt metaphor to our contemporary situation. 🙏🕊️
July 5th, 2026 05:32
I swear
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
the justice system sometimes me laugh
July 5th, 2026 04:36
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
the justice system sometimes me laugh
July 5th, 2026 04:36
Ghost riders
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true soren, the ghosts of the past are only in our memories now.
Andy
July 5th, 2026 01:18
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true soren, the ghosts of the past are only in our memories now.
Andy
July 5th, 2026 01:18
Ghost riders
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this really resonated with me. There’s a wistfulness running through it that feels less like mourning and more like quietly acknowledging that every generation leaves something behind. Beautiful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 4th, 2026 23:04
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this really resonated with me. There’s a wistfulness running through it that feels less like mourning and more like quietly acknowledging that every generation leaves something behind. Beautiful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 4th, 2026 23:04
Ghost riders
Kevin Hulme said:
A fine Poem on the Passage of time and the way it shapes our life\'s. On the 250th Birthday of the U.S , it tells of the journey that has been made . From Wagons to Automobiles. Good Write.
July 4th, 2026 19:09
Kevin Hulme said:
A fine Poem on the Passage of time and the way it shapes our life\'s. On the 250th Birthday of the U.S , it tells of the journey that has been made . From Wagons to Automobiles. Good Write.
July 4th, 2026 19:09
Ghost riders
Friendship said:
Nicely written. Your poem focuses on the fading memories of a time when horses, trains, and the vast American plains defined life, contrasting this with contemporary imagery of cars, highways, and suburban life. You highlight the transition from a rugged, adventurous past to a more mundane, settled present.
July 4th, 2026 12:38
Friendship said:
Nicely written. Your poem focuses on the fading memories of a time when horses, trains, and the vast American plains defined life, contrasting this with contemporary imagery of cars, highways, and suburban life. You highlight the transition from a rugged, adventurous past to a more mundane, settled present.
July 4th, 2026 12:38
I sit listening for sounds around me
Divya Dansena said:
You just heard nicely, the things , which just passes by our ears . What we see is the thing that you just sense by your whole body . You’r a great observer and a poet .
July 4th, 2026 11:42
Divya Dansena said:
You just heard nicely, the things , which just passes by our ears . What we see is the thing that you just sense by your whole body . You’r a great observer and a poet .
July 4th, 2026 11:42
Little one
Divya Dansena said:
You have just expressed people’s ultimate fear into your poem . Some fear it . Some dive deep into it .
July 4th, 2026 11:37
Divya Dansena said:
You have just expressed people’s ultimate fear into your poem . Some fear it . Some dive deep into it .
July 4th, 2026 11:37
Taken
NafisaSB said:
That is so unjust and unfair and disgusting and the results speak for themselves
July 4th, 2026 10:15
NafisaSB said:
That is so unjust and unfair and disgusting and the results speak for themselves
July 4th, 2026 10:15
Ghost riders
soheil khodaparasti said:
As memory and history fade, they leave behind more than absence—they reshape the lives that follow.
July 4th, 2026 08:15
soheil khodaparasti said:
As memory and history fade, they leave behind more than absence—they reshape the lives that follow.
July 4th, 2026 08:15
Ghost riders
arqios said:
The country used to feel so much bigger than. And funny how the peopleness and community can feel more distanced in the ever-growing urban density. 🙏🕊️
July 4th, 2026 07:35
arqios said:
The country used to feel so much bigger than. And funny how the peopleness and community can feel more distanced in the ever-growing urban density. 🙏🕊️
July 4th, 2026 07:35
Ghost riders
Syd said:
Hi Sorenbarret. I feel like I can relate to this piece. Very well written 👏
- Syd 🍄
July 4th, 2026 06:53
Syd said:
Hi Sorenbarret. I feel like I can relate to this piece. Very well written 👏
- Syd 🍄
July 4th, 2026 06:53
Ghost riders
Nerd said:
I like this poem imagery is very deep, and very relatable. I also like how it makes me think the everyday objects can remind me of something that happened in the past.
July 4th, 2026 03:50
Nerd said:
I like this poem imagery is very deep, and very relatable. I also like how it makes me think the everyday objects can remind me of something that happened in the past.
July 4th, 2026 03:50
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