Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
My nature home
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is gentle, immersive, and deeply restorative. Nature isn’t scenery here…it’s companion, witness, and blessing all at once. The consistency of tone is what makes it linger. Beautiful work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
December 22nd, 2025 15:18
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is gentle, immersive, and deeply restorative. Nature isn’t scenery here…it’s companion, witness, and blessing all at once. The consistency of tone is what makes it linger. Beautiful work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
December 22nd, 2025 15:18
My nature home
Friendship said:
Well written, the poem vividly captures the beauty and tranquility of nature, emphasizing the intimate connection between the poet and their natural surroundings. The imagery of fireflies, birds, butterflies, and flowers conveys a sense of wonder and appreciation for the natural world. The poem suggests that nature serves as a source of light, joy, and inspiration, highlighting both its aesthetic beauty and its serene, comforting presence in the poet\'s life.
December 22nd, 2025 08:38
Friendship said:
Well written, the poem vividly captures the beauty and tranquility of nature, emphasizing the intimate connection between the poet and their natural surroundings. The imagery of fireflies, birds, butterflies, and flowers conveys a sense of wonder and appreciation for the natural world. The poem suggests that nature serves as a source of light, joy, and inspiration, highlighting both its aesthetic beauty and its serene, comforting presence in the poet\'s life.
December 22nd, 2025 08:38
My nature home
Katie B. said:
I LOVE POEMS ABOUT NATURE, ESPECIALLY THE BIRDS. THIS PIECE IS EXQUSITE. ALWAYS LOVE YOUR WORK. THANKS FOR SHARING SB!
December 22nd, 2025 06:41
Katie B. said:
I LOVE POEMS ABOUT NATURE, ESPECIALLY THE BIRDS. THIS PIECE IS EXQUSITE. ALWAYS LOVE YOUR WORK. THANKS FOR SHARING SB!
December 22nd, 2025 06:41
My nature home
arqios said:
I absolutely love how the walls just seem to melt away in this poem! The imagery of hummingbirds perching in the shower and of fireflies serving as a bedroom light is so whimsical and intimate. It transforms the idea of a \"home\" into a living, breathing sanctuary where the \"shuddering\" of the outside world finally goes quiet. It’s such a beautiful, sun-drenched vision of peace. 🕊️🙏
December 22nd, 2025 06:29
arqios said:
I absolutely love how the walls just seem to melt away in this poem! The imagery of hummingbirds perching in the shower and of fireflies serving as a bedroom light is so whimsical and intimate. It transforms the idea of a \"home\" into a living, breathing sanctuary where the \"shuddering\" of the outside world finally goes quiet. It’s such a beautiful, sun-drenched vision of peace. 🕊️🙏
December 22nd, 2025 06:29
Human beans
Goldfinch60 said:
Too much or too little of many things spoil life soren but there are always ways to move forward into new growth and a better world.
Andy
December 22nd, 2025 02:29
Goldfinch60 said:
Too much or too little of many things spoil life soren but there are always ways to move forward into new growth and a better world.
Andy
December 22nd, 2025 02:29
Human beans
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is sharply observant. There’s a steady accumulation here that makes imbalance feel inevitable rather than accidental. It lands with a quiet heaviness. Very well done, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 21st, 2025 11:29
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is sharply observant. There’s a steady accumulation here that makes imbalance feel inevitable rather than accidental. It lands with a quiet heaviness. Very well done, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 21st, 2025 11:29
Human beans
Thomas W Case said:
The progression from plant to child works seamlessly.
It makes the poem feel like a living, breathing observation.
December 21st, 2025 09:55
Thomas W Case said:
The progression from plant to child works seamlessly.
It makes the poem feel like a living, breathing observation.
December 21st, 2025 09:55
Human beans
Lorenz said:
In the good old days ,women had children ,men died at war and everyone was eating beans .
Alas ! we have lost that sens of balance ...
December 21st, 2025 09:21
Lorenz said:
In the good old days ,women had children ,men died at war and everyone was eating beans .
Alas ! we have lost that sens of balance ...
December 21st, 2025 09:21
Human beans
arqios said:
The type and consistency/inconsistency of nurture/neglect we get and give affects us all🕊️🙏🏻
December 21st, 2025 08:02
arqios said:
The type and consistency/inconsistency of nurture/neglect we get and give affects us all🕊️🙏🏻
December 21st, 2025 08:02
Human beans
Michael Edwards said:
Wow, Friendship really does summarise this superb write . In my garden today here in early winter in the UK the first snowdrop, hemerocallis in bloom and birds singing in readiness for what lies ahead. Oh the circular joys of life.
December 21st, 2025 06:57
Michael Edwards said:
Wow, Friendship really does summarise this superb write . In my garden today here in early winter in the UK the first snowdrop, hemerocallis in bloom and birds singing in readiness for what lies ahead. Oh the circular joys of life.
December 21st, 2025 06:57
Human beans
Friendship said:
Your poem revolves around the consequences of excess and imbalance, particularly in the context of growth—both in nature and in human development. The subject matter juxtaposes the nurturing of plants with the upbringing of children, suggesting that just as plants require a balance of water, sun, and nutrients, children also need a balanced environment to thrive. The poem warns against overindulgence and neglect, emphasizing that both extremes can lead to stunted growth and negative outcomes.
December 21st, 2025 05:17
Friendship said:
Your poem revolves around the consequences of excess and imbalance, particularly in the context of growth—both in nature and in human development. The subject matter juxtaposes the nurturing of plants with the upbringing of children, suggesting that just as plants require a balance of water, sun, and nutrients, children also need a balanced environment to thrive. The poem warns against overindulgence and neglect, emphasizing that both extremes can lead to stunted growth and negative outcomes.
December 21st, 2025 05:17
Human beans
orchidee said:
A fine write SB. That reminds me - dung - to dish up more sewage for KPs meals. lol. I am horrible. heehee.
December 21st, 2025 03:22
orchidee said:
A fine write SB. That reminds me - dung - to dish up more sewage for KPs meals. lol. I am horrible. heehee.
December 21st, 2025 03:22
Myopic science
Goldfinch60 said:
If it keeps going this way we will not be here soren. Why cannot love rule the world?
Andy
December 21st, 2025 02:19
Goldfinch60 said:
If it keeps going this way we will not be here soren. Why cannot love rule the world?
Andy
December 21st, 2025 02:19
Myopic science
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Truth. This reminds me of a poem I wrote earlier this year, \"And They Call It Science\". Very thought-provoking. my friend. What they call \"science\" is very constricted indeed and rarely leads to answers that don\'t change with the wind direction. And that is the nature of science, no? We only know what we think we know until we realize we don\'t know it at all. But these days science seems to know everything and gets so much wrong. Arrogance. And that is getting even worse these days. 😬 Well done! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 20th, 2025 09:14
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Truth. This reminds me of a poem I wrote earlier this year, \"And They Call It Science\". Very thought-provoking. my friend. What they call \"science\" is very constricted indeed and rarely leads to answers that don\'t change with the wind direction. And that is the nature of science, no? We only know what we think we know until we realize we don\'t know it at all. But these days science seems to know everything and gets so much wrong. Arrogance. And that is getting even worse these days. 😬 Well done! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 20th, 2025 09:14
Myopic science
Friendship said:
Well written, your poem critiques the narrow focus of scientific advancement, suggesting that while technology has made significant strides in combating illness and improving human life, it has also led to a loss of broader understanding and perhaps a disconnect from natural immunity and holistic health. The poem implies that a singular focus on chemical solutions can overlook the complexities and interdependencies of health and the environment.
December 20th, 2025 06:29
Friendship said:
Well written, your poem critiques the narrow focus of scientific advancement, suggesting that while technology has made significant strides in combating illness and improving human life, it has also led to a loss of broader understanding and perhaps a disconnect from natural immunity and holistic health. The poem implies that a singular focus on chemical solutions can overlook the complexities and interdependencies of health and the environment.
December 20th, 2025 06:29
The brand you buy
Doggerel Dave said:
Charity shops keep me sartorially elegant....
December 20th, 2025 06:24
Doggerel Dave said:
Charity shops keep me sartorially elegant....
December 20th, 2025 06:24
Myopic science
arqios said:
Just this week I was again pondering the idea of the Frankensteinic bent in all of humanity. 🕊️🙏🏻
December 20th, 2025 06:21
arqios said:
Just this week I was again pondering the idea of the Frankensteinic bent in all of humanity. 🕊️🙏🏻
December 20th, 2025 06:21
Myopic science
Katie B. said:
Thought provoking write. Enjoyable read. Thanks for sharing SB.
December 20th, 2025 04:14
Katie B. said:
Thought provoking write. Enjoyable read. Thanks for sharing SB.
December 20th, 2025 04:14
Myopic science
orchidee said:
Good write SB. Ahh, another item to add to my recipe book for when I prepare KP\'s meals - parasitic worms. She\'ll like those! lol.
December 20th, 2025 03:30
orchidee said:
Good write SB. Ahh, another item to add to my recipe book for when I prepare KP\'s meals - parasitic worms. She\'ll like those! lol.
December 20th, 2025 03:30
The brand you buy
Goldfinch60 said:
The most valuable thing that you can give to anybody is your time. Good write soren.
Andy
December 20th, 2025 02:10
Goldfinch60 said:
The most valuable thing that you can give to anybody is your time. Good write soren.
Andy
December 20th, 2025 02:10
The brand you buy
Lorenz said:
I never forget to give her due to the cleaning lady at the Martinez ! Question of class ...
December 19th, 2025 10:53
Lorenz said:
I never forget to give her due to the cleaning lady at the Martinez ! Question of class ...
December 19th, 2025 10:53
The brand you buy
Jerry Reynolds said:
A fine write, sorenbarrett.
To stay afloat
Some take a plane
Others a boat
For me, a quatrain
December 19th, 2025 09:37
Jerry Reynolds said:
A fine write, sorenbarrett.
To stay afloat
Some take a plane
Others a boat
For me, a quatrain
December 19th, 2025 09:37
The brand you buy
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this reads as a critique of class performance itself. Objects, scent, and surface become moral signals, while real work is dismissed as vulgar. It’s sharp, controlled, and unapologetic in what it names. Powerful and a fave for sure. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 19th, 2025 09:17
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this reads as a critique of class performance itself. Objects, scent, and surface become moral signals, while real work is dismissed as vulgar. It’s sharp, controlled, and unapologetic in what it names. Powerful and a fave for sure. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 19th, 2025 09:17
The brand you buy
Friendship said:
The poem explores the social divide between the wealthy and the working class, highlighting how material possessions and outward appearances are used to delineate class status. It critiques the superficiality of wealth and the obligations that come with it, suggesting that true value lies beyond materialism.
December 19th, 2025 07:31
Friendship said:
The poem explores the social divide between the wealthy and the working class, highlighting how material possessions and outward appearances are used to delineate class status. It critiques the superficiality of wealth and the obligations that come with it, suggesting that true value lies beyond materialism.
December 19th, 2025 07:31
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