Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett



Helios
Kevin Hulme said:

Sunrise in a blaze of words. An enjoyable Poem.

April 21st, 2026 18:44

Helios
Abdullah123 said:

Didn\'t realise was rated 18+ until after I read it, but I don\'t regret it😭
Incredibly immersive, and quite the epitome of being poetic

April 21st, 2026 11:52

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Waiting for Silence said:

good one! :)
very well expressed.... real-life social behavior—people who exploit relationships, overstay welcome, and invade personal boundaries. Comparison of people to pests and parasites is clear and effective. Clearly conveys irritation and discomfort without naming anyone directly

April 21st, 2026 11:22

Helios
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Soren, this feels epic right out of the gate…there’s a surge of energy and scale that just keeps building. It reads like a myth in motion. Powerful piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

April 21st, 2026 09:08

Helios
orchidee said:

Good write SB. KP greets me with, similar to the poem\'s first line, that b****y sewage again! lol. I keep dishing it up. heehee.

April 21st, 2026 09:04

Helios
Thomas W Case said:

Mythic and blazing—this surges with elemental force, where nature and godhood collide in fire and rebirth.
The grit is in the violence of renewal: light doesn’t arrive gently, it conquers the dark.

April 21st, 2026 08:28

Helios
Lorenz said:

Salve sol invictus !

April 21st, 2026 06:16

Helios
Paul Bell said:

Pure poetry, you have surpassed yourself.
I suppose even nature must have flaws, or maybe the flaws are just the earths realignment.
If you live in a country that some idiot isn\'t bombing, and you can get into the forest see a river, it\'s only then you realise how perfect nature is.


April 21st, 2026 05:17

Choices of when and where
NafisaSB said:

Both timing and proper directions are necessary or it will be traumatic when delivery cannot be made though items are available
This is the scenario that’s also prevalent in war zones 🤔😔

April 21st, 2026 03:19

Top and bottom sonnet
Sviatoslav Zhabotynskyi said:

It’s hard for people to reach each other.

April 21st, 2026 00:06

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Sviatoslav Zhabotynskyi said:

that’s powerful

April 21st, 2026 00:04

Vermin
Sviatoslav Zhabotynskyi said:

too much deceit, every day. I don’t even know what to do with it.

April 21st, 2026 00:02

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boot said:

Is your about me really true...all of it?

April 20th, 2026 22:37

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swedishme123 said:

very VERY good work as always.! it kept me interested, though all of your work does. the more I read the more I enjoy

April 20th, 2026 22:00

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boot said:

Was he blind?

April 20th, 2026 21:33

Vermin
boot said:

You got some terrible family members

April 20th, 2026 21:28

Resciprocity’s warning
boot said:

You have an excellent point...I think most people just want to post their poems...there\'s actually a lot of really good poems here that are probably unread...

April 20th, 2026 21:19

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Kevin Hulme said:

Yes, I like this . I\'m reminded of the time Hans Christian Anderson payed Dickens a visit. Stayed for weeks until C.D. had to order him to leave. A definite fave.

April 20th, 2026 19:18

Perfection
jarcher54 said:

I am still working on it though!! And I bet you are too...

April 20th, 2026 10:49

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Tristan Robert Lange said:

Soren, this is a wild ride…there’s a chaotic, almost playful frustration running through it that just keeps building. It feels like everything piling on at once and not letting up. That energy carries. Strong piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

April 20th, 2026 10:32

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GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀 said:

All of us have had unwanted guests lol

April 20th, 2026 09:32

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orchidee said:

Good write SB. Ahh, one who overstayed their welcome, and didn\'t say \'I\'ll get my coat!\' (to leave, that is).
KP never says it, even though I feed her sewage still. lol. I suffer for it though. She gets out her endless photo albums to bore me. Of course, there\'s no one else in the albums but her! lol.

April 20th, 2026 08:28

Decay
Joseph M Marion said:

I absolutely love this this fits in many ways more than way you write it very good Great discipline of the pen andthat\'s why I love reading you

April 20th, 2026 07:20

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Priya Tomar said:

Nice poem .
Your internal rhyming scheme so good .

April 20th, 2026 07:07

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arqios said:

Like gremlins, sidekicks and hangers on, stalkers and trolls even. Like little voices in the head that pester without ceasing 🕊️🙏

April 20th, 2026 06:52

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nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:

good write, we all know of unwanted guests

April 20th, 2026 05:32

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Waiting for Silence said:

feels like someone quietly good in a world that doesn’t know what to do with such people anymore.

April 20th, 2026 04:56

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Goldfinch60 said:

Intriguing words soren but as I say if we were all the same it would be a boring world.

Andy

April 20th, 2026 00:46

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Kevin Hulme said:

I get the message here . Compassion is in short supply sometimes.
Good one.

April 19th, 2026 19:54

Decay
GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀 said:

Great write my friend

April 19th, 2026 14:36

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