Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett



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Friendship said:

Nicely written

July 16th, 2026 15:25

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mylastwrites said:

Another diamond in your collection of gems. I enjoyed this very much. Thank you.

July 16th, 2026 14:44

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Lorenz said:

The family broom ...that expression terrifies me !

July 16th, 2026 12:05

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hzugman said:

Very nicely done.

July 16th, 2026 12:01

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Paul Bell said:

Death has torn this man apart.
A broken heart followed by a restless mind.
I suppose death does that, leaves you blank.

July 16th, 2026 10:50

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soheil khodaparasti said:

You use fresh, original imagery to transform familiar emotions into vivid, memorable scenes.

July 16th, 2026 10:29

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orchidee said:

A fine write SB.

July 16th, 2026 09:31

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isa kemmy said:

A touchful writing well crafted by you

July 16th, 2026 09:26

His father\'s chair
Zellie said:

Loveee thiss

July 16th, 2026 08:57

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Tristan Robert Lange said:

Soren, this really hit me hard. The atmosphere is heavy from the very first line...it feels like someone trying to survive beneath the weight of memory itself. Powerful piece, my friend. ๐ŸŒน๐Ÿ–ค๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ•ฏ๏ธ๐Ÿฆโ€โฌ›

July 16th, 2026 08:19

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nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:

another fine write friend

July 16th, 2026 04:01

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Teddy.15 said:

I see time, regret and remorse. Only you can write with such talent dear sorrenbarret kudos my dear friend. ๐ŸŒน

July 16th, 2026 03:21

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Tristan Robert Lange said:

Soren, this speaks to me. Iโ€™ve seen how old wounds can make people react long before reason has a chance to catch up. Itโ€™s heartbreaking, but very human. Really appreciated this, my friend. A fave. ๐ŸŒน๐Ÿ–ค๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ•ฏ๏ธ๐Ÿฆโ€โฌ›

July 15th, 2026 22:36

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Kevin Hulme said:

Some interesting and Ingenious defence Mechanisms in the Animal Kingdom.
Good Write here.

July 15th, 2026 19:15

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Friendship said:

Well written. Your painting to me seems to aim to explore and articulate the complexity of human emotions, particularly the darker aspects tied to pain, aggression, and instinct, encouraging readers to reflect on their own reactions in similar situations.

July 15th, 2026 13:24

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Paul Bell said:

Some just open their mouths to get that autonomic reaction.
A bit like America and Iran cat and mouse war.

July 15th, 2026 11:30

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orchidee said:

Good write SB.

July 15th, 2026 10:09

Be willing to give what you ask
Donteatmecows said:

hell yeah! this is a bangar! :) it appears to me to be someone pointing out hypocrisy...just my inital thought yet of course not the author\'s meaning

July 15th, 2026 09:48

His father\'s chair
Donteatmecows said:

A satisfactory use of my time reading this! Thank you, sir! Personally, when I read it, I think of his dad hitting him since it says \"his father\'s scratches etched in sin\" and how he develops toughness from surviving the abuse, leading him to healing with scars, yet that is only my interpretation not what you meant necessarily....I enjoyed it!
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July 15th, 2026 09:44

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Teddy.15 said:

I have a toxic colleague and this brings home many truths. ๐ŸŒน

July 15th, 2026 07:44

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arqios said:

Defence mechanisms are there for a reason. Too bad they are mostly seen in unflattering light and rightly so. Much enjoyed. ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ•Š๏ธ

July 15th, 2026 06:41

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NafisaSB said:

Yes we have traded the genuine for the artificial ๐Ÿค”๐Ÿ˜”so true

July 15th, 2026 05:59

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nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:

good piece with sharpness to each line

July 15th, 2026 03:23

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Neville said:



Very noir .. near Gothic in fact best read standing by the stove with the candle lit .. Neville

July 15th, 2026 02:05

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12River34 said:

\"Emojis have become our touch of tenderness\".
Thats a stunning line.
Superb poem . Thx

July 15th, 2026 00:46

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Tristan Robert Lange said:

Soren, this is one haunting piece. I love how you turn the language of hospitality into something colder with each passing image, until even the simplest comfort has disappeared. That final image of the cold supper is a heartbreaking place to leave the reader. Wonderful write, my friend. ๐ŸŒน๐Ÿ–ค๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ•ฏ๏ธ๐Ÿฆโ€โฌ›

July 14th, 2026 19:10

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Kevin Hulme said:

He seemed to be Okay with the Darkness. Then something changed. But What? That\'s the real mystery for me here. The food was already laid on the table. So doesn\'t live alone . Thought Provoking piece. ๐Ÿค”

July 14th, 2026 16:04

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ELIORA said:

Your words carve through flesh and thought with striking precision. The imagery of โ€œliving stoneโ€ and โ€œrusted relicsโ€ feels like truth unearthed from decay โ€” a meditation on memory and the weight of what endures. Beautifully unsettling. ๐Ÿ–ค


July 14th, 2026 15:27

Change
JENNY M GUERRIER said:

That is the only constant thing in life.

July 14th, 2026 14:34

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orchidee said:

A fine write SB.

July 14th, 2026 10:54

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