Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Alliteration\'s addiction
Lorenz said:
Amazing verbal vertigo in the maze of an abyssal vortex !
June 19th, 2026 09:35
Lorenz said:
Amazing verbal vertigo in the maze of an abyssal vortex !
June 19th, 2026 09:35
Nervous
Poeticdiplo said:
A shaking leaf trembles at approaching rejection, but uses the very spurning to make a new leaf. A lovely poem, thank you.
June 19th, 2026 08:23
Poeticdiplo said:
A shaking leaf trembles at approaching rejection, but uses the very spurning to make a new leaf. A lovely poem, thank you.
June 19th, 2026 08:23
Alliteration\'s addiction
Friendship said:
Your poem explores the theme of addiction, particularly the allure and consequences associated with substance use. It reflects on the seductive nature of addiction, portraying it as an enticing yet destructive experience. Your imagery evokes both the beauty and the darkness of addiction, emphasizing how it entraps individuals in a cycle of pleasure and pain.
June 19th, 2026 07:34
Friendship said:
Your poem explores the theme of addiction, particularly the allure and consequences associated with substance use. It reflects on the seductive nature of addiction, portraying it as an enticing yet destructive experience. Your imagery evokes both the beauty and the darkness of addiction, emphasizing how it entraps individuals in a cycle of pleasure and pain.
June 19th, 2026 07:34
Alliteration\'s addiction
Paul Bell said:
One could be going through alphabet madness.
I\'m liking the adulterous ways, with dark dancing delight during drunken days coming a close second.
June 19th, 2026 07:21
Paul Bell said:
One could be going through alphabet madness.
I\'m liking the adulterous ways, with dark dancing delight during drunken days coming a close second.
June 19th, 2026 07:21
Alliteration\'s addiction
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
good write, Ive had a few of these days
June 19th, 2026 04:13
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
good write, Ive had a few of these days
June 19th, 2026 04:13
Illusive passion
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow...so powerful. Soren, \"mortal fingers are not made to cling to a shade\" is the image that really hit me. There is something so human in that struggle...reaching for what was never meant to be grasped. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 18th, 2026 20:42
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow...so powerful. Soren, \"mortal fingers are not made to cling to a shade\" is the image that really hit me. There is something so human in that struggle...reaching for what was never meant to be grasped. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 18th, 2026 20:42
Illusive passion
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow...so powerful. Soren, \"mortal fingers are not made to cling to a shade\" is the image that really hit me. There is something so human in that struggle...reaching for what was never meant to be grasped. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 18th, 2026 20:42
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow...so powerful. Soren, \"mortal fingers are not made to cling to a shade\" is the image that really hit me. There is something so human in that struggle...reaching for what was never meant to be grasped. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 18th, 2026 20:42
Illusive passion
Kevin Hulme said:
Sounds like the end of a Love Affair. Best to let it go . Move on. Fine Poem.
June 18th, 2026 19:18
Kevin Hulme said:
Sounds like the end of a Love Affair. Best to let it go . Move on. Fine Poem.
June 18th, 2026 19:18
Illusive passion
soheil khodaparasti said:
To hold the unholdable is to borrow sorrow; to let the garden breathe is to borrow bloom.
June 18th, 2026 09:40
soheil khodaparasti said:
To hold the unholdable is to borrow sorrow; to let the garden breathe is to borrow bloom.
June 18th, 2026 09:40
Illusive passion
Friendship said:
This poem presents a poignant meditation on the nature of passion, capturing the delicate balance between holding on and letting go.
June 18th, 2026 09:13
Friendship said:
This poem presents a poignant meditation on the nature of passion, capturing the delicate balance between holding on and letting go.
June 18th, 2026 09:13
Illusive passion
Paul Bell said:
Man can do many things, but nature can do more.
When the storm hits, no hands will hold it back.
Let the sun shine and I will grow.
June 18th, 2026 07:43
Paul Bell said:
Man can do many things, but nature can do more.
When the storm hits, no hands will hold it back.
Let the sun shine and I will grow.
June 18th, 2026 07:43
Isis
RSM0812 said:
Your poem is universally read and written. Enjoyed a lot. Emotioned universe how you cry tears of power.
June 18th, 2026 06:51
RSM0812 said:
Your poem is universally read and written. Enjoyed a lot. Emotioned universe how you cry tears of power.
June 18th, 2026 06:51
Isis
RSM0812 said:
Your poem is universally read and written. Enjoyed a lot. Emotioned universe how you cry tears of power.
June 18th, 2026 06:51
RSM0812 said:
Your poem is universally read and written. Enjoyed a lot. Emotioned universe how you cry tears of power.
June 18th, 2026 06:51
Illusive passion
arqios said:
Seems the orbits of today’s posted poems are somewhat on the same constellations 🌌🕊️🙏🏻
June 18th, 2026 06:10
arqios said:
Seems the orbits of today’s posted poems are somewhat on the same constellations 🌌🕊️🙏🏻
June 18th, 2026 06:10
Illusive passion
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
a beautiful message in this piece
June 18th, 2026 04:34
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
a beautiful message in this piece
June 18th, 2026 04:34
Illusive passion
Teddy.15 said:
It\'s amazing how the simple act of kindness and love can result in such beauty. A wonderful reminder to us all. 🌹
June 18th, 2026 04:28
Teddy.15 said:
It\'s amazing how the simple act of kindness and love can result in such beauty. A wonderful reminder to us all. 🌹
June 18th, 2026 04:28
Isis
Kevin Hulme said:
\'Dreaming mind expands out of reach\'. So true.
Isn\'t Mars the God of War? So Hopefully Venus will sort him out. I liked this. A good Write.
June 17th, 2026 18:43
Kevin Hulme said:
\'Dreaming mind expands out of reach\'. So true.
Isn\'t Mars the God of War? So Hopefully Venus will sort him out. I liked this. A good Write.
June 17th, 2026 18:43
Isis
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, what I enjoyed most here is the way the natural world becomes almost mythic. The moon, the sea, the breeze, the stars, Venus, and Mars all play their part in a nocturnal symphony of romance and possibility. The imagery is rich without feeling overworked, and the closing contrast between love and conflict provides a fitting culmination. Beautifully crafted, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 17th, 2026 11:49
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, what I enjoyed most here is the way the natural world becomes almost mythic. The moon, the sea, the breeze, the stars, Venus, and Mars all play their part in a nocturnal symphony of romance and possibility. The imagery is rich without feeling overworked, and the closing contrast between love and conflict provides a fitting culmination. Beautifully crafted, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 17th, 2026 11:49
Different shades of love
Joseph M Marion said:
Beautiful way to describe nature and its fight. Very good well written thank you my friend for being my friend
June 17th, 2026 10:36
Joseph M Marion said:
Beautiful way to describe nature and its fight. Very good well written thank you my friend for being my friend
June 17th, 2026 10:36
Isis
Soman Ragavan said:
It has been said that a man cannot enter a river twice : by the second time, it is not the same man and it is not the same river... This ties back to the ideas in the poem : when you look again, the vision will never be quite the same again...
June 17th, 2026 08:50
Soman Ragavan said:
It has been said that a man cannot enter a river twice : by the second time, it is not the same man and it is not the same river... This ties back to the ideas in the poem : when you look again, the vision will never be quite the same again...
June 17th, 2026 08:50
Change
Soman Ragavan said:
The poet\'s eye sees patterns and designs that others miss. The rotating colours bring out beauty but that beauty is a passing one. Memory is likened to a wall on which one writes. The design made out by a child in its game might seem insignificant to the adult, but the child\'s mind operates in its own way. Its creations might need time to be understood. A picture once seen cannot be seen in exactly the same way again : the mind\'s perception has changed. The next time we see it we will be influenced by experiences that have occurred in the meantime. The last line reinforces this idea : even if we manage to turn time back, we will never be able to see with the same eyes, because the eyes have evolved...
June 17th, 2026 08:46
Soman Ragavan said:
The poet\'s eye sees patterns and designs that others miss. The rotating colours bring out beauty but that beauty is a passing one. Memory is likened to a wall on which one writes. The design made out by a child in its game might seem insignificant to the adult, but the child\'s mind operates in its own way. Its creations might need time to be understood. A picture once seen cannot be seen in exactly the same way again : the mind\'s perception has changed. The next time we see it we will be influenced by experiences that have occurred in the meantime. The last line reinforces this idea : even if we manage to turn time back, we will never be able to see with the same eyes, because the eyes have evolved...
June 17th, 2026 08:46
Isis
arqios said:
The interaction between Mars and Venus is very interesting 🕊️🙏🏻
June 17th, 2026 06:34
arqios said:
The interaction between Mars and Venus is very interesting 🕊️🙏🏻
June 17th, 2026 06:34
Isis
soheil khodaparasti said:
A blend of mythology into a meditation on imagination and love. I like the personification of the moon in the first line: “The moon with soft tidal hands pulls a watery blanket over sleeping shores”.
June 17th, 2026 04:58
soheil khodaparasti said:
A blend of mythology into a meditation on imagination and love. I like the personification of the moon in the first line: “The moon with soft tidal hands pulls a watery blanket over sleeping shores”.
June 17th, 2026 04:58
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