Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Diminished returns
Kevin Hulme said:
Maybe I could do one on our Prime minister, but he\'s so bland.
A well thought out Poem.
April 17th, 2026 18:14
Kevin Hulme said:
Maybe I could do one on our Prime minister, but he\'s so bland.
A well thought out Poem.
April 17th, 2026 18:14
Diminished returns
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, haha yeah…there’s a precision to this. Diminishing returns indeed! You break it down layer by layer, letting each shift carry a little more weight and edge. It’s simple in structure, but it and the acrostic land with intention. Sharp, clever, and it memorable for sure. Strong piece and a fave. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 17th, 2026 10:52
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, haha yeah…there’s a precision to this. Diminishing returns indeed! You break it down layer by layer, letting each shift carry a little more weight and edge. It’s simple in structure, but it and the acrostic land with intention. Sharp, clever, and it memorable for sure. Strong piece and a fave. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 17th, 2026 10:52
Diminished returns
Friendship said:
Your Statement revolves around the connotations of the word \"Trump\" in both a literal and metaphorical sense, moving from concepts of authority and rank in games to the more mundane and negative aspects of life (waste and blame).
April 17th, 2026 09:01
Friendship said:
Your Statement revolves around the connotations of the word \"Trump\" in both a literal and metaphorical sense, moving from concepts of authority and rank in games to the more mundane and negative aspects of life (waste and blame).
April 17th, 2026 09:01
Diminished returns
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Absolutely love it a fav
April 17th, 2026 06:36
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Absolutely love it a fav
April 17th, 2026 06:36
Diminished returns
arqios said:
Humour shines in varied tints and shades, so does satire 🕊️🙏🏻
April 17th, 2026 05:41
arqios said:
Humour shines in varied tints and shades, so does satire 🕊️🙏🏻
April 17th, 2026 05:41
Diminished returns
Doggerel Dave said:
😂🤣Especially \'P\' - don\'t forget the solids...
April 17th, 2026 05:22
Doggerel Dave said:
😂🤣Especially \'P\' - don\'t forget the solids...
April 17th, 2026 05:22
Decay
Goldfinch60 said:
The glory of Natures way is failing us soren, lets go back to Natures way,
Andy
April 17th, 2026 01:15
Goldfinch60 said:
The glory of Natures way is failing us soren, lets go back to Natures way,
Andy
April 17th, 2026 01:15
Decay
NinjaGirl said:
Well done. I like the internal rhyme because it helps the flow. I really think that in this modern era, things are made not to last with the goal of forcing more consumerism.
April 16th, 2026 21:11
NinjaGirl said:
Well done. I like the internal rhyme because it helps the flow. I really think that in this modern era, things are made not to last with the goal of forcing more consumerism.
April 16th, 2026 21:11
Decay
Kevin Hulme said:
There\'s a lot of Green lands here that are now having Houses built on them. It\'s terrible.
A good Write.
April 16th, 2026 18:40
Kevin Hulme said:
There\'s a lot of Green lands here that are now having Houses built on them. It\'s terrible.
A good Write.
April 16th, 2026 18:40
Mankind
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, I apologize for the delay…just came off finishing a major composition called The Shaman, another tone poem, and it wiped me out a bit. That aside, this hits hard, my friend…no buffer, no softening…just straight into the brutality of it all. My kind of poem…a fave for sure. It feels like a raw indictment of what we justify when power takes over. It lingers heavy. Powerful write. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 16th, 2026 15:30
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, I apologize for the delay…just came off finishing a major composition called The Shaman, another tone poem, and it wiped me out a bit. That aside, this hits hard, my friend…no buffer, no softening…just straight into the brutality of it all. My kind of poem…a fave for sure. It feels like a raw indictment of what we justify when power takes over. It lingers heavy. Powerful write. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 16th, 2026 15:30
Decay
Friendship said:
Your poem reflects on the loss of beauty and strength over time, symbolized by the majestic tree that has been reduced to a mere stump. Nothing lasts forever.
April 16th, 2026 08:41
Friendship said:
Your poem reflects on the loss of beauty and strength over time, symbolized by the majestic tree that has been reduced to a mere stump. Nothing lasts forever.
April 16th, 2026 08:41
Decay
Waiting for Silence said:
Very well expressed. We creating concrete jungle replacing what was created by nature.
April 16th, 2026 07:37
Waiting for Silence said:
Very well expressed. We creating concrete jungle replacing what was created by nature.
April 16th, 2026 07:37
Decay
arqios said:
Plastic cement reminded me of model construction kits. Decay befalls so many things🙏🏻🕊️
April 16th, 2026 07:26
arqios said:
Plastic cement reminded me of model construction kits. Decay befalls so many things🙏🏻🕊️
April 16th, 2026 07:26
Decay
Teddy.15 said:
Tree\'s being so important to our planet. As a metaphor of Man works incredibly well too, Beautifully done dear sorrenbarret, Tree\'s and humans aren\'t all that different in the end. 🌹
April 16th, 2026 03:33
Teddy.15 said:
Tree\'s being so important to our planet. As a metaphor of Man works incredibly well too, Beautifully done dear sorrenbarret, Tree\'s and humans aren\'t all that different in the end. 🌹
April 16th, 2026 03:33
Decay
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
good write my friend, the old and the new
April 16th, 2026 03:21
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
good write my friend, the old and the new
April 16th, 2026 03:21
Gift return
Salvia.S said:
Simple words with great impact. Very well written!!!
April 15th, 2026 22:12
Salvia.S said:
Simple words with great impact. Very well written!!!
April 15th, 2026 22:12
Mankind
Doggerel Dave said:
I find it hard to disagree with any of that, Soren... But...
April 15th, 2026 19:09
Doggerel Dave said:
I find it hard to disagree with any of that, Soren... But...
April 15th, 2026 19:09
Mankind
Mutley Ravishes said:
Someone said, \"You\'re going to leave this world just as evil as you found it.\" Those Bodhisattvas have an almighty task on their hands! Having said that, the \"next round\" is said to take place within a higher octave, giving all of us miserable souls even more of a helping hand (and a kick up the backside?!).
April 15th, 2026 18:41
Mutley Ravishes said:
Someone said, \"You\'re going to leave this world just as evil as you found it.\" Those Bodhisattvas have an almighty task on their hands! Having said that, the \"next round\" is said to take place within a higher octave, giving all of us miserable souls even more of a helping hand (and a kick up the backside?!).
April 15th, 2026 18:41
Mankind
Kevin Hulme said:
No Punches being pulled in this Poem.
A fave for sure.
April 15th, 2026 18:25
Kevin Hulme said:
No Punches being pulled in this Poem.
A fave for sure.
April 15th, 2026 18:25
Mankind
RSM0812 said:
Very nicely written. I agree war is evil. Always escalates. And is not good for anybody. The things we fight for is at the point of international embarrassment. Your prose summed it up for me petfectly.
April 15th, 2026 16:37
RSM0812 said:
Very nicely written. I agree war is evil. Always escalates. And is not good for anybody. The things we fight for is at the point of international embarrassment. Your prose summed it up for me petfectly.
April 15th, 2026 16:37
Mankind
arqios said:
Telling it like it is, no punch pulled. Powered reading🙏🏻🕊️
April 15th, 2026 16:24
arqios said:
Telling it like it is, no punch pulled. Powered reading🙏🏻🕊️
April 15th, 2026 16:24
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