Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Four letter words
Allie561 said:
Another one of your clever poems! I like the deeper meaning of choosing where your perspective lies, as you have options to both. Hopefully most of us make the choice to be optimistic. Great work Soren.
February 17th, 2026 18:46
Allie561 said:
Another one of your clever poems! I like the deeper meaning of choosing where your perspective lies, as you have options to both. Hopefully most of us make the choice to be optimistic. Great work Soren.
February 17th, 2026 18:46
History of an old wound
William Hromada said:
Pain and misery waiting for healing with it not in sight!
February 17th, 2026 17:20
William Hromada said:
Pain and misery waiting for healing with it not in sight!
February 17th, 2026 17:20
Gratitude
William Hromada said:
Animals show greater gratitude than most humans.
February 17th, 2026 17:18
William Hromada said:
Animals show greater gratitude than most humans.
February 17th, 2026 17:18
Four letter words
Tonya Titus said:
This says it all. What gives life & power to these words is humanity\'s greatest power - choice.
February 17th, 2026 13:06
Tonya Titus said:
This says it all. What gives life & power to these words is humanity\'s greatest power - choice.
February 17th, 2026 13:06
Four letter words
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is deceptively simple. The four-letter pairings set the stakes fast, and “braided rope” makes the tension tangible. Then you widen the whole thing with microscope and telescope…constriction versus expansion. A tight structure with a clean, thoughtful finish. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 17th, 2026 10:47
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is deceptively simple. The four-letter pairings set the stakes fast, and “braided rope” makes the tension tangible. Then you widen the whole thing with microscope and telescope…constriction versus expansion. A tight structure with a clean, thoughtful finish. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 17th, 2026 10:47
Let me have the life of a photon e=hf
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this hit me hard…there’s a vastness in it that feels both dizzying and calm at the same time. You don’t just question time…you dissolve it. That final line lands like a quiet detonation. Powerful piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 17th, 2026 10:07
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this hit me hard…there’s a vastness in it that feels both dizzying and calm at the same time. You don’t just question time…you dissolve it. That final line lands like a quiet detonation. Powerful piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 17th, 2026 10:07
Four letter words
orchidee said:
A fine write SB. I got a 6 letter word for KP. Well, a 4 letter word too. They are: Menu - Sewage. heehee. You knew I would say that!
February 17th, 2026 07:56
orchidee said:
A fine write SB. I got a 6 letter word for KP. Well, a 4 letter word too. They are: Menu - Sewage. heehee. You knew I would say that!
February 17th, 2026 07:56
Four letter words
Paul Bell said:
Love and hate being the most powerful.
Betrayal brings them both into focus and this is when the words really show their true meaning.
Maybe not take the ex for a coffee now.
February 17th, 2026 07:49
Paul Bell said:
Love and hate being the most powerful.
Betrayal brings them both into focus and this is when the words really show their true meaning.
Maybe not take the ex for a coffee now.
February 17th, 2026 07:49
Four letter words
Thomas W Case said:
this twists like barbed wire around the heart—sharp, relentless, and honest.
I see the rope pulling tight, yet somehow your words still let light slip through the cracks.
February 17th, 2026 07:37
Thomas W Case said:
this twists like barbed wire around the heart—sharp, relentless, and honest.
I see the rope pulling tight, yet somehow your words still let light slip through the cracks.
February 17th, 2026 07:37
Four letter words
rebellion_in_sanity said:
An example of economy of words. Enjoyed the read very much- every word earned it\'s place.
February 17th, 2026 06:10
rebellion_in_sanity said:
An example of economy of words. Enjoyed the read very much- every word earned it\'s place.
February 17th, 2026 06:10
Four letter words
David Wakeling said:
Words are certainly powerful.They can destroy a person or build them up.This list would take a lifetime to analyse.Certainly enjoyable to read
February 17th, 2026 05:09
David Wakeling said:
Words are certainly powerful.They can destroy a person or build them up.This list would take a lifetime to analyse.Certainly enjoyable to read
February 17th, 2026 05:09
Pests
NafisaSB said:
the struggle for expiation of sins is very well depicted..kudos..
February 17th, 2026 00:54
NafisaSB said:
the struggle for expiation of sins is very well depicted..kudos..
February 17th, 2026 00:54
Let me have the life of a photon e=hf
RSM0812 said:
Ahh time is but an illusion. Existing to give purpose of control. It is a friend. It heals all wounds. It is an enemy. It eventually brings death. But is it simply man made with no real true existance in the universe? A remarkable write Sorrenbarett.
February 17th, 2026 00:13
RSM0812 said:
Ahh time is but an illusion. Existing to give purpose of control. It is a friend. It heals all wounds. It is an enemy. It eventually brings death. But is it simply man made with no real true existance in the universe? A remarkable write Sorrenbarett.
February 17th, 2026 00:13
Car of rust
Vipassana said:
nicely lighthearted, with clever lines like
She squeaks until she is greased a junkyard priest told me she was deceased
February 16th, 2026 21:12
Vipassana said:
nicely lighthearted, with clever lines like
She squeaks until she is greased a junkyard priest told me she was deceased
February 16th, 2026 21:12
Tree and the lily
Vipassana said:
nicely rendered parable. lots of ways to interpret--that\'s a lovely thing. I agree with a comment below--\"That\'s Lily for you, just never happy.\"
February 16th, 2026 21:06
Vipassana said:
nicely rendered parable. lots of ways to interpret--that\'s a lovely thing. I agree with a comment below--\"That\'s Lily for you, just never happy.\"
February 16th, 2026 21:06
Innocence
Vipassana said:
lovely. disillusion as one ages is indeed - The charm of magic taken from one\'s eyes, now seen as nothing but a hoodwinker\'s lies.
February 16th, 2026 20:58
Vipassana said:
lovely. disillusion as one ages is indeed - The charm of magic taken from one\'s eyes, now seen as nothing but a hoodwinker\'s lies.
February 16th, 2026 20:58
Black spot
Kevin Hulme said:
Anything that kills a Rose is a scurge. Well Said.
February 16th, 2026 20:53
Kevin Hulme said:
Anything that kills a Rose is a scurge. Well Said.
February 16th, 2026 20:53
Gratitude
Vipassana said:
really nicely rendered---all the ambiguity and irony and sadness of fear and conditioning (A freed canary returns to its cage). and I like the way it moves relentlessly forward. well done, sir.
February 16th, 2026 20:50
Vipassana said:
really nicely rendered---all the ambiguity and irony and sadness of fear and conditioning (A freed canary returns to its cage). and I like the way it moves relentlessly forward. well done, sir.
February 16th, 2026 20:50
Let me have the life of a photon e=hf
Vipassana said:
really nice!
all and nothing is real---indeed.
February 16th, 2026 20:38
Vipassana said:
really nice!
all and nothing is real---indeed.
February 16th, 2026 20:38
Let me have the life of a photon e=hf
Allie561 said:
A wonderful write Soren. The metaphors and imagery in this poem are very strong, I can imagine what it would feel like to be one.
February 16th, 2026 13:48
Allie561 said:
A wonderful write Soren. The metaphors and imagery in this poem are very strong, I can imagine what it would feel like to be one.
February 16th, 2026 13:48
Let me have the life of a photon e=hf
Paul Bell said:
Sometimes you wonder, with human beings, we don\'t really belong here, yet we come and go, so it is quite possible we don\'t go far.
Returning to a hot country when I come back.
February 16th, 2026 09:31
Paul Bell said:
Sometimes you wonder, with human beings, we don\'t really belong here, yet we come and go, so it is quite possible we don\'t go far.
Returning to a hot country when I come back.
February 16th, 2026 09:31
Car of rust
Jeremy Leach said:
Love it and the imagery is clear in my mind. And the feeling. Very well put together and written.
February 16th, 2026 08:54
Jeremy Leach said:
Love it and the imagery is clear in my mind. And the feeling. Very well put together and written.
February 16th, 2026 08:54
Let me have the life of a photon e=hf
Jeremy Leach said:
Very thoughtfully put and plays with deep mysteries that resonate with me. Well written too and it\'s refreshingly different.
February 16th, 2026 08:49
Jeremy Leach said:
Very thoughtfully put and plays with deep mysteries that resonate with me. Well written too and it\'s refreshingly different.
February 16th, 2026 08:49
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