Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Values
Butter said:
I’m illiterate but it sounded nice coming out form my face hole :3!
August 12th, 2026 03:42
Butter said:
I’m illiterate but it sounded nice coming out form my face hole :3!
August 12th, 2026 03:42
Right off the shelf
soheil khodaparasti said:
I really like how this poem uses artificial materials to explore the idea of love becoming commercialized and disposable. The final line leaves a sad impression, emphasizing how easily something once meaningful can be thrown away.
August 12th, 2026 03:39
soheil khodaparasti said:
I really like how this poem uses artificial materials to explore the idea of love becoming commercialized and disposable. The final line leaves a sad impression, emphasizing how easily something once meaningful can be thrown away.
August 12th, 2026 03:39
Right off the shelf
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
the throwaway goods of today, good write my friend
August 12th, 2026 03:10
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
the throwaway goods of today, good write my friend
August 12th, 2026 03:10
Out of style
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this one has some bite, my friend! There’s something deeply sad about treating people and intimacy like disposable commodities…eventually everything becomes another product to consume and discard. Powerful write! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 11th, 2026 20:32
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this one has some bite, my friend! There’s something deeply sad about treating people and intimacy like disposable commodities…eventually everything becomes another product to consume and discard. Powerful write! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 11th, 2026 20:32
Out of style
Kevin Hulme said:
Nicely Summed up. It\'s the way of the World I\'m afraid.
August 11th, 2026 19:24
Kevin Hulme said:
Nicely Summed up. It\'s the way of the World I\'m afraid.
August 11th, 2026 19:24
Out of style
Paul Bell said:
Love is 50 dollars, lust on the other hand, now that\'s a 100 dollars for sure.
Tax deductable in some countries.
It is weird, but every time you buy something, it becomes yesterdays object, and that includes people as well.
I can see why lots of women have cats now.
August 11th, 2026 11:17
Paul Bell said:
Love is 50 dollars, lust on the other hand, now that\'s a 100 dollars for sure.
Tax deductable in some countries.
It is weird, but every time you buy something, it becomes yesterdays object, and that includes people as well.
I can see why lots of women have cats now.
August 11th, 2026 11:17
Be willing to give what you ask
notapoet said:
This one stopped me, a very powerful piece you created, love it! Truly a great write.
August 11th, 2026 10:46
notapoet said:
This one stopped me, a very powerful piece you created, love it! Truly a great write.
August 11th, 2026 10:46
It really happened
Joseph M Marion said:
I forgot to tell you I love this I love the way you write God bless you
August 11th, 2026 07:59
Joseph M Marion said:
I forgot to tell you I love this I love the way you write God bless you
August 11th, 2026 07:59
It really happened
Joseph M Marion said:
I\'ve actually known a true story about this. In my neighborhood when I was a young man about 5 years before this happened his father and his brothers were released from the military and one day the brother kept asking why his cards were being denied so my father being and having connections in the system one over to Roy potassium\'s bought for him and asked him what was going on showing him the letters he immediately noticed it was because they believed he was dead at this suspicion Roy made some calls downtown in front of the parties that were being blamed and sure enough somebody filed this young man\'s paperwork in the wrong file under deceased
August 11th, 2026 07:59
Joseph M Marion said:
I\'ve actually known a true story about this. In my neighborhood when I was a young man about 5 years before this happened his father and his brothers were released from the military and one day the brother kept asking why his cards were being denied so my father being and having connections in the system one over to Roy potassium\'s bought for him and asked him what was going on showing him the letters he immediately noticed it was because they believed he was dead at this suspicion Roy made some calls downtown in front of the parties that were being blamed and sure enough somebody filed this young man\'s paperwork in the wrong file under deceased
August 11th, 2026 07:59
Out of style
Demar Desu said:
Seems like you’ve been outside lately… great poem elder
August 11th, 2026 07:13
Demar Desu said:
Seems like you’ve been outside lately… great poem elder
August 11th, 2026 07:13
Out of style
Thomas W Case said:
This has a sharp, cynical pulse, taking aim at a culture that markets desire while starving people of damn compassion. The rhyme drives the argument forward like a machine, and the final image of shiny people becoming disposable trash hits hard.
August 11th, 2026 06:40
Thomas W Case said:
This has a sharp, cynical pulse, taking aim at a culture that markets desire while starving people of damn compassion. The rhyme drives the argument forward like a machine, and the final image of shiny people becoming disposable trash hits hard.
August 11th, 2026 06:40
Out of style
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
a perfect summing up my friend
August 11th, 2026 06:38
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
a perfect summing up my friend
August 11th, 2026 06:38
Out of style
Mutley Ravishes said:
Lust, perhaps the greatest messenger or our present times? I just posted a rhyme on this too!
August 11th, 2026 05:22
Mutley Ravishes said:
Lust, perhaps the greatest messenger or our present times? I just posted a rhyme on this too!
August 11th, 2026 05:22
Out of style
arqios said:
When things that should matter no longer do, it makes me wonder if poems and poetry are among the throw-away variety of stuff. 🕊️🙏
August 11th, 2026 05:12
arqios said:
When things that should matter no longer do, it makes me wonder if poems and poetry are among the throw-away variety of stuff. 🕊️🙏
August 11th, 2026 05:12
Out of style
soheil khodaparasti said:
A powerful critique of a culture that often confuses passion and physical attraction with genuine love and compassion. I like especially the comparison between the way people and relationships can be treated as commodities and the way disposable consumer goods are valued, used, and eventually discarded.
August 11th, 2026 03:59
soheil khodaparasti said:
A powerful critique of a culture that often confuses passion and physical attraction with genuine love and compassion. I like especially the comparison between the way people and relationships can be treated as commodities and the way disposable consumer goods are valued, used, and eventually discarded.
August 11th, 2026 03:59
It really happened
NafisaSB said:
Unbelievable and yet it does happen- and in our land sometimes the dead turn up to vote in the garb of one who does not have a card🤔😔
August 11th, 2026 03:35
NafisaSB said:
Unbelievable and yet it does happen- and in our land sometimes the dead turn up to vote in the garb of one who does not have a card🤔😔
August 11th, 2026 03:35
What to believe
Teddy.15 said:
So they say, this is so true I always follow the advice of the Italian oldies because they look fabulous. 🌹
August 11th, 2026 02:42
Teddy.15 said:
So they say, this is so true I always follow the advice of the Italian oldies because they look fabulous. 🌹
August 11th, 2026 02:42
It really happened
boot said:
Haha...my mom collected dad\'s pension for twenty years after he passed
August 10th, 2026 23:04
boot said:
Haha...my mom collected dad\'s pension for twenty years after he passed
August 10th, 2026 23:04
What to believe
mylastwrites said:
Funny, entertaining but oh so factual. You nailed what they don\'t know. Thoughts to ponder. Well done.
August 10th, 2026 14:56
mylastwrites said:
Funny, entertaining but oh so factual. You nailed what they don\'t know. Thoughts to ponder. Well done.
August 10th, 2026 14:56
What to believe
Kevin Hulme said:
Why is it that when you go to the Doctors, the first thing he says is : \'How are you\'? \' Oh I\'m quite well thank you. Thought I\'d come and waste your time and mine\'.
As for your Poem: A fine piece as usual. The graveyards are full of Healthy Eaters.
August 10th, 2026 11:57
Kevin Hulme said:
Why is it that when you go to the Doctors, the first thing he says is : \'How are you\'? \' Oh I\'m quite well thank you. Thought I\'d come and waste your time and mine\'.
As for your Poem: A fine piece as usual. The graveyards are full of Healthy Eaters.
August 10th, 2026 11:57
What to believe
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Hahaha, Soren! 😂 At this point I’m beginning to think the healthiest diet is simply to live long enough for yesterday’s forbidden food to become tomorrow’s recommendation. The march from yolks to booze to bacon had me laughing, but that final line brings the whole merry-go-round back to the individual body. Great fun, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 10th, 2026 10:39
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Hahaha, Soren! 😂 At this point I’m beginning to think the healthiest diet is simply to live long enough for yesterday’s forbidden food to become tomorrow’s recommendation. The march from yolks to booze to bacon had me laughing, but that final line brings the whole merry-go-round back to the individual body. Great fun, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 10th, 2026 10:39
What to believe
Paul Bell said:
The people in the 60s and 70s fried everything.
Then the 80s came, and they healthly killed themselves.
Granny always said that lot would be dead before her.
Seems she was right.
August 10th, 2026 09:12
Paul Bell said:
The people in the 60s and 70s fried everything.
Then the 80s came, and they healthly killed themselves.
Granny always said that lot would be dead before her.
Seems she was right.
August 10th, 2026 09:12
In a breath
turningpoint said:
we sometimes feel ourlives are teetering on disaster like that
afriend or family member had an accident or is in a hospital my friend soren
August 10th, 2026 08:04
turningpoint said:
we sometimes feel ourlives are teetering on disaster like that
afriend or family member had an accident or is in a hospital my friend soren
August 10th, 2026 08:04
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