Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Locked out
Kevin Hulme said:
This could also be an Metaphor to a Person\'s Personality. I\'ve known some People who look quite distant of \'Put-offish\' but were just Quiet.
Good Write.
October 28th, 2026 17:21
Kevin Hulme said:
This could also be an Metaphor to a Person\'s Personality. I\'ve known some People who look quite distant of \'Put-offish\' but were just Quiet.
Good Write.
October 28th, 2026 17:21
Locked out
Tristan Robert Lange said:
You know, Soren, some of the kindest people I\'ve encountered have also been the hardest to get to know. It\'s amazing what a little patience and genuine curiosity can reveal. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 28th, 2026 16:52
Tristan Robert Lange said:
You know, Soren, some of the kindest people I\'ve encountered have also been the hardest to get to know. It\'s amazing what a little patience and genuine curiosity can reveal. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 28th, 2026 16:52
Locked out
arqios said:
When things go up in flames other attentions come to the foreground 👍🏻🕊️
October 28th, 2026 08:11
arqios said:
When things go up in flames other attentions come to the foreground 👍🏻🕊️
October 28th, 2026 08:11
Locked out
Friendship said:
Nicely written, your poem revolves around a metaphorical representation of an emotionally guarded person. The imagery you painted of a cold exterior juxtaposed with an inner warmth signifies the complexity of human emotions and the longing for connection despite being locked away.
October 28th, 2026 07:44
Friendship said:
Nicely written, your poem revolves around a metaphorical representation of an emotionally guarded person. The imagery you painted of a cold exterior juxtaposed with an inner warmth signifies the complexity of human emotions and the longing for connection despite being locked away.
October 28th, 2026 07:44
Locked out
Paul Bell said:
This conjures up different feelings.
There\'s a, do not disturb.
Yet there\'s also a welcome feel to it.
Then the house is locked up and he\'s gone.
Is he a warrior, or a prisoner.
October 28th, 2026 06:44
Paul Bell said:
This conjures up different feelings.
There\'s a, do not disturb.
Yet there\'s also a welcome feel to it.
Then the house is locked up and he\'s gone.
Is he a warrior, or a prisoner.
October 28th, 2026 06:44
jack o\'lantern
boot said:
Holy crap...my punkin head is cringing in frightened apprehension...
October 27th, 2026 22:38
boot said:
Holy crap...my punkin head is cringing in frightened apprehension...
October 27th, 2026 22:38
Pussy
boot said:
No lawyers for the feline..
Nature\'s scent invites the scene
Maybe.. that\'s why perfume\'s..now
Smell so pure and clean
Cover up the animal
October 27th, 2026 22:28
boot said:
No lawyers for the feline..
Nature\'s scent invites the scene
Maybe.. that\'s why perfume\'s..now
Smell so pure and clean
Cover up the animal
October 27th, 2026 22:28
The devil\'s tongue
arqios said:
When our benchmarks move it makes us wonder about who really is benefiting from these conventions. Most moving dear Soren. 🙏🏻🕊️
October 27th, 2026 21:22
arqios said:
When our benchmarks move it makes us wonder about who really is benefiting from these conventions. Most moving dear Soren. 🙏🏻🕊️
October 27th, 2026 21:22
The devil\'s tongue
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Excellent write, Soren…I’d have a few choice words for the bastards responsible. You certainly got me worked up with this one. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 27th, 2026 20:03
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Excellent write, Soren…I’d have a few choice words for the bastards responsible. You certainly got me worked up with this one. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 27th, 2026 20:03
The devil\'s tongue
Kevin Hulme said:
I wonder if there was Oil discovered under my Home, did It all belong to me?
Sure some Small print would say: No!
October 27th, 2026 19:22
Kevin Hulme said:
I wonder if there was Oil discovered under my Home, did It all belong to me?
Sure some Small print would say: No!
October 27th, 2026 19:22
Wait
cully45 said:
Thanks Soren your comments are always appreciated . Regards Owen
October 27th, 2026 09:07
cully45 said:
Thanks Soren your comments are always appreciated . Regards Owen
October 27th, 2026 09:07
The devil\'s tongue
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a sharp distrust of written authority running through this poem, linking constitutional promises, broken treaties, and the hive’s unquestioned obedience to suggest that documents meant to establish order can become instruments of control and betrayal. “Native Americans found that a treaty for ground / only their hands bound in its redistribution” is the keeper for me, because it gives the poem’s anger a concrete historical wound, exposing the bitter difference between a promise signed on paper and the power to decide whose hands must pay for it.
October 27th, 2026 08:41
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a sharp distrust of written authority running through this poem, linking constitutional promises, broken treaties, and the hive’s unquestioned obedience to suggest that documents meant to establish order can become instruments of control and betrayal. “Native Americans found that a treaty for ground / only their hands bound in its redistribution” is the keeper for me, because it gives the poem’s anger a concrete historical wound, exposing the bitter difference between a promise signed on paper and the power to decide whose hands must pay for it.
October 27th, 2026 08:41
The devil\'s tongue
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Soren,
The making of to the breaking of and the gathering of the drones to satisfy the queen bee in her lust for power regardless of the pledges, the law and the rights of the individual in a poem worthy of and the praising of its author. Very well said, my friend.
Fond regards,
Tony.
October 27th, 2026 08:03
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Soren,
The making of to the breaking of and the gathering of the drones to satisfy the queen bee in her lust for power regardless of the pledges, the law and the rights of the individual in a poem worthy of and the praising of its author. Very well said, my friend.
Fond regards,
Tony.
October 27th, 2026 08:03
The devil\'s tongue
Friendship said:
I enjoy your writing, a little history this morning. Your poem focuses on the historical context of treaties made with Native Americans, the impact of such agreements, and the broader implications of these actions on society. It also draws parallels between the hierarchical structure of nature (represented by bees and their queen) and human governance.
October 27th, 2026 08:00
Friendship said:
I enjoy your writing, a little history this morning. Your poem focuses on the historical context of treaties made with Native Americans, the impact of such agreements, and the broader implications of these actions on society. It also draws parallels between the hierarchical structure of nature (represented by bees and their queen) and human governance.
October 27th, 2026 08:00
Cut down
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Soren,
How we plunder and destroy for worship, nicities, greed and ignorance. A memory of yore and what once was in another very fine poem from your quill, my friend.
Wishing you all the best,
Tony.
October 27th, 2026 07:29
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Soren,
How we plunder and destroy for worship, nicities, greed and ignorance. A memory of yore and what once was in another very fine poem from your quill, my friend.
Wishing you all the best,
Tony.
October 27th, 2026 07:29
The devil\'s tongue
Paul Bell said:
When the small print is micoscopic, beware.
You might own your house, but you just sold the land it sits on.
How many houses do you see inbetween freeways, and right away you know why.
October 27th, 2026 06:39
Paul Bell said:
When the small print is micoscopic, beware.
You might own your house, but you just sold the land it sits on.
How many houses do you see inbetween freeways, and right away you know why.
October 27th, 2026 06:39
The devil\'s tongue
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Mans signature and word mean so little as history tells us
October 27th, 2026 03:41
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Mans signature and word mean so little as history tells us
October 27th, 2026 03:41
The devil\'s tongue
Teddy.15 said:
Only you could have written such a piece with so much elegance, humans are to blame for what\'s wrong, having any kind of treaty is only worth the paper it\'s written on, because along comes a new \"queen\" and it all gets ripped up! Powerful and effective my friend. 🌹
October 27th, 2026 03:31
Teddy.15 said:
Only you could have written such a piece with so much elegance, humans are to blame for what\'s wrong, having any kind of treaty is only worth the paper it\'s written on, because along comes a new \"queen\" and it all gets ripped up! Powerful and effective my friend. 🌹
October 27th, 2026 03:31
Cut down
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words soren showing the awful state that the world is in at the moment.
Andy
October 27th, 2026 02:14
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words soren showing the awful state that the world is in at the moment.
Andy
October 27th, 2026 02:14
Memories
Donteatmecows said:
Hey! I really enjoyed this poem here! To me is seems that it is saying that after time goes on, memories become less vivid and alive in you. It also covers motherhood and how that same child don\'t appreciate her as they grew older and now as adulthood they carry their own opinions and mindsets and now are focused on earning money. Thanks so much for this, sir! A nice way to spend my time!
October 27th, 2026 00:35
Donteatmecows said:
Hey! I really enjoyed this poem here! To me is seems that it is saying that after time goes on, memories become less vivid and alive in you. It also covers motherhood and how that same child don\'t appreciate her as they grew older and now as adulthood they carry their own opinions and mindsets and now are focused on earning money. Thanks so much for this, sir! A nice way to spend my time!
October 27th, 2026 00:35
Cut down
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, the tree survives, but the world around it has changed beyond recognition...that quiet contrast gives this real weight. Excellent poem about colonialism and it\'s horrifying ongoing consequences.🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 26th, 2026 12:49
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, the tree survives, but the world around it has changed beyond recognition...that quiet contrast gives this real weight. Excellent poem about colonialism and it\'s horrifying ongoing consequences.🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 26th, 2026 12:49
Cheese
FrasMac said:
very cleverly composed with the three rhyme per couplet thing going on. I love cheese!
October 26th, 2026 12:44
FrasMac said:
very cleverly composed with the three rhyme per couplet thing going on. I love cheese!
October 26th, 2026 12:44
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