Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett



Ambiguity
Tristan Robert Lange said:

My friend, I love wordplay that makes me stop and reconsider words I\'ve used my whole life without thinking about them. This was a fun mental workout from beginning to end. Wonderful write, Soren. ๐ŸŒน๐Ÿ–ค๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ•ฏ๏ธ๐Ÿฆโ€โฌ›

July 12th, 2026 07:33

Ambiguity
rhmn_7 said:

Your truly intriguing style is very impressive Soren!

July 12th, 2026 07:25

Brush painted
rhmn_7 said:

Painting a fleeting, bittersweet portrait of a hybrid bloom bowing to the elements under a twilight sky. Great work Sorren!

July 12th, 2026 07:18

Ambiguity
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:

great format to this piece

July 12th, 2026 05:54

Ambiguity
Paul Bell said:

Got this message out in exam form, beads of sweat were coming down my neck.
I remember the Polish bear who served in the army.

July 12th, 2026 05:31

Ambiguity
arqios said:

How did you format that!? That\'s quite impressive๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ•Š๏ธ

July 12th, 2026 05:19

Ambiguity
orchidee said:

A good right SB, or is it write? No ambiguity with KP\'s dinners - sewage every day and no change there! lol. It\'s \'orrible in our house at mealtimes. Well it is for KP. Fido and I have roast dinners, strawberries and cream, etc.

July 12th, 2026 03:04

Brush painted
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful words and imagery brought to the mind soren.

Andy

July 12th, 2026 01:03

Brush painted
Kevin Hulme said:

An interesting Image of a Portrait is formed by your description. Nice one.

July 11th, 2026 19:49

Did you know it\'s all true
Jyoti Verma said:

Exactly! Just because man has the power to express ,can\'t say that man is the best, nature is more beautiful and more expressive,other firms of life have more interesting ways to express,more adventurous ways to survive and tgrive

July 11th, 2026 15:21

Development
JENNY M GUERRIER said:

You have a gift for turning everyday strugglesโ€”especially those of motherhood โ€”into reflective verse.

July 11th, 2026 12:02

Man
Durdica Porobija said:

The poem is full of obvious truth, exposing the lie in which we live, distant from nature and tenderness.

July 11th, 2026 11:50

Brush painted
Lorenz said:

I think I hear a movement from the pastoral symphony ...

July 11th, 2026 10:08

Brush painted
orchidee said:

Good write SB. A bit like chalk and cheese? e.g. KP and me. lol.

July 11th, 2026 09:29

Brush painted
Tristan Robert Lange said:

My friend, I love the reminder that some of the most beautiful things happen where order and wildness meet. Nature has a way of ignoring the boundaries we try to give it. Wonderful read. ๐ŸŒน๐Ÿ–ค๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ•ฏ๏ธ๐Ÿฆโ€โฌ›

July 11th, 2026 08:03

Out of sight
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Soren, what a touching piece. The passage of twenty-five years makes the rediscovery of that ticket all the more powerful, and the ending carries such quiet heartbreak. Sometimes the smallest keepsakes hold the biggest stories. Wonderful write, my friend. ๐ŸŒน๐Ÿ–ค๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ•ฏ๏ธ๐Ÿฆโ€โฌ›

July 11th, 2026 07:32

Brush painted
arqios said:

The complementary sides is where opposites meet, something beautiful, fragile, and enduring can be born. ๐Ÿ•Š๏ธ๐Ÿ™

July 11th, 2026 07:05

Brush painted
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:

flows so well

July 11th, 2026 04:45

Out of sight
mylastwrites said:

The past is never far away from reminding us of loss. Very nicely done.

July 10th, 2026 21:57

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July 10th, 2026 21:56

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Kevin Hulme said:

It\'s amazing the Objects you find at the back of a Drawer that revives old Memories.
Nice one.

July 10th, 2026 18:13

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GenXer Sharon ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ€ said:

Nostalgiaโ€ฆ great write โœ๏ธ my friend

July 10th, 2026 14:14

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orchidee said:

A fine write SB.

July 10th, 2026 12:44

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Anna Wakey29 said:

Beautiful. I loved that it was short - the reason being is that the snappy length really added a certain weight and unconscious relatability to that awful snap-like realisation when you come across something that triggers such powerful memories and feelings. Well done

July 10th, 2026 12:18

The collector
falcon_mn said:

Thank you very much for your comment and for recognizing the potential in this poem.
Thanks!

July 10th, 2026 12:16

Out of sight
Syd said:

Hi Sorenbarret, it\'s funny how certain things can take you back. For me it\'s usually music that triggers memories. An enjoyable and relatable piece.

Well written - Syd ๐Ÿ„



July 10th, 2026 10:57

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Demar Desu said:

Masterpiece

July 10th, 2026 07:26

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arqios said:

I have such used tickets lying around in places hidden from daily view! Some in actual albums to accompany old photos and such. ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ•Š๏ธ

July 10th, 2026 06:13

Out of sight
Paul Bell said:

Good or bad, how quickly can an object instantly take us back to that moment.
One thing I intentionally never do, is return to places that have impacted my life.
You know right off that particular period has gone and the visit just spoils that moment in time.

July 10th, 2026 05:25

Out of sight
soheil khodaparasti said:

Beautifully crafted. An ordinary object becomes a vessel for decades of forgotten emotion, a deeply relatable experience. It is a touching meditation on how grief can lie dormant for years, waiting for the smallest forgotten object to bring it rushing back. The emotion feels authentic and earned rather than sentimental.

July 10th, 2026 04:10

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