Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Time
Durdica Porobija said:
A contemplative poem—even a philosophical one. There is a philosophy of time. The coldness between two heartbeats that you managed to observe is chilling. Powerfully moving!
September 17th, 2026 13:58
Durdica Porobija said:
A contemplative poem—even a philosophical one. There is a philosophy of time. The coldness between two heartbeats that you managed to observe is chilling. Powerfully moving!
September 17th, 2026 13:58
Freedom
Durdica Porobija said:
Freedom and love—two precious values that often elude us. Well done!
September 17th, 2026 13:10
Durdica Porobija said:
Freedom and love—two precious values that often elude us. Well done!
September 17th, 2026 13:10
Cracked
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Brilliantly written, Soren. I love how the description shifts from personal appearance into the deterioration of an entire structure...as though the person has spent years holding himself together with whatever was available. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 17th, 2026 10:28
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Brilliantly written, Soren. I love how the description shifts from personal appearance into the deterioration of an entire structure...as though the person has spent years holding himself together with whatever was available. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 17th, 2026 10:28
Cracked
orchidee said:
A fine write SB. Ahh, a description of KP - the drooping, trout-like lip. Oh no! I met another \'trout\' in person recently! lol.
September 17th, 2026 08:37
orchidee said:
A fine write SB. Ahh, a description of KP - the drooping, trout-like lip. Oh no! I met another \'trout\' in person recently! lol.
September 17th, 2026 08:37
Cracked
Teddy.15 said:
I\'m forever intrigued when you write these type poems, for me I keep coming back to a house or home. 🌹
September 17th, 2026 05:19
Teddy.15 said:
I\'m forever intrigued when you write these type poems, for me I keep coming back to a house or home. 🌹
September 17th, 2026 05:19
Black is not black
Goldfinch60 said:
The light will always be in our lives soren.
Andy
September 17th, 2026 00:37
Goldfinch60 said:
The light will always be in our lives soren.
Andy
September 17th, 2026 00:37
Freedom
Amber D. Petty Patrick said:
Amen. I love this!! #IfYouKnowYouKnow
September 17th, 2026 00:21
Amber D. Petty Patrick said:
Amen. I love this!! #IfYouKnowYouKnow
September 17th, 2026 00:21
Black is not black
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is a fascinating meditation on how certainty dissolves under closer attention. The absolutes we name are often mixtures, transitions, and perceptions…nothing remains as simple as its label. Excellent work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🐦⬛
September 16th, 2026 22:24
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is a fascinating meditation on how certainty dissolves under closer attention. The absolutes we name are often mixtures, transitions, and perceptions…nothing remains as simple as its label. Excellent work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🐦⬛
September 16th, 2026 22:24
Gilded cage
Joseph M Marion said:
This is very cute I\'ve read stories like this
September 16th, 2026 19:47
Joseph M Marion said:
This is very cute I\'ve read stories like this
September 16th, 2026 19:47
All or nothing
Joseph M Marion said:
That\'s why God gave us free will so we know the difference between what\'s right and wrong evil exists because he allows it to exist I love the way you write thank you beautiful
September 16th, 2026 19:44
Joseph M Marion said:
That\'s why God gave us free will so we know the difference between what\'s right and wrong evil exists because he allows it to exist I love the way you write thank you beautiful
September 16th, 2026 19:44
Black is not black
Kevin Hulme said:
A deep Question about the Beginning of Dark and Light. Is there a Point when its Absolutely Dark of Light.
Thoughtful Write.
September 16th, 2026 18:18
Kevin Hulme said:
A deep Question about the Beginning of Dark and Light. Is there a Point when its Absolutely Dark of Light.
Thoughtful Write.
September 16th, 2026 18:18
Black is not black
Vamsi Sudha said:
Hey Sorren, please reveal your thoughts...Make them white...:)
September 16th, 2026 11:28
Vamsi Sudha said:
Hey Sorren, please reveal your thoughts...Make them white...:)
September 16th, 2026 11:28
Black is not black
Friendship said:
I had to read this poem several times; it was a bit confusing. Yet in the long run, it kind of made sense, but it really doesn\'t make sense because you were all over the place. You wrote a poem of so many questions, yet a lack of a pattern. The concept of black and white, light and dark, is shifting the boundaries between them. Over all The definitions of colors and the transitions between day and night are not absolute but rather influenced by various factors.
September 16th, 2026 11:25
Friendship said:
I had to read this poem several times; it was a bit confusing. Yet in the long run, it kind of made sense, but it really doesn\'t make sense because you were all over the place. You wrote a poem of so many questions, yet a lack of a pattern. The concept of black and white, light and dark, is shifting the boundaries between them. Over all The definitions of colors and the transitions between day and night are not absolute but rather influenced by various factors.
September 16th, 2026 11:25
All or nothing
soheil khodaparasti said:
A thoughtful philosophical poem exploring the tension between divine omniscience, free will, and moral responsibility. The poem presents these as opposing possibilities, while I believe free will and determinism are not necessarily absolute opposites; our choices can be influenced by circumstances, upbringing, and biology without eliminating all personal agency.
September 16th, 2026 02:40
soheil khodaparasti said:
A thoughtful philosophical poem exploring the tension between divine omniscience, free will, and moral responsibility. The poem presents these as opposing possibilities, while I believe free will and determinism are not necessarily absolute opposites; our choices can be influenced by circumstances, upbringing, and biology without eliminating all personal agency.
September 16th, 2026 02:40
All or nothing
Donteatmecows said:
Jesus saved my life as a child...His power literally changed what is unchangeable by any other means...God loves us and exists...and yes, he has no control over us...not because he isn\'t capable of controlling us it\'s because he gave us free will and if he controlled us he\'d be violating his own law he set for himself, which is impossible...He basically chose to have no control...He gave control to us humans so because of that if we act in certain ways we have ourselves to blame for misusing our free will....respectfully, i dont think it\'s actually an All or nothing, black and white situation, it\'s more complicated than that
September 16th, 2026 01:48
Donteatmecows said:
Jesus saved my life as a child...His power literally changed what is unchangeable by any other means...God loves us and exists...and yes, he has no control over us...not because he isn\'t capable of controlling us it\'s because he gave us free will and if he controlled us he\'d be violating his own law he set for himself, which is impossible...He basically chose to have no control...He gave control to us humans so because of that if we act in certain ways we have ourselves to blame for misusing our free will....respectfully, i dont think it\'s actually an All or nothing, black and white situation, it\'s more complicated than that
September 16th, 2026 01:48
All or nothing
Goldfinch60 said:
Intriguing words soren but we all have our own god and believe in differing ways.
Andy
September 16th, 2026 01:18
Goldfinch60 said:
Intriguing words soren but we all have our own god and believe in differing ways.
Andy
September 16th, 2026 01:18
All or nothing
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, the connection between responsibility and divine knowledge is what caught me here. Knowing an action and determining it are not necessarily identical, yet explaining how freedom survives complete foreknowledge is no small task. Excellent food for thought. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 15th, 2026 22:20
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, the connection between responsibility and divine knowledge is what caught me here. Knowing an action and determining it are not necessarily identical, yet explaining how freedom survives complete foreknowledge is no small task. Excellent food for thought. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 15th, 2026 22:20
All or nothing
Doggerel Dave said:
A poetic conundrum of the highest order (highest – geddit?). Fun. But seriously all speculation re this God on high and his ways is something I cannot engage with, Soren. Not that you will feel put down or sad about that as I think I know your actual views well enough.
On the general subject of God I say, and have often repeated, if someone can derive some comfort from this hard world with a belief in a god figure, then good luck to them.
But where does this God reside in the mist of Infinity and Eternity? And surely he is ripe for a pension by now?
September 15th, 2026 19:18
Doggerel Dave said:
A poetic conundrum of the highest order (highest – geddit?). Fun. But seriously all speculation re this God on high and his ways is something I cannot engage with, Soren. Not that you will feel put down or sad about that as I think I know your actual views well enough.
On the general subject of God I say, and have often repeated, if someone can derive some comfort from this hard world with a belief in a god figure, then good luck to them.
But where does this God reside in the mist of Infinity and Eternity? And surely he is ripe for a pension by now?
September 15th, 2026 19:18
All or nothing
Kevin Hulme said:
The old conundrum. Like the beginning of a Circle. Or if I went back in time, and killed my Grandfather: Would I still exist?
God being God should have known how we would have turned out. No surprise.
A fave here .
September 15th, 2026 19:12
Kevin Hulme said:
The old conundrum. Like the beginning of a Circle. Or if I went back in time, and killed my Grandfather: Would I still exist?
God being God should have known how we would have turned out. No surprise.
A fave here .
September 15th, 2026 19:12
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