Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Man
Iam1ItchyLizzard said:
and mostly all in my lifetime too your such a realist .....
July 24th, 2026 14:20
Iam1ItchyLizzard said:
and mostly all in my lifetime too your such a realist .....
July 24th, 2026 14:20
The collector
Iam1ItchyLizzard said:
all things even the worthless have value thank God
July 24th, 2026 14:12
Iam1ItchyLizzard said:
all things even the worthless have value thank God
July 24th, 2026 14:12
Once upon a playful loss
GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀 said:
Beautifully written my friend! Every Rose has a thorn. That last line made me think of this.
July 24th, 2026 14:07
GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀 said:
Beautifully written my friend! Every Rose has a thorn. That last line made me think of this.
July 24th, 2026 14:07
Scared
GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀 said:
A fine piece here my friend. Like humans.. running away from something instead of confronting it
July 24th, 2026 14:05
GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀 said:
A fine piece here my friend. Like humans.. running away from something instead of confronting it
July 24th, 2026 14:05
Scared
Lorenz said:
The perpetual cycle of creation and destruction .Eternal renewal and cosmic unity .
July 24th, 2026 10:43
Lorenz said:
The perpetual cycle of creation and destruction .Eternal renewal and cosmic unity .
July 24th, 2026 10:43
Scared
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a brilliantly constructed piece, Soren! The escalating tension and circular movement expose how fear and domination continually reproduce themselves. I have watched that pattern operate far too often in human institutions…and your conclusion captures its self-consuming nature perfectly. Powerful work, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 24th, 2026 09:36
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a brilliantly constructed piece, Soren! The escalating tension and circular movement expose how fear and domination continually reproduce themselves. I have watched that pattern operate far too often in human institutions…and your conclusion captures its self-consuming nature perfectly. Powerful work, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 24th, 2026 09:36
Scared
soheil khodaparasti said:
Excellent. Fear is projected outward, transforming the feared into a role that someone else must occupy. It moves through individuals, making each both victim and threat.
This creates a false equilibrium: fear is not resolved but redistributed. By giving fear an external face, frightened beings create a temporary sense of order, yet the attempt to escape fear generates new fear elsewhere.
The system therefore sustains itself through the continuous circulation of terror. Its balance is maintained not by the absence of fear but by its perpetual transfer.
July 24th, 2026 08:13
soheil khodaparasti said:
Excellent. Fear is projected outward, transforming the feared into a role that someone else must occupy. It moves through individuals, making each both victim and threat.
This creates a false equilibrium: fear is not resolved but redistributed. By giving fear an external face, frightened beings create a temporary sense of order, yet the attempt to escape fear generates new fear elsewhere.
The system therefore sustains itself through the continuous circulation of terror. Its balance is maintained not by the absence of fear but by its perpetual transfer.
July 24th, 2026 08:13
Once upon a playful loss
Samprikta Paul said:
This felt sweet and cute, while reading, I could imagine animated and Ghibli art. Well written
July 24th, 2026 06:53
Samprikta Paul said:
This felt sweet and cute, while reading, I could imagine animated and Ghibli art. Well written
July 24th, 2026 06:53
Scared
Paul Bell said:
We\'re all running from someone.
Even the king of the jungle shudders when man turns up.
I suppose the religious know who the real deal is, and maybe they were right all along.
July 24th, 2026 05:28
Paul Bell said:
We\'re all running from someone.
Even the king of the jungle shudders when man turns up.
I suppose the religious know who the real deal is, and maybe they were right all along.
July 24th, 2026 05:28
Scared
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
fine write friend, each line stepping into next with precision
July 24th, 2026 03:30
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
fine write friend, each line stepping into next with precision
July 24th, 2026 03:30
Once upon a playful loss
soheil khodaparasti said:
Your poem beautifully captures how innocence evolves into self-protection.
July 23rd, 2026 14:06
soheil khodaparasti said:
Your poem beautifully captures how innocence evolves into self-protection.
July 23rd, 2026 14:06
Once upon a playful loss
Kevin Hulme said:
Yes it\'s amazing how some things are Small and grow Large or Dangerous.
You buy a little Puppy for the Kids , then next minute its the Hound of the Baskervilles.
A fave here .
July 23rd, 2026 12:13
Kevin Hulme said:
Yes it\'s amazing how some things are Small and grow Large or Dangerous.
You buy a little Puppy for the Kids , then next minute its the Hound of the Baskervilles.
A fave here .
July 23rd, 2026 12:13
Once upon a playful loss
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this really moved me. Growing older so often means developing defenses we never needed at the beginning...and innocence rarely survives without scars. Powerful poem, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 23rd, 2026 08:30
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this really moved me. Growing older so often means developing defenses we never needed at the beginning...and innocence rarely survives without scars. Powerful poem, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 23rd, 2026 08:30
Precarious
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is one heck of a poem. The tension builds quietly and leaves me holding my breath...waiting for the inevitable shift. Brilliantly done, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 23rd, 2026 08:04
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is one heck of a poem. The tension builds quietly and leaves me holding my breath...waiting for the inevitable shift. Brilliantly done, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 23rd, 2026 08:04
Once upon a playful loss
Lorenz said:
Let\'s stop growing before it\'s too late !
July 23rd, 2026 07:56
Lorenz said:
Let\'s stop growing before it\'s too late !
July 23rd, 2026 07:56
Once upon a playful loss
arqios said:
No one defends us but ourselves even when we at times delegate that to others. 🙏🕊️
July 23rd, 2026 07:13
arqios said:
No one defends us but ourselves even when we at times delegate that to others. 🙏🕊️
July 23rd, 2026 07:13
Once upon a playful loss
Teddy.15 said:
Wow your metaphor is superb, and yes we can all be changed by circumstances, hopefully for the better yet it\'s not always the case. 🌹
July 23rd, 2026 03:29
Teddy.15 said:
Wow your metaphor is superb, and yes we can all be changed by circumstances, hopefully for the better yet it\'s not always the case. 🌹
July 23rd, 2026 03:29
Once upon a playful loss
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
A deep write my friend
July 23rd, 2026 03:26
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
A deep write my friend
July 23rd, 2026 03:26
Precarious
Kevin Hulme said:
This could Sum-Up so many things, not just one. Apply it to whatever you think fit.
Good Write.
July 22nd, 2026 19:29
Kevin Hulme said:
This could Sum-Up so many things, not just one. Apply it to whatever you think fit.
Good Write.
July 22nd, 2026 19:29
Precarious
8Blackwidow8 said:
(Before the balance of the pendulum turns over
A silent moment in the eye of a hurricane)
Well put here. I\'m such a fan already.
July 22nd, 2026 15:52
8Blackwidow8 said:
(Before the balance of the pendulum turns over
A silent moment in the eye of a hurricane)
Well put here. I\'m such a fan already.
July 22nd, 2026 15:52
Precarious
Paul Bell said:
The eye, the only part of the hurricane that\'s calm.
Seems sort of strange with such a destructive force.
A bit like Trump when he\'s sleeping.
July 22nd, 2026 11:15
Paul Bell said:
The eye, the only part of the hurricane that\'s calm.
Seems sort of strange with such a destructive force.
A bit like Trump when he\'s sleeping.
July 22nd, 2026 11:15
Precarious
Lorenz said:
My damn autistic perspective is more inspired by the menacing tornado about to strike than the deep metaphor ...Really sorry !
July 22nd, 2026 08:51
Lorenz said:
My damn autistic perspective is more inspired by the menacing tornado about to strike than the deep metaphor ...Really sorry !
July 22nd, 2026 08:51
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