Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Kobe beef
Katie B. said:
Really enjoyed this and agree on all fronts. Your talent amazes me. Have you been published frequently? Do you have books? And yes, I do read poetry. My fave, William Stafford.
December 31st, 2025 13:00
Katie B. said:
Really enjoyed this and agree on all fronts. Your talent amazes me. Have you been published frequently? Do you have books? And yes, I do read poetry. My fave, William Stafford.
December 31st, 2025 13:00
What schools don\'t teach
Rachel Poole said:
I just had this conversation with a neighbor yesterday. Not one soul was born to hate...it is a behavior that is sadly taught. We adults should take a lesson or 2 in kindness and compassion from children. Great read!
December 31st, 2025 09:50
Rachel Poole said:
I just had this conversation with a neighbor yesterday. Not one soul was born to hate...it is a behavior that is sadly taught. We adults should take a lesson or 2 in kindness and compassion from children. Great read!
December 31st, 2025 09:50
Kobe beef
Rachel Poole said:
Clever way of expressing the monotony of the world today. I enjoy your writing style!
December 31st, 2025 09:47
Rachel Poole said:
Clever way of expressing the monotony of the world today. I enjoy your writing style!
December 31st, 2025 09:47
Kobe beef
Jerry Reynolds said:
Now-Now, sorenbarrett. I resemble those remarks. Before we put collective pistols to our heads, Happy New Year and Happy writing in 2026.
December 31st, 2025 09:23
Jerry Reynolds said:
Now-Now, sorenbarrett. I resemble those remarks. Before we put collective pistols to our heads, Happy New Year and Happy writing in 2026.
December 31st, 2025 09:23
Kobe beef
soheil khodaparasti said:
You are right; trading awareness for comfort and becoming less human is what today\'s world suffer from. Very nice.
December 31st, 2025 09:21
soheil khodaparasti said:
You are right; trading awareness for comfort and becoming less human is what today\'s world suffer from. Very nice.
December 31st, 2025 09:21
Kobe beef
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is a bleak and necessary observation. You move from personal isolation to cultural consumption without losing coherence, and that final image indicts complacency more than cruelty. It’s a lament and a warning at once. Strong work. Happy New Year to you and your family, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 31st, 2025 08:58
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is a bleak and necessary observation. You move from personal isolation to cultural consumption without losing coherence, and that final image indicts complacency more than cruelty. It’s a lament and a warning at once. Strong work. Happy New Year to you and your family, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 31st, 2025 08:58
Kobe beef
Friendship said:
You portray the world with human-like qualities, describing it as \"deaf,\" \"blind,\" and having \"hearts too hard to feel,\" which amplifies the sense of isolation. Indeed, some people do become desensitized to beauty and treat others poorly due to their own bitterness. The metaphor of consuming Kobe beef highlights the superficial nature of certain pleasures. Your poem offers a critique of modern society\'s detachment from meaningful art and experiences, arguing that people prioritize consumerism and technology over deeper understanding.
December 31st, 2025 08:48
Friendship said:
You portray the world with human-like qualities, describing it as \"deaf,\" \"blind,\" and having \"hearts too hard to feel,\" which amplifies the sense of isolation. Indeed, some people do become desensitized to beauty and treat others poorly due to their own bitterness. The metaphor of consuming Kobe beef highlights the superficial nature of certain pleasures. Your poem offers a critique of modern society\'s detachment from meaningful art and experiences, arguing that people prioritize consumerism and technology over deeper understanding.
December 31st, 2025 08:48
Kobe beef
arqios said:
Wagyu poets and Kobe poems - makes me sad, the reality at poets’ state and the condition of readership in our time and day 🕊️🙏🏻
December 31st, 2025 07:48
arqios said:
Wagyu poets and Kobe poems - makes me sad, the reality at poets’ state and the condition of readership in our time and day 🕊️🙏🏻
December 31st, 2025 07:48
Guilt by association
Dan Williams said:
Brief but eloquent. \"Beware friends you keep, with whom you sleep, in their shadow you live\" hits me where I live. Nice work.
December 31st, 2025 04:26
Dan Williams said:
Brief but eloquent. \"Beware friends you keep, with whom you sleep, in their shadow you live\" hits me where I live. Nice work.
December 31st, 2025 04:26
Kobe beef
Teddy.15 said:
I\'m charmed by this because your soul is everywhere on this poem, we have the same thoughts today although your talents are far greater in creative poetry than mine, always humbled and most truly honoured to take away something I\'ve read, putting it in my little pocket of reflection and inspiration. My dear sorrenbarret thank you. 🌹
December 31st, 2025 03:30
Teddy.15 said:
I\'m charmed by this because your soul is everywhere on this poem, we have the same thoughts today although your talents are far greater in creative poetry than mine, always humbled and most truly honoured to take away something I\'ve read, putting it in my little pocket of reflection and inspiration. My dear sorrenbarret thank you. 🌹
December 31st, 2025 03:30
Guilt by association
Goldfinch60 said:
Always give respect soren and hate will soon be dispelled.
Andy
December 31st, 2025 02:50
Goldfinch60 said:
Always give respect soren and hate will soon be dispelled.
Andy
December 31st, 2025 02:50
Guilt by association
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is a steady dismantling of moral comfort. You line up everyday images until association itself becomes the verdict. By the time we reach that final warning, it doesn’t accuse…it instructs. Strong, thoughtful work. Love it, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 30th, 2025 10:50
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is a steady dismantling of moral comfort. You line up everyday images until association itself becomes the verdict. By the time we reach that final warning, it doesn’t accuse…it instructs. Strong, thoughtful work. Love it, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 30th, 2025 10:50
Guilt by association
orchidee said:
Good write SB. KP prepared a game of Russian Roulette for me but she only left one chamber of the gun EMPYTY. She did it on purpose. She said \'You go first, dear!\' lol. Dunno why she complains - I give her protein of apples with worms in. heehee.
December 30th, 2025 04:58
orchidee said:
Good write SB. KP prepared a game of Russian Roulette for me but she only left one chamber of the gun EMPYTY. She did it on purpose. She said \'You go first, dear!\' lol. Dunno why she complains - I give her protein of apples with worms in. heehee.
December 30th, 2025 04:58
Guilt by association
Friendship said:
Well said. Your poem revolves around the concept of \"guilt by association,\" exploring how individuals can be judged or held accountable for the actions or characteristics of those they are connected with. It questions the fairness of such judgments and emphasizes the complexity of relationships and perceptions.
December 30th, 2025 04:50
Friendship said:
Well said. Your poem revolves around the concept of \"guilt by association,\" exploring how individuals can be judged or held accountable for the actions or characteristics of those they are connected with. It questions the fairness of such judgments and emphasizes the complexity of relationships and perceptions.
December 30th, 2025 04:50
Guilt by association
Katie B. said:
Love \"Guilt by association, people\'s interpretation.\" True words spoken. Another great write with a powerful message. Always a pleasure!
-Katie
December 30th, 2025 03:53
Katie B. said:
Love \"Guilt by association, people\'s interpretation.\" True words spoken. Another great write with a powerful message. Always a pleasure!
-Katie
December 30th, 2025 03:53
What we are left
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words soren, life is built inmany ways.
Andy
December 30th, 2025 02:48
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words soren, life is built inmany ways.
Andy
December 30th, 2025 02:48
What we are left
Kevin Hulme said:
I Love it when the Initials of the Builders are found in Old Buildings. Or Graffiti for Centuries Past. A good Write.
December 29th, 2025 21:16
Kevin Hulme said:
I Love it when the Initials of the Builders are found in Old Buildings. Or Graffiti for Centuries Past. A good Write.
December 29th, 2025 21:16
What we are left
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is a quiet tribute to labor and lineage. You trace creation from tree to shelter to inheritance, and by the end the gratitude is implied rather than demanded. That restraint gives the poem its strength. Thoughtful and steady work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 29th, 2025 14:57
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is a quiet tribute to labor and lineage. You trace creation from tree to shelter to inheritance, and by the end the gratitude is implied rather than demanded. That restraint gives the poem its strength. Thoughtful and steady work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 29th, 2025 14:57
What we are left
arqios said:
Our efforts however seemingly insignificant are tactile and allows for a better future like learning from an acting on past history. Thanks for putting the mind on that track🙏🏻🕊️
December 29th, 2025 09:31
arqios said:
Our efforts however seemingly insignificant are tactile and allows for a better future like learning from an acting on past history. Thanks for putting the mind on that track🙏🏻🕊️
December 29th, 2025 09:31
What we are left
Katie B. said:
I really like this one SB! Well done. I always appreciate what you have to share.
December 29th, 2025 08:39
Katie B. said:
I really like this one SB! Well done. I always appreciate what you have to share.
December 29th, 2025 08:39
What we are left
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem explores the theme of labor and legacy, highlighting the connection between the physical act of building (specifically with wood) and the memories and lives that are entwined with that labor. It reflects on how each generation leaves its mark through hard work and the creation of spaces that carry the weight of history.
December 29th, 2025 08:20
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem explores the theme of labor and legacy, highlighting the connection between the physical act of building (specifically with wood) and the memories and lives that are entwined with that labor. It reflects on how each generation leaves its mark through hard work and the creation of spaces that carry the weight of history.
December 29th, 2025 08:20
Eden had no fences until man came
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
great write
December 29th, 2025 05:01
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
great write
December 29th, 2025 05:01
What we are left
Teddy.15 said:
So very beautifully crafted, you are a fine carpenter of poetry my dear sorrenbarret 🌹
December 29th, 2025 04:00
Teddy.15 said:
So very beautifully crafted, you are a fine carpenter of poetry my dear sorrenbarret 🌹
December 29th, 2025 04:00
What we are left
orchidee said:
Good write SB. Yes, I leave KP in a log cabin for months, and throw away the key! lol.
December 29th, 2025 03:29
orchidee said:
Good write SB. Yes, I leave KP in a log cabin for months, and throw away the key! lol.
December 29th, 2025 03:29
Eden had no fences until man came
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderfully very true words Soren, the earth belongs to us all and we should treat it with respect.
Andy
December 29th, 2025 02:46
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderfully very true words Soren, the earth belongs to us all and we should treat it with respect.
Andy
December 29th, 2025 02:46
Eden had no fences until man came
Katie B. said:
The more things change the more they stay the same. I appreciate your work.
December 28th, 2025 08:10
Katie B. said:
The more things change the more they stay the same. I appreciate your work.
December 28th, 2025 08:10
Eden had no fences until man came
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is direct, uncompromising, and necessary. You weave ancient story into modern violence and arrive at a truth that feels almost too obvious…and yet still ignored. The refusal to sanctify borders or greed gives this real moral weight. Strong work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 28th, 2025 07:57
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is direct, uncompromising, and necessary. You weave ancient story into modern violence and arrive at a truth that feels almost too obvious…and yet still ignored. The refusal to sanctify borders or greed gives this real moral weight. Strong work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 28th, 2025 07:57
Eden had no fences until man came
Friendship said:
Your poem revolves around the concept of ownership, specifically the human tendency to claim land and resources, which leads to conflict and suffering. It critiques the notion of property and borders, suggesting that land, like air, should be shared by all rather than owned by individuals or nations. The poem draws connections between biblical narratives and modern conflicts, illustrating a long-standing pattern of violence and jealousy over territorial claims.
December 28th, 2025 05:32
Friendship said:
Your poem revolves around the concept of ownership, specifically the human tendency to claim land and resources, which leads to conflict and suffering. It critiques the notion of property and borders, suggesting that land, like air, should be shared by all rather than owned by individuals or nations. The poem draws connections between biblical narratives and modern conflicts, illustrating a long-standing pattern of violence and jealousy over territorial claims.
December 28th, 2025 05:32
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