Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Taken
soheil khodaparasti said:
By illustrating that what is wrongly taken can never truly nourish but instead destroys the one who consumes it, you lead the reader to the deeper realization that stolen pleasures may satisfy for a moment but ultimately corrupt the soul of the one who takes them. Beautifully expressed.
July 2nd, 2026 08:57
soheil khodaparasti said:
By illustrating that what is wrongly taken can never truly nourish but instead destroys the one who consumes it, you lead the reader to the deeper realization that stolen pleasures may satisfy for a moment but ultimately corrupt the soul of the one who takes them. Beautifully expressed.
July 2nd, 2026 08:57
Conditional
Salvia.S said:
Love the grammatical wordplay that actually means something, about the wasted potential. Wet wood should burn, could burn, but without heat it won\'t. So you spurn it. Ruthless, but honest.
July 2nd, 2026 08:02
Salvia.S said:
Love the grammatical wordplay that actually means something, about the wasted potential. Wet wood should burn, could burn, but without heat it won\'t. So you spurn it. Ruthless, but honest.
July 2nd, 2026 08:02
Conditional
arqios said:
Here is a rhyme that unconditionally relays the conditional. 🙏🕊️
July 2nd, 2026 05:44
arqios said:
Here is a rhyme that unconditionally relays the conditional. 🙏🕊️
July 2nd, 2026 05:44
Conditional
Teddy.15 said:
Feed the flames of passion, that\'s how I hear this, without passion we are left with ashes or soggy wood good for nothing. Love this 🌹
July 2nd, 2026 03:35
Teddy.15 said:
Feed the flames of passion, that\'s how I hear this, without passion we are left with ashes or soggy wood good for nothing. Love this 🌹
July 2nd, 2026 03:35
Taken
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is a powerful and unsettling piece. The progression from theft to consequence unfolds with an almost biblical intensity, leaving a strong impression by the final lines. Thought-provoking write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 1st, 2026 22:49
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is a powerful and unsettling piece. The progression from theft to consequence unfolds with an almost biblical intensity, leaving a strong impression by the final lines. Thought-provoking write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 1st, 2026 22:49
Taken
Kevin Hulme said:
I\'ve Been in a Supermarket and seen People just shoving Items down their Shirts. And Walking out. It\'s in the News here alot as it\'s an Epidemic. A good Write.
July 1st, 2026 19:29
Kevin Hulme said:
I\'ve Been in a Supermarket and seen People just shoving Items down their Shirts. And Walking out. It\'s in the News here alot as it\'s an Epidemic. A good Write.
July 1st, 2026 19:29
Taken
arqios said:
Here, if you left something on the sidewalk it would have been swept away within the hour. 🙏🏻🕊️
July 1st, 2026 08:06
arqios said:
Here, if you left something on the sidewalk it would have been swept away within the hour. 🙏🏻🕊️
July 1st, 2026 08:06
Taken
Teddy.15 said:
A wonderful poem, your poem speaks to me as greed and it\'s everywhere 🌹
July 1st, 2026 07:43
Teddy.15 said:
A wonderful poem, your poem speaks to me as greed and it\'s everywhere 🌹
July 1st, 2026 07:43
Pieces
Dan Williams said:
Many kinds of glaciers leave many kinds of marks. Echoes of thought can realistically be dispersed by breezes. A flake of skin, a fallen hair, fingerprints are all evidence of this. Nice.
July 1st, 2026 02:52
Dan Williams said:
Many kinds of glaciers leave many kinds of marks. Echoes of thought can realistically be dispersed by breezes. A flake of skin, a fallen hair, fingerprints are all evidence of this. Nice.
July 1st, 2026 02:52
Taken
orchidee said:
Good write SB. I steal sewage for KP\'s dinners but no one complains! lol.
July 1st, 2026 02:27
orchidee said:
Good write SB. I steal sewage for KP\'s dinners but no one complains! lol.
July 1st, 2026 02:27
Touch
Soman Ragavan said:
Spells out the ravages age wreaks on the body. \"Broken fragments of truth\" : thus, even truth can be broken and served in parts... \"living stone...\" : while everything goes well, we don\'t notice the stone. When everyone is gone, we feel the coldness and silence of the stone...
June 30th, 2026 22:17
Soman Ragavan said:
Spells out the ravages age wreaks on the body. \"Broken fragments of truth\" : thus, even truth can be broken and served in parts... \"living stone...\" : while everything goes well, we don\'t notice the stone. When everyone is gone, we feel the coldness and silence of the stone...
June 30th, 2026 22:17
Touch
Kevin Hulme said:
A good Write. The Past and the Present. Two different Animals.
June 30th, 2026 18:19
Kevin Hulme said:
A good Write. The Past and the Present. Two different Animals.
June 30th, 2026 18:19
Touch
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, \"broken fragments of truth, torn from value\'s cloth\" is the image that stayed with me. It carries such a sense of loss without ever becoming heavy-handed. Beautifully done, Soren. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 30th, 2026 14:48
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, \"broken fragments of truth, torn from value\'s cloth\" is the image that stayed with me. It carries such a sense of loss without ever becoming heavy-handed. Beautifully done, Soren. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 30th, 2026 14:48
Touch
Paul Bell said:
The truth is made up of a bodyguard of lies.
Sometimes we never question the past, maybe because in our own mind we know the truth, but now it\'s just immaterial to the present time.
June 30th, 2026 11:17
Paul Bell said:
The truth is made up of a bodyguard of lies.
Sometimes we never question the past, maybe because in our own mind we know the truth, but now it\'s just immaterial to the present time.
June 30th, 2026 11:17
Touch
soheil khodaparasti said:
Through strong, cohesive imagery, the poem explores an inward search for truth, suggesting that memory and the past are fragmented, decayed, and more likely to obscure reality than reveal it.
June 30th, 2026 09:01
soheil khodaparasti said:
Through strong, cohesive imagery, the poem explores an inward search for truth, suggesting that memory and the past are fragmented, decayed, and more likely to obscure reality than reveal it.
June 30th, 2026 09:01
Touch
orchidee said:
Good write SB. And - so you know that rusted relic KP?! lol.
June 30th, 2026 08:31
orchidee said:
Good write SB. And - so you know that rusted relic KP?! lol.
June 30th, 2026 08:31
Touch
Thomas W Case said:
A visceral reach inward, stripping flesh back to bone just to question what’s real and what’s been dressed up as truth.
There’s a worn, haunted edge here—memory as rusted armor, protecting and deceiving in the same breath.
June 30th, 2026 08:23
Thomas W Case said:
A visceral reach inward, stripping flesh back to bone just to question what’s real and what’s been dressed up as truth.
There’s a worn, haunted edge here—memory as rusted armor, protecting and deceiving in the same breath.
June 30th, 2026 08:23
Touch
Friendship said:
A lovely write. Your poem revolves around physical and emotional connections to the past. The imagery you painted of touching flesh and bone symbolizes a deep introspection and a search for meaning within one’s personal history. This poem to me reflects on the fragility of memories and truths, suggesting that what we hold dear may not be as trustworthy as we believe.
June 30th, 2026 06:05
Friendship said:
A lovely write. Your poem revolves around physical and emotional connections to the past. The imagery you painted of touching flesh and bone symbolizes a deep introspection and a search for meaning within one’s personal history. This poem to me reflects on the fragility of memories and truths, suggesting that what we hold dear may not be as trustworthy as we believe.
June 30th, 2026 06:05
Be willing to give what you ask
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive words soren showing both sides of the coin of life.
Andy
June 30th, 2026 01:55
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive words soren showing both sides of the coin of life.
Andy
June 30th, 2026 01:55
Growing old
hzugman said:
Lovely SB. Made me think of Shakespeare\'s seven ages of man from As You Like It.
June 29th, 2026 19:32
hzugman said:
Lovely SB. Made me think of Shakespeare\'s seven ages of man from As You Like It.
June 29th, 2026 19:32
Be willing to give what you ask
Paul Bell said:
I will follow you to the end of the earth, but only because I know the earth is round.
Once upon a time when I thought you could fall over the edge of earth, I might have lied a little bit.
Man is a superior being, that\'s why we kill each other.
June 29th, 2026 16:00
Paul Bell said:
I will follow you to the end of the earth, but only because I know the earth is round.
Once upon a time when I thought you could fall over the edge of earth, I might have lied a little bit.
Man is a superior being, that\'s why we kill each other.
June 29th, 2026 16:00
Be willing to give what you ask
peto said:
I\'m not getting involved with the intellectual conversation
But I am faving this
Excellent
June 29th, 2026 15:26
peto said:
I\'m not getting involved with the intellectual conversation
But I am faving this
Excellent
June 29th, 2026 15:26
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