Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Cradled
soheil khodaparasti said:
A poetic celebration of the peace and freedom found in nature’s embrace.
August 22nd, 2026 07:35
soheil khodaparasti said:
A poetic celebration of the peace and freedom found in nature’s embrace.
August 22nd, 2026 07:35
Cradled
Syd said:
This is a beautiful well crafted write Sorenbarret 👏
I felt like I was there. Top notch imagery and rhyme.
- Syd 🍄
August 22nd, 2026 04:59
Syd said:
This is a beautiful well crafted write Sorenbarret 👏
I felt like I was there. Top notch imagery and rhyme.
- Syd 🍄
August 22nd, 2026 04:59
Unrepented
Poeticdiplo said:
A selfish dove fighting
When doves are symbols of peace
For justice that outta be free
But now is chained in a cage of greed
While the sounds of war steal
The river, the dam and ant!
A splendid and beautiful and sad reflection of our world. Thank you.
August 22nd, 2026 00:05
Poeticdiplo said:
A selfish dove fighting
When doves are symbols of peace
For justice that outta be free
But now is chained in a cage of greed
While the sounds of war steal
The river, the dam and ant!
A splendid and beautiful and sad reflection of our world. Thank you.
August 22nd, 2026 00:05
Quiet suffering
arqios said:
Blame is indeed the destructive force in community. We were always reminded that the accusing finger when pointed, leaves the other three pointing to self. And quiet suffering doesn\'t stay quiet forever!
August 21st, 2026 20:02
arqios said:
Blame is indeed the destructive force in community. We were always reminded that the accusing finger when pointed, leaves the other three pointing to self. And quiet suffering doesn\'t stay quiet forever!
August 21st, 2026 20:02
Quiet suffering
David Wakeling said:
Quite a description of nature at its worst here. Yet it ends.I always learn from your poems.Great work amigo.
August 21st, 2026 19:27
David Wakeling said:
Quite a description of nature at its worst here. Yet it ends.I always learn from your poems.Great work amigo.
August 21st, 2026 19:27
Quiet suffering
Kevin Hulme said:
Reminds me of those fools in Parliament. Blaming each other for all our Ills.
And it\'s us: Joe Public picking up the pieces.
Good Write.
August 21st, 2026 18:41
Kevin Hulme said:
Reminds me of those fools in Parliament. Blaming each other for all our Ills.
And it\'s us: Joe Public picking up the pieces.
Good Write.
August 21st, 2026 18:41
Quiet suffering
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a powerful extended metaphor, Soren! The silent stream absorbs every downpour until its clarity is buried and its restrained suffering becomes destructive force. It speaks painfully to how relentless blame can transform the very person expected to endure it quietly. Excellent poem, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 21st, 2026 16:33
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a powerful extended metaphor, Soren! The silent stream absorbs every downpour until its clarity is buried and its restrained suffering becomes destructive force. It speaks painfully to how relentless blame can transform the very person expected to endure it quietly. Excellent poem, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 21st, 2026 16:33
Quiet suffering
Neville said:
water much like fire is a force to be reckoned with .. a good friend but you wouldn\'t want it for an enemy ..
August 21st, 2026 13:43
Neville said:
water much like fire is a force to be reckoned with .. a good friend but you wouldn\'t want it for an enemy ..
August 21st, 2026 13:43
Quiet suffering
orchidee said:
Good write SB.
Erm, I thought you was gonna write about my marriage to KP, with that title. Though I hardly ever see her in person - only on the telly, in papers, magazines, at the Old Trout pub, and a hundred etc\'s. lol.
August 21st, 2026 07:42
orchidee said:
Good write SB.
Erm, I thought you was gonna write about my marriage to KP, with that title. Though I hardly ever see her in person - only on the telly, in papers, magazines, at the Old Trout pub, and a hundred etc\'s. lol.
August 21st, 2026 07:42
Quiet suffering
Paul Bell said:
Yes, if nature isn\'t burning us alive, she\'s drowning us, which tells me she\'s had enough.
Something has to give, and with a force like nature, it doesn\'t do to annoy the great woman.
August 21st, 2026 06:34
Paul Bell said:
Yes, if nature isn\'t burning us alive, she\'s drowning us, which tells me she\'s had enough.
Something has to give, and with a force like nature, it doesn\'t do to annoy the great woman.
August 21st, 2026 06:34
Quiet suffering
Lorenz said:
when everything has calmed down all that remains is a fleeting remorse for what once was...
August 21st, 2026 06:01
Lorenz said:
when everything has calmed down all that remains is a fleeting remorse for what once was...
August 21st, 2026 06:01
Quiet suffering
delusions said:
The river almost feels less like water and more like something remembering what it was supposed to be. Lovely, my friend.
August 21st, 2026 03:54
delusions said:
The river almost feels less like water and more like something remembering what it was supposed to be. Lovely, my friend.
August 21st, 2026 03:54
Quiet suffering
soheil khodaparasti said:
A powerful flood as a metaphor for blame and destruction.
The greatest tragedy is not the turmoil itself, but the lasting damage it leaves behind.
August 21st, 2026 03:29
soheil khodaparasti said:
A powerful flood as a metaphor for blame and destruction.
The greatest tragedy is not the turmoil itself, but the lasting damage it leaves behind.
August 21st, 2026 03:29
Out of style
NafisaSB said:
truer words were never spoken so eloquently- agree with you here
August 21st, 2026 00:49
NafisaSB said:
truer words were never spoken so eloquently- agree with you here
August 21st, 2026 00:49
Forgotten
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, I’ve written a few pieces that probably belonged in the plumbing rather than a collection! 🤣 Sometimes artistic discernment simply means knowing when to pull the handle. Loved this, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 20th, 2026 20:46
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, I’ve written a few pieces that probably belonged in the plumbing rather than a collection! 🤣 Sometimes artistic discernment simply means knowing when to pull the handle. Loved this, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 20th, 2026 20:46
Forgotten
Doggerel Dave said:
It\' the mental exercise which counts at the time, that\'s all.
Simply written.
August 20th, 2026 17:46
Doggerel Dave said:
It\' the mental exercise which counts at the time, that\'s all.
Simply written.
August 20th, 2026 17:46
Forgotten
Teddy.15 said:
Do you mean mine in particular? 🤣 Oh this gave me a chuckle dear sorrenbarret 🌹
August 20th, 2026 17:19
Teddy.15 said:
Do you mean mine in particular? 🤣 Oh this gave me a chuckle dear sorrenbarret 🌹
August 20th, 2026 17:19
Forgotten
Kevin Hulme said:
I\'m sure those Teenage Mutant Hero Turtles are Reading then as we speak.
There are many of mine I\'ve just erased. Thought not good enough. Some very long.
A good Write.
August 20th, 2026 10:01
Kevin Hulme said:
I\'m sure those Teenage Mutant Hero Turtles are Reading then as we speak.
There are many of mine I\'ve just erased. Thought not good enough. Some very long.
A good Write.
August 20th, 2026 10:01
Forgotten
orchidee said:
Ahh, more recipe ideas for KP\'s meals, from you - I\'m most grateful to you! lol.
August 20th, 2026 09:47
orchidee said:
Ahh, more recipe ideas for KP\'s meals, from you - I\'m most grateful to you! lol.
August 20th, 2026 09:47
Forgotten
soheil khodaparasti said:
Arthur Miller, in Death of a Salesman, expresses this idea through Willy Loman’s words: “You can’t eat the orange and throw the peel away—a man is not a piece of fruit!” A poem is not merely a collection of words; it is what those words make us feel, see, and understand. Some poems need to be read again and again, each time with a fresh eye, because their meaning reveals itself gradually.
August 20th, 2026 04:48
soheil khodaparasti said:
Arthur Miller, in Death of a Salesman, expresses this idea through Willy Loman’s words: “You can’t eat the orange and throw the peel away—a man is not a piece of fruit!” A poem is not merely a collection of words; it is what those words make us feel, see, and understand. Some poems need to be read again and again, each time with a fresh eye, because their meaning reveals itself gradually.
August 20th, 2026 04:48
Forgotten
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
A natural conclusion of all things my friend
August 20th, 2026 03:33
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
A natural conclusion of all things my friend
August 20th, 2026 03:33
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