Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Uncertainty
Friendship said:
Well written. This poem centers on the poet\'s physical and emotional reactions to someone who commands a presence. This includes feelings of fear and anxiety, the sensation of being trapped, and the overwhelming impact of the other person\'s emotions.
June 23rd, 2026 03:40
Friendship said:
Well written. This poem centers on the poet\'s physical and emotional reactions to someone who commands a presence. This includes feelings of fear and anxiety, the sensation of being trapped, and the overwhelming impact of the other person\'s emotions.
June 23rd, 2026 03:40
I sit listening for sounds around me
Teddy.15 said:
Oh yes what a beautiful poem and I was drawn right into the sound and last lines 🌹
June 23rd, 2026 02:08
Teddy.15 said:
Oh yes what a beautiful poem and I was drawn right into the sound and last lines 🌹
June 23rd, 2026 02:08
I sit listening for sounds around me
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words soren, poems can come from many places.
Andy
June 23rd, 2026 01:17
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words soren, poems can come from many places.
Andy
June 23rd, 2026 01:17
I sit listening for sounds around me
Shahrukh said:
Reading this feels like i was with you when you were writing it. Loved it soren
June 22nd, 2026 20:38
Shahrukh said:
Reading this feels like i was with you when you were writing it. Loved it soren
June 22nd, 2026 20:38
I sit listening for sounds around me
cellinic said:
I\'d rather agree with arqios that what\'s essentially meant is the birth of a poem. Nicely done.
June 22nd, 2026 20:11
cellinic said:
I\'d rather agree with arqios that what\'s essentially meant is the birth of a poem. Nicely done.
June 22nd, 2026 20:11
I sit listening for sounds around me
Kevin Hulme said:
When ever I hear the Sounds out of my Window, It reminds me of \'Rear Window\' and Jimmy Stewart watching the Neighbours. The day in motion.
A fave right here .
June 22nd, 2026 18:50
Kevin Hulme said:
When ever I hear the Sounds out of my Window, It reminds me of \'Rear Window\' and Jimmy Stewart watching the Neighbours. The day in motion.
A fave right here .
June 22nd, 2026 18:50
Growing old
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, what caught me most was the progression itself...one moment you\'re flying kites and skinning your knees, and before you know it you\'re looking back across decades. That steady march forward gives this real emotional weight. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 22nd, 2026 09:55
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, what caught me most was the progression itself...one moment you\'re flying kites and skinning your knees, and before you know it you\'re looking back across decades. That steady march forward gives this real emotional weight. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 22nd, 2026 09:55
I sit listening for sounds around me
orchidee said:
Yes, sounds like some mindfulness there. That can be useful, though some of it has eccentric elements in it, I think.
June 22nd, 2026 06:59
orchidee said:
Yes, sounds like some mindfulness there. That can be useful, though some of it has eccentric elements in it, I think.
June 22nd, 2026 06:59
I sit listening for sounds around me
Friendship said:
Nicely written. Your poem emphasizes the importance of being attuned to one\'s environment, suggesting that inspiration can be found in the mundane aspects of life. It reflects a broader theme of mindfulness and the transformative power of observation in the creative process.
June 22nd, 2026 06:54
Friendship said:
Nicely written. Your poem emphasizes the importance of being attuned to one\'s environment, suggesting that inspiration can be found in the mundane aspects of life. It reflects a broader theme of mindfulness and the transformative power of observation in the creative process.
June 22nd, 2026 06:54
I sit listening for sounds around me
arqios said:
Great to witness the birthing of a poem. Birthing is not always the most accurate word 🙏🕊️
June 22nd, 2026 06:31
arqios said:
Great to witness the birthing of a poem. Birthing is not always the most accurate word 🙏🕊️
June 22nd, 2026 06:31
I sit listening for sounds around me
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Much enjoyed write, I sat listening with you
June 22nd, 2026 03:17
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Much enjoyed write, I sat listening with you
June 22nd, 2026 03:17
Growing old
Goldfinch60 said:
At least we are still here soren, many who we knew have already gone.
Andy
June 22nd, 2026 01:49
Goldfinch60 said:
At least we are still here soren, many who we knew have already gone.
Andy
June 22nd, 2026 01:49
Growing old
Kevin Hulme said:
A whole lifetime resides in your Poem.
Good Write.
June 21st, 2026 19:14
Kevin Hulme said:
A whole lifetime resides in your Poem.
Good Write.
June 21st, 2026 19:14
Shadow of night
mylastwrites said:
Never fly too close to the sun. Very nice I enjoyed it very much. Thank you for sharing.
June 21st, 2026 13:54
mylastwrites said:
Never fly too close to the sun. Very nice I enjoyed it very much. Thank you for sharing.
June 21st, 2026 13:54
Growing old
Neville said:
Welcome to my world .. you just nailed it .. Told much better than I ever could .. Neville
June 21st, 2026 12:44
Neville said:
Welcome to my world .. you just nailed it .. Told much better than I ever could .. Neville
June 21st, 2026 12:44
Midas touch
sorenbarrett said:
A most lovely poem of love that lasts and is felt through the years. Very nicely done.
June 21st, 2026 08:54
sorenbarrett said:
A most lovely poem of love that lasts and is felt through the years. Very nicely done.
June 21st, 2026 08:54
Growing old
orchidee said:
Good write SB. I took the bottom bits off KP\'s rocking chair, so she don\'t rock now! lol.
June 21st, 2026 08:10
orchidee said:
Good write SB. I took the bottom bits off KP\'s rocking chair, so she don\'t rock now! lol.
June 21st, 2026 08:10
Growing old
Thomas W Case said:
This feels like a life passing in a single breath—almost like flipping through snapshots that blur as they speed up. There’s something really powerful in how simply you move from innocence to age without pausing to explain it.
June 21st, 2026 08:07
Thomas W Case said:
This feels like a life passing in a single breath—almost like flipping through snapshots that blur as they speed up. There’s something really powerful in how simply you move from innocence to age without pausing to explain it.
June 21st, 2026 08:07
Growing old
Paul Bell said:
It\'s like you put you watch down for a minute and life has sprinted ahead.
This is why youth is wasted on the young. On the plus side, as you get older you realise there is a thing called mornings.
Okay, just pop back into my coffin now.
June 21st, 2026 07:07
Paul Bell said:
It\'s like you put you watch down for a minute and life has sprinted ahead.
This is why youth is wasted on the young. On the plus side, as you get older you realise there is a thing called mornings.
Okay, just pop back into my coffin now.
June 21st, 2026 07:07
Growing old
arqios said:
A lifetime\'s curriculum. Amazing how it can be the same and so different at the same time. 🕊️🙏
June 21st, 2026 06:19
arqios said:
A lifetime\'s curriculum. Amazing how it can be the same and so different at the same time. 🕊️🙏
June 21st, 2026 06:19
Growing old
Shahrukh said:
So simply put a whole life times. I felt it what you trying to say here soren 🫂🧡
June 21st, 2026 05:29
Shahrukh said:
So simply put a whole life times. I felt it what you trying to say here soren 🫂🧡
June 21st, 2026 05:29
Shadow of night
Goldfinch60 said:
That death card may be there soren but it is a very long way aways at the moment.
Andy
June 21st, 2026 01:10
Goldfinch60 said:
That death card may be there soren but it is a very long way aways at the moment.
Andy
June 21st, 2026 01:10
Shadow of night
Joseph M Marion said:
vivid and emotionally charged: “heart of flame,” “hand of smoke,” “storm,” “tide,” “lightning,” and “shade” all suggest things that are powerful, beautiful, but impossible to grasp.
June 20th, 2026 23:57
Joseph M Marion said:
vivid and emotionally charged: “heart of flame,” “hand of smoke,” “storm,” “tide,” “lightning,” and “shade” all suggest things that are powerful, beautiful, but impossible to grasp.
June 20th, 2026 23:57
Shadow of night
Joseph M Marion said:
vivid and emotionally charged: “heart of flame,” “hand of smoke,” “storm,” “tide,” “lightning,” and “shade” all suggest things that are powerful, beautiful, but impossible to grasp.
Very good I love this You\'re very good writer enjoy reading what you write thank you for allowing me to my
June 20th, 2026 23:57
Joseph M Marion said:
vivid and emotionally charged: “heart of flame,” “hand of smoke,” “storm,” “tide,” “lightning,” and “shade” all suggest things that are powerful, beautiful, but impossible to grasp.
Very good I love this You\'re very good writer enjoy reading what you write thank you for allowing me to my
June 20th, 2026 23:57
Shadow of night
Salvia.S said:
You built a whole night in 12 lines and it feels alive. You carried death and rebirth at the same time. Ending hits hard because you let Icarus fly and fall in 2 lines. Really amazing!
June 20th, 2026 21:46
Salvia.S said:
You built a whole night in 12 lines and it feels alive. You carried death and rebirth at the same time. Ending hits hard because you let Icarus fly and fall in 2 lines. Really amazing!
June 20th, 2026 21:46
Shadow of night
Kevin Hulme said:
Seems like the Passage from life into death.
👍
June 20th, 2026 20:20
Kevin Hulme said:
Seems like the Passage from life into death.
👍
June 20th, 2026 20:20
Shadow of night
soheil khodaparasti said:
What I like best about your poem is its directionality of time. The repeated references to direction symbolize different stages of existence.
June 20th, 2026 16:15
soheil khodaparasti said:
What I like best about your poem is its directionality of time. The repeated references to direction symbolize different stages of existence.
June 20th, 2026 16:15
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