Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Decay
Goldfinch60 said:
The glory of Natures way is failing us soren, lets go back to Natures way,
Andy
April 17th, 2026 01:15
Goldfinch60 said:
The glory of Natures way is failing us soren, lets go back to Natures way,
Andy
April 17th, 2026 01:15
Decay
NinjaGirl said:
Well done. I like the internal rhyme because it helps the flow. I really think that in this modern era, things are made not to last with the goal of forcing more consumerism.
April 16th, 2026 21:11
NinjaGirl said:
Well done. I like the internal rhyme because it helps the flow. I really think that in this modern era, things are made not to last with the goal of forcing more consumerism.
April 16th, 2026 21:11
Decay
Kevin Hulme said:
There\'s a lot of Green lands here that are now having Houses built on them. It\'s terrible.
A good Write.
April 16th, 2026 18:40
Kevin Hulme said:
There\'s a lot of Green lands here that are now having Houses built on them. It\'s terrible.
A good Write.
April 16th, 2026 18:40
Mankind
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, I apologize for the delay…just came off finishing a major composition called The Shaman, another tone poem, and it wiped me out a bit. That aside, this hits hard, my friend…no buffer, no softening…just straight into the brutality of it all. My kind of poem…a fave for sure. It feels like a raw indictment of what we justify when power takes over. It lingers heavy. Powerful write. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 16th, 2026 15:30
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, I apologize for the delay…just came off finishing a major composition called The Shaman, another tone poem, and it wiped me out a bit. That aside, this hits hard, my friend…no buffer, no softening…just straight into the brutality of it all. My kind of poem…a fave for sure. It feels like a raw indictment of what we justify when power takes over. It lingers heavy. Powerful write. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 16th, 2026 15:30
Decay
Friendship said:
Your poem reflects on the loss of beauty and strength over time, symbolized by the majestic tree that has been reduced to a mere stump. Nothing lasts forever.
April 16th, 2026 08:41
Friendship said:
Your poem reflects on the loss of beauty and strength over time, symbolized by the majestic tree that has been reduced to a mere stump. Nothing lasts forever.
April 16th, 2026 08:41
Decay
Waiting for Silence said:
Very well expressed. We creating concrete jungle replacing what was created by nature.
April 16th, 2026 07:37
Waiting for Silence said:
Very well expressed. We creating concrete jungle replacing what was created by nature.
April 16th, 2026 07:37
Decay
arqios said:
Plastic cement reminded me of model construction kits. Decay befalls so many things🙏🏻🕊️
April 16th, 2026 07:26
arqios said:
Plastic cement reminded me of model construction kits. Decay befalls so many things🙏🏻🕊️
April 16th, 2026 07:26
Decay
Teddy.15 said:
Tree\'s being so important to our planet. As a metaphor of Man works incredibly well too, Beautifully done dear sorrenbarret, Tree\'s and humans aren\'t all that different in the end. 🌹
April 16th, 2026 03:33
Teddy.15 said:
Tree\'s being so important to our planet. As a metaphor of Man works incredibly well too, Beautifully done dear sorrenbarret, Tree\'s and humans aren\'t all that different in the end. 🌹
April 16th, 2026 03:33
Decay
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
good write my friend, the old and the new
April 16th, 2026 03:21
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
good write my friend, the old and the new
April 16th, 2026 03:21
Gift return
Salvia.S said:
Simple words with great impact. Very well written!!!
April 15th, 2026 22:12
Salvia.S said:
Simple words with great impact. Very well written!!!
April 15th, 2026 22:12
Mankind
Doggerel Dave said:
I find it hard to disagree with any of that, Soren... But...
April 15th, 2026 19:09
Doggerel Dave said:
I find it hard to disagree with any of that, Soren... But...
April 15th, 2026 19:09
Mankind
Mutley Ravishes said:
Someone said, \"You\'re going to leave this world just as evil as you found it.\" Those Bodhisattvas have an almighty task on their hands! Having said that, the \"next round\" is said to take place within a higher octave, giving all of us miserable souls even more of a helping hand (and a kick up the backside?!).
April 15th, 2026 18:41
Mutley Ravishes said:
Someone said, \"You\'re going to leave this world just as evil as you found it.\" Those Bodhisattvas have an almighty task on their hands! Having said that, the \"next round\" is said to take place within a higher octave, giving all of us miserable souls even more of a helping hand (and a kick up the backside?!).
April 15th, 2026 18:41
Mankind
Kevin Hulme said:
No Punches being pulled in this Poem.
A fave for sure.
April 15th, 2026 18:25
Kevin Hulme said:
No Punches being pulled in this Poem.
A fave for sure.
April 15th, 2026 18:25
Mankind
RSM0812 said:
Very nicely written. I agree war is evil. Always escalates. And is not good for anybody. The things we fight for is at the point of international embarrassment. Your prose summed it up for me petfectly.
April 15th, 2026 16:37
RSM0812 said:
Very nicely written. I agree war is evil. Always escalates. And is not good for anybody. The things we fight for is at the point of international embarrassment. Your prose summed it up for me petfectly.
April 15th, 2026 16:37
Mankind
arqios said:
Telling it like it is, no punch pulled. Powered reading🙏🏻🕊️
April 15th, 2026 16:24
arqios said:
Telling it like it is, no punch pulled. Powered reading🙏🏻🕊️
April 15th, 2026 16:24
Mankind
GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀 said:
The world today is not as it was. This is fine writing and truthful
April 15th, 2026 14:35
GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀 said:
The world today is not as it was. This is fine writing and truthful
April 15th, 2026 14:35
Mankind
Poetic Licence said:
I wish poems like this never needed to be written by people like us, but sadly they have to be because of devastation some people still want to inflict on others in order to justify their own beliefs. Who ever thought the world would have to worry and be more scared of the American presidents thoughts and action, rather than China and Russia, but here we are watching him slowly dismantle the world at whatever cost it takes. Not to mention lining his own and his billionaire pals pockets even more while going to war. Much needed and well written write.
April 15th, 2026 13:51
Poetic Licence said:
I wish poems like this never needed to be written by people like us, but sadly they have to be because of devastation some people still want to inflict on others in order to justify their own beliefs. Who ever thought the world would have to worry and be more scared of the American presidents thoughts and action, rather than China and Russia, but here we are watching him slowly dismantle the world at whatever cost it takes. Not to mention lining his own and his billionaire pals pockets even more while going to war. Much needed and well written write.
April 15th, 2026 13:51
Choices of when and where
Poetic Licence said:
I feel this is much deeper than appears on first read and could be interpreted in a few ways. For myself i connect it with the trauma and conflict that is thriving round the world at the moment and the the thousands of people who are genuinely being driven down a one way road, wonderful write, pleasure to read.
April 15th, 2026 13:43
Poetic Licence said:
I feel this is much deeper than appears on first read and could be interpreted in a few ways. For myself i connect it with the trauma and conflict that is thriving round the world at the moment and the the thousands of people who are genuinely being driven down a one way road, wonderful write, pleasure to read.
April 15th, 2026 13:43
Mankind
NinjaGirl said:
It\'s so true. I often wonder how children that can be born with so much love turn into adults with so much hate. In such an environment it\'s not surprising, but the cycle continues no matter who runs it, and there you have the empty promises of a better future.
Here is the truth, which poets cry until death, but literature is unappreciated.
April 15th, 2026 11:07
NinjaGirl said:
It\'s so true. I often wonder how children that can be born with so much love turn into adults with so much hate. In such an environment it\'s not surprising, but the cycle continues no matter who runs it, and there you have the empty promises of a better future.
Here is the truth, which poets cry until death, but literature is unappreciated.
April 15th, 2026 11:07
Mankind
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem revolves around the grim realities of war, political corruption, and religious hypocrisy. It depicts the brutal consequences of these societal elements and critiques the failure of humanity to embrace compassion and love.
April 15th, 2026 10:27
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem revolves around the grim realities of war, political corruption, and religious hypocrisy. It depicts the brutal consequences of these societal elements and critiques the failure of humanity to embrace compassion and love.
April 15th, 2026 10:27
Mankind
Waiting for Silence said:
A stark and thought‑provoking piece. The honesty and intensity of the imagery make a strong impact. The poem’s directness makes its message hard to ignore.
April 15th, 2026 08:05
Waiting for Silence said:
A stark and thought‑provoking piece. The honesty and intensity of the imagery make a strong impact. The poem’s directness makes its message hard to ignore.
April 15th, 2026 08:05
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