Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Cold
Kevin Hulme said:
Trying to end a Bad relationship? A unique way of expressing it. Good Write.
May 24th, 2026 18:43
Kevin Hulme said:
Trying to end a Bad relationship? A unique way of expressing it. Good Write.
May 24th, 2026 18:43
Unrepented
mohammad ali said:
So beautiful, dear! So beautifully described a deep fact of paradox!
May 24th, 2026 17:36
mohammad ali said:
So beautiful, dear! So beautifully described a deep fact of paradox!
May 24th, 2026 17:36
Cold
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren…there’s a real mastery of atmosphere in this piece. Every image reinforces the emotional climate…frost, wind, snow, steel, static, lightning, winter glare. The cold becomes more than temperature here…it becomes relational, psychological, almost existential. I especially admired how the poem never erupts into melodrama. Instead, it remains restrained and frozen right up until the final retreat: “My emotions I pack, turn my back and retire.” That quiet withdrawal lands harder because of everything held in beforehand. Powerful and haunting work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 24th, 2026 12:17
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren…there’s a real mastery of atmosphere in this piece. Every image reinforces the emotional climate…frost, wind, snow, steel, static, lightning, winter glare. The cold becomes more than temperature here…it becomes relational, psychological, almost existential. I especially admired how the poem never erupts into melodrama. Instead, it remains restrained and frozen right up until the final retreat: “My emotions I pack, turn my back and retire.” That quiet withdrawal lands harder because of everything held in beforehand. Powerful and haunting work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 24th, 2026 12:17
Cold
arqios said:
I was getting both an intimate/personal and a societal reading of this. Very strong expression Soren🙏🕊️
May 24th, 2026 06:52
arqios said:
I was getting both an intimate/personal and a societal reading of this. Very strong expression Soren🙏🕊️
May 24th, 2026 06:52
Cold
David Wakeling said:
This is well constructed and explores the deeper aspects of Cold.Both in the weather anf the world.I found it to be haunting rendition.Great work amigo
May 24th, 2026 05:09
David Wakeling said:
This is well constructed and explores the deeper aspects of Cold.Both in the weather anf the world.I found it to be haunting rendition.Great work amigo
May 24th, 2026 05:09
Ramanujan
Kevin Hulme said:
Googled Ramanujan and Read all about him.
Maths has always left me Cold. . But I admire anyone who can be such a Wizard at Numbers.
A fine tribute.
May 23rd, 2026 18:50
Kevin Hulme said:
Googled Ramanujan and Read all about him.
Maths has always left me Cold. . But I admire anyone who can be such a Wizard at Numbers.
A fine tribute.
May 23rd, 2026 18:50
Ramanujan
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is fascinating. You capture Ramanujan not merely as a mathematician, but almost as a mystic standing at the edge of infinity listening to numbers whisper back. The blend of intellect, obsession, and divinity throughout the poem really pulled me in. Powerful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 23rd, 2026 10:34
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is fascinating. You capture Ramanujan not merely as a mathematician, but almost as a mystic standing at the edge of infinity listening to numbers whisper back. The blend of intellect, obsession, and divinity throughout the poem really pulled me in. Powerful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 23rd, 2026 10:34
Finding one\'s way
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, what a wonderfully immersive piece this is. The imagery keeps tightening around the reader...vines, fog, fading light, all of it slowly swallowing the path ahead. “Earth’s bones” and the nursery imagery especially stayed with me. By the end, it genuinely feels like the forest itself has become a living thing closing in around the lantern glow. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 23rd, 2026 10:06
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, what a wonderfully immersive piece this is. The imagery keeps tightening around the reader...vines, fog, fading light, all of it slowly swallowing the path ahead. “Earth’s bones” and the nursery imagery especially stayed with me. By the end, it genuinely feels like the forest itself has become a living thing closing in around the lantern glow. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 23rd, 2026 10:06
Ramanujan
Friendship said:
Nicely written. Your poem delves into Ramanujan\'s self-taught journey in mathematics, his remarkable contributions, including the infinite series sum that led to surprising results, and his interactions with the British mathematician G.H. Hardy. It also highlights his cultural roots and the mystical quality of his insights into mathematics. This was previously unknown to me, so I had to seek out information.
May 23rd, 2026 09:11
Friendship said:
Nicely written. Your poem delves into Ramanujan\'s self-taught journey in mathematics, his remarkable contributions, including the infinite series sum that led to surprising results, and his interactions with the British mathematician G.H. Hardy. It also highlights his cultural roots and the mystical quality of his insights into mathematics. This was previously unknown to me, so I had to seek out information.
May 23rd, 2026 09:11
Ramanujan
arqios said:
Now if I had just an iota of math whiz then I would be worthy of similar esteem. Excellent tribute, Soren 🙏🕊️
May 23rd, 2026 08:30
arqios said:
Now if I had just an iota of math whiz then I would be worthy of similar esteem. Excellent tribute, Soren 🙏🕊️
May 23rd, 2026 08:30
Road kill
NafisaSB said:
that is the stark truth of life - and you have shown this very well
May 23rd, 2026 07:15
NafisaSB said:
that is the stark truth of life - and you have shown this very well
May 23rd, 2026 07:15
Ramanujan
David Wakeling said:
This is so relatable.I used to be a Maths Teacher and often told my students about Ramanujan.Also they made a wonderful movie.The man who knew infinity.This poem is a great tribute to a great genius.I still think he was treated badly and died too young.Excellent piece.
May 23rd, 2026 03:36
David Wakeling said:
This is so relatable.I used to be a Maths Teacher and often told my students about Ramanujan.Also they made a wonderful movie.The man who knew infinity.This poem is a great tribute to a great genius.I still think he was treated badly and died too young.Excellent piece.
May 23rd, 2026 03:36
Ramanujan
Neville said:
Blimey .......... what a star he was .. & probably still is .. amazing regardless of whether true or not .. Neville
May 23rd, 2026 02:49
Neville said:
Blimey .......... what a star he was .. & probably still is .. amazing regardless of whether true or not .. Neville
May 23rd, 2026 02:49
Finding one\'s way
Kevin Hulme said:
Quite a Journey into the Unknown here.
Definitely Hoping the Lantern doesn\'t fail.
May 22nd, 2026 18:59
Kevin Hulme said:
Quite a Journey into the Unknown here.
Definitely Hoping the Lantern doesn\'t fail.
May 22nd, 2026 18:59
Finding one\'s way
orchidee said:
A descriptive write SB. I\'ve dried up a bit on poems. Spending too much time on sewage recipes for \'er indoors. lol.
May 22nd, 2026 10:26
orchidee said:
A descriptive write SB. I\'ve dried up a bit on poems. Spending too much time on sewage recipes for \'er indoors. lol.
May 22nd, 2026 10:26
Finding one\'s way
Friendship said:
Well said. Your poem depicts a journey through a dense forest, symbolizing the struggles and obstacles encountered in life. It explores themes of isolation, fear, nature\'s beauty, and the passage of time as the day fades into night.
May 22nd, 2026 08:40
Friendship said:
Well said. Your poem depicts a journey through a dense forest, symbolizing the struggles and obstacles encountered in life. It explores themes of isolation, fear, nature\'s beauty, and the passage of time as the day fades into night.
May 22nd, 2026 08:40
Finding one\'s way
Katie B. said:
A walk-through darkness most can relate to. Well penned!
May 22nd, 2026 06:09
Katie B. said:
A walk-through darkness most can relate to. Well penned!
May 22nd, 2026 06:09
Finding one\'s way
arqios said:
Very powerful, dear Soren. A memory etched forever is having to walk through a moonless terrain in pitch darkness. Most pleasurable read. 🕊️🙏
May 22nd, 2026 05:39
arqios said:
Very powerful, dear Soren. A memory etched forever is having to walk through a moonless terrain in pitch darkness. Most pleasurable read. 🕊️🙏
May 22nd, 2026 05:39
Finding one\'s way
David Wakeling said:
An amzing journey through a dark place. So well-constructed and creative. The images took me to the spot. Incredibly power piece
May 22nd, 2026 05:36
David Wakeling said:
An amzing journey through a dark place. So well-constructed and creative. The images took me to the spot. Incredibly power piece
May 22nd, 2026 05:36
Finding one\'s way
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
much enjoyed write, man and his fear of darkness
May 22nd, 2026 04:12
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
much enjoyed write, man and his fear of darkness
May 22nd, 2026 04:12
Road kill
Kevin Hulme said:
Just watched an episode of \'The X Files\' where bodies were covered in Maggots. Then read this. That\'s me not sleeping tonight. 😗
Fine discriptive writing here.
May 21st, 2026 18:55
Kevin Hulme said:
Just watched an episode of \'The X Files\' where bodies were covered in Maggots. Then read this. That\'s me not sleeping tonight. 😗
Fine discriptive writing here.
May 21st, 2026 18:55
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