Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Resciprocity’s warning
Priya Tomar said:
I always try to read poems .
Nice poem .
April 7th, 2026 03:51
Priya Tomar said:
I always try to read poems .
Nice poem .
April 7th, 2026 03:51
Sensations
NafisaSB said:
What a great way of bringing all the sensations together to paint such a raw and vivid image. Admirable work
April 7th, 2026 03:04
NafisaSB said:
What a great way of bringing all the sensations together to paint such a raw and vivid image. Admirable work
April 7th, 2026 03:04
Resciprocity’s warning
Teddy.15 said:
I see give and take here. Simple as that. In beautiful poetic form of course. 🌹 Here here my dear friend.
April 7th, 2026 02:52
Teddy.15 said:
I see give and take here. Simple as that. In beautiful poetic form of course. 🌹 Here here my dear friend.
April 7th, 2026 02:52
Resciprocity’s warning
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
great message my friend
April 7th, 2026 02:34
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
great message my friend
April 7th, 2026 02:34
Resciprocity’s warning
orchidee said:
Thank you SB. Yes, it does seem preaching to the choir, or to the \'converted\', in some places. Though we go on and grow in the faith.
April 7th, 2026 02:22
orchidee said:
Thank you SB. Yes, it does seem preaching to the choir, or to the \'converted\', in some places. Though we go on and grow in the faith.
April 7th, 2026 02:22
Wasps
Kevin Hulme said:
The Wasp : The Hells Angels of the Insect World.
Nicely Written.
April 6th, 2026 18:23
Kevin Hulme said:
The Wasp : The Hells Angels of the Insect World.
Nicely Written.
April 6th, 2026 18:23
Wasps
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, there’s a full cycle here…creation, labor, destruction, and quiet ending. That image of them clinging together at the end anchors it, and everything leads naturally there. It doesn’t dramatize…it just shows..and it lingers. Well done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 6th, 2026 09:42
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, there’s a full cycle here…creation, labor, destruction, and quiet ending. That image of them clinging together at the end anchors it, and everything leads naturally there. It doesn’t dramatize…it just shows..and it lingers. Well done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 6th, 2026 09:42
To be or not to bee
Iam1ItchyLizzard said:
nice soumds good and its fun to read
April 6th, 2026 05:36
Iam1ItchyLizzard said:
nice soumds good and its fun to read
April 6th, 2026 05:36
A poet\'s journey
Iam1ItchyLizzard said:
i really like this one very real stuff
April 6th, 2026 05:30
Iam1ItchyLizzard said:
i really like this one very real stuff
April 6th, 2026 05:30
Wasps
Abdullah123 said:
Amazing write, echoing beyond just a wasp’s hive… I can almost hear their grievous buzzz. Bravo
April 6th, 2026 04:29
Abdullah123 said:
Amazing write, echoing beyond just a wasp’s hive… I can almost hear their grievous buzzz. Bravo
April 6th, 2026 04:29
Sensations
Neville said:
So much blood .. reads like a crime scene .. and in a sense, I suppose it is really .. Neville
April 6th, 2026 01:55
Neville said:
So much blood .. reads like a crime scene .. and in a sense, I suppose it is really .. Neville
April 6th, 2026 01:55
Sensations
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write soren leading to all kinds of thoughts.
Andy
April 6th, 2026 01:12
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write soren leading to all kinds of thoughts.
Andy
April 6th, 2026 01:12
White, blue, black
NafisaSB said:
beautiful and descriptive - one can definitely visualize what is being portrayed
April 6th, 2026 01:03
NafisaSB said:
beautiful and descriptive - one can definitely visualize what is being portrayed
April 6th, 2026 01:03
Another day
NafisaSB said:
very well portrayed - know the feeling - after giving a party - though i don\'t drink am as exhausted and thirsting for the elusive sleep...
April 6th, 2026 00:59
NafisaSB said:
very well portrayed - know the feeling - after giving a party - though i don\'t drink am as exhausted and thirsting for the elusive sleep...
April 6th, 2026 00:59
Another day
RSM0812 said:
Groke had meaning and your poem brings that meaning back in gracious rhyme.
April 5th, 2026 19:43
RSM0812 said:
Groke had meaning and your poem brings that meaning back in gracious rhyme.
April 5th, 2026 19:43
Sensations
Kevin Hulme said:
Reminds me of my Working days with the Steel and the Forge.
April 5th, 2026 19:21
Kevin Hulme said:
Reminds me of my Working days with the Steel and the Forge.
April 5th, 2026 19:21
Sensations
Allie561 said:
Soren I could simply feel this on another level. The way you describe it as not only being able to feel it but to taste it as well was such a strong image. This was a great poem.
April 5th, 2026 16:07
Allie561 said:
Soren I could simply feel this on another level. The way you describe it as not only being able to feel it but to taste it as well was such a strong image. This was a great poem.
April 5th, 2026 16:07
Sensations
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, there’s a raw, sensory immersion here…taste, smell, touch, all layered into something heavy and immediate. That rust line anchors it, and everything that follows builds from there into something you don’t just read, you feel. It lingers. Well done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 5th, 2026 10:37
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, there’s a raw, sensory immersion here…taste, smell, touch, all layered into something heavy and immediate. That rust line anchors it, and everything that follows builds from there into something you don’t just read, you feel. It lingers. Well done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 5th, 2026 10:37
Sensations
Salvia.S said:
Your poem is gritty and intense 😊, painting a stark picture with vivid sensory details. Very well written!!!!
April 5th, 2026 09:05
Salvia.S said:
Your poem is gritty and intense 😊, painting a stark picture with vivid sensory details. Very well written!!!!
April 5th, 2026 09:05
Sensations
arqios said:
Blood seems to traverse the elements with equal presence. 🩸 🙏🏻🕊
April 5th, 2026 07:51
arqios said:
Blood seems to traverse the elements with equal presence. 🩸 🙏🏻🕊
April 5th, 2026 07:51
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