Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Water speaks
Gelyn said:
A beautifully vivid and atmospheric piece.
Your choice of words creates a haunting scene where nature seems to whisper warnings and the sky becomes a messenger of something beyond the ordinary. I particularly love the imagery and the rhythmic flow. It feels mysterious, almost mystical, as though we\'re witnessing a moment when nature itself holds its breath.
Well penned...
Gel
November 2nd, 2026 10:20
Gelyn said:
A beautifully vivid and atmospheric piece.
Your choice of words creates a haunting scene where nature seems to whisper warnings and the sky becomes a messenger of something beyond the ordinary. I particularly love the imagery and the rhythmic flow. It feels mysterious, almost mystical, as though we\'re witnessing a moment when nature itself holds its breath.
Well penned...
Gel
November 2nd, 2026 10:20
Water speaks
Tony Grannell said:
Greetings, Soren,
Skies drooling on croaking frogs in a whale of mourning encapsulated it all for me. Another poem for the top drawer, my friend.
You are in fine fettle, I trust,
Tony.
November 2nd, 2026 09:02
Tony Grannell said:
Greetings, Soren,
Skies drooling on croaking frogs in a whale of mourning encapsulated it all for me. Another poem for the top drawer, my friend.
You are in fine fettle, I trust,
Tony.
November 2nd, 2026 09:02
Water speaks
Lorenz said:
This language of the waters seems to convey a grim warning...
November 2nd, 2026 07:33
Lorenz said:
This language of the waters seems to convey a grim warning...
November 2nd, 2026 07:33
Water speaks
Paul Bell said:
How the message is received when someone dies.
The birds still sing, the frogs still croak, and the sky is grey.
The cremated body probuces smoke for awhile, and we raise a glass farewell.
November 2nd, 2026 07:07
Paul Bell said:
How the message is received when someone dies.
The birds still sing, the frogs still croak, and the sky is grey.
The cremated body probuces smoke for awhile, and we raise a glass farewell.
November 2nd, 2026 07:07
Water speaks
Teddy.15 said:
Wow another magnificent poem, the wraph of heaven calling! 🌹
November 2nd, 2026 04:40
Teddy.15 said:
Wow another magnificent poem, the wraph of heaven calling! 🌹
November 2nd, 2026 04:40
Water speaks
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Good write, water speaks, a great title
November 2nd, 2026 04:16
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Good write, water speaks, a great title
November 2nd, 2026 04:16
Hitch your ass to a wagon tongue to plant seeds of confusion
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write soren.
Andy
November 2nd, 2026 02:10
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write soren.
Andy
November 2nd, 2026 02:10
Hitch your ass to a wagon tongue to plant seeds of confusion
Kevin Hulme said:
I enjoy the Double Meaning in this Write. It\'s a bit like a \'Rorschach Test\'. And What Interpretation we get from this. Some Innocent. Some Raunchy. Good Write.
November 1st, 2026 19:57
Kevin Hulme said:
I enjoy the Double Meaning in this Write. It\'s a bit like a \'Rorschach Test\'. And What Interpretation we get from this. Some Innocent. Some Raunchy. Good Write.
November 1st, 2026 19:57
Hitch your ass to a wagon tongue to plant seeds of confusion
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, what the fuck did I just read? 🤣🤣🤣 I think you\'ve officially cornered the market on agricultural indecency! Absolutely loved this, my friend. A fave! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 1st, 2026 18:40
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, what the fuck did I just read? 🤣🤣🤣 I think you\'ve officially cornered the market on agricultural indecency! Absolutely loved this, my friend. A fave! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 1st, 2026 18:40
Hitch your ass to a wagon tongue to plant seeds of confusion
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Soren,
A fusion poem, Animal Farm blends with The Last Tango in Paris. You were on a fucking roll with this one, what more can I say, but a bucolic bard aroused in his daily toil. An award winner, my friend.
Fond regards,
Tony.
November 1st, 2026 12:10
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Soren,
A fusion poem, Animal Farm blends with The Last Tango in Paris. You were on a fucking roll with this one, what more can I say, but a bucolic bard aroused in his daily toil. An award winner, my friend.
Fond regards,
Tony.
November 1st, 2026 12:10
The snake pit
Joseph M Marion said:
This is very cutely written the exact meaning of life very close love it
November 1st, 2026 12:05
Joseph M Marion said:
This is very cutely written the exact meaning of life very close love it
November 1st, 2026 12:05
The snake pit
Tony Grannell said:
Good day, Soren,
The more one suffers the closer to God, that\'s what the Christian Brothers and Nuns taught me, later on in life I found out that a day without pain is a good day. As your excellent poem points out, death cures all ails, the final day, as it were. So few words and no finer a poem, my friend.
All the best,
Tony.
November 1st, 2026 11:56
Tony Grannell said:
Good day, Soren,
The more one suffers the closer to God, that\'s what the Christian Brothers and Nuns taught me, later on in life I found out that a day without pain is a good day. As your excellent poem points out, death cures all ails, the final day, as it were. So few words and no finer a poem, my friend.
All the best,
Tony.
November 1st, 2026 11:56
Hitch your ass to a wagon tongue to plant seeds of confusion
orchidee said:
Ohhh, I wouldn\'t know. Is this about a cat? (it\'s me sheltered life. lol).
November 1st, 2026 11:01
orchidee said:
Ohhh, I wouldn\'t know. Is this about a cat? (it\'s me sheltered life. lol).
November 1st, 2026 11:01
Hitch your ass to a wagon tongue to plant seeds of confusion
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a deliberately outrageous, bawdy comic energy here, built on sexual innuendo, gardening language, and a succession of increasingly ridiculous double meanings that seem to delight in keeping the reader off balance. “Lets test the springs, see what the seed brings” is the keeper for me, because it neatly captures the poem’s central mischief, turning an ordinary gardening phrase into a cheek
November 1st, 2026 09:22
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a deliberately outrageous, bawdy comic energy here, built on sexual innuendo, gardening language, and a succession of increasingly ridiculous double meanings that seem to delight in keeping the reader off balance. “Lets test the springs, see what the seed brings” is the keeper for me, because it neatly captures the poem’s central mischief, turning an ordinary gardening phrase into a cheek
November 1st, 2026 09:22
Hitch your ass to a wagon tongue to plant seeds of confusion
arqios said:
Confusion and even chaos can be such fertile ground. And when carefully cultivated offers surprising fruitfulnesses. 🙏🏻😊
November 1st, 2026 07:26
arqios said:
Confusion and even chaos can be such fertile ground. And when carefully cultivated offers surprising fruitfulnesses. 🙏🏻😊
November 1st, 2026 07:26
Hitch your ass to a wagon tongue to plant seeds of confusion
Paul Bell said:
Wow, sunday Xrated on the farm, pussies and breasts in equal measure, or not in equal measure it seems.
Farmers wives are always hot, but they must get frustrated, cos farmers must be knackered after a day in the fields.
November 1st, 2026 06:53
Paul Bell said:
Wow, sunday Xrated on the farm, pussies and breasts in equal measure, or not in equal measure it seems.
Farmers wives are always hot, but they must get frustrated, cos farmers must be knackered after a day in the fields.
November 1st, 2026 06:53
Hitch your ass to a wagon tongue to plant seeds of confusion
Friendship said:
Wow. Your poem explores sexuality, confusion, and perhaps the absurdity of human desire and relationships. It uses agricultural metaphors to explore intimacy and physicality, juxtaposing natural imagery with crude language to create both humor and discomfort.[Your poem caught me off guard.
November 1st, 2026 05:59
Friendship said:
Wow. Your poem explores sexuality, confusion, and perhaps the absurdity of human desire and relationships. It uses agricultural metaphors to explore intimacy and physicality, juxtaposing natural imagery with crude language to create both humor and discomfort.[Your poem caught me off guard.
November 1st, 2026 05:59
Hitch your ass to a wagon tongue to plant seeds of confusion
Teddy.15 said:
lol nothing like mixing it up in the first day of the month 🤣 fabulous word play and rhyme no less. 🏆
November 1st, 2026 05:07
Teddy.15 said:
lol nothing like mixing it up in the first day of the month 🤣 fabulous word play and rhyme no less. 🏆
November 1st, 2026 05:07
The snake pit
soheil khodaparasti said:
The poem’s strength lies in its ability to distill an entire worldview into two lines, portraying existence as a cycle of decay, suffering, and eventual release through death. There is, however, an intriguing irony in your mastery of such a poem: the very beauty of its language reveals life’s capacity to create meaning even amid suffering and impermanence. While this may not disprove the poem’s bleak outlook, it gently invites us to consider whether decay and suffering, though undeniable aspects of existence, can fully account for its richness, beauty, and capacity for meaning.
October 31st, 2026 16:18
soheil khodaparasti said:
The poem’s strength lies in its ability to distill an entire worldview into two lines, portraying existence as a cycle of decay, suffering, and eventual release through death. There is, however, an intriguing irony in your mastery of such a poem: the very beauty of its language reveals life’s capacity to create meaning even amid suffering and impermanence. While this may not disprove the poem’s bleak outlook, it gently invites us to consider whether decay and suffering, though undeniable aspects of existence, can fully account for its richness, beauty, and capacity for meaning.
October 31st, 2026 16:18
The snake pit
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, I understand getting tired of being told pain is good for us. I’d happily settle for learning less and enjoying a few more years. Happy Halloween, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 31st, 2026 15:39
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, I understand getting tired of being told pain is good for us. I’d happily settle for learning less and enjoying a few more years. Happy Halloween, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 31st, 2026 15:39
The snake pit
cully45 said:
Thanks Soren your comments appreciated as always.
October 31st, 2026 14:43
cully45 said:
Thanks Soren your comments appreciated as always.
October 31st, 2026 14:43
Fair thee well
mylastwrites said:
Where there\'s a will there\'s a way. Nicely done. Enjoyed it.
October 31st, 2026 13:56
mylastwrites said:
Where there\'s a will there\'s a way. Nicely done. Enjoyed it.
October 31st, 2026 13:56
The snake pit
orchidee said:
Good write SB.
Ahh, another idea for food for KP - rotten fruit. I can\'t thank you enough for these boundless ideas! lol.
There\'s part of a hymn:\' ......The manifold temptations (in life), That death alone can cure\'. But it\'s an olde hymn, and death is seen as an enemy really, or ultimately as an enemy. I can see how it could be a \'cure for, e.g. terminal illness, etc though.
October 31st, 2026 09:17
orchidee said:
Good write SB.
Ahh, another idea for food for KP - rotten fruit. I can\'t thank you enough for these boundless ideas! lol.
There\'s part of a hymn:\' ......The manifold temptations (in life), That death alone can cure\'. But it\'s an olde hymn, and death is seen as an enemy really, or ultimately as an enemy. I can see how it could be a \'cure for, e.g. terminal illness, etc though.
October 31st, 2026 09:17
The snake pit
Kevin Hulme said:
The Journey from Cradle to Grave. Nicely Summed-up.
October 31st, 2026 08:53
Kevin Hulme said:
The Journey from Cradle to Grave. Nicely Summed-up.
October 31st, 2026 08:53
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