Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Illusive passion
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow...so powerful. Soren, \"mortal fingers are not made to cling to a shade\" is the image that really hit me. There is something so human in that struggle...reaching for what was never meant to be grasped. Beautifully done, my friend. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
June 18th, 2026 20:42
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow...so powerful. Soren, \"mortal fingers are not made to cling to a shade\" is the image that really hit me. There is something so human in that struggle...reaching for what was never meant to be grasped. Beautifully done, my friend. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
June 18th, 2026 20:42
Illusive passion
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow...so powerful. Soren, \"mortal fingers are not made to cling to a shade\" is the image that really hit me. There is something so human in that struggle...reaching for what was never meant to be grasped. Beautifully done, my friend. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
June 18th, 2026 20:42
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow...so powerful. Soren, \"mortal fingers are not made to cling to a shade\" is the image that really hit me. There is something so human in that struggle...reaching for what was never meant to be grasped. Beautifully done, my friend. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
June 18th, 2026 20:42
Illusive passion
Kevin Hulme said:
Sounds like the end of a Love Affair. Best to let it go . Move on. Fine Poem.
June 18th, 2026 19:18
Kevin Hulme said:
Sounds like the end of a Love Affair. Best to let it go . Move on. Fine Poem.
June 18th, 2026 19:18
Illusive passion
soheil khodaparasti said:
To hold the unholdable is to borrow sorrow; to let the garden breathe is to borrow bloom.
June 18th, 2026 09:40
soheil khodaparasti said:
To hold the unholdable is to borrow sorrow; to let the garden breathe is to borrow bloom.
June 18th, 2026 09:40
Illusive passion
Friendship said:
This poem presents a poignant meditation on the nature of passion, capturing the delicate balance between holding on and letting go.
June 18th, 2026 09:13
Friendship said:
This poem presents a poignant meditation on the nature of passion, capturing the delicate balance between holding on and letting go.
June 18th, 2026 09:13
Illusive passion
Paul Bell said:
Man can do many things, but nature can do more.
When the storm hits, no hands will hold it back.
Let the sun shine and I will grow.
June 18th, 2026 07:43
Paul Bell said:
Man can do many things, but nature can do more.
When the storm hits, no hands will hold it back.
Let the sun shine and I will grow.
June 18th, 2026 07:43
Isis
RSM0812 said:
Your poem is universally read and written. Enjoyed a lot. Emotioned universe how you cry tears of power.
June 18th, 2026 06:51
RSM0812 said:
Your poem is universally read and written. Enjoyed a lot. Emotioned universe how you cry tears of power.
June 18th, 2026 06:51
Isis
RSM0812 said:
Your poem is universally read and written. Enjoyed a lot. Emotioned universe how you cry tears of power.
June 18th, 2026 06:51
RSM0812 said:
Your poem is universally read and written. Enjoyed a lot. Emotioned universe how you cry tears of power.
June 18th, 2026 06:51
Illusive passion
arqios said:
Seems the orbits of todayβs posted poems are somewhat on the same constellations πποΈππ»
June 18th, 2026 06:10
arqios said:
Seems the orbits of todayβs posted poems are somewhat on the same constellations πποΈππ»
June 18th, 2026 06:10
Illusive passion
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
a beautiful message in this piece
June 18th, 2026 04:34
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
a beautiful message in this piece
June 18th, 2026 04:34
Illusive passion
Teddy.15 said:
It\'s amazing how the simple act of kindness and love can result in such beauty. A wonderful reminder to us all. πΉ
June 18th, 2026 04:28
Teddy.15 said:
It\'s amazing how the simple act of kindness and love can result in such beauty. A wonderful reminder to us all. πΉ
June 18th, 2026 04:28
Isis
Kevin Hulme said:
\'Dreaming mind expands out of reach\'. So true.
Isn\'t Mars the God of War? So Hopefully Venus will sort him out. I liked this. A good Write.
June 17th, 2026 18:43
Kevin Hulme said:
\'Dreaming mind expands out of reach\'. So true.
Isn\'t Mars the God of War? So Hopefully Venus will sort him out. I liked this. A good Write.
June 17th, 2026 18:43
Isis
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, what I enjoyed most here is the way the natural world becomes almost mythic. The moon, the sea, the breeze, the stars, Venus, and Mars all play their part in a nocturnal symphony of romance and possibility. The imagery is rich without feeling overworked, and the closing contrast between love and conflict provides a fitting culmination. Beautifully crafted, my friend. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
June 17th, 2026 11:49
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, what I enjoyed most here is the way the natural world becomes almost mythic. The moon, the sea, the breeze, the stars, Venus, and Mars all play their part in a nocturnal symphony of romance and possibility. The imagery is rich without feeling overworked, and the closing contrast between love and conflict provides a fitting culmination. Beautifully crafted, my friend. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
June 17th, 2026 11:49
Different shades of love
Joseph M Marion said:
Beautiful way to describe nature and its fight. Very good well written thank you my friend for being my friend
June 17th, 2026 10:36
Joseph M Marion said:
Beautiful way to describe nature and its fight. Very good well written thank you my friend for being my friend
June 17th, 2026 10:36
Isis
Soman Ragavan said:
It has been said that a man cannot enter a river twice : by the second time, it is not the same man and it is not the same river... This ties back to the ideas in the poem : when you look again, the vision will never be quite the same again...
June 17th, 2026 08:50
Soman Ragavan said:
It has been said that a man cannot enter a river twice : by the second time, it is not the same man and it is not the same river... This ties back to the ideas in the poem : when you look again, the vision will never be quite the same again...
June 17th, 2026 08:50
Change
Soman Ragavan said:
The poet\'s eye sees patterns and designs that others miss. The rotating colours bring out beauty but that beauty is a passing one. Memory is likened to a wall on which one writes. The design made out by a child in its game might seem insignificant to the adult, but the child\'s mind operates in its own way. Its creations might need time to be understood. A picture once seen cannot be seen in exactly the same way again : the mind\'s perception has changed. The next time we see it we will be influenced by experiences that have occurred in the meantime. The last line reinforces this idea : even if we manage to turn time back, we will never be able to see with the same eyes, because the eyes have evolved...
June 17th, 2026 08:46
Soman Ragavan said:
The poet\'s eye sees patterns and designs that others miss. The rotating colours bring out beauty but that beauty is a passing one. Memory is likened to a wall on which one writes. The design made out by a child in its game might seem insignificant to the adult, but the child\'s mind operates in its own way. Its creations might need time to be understood. A picture once seen cannot be seen in exactly the same way again : the mind\'s perception has changed. The next time we see it we will be influenced by experiences that have occurred in the meantime. The last line reinforces this idea : even if we manage to turn time back, we will never be able to see with the same eyes, because the eyes have evolved...
June 17th, 2026 08:46
Isis
arqios said:
The interaction between Mars and Venus is very interesting ποΈππ»
June 17th, 2026 06:34
arqios said:
The interaction between Mars and Venus is very interesting ποΈππ»
June 17th, 2026 06:34
Isis
soheil khodaparasti said:
A blend of mythology into a meditation on imagination and love. I like the personification of the moon in the first line: βThe moon with soft tidal hands pulls a watery blanket over sleeping shoresβ.
June 17th, 2026 04:58
soheil khodaparasti said:
A blend of mythology into a meditation on imagination and love. I like the personification of the moon in the first line: βThe moon with soft tidal hands pulls a watery blanket over sleeping shoresβ.
June 17th, 2026 04:58
Customer service
Demar Desu said:
I wish you would go into detail in the description of what this means to you
June 16th, 2026 19:04
Demar Desu said:
I wish you would go into detail in the description of what this means to you
June 16th, 2026 19:04
Poetry droppings
boot said:
Ah c\'mon...
Some like rhymes and some like stories
None diminish poet\'s glory
Write it down...spit it out
It\'s all about the author..no?
Shall we take a vote?
June 16th, 2026 15:02
boot said:
Ah c\'mon...
Some like rhymes and some like stories
None diminish poet\'s glory
Write it down...spit it out
It\'s all about the author..no?
Shall we take a vote?
June 16th, 2026 15:02
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