Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
The call of a buzzard
Friendship said:
Nicely written, this would make a great horror movie. Your poem explores the themes of mortality, the inevitability of death, and the harsh realities of nature. It reflects on the fragility of life, the consequences of human actions, and the presence of death as an omnipresent force.
October 29th, 2026 08:17
Friendship said:
Nicely written, this would make a great horror movie. Your poem explores the themes of mortality, the inevitability of death, and the harsh realities of nature. It reflects on the fragility of life, the consequences of human actions, and the presence of death as an omnipresent force.
October 29th, 2026 08:17
The call of a buzzard
Mutley Ravishes said:
The Creator\'s own clean-up crew in action!
October 29th, 2026 07:16
Mutley Ravishes said:
The Creator\'s own clean-up crew in action!
October 29th, 2026 07:16
The call of a buzzard
Doggerel Dave said:
A small scetch rich in detail, Soren.
I\'m making the assumption they were mountain climbers (though that is mine) and have to tell you I\'m both fascinated and puzzled by that occupation.
Liked very much.
October 29th, 2026 05:52
Doggerel Dave said:
A small scetch rich in detail, Soren.
I\'m making the assumption they were mountain climbers (though that is mine) and have to tell you I\'m both fascinated and puzzled by that occupation.
Liked very much.
October 29th, 2026 05:52
The devil\'s tongue
cully45 said:
Thanks Soren glad you liked it. Regards Owen
October 29th, 2026 05:01
cully45 said:
Thanks Soren glad you liked it. Regards Owen
October 29th, 2026 05:01
The call of a buzzard
Teddy.15 said:
Well let\'s hope their spirits could fly then 🤣 oh sorrenbarret lucky I\'m not eating my breakfast right now. lol fabulous imagery and reflection 🌹
October 29th, 2026 04:51
Teddy.15 said:
Well let\'s hope their spirits could fly then 🤣 oh sorrenbarret lucky I\'m not eating my breakfast right now. lol fabulous imagery and reflection 🌹
October 29th, 2026 04:51
The call of a buzzard
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
A piece that says only what it has to say, finely done
October 29th, 2026 03:52
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
A piece that says only what it has to say, finely done
October 29th, 2026 03:52
Locked out
Kevin Hulme said:
This could also be an Metaphor to a Person\'s Personality. I\'ve known some People who look quite distant of \'Put-offish\' but were just Quiet.
Good Write.
October 28th, 2026 17:21
Kevin Hulme said:
This could also be an Metaphor to a Person\'s Personality. I\'ve known some People who look quite distant of \'Put-offish\' but were just Quiet.
Good Write.
October 28th, 2026 17:21
Locked out
Tristan Robert Lange said:
You know, Soren, some of the kindest people I\'ve encountered have also been the hardest to get to know. It\'s amazing what a little patience and genuine curiosity can reveal. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 28th, 2026 16:52
Tristan Robert Lange said:
You know, Soren, some of the kindest people I\'ve encountered have also been the hardest to get to know. It\'s amazing what a little patience and genuine curiosity can reveal. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 28th, 2026 16:52
Locked out
arqios said:
When things go up in flames other attentions come to the foreground 👍🏻🕊️
October 28th, 2026 08:11
arqios said:
When things go up in flames other attentions come to the foreground 👍🏻🕊️
October 28th, 2026 08:11
Locked out
Friendship said:
Nicely written, your poem revolves around a metaphorical representation of an emotionally guarded person. The imagery you painted of a cold exterior juxtaposed with an inner warmth signifies the complexity of human emotions and the longing for connection despite being locked away.
October 28th, 2026 07:44
Friendship said:
Nicely written, your poem revolves around a metaphorical representation of an emotionally guarded person. The imagery you painted of a cold exterior juxtaposed with an inner warmth signifies the complexity of human emotions and the longing for connection despite being locked away.
October 28th, 2026 07:44
Locked out
Paul Bell said:
This conjures up different feelings.
There\'s a, do not disturb.
Yet there\'s also a welcome feel to it.
Then the house is locked up and he\'s gone.
Is he a warrior, or a prisoner.
October 28th, 2026 06:44
Paul Bell said:
This conjures up different feelings.
There\'s a, do not disturb.
Yet there\'s also a welcome feel to it.
Then the house is locked up and he\'s gone.
Is he a warrior, or a prisoner.
October 28th, 2026 06:44
jack o\'lantern
boot said:
Holy crap...my punkin head is cringing in frightened apprehension...
October 27th, 2026 22:38
boot said:
Holy crap...my punkin head is cringing in frightened apprehension...
October 27th, 2026 22:38
Pussy
boot said:
No lawyers for the feline..
Nature\'s scent invites the scene
Maybe.. that\'s why perfume\'s..now
Smell so pure and clean
Cover up the animal
October 27th, 2026 22:28
boot said:
No lawyers for the feline..
Nature\'s scent invites the scene
Maybe.. that\'s why perfume\'s..now
Smell so pure and clean
Cover up the animal
October 27th, 2026 22:28
The devil\'s tongue
arqios said:
When our benchmarks move it makes us wonder about who really is benefiting from these conventions. Most moving dear Soren. 🙏🏻🕊️
October 27th, 2026 21:22
arqios said:
When our benchmarks move it makes us wonder about who really is benefiting from these conventions. Most moving dear Soren. 🙏🏻🕊️
October 27th, 2026 21:22
The devil\'s tongue
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Excellent write, Soren…I’d have a few choice words for the bastards responsible. You certainly got me worked up with this one. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 27th, 2026 20:03
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Excellent write, Soren…I’d have a few choice words for the bastards responsible. You certainly got me worked up with this one. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 27th, 2026 20:03
The devil\'s tongue
Kevin Hulme said:
I wonder if there was Oil discovered under my Home, did It all belong to me?
Sure some Small print would say: No!
October 27th, 2026 19:22
Kevin Hulme said:
I wonder if there was Oil discovered under my Home, did It all belong to me?
Sure some Small print would say: No!
October 27th, 2026 19:22
Wait
cully45 said:
Thanks Soren your comments are always appreciated . Regards Owen
October 27th, 2026 09:07
cully45 said:
Thanks Soren your comments are always appreciated . Regards Owen
October 27th, 2026 09:07
The devil\'s tongue
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a sharp distrust of written authority running through this poem, linking constitutional promises, broken treaties, and the hive’s unquestioned obedience to suggest that documents meant to establish order can become instruments of control and betrayal. “Native Americans found that a treaty for ground / only their hands bound in its redistribution” is the keeper for me, because it gives the poem’s anger a concrete historical wound, exposing the bitter difference between a promise signed on paper and the power to decide whose hands must pay for it.
October 27th, 2026 08:41
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a sharp distrust of written authority running through this poem, linking constitutional promises, broken treaties, and the hive’s unquestioned obedience to suggest that documents meant to establish order can become instruments of control and betrayal. “Native Americans found that a treaty for ground / only their hands bound in its redistribution” is the keeper for me, because it gives the poem’s anger a concrete historical wound, exposing the bitter difference between a promise signed on paper and the power to decide whose hands must pay for it.
October 27th, 2026 08:41
The devil\'s tongue
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Soren,
The making of to the breaking of and the gathering of the drones to satisfy the queen bee in her lust for power regardless of the pledges, the law and the rights of the individual in a poem worthy of and the praising of its author. Very well said, my friend.
Fond regards,
Tony.
October 27th, 2026 08:03
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Soren,
The making of to the breaking of and the gathering of the drones to satisfy the queen bee in her lust for power regardless of the pledges, the law and the rights of the individual in a poem worthy of and the praising of its author. Very well said, my friend.
Fond regards,
Tony.
October 27th, 2026 08:03
The devil\'s tongue
Friendship said:
I enjoy your writing, a little history this morning. Your poem focuses on the historical context of treaties made with Native Americans, the impact of such agreements, and the broader implications of these actions on society. It also draws parallels between the hierarchical structure of nature (represented by bees and their queen) and human governance.
October 27th, 2026 08:00
Friendship said:
I enjoy your writing, a little history this morning. Your poem focuses on the historical context of treaties made with Native Americans, the impact of such agreements, and the broader implications of these actions on society. It also draws parallels between the hierarchical structure of nature (represented by bees and their queen) and human governance.
October 27th, 2026 08:00
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