Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett



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Doggerel Dave said:

Wot\'s it all about, mate - Complaint? Everything recycles - even me, who might well include parts of a once distant star...

September 22nd, 2026 04:26

Down hill
Goldfinch60 said:

That increase in power is shown so well in your words soren.

Andy

September 22nd, 2026 00:53

Too late
NafisaSB said:

Happens to the best of us - well said

September 21st, 2026 22:38

Down hill
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Soren, I felt this in my stomach. By the end, I was bracing for impact. Powerful, my friend! πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸ™πŸ•―οΈπŸ¦β€β¬›

September 21st, 2026 20:13

Down hill
Friendship said:

nice write

September 21st, 2026 09:35

Down hill
orchidee said:

Good write SB.

September 21st, 2026 09:29

Down hill
Kevin Hulme said:

A lot of Comments here associate this Poem with Cars , Bikes . On Reading my first thought was \'Falling in Love\'. Says a lot about a Person. Other People: Other Interpretations.
Good Write.

September 21st, 2026 06:17

Down hill
arqios said:

A veritable feast for the eyes, the mind and heart. Good stuff Soren! πŸ™πŸ»πŸ•ŠοΈ

September 21st, 2026 05:51

Down hill
Paul Bell said:

This is why I drive a car, motorbikes always come off second best.
Mind you, now we have bicycles flying by at a rate of knots.


September 21st, 2026 04:44

Down hill
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:

Finely spoken my friend, horse power building

September 21st, 2026 03:37

Storm brewing
NafisaSB said:

sounds very much like the rains we have here..thankfully the rainy season is ending though, and the warm days are making their way back

September 21st, 2026 01:53

Storm brewing
Goldfinch60 said:

Those drops may fall soren but skin is waterproof.

Andy

September 21st, 2026 01:47

Storm brewing
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Now I want a dark porch, a chair, and a hard rain, Soren. Loved this one. πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸ™πŸ•―οΈπŸ¦β€β¬›

September 20th, 2026 17:50

Storm brewing
Kevin Hulme said:

Yes there\'s Something about the Wind picking-up and the Black Clouds looming.
Fine discriptive write.

September 20th, 2026 10:31

Storm brewing
orchidee said:

Good write SB. I heard a crash in the kitchen - KP smashing plates, bored with sewage every day. lol.

September 20th, 2026 09:34

Storm brewing
Thomas W Case said:

Excellent. Vivid and sharp.

September 20th, 2026 07:18

Storm brewing
arqios said:

Nothing like a good dusting and wash down πŸ™πŸ»πŸ•ŠοΈ

September 20th, 2026 06:43

Storm brewing
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:

The power of nature

September 20th, 2026 04:05

On the edge of a dream
cully45 said:

Great work Soren lovely write.

September 20th, 2026 01:30

Awaiting
Goldfinch60 said:

Death is a long way off yet soren.

Andy

September 20th, 2026 00:54

Awaiting
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Soren, I love when death gets stripped of all its grandeur and becomes something almost absurdly ordinary. In fact, it is obsurdly ordinary. This one was right up my dark little alley. Loved it lots, my friend.πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸ™πŸ•―οΈπŸ¦β€β¬›

September 19th, 2026 14:45

Awaiting
orchidee said:

Good write SB. Yes, KP awaits eagerly (?) her next helping of sewage, dished up by me! lol. Well, I tell her it\'s got lots of protein in it. Dunno why she complains, while Fido and I have roast dinners. lol.

September 19th, 2026 09:57

Awaiting
Jerry Reynolds said:

A fine write, sorenbarrett.

September 19th, 2026 09:54

Awaiting
Friendship said:

Your poem portrays the emotional state of a host waiting for a visitor (death) that has been delayed, reflecting the tension between hope and resignation.

September 19th, 2026 09:12

Awaiting
arqios said:

Having lived with elders two generations up have brought such feelings and intersections. Sometimes I sit at a table and part of me waits... for them that have gone and for my own passing on.

September 19th, 2026 07:30

Awaiting
Kevin Hulme said:

I think we are all waiting. The Kettle is on.
Tea Cups laid out. No message in my inbox.
But he\'s a busy Man . Probably in Traffic.
A fine write here and a fave.

September 19th, 2026 07:23

Awaiting
Paul Bell said:

Some appointments you don\'t want to keep, but you know at some point you will.
Sadly we all pay the piper in the end.


September 19th, 2026 06:22

What is left
rrodriguez said:

I like it. The aphoristic qualityβ€”flame, beam, embers, cinders, smoke, cloak, glory, heat, ashβ€”gives the poem an architectural coherence. Indeed, fame, from blazing brilliance to fading ash, captures the reality of the matter.

September 19th, 2026 06:05

Awaiting
Lorenz said:

We\'ll always be on time for the appointment even if we\'re asleep...

September 19th, 2026 04:18

Awaiting
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:

Death has a fluid timetable

September 19th, 2026 03:29

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