Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Levels
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren… I’ve wrestled with that space where things don’t divide cleanly…where everything blends and resists definition. This brings that feeling through clearly. Well written, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 13th, 2026 08:39
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren… I’ve wrestled with that space where things don’t divide cleanly…where everything blends and resists definition. This brings that feeling through clearly. Well written, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 13th, 2026 08:39
Levels
Friendship said:
Nicely said . Your poem aims to provoke thought and reflection on the nature of reality, the fluidity of perception, and the complexity of humans.
April 13th, 2026 07:06
Friendship said:
Nicely said . Your poem aims to provoke thought and reflection on the nature of reality, the fluidity of perception, and the complexity of humans.
April 13th, 2026 07:06
Levels
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
a great write, arent we all a little mad ?
April 13th, 2026 06:36
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
a great write, arent we all a little mad ?
April 13th, 2026 06:36
Levels
Abdullah123 said:
Love the last 2 lines. This poem really challenges the boundaries we have made. Beautifully penned, a fave.
April 13th, 2026 06:20
Abdullah123 said:
Love the last 2 lines. This poem really challenges the boundaries we have made. Beautifully penned, a fave.
April 13th, 2026 06:20
Levels
arqios said:
What is reality and what conduits does it go through and get interpreted, sometimes it feels like a lot is left to chance and too many factors. But that’s just me being slung from this engaging poem🙏🏻🕊️
April 13th, 2026 05:53
arqios said:
What is reality and what conduits does it go through and get interpreted, sometimes it feels like a lot is left to chance and too many factors. But that’s just me being slung from this engaging poem🙏🏻🕊️
April 13th, 2026 05:53
Levels
Lorenz said:
Sometimes you have to accept
to following the path of genius
in order to survive the fools .
April 13th, 2026 05:22
Lorenz said:
Sometimes you have to accept
to following the path of genius
in order to survive the fools .
April 13th, 2026 05:22
Levels
orchidee said:
Good write SB. Yes, it\'s said that in autism, etc, the brain may go into some sort of overload.
On a lighter level, KP insults me, and says to me \'No danger there then of your brain going into overload; you\'ve only got 3 brain cells!\' Just for saying that, extra helpings of sewage for you today KP. Even then I\'m still being too generous - all that protein, nourishment, etc, that I feed ya! lol.
April 13th, 2026 03:27
orchidee said:
Good write SB. Yes, it\'s said that in autism, etc, the brain may go into some sort of overload.
On a lighter level, KP insults me, and says to me \'No danger there then of your brain going into overload; you\'ve only got 3 brain cells!\' Just for saying that, extra helpings of sewage for you today KP. Even then I\'m still being too generous - all that protein, nourishment, etc, that I feed ya! lol.
April 13th, 2026 03:27
Oncoming traffic
Kevin Hulme said:
Friendship\'s Review said it for me . You could also add in drivers that don\'t indicate when turning . An unexpected event in life that could mean. Liked it.
April 12th, 2026 18:54
Kevin Hulme said:
Friendship\'s Review said it for me . You could also add in drivers that don\'t indicate when turning . An unexpected event in life that could mean. Liked it.
April 12th, 2026 18:54
Gift return
Doggerel Dave said:
Somehow I missed this (time zones and all).
The word forgiveness is fine, but what does it mean? Something delivered to the transgressor? Do they deserve it? Where does the anger go? Not internalised, it is better out there until it dissipates.
April 12th, 2026 17:43
Doggerel Dave said:
Somehow I missed this (time zones and all).
The word forgiveness is fine, but what does it mean? Something delivered to the transgressor? Do they deserve it? Where does the anger go? Not internalised, it is better out there until it dissipates.
April 12th, 2026 17:43
Oncoming traffic
Teddy.15 said:
It\'s the rubber neckers that give the most trouble lol 🤣
April 12th, 2026 12:39
Teddy.15 said:
It\'s the rubber neckers that give the most trouble lol 🤣
April 12th, 2026 12:39
Resciprocity’s warning
Gurpreet Kaur said:
This really speaks to the give-and-take in a creative space. I like how you’ve highlighted that reading others is just as important as being read, very true and thoughtfully expressed.
April 12th, 2026 10:43
Gurpreet Kaur said:
This really speaks to the give-and-take in a creative space. I like how you’ve highlighted that reading others is just as important as being read, very true and thoughtfully expressed.
April 12th, 2026 10:43
Oncoming traffic
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, lands…there’s a restless movement in this that never settles. It feels like being carried forward whether you’re ready or not, with no real control over the pace. That tension sticks. A fave. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 12th, 2026 10:22
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, lands…there’s a restless movement in this that never settles. It feels like being carried forward whether you’re ready or not, with no real control over the pace. That tension sticks. A fave. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 12th, 2026 10:22
Oncoming traffic
Katie B. said:
Isn\'t there always oncoming traffic? Great write Soren.
April 12th, 2026 07:18
Katie B. said:
Isn\'t there always oncoming traffic? Great write Soren.
April 12th, 2026 07:18
Oncoming traffic
Friendship said:
This took me a while to understand. I\'m not sure if I understood it right. Your poem seems to revolve around the journey of life, the weight of past experiences, and the inevitability of time. The poet reflects on how one navigates through life, dealing with the pressures and fears that come from encountering one’s past and the relentless forward motion of time. The metaphor of traffic symbolizes life\'s challenges, the passage of time, and the inability to turn back once choices are made.
April 12th, 2026 06:12
Friendship said:
This took me a while to understand. I\'m not sure if I understood it right. Your poem seems to revolve around the journey of life, the weight of past experiences, and the inevitability of time. The poet reflects on how one navigates through life, dealing with the pressures and fears that come from encountering one’s past and the relentless forward motion of time. The metaphor of traffic symbolizes life\'s challenges, the passage of time, and the inability to turn back once choices are made.
April 12th, 2026 06:12
Oncoming traffic
Priya Tomar said:
Philosophical poem with strong imagery .
Nicely writren .
April 12th, 2026 05:28
Priya Tomar said:
Philosophical poem with strong imagery .
Nicely writren .
April 12th, 2026 05:28
Religion or science
Awam said:
mental illness is still so vulnerable in our society and world.. the stigma has been constant through times.
April 12th, 2026 01:56
Awam said:
mental illness is still so vulnerable in our society and world.. the stigma has been constant through times.
April 12th, 2026 01:56
Gift return
NinjaGirl said:
Very true message
The difference between forgiving and accepting is letting go.
And this would could use a little more love
April 11th, 2026 20:25
NinjaGirl said:
Very true message
The difference between forgiving and accepting is letting go.
And this would could use a little more love
April 11th, 2026 20:25
Resciprocity’s warning
Aven said:
This is so real yet so sad.
This kind of really touched me and I wanted to thank you for sharing and writing this. I can really connect to it and I don\'t even know why.
(Could I probably use some quotes from it? With credits ofc. Thought about sending it a friend )
April 11th, 2026 13:34
Aven said:
This is so real yet so sad.
This kind of really touched me and I wanted to thank you for sharing and writing this. I can really connect to it and I don\'t even know why.
(Could I probably use some quotes from it? With credits ofc. Thought about sending it a friend )
April 11th, 2026 13:34
Gift return
Sviatoslav Zhabotynskyi said:
From one story:
— Kyndrat! Enough shaking your balls there! Come here and teach this little moth how to take a punch!
— Listen, little moth. If you’ve already come here at this hour, why would you just sit around?
— You, old Kyndrat, must have been a pretty good boxer back in the day.
— You’re right. At this hour I become a real fighter. I am Forgiveness.
— Yeah. And I guess you know how to avoid pain in painful things…
— You don’t. Live the pain. Feel what you feel.
— And then?
— The only evil you can defeat is inside you. It doesn’t matter how it got there.
— Okay. I felt the pain. I defeated the evil in myself. How do you defeat it, by the way?
— By fighting.
— And then?
— You must also know that a human is not their evil—there is something else there. Forgive not the evil, but the person. There is more than just evil in them.
— And what else?
— Something else.
— What does that look like in practice?
— A few words. A small presence. One great leap into the abyss.
April 11th, 2026 12:58
Sviatoslav Zhabotynskyi said:
From one story:
— Kyndrat! Enough shaking your balls there! Come here and teach this little moth how to take a punch!
— Listen, little moth. If you’ve already come here at this hour, why would you just sit around?
— You, old Kyndrat, must have been a pretty good boxer back in the day.
— You’re right. At this hour I become a real fighter. I am Forgiveness.
— Yeah. And I guess you know how to avoid pain in painful things…
— You don’t. Live the pain. Feel what you feel.
— And then?
— The only evil you can defeat is inside you. It doesn’t matter how it got there.
— Okay. I felt the pain. I defeated the evil in myself. How do you defeat it, by the way?
— By fighting.
— And then?
— You must also know that a human is not their evil—there is something else there. Forgive not the evil, but the person. There is more than just evil in them.
— And what else?
— Something else.
— What does that look like in practice?
— A few words. A small presence. One great leap into the abyss.
April 11th, 2026 12:58
Gift return
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this comes through with a quiet kind of clarity…no extra weight, just truth laid out plainly. That idea that forgiveness gives something back to the one offering it really anchors the whole piece. It’s simple, but it sticks...and sticks well. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 11th, 2026 11:17
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this comes through with a quiet kind of clarity…no extra weight, just truth laid out plainly. That idea that forgiveness gives something back to the one offering it really anchors the whole piece. It’s simple, but it sticks...and sticks well. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 11th, 2026 11:17
Gift return
Friendship said:
Powerful words. Your poem deals with emotional resilience, the nature of forgiveness, and the transformative power of love. Your teaching helps readers to reflect on their experiences with anger and forgiveness, encouraging a positive outlook on interpersonal relationships.
April 11th, 2026 09:05
Friendship said:
Powerful words. Your poem deals with emotional resilience, the nature of forgiveness, and the transformative power of love. Your teaching helps readers to reflect on their experiences with anger and forgiveness, encouraging a positive outlook on interpersonal relationships.
April 11th, 2026 09:05
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