Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Imprisoned
Megan Blaney said:
I have felt this many a time. Especially growing up in the middle of nowhere. But now I long for the solitude of nature, and an open sky
December 3rd, 2025 21:21
Megan Blaney said:
I have felt this many a time. Especially growing up in the middle of nowhere. But now I long for the solitude of nature, and an open sky
December 3rd, 2025 21:21
There is no love
Lisa Brooks said:
These words are very well said. No one could have said it better. I\'ve noticed people try to point the finger not looking at there own selves 1st. No one should be casting the first stone...NO ONE.
December 3rd, 2025 19:22
Lisa Brooks said:
These words are very well said. No one could have said it better. I\'ve noticed people try to point the finger not looking at there own selves 1st. No one should be casting the first stone...NO ONE.
December 3rd, 2025 19:22
Imprisoned
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren…the loneliness in this piece is palpable. That move from nature as haven to nature as a cell, and those deaf clouds drifting away…that’s the whole ache right there. Stunning work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 3rd, 2025 18:06
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren…the loneliness in this piece is palpable. That move from nature as haven to nature as a cell, and those deaf clouds drifting away…that’s the whole ache right there. Stunning work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 3rd, 2025 18:06
Imprisoned
Friendship said:
Your poem explores the paradox of feeling trapped in a beautiful environment. It reflects on the conflict between external beauty and internal despair, suggesting that even in paradise, one can feel imprisoned by their emotions and circumstances. The picture you painted in the poem is rich with contrasting imagery. Words like \"paradise,\" \"heaven,\" \"banished,\" and \"vanished\" evoke a sense of beauty and loss. The phrase \"poetic birds\" suggests a yearning for freedom and communication, while \"deaf clouds\" implies neglect or indifference. Yet on one hand, the poet feels the complexities of human emotion—how beauty and despair can coexist, and the longing for connection in moments of isolation. It invites readers to reflect on their own experiences of feeling trapped or unheard.
December 3rd, 2025 16:14
Friendship said:
Your poem explores the paradox of feeling trapped in a beautiful environment. It reflects on the conflict between external beauty and internal despair, suggesting that even in paradise, one can feel imprisoned by their emotions and circumstances. The picture you painted in the poem is rich with contrasting imagery. Words like \"paradise,\" \"heaven,\" \"banished,\" and \"vanished\" evoke a sense of beauty and loss. The phrase \"poetic birds\" suggests a yearning for freedom and communication, while \"deaf clouds\" implies neglect or indifference. Yet on one hand, the poet feels the complexities of human emotion—how beauty and despair can coexist, and the longing for connection in moments of isolation. It invites readers to reflect on their own experiences of feeling trapped or unheard.
December 3rd, 2025 16:14
Imprisoned
V. Nayak said:
Love how you turned the prison feeling into something soft yet haunting at the same time.
December 3rd, 2025 13:14
V. Nayak said:
Love how you turned the prison feeling into something soft yet haunting at the same time.
December 3rd, 2025 13:14
Imprisoned
Lorenz said:
I was just talking about it with a passing cloud ...
December 3rd, 2025 10:43
Lorenz said:
I was just talking about it with a passing cloud ...
December 3rd, 2025 10:43
Imprisoned
arqios said:
Sometimes beauty and the beautiful are impotent and unavailable emotionally like a garden that although in full bloom does not evoke any intense emotion or doesn’t connect, hence the prison. Truly a sad state where beauty is a communal thing and expressed in companionability🙏🏻🕊️
December 3rd, 2025 07:22
arqios said:
Sometimes beauty and the beautiful are impotent and unavailable emotionally like a garden that although in full bloom does not evoke any intense emotion or doesn’t connect, hence the prison. Truly a sad state where beauty is a communal thing and expressed in companionability🙏🏻🕊️
December 3rd, 2025 07:22
Imprisoned
Paul Bell said:
Loneliness is a disease, and a killer disease at that.
Humans need to talk, and it seems now millions sit in empty houses decaying.
Once upon a time you had neighbours, but not anymore in this world of privacy.
December 3rd, 2025 05:05
Paul Bell said:
Loneliness is a disease, and a killer disease at that.
Humans need to talk, and it seems now millions sit in empty houses decaying.
Once upon a time you had neighbours, but not anymore in this world of privacy.
December 3rd, 2025 05:05
Imprisoned
orchidee said:
Good write SB. Yes, I left KP marooned on an island for about, oh, 20 years or so. Or I wish I could! lol. \'More sewage, dear?\' are the beautiful words I say to her each day. It\'s my version of saying to her \'I love you\'. heehee.
December 3rd, 2025 04:25
orchidee said:
Good write SB. Yes, I left KP marooned on an island for about, oh, 20 years or so. Or I wish I could! lol. \'More sewage, dear?\' are the beautiful words I say to her each day. It\'s my version of saying to her \'I love you\'. heehee.
December 3rd, 2025 04:25
Imprisoned
Teddy.15 said:
Helplessness is what I find here, powerful and emotionally connected to what I also feel, about our world and our environment. Kudos my dear sorrenbarret 🌹
December 3rd, 2025 04:00
Teddy.15 said:
Helplessness is what I find here, powerful and emotionally connected to what I also feel, about our world and our environment. Kudos my dear sorrenbarret 🌹
December 3rd, 2025 04:00
Cold truth
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words soren, listening to birdsong in the night can be so beautiful though.
Andy
December 3rd, 2025 02:25
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words soren, listening to birdsong in the night can be so beautiful though.
Andy
December 3rd, 2025 02:25
Cold truth
Kevin Hulme said:
A very Sad Poem, though enjoyable all the same. Nice one.
December 2nd, 2025 19:49
Kevin Hulme said:
A very Sad Poem, though enjoyable all the same. Nice one.
December 2nd, 2025 19:49
Cold truth
Mutley Ravishes said:
The predator-prey axis. Sometimes it terrifies me, other times it can appear almost majestic. What paradox is at work here?!
December 2nd, 2025 18:34
Mutley Ravishes said:
The predator-prey axis. Sometimes it terrifies me, other times it can appear almost majestic. What paradox is at work here?!
December 2nd, 2025 18:34
Cold truth
arqios said:
Sometimes, just sometimes the quieter ones don’t end up served on a dinner plate. 🍽️ a very moving metaphor 🙏🏻🕊️
December 2nd, 2025 16:27
arqios said:
Sometimes, just sometimes the quieter ones don’t end up served on a dinner plate. 🍽️ a very moving metaphor 🙏🏻🕊️
December 2nd, 2025 16:27
Cold truth
Teddy.15 said:
Wow sorrenbarret, inspirational, love your imagery, even though so sad it\'s reality and marvelously written, which brings it full circle with your title. Kudos 🌹
December 2nd, 2025 13:22
Teddy.15 said:
Wow sorrenbarret, inspirational, love your imagery, even though so sad it\'s reality and marvelously written, which brings it full circle with your title. Kudos 🌹
December 2nd, 2025 13:22
Falling apart
emptypot said:
Powerful metaphors. Its beauty is both universal and yet deeply personal.
December 2nd, 2025 12:56
emptypot said:
Powerful metaphors. Its beauty is both universal and yet deeply personal.
December 2nd, 2025 12:56
Cold truth
Paul Bell said:
Nature or human, you lose someone close, it\'s devastating.
I always think in the human world, women cope better, but I think that\'s because they know how to use the washing machine.
December 2nd, 2025 10:46
Paul Bell said:
Nature or human, you lose someone close, it\'s devastating.
I always think in the human world, women cope better, but I think that\'s because they know how to use the washing machine.
December 2nd, 2025 10:46
Cold truth
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this hits with a cold ache…the night bird’s loneliness really cuts through. You carried that mournful music straight into the final blow. Very well done!🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 2nd, 2025 10:42
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this hits with a cold ache…the night bird’s loneliness really cuts through. You carried that mournful music straight into the final blow. Very well done!🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 2nd, 2025 10:42
Cold truth
orchidee said:
A sad tale SB. I\'m not keen on turkey. I find it rather dry.
December 2nd, 2025 10:00
orchidee said:
A sad tale SB. I\'m not keen on turkey. I find it rather dry.
December 2nd, 2025 10:00
Cold truth
Katie B. said:
Lovely, beautiful, majestic. I enjoy reading your work! Lots of night birds in this world.
December 2nd, 2025 04:47
Katie B. said:
Lovely, beautiful, majestic. I enjoy reading your work! Lots of night birds in this world.
December 2nd, 2025 04:47
Cold truth
Friendship said:
This poem is extremely somber. Very melancholic and very disheartening. Your poem explores themes of loss, loneliness, and the harsh realities of nature. It reflects on the sorrowful experience of a night bird mourning the death of its mate and the emptiness that follows. The poet evokes emotions related to loss and highlights the stark realities of nature, reminding readers of the fragility of life and the deep connections that can be severed by death.
December 2nd, 2025 04:03
Friendship said:
This poem is extremely somber. Very melancholic and very disheartening. Your poem explores themes of loss, loneliness, and the harsh realities of nature. It reflects on the sorrowful experience of a night bird mourning the death of its mate and the emptiness that follows. The poet evokes emotions related to loss and highlights the stark realities of nature, reminding readers of the fragility of life and the deep connections that can be severed by death.
December 2nd, 2025 04:03
Cold truth
Aman 12 said:
solitude and grief flow like a dirge..There is something so moving about this poem..i can\'t pinpoint.
December 2nd, 2025 03:42
Aman 12 said:
solitude and grief flow like a dirge..There is something so moving about this poem..i can\'t pinpoint.
December 2nd, 2025 03:42
Mysteries of the mato
Goldfinch60 said:
The beauty of Natures wonder can never be heard in the city soren.
Andy
December 2nd, 2025 02:19
Goldfinch60 said:
The beauty of Natures wonder can never be heard in the city soren.
Andy
December 2nd, 2025 02:19
America
kuuumar said:
Hunger for Power and Dominate the worls is dangerous attitude for any country.(The nail of greed sunk deep with the hammer of lust )
Makig profit by destructive Equipments creates only Money and undesirable Hatred.
Well written.
December 1st, 2025 20:03
kuuumar said:
Hunger for Power and Dominate the worls is dangerous attitude for any country.(The nail of greed sunk deep with the hammer of lust )
Makig profit by destructive Equipments creates only Money and undesirable Hatred.
Well written.
December 1st, 2025 20:03
Mysteries of the mato
Kevin Hulme said:
\'I don\'t think I\'ll ever see\' etc. I fine Poem about
Nature and all it\'s drapery. Good Write.
December 1st, 2025 19:18
Kevin Hulme said:
\'I don\'t think I\'ll ever see\' etc. I fine Poem about
Nature and all it\'s drapery. Good Write.
December 1st, 2025 19:18
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