Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Unrepented
Lorenz said:
I am wary of those white doves of peace who always manage to look spotless...
May 15th, 2026 14:31
Lorenz said:
I am wary of those white doves of peace who always manage to look spotless...
May 15th, 2026 14:31
Unrepented
Friendship said:
Your poem explores themes of internal conflict and moral struggle, specifically the tension between the desire for peace and the realities of a violent world. The feelings of guilt and complicity, as you acknowledge your own selfishness and inaction in the face of injustice. The poet centers on the interplay among nature, human vices (such as greed, sloth, pride, and gluttony), and the longing for a peaceful existence amid chaos and conflict. Well written, my
friend. A poem of compassion to oneself.
May 15th, 2026 13:36
Friendship said:
Your poem explores themes of internal conflict and moral struggle, specifically the tension between the desire for peace and the realities of a violent world. The feelings of guilt and complicity, as you acknowledge your own selfishness and inaction in the face of injustice. The poet centers on the interplay among nature, human vices (such as greed, sloth, pride, and gluttony), and the longing for a peaceful existence amid chaos and conflict. Well written, my
friend. A poem of compassion to oneself.
May 15th, 2026 13:36
Unrepented
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this has the feel of a moral self-examination filtered through nature and metaphor. Doves, hawks, dams, storms, flowers, justice in a cage…everything circles around the difficulty of remaining compassionate without becoming hardened. Strong and thoughtful piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 15th, 2026 09:40
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this has the feel of a moral self-examination filtered through nature and metaphor. Doves, hawks, dams, storms, flowers, justice in a cage…everything circles around the difficulty of remaining compassionate without becoming hardened. Strong and thoughtful piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 15th, 2026 09:40
Unrepented
David Wakeling said:
This certainly digs deep for emotions. All the deadly sins are covered here.There is a sense of despair that quite understandable.An interesting work amigo
May 15th, 2026 06:15
David Wakeling said:
This certainly digs deep for emotions. All the deadly sins are covered here.There is a sense of despair that quite understandable.An interesting work amigo
May 15th, 2026 06:15
Unrepented
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Good write my friend, and a great message, much enjoyed
May 15th, 2026 02:41
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Good write my friend, and a great message, much enjoyed
May 15th, 2026 02:41
Falling down
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is magnificently minimal and delightfully quirky 🤣 The bouncing rhyme and wordplay keep it light, but there’s still a sly little moral caution sitting underneath the humor. Fun write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 14th, 2026 11:22
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is magnificently minimal and delightfully quirky 🤣 The bouncing rhyme and wordplay keep it light, but there’s still a sly little moral caution sitting underneath the humor. Fun write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 14th, 2026 11:22
Falling down
Friendship said:
Wow, you made me work overtime on this poem. It was short, yet the painting you painted was powerful.
Your poem brilliantly illuminates the profound journey of descent and the transformative power of resilience, empowering us to rise above adversity and discover our inner strength in the face of challenge. The vivid imagery of hills and holes spectacularly captures life\'s unpredictable journey and the vital role of self-reflection in navigating its complexities. Yet at the end, the poet likely aims to impart wisdom, reminding us readers to stay mindful of our choices and the inherent risks in life. You encourage a level-headed approach to navigating challenges, advocating for self-awareness and caution.
May 14th, 2026 08:08
Friendship said:
Wow, you made me work overtime on this poem. It was short, yet the painting you painted was powerful.
Your poem brilliantly illuminates the profound journey of descent and the transformative power of resilience, empowering us to rise above adversity and discover our inner strength in the face of challenge. The vivid imagery of hills and holes spectacularly captures life\'s unpredictable journey and the vital role of self-reflection in navigating its complexities. Yet at the end, the poet likely aims to impart wisdom, reminding us readers to stay mindful of our choices and the inherent risks in life. You encourage a level-headed approach to navigating challenges, advocating for self-awareness and caution.
May 14th, 2026 08:08
Falling down
Priya Tomar said:
Short poem with a powerful message .
Nicely done .
May 14th, 2026 06:46
Priya Tomar said:
Short poem with a powerful message .
Nicely done .
May 14th, 2026 06:46
Falling down
David Wakeling said:
Betting with the Devil you always loose. Well done
May 14th, 2026 06:37
David Wakeling said:
Betting with the Devil you always loose. Well done
May 14th, 2026 06:37
Falling down
Katie B. said:
Still sounds forlorn, as did yesterday. Hope all is well.
May 14th, 2026 04:41
Katie B. said:
Still sounds forlorn, as did yesterday. Hope all is well.
May 14th, 2026 04:41
Falling down
Abdullah123 said:
The internal rhymes almost made me read it like a rap... which I adore! Wonderfully written and beautiful message a fave
May 14th, 2026 02:49
Abdullah123 said:
The internal rhymes almost made me read it like a rap... which I adore! Wonderfully written and beautiful message a fave
May 14th, 2026 02:49
Falling down
Doggerel Dave said:
What is happening to you, Soren?
So simple and direct...
May 14th, 2026 02:22
Doggerel Dave said:
What is happening to you, Soren?
So simple and direct...
May 14th, 2026 02:22
Falling down
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
never give up keep plugging away
May 14th, 2026 01:37
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
never give up keep plugging away
May 14th, 2026 01:37
Falling down
Neilton said:
Such a powerful message here !! We Keep fighting no matter what ,pain and sadness are part of life !! Amazing poem
May 14th, 2026 00:38
Neilton said:
Such a powerful message here !! We Keep fighting no matter what ,pain and sadness are part of life !! Amazing poem
May 14th, 2026 00:38
Darkness before dawn
Kevin Hulme said:
A good interpretation of a Bad feeling.
All the best.
May 13th, 2026 19:09
Kevin Hulme said:
A good interpretation of a Bad feeling.
All the best.
May 13th, 2026 19:09
Darkness before dawn
David Wakeling said:
Oh dear I know the feeling only to well.The storm before the calm.A poem with a strong set of images.I enjoyed reading
May 13th, 2026 17:47
David Wakeling said:
Oh dear I know the feeling only to well.The storm before the calm.A poem with a strong set of images.I enjoyed reading
May 13th, 2026 17:47
Darkness before dawn
Teddy.15 said:
My, my, the emotion is palpable and so is the magnificent imagery, 🌹
May 13th, 2026 14:27
Teddy.15 said:
My, my, the emotion is palpable and so is the magnificent imagery, 🌹
May 13th, 2026 14:27
Darkness before dawn
Friendship said:
Well written, Soren. Your poem \"Darkness before dawn\" explores feelings of despair, hopelessness, and emotional exhaustion. It captures the internal struggle of waking up to a new day while still feeling trapped in darkness and lethargy. Your poem revolves around the experience of waking up after a restless night, grappling with negative thoughts, and feeling overwhelmed by a lack of energy and motivation. It leaves me sad.
May 13th, 2026 14:10
Friendship said:
Well written, Soren. Your poem \"Darkness before dawn\" explores feelings of despair, hopelessness, and emotional exhaustion. It captures the internal struggle of waking up to a new day while still feeling trapped in darkness and lethargy. Your poem revolves around the experience of waking up after a restless night, grappling with negative thoughts, and feeling overwhelmed by a lack of energy and motivation. It leaves me sad.
May 13th, 2026 14:10
Darkness before dawn
Lorenz said:
From the moon\'s perspective one can see both dawn and dusk of the earth .
May 13th, 2026 13:45
Lorenz said:
From the moon\'s perspective one can see both dawn and dusk of the earth .
May 13th, 2026 13:45
Darkness before dawn
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, there’s a bleak clarity to this that hits hard. The lump in the chest, the extinguished fire, the black thoughts spawning at dawn…it all creates the sense of someone trying to move forward while internally stalled out and sinking. And the rhyme and rhythm only deepen that weary spiral. Haunting work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 13th, 2026 12:26
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, there’s a bleak clarity to this that hits hard. The lump in the chest, the extinguished fire, the black thoughts spawning at dawn…it all creates the sense of someone trying to move forward while internally stalled out and sinking. And the rhyme and rhythm only deepen that weary spiral. Haunting work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 13th, 2026 12:26
Darkness before dawn
Katie B. said:
Powerful tale of a multitude of struggles and frustration when life is much more challenging than we would choose. Resonates with me and the challenges I face.
May 13th, 2026 12:03
Katie B. said:
Powerful tale of a multitude of struggles and frustration when life is much more challenging than we would choose. Resonates with me and the challenges I face.
May 13th, 2026 12:03
Darkness before dawn
arqios said:
Hoping it isn’t about you going through that darkness🙏🏻🕊️
May 13th, 2026 11:42
arqios said:
Hoping it isn’t about you going through that darkness🙏🏻🕊️
May 13th, 2026 11:42
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