Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Falling apart
Goldfinch60 said:
Each new day we awake is precious soren.
Andy
November 30th, 2025 02:22
Goldfinch60 said:
Each new day we awake is precious soren.
Andy
November 30th, 2025 02:22
Falling apart
arqios said:
Sometimes the shredding hurts with all the chafing and scraping. Such is life! 🙏🕊️
November 30th, 2025 01:26
arqios said:
Sometimes the shredding hurts with all the chafing and scraping. Such is life! 🙏🕊️
November 30th, 2025 01:26
Falling apart
Kevin Hulme said:
Apparently you can\'t step in the same River twice. And maybe we are not the same person today that was here yesterday.
Aren\'t we dying every day?
Well said.
November 29th, 2025 20:14
Kevin Hulme said:
Apparently you can\'t step in the same River twice. And maybe we are not the same person today that was here yesterday.
Aren\'t we dying every day?
Well said.
November 29th, 2025 20:14
At end of day
jorge serra said:
Is a good poem, it was White very well at the end of day, with a truth messsage.
November 29th, 2025 16:34
jorge serra said:
Is a good poem, it was White very well at the end of day, with a truth messsage.
November 29th, 2025 16:34
Falling apart
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this lands with a steady force…the falling petals, the dropped coat, the scales shaved away. I’ve known that kind of slow awakening myself, and you write it with a grounded honesty. Love it, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 29th, 2025 09:15
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this lands with a steady force…the falling petals, the dropped coat, the scales shaved away. I’ve known that kind of slow awakening myself, and you write it with a grounded honesty. Love it, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 29th, 2025 09:15
Falling apart
Friendship said:
The poem revolves around the theme of transformation and renewal. It explores the process of shedding layers of the past, confronting decay, and ultimately awakening to new possibilities. The poet reflects a journey through despair and loss, symbolized by imagery of decay and twilight, leading to a moment of clarity and rebirth, represented by the arrival of a new day.
November 29th, 2025 07:15
Friendship said:
The poem revolves around the theme of transformation and renewal. It explores the process of shedding layers of the past, confronting decay, and ultimately awakening to new possibilities. The poet reflects a journey through despair and loss, symbolized by imagery of decay and twilight, leading to a moment of clarity and rebirth, represented by the arrival of a new day.
November 29th, 2025 07:15
Falling apart
Paul Bell said:
This could be the decay of life, old bones tired eyes living out life.
At some point, the eyes won\'t open ever again to a new day.
November 29th, 2025 05:51
Paul Bell said:
This could be the decay of life, old bones tired eyes living out life.
At some point, the eyes won\'t open ever again to a new day.
November 29th, 2025 05:51
Hard love
PerditaRose said:
I really hate anger, especially my own. But I just want to point out that, for some people, mental illness comes prepackaged with its own punishment. So, there\'s really no need for dad, or mom, to get out the \"strap\", no matter what form it might take.
My impression, from the other comments, is that perhaps I\'m taking your words too literally. Still, I really felt compelled to speak up.
November 29th, 2025 05:19
PerditaRose said:
I really hate anger, especially my own. But I just want to point out that, for some people, mental illness comes prepackaged with its own punishment. So, there\'s really no need for dad, or mom, to get out the \"strap\", no matter what form it might take.
My impression, from the other comments, is that perhaps I\'m taking your words too literally. Still, I really felt compelled to speak up.
November 29th, 2025 05:19
Falling apart
Aman 12 said:
this feels like truth is personified. Stripping away layer by layer.
November 29th, 2025 03:37
Aman 12 said:
this feels like truth is personified. Stripping away layer by layer.
November 29th, 2025 03:37
Falling apart
orchidee said:
Yep, sounds like KP when her botox melts, or fades away. She goes all saggy - and that\'s Too Much Information! lol.
November 29th, 2025 03:20
orchidee said:
Yep, sounds like KP when her botox melts, or fades away. She goes all saggy - and that\'s Too Much Information! lol.
November 29th, 2025 03:20
Hard love
Goldfinch60 said:
My children never had me slap them, they still grew up with respect for others though soren.
Andy
November 29th, 2025 02:12
Goldfinch60 said:
My children never had me slap them, they still grew up with respect for others though soren.
Andy
November 29th, 2025 02:12
Hard love
cellinic said:
Dear Soren, I\'ve enjoyed the read, which I find very intense and dynamic, rather persuasive concerning the issue of excessive parental punishment. Best wishes and warm regards,
November 28th, 2025 22:08
cellinic said:
Dear Soren, I\'ve enjoyed the read, which I find very intense and dynamic, rather persuasive concerning the issue of excessive parental punishment. Best wishes and warm regards,
November 28th, 2025 22:08
Hard love
Kevin Hulme said:
\'Spare the Rod ; Spoil the Child\' they say.
Everyone\'s wrapped in Cotton wool these days.
So many youths running riot on the Streets.
A Fine Write.
November 28th, 2025 20:26
Kevin Hulme said:
\'Spare the Rod ; Spoil the Child\' they say.
Everyone\'s wrapped in Cotton wool these days.
So many youths running riot on the Streets.
A Fine Write.
November 28th, 2025 20:26
Hard love
E.J. Waling said:
Unfortunately, the young of today were ruined by us. Too soft we were!
Well said.
November 28th, 2025 16:59
E.J. Waling said:
Unfortunately, the young of today were ruined by us. Too soft we were!
Well said.
November 28th, 2025 16:59
Hard love
Bella Shepard said:
We are products of our childhood, and the discipline administered by our parents often lives on in us as parents ourselves. We learn by our mistakes, we have to have them to develop, and if parents can help their children to understand, then discipline will have a positive effect. Good write!
November 28th, 2025 12:57
Bella Shepard said:
We are products of our childhood, and the discipline administered by our parents often lives on in us as parents ourselves. We learn by our mistakes, we have to have them to develop, and if parents can help their children to understand, then discipline will have a positive effect. Good write!
November 28th, 2025 12:57
Hard love
Lorenz said:
Some people had children when they really want so much a dog...
November 28th, 2025 10:44
Lorenz said:
Some people had children when they really want so much a dog...
November 28th, 2025 10:44
Hard love
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this hits with real force…there’s no padding here, just the raw edge of what gets called love when it’s really survival training. The honesty in it cuts deep, as it should, my friend! Well done! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 28th, 2025 10:28
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this hits with real force…there’s no padding here, just the raw edge of what gets called love when it’s really survival training. The honesty in it cuts deep, as it should, my friend! Well done! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 28th, 2025 10:28
Hard love
arqios said:
An enigmatic character from the start! Took years of study and mediation to find equilibrium and a working understanding of Job. Excellent poem. 🙏🏻🕊️
November 28th, 2025 06:58
arqios said:
An enigmatic character from the start! Took years of study and mediation to find equilibrium and a working understanding of Job. Excellent poem. 🙏🏻🕊️
November 28th, 2025 06:58
Hard love
Aman 12 said:
I sometimes wonder how did we go from \' spare the rod, spoil the child\" to \'use the rod, loose the child\". I am not promoting violence against children, but gentle parenting has gone too far.
November 28th, 2025 06:55
Aman 12 said:
I sometimes wonder how did we go from \' spare the rod, spoil the child\" to \'use the rod, loose the child\". I am not promoting violence against children, but gentle parenting has gone too far.
November 28th, 2025 06:55
Hard love
Friendship said:
The poem \"Hard Love\" revolves around the concept of tough love, emphasizing the necessity of discipline and firmness in the process of raising and preparing a child for independence. The poem suggests that love can manifest in harsh forms, such as discipline and correction, which are ultimately aimed at fostering strength and resilience. The poet includes themes of parental guidance, the balance between love and discipline, and the idea that hardships can be a form of affection.
November 28th, 2025 06:35
Friendship said:
The poem \"Hard Love\" revolves around the concept of tough love, emphasizing the necessity of discipline and firmness in the process of raising and preparing a child for independence. The poem suggests that love can manifest in harsh forms, such as discipline and correction, which are ultimately aimed at fostering strength and resilience. The poet includes themes of parental guidance, the balance between love and discipline, and the idea that hardships can be a form of affection.
November 28th, 2025 06:35
Hard love
Paul Bell said:
Nature dictates you hit the ground running, especially when you\'re the meal for some predator.
Contrast that with the molly coddled kids today who take their parents to court for taking their phones off them.
Where did it all go wrong.
November 28th, 2025 04:53
Paul Bell said:
Nature dictates you hit the ground running, especially when you\'re the meal for some predator.
Contrast that with the molly coddled kids today who take their parents to court for taking their phones off them.
Where did it all go wrong.
November 28th, 2025 04:53
Hard love
Katie B. said:
Intense and heavy words about punishment from a parent that is excessive. Well written.
November 28th, 2025 04:16
Katie B. said:
Intense and heavy words about punishment from a parent that is excessive. Well written.
November 28th, 2025 04:16
Hard love
orchidee said:
Yes, I don\'t wrap KP in cotton wool in sentimental love. I put her in a cage and wrap barbed wire around it. That\'s going too far, says Fido! Well, I said I was \'orrible. lol.
November 28th, 2025 03:21
orchidee said:
Yes, I don\'t wrap KP in cotton wool in sentimental love. I put her in a cage and wrap barbed wire around it. That\'s going too far, says Fido! Well, I said I was \'orrible. lol.
November 28th, 2025 03:21
Within
Paul Bell said:
This could be god saying, play by the rules, I\'ll look after you.
Don\'t play by the rules, you perish.
The earth is a great place, it provides for us, sadly we don\'t look after it, so if people perish it might just be a warning to try harder.
November 27th, 2025 09:14
Paul Bell said:
This could be god saying, play by the rules, I\'ll look after you.
Don\'t play by the rules, you perish.
The earth is a great place, it provides for us, sadly we don\'t look after it, so if people perish it might just be a warning to try harder.
November 27th, 2025 09:14
Within
Paul Bell said:
This could be god saying, play by the rules, I\'ll look after you.
Don\'t play by the rules, you perish.
The earth is a great place, it provides for us, sadly we don\'t look after it, so if people perish it might just be a warning to try harder.
November 27th, 2025 09:14
Paul Bell said:
This could be god saying, play by the rules, I\'ll look after you.
Don\'t play by the rules, you perish.
The earth is a great place, it provides for us, sadly we don\'t look after it, so if people perish it might just be a warning to try harder.
November 27th, 2025 09:14
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