Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
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Teddy.15 said:
I see time, regret and remorse. Only you can write with such talent dear sorrenbarret kudos my dear friend. 🌹
July 16th, 2026 03:21
Teddy.15 said:
I see time, regret and remorse. Only you can write with such talent dear sorrenbarret kudos my dear friend. 🌹
July 16th, 2026 03:21
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Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this speaks to me. I’ve seen how old wounds can make people react long before reason has a chance to catch up. It’s heartbreaking, but very human. Really appreciated this, my friend. A fave. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 15th, 2026 22:36
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this speaks to me. I’ve seen how old wounds can make people react long before reason has a chance to catch up. It’s heartbreaking, but very human. Really appreciated this, my friend. A fave. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 15th, 2026 22:36
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Kevin Hulme said:
Some interesting and Ingenious defence Mechanisms in the Animal Kingdom.
Good Write here.
July 15th, 2026 19:15
Kevin Hulme said:
Some interesting and Ingenious defence Mechanisms in the Animal Kingdom.
Good Write here.
July 15th, 2026 19:15
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Friendship said:
Well written. Your painting to me seems to aim to explore and articulate the complexity of human emotions, particularly the darker aspects tied to pain, aggression, and instinct, encouraging readers to reflect on their own reactions in similar situations.
July 15th, 2026 13:24
Friendship said:
Well written. Your painting to me seems to aim to explore and articulate the complexity of human emotions, particularly the darker aspects tied to pain, aggression, and instinct, encouraging readers to reflect on their own reactions in similar situations.
July 15th, 2026 13:24
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Paul Bell said:
Some just open their mouths to get that autonomic reaction.
A bit like America and Iran cat and mouse war.
July 15th, 2026 11:30
Paul Bell said:
Some just open their mouths to get that autonomic reaction.
A bit like America and Iran cat and mouse war.
July 15th, 2026 11:30
Be willing to give what you ask
Donteatmecows said:
hell yeah! this is a bangar! :) it appears to me to be someone pointing out hypocrisy...just my inital thought yet of course not the author\'s meaning
July 15th, 2026 09:48
Donteatmecows said:
hell yeah! this is a bangar! :) it appears to me to be someone pointing out hypocrisy...just my inital thought yet of course not the author\'s meaning
July 15th, 2026 09:48
His father\'s chair
Donteatmecows said:
A satisfactory use of my time reading this! Thank you, sir! Personally, when I read it, I think of his dad hitting him since it says \"his father\'s scratches etched in sin\" and how he develops toughness from surviving the abuse, leading him to healing with scars, yet that is only my interpretation not what you meant necessarily....I enjoyed it!
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July 15th, 2026 09:44
Donteatmecows said:
A satisfactory use of my time reading this! Thank you, sir! Personally, when I read it, I think of his dad hitting him since it says \"his father\'s scratches etched in sin\" and how he develops toughness from surviving the abuse, leading him to healing with scars, yet that is only my interpretation not what you meant necessarily....I enjoyed it!
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July 15th, 2026 09:44
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Teddy.15 said:
I have a toxic colleague and this brings home many truths. 🌹
July 15th, 2026 07:44
Teddy.15 said:
I have a toxic colleague and this brings home many truths. 🌹
July 15th, 2026 07:44
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arqios said:
Defence mechanisms are there for a reason. Too bad they are mostly seen in unflattering light and rightly so. Much enjoyed. 🙏🕊️
July 15th, 2026 06:41
arqios said:
Defence mechanisms are there for a reason. Too bad they are mostly seen in unflattering light and rightly so. Much enjoyed. 🙏🕊️
July 15th, 2026 06:41
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nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
good piece with sharpness to each line
July 15th, 2026 03:23
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
good piece with sharpness to each line
July 15th, 2026 03:23
Closing time
Neville said:
Very noir .. near Gothic in fact best read standing by the stove with the candle lit .. Neville
July 15th, 2026 02:05
Neville said:
Very noir .. near Gothic in fact best read standing by the stove with the candle lit .. Neville
July 15th, 2026 02:05
Man
12River34 said:
\"Emojis have become our touch of tenderness\".
Thats a stunning line.
Superb poem . Thx
July 15th, 2026 00:46
12River34 said:
\"Emojis have become our touch of tenderness\".
Thats a stunning line.
Superb poem . Thx
July 15th, 2026 00:46
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Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is one haunting piece. I love how you turn the language of hospitality into something colder with each passing image, until even the simplest comfort has disappeared. That final image of the cold supper is a heartbreaking place to leave the reader. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 14th, 2026 19:10
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is one haunting piece. I love how you turn the language of hospitality into something colder with each passing image, until even the simplest comfort has disappeared. That final image of the cold supper is a heartbreaking place to leave the reader. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 14th, 2026 19:10
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Kevin Hulme said:
He seemed to be Okay with the Darkness. Then something changed. But What? That\'s the real mystery for me here. The food was already laid on the table. So doesn\'t live alone . Thought Provoking piece. 🤔
July 14th, 2026 16:04
Kevin Hulme said:
He seemed to be Okay with the Darkness. Then something changed. But What? That\'s the real mystery for me here. The food was already laid on the table. So doesn\'t live alone . Thought Provoking piece. 🤔
July 14th, 2026 16:04
Touch
ELIORA said:
Your words carve through flesh and thought with striking precision. The imagery of “living stone” and “rusted relics” feels like truth unearthed from decay — a meditation on memory and the weight of what endures. Beautifully unsettling. 🖤
July 14th, 2026 15:27
ELIORA said:
Your words carve through flesh and thought with striking precision. The imagery of “living stone” and “rusted relics” feels like truth unearthed from decay — a meditation on memory and the weight of what endures. Beautifully unsettling. 🖤
July 14th, 2026 15:27
Bath in a cloud
gray0328 said:
A suffocating confrontation with the self that leads, finally, to revelation. Well Done
July 14th, 2026 10:48
gray0328 said:
A suffocating confrontation with the self that leads, finally, to revelation. Well Done
July 14th, 2026 10:48
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Friendship said:
A very sad poem. Nicely done. Your poem revolves around a character facing a lonely and bitter night, contrasting his previous experiences of comfort and hope with a current sense of desolation and coldness. The imagery you painted of a cold, dark kitchen and a meager supper evokes feelings of abandonment and hopelessness.
July 14th, 2026 07:46
Friendship said:
A very sad poem. Nicely done. Your poem revolves around a character facing a lonely and bitter night, contrasting his previous experiences of comfort and hope with a current sense of desolation and coldness. The imagery you painted of a cold, dark kitchen and a meager supper evokes feelings of abandonment and hopelessness.
July 14th, 2026 07:46
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Thomas W Case said:
This reads like a quiet descent—controlled, reflective, and heavy with atmosphere. You’ve built a strong emotional arc using the idea of night as a host, then subverted it in a really effective way.
July 14th, 2026 07:11
Thomas W Case said:
This reads like a quiet descent—controlled, reflective, and heavy with atmosphere. You’ve built a strong emotional arc using the idea of night as a host, then subverted it in a really effective way.
July 14th, 2026 07:11
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isa kemmy said:
i love the style and how the darkness is just portrayed, its such a wonderful piece of art
July 14th, 2026 06:54
isa kemmy said:
i love the style and how the darkness is just portrayed, its such a wonderful piece of art
July 14th, 2026 06:54
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Salvia.S said:
Dark, restrained, and deeply evocative. The closing metaphor is especially powerful. Very well written!!!
July 14th, 2026 05:51
Salvia.S said:
Dark, restrained, and deeply evocative. The closing metaphor is especially powerful. Very well written!!!
July 14th, 2026 05:51
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arqios said:
Quite a familiar winter night now in poem before me. 🙏🕊️
July 14th, 2026 04:43
arqios said:
Quite a familiar winter night now in poem before me. 🙏🕊️
July 14th, 2026 04:43
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nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
I like the darkness of this piece my friend
July 14th, 2026 03:47
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
I like the darkness of this piece my friend
July 14th, 2026 03:47
Values
Kevin Hulme said:
Apparently there are new discoveries all the time about our Ancient Ancestors.
Interesting stuff.
July 13th, 2026 19:31
Kevin Hulme said:
Apparently there are new discoveries all the time about our Ancient Ancestors.
Interesting stuff.
July 13th, 2026 19:31
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