Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
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Paul Bell said:
British summer has now stalled and the electric blanket is back on the bed.
\'Somewhere in the world people are complaining of the heat. Not so far from those people, someone is cutting a hole through the ice to catch dinner.
Should have just gone to the supermarket.
June 5th, 2026 10:47
Paul Bell said:
British summer has now stalled and the electric blanket is back on the bed.
\'Somewhere in the world people are complaining of the heat. Not so far from those people, someone is cutting a hole through the ice to catch dinner.
Should have just gone to the supermarket.
June 5th, 2026 10:47
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soheil khodaparasti said:
The vivid portrayal of cold as an invading force creates a powerful sense of inevitability and helplessness. The transformation of the aging body into architecture, the feeling of entrapment, and the obscured vision all suggest emotional desolation. Rich, evocative imagery makes that desolation feel tangible, invasive, and inescapable.
June 5th, 2026 06:46
soheil khodaparasti said:
The vivid portrayal of cold as an invading force creates a powerful sense of inevitability and helplessness. The transformation of the aging body into architecture, the feeling of entrapment, and the obscured vision all suggest emotional desolation. Rich, evocative imagery makes that desolation feel tangible, invasive, and inescapable.
June 5th, 2026 06:46
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Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, what a powerful piece. I love how the cold progresses from an external fog to something that invades every layer of the speaker\'s world. The locked muscles, groaning chimney, barred windows, and fogged glass all contribute to a feeling of confinement and endurance. By the end, the gray landscape feels less like a scene and more like a state of being. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 5th, 2026 06:30
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, what a powerful piece. I love how the cold progresses from an external fog to something that invades every layer of the speaker\'s world. The locked muscles, groaning chimney, barred windows, and fogged glass all contribute to a feeling of confinement and endurance. By the end, the gray landscape feels less like a scene and more like a state of being. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 5th, 2026 06:30
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David Wakeling said:
I can relate to this.Anxiety and cold can both be similiar types of panic.Well written amigo
June 5th, 2026 05:37
David Wakeling said:
I can relate to this.Anxiety and cold can both be similiar types of panic.Well written amigo
June 5th, 2026 05:37
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arqios said:
The colds, the flu and being cold are quite similar in my experience; so I’m somewhat doubly vigilant 🥶 🧊🕊️🙏🏻
June 5th, 2026 04:56
arqios said:
The colds, the flu and being cold are quite similar in my experience; so I’m somewhat doubly vigilant 🥶 🧊🕊️🙏🏻
June 5th, 2026 04:56
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nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
a great write and a fav, lovely wording
June 5th, 2026 03:36
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
a great write and a fav, lovely wording
June 5th, 2026 03:36
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Kevin Hulme said:
I always think: \'Every Tyrant gets the Hiccups\'.
Nice one.
June 4th, 2026 18:28
Kevin Hulme said:
I always think: \'Every Tyrant gets the Hiccups\'.
Nice one.
June 4th, 2026 18:28
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Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, “Even the prime minister waits for a lorry” is the line that grabbed me. It brings towering status crashing back down to ordinary reality in an instant. That contrast works beautifully throughout the poem. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 4th, 2026 13:09
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, “Even the prime minister waits for a lorry” is the line that grabbed me. It brings towering status crashing back down to ordinary reality in an instant. That contrast works beautifully throughout the poem. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 4th, 2026 13:09
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Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this reminds me of flipping radio stations late at night…snatches of songs, stories, scripture, advertisements, and memories all colliding together. It shouldn’t hold together as well as it does, but somehow it creates its own strange logic. Really enjoyed the trip, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 4th, 2026 13:06
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this reminds me of flipping radio stations late at night…snatches of songs, stories, scripture, advertisements, and memories all colliding together. It shouldn’t hold together as well as it does, but somehow it creates its own strange logic. Really enjoyed the trip, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 4th, 2026 13:06
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Teddy.15 said:
Powerful poetry dear sorrenbarret I would hope there will never be another crucifixion but as time does have its own circle of sorts one could never know. I hope I never see it, we need an evolutionary hero that can make the world a better race 🌹
June 4th, 2026 12:25
Teddy.15 said:
Powerful poetry dear sorrenbarret I would hope there will never be another crucifixion but as time does have its own circle of sorts one could never know. I hope I never see it, we need an evolutionary hero that can make the world a better race 🌹
June 4th, 2026 12:25
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Lorenz said:
Was christ screwed to the cross ? Now that\'s a unique form of torture !
June 4th, 2026 11:33
Lorenz said:
Was christ screwed to the cross ? Now that\'s a unique form of torture !
June 4th, 2026 11:33
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orchidee said:
Good write SB. You found that missing shoe for Lao Tzu? And that rhymes! lol.
June 4th, 2026 10:45
orchidee said:
Good write SB. You found that missing shoe for Lao Tzu? And that rhymes! lol.
June 4th, 2026 10:45
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Mirela said:
I like the way you expressed letting of the old to make way for the new
June 4th, 2026 08:57
Mirela said:
I like the way you expressed letting of the old to make way for the new
June 4th, 2026 08:57
Different shades of love
mohammad ali said:
Always beautifully composed, especially about nature, which is my ever favorite issue, dear! Really wonderful!
June 4th, 2026 04:57
mohammad ali said:
Always beautifully composed, especially about nature, which is my ever favorite issue, dear! Really wonderful!
June 4th, 2026 04:57
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David Wakeling said:
This raises some interesting points. There can be no master without loss.Some thoughtful phrases here
June 4th, 2026 04:55
David Wakeling said:
This raises some interesting points. There can be no master without loss.Some thoughtful phrases here
June 4th, 2026 04:55
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Paul Bell said:
Bring Oedipus into the 21st century, and the social workers and Police are waiting for him.
In contrast to, Lao Tzu, who would be like, calm it it down man, have a smoke.
Screw Jesus into the cross, you still feel the pain.
June 4th, 2026 04:52
Paul Bell said:
Bring Oedipus into the 21st century, and the social workers and Police are waiting for him.
In contrast to, Lao Tzu, who would be like, calm it it down man, have a smoke.
Screw Jesus into the cross, you still feel the pain.
June 4th, 2026 04:52
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Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words soren, I have sung some of those songs.
Andy
June 4th, 2026 00:45
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words soren, I have sung some of those songs.
Andy
June 4th, 2026 00:45
Feelings of loss
antra.coree said:
Some goodbyes feel more painful than dying...
June 3rd, 2026 21:49
antra.coree said:
Some goodbyes feel more painful than dying...
June 3rd, 2026 21:49
Gingerbread men
antra.coree said:
So true one mistake is enough to forget 100 good things
June 3rd, 2026 21:45
antra.coree said:
So true one mistake is enough to forget 100 good things
June 3rd, 2026 21:45
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Kevin Hulme said:
What gets me is \'Small Print\'. You need a Microscope to read it . Or in a Supermarket and the Advent comes over the Speaker . And when they get to the Small Print they talk really fast .
You can\'t catch it. Good Write.
June 3rd, 2026 19:56
Kevin Hulme said:
What gets me is \'Small Print\'. You need a Microscope to read it . Or in a Supermarket and the Advent comes over the Speaker . And when they get to the Small Print they talk really fast .
You can\'t catch it. Good Write.
June 3rd, 2026 19:56
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Paul Bell said:
The iconic, smoke gerts in your eyes I\'m sure was used in a heating advert here.
If I had saved all my lottery contributions, I would be Calefornian dreaming today.
Nostalgia, wasted on the young.
June 3rd, 2026 09:39
Paul Bell said:
The iconic, smoke gerts in your eyes I\'m sure was used in a heating advert here.
If I had saved all my lottery contributions, I would be Calefornian dreaming today.
Nostalgia, wasted on the young.
June 3rd, 2026 09:39
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Friendship said:
A powerful poem. Your poem reflects on themes of disillusionment, the fleeting nature of dreams, and the irony of human experience, particularly concerning consumerism and the search for meaning. It juxtaposes the idealism of “winning lottery tickets” and “sunshine promises” with the harsh realities represented by “no return policy” and “going out of business sales.” Your imagery evokes nostalgia and loss, suggesting that while dreams are alluring, they often lead to disappointment and confusion.
June 3rd, 2026 07:35
Friendship said:
A powerful poem. Your poem reflects on themes of disillusionment, the fleeting nature of dreams, and the irony of human experience, particularly concerning consumerism and the search for meaning. It juxtaposes the idealism of “winning lottery tickets” and “sunshine promises” with the harsh realities represented by “no return policy” and “going out of business sales.” Your imagery evokes nostalgia and loss, suggesting that while dreams are alluring, they often lead to disappointment and confusion.
June 3rd, 2026 07:35
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