Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
What is a friend
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is a wonderful blend of humor, suspense, and childhood mischief. It feels like one of those stories everyone has tucked away somewhere, and that ending brought it home perfectly. Really enjoyed this one, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 26th, 2026 09:30
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is a wonderful blend of humor, suspense, and childhood mischief. It feels like one of those stories everyone has tucked away somewhere, and that ending brought it home perfectly. Really enjoyed this one, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 26th, 2026 09:30
What is a friend
Friendship said:
Nicely written story. Your story narrates a childhood incident involving two friends who accidentally start a fire while experimenting with a magnifying glass. The aftermath reveals their friendship\'s strength and the moral dilemmas they face when confronted with potential punishment
June 26th, 2026 07:23
Friendship said:
Nicely written story. Your story narrates a childhood incident involving two friends who accidentally start a fire while experimenting with a magnifying glass. The aftermath reveals their friendship\'s strength and the moral dilemmas they face when confronted with potential punishment
June 26th, 2026 07:23
What is a friend
arqios said:
Now there\'s a friend. Unsung heroes that need to be given airtime. 🕊️🙏
June 26th, 2026 06:07
arqios said:
Now there\'s a friend. Unsung heroes that need to be given airtime. 🕊️🙏
June 26th, 2026 06:07
What is a friend
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Much enjoyed read my friend
June 26th, 2026 05:12
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Much enjoyed read my friend
June 26th, 2026 05:12
What is a friend
soheil khodaparasti said:
Well crafted and emotionally engaging. A narrative poem with a beginning, rising action, climax, and resolution, structured in four quatrains representing the introduction, conflict, crisis, and resolution, and exploring the themes of childhood innocence, fear, friendship, and moral courage.
June 26th, 2026 04:46
soheil khodaparasti said:
Well crafted and emotionally engaging. A narrative poem with a beginning, rising action, climax, and resolution, structured in four quatrains representing the introduction, conflict, crisis, and resolution, and exploring the themes of childhood innocence, fear, friendship, and moral courage.
June 26th, 2026 04:46
Cold morning
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words soren but it is so hot here at the moment that that wonderful hot food would be denied, roll on autumn.
Andy
June 26th, 2026 01:17
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words soren but it is so hot here at the moment that that wonderful hot food would be denied, roll on autumn.
Andy
June 26th, 2026 01:17
Cold morning
Kevin Hulme said:
Could smell that food all the way through that piece. Nice one. 🧂🍴🥄🍷
June 25th, 2026 18:52
Kevin Hulme said:
Could smell that food all the way through that piece. Nice one. 🧂🍴🥄🍷
June 25th, 2026 18:52
Cold morning
mylastwrites said:
You did it. I\'m now hungry. Great write can almost hear the sizzle. Thanks for sharing.
June 25th, 2026 15:40
mylastwrites said:
You did it. I\'m now hungry. Great write can almost hear the sizzle. Thanks for sharing.
June 25th, 2026 15:40
Cold morning
soheil khodaparasti said:
The Pleasant Nostalgia of a Traditional Wood-Fired Kitchen.
Warmth within, winter without—perhaps symbolizing, respectively, love and isolation, or the ideal life and real life.
June 25th, 2026 10:58
soheil khodaparasti said:
The Pleasant Nostalgia of a Traditional Wood-Fired Kitchen.
Warmth within, winter without—perhaps symbolizing, respectively, love and isolation, or the ideal life and real life.
June 25th, 2026 10:58
Cold morning
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, what a warm, inviting piece. I could almost smell the bacon, coffee, and wood smoke as I read this...it feels like stepping into a kitchen where good food and good company naturally belong together. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 25th, 2026 10:48
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, what a warm, inviting piece. I could almost smell the bacon, coffee, and wood smoke as I read this...it feels like stepping into a kitchen where good food and good company naturally belong together. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 25th, 2026 10:48
Cold morning
orchidee said:
A fine write SB. None of that lovely food for KP. lol.
June 25th, 2026 09:02
orchidee said:
A fine write SB. None of that lovely food for KP. lol.
June 25th, 2026 09:02
Cold morning
Paul Bell said:
Put me down for the full English, I\'ll ldo the dishes too.
You can have all those culinary delights, but bacon and egg does it for me always.
June 25th, 2026 08:34
Paul Bell said:
Put me down for the full English, I\'ll ldo the dishes too.
You can have all those culinary delights, but bacon and egg does it for me always.
June 25th, 2026 08:34
Cold morning
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem focuses on the act of cooking breakfast, featuring various food items such as bacon, eggs, hash browns, and coffee. It paints a vivid picture of a cozy kitchen, emphasizing the contrast between the cold outside and the warmth within.
June 25th, 2026 07:00
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem focuses on the act of cooking breakfast, featuring various food items such as bacon, eggs, hash browns, and coffee. It paints a vivid picture of a cozy kitchen, emphasizing the contrast between the cold outside and the warmth within.
June 25th, 2026 07:00
Cold morning
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
much enjoyed read, can hear the sizzling food
June 25th, 2026 04:50
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
much enjoyed read, can hear the sizzling food
June 25th, 2026 04:50
Age
Teddy.15 said:
I\'m not a spring chicken either 🤣 hey this is beautiful the seasons of ones life. Everything ages it\'s how we maintain the beauty the dignity and the pride that counts.
June 25th, 2026 02:27
Teddy.15 said:
I\'m not a spring chicken either 🤣 hey this is beautiful the seasons of ones life. Everything ages it\'s how we maintain the beauty the dignity and the pride that counts.
June 25th, 2026 02:27
Age
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this made me think about how words can carry multiple lives at once. A spring can be mechanical, seasonal, or a source of water, and you\'ve managed to weave all three together naturally. I always enjoy seeing that kind of wordplay, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 24th, 2026 13:26
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this made me think about how words can carry multiple lives at once. A spring can be mechanical, seasonal, or a source of water, and you\'ve managed to weave all three together naturally. I always enjoy seeing that kind of wordplay, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 24th, 2026 13:26
Age
Soman Ragavan said:
At first the power is less, thus it meanders about. As it gathers speed and force, it is able to forge its way in a more straight path. Thus, the word \"straightens...\" Even from a seemingly barren place, we can find a spring arising, from rock and soil. To rise up it has to fight gravity. Then as it flows, gravity fights back : the spring keeps going down. Flowers blooming in winter symbolise the victory of the flowers over the harshness of winter and snow. The poet\'s eye captures all this...
June 24th, 2026 08:21
Soman Ragavan said:
At first the power is less, thus it meanders about. As it gathers speed and force, it is able to forge its way in a more straight path. Thus, the word \"straightens...\" Even from a seemingly barren place, we can find a spring arising, from rock and soil. To rise up it has to fight gravity. Then as it flows, gravity fights back : the spring keeps going down. Flowers blooming in winter symbolise the victory of the flowers over the harshness of winter and snow. The poet\'s eye captures all this...
June 24th, 2026 08:21
Age
arqios said:
Reminds me of muscle memory and also how just the right amount of heat would make metals go back to their original shape. 🙏🏻🕊️
June 24th, 2026 08:21
arqios said:
Reminds me of muscle memory and also how just the right amount of heat would make metals go back to their original shape. 🙏🏻🕊️
June 24th, 2026 08:21
Age
Friendship said:
Your poem seems to be written in a timeless context, reflecting on the perennial cycle of life and nature, although it may reflect the poet\'s contemporary thoughts on aging.
June 24th, 2026 06:41
Friendship said:
Your poem seems to be written in a timeless context, reflecting on the perennial cycle of life and nature, although it may reflect the poet\'s contemporary thoughts on aging.
June 24th, 2026 06:41
Uncertainty
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this hit me hard. The tension is palpable from the opening lines onward. You captured that feeling of being completely overwhelmed by another person’s anger in a way that feels very immediate and real. Powerful piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
June 23rd, 2026 22:29
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this hit me hard. The tension is palpable from the opening lines onward. You captured that feeling of being completely overwhelmed by another person’s anger in a way that feels very immediate and real. Powerful piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
June 23rd, 2026 22:29
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