Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
America
orchidee said:
Good write SB. If only it was as easy as some guy changing his rug / barnet / dodgy wig on his head! You know the guy.
November 26th, 2025 03:52
orchidee said:
Good write SB. If only it was as easy as some guy changing his rug / barnet / dodgy wig on his head! You know the guy.
November 26th, 2025 03:52
There is no love
Goldfinch60 said:
True words in our modern day society soren but there are still many who treat others with respect and true love in our world.
Andy
November 26th, 2025 02:22
Goldfinch60 said:
True words in our modern day society soren but there are still many who treat others with respect and true love in our world.
Andy
November 26th, 2025 02:22
There is no love
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend… the metaphors cut deep… the priest, the teacher, the poet, the doctor… you weave a full reckoning with what it means to live in a world built on exchange. It’s bold and unsparing. Love this piece tons! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 25th, 2025 23:06
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend… the metaphors cut deep… the priest, the teacher, the poet, the doctor… you weave a full reckoning with what it means to live in a world built on exchange. It’s bold and unsparing. Love this piece tons! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 25th, 2025 23:06
Sleep
Keyara S Trotman said:
Dearest Soren, this is so sleek, shaky, as for the picture you gave and your words of choosing. My favorite is the start when you
“A drowsy fog covers a lazy sun\'s eye
that dreams in dim shadows of a closed sky
Rolling rain paints in transparent tears of pain
nature\'s slumber, that upon awakening leaves no stain”
Lovely write, I enjoyed it so much. It’s as if you’ve gotten the ocean quite sprung 🥂❤️
November 25th, 2025 11:48
Keyara S Trotman said:
Dearest Soren, this is so sleek, shaky, as for the picture you gave and your words of choosing. My favorite is the start when you
“A drowsy fog covers a lazy sun\'s eye
that dreams in dim shadows of a closed sky
Rolling rain paints in transparent tears of pain
nature\'s slumber, that upon awakening leaves no stain”
Lovely write, I enjoyed it so much. It’s as if you’ve gotten the ocean quite sprung 🥂❤️
November 25th, 2025 11:48
There is no love
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Without a shade of hesitation I hit the fave. This a mirror where our hypocrisy reflects in all its glory. A fantastic work. Please give us more.
November 25th, 2025 10:16
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Without a shade of hesitation I hit the fave. This a mirror where our hypocrisy reflects in all its glory. A fantastic work. Please give us more.
November 25th, 2025 10:16
There is no love
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Woah you wrote of love too, nice to read of a different perspective.
I thought only women were prostitutes, but priests are males so am wondering.
I would think they are more molesters if i recall a news video from Europe..
And gah what\'s naked education??
Fantastic poem, awesomely rhymed wow! Kudos!
November 25th, 2025 09:50
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Woah you wrote of love too, nice to read of a different perspective.
I thought only women were prostitutes, but priests are males so am wondering.
I would think they are more molesters if i recall a news video from Europe..
And gah what\'s naked education??
Fantastic poem, awesomely rhymed wow! Kudos!
November 25th, 2025 09:50
There is no love
PerditaRose said:
I did not mean to be flippant. My work doesn\'t hold a candle to yours. I\'m just trying to express a concern. I could say more, but I don\'t think you\'d want hear it. I apologize for overstepping.
November 25th, 2025 07:50
PerditaRose said:
I did not mean to be flippant. My work doesn\'t hold a candle to yours. I\'m just trying to express a concern. I could say more, but I don\'t think you\'d want hear it. I apologize for overstepping.
November 25th, 2025 07:50
There is no love
PerditaRose said:
Is love really so transactional?
Does everything require a receipt?
At the end of it all,
Life is not so neat.
Perhaps I miss the point?
November 25th, 2025 05:38
PerditaRose said:
Is love really so transactional?
Does everything require a receipt?
At the end of it all,
Life is not so neat.
Perhaps I miss the point?
November 25th, 2025 05:38
There is no love
Teddy.15 said:
Might profound and powerful, we are all whores for something, this one is truly a wake-up call, we live in such a material world, filled with ugliness and hate and something has to make it all better, a reflection of a mirror is a good start. Simply brilliant poetry my dear sorrenbarret 🌹
November 25th, 2025 03:56
Teddy.15 said:
Might profound and powerful, we are all whores for something, this one is truly a wake-up call, we live in such a material world, filled with ugliness and hate and something has to make it all better, a reflection of a mirror is a good start. Simply brilliant poetry my dear sorrenbarret 🌹
November 25th, 2025 03:56
There is no love
orchidee said:
Good write SB. Yu got any farthings? They could be worth load these days.
November 25th, 2025 03:25
orchidee said:
Good write SB. Yu got any farthings? They could be worth load these days.
November 25th, 2025 03:25
Sleep
Goldfinch60 said:
Each naked day we arise is a good day as it is one more day in our lives soren.
Andy
November 25th, 2025 02:49
Goldfinch60 said:
Each naked day we arise is a good day as it is one more day in our lives soren.
Andy
November 25th, 2025 02:49
Sleep
Vipassana said:
Nice images, especially: revealing the bare skin of a naked arising day
November 25th, 2025 02:04
Vipassana said:
Nice images, especially: revealing the bare skin of a naked arising day
November 25th, 2025 02:04
Sleep
arqios said:
Waking is such salty sorrow, when the dream is cut short and the pressing order of the day begins. But the lure of the new and unknown promise is also quite tempting.
November 24th, 2025 23:33
arqios said:
Waking is such salty sorrow, when the dream is cut short and the pressing order of the day begins. But the lure of the new and unknown promise is also quite tempting.
November 24th, 2025 23:33
Sleep
orchidee said:
And now for my highly inspired poem title, all thanks to you: \'Awake\'! lol.
Well, it is Advent soon, and hymns such as \'Awake, awake, fling off the (spiritual) night\' You flinging it off there?! lol.
November 24th, 2025 12:21
orchidee said:
And now for my highly inspired poem title, all thanks to you: \'Awake\'! lol.
Well, it is Advent soon, and hymns such as \'Awake, awake, fling off the (spiritual) night\' You flinging it off there?! lol.
November 24th, 2025 12:21
Sleep
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this reminds me of those mornings where everything feels muted before the light breaks through. You captured that quiet shift so well. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 24th, 2025 08:47
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this reminds me of those mornings where everything feels muted before the light breaks through. You captured that quiet shift so well. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 24th, 2025 08:47
Sleep
Paul Bell said:
Nature like us all takes it time in the morning.
And maybe the old man takes the same time, but time has caught up on him.
Got that Monday feeling.
November 24th, 2025 05:54
Paul Bell said:
Nature like us all takes it time in the morning.
And maybe the old man takes the same time, but time has caught up on him.
Got that Monday feeling.
November 24th, 2025 05:54
Sleep
Aman 12 said:
nature\'s slumber is so beautiful, the renewal is so bountiful... poem captures both.
November 24th, 2025 04:28
Aman 12 said:
nature\'s slumber is so beautiful, the renewal is so bountiful... poem captures both.
November 24th, 2025 04:28
The wine cellar
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words soren bringing memories back to life.
Andy
November 24th, 2025 02:22
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words soren bringing memories back to life.
Andy
November 24th, 2025 02:22
The wine cellar
NinjaGirl said:
\"Vintage emotions\" and don\'t they just get richer when left in the cellar? So well done and well written
November 23rd, 2025 19:03
NinjaGirl said:
\"Vintage emotions\" and don\'t they just get richer when left in the cellar? So well done and well written
November 23rd, 2025 19:03
The wine cellar
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren…this hits like a door cracking open in the dark…I feel the chill…those bottled years breathing out all at once. You captured memory as something aged and dangerous. Excellent and a fave, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 23rd, 2025 16:06
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren…this hits like a door cracking open in the dark…I feel the chill…those bottled years breathing out all at once. You captured memory as something aged and dangerous. Excellent and a fave, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 23rd, 2025 16:06
The wine cellar
Bella Shepard said:
What a perfect metaphor, love like a fine wine has its many aspects, it can age gracefully and mellow when well kept, or turn sour with oxidation when exposed to harsh reality. Beautifully conceived and written my friend!
November 23rd, 2025 11:42
Bella Shepard said:
What a perfect metaphor, love like a fine wine has its many aspects, it can age gracefully and mellow when well kept, or turn sour with oxidation when exposed to harsh reality. Beautifully conceived and written my friend!
November 23rd, 2025 11:42
The wine cellar
orchidee said:
I knew I shouldn\'t have locked KP in that cellar for a week. It only made her tipsy! lol.
November 23rd, 2025 10:27
orchidee said:
I knew I shouldn\'t have locked KP in that cellar for a week. It only made her tipsy! lol.
November 23rd, 2025 10:27
The wine cellar
Paul Bell said:
A cellar of memories, good and bad.
For some reason, I\'m thinking vintage French wine being drank by German invaders
In saying that, someone you didn\'t want back has returned like the proverbial bad penny.
November 23rd, 2025 07:06
Paul Bell said:
A cellar of memories, good and bad.
For some reason, I\'m thinking vintage French wine being drank by German invaders
In saying that, someone you didn\'t want back has returned like the proverbial bad penny.
November 23rd, 2025 07:06
Insomnia of life
John Lee said:
Beautifully written. For when we rather dream
November 23rd, 2025 06:12
John Lee said:
Beautifully written. For when we rather dream
November 23rd, 2025 06:12
At end of day
Goldfinch60 said:
To my mind this is so sad as my life is the reverse of this soren, I have been so lucky to live a fine life.
Andy
November 23rd, 2025 02:34
Goldfinch60 said:
To my mind this is so sad as my life is the reverse of this soren, I have been so lucky to live a fine life.
Andy
November 23rd, 2025 02:34
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