Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Ghost riders
Friendship said:
Nicely written. Your poem focuses on the fading memories of a time when horses, trains, and the vast American plains defined life, contrasting this with contemporary imagery of cars, highways, and suburban life. You highlight the transition from a rugged, adventurous past to a more mundane, settled present.
July 4th, 2026 12:38
Friendship said:
Nicely written. Your poem focuses on the fading memories of a time when horses, trains, and the vast American plains defined life, contrasting this with contemporary imagery of cars, highways, and suburban life. You highlight the transition from a rugged, adventurous past to a more mundane, settled present.
July 4th, 2026 12:38
I sit listening for sounds around me
Divya Dansena said:
You just heard nicely, the things , which just passes by our ears . What we see is the thing that you just sense by your whole body . You’r a great observer and a poet .
July 4th, 2026 11:42
Divya Dansena said:
You just heard nicely, the things , which just passes by our ears . What we see is the thing that you just sense by your whole body . You’r a great observer and a poet .
July 4th, 2026 11:42
Little one
Divya Dansena said:
You have just expressed people’s ultimate fear into your poem . Some fear it . Some dive deep into it .
July 4th, 2026 11:37
Divya Dansena said:
You have just expressed people’s ultimate fear into your poem . Some fear it . Some dive deep into it .
July 4th, 2026 11:37
Taken
NafisaSB said:
That is so unjust and unfair and disgusting and the results speak for themselves
July 4th, 2026 10:15
NafisaSB said:
That is so unjust and unfair and disgusting and the results speak for themselves
July 4th, 2026 10:15
Ghost riders
soheil khodaparasti said:
As memory and history fade, they leave behind more than absence—they reshape the lives that follow.
July 4th, 2026 08:15
soheil khodaparasti said:
As memory and history fade, they leave behind more than absence—they reshape the lives that follow.
July 4th, 2026 08:15
Ghost riders
arqios said:
The country used to feel so much bigger than. And funny how the peopleness and community can feel more distanced in the ever-growing urban density. 🙏🕊️
July 4th, 2026 07:35
arqios said:
The country used to feel so much bigger than. And funny how the peopleness and community can feel more distanced in the ever-growing urban density. 🙏🕊️
July 4th, 2026 07:35
Ghost riders
Syd said:
Hi Sorenbarret. I feel like I can relate to this piece. Very well written 👏
- Syd 🍄
July 4th, 2026 06:53
Syd said:
Hi Sorenbarret. I feel like I can relate to this piece. Very well written 👏
- Syd 🍄
July 4th, 2026 06:53
Ghost riders
Nerd said:
I like this poem imagery is very deep, and very relatable. I also like how it makes me think the everyday objects can remind me of something that happened in the past.
July 4th, 2026 03:50
Nerd said:
I like this poem imagery is very deep, and very relatable. I also like how it makes me think the everyday objects can remind me of something that happened in the past.
July 4th, 2026 03:50
Ghost riders
Paul Bell said:
Yes, the past has surely gone, and like the gun, evaporated away.
The rise in human population is frightning, space is running out, animals are testimony to that.
Prime land is king now, and they don\'t care what land it is.
July 4th, 2026 03:27
Paul Bell said:
Yes, the past has surely gone, and like the gun, evaporated away.
The rise in human population is frightning, space is running out, animals are testimony to that.
Prime land is king now, and they don\'t care what land it is.
July 4th, 2026 03:27
Whisps of love
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write soren, i used to smoke but gave up 16th October 1982, not that I am counting of course. LOL
Andy
July 4th, 2026 01:17
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write soren, i used to smoke but gave up 16th October 1982, not that I am counting of course. LOL
Andy
July 4th, 2026 01:17
Whisps of love
Kevin Hulme said:
When Love lands with a Thundering Splash:
Those Ripples keep moving when the Passion is Past.
Enjoyed this.
July 3rd, 2026 18:45
Kevin Hulme said:
When Love lands with a Thundering Splash:
Those Ripples keep moving when the Passion is Past.
Enjoyed this.
July 3rd, 2026 18:45
Be willing to give what you ask
DLewis88 said:
It\'s well written. You did a amazing job.
July 3rd, 2026 10:29
DLewis88 said:
It\'s well written. You did a amazing job.
July 3rd, 2026 10:29
Whisps of love
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, what a poignant piece. I love how the image of smoke evolves into a meditation on time, memory, and relationships. By the end, the discarded cigarette may be gone, but its lingering scent becomes the perfect metaphor for the traces some experiences leave behind. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 3rd, 2026 08:47
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, what a poignant piece. I love how the image of smoke evolves into a meditation on time, memory, and relationships. By the end, the discarded cigarette may be gone, but its lingering scent becomes the perfect metaphor for the traces some experiences leave behind. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 3rd, 2026 08:47
Conditional
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, what a thoughtful piece. I love how you build the poem around fire as both possibility and responsibility. The imagery is simple, yet it carries a deeper reflection on the care we should give our words. Wonderfully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 3rd, 2026 08:32
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, what a thoughtful piece. I love how you build the poem around fire as both possibility and responsibility. The imagery is simple, yet it carries a deeper reflection on the care we should give our words. Wonderfully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 3rd, 2026 08:32
Whisps of love
Paul Bell said:
Never try and rekindle a failed relationship.
Men for some reason are more guilty than this than women.
Smoke your cigarette, and who knows, when the smoke clears, a new woman might be waiting.
July 3rd, 2026 07:11
Paul Bell said:
Never try and rekindle a failed relationship.
Men for some reason are more guilty than this than women.
Smoke your cigarette, and who knows, when the smoke clears, a new woman might be waiting.
July 3rd, 2026 07:11
Conditional
cellinic said:
A nice and deep write. One is to agree with most of thoughts expressed in this piece of work, I presume, my friend...
July 2nd, 2026 23:44
cellinic said:
A nice and deep write. One is to agree with most of thoughts expressed in this piece of work, I presume, my friend...
July 2nd, 2026 23:44
Conditional
Paul Bell said:
What a great analogy.
Wet wood will surely kill off any spark, and a plank to the head will render any guy senseless.
Still, we are triers.
July 2nd, 2026 12:03
Paul Bell said:
What a great analogy.
Wet wood will surely kill off any spark, and a plank to the head will render any guy senseless.
Still, we are triers.
July 2nd, 2026 12:03
Conditional
Kevin Hulme said:
If the Will is there: then anything is Possible.
Well Said.
July 2nd, 2026 09:41
Kevin Hulme said:
If the Will is there: then anything is Possible.
Well Said.
July 2nd, 2026 09:41
Taken
soheil khodaparasti said:
Thank you so much for your kind words. I am very pleased that my words reflected the spirit of your poem. It was a privilege to read your work, and I sincerely appreciate your gracious response.
Using virgin as an adjective to modify loaf, followed by oblivious of sacramental rights, suggests that the loaf is far more than simply a loaf of bread. The word defloured also works as a clever pun on deflower, whose meaning of depriving someone of virginity is reinforced by the image of the virgin loaf. These are just a few of the many suggestive and thought-provoking layers woven throughout your poem.
July 2nd, 2026 09:22
soheil khodaparasti said:
Thank you so much for your kind words. I am very pleased that my words reflected the spirit of your poem. It was a privilege to read your work, and I sincerely appreciate your gracious response.
Using virgin as an adjective to modify loaf, followed by oblivious of sacramental rights, suggests that the loaf is far more than simply a loaf of bread. The word defloured also works as a clever pun on deflower, whose meaning of depriving someone of virginity is reinforced by the image of the virgin loaf. These are just a few of the many suggestive and thought-provoking layers woven throughout your poem.
July 2nd, 2026 09:22
Taken
soheil khodaparasti said:
By illustrating that what is wrongly taken can never truly nourish but instead destroys the one who consumes it, you lead the reader to the deeper realization that stolen pleasures may satisfy for a moment but ultimately corrupt the soul of the one who takes them. Beautifully expressed.
July 2nd, 2026 08:57
soheil khodaparasti said:
By illustrating that what is wrongly taken can never truly nourish but instead destroys the one who consumes it, you lead the reader to the deeper realization that stolen pleasures may satisfy for a moment but ultimately corrupt the soul of the one who takes them. Beautifully expressed.
July 2nd, 2026 08:57
Conditional
Salvia.S said:
Love the grammatical wordplay that actually means something, about the wasted potential. Wet wood should burn, could burn, but without heat it won\'t. So you spurn it. Ruthless, but honest.
July 2nd, 2026 08:02
Salvia.S said:
Love the grammatical wordplay that actually means something, about the wasted potential. Wet wood should burn, could burn, but without heat it won\'t. So you spurn it. Ruthless, but honest.
July 2nd, 2026 08:02
Conditional
arqios said:
Here is a rhyme that unconditionally relays the conditional. 🙏🕊️
July 2nd, 2026 05:44
arqios said:
Here is a rhyme that unconditionally relays the conditional. 🙏🕊️
July 2nd, 2026 05:44
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