Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett



Traitor
Friendship said:

Good write

August 26th, 2026 19:01

Values
rrodriguez said:

Soren, this sounds like the Ten Commandments being reduced to a fable. What you have written carries the message of a society that has lowered God’s commands to a lesser level—something once sacred and authoritative now treated as an ancient story or artifact. I find the imagery powerful and thought-provoking. Thank you for sharing. Be blessed!


August 26th, 2026 18:50

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Tristan Robert Lange said:

My friend, I often wonder where moral collapse truly begins. One decision may define a life forever, but countless unseen choices usually lead toward it. This left me thinking, Soren. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

August 26th, 2026 15:55

You will be offended
Syd said:

Hi Sorenbarret, there\'s me worried at times that some of my writes are a bit risqué 😂

Cheese hog? I love that one, I\'ll have to pinch it. And Fugly? I\'ll have to change the name of our dog. It\'s a pug, you see, and... you get it.

The whole thing is quite unhinged, which is right up my street. I especially like the last stanza.

- Syd 🍄


August 26th, 2026 14:43

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orchidee said:

Good write Brutus, erm, Soren. lol.

August 26th, 2026 10:38

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Lorenz said:

In my opinion that poor Judas did the dirty job for 30 bucks ...

August 26th, 2026 09:15

Traitor
Demar Desu said:

Should traitors be forgiven?

August 26th, 2026 09:12

Closed door
Doggerel Dave said:

The feeling of loss as a relationship, a part of you is no more. Emptiness well expressed there, Soren.

August 26th, 2026 07:23

Traitor
arqios said:

Loving the look and the read. 🙏🏻🕊️

August 26th, 2026 07:22

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David Wakeling said:

An interesting essay on nature vs nuture and destiny.Made me think about betrayal

August 26th, 2026 06:26

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David Wakeling said:



August 26th, 2026 06:25

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David Wakeling said:

An interesting piece that raises the question of nature vs nuture,Fascinating

August 26th, 2026 06:24

Right off the shelf
cully45 said:

Short but to the point liked it a lot. Regards Owen

August 26th, 2026 05:09

Traitor
Teddy.15 said:

lol I did have a chuckle 🤭 wonderful dear sorrenbarret timeless and most amusing. 🌹

August 26th, 2026 03:26

Traitor
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:

A history lesson in treachery

August 26th, 2026 03:20

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Teddy.15 said:

Oh such beauty in this poem, inspiring. 🌹

August 26th, 2026 01:23

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Kevin Hulme said:

Bit of a lonely Ache in this . And Sad .
\'Your Name remains on your Door\' stands out for me.
Good Write.

August 25th, 2026 18:57

Closed door
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Soren, this is quietly devastating. The hope of reunion slowly gives way to permanent absence...and those abandoned signs of care leave everything suspended around someone who cannot return. I know that helpless ache all too well. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

August 25th, 2026 18:52

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soheil khodaparasti said:

A deeply haunting poem about absence, longing, and grief. The final line is especially poignant, leaving a lasting sense of loneliness and heartbreak.

August 25th, 2026 12:03

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Lorenz said:

Everything is conveyed through a palpable mystery...

August 25th, 2026 11:30

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orchidee said:

But you only saw me yesterday! lol.
Boohoo! When one door closes for me, they say \'Don\'t worry; another door will soon slam in your face!\' lol.
Can be embarrassing - I called at someone\'s home after many years. New owners said \'Oh, they died 5 years ago\'.

August 25th, 2026 10:33

Forgotten
cully45 said:

Thanks Soren your comments always appreciated regards Owen

August 25th, 2026 09:12

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arqios said:

Unsent flowers have the same “shelf life” as the unjilted ones. And yet that failure to launch is testified to by their colour and fragrance. 💐🥀🕊️🙏🏻

August 25th, 2026 07:21

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Demar Desu said:

:(

August 25th, 2026 06:56

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Thomas W Case said:

There’s a damn lonely ache in this, especially that candle still burning while the person is gone. “Your flowers wilted / A grieving visitor jilted” leaves us standing right there on the doorstep with the speaker, with nowhere to go.

August 25th, 2026 06:55

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David Wakeling said:

Oh dear a sad meeting that never happened.So well written.Excellent emotional journey

August 25th, 2026 05:38

You will be offended
delusions said:

How fun! Really neat idea, my friend. Like it a lot! A fave.

August 25th, 2026 04:41

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nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:

good write my friend

August 25th, 2026 03:36

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delusions said:

Grief waiting at a door that no longer belongs to the living. Nicely written, my friend.

August 25th, 2026 03:35

You will be offended
Fränz Müller said:

You had me at shaved ass of a cat!

This sounds like roll call at my high school reunion.

August 24th, 2026 21:01

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