Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Fair thee well
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Soren,
The free spirit cannot be caged, accepting that fact can be hard, to let go, to understand and accept the loss though cruel it may be. The pangs of \'fare thee well\' to linger on for the good of she who crawled away. Excellent, my friend.
All the best,
Tony.
October 30th, 2026 17:57
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Soren,
The free spirit cannot be caged, accepting that fact can be hard, to let go, to understand and accept the loss though cruel it may be. The pangs of \'fare thee well\' to linger on for the good of she who crawled away. Excellent, my friend.
All the best,
Tony.
October 30th, 2026 17:57
Cheese
cully45 said:
Thanks Soren as usual your opinion matters a lot regards Owen
October 30th, 2026 14:24
cully45 said:
Thanks Soren as usual your opinion matters a lot regards Owen
October 30th, 2026 14:24
Fair thee well
Syd said:
This is beautiful poetry, Sorenbarrett. A great analogy with the butterfly.
- Syd π
October 30th, 2026 11:42
Syd said:
This is beautiful poetry, Sorenbarrett. A great analogy with the butterfly.
- Syd π
October 30th, 2026 11:42
Fair thee well
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, Iβd hate to realize someone had given up parts of themselves just to keep me happyβ¦ and that Iβd mistaken that for love. Powerful write, my friend.πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
October 30th, 2026 11:35
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, Iβd hate to realize someone had given up parts of themselves just to keep me happyβ¦ and that Iβd mistaken that for love. Powerful write, my friend.πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
October 30th, 2026 11:35
Fair thee well
Paul Bell said:
Sad one, some are born free and must remain free.
I always think when we let go, we actually grow as a person.
October 30th, 2026 09:38
Paul Bell said:
Sad one, some are born free and must remain free.
I always think when we let go, we actually grow as a person.
October 30th, 2026 09:38
Fair thee well
Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS said:
A powerful poem, it brought back a memory my mother told me: when I used to go out to play in the garden as a very young child, I wanted to hold onto the mice so they wouldn\'t get away, and out of my nervousness, I would accidentally kill the poor things... poor little animals... especially since I\'ve always loved all animals.
October 30th, 2026 07:23
Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS said:
A powerful poem, it brought back a memory my mother told me: when I used to go out to play in the garden as a very young child, I wanted to hold onto the mice so they wouldn\'t get away, and out of my nervousness, I would accidentally kill the poor things... poor little animals... especially since I\'ve always loved all animals.
October 30th, 2026 07:23
The call of a buzzard
Gelyn said:
You are very good in bringing your readers to the scene...nice visual..it gave me all the chills...
Gel.
October 30th, 2026 05:41
Gelyn said:
You are very good in bringing your readers to the scene...nice visual..it gave me all the chills...
Gel.
October 30th, 2026 05:41
Fair thee well
Friendship said:
Nicely written. Your poem explores the themes of love, loss, and the inevitability of letting go. It reflects on the beauty and fragility of relationships, using the metaphor of a butterfly to symbolize someone cherished who ultimately cannot be contained or held back.
October 30th, 2026 05:40
Friendship said:
Nicely written. Your poem explores the themes of love, loss, and the inevitability of letting go. It reflects on the beauty and fragility of relationships, using the metaphor of a butterfly to symbolize someone cherished who ultimately cannot be contained or held back.
October 30th, 2026 05:40
Fair thee well
orchidee said:
A fair (thee well) and fine write SB. Yes, if we touch a butterfly or moth we may damage its delicate wings.
October 30th, 2026 03:31
orchidee said:
A fair (thee well) and fine write SB. Yes, if we touch a butterfly or moth we may damage its delicate wings.
October 30th, 2026 03:31
Fair thee well
Teddy.15 said:
Well I do believe you may have just shared one of the most beautiful poems ever written, stunning in every way. π¦ Even without wings we can fly my dear sorrenbarret it just depends on prespective π
October 30th, 2026 03:30
Teddy.15 said:
Well I do believe you may have just shared one of the most beautiful poems ever written, stunning in every way. π¦ Even without wings we can fly my dear sorrenbarret it just depends on prespective π
October 30th, 2026 03:30
Locked out
NafisaSB said:
The question here indeed is who locked whom out π
October 30th, 2026 03:02
NafisaSB said:
The question here indeed is who locked whom out π
October 30th, 2026 03:02
The call of a buzzard
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, it bothers me how eagerly some people wait for someone else to fail. Even worse when they pretend theyβre concerned. Wonderful write and metaphor, my friend.πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
October 30th, 2026 01:26
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, it bothers me how eagerly some people wait for someone else to fail. Even worse when they pretend theyβre concerned. Wonderful write and metaphor, my friend.πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
October 30th, 2026 01:26
The call of a buzzard
cellinic said:
A nicely written piece of work... Demanding and resonating...
October 29th, 2026 21:25
cellinic said:
A nicely written piece of work... Demanding and resonating...
October 29th, 2026 21:25
The call of a buzzard
rrodriguez said:
Haunting imagery, particularly \'angels that couldn\'t fly.\' A striking contrast between the celestial and the brutality of mortality. Dark, evocative, and unsettling.
October 29th, 2026 20:35
rrodriguez said:
Haunting imagery, particularly \'angels that couldn\'t fly.\' A striking contrast between the celestial and the brutality of mortality. Dark, evocative, and unsettling.
October 29th, 2026 20:35
The call of a buzzard
Poet\'s Dream said:
Its like a stop motion film in poetry form, well done
October 29th, 2026 19:47
Poet\'s Dream said:
Its like a stop motion film in poetry form, well done
October 29th, 2026 19:47
Locked out
Joseph M Marion said:
Sometimes it takes me a bit to read it a few times to understand what you\'re writing that\'s how I\'m learning from you I love the way this flows
October 29th, 2026 14:49
Joseph M Marion said:
Sometimes it takes me a bit to read it a few times to understand what you\'re writing that\'s how I\'m learning from you I love the way this flows
October 29th, 2026 14:49
The call of a buzzard
Friendship said:
Nicely written, this would make a great horror movie. Your poem explores the themes of mortality, the inevitability of death, and the harsh realities of nature. It reflects on the fragility of life, the consequences of human actions, and the presence of death as an omnipresent force.
October 29th, 2026 08:17
Friendship said:
Nicely written, this would make a great horror movie. Your poem explores the themes of mortality, the inevitability of death, and the harsh realities of nature. It reflects on the fragility of life, the consequences of human actions, and the presence of death as an omnipresent force.
October 29th, 2026 08:17
The call of a buzzard
Mutley Ravishes said:
The Creator\'s own clean-up crew in action!
October 29th, 2026 07:16
Mutley Ravishes said:
The Creator\'s own clean-up crew in action!
October 29th, 2026 07:16
The call of a buzzard
Doggerel Dave said:
A small scetch rich in detail, Soren.
I\'m making the assumption they were mountain climbers (though that is mine) and have to tell you I\'m both fascinated and puzzled by that occupation.
Liked very much.
October 29th, 2026 05:52
Doggerel Dave said:
A small scetch rich in detail, Soren.
I\'m making the assumption they were mountain climbers (though that is mine) and have to tell you I\'m both fascinated and puzzled by that occupation.
Liked very much.
October 29th, 2026 05:52
The devil\'s tongue
cully45 said:
Thanks Soren glad you liked it. Regards Owen
October 29th, 2026 05:01
cully45 said:
Thanks Soren glad you liked it. Regards Owen
October 29th, 2026 05:01
The call of a buzzard
Teddy.15 said:
Well let\'s hope their spirits could fly then π€£ oh sorrenbarret lucky I\'m not eating my breakfast right now. lol fabulous imagery and reflection πΉ
October 29th, 2026 04:51
Teddy.15 said:
Well let\'s hope their spirits could fly then π€£ oh sorrenbarret lucky I\'m not eating my breakfast right now. lol fabulous imagery and reflection πΉ
October 29th, 2026 04:51
The call of a buzzard
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
A piece that says only what it has to say, finely done
October 29th, 2026 03:52
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
A piece that says only what it has to say, finely done
October 29th, 2026 03:52
Locked out
Kevin Hulme said:
This could also be an Metaphor to a Person\'s Personality. I\'ve known some People who look quite distant of \'Put-offish\' but were just Quiet.
Good Write.
October 28th, 2026 17:21
Kevin Hulme said:
This could also be an Metaphor to a Person\'s Personality. I\'ve known some People who look quite distant of \'Put-offish\' but were just Quiet.
Good Write.
October 28th, 2026 17:21
Locked out
Tristan Robert Lange said:
You know, Soren, some of the kindest people I\'ve encountered have also been the hardest to get to know. It\'s amazing what a little patience and genuine curiosity can reveal. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
October 28th, 2026 16:52
Tristan Robert Lange said:
You know, Soren, some of the kindest people I\'ve encountered have also been the hardest to get to know. It\'s amazing what a little patience and genuine curiosity can reveal. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
October 28th, 2026 16:52
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