Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Ritual
Teddy.15 said:
Wow, I\'ve never seen a tooth poem more finely polished 🤣
March 28th, 2026 05:03
Teddy.15 said:
Wow, I\'ve never seen a tooth poem more finely polished 🤣
March 28th, 2026 05:03
Ritual
orchidee said:
Good write SB. I put on my false smile when I serve up sewage for KP and say to her: \'It\'s good for you, dear; dunno why you complain; I always give you double helpings!\' heehee.
March 28th, 2026 03:22
orchidee said:
Good write SB. I put on my false smile when I serve up sewage for KP and say to her: \'It\'s good for you, dear; dunno why you complain; I always give you double helpings!\' heehee.
March 28th, 2026 03:22
Rich men
Goldfinch60 said:
So true for many soren but there are still good people out there but we never hear about them.
Andy
March 28th, 2026 02:50
Goldfinch60 said:
So true for many soren but there are still good people out there but we never hear about them.
Andy
March 28th, 2026 02:50
Rich men
Kevin Hulme said:
Strange the association of Wealth to Cigars.
Never tried Cigars : But I\'d give Wealth a try.
Very discriptive Poem.
March 27th, 2026 19:26
Kevin Hulme said:
Strange the association of Wealth to Cigars.
Never tried Cigars : But I\'d give Wealth a try.
Very discriptive Poem.
March 27th, 2026 19:26
Rich men
arqios said:
That was indeed the image and sensory feel of rich men we were instilled with🙏🏻🕊️
March 27th, 2026 19:18
arqios said:
That was indeed the image and sensory feel of rich men we were instilled with🙏🏻🕊️
March 27th, 2026 19:18
Rich men
orchidee said:
Doh! KP says to me: \'Yep, I\'m burning up your paper money with rolling my cigars. Dunno why you complain? Doesn\'t it say somewhere: \'Don\'t store up treasure on earth, where moth and rust corrupt it? I\'m only trying to keep you from becoming greedily rich!\'
And yet all that\'s in my wallet is moths, each time I open it now. lol.
March 27th, 2026 09:59
orchidee said:
Doh! KP says to me: \'Yep, I\'m burning up your paper money with rolling my cigars. Dunno why you complain? Doesn\'t it say somewhere: \'Don\'t store up treasure on earth, where moth and rust corrupt it? I\'m only trying to keep you from becoming greedily rich!\'
And yet all that\'s in my wallet is moths, each time I open it now. lol.
March 27th, 2026 09:59
Rich men
Friendship said:
Your poem explores themes of wealth, indulgence, and the sensory experience of excess. It subtly critiques the hedonistic lifestyle of the wealthy, illustrating how they revel in their luxuries—represented by cigars and money—while also hinting at the emptiness behind such indulgence.
March 27th, 2026 09:49
Friendship said:
Your poem explores themes of wealth, indulgence, and the sensory experience of excess. It subtly critiques the hedonistic lifestyle of the wealthy, illustrating how they revel in their luxuries—represented by cigars and money—while also hinting at the emptiness behind such indulgence.
March 27th, 2026 09:49
Rich men
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this balances allure and critique… the atmosphere draws you in, but the imagery exposes what’s beneath it. That final turn leaves a strong impression. Excellent piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 27th, 2026 09:19
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this balances allure and critique… the atmosphere draws you in, but the imagery exposes what’s beneath it. That final turn leaves a strong impression. Excellent piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 27th, 2026 09:19
Rich men
Katie B. said:
Love it Soren! \"Intoxicating perfume of burning cash\" excellent.
March 27th, 2026 07:57
Katie B. said:
Love it Soren! \"Intoxicating perfume of burning cash\" excellent.
March 27th, 2026 07:57
Rich men
Lorenz said:
\'\' I realize ,of course ,it\'s not a shame to be poor .But it\'s not great honor either ..I am just a kind of poet with a small fortune ! \'\'
March 27th, 2026 07:05
Lorenz said:
\'\' I realize ,of course ,it\'s not a shame to be poor .But it\'s not great honor either ..I am just a kind of poet with a small fortune ! \'\'
March 27th, 2026 07:05
Rich men
Teddy.15 said:
I know rich men who aren\'t like this, but yes the fat cat ones it\'s a perfect description 🌹
March 27th, 2026 06:30
Teddy.15 said:
I know rich men who aren\'t like this, but yes the fat cat ones it\'s a perfect description 🌹
March 27th, 2026 06:30
Rich men
orchidee said:
KP smokes cigars. She makes them out of rolled up paper money that I earn! Doh!
March 27th, 2026 04:00
orchidee said:
KP smokes cigars. She makes them out of rolled up paper money that I earn! Doh!
March 27th, 2026 04:00
Charity
Allie561 said:
So thoughtfully spoken and how true it is. Kindness does not cost anything so why not share it? Wonderful poem Soren.
March 26th, 2026 22:52
Allie561 said:
So thoughtfully spoken and how true it is. Kindness does not cost anything so why not share it? Wonderful poem Soren.
March 26th, 2026 22:52
Charity
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this hits close… there are moments where you realize you have nothing else to give but kindness… and somehow that ends up being enough. This feels honest in a way that’s hard to fake. Well done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 26th, 2026 11:30
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this hits close… there are moments where you realize you have nothing else to give but kindness… and somehow that ends up being enough. This feels honest in a way that’s hard to fake. Well done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 26th, 2026 11:30
Charity
orchidee said:
Good write SB. Yes, and just \'being there\' too. KP is always \'being there\'. I wish she wasn\'t! lol.
March 26th, 2026 04:25
orchidee said:
Good write SB. Yes, and just \'being there\' too. KP is always \'being there\'. I wish she wasn\'t! lol.
March 26th, 2026 04:25
Charity
Prachi Dalvi said:
Very true Sorenbarrett!! It is definitely needed and people should have this quality.
March 26th, 2026 04:17
Prachi Dalvi said:
Very true Sorenbarrett!! It is definitely needed and people should have this quality.
March 26th, 2026 04:17
Charity
Teddy.15 said:
It is indeed a charity that unfortunately is more rare these days. But not by me. A beautiful reminder of something so simple that can change the entire world charity of kindness. 🌹
March 26th, 2026 03:03
Teddy.15 said:
It is indeed a charity that unfortunately is more rare these days. But not by me. A beautiful reminder of something so simple that can change the entire world charity of kindness. 🌹
March 26th, 2026 03:03
Biblical metaphor
Goldfinch60 said:
Clever write soren, may that sun always shine on you.
Andy
March 26th, 2026 02:54
Goldfinch60 said:
Clever write soren, may that sun always shine on you.
Andy
March 26th, 2026 02:54
Biblical metaphor
Neilton said:
This poem was so cleverly structured,I have no words! Always in awe of your work here!! Amazed as always
March 26th, 2026 02:32
Neilton said:
This poem was so cleverly structured,I have no words! Always in awe of your work here!! Amazed as always
March 26th, 2026 02:32
Biblical metaphor
Kevin Hulme said:
So many References to the Bible and more.
All threaded together these things.
A good Write.
March 25th, 2026 19:55
Kevin Hulme said:
So many References to the Bible and more.
All threaded together these things.
A good Write.
March 25th, 2026 19:55
Biblical metaphor
Neville said:
I think this is very clever indeed .. I was forced to attend Sunday School as a kid .. I think that helped me make my mind up to follow a distinctly different path .. still bloomin clever tho\' ya poem mate, not me .. Neville
March 25th, 2026 10:59
Neville said:
I think this is very clever indeed .. I was forced to attend Sunday School as a kid .. I think that helped me make my mind up to follow a distinctly different path .. still bloomin clever tho\' ya poem mate, not me .. Neville
March 25th, 2026 10:59
Biblical metaphor
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is a tapestry…Eden, Moses, Cain and Abel, Osiris…all woven into a single thread of origin, exile, and transformation. It doesn’t try to separate them…it lets them echo into each other. And that closing turn toward the rising sun gives it a sense of continuation…not ending, but cycle. Powerful piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 25th, 2026 10:38
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is a tapestry…Eden, Moses, Cain and Abel, Osiris…all woven into a single thread of origin, exile, and transformation. It doesn’t try to separate them…it lets them echo into each other. And that closing turn toward the rising sun gives it a sense of continuation…not ending, but cycle. Powerful piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 25th, 2026 10:38
Biblical metaphor
Lorenz said:
The message of the old testament is itself linked to earlier Sumerian texts that were adapted to suit the purpose .
Reinterprated legends that were used to promote monotheism .
March 25th, 2026 09:05
Lorenz said:
The message of the old testament is itself linked to earlier Sumerian texts that were adapted to suit the purpose .
Reinterprated legends that were used to promote monotheism .
March 25th, 2026 09:05
Biblical metaphor
Katie B. said:
I am often not sure how to comment on your poems. They are masterful and intricate but I\'m not always able to derive meaning. I guess I\'m saying they are over my head. I always enjoy trying to decipher. Katie
March 25th, 2026 06:58
Katie B. said:
I am often not sure how to comment on your poems. They are masterful and intricate but I\'m not always able to derive meaning. I guess I\'m saying they are over my head. I always enjoy trying to decipher. Katie
March 25th, 2026 06:58
Biblical metaphor
arqios said:
Stunning how there are thought processes in similar topics such as this in different times, cultures, languages, philosophies, etc. 🕊️🙏🏻
March 25th, 2026 06:36
arqios said:
Stunning how there are thought processes in similar topics such as this in different times, cultures, languages, philosophies, etc. 🕊️🙏🏻
March 25th, 2026 06:36
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