Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
The train
arqios said:
Reminds me of that coach with night mares , was it the segment of the spirit of Christmas Future? I\'ve taken to writing with pen and paper before bed for anywhere between quarter of an hour to half an hour just to unburden my mind of the days input and (over) stimuli. Hope all is well your way. 🕊️🙏
January 16th, 2026 21:34
arqios said:
Reminds me of that coach with night mares , was it the segment of the spirit of Christmas Future? I\'ve taken to writing with pen and paper before bed for anywhere between quarter of an hour to half an hour just to unburden my mind of the days input and (over) stimuli. Hope all is well your way. 🕊️🙏
January 16th, 2026 21:34
The train
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is powerful. Time as motion, memory as shadow, life as something witnessed rather than steered. The descent into darkness and sleep closes the loop perfectly. Thoughtful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 16th, 2026 21:12
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is powerful. Time as motion, memory as shadow, life as something witnessed rather than steered. The descent into darkness and sleep closes the loop perfectly. Thoughtful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 16th, 2026 21:12
Gestation
Durdica Porobija said:
A metaphysical poem about the closeness of nature, mythology, religion and poetry...
January 16th, 2026 10:33
Durdica Porobija said:
A metaphysical poem about the closeness of nature, mythology, religion and poetry...
January 16th, 2026 10:33
Perfection
Durdica Porobija said:
A metapoetic poem with the thesis that it is impossible to record a perfect poem in the human heart and mind. Does this mean that language is imperfect and that emotions are unattainable?
January 16th, 2026 10:19
Durdica Porobija said:
A metapoetic poem with the thesis that it is impossible to record a perfect poem in the human heart and mind. Does this mean that language is imperfect and that emotions are unattainable?
January 16th, 2026 10:19
Where is Santa? Does God know?
Durdica Porobija said:
Very strong and emotional point.
January 16th, 2026 10:10
Durdica Porobija said:
Very strong and emotional point.
January 16th, 2026 10:10
The train
Allie561 said:
I liked how the train seems to symbolize life. We pass by different monuments from time to time but we can’t stop the train to get out and look around. A very good write.
January 16th, 2026 09:33
Allie561 said:
I liked how the train seems to symbolize life. We pass by different monuments from time to time but we can’t stop the train to get out and look around. A very good write.
January 16th, 2026 09:33
The train
Lorenz said:
Asleep in a waking illusion or perhaps its opposite ?
The train takes us towards the end ...
January 16th, 2026 09:10
Lorenz said:
Asleep in a waking illusion or perhaps its opposite ?
The train takes us towards the end ...
January 16th, 2026 09:10
The train
Soman Ragavan said:
\"We travel...\" Indeed, Man is a wanderer by nature. This explains why continents and seas were explored. \"Images pass...\" : the illusion that it is the scene outside that is moving, when in fact it is our train which is the one moving... Man is restless, he has got to travel and poets are the ones who record those wanderings.
January 16th, 2026 07:52
Soman Ragavan said:
\"We travel...\" Indeed, Man is a wanderer by nature. This explains why continents and seas were explored. \"Images pass...\" : the illusion that it is the scene outside that is moving, when in fact it is our train which is the one moving... Man is restless, he has got to travel and poets are the ones who record those wanderings.
January 16th, 2026 07:52
The train
Dominic Windram said:
Nice write...you really capture the mood of the train journey here.
January 16th, 2026 04:53
Dominic Windram said:
Nice write...you really capture the mood of the train journey here.
January 16th, 2026 04:53
The train
Paul Bell said:
This is dark and depressing and spot on.
You can fly to the moon and the earth looks great, but in reality we\'re dying in our own filth.
January 16th, 2026 04:31
Paul Bell said:
This is dark and depressing and spot on.
You can fly to the moon and the earth looks great, but in reality we\'re dying in our own filth.
January 16th, 2026 04:31
The train
orchidee said:
Good write SB. Leaves on the train line?! Not getting anywhere?
January 16th, 2026 03:35
orchidee said:
Good write SB. Leaves on the train line?! Not getting anywhere?
January 16th, 2026 03:35
Too full for dessert
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words soren, I am sure that dessert will always be there for you.
Andy
January 16th, 2026 02:44
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words soren, I am sure that dessert will always be there for you.
Andy
January 16th, 2026 02:44
Too full for dessert
Allie561 said:
Soren your imagery has made me hungry! You also perfectly conveyed how the sweet things in life sometimes go too fast but they always leave an impact. Another amazing poem.
January 15th, 2026 21:45
Allie561 said:
Soren your imagery has made me hungry! You also perfectly conveyed how the sweet things in life sometimes go too fast but they always leave an impact. Another amazing poem.
January 15th, 2026 21:45
Too full for dessert
arqios said:
We can be so filled with so many things (not necessarily food stuff) that it ruins our appetite 🙏🏻🕊️
January 15th, 2026 20:44
arqios said:
We can be so filled with so many things (not necessarily food stuff) that it ruins our appetite 🙏🏻🕊️
January 15th, 2026 20:44
Too full for dessert
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this speaks to that moment when love and pleasure become memory instead of presence. I recognize that strange ache of having had enough…and too much. Thoughtful piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 15th, 2026 10:29
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this speaks to that moment when love and pleasure become memory instead of presence. I recognize that strange ache of having had enough…and too much. Thoughtful piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 15th, 2026 10:29
Too full for dessert
Paul Bell said:
Felicity feels like the distant memory we would all like to eat with.
I suppose once again, time changes the scene, and not always in a good way.
The restaurant now becomes happiness for others as you walk past reflecting.
January 15th, 2026 09:03
Paul Bell said:
Felicity feels like the distant memory we would all like to eat with.
I suppose once again, time changes the scene, and not always in a good way.
The restaurant now becomes happiness for others as you walk past reflecting.
January 15th, 2026 09:03
Too full for dessert
Dominic Windram said:
Clever write Soren....again I really like the way you utilise metaphorical language.
January 15th, 2026 05:19
Dominic Windram said:
Clever write Soren....again I really like the way you utilise metaphorical language.
January 15th, 2026 05:19
Too full for dessert
Teddy.15 said:
Beautiful my dear sorrenbarret, your imagery is superb 🌹
January 15th, 2026 04:52
Teddy.15 said:
Beautiful my dear sorrenbarret, your imagery is superb 🌹
January 15th, 2026 04:52
Seconds age
Goldfinch60 said:
Chronos never stops the time soren, but in our minds it can it can go at varying speeds all the time.
Andy
January 15th, 2026 02:47
Goldfinch60 said:
Chronos never stops the time soren, but in our minds it can it can go at varying speeds all the time.
Andy
January 15th, 2026 02:47
Have you ever felt ethereal?
Aman 12 said:
lyrical and alchemical poetry.. bending reality showing how hard it is hold on to anything.
January 15th, 2026 01:04
Aman 12 said:
lyrical and alchemical poetry.. bending reality showing how hard it is hold on to anything.
January 15th, 2026 01:04
Seconds age
Allie561 said:
Time is so often taken for granted, we don’t notice it until we don’t have any left. Your words often fascinate me and this poem has nothing less of that effect. Great read Soren.
January 14th, 2026 20:50
Allie561 said:
Time is so often taken for granted, we don’t notice it until we don’t have any left. Your words often fascinate me and this poem has nothing less of that effect. Great read Soren.
January 14th, 2026 20:50
Seconds age
arqios said:
Just joined the kiddies to watch Percy Jackson. Kronos can be a baddie. Clotho is an enigmatic character worth this poem 🙏🏻🕊️
January 14th, 2026 16:41
arqios said:
Just joined the kiddies to watch Percy Jackson. Kronos can be a baddie. Clotho is an enigmatic character worth this poem 🙏🏻🕊️
January 14th, 2026 16:41
Seconds age
Paul Bell said:
Did Chronos stop time or set time free after his demise.
It would be strange at the end of your life if you were told time never existed, and maybe in another dimension it doesn\'t.
Certainly slow when I was in school.
January 14th, 2026 13:54
Paul Bell said:
Did Chronos stop time or set time free after his demise.
It would be strange at the end of your life if you were told time never existed, and maybe in another dimension it doesn\'t.
Certainly slow when I was in school.
January 14th, 2026 13:54
Seconds age
Teddy.15 said:
I do love your message, and may I say your rap! Excellent in every way. 🌹
January 14th, 2026 13:01
Teddy.15 said:
I do love your message, and may I say your rap! Excellent in every way. 🌹
January 14th, 2026 13:01
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