Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Values
rrodriguez said:
Soren, this sounds like the Ten Commandments being reduced to a fable. What you have written carries the message of a society that has lowered God’s commands to a lesser level—something once sacred and authoritative now treated as an ancient story or artifact. I find the imagery powerful and thought-provoking. Thank you for sharing. Be blessed!
August 26th, 2026 18:50
rrodriguez said:
Soren, this sounds like the Ten Commandments being reduced to a fable. What you have written carries the message of a society that has lowered God’s commands to a lesser level—something once sacred and authoritative now treated as an ancient story or artifact. I find the imagery powerful and thought-provoking. Thank you for sharing. Be blessed!
August 26th, 2026 18:50
Traitor
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, I often wonder where moral collapse truly begins. One decision may define a life forever, but countless unseen choices usually lead toward it. This left me thinking, Soren. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 26th, 2026 15:55
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, I often wonder where moral collapse truly begins. One decision may define a life forever, but countless unseen choices usually lead toward it. This left me thinking, Soren. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 26th, 2026 15:55
You will be offended
Syd said:
Hi Sorenbarret, there\'s me worried at times that some of my writes are a bit risqué 😂
Cheese hog? I love that one, I\'ll have to pinch it. And Fugly? I\'ll have to change the name of our dog. It\'s a pug, you see, and... you get it.
The whole thing is quite unhinged, which is right up my street. I especially like the last stanza.
- Syd 🍄
August 26th, 2026 14:43
Syd said:
Hi Sorenbarret, there\'s me worried at times that some of my writes are a bit risqué 😂
Cheese hog? I love that one, I\'ll have to pinch it. And Fugly? I\'ll have to change the name of our dog. It\'s a pug, you see, and... you get it.
The whole thing is quite unhinged, which is right up my street. I especially like the last stanza.
- Syd 🍄
August 26th, 2026 14:43
Traitor
Lorenz said:
In my opinion that poor Judas did the dirty job for 30 bucks ...
August 26th, 2026 09:15
Lorenz said:
In my opinion that poor Judas did the dirty job for 30 bucks ...
August 26th, 2026 09:15
Closed door
Doggerel Dave said:
The feeling of loss as a relationship, a part of you is no more. Emptiness well expressed there, Soren.
August 26th, 2026 07:23
Doggerel Dave said:
The feeling of loss as a relationship, a part of you is no more. Emptiness well expressed there, Soren.
August 26th, 2026 07:23
Traitor
David Wakeling said:
An interesting essay on nature vs nuture and destiny.Made me think about betrayal
August 26th, 2026 06:26
David Wakeling said:
An interesting essay on nature vs nuture and destiny.Made me think about betrayal
August 26th, 2026 06:26
Traitor
David Wakeling said:
An interesting piece that raises the question of nature vs nuture,Fascinating
August 26th, 2026 06:24
David Wakeling said:
An interesting piece that raises the question of nature vs nuture,Fascinating
August 26th, 2026 06:24
Right off the shelf
cully45 said:
Short but to the point liked it a lot. Regards Owen
August 26th, 2026 05:09
cully45 said:
Short but to the point liked it a lot. Regards Owen
August 26th, 2026 05:09
Traitor
Teddy.15 said:
lol I did have a chuckle 🤭 wonderful dear sorrenbarret timeless and most amusing. 🌹
August 26th, 2026 03:26
Teddy.15 said:
lol I did have a chuckle 🤭 wonderful dear sorrenbarret timeless and most amusing. 🌹
August 26th, 2026 03:26
Closed door
Kevin Hulme said:
Bit of a lonely Ache in this . And Sad .
\'Your Name remains on your Door\' stands out for me.
Good Write.
August 25th, 2026 18:57
Kevin Hulme said:
Bit of a lonely Ache in this . And Sad .
\'Your Name remains on your Door\' stands out for me.
Good Write.
August 25th, 2026 18:57
Closed door
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is quietly devastating. The hope of reunion slowly gives way to permanent absence...and those abandoned signs of care leave everything suspended around someone who cannot return. I know that helpless ache all too well. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 25th, 2026 18:52
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is quietly devastating. The hope of reunion slowly gives way to permanent absence...and those abandoned signs of care leave everything suspended around someone who cannot return. I know that helpless ache all too well. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 25th, 2026 18:52
Closed door
soheil khodaparasti said:
A deeply haunting poem about absence, longing, and grief. The final line is especially poignant, leaving a lasting sense of loneliness and heartbreak.
August 25th, 2026 12:03
soheil khodaparasti said:
A deeply haunting poem about absence, longing, and grief. The final line is especially poignant, leaving a lasting sense of loneliness and heartbreak.
August 25th, 2026 12:03
Closed door
Lorenz said:
Everything is conveyed through a palpable mystery...
August 25th, 2026 11:30
Lorenz said:
Everything is conveyed through a palpable mystery...
August 25th, 2026 11:30
Closed door
orchidee said:
But you only saw me yesterday! lol.
Boohoo! When one door closes for me, they say \'Don\'t worry; another door will soon slam in your face!\' lol.
Can be embarrassing - I called at someone\'s home after many years. New owners said \'Oh, they died 5 years ago\'.
August 25th, 2026 10:33
orchidee said:
But you only saw me yesterday! lol.
Boohoo! When one door closes for me, they say \'Don\'t worry; another door will soon slam in your face!\' lol.
Can be embarrassing - I called at someone\'s home after many years. New owners said \'Oh, they died 5 years ago\'.
August 25th, 2026 10:33
Forgotten
cully45 said:
Thanks Soren your comments always appreciated regards Owen
August 25th, 2026 09:12
cully45 said:
Thanks Soren your comments always appreciated regards Owen
August 25th, 2026 09:12
Closed door
arqios said:
Unsent flowers have the same “shelf life” as the unjilted ones. And yet that failure to launch is testified to by their colour and fragrance. 💐🥀🕊️🙏🏻
August 25th, 2026 07:21
arqios said:
Unsent flowers have the same “shelf life” as the unjilted ones. And yet that failure to launch is testified to by their colour and fragrance. 💐🥀🕊️🙏🏻
August 25th, 2026 07:21
Closed door
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a damn lonely ache in this, especially that candle still burning while the person is gone. “Your flowers wilted / A grieving visitor jilted” leaves us standing right there on the doorstep with the speaker, with nowhere to go.
August 25th, 2026 06:55
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a damn lonely ache in this, especially that candle still burning while the person is gone. “Your flowers wilted / A grieving visitor jilted” leaves us standing right there on the doorstep with the speaker, with nowhere to go.
August 25th, 2026 06:55
Closed door
David Wakeling said:
Oh dear a sad meeting that never happened.So well written.Excellent emotional journey
August 25th, 2026 05:38
David Wakeling said:
Oh dear a sad meeting that never happened.So well written.Excellent emotional journey
August 25th, 2026 05:38
You will be offended
delusions said:
How fun! Really neat idea, my friend. Like it a lot! A fave.
August 25th, 2026 04:41
delusions said:
How fun! Really neat idea, my friend. Like it a lot! A fave.
August 25th, 2026 04:41
Closed door
delusions said:
Grief waiting at a door that no longer belongs to the living. Nicely written, my friend.
August 25th, 2026 03:35
delusions said:
Grief waiting at a door that no longer belongs to the living. Nicely written, my friend.
August 25th, 2026 03:35
You will be offended
Fränz Müller said:
You had me at shaved ass of a cat!
This sounds like roll call at my high school reunion.
August 24th, 2026 21:01
Fränz Müller said:
You had me at shaved ass of a cat!
This sounds like roll call at my high school reunion.
August 24th, 2026 21:01
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