Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Midas touch
sorenbarrett said:
A most lovely poem of love that lasts and is felt through the years. Very nicely done.
June 21st, 2026 08:54
sorenbarrett said:
A most lovely poem of love that lasts and is felt through the years. Very nicely done.
June 21st, 2026 08:54
Growing old
orchidee said:
Good write SB. I took the bottom bits off KP\'s rocking chair, so she don\'t rock now! lol.
June 21st, 2026 08:10
orchidee said:
Good write SB. I took the bottom bits off KP\'s rocking chair, so she don\'t rock now! lol.
June 21st, 2026 08:10
Growing old
Thomas W Case said:
This feels like a life passing in a single breath—almost like flipping through snapshots that blur as they speed up. There’s something really powerful in how simply you move from innocence to age without pausing to explain it.
June 21st, 2026 08:07
Thomas W Case said:
This feels like a life passing in a single breath—almost like flipping through snapshots that blur as they speed up. There’s something really powerful in how simply you move from innocence to age without pausing to explain it.
June 21st, 2026 08:07
Growing old
Paul Bell said:
It\'s like you put you watch down for a minute and life has sprinted ahead.
This is why youth is wasted on the young. On the plus side, as you get older you realise there is a thing called mornings.
Okay, just pop back into my coffin now.
June 21st, 2026 07:07
Paul Bell said:
It\'s like you put you watch down for a minute and life has sprinted ahead.
This is why youth is wasted on the young. On the plus side, as you get older you realise there is a thing called mornings.
Okay, just pop back into my coffin now.
June 21st, 2026 07:07
Growing old
arqios said:
A lifetime\'s curriculum. Amazing how it can be the same and so different at the same time. 🕊️🙏
June 21st, 2026 06:19
arqios said:
A lifetime\'s curriculum. Amazing how it can be the same and so different at the same time. 🕊️🙏
June 21st, 2026 06:19
Growing old
Shahrukh said:
So simply put a whole life times. I felt it what you trying to say here soren 🫂🧡
June 21st, 2026 05:29
Shahrukh said:
So simply put a whole life times. I felt it what you trying to say here soren 🫂🧡
June 21st, 2026 05:29
Shadow of night
Goldfinch60 said:
That death card may be there soren but it is a very long way aways at the moment.
Andy
June 21st, 2026 01:10
Goldfinch60 said:
That death card may be there soren but it is a very long way aways at the moment.
Andy
June 21st, 2026 01:10
Shadow of night
Joseph M Marion said:
vivid and emotionally charged: “heart of flame,” “hand of smoke,” “storm,” “tide,” “lightning,” and “shade” all suggest things that are powerful, beautiful, but impossible to grasp.
June 20th, 2026 23:57
Joseph M Marion said:
vivid and emotionally charged: “heart of flame,” “hand of smoke,” “storm,” “tide,” “lightning,” and “shade” all suggest things that are powerful, beautiful, but impossible to grasp.
June 20th, 2026 23:57
Shadow of night
Joseph M Marion said:
vivid and emotionally charged: “heart of flame,” “hand of smoke,” “storm,” “tide,” “lightning,” and “shade” all suggest things that are powerful, beautiful, but impossible to grasp.
Very good I love this You\'re very good writer enjoy reading what you write thank you for allowing me to my
June 20th, 2026 23:57
Joseph M Marion said:
vivid and emotionally charged: “heart of flame,” “hand of smoke,” “storm,” “tide,” “lightning,” and “shade” all suggest things that are powerful, beautiful, but impossible to grasp.
Very good I love this You\'re very good writer enjoy reading what you write thank you for allowing me to my
June 20th, 2026 23:57
Shadow of night
Salvia.S said:
You built a whole night in 12 lines and it feels alive. You carried death and rebirth at the same time. Ending hits hard because you let Icarus fly and fall in 2 lines. Really amazing!
June 20th, 2026 21:46
Salvia.S said:
You built a whole night in 12 lines and it feels alive. You carried death and rebirth at the same time. Ending hits hard because you let Icarus fly and fall in 2 lines. Really amazing!
June 20th, 2026 21:46
Shadow of night
Kevin Hulme said:
Seems like the Passage from life into death.
👍
June 20th, 2026 20:20
Kevin Hulme said:
Seems like the Passage from life into death.
👍
June 20th, 2026 20:20
Shadow of night
soheil khodaparasti said:
What I like best about your poem is its directionality of time. The repeated references to direction symbolize different stages of existence.
June 20th, 2026 16:15
soheil khodaparasti said:
What I like best about your poem is its directionality of time. The repeated references to direction symbolize different stages of existence.
June 20th, 2026 16:15
Shadow of night
Syd said:
Wow! Quite bleak but beautifully done. Very well written indeed Sorenbarret.
Take care - Syd
June 20th, 2026 13:25
Syd said:
Wow! Quite bleak but beautifully done. Very well written indeed Sorenbarret.
Take care - Syd
June 20th, 2026 13:25
Shadow of night
orchidee said:
Good write SB, as I was about to say - I was cut orf at first! lol.
June 20th, 2026 11:11
orchidee said:
Good write SB, as I was about to say - I was cut orf at first! lol.
June 20th, 2026 11:11
Isis
Joseph M Marion said:
Very well written I love this it draws a picture of my mind of how love triumphs and how nature can win and how we can look at things God bless you
June 20th, 2026 11:06
Joseph M Marion said:
Very well written I love this it draws a picture of my mind of how love triumphs and how nature can win and how we can look at things God bless you
June 20th, 2026 11:06
Shadow of night
Teddy.15 said:
Exquisite poetry my dear sorrenbarret you my friend are a poetry star✨
June 20th, 2026 11:01
Teddy.15 said:
Exquisite poetry my dear sorrenbarret you my friend are a poetry star✨
June 20th, 2026 11:01
Illusive passion
Soman Ragavan said:
A heart of flame is indeed to hold, to control. An explosion left its mark on the heart. Indeed, the heart is the one organ that takes the most battering, after the stomach. Whereas the stomach can enjoy hours of rest, not so the heart. The mind replays harsh words heard and this takes its toll on the heart.
June 20th, 2026 10:50
Soman Ragavan said:
A heart of flame is indeed to hold, to control. An explosion left its mark on the heart. Indeed, the heart is the one organ that takes the most battering, after the stomach. Whereas the stomach can enjoy hours of rest, not so the heart. The mind replays harsh words heard and this takes its toll on the heart.
June 20th, 2026 10:50
Shadow of night
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, what I enjoyed most is how the poem keeps balancing opposing forces...death and rebirth, darkness and light, resignation and hope. The crow, the phoenix, the dying fire, and the rising bird all work together to create a journey that feels both mythic and deeply personal. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 20th, 2026 09:32
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, what I enjoyed most is how the poem keeps balancing opposing forces...death and rebirth, darkness and light, resignation and hope. The crow, the phoenix, the dying fire, and the rising bird all work together to create a journey that feels both mythic and deeply personal. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 20th, 2026 09:32
Shadow of night
Friendship said:
A powerful poem indeed. The concepts of life and death are perhaps too profound to fully grasp so early in the morning. This poem revolves around the juxtaposition of life and death, exploring themes of despair, hope, and the inevitability of mortality. The imagery you painted of darkness, shadows, and the crow symbolizes death and the unknown. At the same time, the references to the phoenix and Icarus introduce themes of rebirth and the struggle against fate. Yet at the same time, your poem may serve to explore the universal human experience of grappling with mortality, seeking understanding and meaning in the face of inevitable death, and finding hope through symbolism and mythological references
June 20th, 2026 07:12
Friendship said:
A powerful poem indeed. The concepts of life and death are perhaps too profound to fully grasp so early in the morning. This poem revolves around the juxtaposition of life and death, exploring themes of despair, hope, and the inevitability of mortality. The imagery you painted of darkness, shadows, and the crow symbolizes death and the unknown. At the same time, the references to the phoenix and Icarus introduce themes of rebirth and the struggle against fate. Yet at the same time, your poem may serve to explore the universal human experience of grappling with mortality, seeking understanding and meaning in the face of inevitable death, and finding hope through symbolism and mythological references
June 20th, 2026 07:12
Alliteration\'s addiction
RSM0812 said:
Interesting rhyme scheme with an aura of literation. Good read.
June 20th, 2026 03:59
RSM0812 said:
Interesting rhyme scheme with an aura of literation. Good read.
June 20th, 2026 03:59
Shadow of night
cellinic said:
A wonderful work, reflecting both aspiration, deeply pronounced, and desperate feelings.. .A fave, my friend
June 20th, 2026 03:11
cellinic said:
A wonderful work, reflecting both aspiration, deeply pronounced, and desperate feelings.. .A fave, my friend
June 20th, 2026 03:11
Alliteration\'s addiction
Teddy.15 said:
Well I just love everyone after two glasses of wine 🤣 wonderful word play my dear sorrenbarret 🌹
June 19th, 2026 23:59
Teddy.15 said:
Well I just love everyone after two glasses of wine 🤣 wonderful word play my dear sorrenbarret 🌹
June 19th, 2026 23:59
Alliteration\'s addiction
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, what a ride. The musicality pulls everything along beautifully, but beneath it all there’s a growing sense that the destination isn’t nearly as pleasant as the journey first appears. Dark, vivid, and memorable, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 19th, 2026 22:21
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, what a ride. The musicality pulls everything along beautifully, but beneath it all there’s a growing sense that the destination isn’t nearly as pleasant as the journey first appears. Dark, vivid, and memorable, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 19th, 2026 22:21
Alliteration\'s addiction
Lorenz said:
Amazing verbal vertigo in the maze of an abyssal vortex !
June 19th, 2026 09:35
Lorenz said:
Amazing verbal vertigo in the maze of an abyssal vortex !
June 19th, 2026 09:35
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