Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
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Hadeed musa said:
I just want to say one thing
OH MY GOD !!!
May 17th, 2026 14:11
Hadeed musa said:
I just want to say one thing
OH MY GOD !!!
May 17th, 2026 14:11
Gingerbread men
Teddy.15 said:
You have me doubting Adam and Eve maybe it was just play dough with salt and sugar after all 🤣 I love salt my husband loves sugar. 🌹
May 17th, 2026 13:32
Teddy.15 said:
You have me doubting Adam and Eve maybe it was just play dough with salt and sugar after all 🤣 I love salt my husband loves sugar. 🌹
May 17th, 2026 13:32
Gingerbread men
orchidee said:
Good write SB. Ahh, good another recipe idea for KP - gingerbread men made with sewage. Thank you muchly. lol.
May 17th, 2026 12:18
orchidee said:
Good write SB. Ahh, good another recipe idea for KP - gingerbread men made with sewage. Thank you muchly. lol.
May 17th, 2026 12:18
Gingerbread men
Friendship said:
I am retracting my prior comment and would like to formally apologize for my misguided interpretation of your poem. It is a commendable piece of writing, and I should have provided a more thoughtful response. Your poem explores the idea of human flaws and the consequences of mistakes, particularly in the context of creation. Your suggestion that a seemingly small error can lead to significant problems, both in baking and in life, where misplacing love with hate can result in negative outcomes. It prompts contemplation on the nature of human flaws and the unexpected results that can arise from seemingly small mistakes.
May 17th, 2026 11:39
Friendship said:
I am retracting my prior comment and would like to formally apologize for my misguided interpretation of your poem. It is a commendable piece of writing, and I should have provided a more thoughtful response. Your poem explores the idea of human flaws and the consequences of mistakes, particularly in the context of creation. Your suggestion that a seemingly small error can lead to significant problems, both in baking and in life, where misplacing love with hate can result in negative outcomes. It prompts contemplation on the nature of human flaws and the unexpected results that can arise from seemingly small mistakes.
May 17th, 2026 11:39
Gingerbread men
Lorenz said:
Because of a mix-up of ingredients the divine baker created the strawmen...
May 17th, 2026 10:18
Lorenz said:
Because of a mix-up of ingredients the divine baker created the strawmen...
May 17th, 2026 10:18
Gingerbread men
Thomas W Case said:
You’re laying it out like a bad batch no one wants to admit they’re eating,
Sweet on the surface, but there’s something off underneath that keeps repeating.
May 17th, 2026 08:57
Thomas W Case said:
You’re laying it out like a bad batch no one wants to admit they’re eating,
Sweet on the surface, but there’s something off underneath that keeps repeating.
May 17th, 2026 08:57
Gingerbread men
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, I really enjoyed how this balances humor, rhythm, and philosophical commentary together. Beneath the playful rhyme structure there’s a genuinely dark meditation on human decline and moral distortion. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 17th, 2026 08:04
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, I really enjoyed how this balances humor, rhythm, and philosophical commentary together. Beneath the playful rhyme structure there’s a genuinely dark meditation on human decline and moral distortion. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 17th, 2026 08:04
Gingerbread men
David Wakeling said:
This is a very interesting view of the human condition.As if all the wholesome ingredients that we prefer were replaced with vile opposites.I must confess that I share the view point of the poem some times.VEry clever piece.I like the internal rhymes.Excellent
May 17th, 2026 05:47
David Wakeling said:
This is a very interesting view of the human condition.As if all the wholesome ingredients that we prefer were replaced with vile opposites.I must confess that I share the view point of the poem some times.VEry clever piece.I like the internal rhymes.Excellent
May 17th, 2026 05:47
Night\'s bedroom
Goldfinch60 said:
But those shade can be pulled soren and the light will come back.
Andy
May 17th, 2026 01:21
Goldfinch60 said:
But those shade can be pulled soren and the light will come back.
Andy
May 17th, 2026 01:21
Pools
NafisaSB said:
beautifully expressed - once you stir, a lot of both wanted and unwanted memories pop up, to be replaced later by new ones..
May 16th, 2026 23:47
NafisaSB said:
beautifully expressed - once you stir, a lot of both wanted and unwanted memories pop up, to be replaced later by new ones..
May 16th, 2026 23:47
Night\'s bedroom
Soman Ragavan said:
\"Grass cries...\" This must be out of joy. We will notice how resilient grass is. Even after prolonged drought, when all grass has disappeared, new grass will sprout up again. That is a wonder. It played dead but arose again from its ashes...
May 16th, 2026 20:31
Soman Ragavan said:
\"Grass cries...\" This must be out of joy. We will notice how resilient grass is. Even after prolonged drought, when all grass has disappeared, new grass will sprout up again. That is a wonder. It played dead but arose again from its ashes...
May 16th, 2026 20:31
Night\'s bedroom
Kevin Hulme said:
Even a Rainy day has some beauty in it . Especially the sound of Rain on the Trees, and the misty fields.
Liked it.
May 16th, 2026 18:31
Kevin Hulme said:
Even a Rainy day has some beauty in it . Especially the sound of Rain on the Trees, and the misty fields.
Liked it.
May 16th, 2026 18:31
Night\'s bedroom
mylastwrites said:
Beautiful imagery with your word palette. A wonderful write. Thanks for sharing.
May 16th, 2026 14:44
mylastwrites said:
Beautiful imagery with your word palette. A wonderful write. Thanks for sharing.
May 16th, 2026 14:44
Night\'s bedroom
Marek said:
I really enjoyed reading this one, Soren. It presented me with clear imagery from the beginning and it also spoke to me. I like nature poetry and this one puts a grotesque ending to what might have been a beautiful sunny day (that you maybe missed, according to your earlier comment). Thank you for putting it in words, and nice work putting it in my minds eye.
May 16th, 2026 13:57
Marek said:
I really enjoyed reading this one, Soren. It presented me with clear imagery from the beginning and it also spoke to me. I like nature poetry and this one puts a grotesque ending to what might have been a beautiful sunny day (that you maybe missed, according to your earlier comment). Thank you for putting it in words, and nice work putting it in my minds eye.
May 16th, 2026 13:57
Night\'s bedroom
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this reads like a rain-soaked elegy for the fading day. Mist, blurred hills, muffled birdsong, muddy pools, and dimming light all gather into a richly textured atmosphere of quiet natural sorrow. Wonderfully written, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 16th, 2026 09:19
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this reads like a rain-soaked elegy for the fading day. Mist, blurred hills, muffled birdsong, muddy pools, and dimming light all gather into a richly textured atmosphere of quiet natural sorrow. Wonderfully written, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 16th, 2026 09:19
Night\'s bedroom
Neville said:
For some reason or reasons, I just couldn\'t stop the smile upon my reading - Stillness of breath in day\'s death as sky pulls down the shades .. excellent .. Neville
May 16th, 2026 08:39
Neville said:
For some reason or reasons, I just couldn\'t stop the smile upon my reading - Stillness of breath in day\'s death as sky pulls down the shades .. excellent .. Neville
May 16th, 2026 08:39
Night\'s bedroom
Friendship said:
Lovely write. Your poem captures the transition from day to night. I like how you illustrate the melancholic beauty of nature as daylight fades and darkness envelops the landscape. It evokes feelings of sadness and introspection, emphasizing the emotional depth of this quiet time.
May 16th, 2026 07:46
Friendship said:
Lovely write. Your poem captures the transition from day to night. I like how you illustrate the melancholic beauty of nature as daylight fades and darkness envelops the landscape. It evokes feelings of sadness and introspection, emphasizing the emotional depth of this quiet time.
May 16th, 2026 07:46
Night\'s bedroom
David Wakeling said:
Some beautiful yet ominous images here.I like the use of adjectives to strengthen the vision.A well constructed view that the storm is coming
May 16th, 2026 07:12
David Wakeling said:
Some beautiful yet ominous images here.I like the use of adjectives to strengthen the vision.A well constructed view that the storm is coming
May 16th, 2026 07:12
Night\'s bedroom
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Most descriptive write my friend, much enjoyed
May 16th, 2026 04:09
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Most descriptive write my friend, much enjoyed
May 16th, 2026 04:09
Unrepented
Neville said:
It\'s a jungle out there & despite being surrounded by both internal & external conflict & constraining & compelling forces, I for one have thus far survived .. but it isn\'t easy, is it .. thanks so much for the ride .. sorenbarrett .. I now plan on cancelling my next safari in favour of spending some quality time deep in my own bunker .. Neville 😎⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐👍
May 16th, 2026 03:07
Neville said:
It\'s a jungle out there & despite being surrounded by both internal & external conflict & constraining & compelling forces, I for one have thus far survived .. but it isn\'t easy, is it .. thanks so much for the ride .. sorenbarrett .. I now plan on cancelling my next safari in favour of spending some quality time deep in my own bunker .. Neville 😎⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐👍
May 16th, 2026 03:07
Unrepented
Kevin Hulme said:
Sometimes we are Raging against the Storm, trying to be heard. Good Write.
May 15th, 2026 18:31
Kevin Hulme said:
Sometimes we are Raging against the Storm, trying to be heard. Good Write.
May 15th, 2026 18:31
Unrepented
Lorenz said:
I am wary of those white doves of peace who always manage to look spotless...
May 15th, 2026 14:31
Lorenz said:
I am wary of those white doves of peace who always manage to look spotless...
May 15th, 2026 14:31
Unrepented
Friendship said:
Your poem explores themes of internal conflict and moral struggle, specifically the tension between the desire for peace and the realities of a violent world. The feelings of guilt and complicity, as you acknowledge your own selfishness and inaction in the face of injustice.
May 15th, 2026 13:36
Friendship said:
Your poem explores themes of internal conflict and moral struggle, specifically the tension between the desire for peace and the realities of a violent world. The feelings of guilt and complicity, as you acknowledge your own selfishness and inaction in the face of injustice.
May 15th, 2026 13:36
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