Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Traitor
David Wakeling said:
An interesting essay on nature vs nuture and destiny.Made me think about betrayal
August 26th, 2026 06:26
David Wakeling said:
An interesting essay on nature vs nuture and destiny.Made me think about betrayal
August 26th, 2026 06:26
Traitor
David Wakeling said:
An interesting piece that raises the question of nature vs nuture,Fascinating
August 26th, 2026 06:24
David Wakeling said:
An interesting piece that raises the question of nature vs nuture,Fascinating
August 26th, 2026 06:24
Right off the shelf
cully45 said:
Short but to the point liked it a lot. Regards Owen
August 26th, 2026 05:09
cully45 said:
Short but to the point liked it a lot. Regards Owen
August 26th, 2026 05:09
Traitor
Teddy.15 said:
lol I did have a chuckle 🤭 wonderful dear sorrenbarret timeless and most amusing. 🌹
August 26th, 2026 03:26
Teddy.15 said:
lol I did have a chuckle 🤭 wonderful dear sorrenbarret timeless and most amusing. 🌹
August 26th, 2026 03:26
Closed door
Kevin Hulme said:
Bit of a lonely Ache in this . And Sad .
\'Your Name remains on your Door\' stands out for me.
Good Write.
August 25th, 2026 18:57
Kevin Hulme said:
Bit of a lonely Ache in this . And Sad .
\'Your Name remains on your Door\' stands out for me.
Good Write.
August 25th, 2026 18:57
Closed door
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is quietly devastating. The hope of reunion slowly gives way to permanent absence...and those abandoned signs of care leave everything suspended around someone who cannot return. I know that helpless ache all too well. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 25th, 2026 18:52
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is quietly devastating. The hope of reunion slowly gives way to permanent absence...and those abandoned signs of care leave everything suspended around someone who cannot return. I know that helpless ache all too well. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 25th, 2026 18:52
Closed door
soheil khodaparasti said:
A deeply haunting poem about absence, longing, and grief. The final line is especially poignant, leaving a lasting sense of loneliness and heartbreak.
August 25th, 2026 12:03
soheil khodaparasti said:
A deeply haunting poem about absence, longing, and grief. The final line is especially poignant, leaving a lasting sense of loneliness and heartbreak.
August 25th, 2026 12:03
Closed door
Lorenz said:
Everything is conveyed through a palpable mystery...
August 25th, 2026 11:30
Lorenz said:
Everything is conveyed through a palpable mystery...
August 25th, 2026 11:30
Closed door
orchidee said:
But you only saw me yesterday! lol.
Boohoo! When one door closes for me, they say \'Don\'t worry; another door will soon slam in your face!\' lol.
Can be embarrassing - I called at someone\'s home after many years. New owners said \'Oh, they died 5 years ago\'.
August 25th, 2026 10:33
orchidee said:
But you only saw me yesterday! lol.
Boohoo! When one door closes for me, they say \'Don\'t worry; another door will soon slam in your face!\' lol.
Can be embarrassing - I called at someone\'s home after many years. New owners said \'Oh, they died 5 years ago\'.
August 25th, 2026 10:33
Forgotten
cully45 said:
Thanks Soren your comments always appreciated regards Owen
August 25th, 2026 09:12
cully45 said:
Thanks Soren your comments always appreciated regards Owen
August 25th, 2026 09:12
Closed door
arqios said:
Unsent flowers have the same “shelf life” as the unjilted ones. And yet that failure to launch is testified to by their colour and fragrance. 💐🥀🕊️🙏🏻
August 25th, 2026 07:21
arqios said:
Unsent flowers have the same “shelf life” as the unjilted ones. And yet that failure to launch is testified to by their colour and fragrance. 💐🥀🕊️🙏🏻
August 25th, 2026 07:21
Closed door
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a damn lonely ache in this, especially that candle still burning while the person is gone. “Your flowers wilted / A grieving visitor jilted” leaves us standing right there on the doorstep with the speaker, with nowhere to go.
August 25th, 2026 06:55
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a damn lonely ache in this, especially that candle still burning while the person is gone. “Your flowers wilted / A grieving visitor jilted” leaves us standing right there on the doorstep with the speaker, with nowhere to go.
August 25th, 2026 06:55
Closed door
David Wakeling said:
Oh dear a sad meeting that never happened.So well written.Excellent emotional journey
August 25th, 2026 05:38
David Wakeling said:
Oh dear a sad meeting that never happened.So well written.Excellent emotional journey
August 25th, 2026 05:38
You will be offended
delusions said:
How fun! Really neat idea, my friend. Like it a lot! A fave.
August 25th, 2026 04:41
delusions said:
How fun! Really neat idea, my friend. Like it a lot! A fave.
August 25th, 2026 04:41
Closed door
delusions said:
Grief waiting at a door that no longer belongs to the living. Nicely written, my friend.
August 25th, 2026 03:35
delusions said:
Grief waiting at a door that no longer belongs to the living. Nicely written, my friend.
August 25th, 2026 03:35
You will be offended
Fränz Müller said:
You had me at shaved ass of a cat!
This sounds like roll call at my high school reunion.
August 24th, 2026 21:01
Fränz Müller said:
You had me at shaved ass of a cat!
This sounds like roll call at my high school reunion.
August 24th, 2026 21:01
You will be offended
mylastwrites said:
The incredible power of words. Probably caused more hurts than actual physical assaults. Where we live lets you write those words without repercussions. Some things just have to be said. I like how you ended it.
August 24th, 2026 12:42
mylastwrites said:
The incredible power of words. Probably caused more hurts than actual physical assaults. Where we live lets you write those words without repercussions. Some things just have to be said. I like how you ended it.
August 24th, 2026 12:42
You will be offended
orchidee said:
I didn\'t realise I had upset ya, for ya to spout this tirade at me! lol.
Or - very naughty of me - Ahhh, a poem to recite to KP every day! lol. Noooo, I mustn\'t be that dreadful.
August 24th, 2026 08:48
orchidee said:
I didn\'t realise I had upset ya, for ya to spout this tirade at me! lol.
Or - very naughty of me - Ahhh, a poem to recite to KP every day! lol. Noooo, I mustn\'t be that dreadful.
August 24th, 2026 08:48
You will be offended
Kevin Hulme said:
Ever thought of Writing Greeting Cards?
Nurse the Smelling Salts please.
A powerful Write. ✍️👍
August 24th, 2026 08:25
Kevin Hulme said:
Ever thought of Writing Greeting Cards?
Nurse the Smelling Salts please.
A powerful Write. ✍️👍
August 24th, 2026 08:25
You will be offended
Doggerel Dave said:
Yeh - some days are like that, Soren...
August 24th, 2026 08:18
Doggerel Dave said:
Yeh - some days are like that, Soren...
August 24th, 2026 08:18
You will be offended
arqios said:
Labels are such that the adhesive either sticks too long or won’t stick at all. 🕊️🙏🏻
August 24th, 2026 08:09
arqios said:
Labels are such that the adhesive either sticks too long or won’t stick at all. 🕊️🙏🏻
August 24th, 2026 08:09
You will be offended
Jabberwocky said:
I wasn\'t offended, I must be some kind of poet.
You came close with a few though. I\'m not going to tell you which ones!
August 24th, 2026 08:08
Jabberwocky said:
I wasn\'t offended, I must be some kind of poet.
You came close with a few though. I\'m not going to tell you which ones!
August 24th, 2026 08:08
You will be offended
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a relentless and cleverly constructed piece, Soren. The accumulated ugliness reveals how language turns every imaginable difference into ammunition...and then the closing joke catches poets standing among the accused. Brutal, funny, and effective, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 24th, 2026 08:08
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a relentless and cleverly constructed piece, Soren. The accumulated ugliness reveals how language turns every imaginable difference into ammunition...and then the closing joke catches poets standing among the accused. Brutal, funny, and effective, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 24th, 2026 08:08
You will be offended
Friendship said:
😂I think it\'s important to tell us how you feel this morning. I was quite impressed with the words that were never expressed by others before me. I learned a lot this morning at my old age; impressive, I must say.😂Great job.
August 24th, 2026 07:59
Friendship said:
😂I think it\'s important to tell us how you feel this morning. I was quite impressed with the words that were never expressed by others before me. I learned a lot this morning at my old age; impressive, I must say.😂Great job.
August 24th, 2026 07:59
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