Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
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Friendship said:
Nicely written. Soren Barrett, it took me a while to understand your poem. Your poem deals with the moments of stillness in life, particularly the space between actions, thoughts, and emotions. It explores the idea that these moments of indecision can lead to growth or change, symbolized by the metaphor of a frog becoming a prince, which alludes to transformation and the choices that lead to it.
October 22nd, 2026 09:52
Friendship said:
Nicely written. Soren Barrett, it took me a while to understand your poem. Your poem deals with the moments of stillness in life, particularly the space between actions, thoughts, and emotions. It explores the idea that these moments of indecision can lead to growth or change, symbolized by the metaphor of a frog becoming a prince, which alludes to transformation and the choices that lead to it.
October 22nd, 2026 09:52
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Kevin Hulme said:
A good Write. Many times we have become the Frog or the Prince. As far as the Frog is concerned it\'s : If only I did this. Or did that.
That Second before a decision is made is often Examined later on. A fave.
October 22nd, 2026 07:56
Kevin Hulme said:
A good Write. Many times we have become the Frog or the Prince. As far as the Frog is concerned it\'s : If only I did this. Or did that.
That Second before a decision is made is often Examined later on. A fave.
October 22nd, 2026 07:56
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Lorenz said:
\'\'A fulcrum of balance between past and future\'\' .
What a wonderful statement ! I recognize something of my own words in it !
October 22nd, 2026 07:14
Lorenz said:
\'\'A fulcrum of balance between past and future\'\' .
What a wonderful statement ! I recognize something of my own words in it !
October 22nd, 2026 07:14
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nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
a thoughtful entertaining piece my friend
October 22nd, 2026 04:10
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
a thoughtful entertaining piece my friend
October 22nd, 2026 04:10
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Teddy.15 said:
As I adore frogs I\'d say stay as one, who needs a prince? 🐸 Wonderful reflection for the reader. 🌹
October 22nd, 2026 03:48
Teddy.15 said:
As I adore frogs I\'d say stay as one, who needs a prince? 🐸 Wonderful reflection for the reader. 🌹
October 22nd, 2026 03:48
Bones
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, the thought of someone disturbing a child\'s grave is absolutely sickening. Some things ought to be sacred regardless of who is buried there. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 21st, 2026 22:21
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, the thought of someone disturbing a child\'s grave is absolutely sickening. Some things ought to be sacred regardless of who is buried there. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 21st, 2026 22:21
Bones
Kevin Hulme said:
Interesting Poem and Background Information.
A good Write.
October 21st, 2026 18:31
Kevin Hulme said:
Interesting Poem and Background Information.
A good Write.
October 21st, 2026 18:31
Black Widow
Jabberwocky said:
I think I married her, she didn\'t have all the legs but the two she had were enough of a trap, that and the red hair.
Try not to get eaten my friend. It hurts and what\'s spat out is a mess!
October 21st, 2026 15:47
Jabberwocky said:
I think I married her, she didn\'t have all the legs but the two she had were enough of a trap, that and the red hair.
Try not to get eaten my friend. It hurts and what\'s spat out is a mess!
October 21st, 2026 15:47
Bones
Gelyn said:
Sorenbarrett,
Very well penned.. It\'s like you brought your readers to the place...
Gel
October 21st, 2026 13:13
Gelyn said:
Sorenbarrett,
Very well penned.. It\'s like you brought your readers to the place...
Gel
October 21st, 2026 13:13
Bones
Friendship said:
Enjoy your writing. Your poem reflects on the themes of love, hate, memory, and the haunting presence of the past.
October 21st, 2026 07:54
Friendship said:
Enjoy your writing. Your poem reflects on the themes of love, hate, memory, and the haunting presence of the past.
October 21st, 2026 07:54
Bones
Paul Bell said:
The big fight live. God v Satan, and a knockout for God wins the day.
Religion, the word always portrays love, but for some reason, a lot of people always die around it.
Not a lot has changed it seems.
October 21st, 2026 07:53
Paul Bell said:
The big fight live. God v Satan, and a knockout for God wins the day.
Religion, the word always portrays love, but for some reason, a lot of people always die around it.
Not a lot has changed it seems.
October 21st, 2026 07:53
Pussy
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write soren which shows that the strong in nature can win but is it right?
Andy
October 21st, 2026 01:11
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write soren which shows that the strong in nature can win but is it right?
Andy
October 21st, 2026 01:11
Pussy
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Damn, Soren! Nature can be downright brutal, can\'t it? Certainly not the Disney version of the animal kingdom! LOL! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 20th, 2026 16:00
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Damn, Soren! Nature can be downright brutal, can\'t it? Certainly not the Disney version of the animal kingdom! LOL! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 20th, 2026 16:00
Pussy
Teddy.15 said:
😺 meow lol 🤣 sorrenbarret did your mother never tell you it was rude to use the word pussy 😂 this is like porno for cats!
October 20th, 2026 10:36
Teddy.15 said:
😺 meow lol 🤣 sorrenbarret did your mother never tell you it was rude to use the word pussy 😂 this is like porno for cats!
October 20th, 2026 10:36
Pussy
Kevin Hulme said:
There\'s times when I hear a Cat Squalling in the Night. And it\'s not Sounding like \'Memory\' either.
This Poem could also relate- Sadly - to Human Behaviour.
Good Write.
October 20th, 2026 09:42
Kevin Hulme said:
There\'s times when I hear a Cat Squalling in the Night. And it\'s not Sounding like \'Memory\' either.
This Poem could also relate- Sadly - to Human Behaviour.
Good Write.
October 20th, 2026 09:42
Pussy
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Soren,
The purring pussycat we\'ve come to know and love, but when it comes to mating, the claws are out, there\'s no romance here, brutal and unforgiving. A pet that\'s wild at heart in another fine poem from your wonderful insight into the ways of nature.
Wishing you much happiness, my friend,
Tony.
October 20th, 2026 09:33
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Soren,
The purring pussycat we\'ve come to know and love, but when it comes to mating, the claws are out, there\'s no romance here, brutal and unforgiving. A pet that\'s wild at heart in another fine poem from your wonderful insight into the ways of nature.
Wishing you much happiness, my friend,
Tony.
October 20th, 2026 09:33
Cheese
apete90 said:
I especially liked \"a little taste of constipated maternal heaven\" it summarizes or gets to a bottom line and the imagery in this gives a vivid familiarity.
October 20th, 2026 08:07
apete90 said:
I especially liked \"a little taste of constipated maternal heaven\" it summarizes or gets to a bottom line and the imagery in this gives a vivid familiarity.
October 20th, 2026 08:07
Pussy
Friendship said:
Well written. The poem\'s language is vivid and evocative, with a clear emphasis on the physical and instinctual aspects of mating. Your phrase “nature\'s romance is a rape” serves as a powerful metaphor for the often brutal realities of reproduction in the animal kingdom.
October 20th, 2026 07:49
Friendship said:
Well written. The poem\'s language is vivid and evocative, with a clear emphasis on the physical and instinctual aspects of mating. Your phrase “nature\'s romance is a rape” serves as a powerful metaphor for the often brutal realities of reproduction in the animal kingdom.
October 20th, 2026 07:49
Pussy
Thomas W Case said:
Brilliant. There’s a deliberately unsettling collision here between the language of seduction and the harsh mechanics of animal instinct, with the poem turning a familiar mating call into something much darker by confronting the difference between biological drive and genuine consent. The keeper is “nature\'s romance is a rape,” because that final line strips away the romantic language that came before it, forcing the reader to face the disturbing gap between how nature is often described and what the vulnerable creature may actually endure. One of my cats is in heat now. She dives me crazy. lol
October 20th, 2026 06:26
Thomas W Case said:
Brilliant. There’s a deliberately unsettling collision here between the language of seduction and the harsh mechanics of animal instinct, with the poem turning a familiar mating call into something much darker by confronting the difference between biological drive and genuine consent. The keeper is “nature\'s romance is a rape,” because that final line strips away the romantic language that came before it, forcing the reader to face the disturbing gap between how nature is often described and what the vulnerable creature may actually endure. One of my cats is in heat now. She dives me crazy. lol
October 20th, 2026 06:26
Pussy
Paul Bell said:
Nature dictates the strong get the spoils, and this seems to be excepted by the females.
Though when you see two animals practically kill themselves to mate with a female, you might be thinking, that female sure has a lot of power.
October 20th, 2026 05:46
Paul Bell said:
Nature dictates the strong get the spoils, and this seems to be excepted by the females.
Though when you see two animals practically kill themselves to mate with a female, you might be thinking, that female sure has a lot of power.
October 20th, 2026 05:46
Pussy
orchidee said:
Good write SB. Aww, why they say to me: \'Are you singing or is that two cats fighting?\' lol.
October 20th, 2026 05:22
orchidee said:
Good write SB. Aww, why they say to me: \'Are you singing or is that two cats fighting?\' lol.
October 20th, 2026 05:22
Black Widow
Tristan Robert Lange said:
SCARLETT JOHANSSON!!! Sorry, Soren, that\'s literally where my brain went the moment I saw your title! LOL! And frankly, I wasn\'t disappointed by the mental image OR the poem! Though I\'m suddenly feeling considerably less adventurous about dating in the arachnid kingdom! 🤣🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 19th, 2026 23:02
Tristan Robert Lange said:
SCARLETT JOHANSSON!!! Sorry, Soren, that\'s literally where my brain went the moment I saw your title! LOL! And frankly, I wasn\'t disappointed by the mental image OR the poem! Though I\'m suddenly feeling considerably less adventurous about dating in the arachnid kingdom! 🤣🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 19th, 2026 23:02
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