Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Candy unwrapped
Kevin Hulme said:
Quite erotic then the Cold Shower half way through.
Enjoyed.
February 21st, 2026 21:17
Kevin Hulme said:
Quite erotic then the Cold Shower half way through.
Enjoyed.
February 21st, 2026 21:17
Candy unwrapped
Doggerel Dave said:
Your friend must be the author of one of the oldest sickest jokes in a whole library of sick jokes, Soren. Good to know you can identify him.
February 21st, 2026 19:47
Doggerel Dave said:
Your friend must be the author of one of the oldest sickest jokes in a whole library of sick jokes, Soren. Good to know you can identify him.
February 21st, 2026 19:47
Candy unwrapped
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this blends caricature, caution, and grotesque comedy into one escalating narrative. You lean fully into the absurd to expose shallow assumptions. It’s provocative, irreverent, and intentionally over-the-top. A bold, theatrical piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 21st, 2026 10:41
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this blends caricature, caution, and grotesque comedy into one escalating narrative. You lean fully into the absurd to expose shallow assumptions. It’s provocative, irreverent, and intentionally over-the-top. A bold, theatrical piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 21st, 2026 10:41
Did you know it\'s all true
Samprikta Paul said:
I love how the rhythm flows throughout the poem.
February 21st, 2026 09:45
Samprikta Paul said:
I love how the rhythm flows throughout the poem.
February 21st, 2026 09:45
Candy unwrapped
Paul Bell said:
This is why you shouldn\'t drink more than ten pints at a time, cos everything looks great in stupor.
In saying that, this is why you go back to the pub the next day and drink another ten pints to forget what the hell you woke up to.
February 21st, 2026 06:33
Paul Bell said:
This is why you shouldn\'t drink more than ten pints at a time, cos everything looks great in stupor.
In saying that, this is why you go back to the pub the next day and drink another ten pints to forget what the hell you woke up to.
February 21st, 2026 06:33
Candy unwrapped
Lorenz said:
Disturbing story dude...This image of teeth in a glass of water s a total love killer ...
February 21st, 2026 05:16
Lorenz said:
Disturbing story dude...This image of teeth in a glass of water s a total love killer ...
February 21st, 2026 05:16
Candy unwrapped
David Wakeling said:
This is an amazing write.I love the rhyme very musical.The story is captivating.It keeps you guessing all along.Beware of that which glitters it is not always gold.Very entertaining.
February 21st, 2026 05:08
David Wakeling said:
This is an amazing write.I love the rhyme very musical.The story is captivating.It keeps you guessing all along.Beware of that which glitters it is not always gold.Very entertaining.
February 21st, 2026 05:08
Butterfly
Salvia.S said:
Your poem masterfully blends striking imagery with deeper themes of transformation and mortality . The language is evocative, like \"sapphire dots on black velvet wings\" and \"painted whispers soar\". It lingers beautifully! Very nicely written. A fave ❤️
February 20th, 2026 21:50
Salvia.S said:
Your poem masterfully blends striking imagery with deeper themes of transformation and mortality . The language is evocative, like \"sapphire dots on black velvet wings\" and \"painted whispers soar\". It lingers beautifully! Very nicely written. A fave ❤️
February 20th, 2026 21:50
Butterfly
Allie561 said:
Wonderfully written Soren. We seem to have both been encaptured by butterflies recently, they’re beautiful insects.
February 20th, 2026 18:59
Allie561 said:
Wonderfully written Soren. We seem to have both been encaptured by butterflies recently, they’re beautiful insects.
February 20th, 2026 18:59
Wonderland becomes Neverland
Paul Bell said:
As the 4-year-old said. Is he in charge of any nuclear buttons, cos he\'s not the sharpest knife in the drawer?
Mind you, ours ain\'t any better, we\'re still extracting him out of Trumps ass.
Despots are running the asylum now, things won\'t be getting any better soon.
February 20th, 2026 13:03
Paul Bell said:
As the 4-year-old said. Is he in charge of any nuclear buttons, cos he\'s not the sharpest knife in the drawer?
Mind you, ours ain\'t any better, we\'re still extracting him out of Trumps ass.
Despots are running the asylum now, things won\'t be getting any better soon.
February 20th, 2026 13:03
Butterfly
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is rich in image and layered in meaning. You weave night sky, metamorphosis, and mortality into something both delicate and unsparing. The beauty never hides the end…it simply flies toward it. A striking, thoughtful piece, dear friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 20th, 2026 11:06
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is rich in image and layered in meaning. You weave night sky, metamorphosis, and mortality into something both delicate and unsparing. The beauty never hides the end…it simply flies toward it. A striking, thoughtful piece, dear friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 20th, 2026 11:06
Butterfly
Friendship said:
nicely written. Your poem revolves around butterflies, metamorphosis, and the themes of life and death. It contemplates the journey from caterpillar to butterfly, symbolizing growth, change, and the fragility of existence.
February 20th, 2026 07:29
Friendship said:
nicely written. Your poem revolves around butterflies, metamorphosis, and the themes of life and death. It contemplates the journey from caterpillar to butterfly, symbolizing growth, change, and the fragility of existence.
February 20th, 2026 07:29
The gardener
Aman 12 said:
character sketch which is felt in words like a portrait.
February 20th, 2026 06:26
Aman 12 said:
character sketch which is felt in words like a portrait.
February 20th, 2026 06:26
Wonderland becomes Neverland
Aman 12 said:
sharp stifling satire.. biting political allegory. there is no chance to breathe here..lots happening
February 20th, 2026 06:23
Aman 12 said:
sharp stifling satire.. biting political allegory. there is no chance to breathe here..lots happening
February 20th, 2026 06:23
Butterfly
Soman Ragavan said:
The beauty of butterflies is stunning. It is amazing how nature can come up with such designs. Even a human mind will struggle to reproduce these. One thing we notice with butterflies is their short life. Within that short time they must reproduce themselves.
February 20th, 2026 05:24
Soman Ragavan said:
The beauty of butterflies is stunning. It is amazing how nature can come up with such designs. Even a human mind will struggle to reproduce these. One thing we notice with butterflies is their short life. Within that short time they must reproduce themselves.
February 20th, 2026 05:24
Butterfly
David Wakeling said:
Butterflies are amazing.This poem is so well constructed.I can hear the cadence in the lines.This would make a marvelous song.Enjoyable read
February 20th, 2026 05:11
David Wakeling said:
Butterflies are amazing.This poem is so well constructed.I can hear the cadence in the lines.This would make a marvelous song.Enjoyable read
February 20th, 2026 05:11
Wonderland becomes Neverland
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful story tales relating to the untrustworthiness of modern governments.
Andy
February 20th, 2026 02:45
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful story tales relating to the untrustworthiness of modern governments.
Andy
February 20th, 2026 02:45
Wonderland becomes Neverland
Doggerel Dave said:
\'Like the fairy tales you report, Soren. The writers are mega rich accumulators of wealth who can make those tales and the characters within move in whichever way they require..
February 19th, 2026 19:59
Doggerel Dave said:
\'Like the fairy tales you report, Soren. The writers are mega rich accumulators of wealth who can make those tales and the characters within move in whichever way they require..
February 19th, 2026 19:59
Wonderland becomes Neverland
Allie561 said:
I can sense your frustration in this poem Soren. I do have to agree it seems our government is crumbling due to certain circumstances. I don’t follow politics too much but I know enough to feel there should be a change. Hopefully it comes soon.
February 19th, 2026 18:07
Allie561 said:
I can sense your frustration in this poem Soren. I do have to agree it seems our government is crumbling due to certain circumstances. I don’t follow politics too much but I know enough to feel there should be a change. Hopefully it comes soon.
February 19th, 2026 18:07
Wonderland becomes Neverland
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren… this is satire turned carnival mirror. The Pied Piper, Bo Peep, the Queen of Hearts… all colliding under that opening indictment. And when you close with “A glass slipper shattered, the mice all scattered with a blunder of the Don’s hand,” the chaos feels even more brilliant. Fierce work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 19th, 2026 14:57
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren… this is satire turned carnival mirror. The Pied Piper, Bo Peep, the Queen of Hearts… all colliding under that opening indictment. And when you close with “A glass slipper shattered, the mice all scattered with a blunder of the Don’s hand,” the chaos feels even more brilliant. Fierce work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 19th, 2026 14:57
Wonderland becomes Neverland
Neville said:
Ah\' I see what you mean .. full of universal truths I\'m sure .. some things just have to be said, don\'t they .. Neville 😎👍
February 19th, 2026 11:14
Neville said:
Ah\' I see what you mean .. full of universal truths I\'m sure .. some things just have to be said, don\'t they .. Neville 😎👍
February 19th, 2026 11:14
Wonderland becomes Neverland
Kevin Hulme said:
I repeat what Mark Twain said : \'Diapers and Politicians must be changed regularly , And for the same reason\'. Well Said.
February 19th, 2026 10:38
Kevin Hulme said:
I repeat what Mark Twain said : \'Diapers and Politicians must be changed regularly , And for the same reason\'. Well Said.
February 19th, 2026 10:38
Wonderland becomes Neverland
Lorenz said:
Is it better to have a loud Donald duck than a demonic Goebbels ? I wonder ...
February 19th, 2026 07:41
Lorenz said:
Is it better to have a loud Donald duck than a demonic Goebbels ? I wonder ...
February 19th, 2026 07:41
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