Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett



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gray0328 said:

separation and purity are partial illusions; existence is communion, exchange, and continual transformation. Some of us are more fussy than others. Well Done Soren

September 23rd, 2026 10:55

Missing pages
orchidee said:

Good write SB. Yes, I don\'t like to write in book in ink. I always use pencil.
Meanwhile, yes, KP was ungrateful. She chucked the book on the fire that I bought her, entitled: \'101 Recipes With Sewage\'. lol.

September 23rd, 2026 09:20

Missing pages
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:

beautifully put my friend

September 23rd, 2026 08:28

Missing pages
arqios said:

Much like our life which is said to be like a book or even there is a book in every one\'s life story. Most wonderful. A definite fave. πŸ™πŸ»πŸ•ŠοΈ

September 23rd, 2026 08:06

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Neville said:



disgusting maybe but interesting and evidently true .. Oh\' and for what its worth, I suspect I have been completely recycled at least twice before .. N πŸ‘

September 23rd, 2026 02:08

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Goldfinch60 said:

We all re-use things in our life soren and in my long life I am still here so all is well.

Andy

September 23rd, 2026 01:06

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Tristan Robert Lange said:

What a poem, Soren. Nothing in life is truly untouched, including us. That is both humbling and slightly disgusting! πŸ˜‚ πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸ™πŸ•―οΈπŸ¦β€β¬›

September 22nd, 2026 22:08

Corrosion
Joseph M Marion said:

I love the way you wrote this it draws a three-dimensional picture in my head awesome

September 22nd, 2026 13:20

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Syd said:

Hi Sorenbarret,

I love the part about the bees. I\'ve never really thought of air the same but it is true, especially when in crowded room. Sneezes and diseases.

A well written enjoyable read.

- Syd πŸ„

September 22nd, 2026 12:51

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Kevin Hulme said:

Just about everything is Recycled or used before. As for germs : I always use Wipes, but you can\'t really avoid them. Unless you want to end-up like Howard Hughes.
You said it so well here .


September 22nd, 2026 12:17

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orchidee said:

Ahh, an ideal place for KP to stay on her holidays! heehee. I\'m horrible to here. lol.

September 22nd, 2026 09:06

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Lorenz said:

Please !
Be properly recycled before crossing the threshold of the afterlife !

September 22nd, 2026 08:55

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nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:

total recycled life

September 22nd, 2026 08:13

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Thomas W Case said:

There’s a damn gleeful disgust running through this, taking the ordinary fact of shared human life and pushing it into increasingly filthy, funny territory until you can’t look at β€œclean” the same way again. The rhyme and relentless accumulation are the engine, and that final β€œused spouse” lands like the punchline to the whole wonderfully gross argument.

September 22nd, 2026 07:22

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arqios said:

Second hand air is horrible, it’s humid and oftentimes moist and also could be texture and scent laden.

September 22nd, 2026 07:07

Too late
NafisaSB said:

Beautiful way of saying- too little done too late, or overlooked or ignored πŸ˜”

September 22nd, 2026 06:01

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Doggerel Dave said:

Wot\'s it all about, mate - Complaint? Everything recycles - even me, who might well include parts of a once distant star...

September 22nd, 2026 04:26

Down hill
Goldfinch60 said:

That increase in power is shown so well in your words soren.

Andy

September 22nd, 2026 00:53

Too late
NafisaSB said:

Happens to the best of us - well said

September 21st, 2026 22:38

Down hill
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Soren, I felt this in my stomach. By the end, I was bracing for impact. Powerful, my friend! πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸ™πŸ•―οΈπŸ¦β€β¬›

September 21st, 2026 20:13

Down hill
Friendship said:

nice write

September 21st, 2026 09:35

Down hill
orchidee said:

Good write SB.

September 21st, 2026 09:29

Down hill
Kevin Hulme said:

A lot of Comments here associate this Poem with Cars , Bikes . On Reading my first thought was \'Falling in Love\'. Says a lot about a Person. Other People: Other Interpretations.
Good Write.

September 21st, 2026 06:17

Down hill
arqios said:

A veritable feast for the eyes, the mind and heart. Good stuff Soren! πŸ™πŸ»πŸ•ŠοΈ

September 21st, 2026 05:51

Down hill
Paul Bell said:

This is why I drive a car, motorbikes always come off second best.
Mind you, now we have bicycles flying by at a rate of knots.


September 21st, 2026 04:44

Down hill
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:

Finely spoken my friend, horse power building

September 21st, 2026 03:37

Storm brewing
NafisaSB said:

sounds very much like the rains we have here..thankfully the rainy season is ending though, and the warm days are making their way back

September 21st, 2026 01:53

Storm brewing
Goldfinch60 said:

Those drops may fall soren but skin is waterproof.

Andy

September 21st, 2026 01:47

Storm brewing
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Now I want a dark porch, a chair, and a hard rain, Soren. Loved this one. πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸ™πŸ•―οΈπŸ¦β€β¬›

September 20th, 2026 17:50

Storm brewing
Kevin Hulme said:

Yes there\'s Something about the Wind picking-up and the Black Clouds looming.
Fine discriptive write.

September 20th, 2026 10:31

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