Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
To be or not to bee
Iam1ItchyLizzard said:
nice soumds good and its fun to read
April 6th, 2026 05:36
Iam1ItchyLizzard said:
nice soumds good and its fun to read
April 6th, 2026 05:36
A poet\'s journey
Iam1ItchyLizzard said:
i really like this one very real stuff
April 6th, 2026 05:30
Iam1ItchyLizzard said:
i really like this one very real stuff
April 6th, 2026 05:30
Wasps
Abdullah123 said:
Amazing write, echoing beyond just a wasp’s hive… I can almost hear their grievous buzzz. Bravo
April 6th, 2026 04:29
Abdullah123 said:
Amazing write, echoing beyond just a wasp’s hive… I can almost hear their grievous buzzz. Bravo
April 6th, 2026 04:29
Sensations
Neville said:
So much blood .. reads like a crime scene .. and in a sense, I suppose it is really .. Neville
April 6th, 2026 01:55
Neville said:
So much blood .. reads like a crime scene .. and in a sense, I suppose it is really .. Neville
April 6th, 2026 01:55
Sensations
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write soren leading to all kinds of thoughts.
Andy
April 6th, 2026 01:12
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write soren leading to all kinds of thoughts.
Andy
April 6th, 2026 01:12
White, blue, black
NafisaSB said:
beautiful and descriptive - one can definitely visualize what is being portrayed
April 6th, 2026 01:03
NafisaSB said:
beautiful and descriptive - one can definitely visualize what is being portrayed
April 6th, 2026 01:03
Another day
NafisaSB said:
very well portrayed - know the feeling - after giving a party - though i don\'t drink am as exhausted and thirsting for the elusive sleep...
April 6th, 2026 00:59
NafisaSB said:
very well portrayed - know the feeling - after giving a party - though i don\'t drink am as exhausted and thirsting for the elusive sleep...
April 6th, 2026 00:59
Another day
RSM0812 said:
Groke had meaning and your poem brings that meaning back in gracious rhyme.
April 5th, 2026 19:43
RSM0812 said:
Groke had meaning and your poem brings that meaning back in gracious rhyme.
April 5th, 2026 19:43
Sensations
Kevin Hulme said:
Reminds me of my Working days with the Steel and the Forge.
April 5th, 2026 19:21
Kevin Hulme said:
Reminds me of my Working days with the Steel and the Forge.
April 5th, 2026 19:21
Sensations
Allie561 said:
Soren I could simply feel this on another level. The way you describe it as not only being able to feel it but to taste it as well was such a strong image. This was a great poem.
April 5th, 2026 16:07
Allie561 said:
Soren I could simply feel this on another level. The way you describe it as not only being able to feel it but to taste it as well was such a strong image. This was a great poem.
April 5th, 2026 16:07
Sensations
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, there’s a raw, sensory immersion here…taste, smell, touch, all layered into something heavy and immediate. That rust line anchors it, and everything that follows builds from there into something you don’t just read, you feel. It lingers. Well done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 5th, 2026 10:37
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, there’s a raw, sensory immersion here…taste, smell, touch, all layered into something heavy and immediate. That rust line anchors it, and everything that follows builds from there into something you don’t just read, you feel. It lingers. Well done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 5th, 2026 10:37
Sensations
Salvia.S said:
Your poem is gritty and intense 😊, painting a stark picture with vivid sensory details. Very well written!!!!
April 5th, 2026 09:05
Salvia.S said:
Your poem is gritty and intense 😊, painting a stark picture with vivid sensory details. Very well written!!!!
April 5th, 2026 09:05
Sensations
arqios said:
Blood seems to traverse the elements with equal presence. 🩸 🙏🏻🕊
April 5th, 2026 07:51
arqios said:
Blood seems to traverse the elements with equal presence. 🩸 🙏🏻🕊
April 5th, 2026 07:51
Sensations
Lorenz said:
It hangs in the air like an oppressing industrial scent of laborious dawns...
April 5th, 2026 05:42
Lorenz said:
It hangs in the air like an oppressing industrial scent of laborious dawns...
April 5th, 2026 05:42
Sensations
Teddy.15 said:
This reminds me of something hidden in a piece of wood in st Peters Square Rome. 🌹
April 5th, 2026 04:48
Teddy.15 said:
This reminds me of something hidden in a piece of wood in st Peters Square Rome. 🌹
April 5th, 2026 04:48
Sensations
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
good write my friend, much enjoyed
April 5th, 2026 04:23
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
good write my friend, much enjoyed
April 5th, 2026 04:23
Sensations
Ellen Marsell said:
It\'s strangely beautiful. The imagery is intense and tactile.
April 5th, 2026 04:08
Ellen Marsell said:
It\'s strangely beautiful. The imagery is intense and tactile.
April 5th, 2026 04:08
Another day
Goldfinch60 said:
You obviously enjoyed the party soren but the morning after can be hard.
Andy
April 5th, 2026 01:13
Goldfinch60 said:
You obviously enjoyed the party soren but the morning after can be hard.
Andy
April 5th, 2026 01:13
Another day
Kevin Hulme said:
And then there\'s the Revolting Bed.
Well Written.
April 4th, 2026 18:48
Kevin Hulme said:
And then there\'s the Revolting Bed.
Well Written.
April 4th, 2026 18:48
Another day
cellinic said:
Indeed this is something very special and substantial) Best wishes, my like
April 4th, 2026 13:56
cellinic said:
Indeed this is something very special and substantial) Best wishes, my like
April 4th, 2026 13:56
Another day
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, I’ve felt that kind of morning…the weight of everything after the moment has passed. There’s a restless edge here that feels familiar, like sleep is just out of reach. Powerful write, my friend. Have a great weekend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 4th, 2026 13:07
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, I’ve felt that kind of morning…the weight of everything after the moment has passed. There’s a restless edge here that feels familiar, like sleep is just out of reach. Powerful write, my friend. Have a great weekend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 4th, 2026 13:07
Another day
MendedFences27 said:
Sometimes the morning after isn\'t worth the night before. Best to just sip the whiskey. The afterparty is always hard labor. - Phil A.
April 4th, 2026 09:53
MendedFences27 said:
Sometimes the morning after isn\'t worth the night before. Best to just sip the whiskey. The afterparty is always hard labor. - Phil A.
April 4th, 2026 09:53
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