Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
The chase
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, wow…this one runs on pure sound and momentum, my friend. The rhyme and internal rhythm feel almost breathless…like the chase itself never slows long enough to think. There’s something primal and unsettling woven through the whole thing. Powerful write and a fave for the sound and momentum of it. Just wow. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 25th, 2026 15:30
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, wow…this one runs on pure sound and momentum, my friend. The rhyme and internal rhythm feel almost breathless…like the chase itself never slows long enough to think. There’s something primal and unsettling woven through the whole thing. Powerful write and a fave for the sound and momentum of it. Just wow. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 25th, 2026 15:30
The chase
Teddy.15 said:
Forgive my ignorance if they were hares where does the rabbit fur come from? 🤣
May 25th, 2026 13:29
Teddy.15 said:
Forgive my ignorance if they were hares where does the rabbit fur come from? 🤣
May 25th, 2026 13:29
The chase
arqios said:
Never hunted except for food. So that affects me even when by nature hounds do what comes natural for game. Very effective poem. 🕊️🙏
May 25th, 2026 06:20
arqios said:
Never hunted except for food. So that affects me even when by nature hounds do what comes natural for game. Very effective poem. 🕊️🙏
May 25th, 2026 06:20
The chase
David Wakeling said:
A wonderful description of the dogs chasing a hare.An interesting read amigo
May 25th, 2026 05:40
David Wakeling said:
A wonderful description of the dogs chasing a hare.An interesting read amigo
May 25th, 2026 05:40
Cold
Teddy.15 said:
I feel the strong metaphor here that this is the dream like sense of having that special person close even if they are not, it\'s very beautiful dear. sorrenbarret 🌹
May 25th, 2026 00:09
Teddy.15 said:
I feel the strong metaphor here that this is the dream like sense of having that special person close even if they are not, it\'s very beautiful dear. sorrenbarret 🌹
May 25th, 2026 00:09
Thar she blows
mohammad ali said:
Such a beautiful metaphor describing a natural phenomenon at the geographical location of a living place in the face of a woman, perhaps bearing fertility besides a simultaneous disaster!
May 24th, 2026 21:37
mohammad ali said:
Such a beautiful metaphor describing a natural phenomenon at the geographical location of a living place in the face of a woman, perhaps bearing fertility besides a simultaneous disaster!
May 24th, 2026 21:37
Cold
Kevin Hulme said:
Trying to end a Bad relationship? A unique way of expressing it. Good Write.
May 24th, 2026 18:43
Kevin Hulme said:
Trying to end a Bad relationship? A unique way of expressing it. Good Write.
May 24th, 2026 18:43
Unrepented
mohammad ali said:
So beautiful, dear! So beautifully described a deep fact of paradox!
May 24th, 2026 17:36
mohammad ali said:
So beautiful, dear! So beautifully described a deep fact of paradox!
May 24th, 2026 17:36
Cold
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren…there’s a real mastery of atmosphere in this piece. Every image reinforces the emotional climate…frost, wind, snow, steel, static, lightning, winter glare. The cold becomes more than temperature here…it becomes relational, psychological, almost existential. I especially admired how the poem never erupts into melodrama. Instead, it remains restrained and frozen right up until the final retreat: “My emotions I pack, turn my back and retire.” That quiet withdrawal lands harder because of everything held in beforehand. Powerful and haunting work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 24th, 2026 12:17
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren…there’s a real mastery of atmosphere in this piece. Every image reinforces the emotional climate…frost, wind, snow, steel, static, lightning, winter glare. The cold becomes more than temperature here…it becomes relational, psychological, almost existential. I especially admired how the poem never erupts into melodrama. Instead, it remains restrained and frozen right up until the final retreat: “My emotions I pack, turn my back and retire.” That quiet withdrawal lands harder because of everything held in beforehand. Powerful and haunting work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 24th, 2026 12:17
Cold
arqios said:
I was getting both an intimate/personal and a societal reading of this. Very strong expression Soren🙏🕊️
May 24th, 2026 06:52
arqios said:
I was getting both an intimate/personal and a societal reading of this. Very strong expression Soren🙏🕊️
May 24th, 2026 06:52
Cold
David Wakeling said:
This is well constructed and explores the deeper aspects of Cold.Both in the weather anf the world.I found it to be haunting rendition.Great work amigo
May 24th, 2026 05:09
David Wakeling said:
This is well constructed and explores the deeper aspects of Cold.Both in the weather anf the world.I found it to be haunting rendition.Great work amigo
May 24th, 2026 05:09
Ramanujan
Kevin Hulme said:
Googled Ramanujan and Read all about him.
Maths has always left me Cold. . But I admire anyone who can be such a Wizard at Numbers.
A fine tribute.
May 23rd, 2026 18:50
Kevin Hulme said:
Googled Ramanujan and Read all about him.
Maths has always left me Cold. . But I admire anyone who can be such a Wizard at Numbers.
A fine tribute.
May 23rd, 2026 18:50
Ramanujan
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is fascinating. You capture Ramanujan not merely as a mathematician, but almost as a mystic standing at the edge of infinity listening to numbers whisper back. The blend of intellect, obsession, and divinity throughout the poem really pulled me in. Powerful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 23rd, 2026 10:34
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is fascinating. You capture Ramanujan not merely as a mathematician, but almost as a mystic standing at the edge of infinity listening to numbers whisper back. The blend of intellect, obsession, and divinity throughout the poem really pulled me in. Powerful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 23rd, 2026 10:34
Finding one\'s way
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, what a wonderfully immersive piece this is. The imagery keeps tightening around the reader...vines, fog, fading light, all of it slowly swallowing the path ahead. “Earth’s bones” and the nursery imagery especially stayed with me. By the end, it genuinely feels like the forest itself has become a living thing closing in around the lantern glow. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 23rd, 2026 10:06
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, what a wonderfully immersive piece this is. The imagery keeps tightening around the reader...vines, fog, fading light, all of it slowly swallowing the path ahead. “Earth’s bones” and the nursery imagery especially stayed with me. By the end, it genuinely feels like the forest itself has become a living thing closing in around the lantern glow. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 23rd, 2026 10:06
Ramanujan
Friendship said:
Nicely written. Your poem delves into Ramanujan\'s self-taught journey in mathematics, his remarkable contributions, including the infinite series sum that led to surprising results, and his interactions with the British mathematician G.H. Hardy. It also highlights his cultural roots and the mystical quality of his insights into mathematics. This was previously unknown to me, so I had to seek out information.
May 23rd, 2026 09:11
Friendship said:
Nicely written. Your poem delves into Ramanujan\'s self-taught journey in mathematics, his remarkable contributions, including the infinite series sum that led to surprising results, and his interactions with the British mathematician G.H. Hardy. It also highlights his cultural roots and the mystical quality of his insights into mathematics. This was previously unknown to me, so I had to seek out information.
May 23rd, 2026 09:11
Ramanujan
arqios said:
Now if I had just an iota of math whiz then I would be worthy of similar esteem. Excellent tribute, Soren 🙏🕊️
May 23rd, 2026 08:30
arqios said:
Now if I had just an iota of math whiz then I would be worthy of similar esteem. Excellent tribute, Soren 🙏🕊️
May 23rd, 2026 08:30
Road kill
NafisaSB said:
that is the stark truth of life - and you have shown this very well
May 23rd, 2026 07:15
NafisaSB said:
that is the stark truth of life - and you have shown this very well
May 23rd, 2026 07:15
Ramanujan
David Wakeling said:
This is so relatable.I used to be a Maths Teacher and often told my students about Ramanujan.Also they made a wonderful movie.The man who knew infinity.This poem is a great tribute to a great genius.I still think he was treated badly and died too young.Excellent piece.
May 23rd, 2026 03:36
David Wakeling said:
This is so relatable.I used to be a Maths Teacher and often told my students about Ramanujan.Also they made a wonderful movie.The man who knew infinity.This poem is a great tribute to a great genius.I still think he was treated badly and died too young.Excellent piece.
May 23rd, 2026 03:36
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