Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett



Illusive passion
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Wow...so powerful. Soren, \"mortal fingers are not made to cling to a shade\" is the image that really hit me. There is something so human in that struggle...reaching for what was never meant to be grasped. Beautifully done, my friend. πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸ™πŸ•―οΈπŸ¦β€β¬›

June 18th, 2026 20:42

Illusive passion
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Wow...so powerful. Soren, \"mortal fingers are not made to cling to a shade\" is the image that really hit me. There is something so human in that struggle...reaching for what was never meant to be grasped. Beautifully done, my friend. πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸ™πŸ•―οΈπŸ¦β€β¬›

June 18th, 2026 20:42

Illusive passion
Kevin Hulme said:

Sounds like the end of a Love Affair. Best to let it go . Move on. Fine Poem.

June 18th, 2026 19:18

Isis
Syd said:

Beautiful poetry that Sorenbarret πŸ‘πŸ‘

- Syd

June 18th, 2026 14:10

Illusive passion
soheil khodaparasti said:

To hold the unholdable is to borrow sorrow; to let the garden breathe is to borrow bloom.

June 18th, 2026 09:40

Illusive passion
Friendship said:

This poem presents a poignant meditation on the nature of passion, capturing the delicate balance between holding on and letting go.

June 18th, 2026 09:13

Illusive passion
orchidee said:

Good write SB.

June 18th, 2026 09:09

Illusive passion
Paul Bell said:

Man can do many things, but nature can do more.
When the storm hits, no hands will hold it back.
Let the sun shine and I will grow.

June 18th, 2026 07:43

Isis
RSM0812 said:

Your poem is universally read and written. Enjoyed a lot. Emotioned universe how you cry tears of power.

June 18th, 2026 06:51

Isis
RSM0812 said:

Your poem is universally read and written. Enjoyed a lot. Emotioned universe how you cry tears of power.

June 18th, 2026 06:51

Illusive passion
arqios said:

Seems the orbits of today’s posted poems are somewhat on the same constellations πŸŒŒπŸ•ŠοΈπŸ™πŸ»

June 18th, 2026 06:10

Illusive passion
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:

a beautiful message in this piece

June 18th, 2026 04:34

Illusive passion
Teddy.15 said:

It\'s amazing how the simple act of kindness and love can result in such beauty. A wonderful reminder to us all. 🌹

June 18th, 2026 04:28

Isis
Goldfinch60 said:

May that romance fill the skies forever soren.

Andy

June 18th, 2026 01:20

Isis
Kevin Hulme said:

\'Dreaming mind expands out of reach\'. So true.
Isn\'t Mars the God of War? So Hopefully Venus will sort him out. I liked this. A good Write.

June 17th, 2026 18:43

Decay
JBentley said:

Straight truth!

June 17th, 2026 18:16

Isis
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Soren, what I enjoyed most here is the way the natural world becomes almost mythic. The moon, the sea, the breeze, the stars, Venus, and Mars all play their part in a nocturnal symphony of romance and possibility. The imagery is rich without feeling overworked, and the closing contrast between love and conflict provides a fitting culmination. Beautifully crafted, my friend. πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸ™πŸ•―οΈπŸ¦β€β¬›

June 17th, 2026 11:49

Different shades of love
Joseph M Marion said:

Beautiful way to describe nature and its fight. Very good well written thank you my friend for being my friend

June 17th, 2026 10:36

Isis
orchidee said:

Good write SB.

June 17th, 2026 09:31

Isis
Soman Ragavan said:

It has been said that a man cannot enter a river twice : by the second time, it is not the same man and it is not the same river... This ties back to the ideas in the poem : when you look again, the vision will never be quite the same again...

June 17th, 2026 08:50

Change
Soman Ragavan said:

The poet\'s eye sees patterns and designs that others miss. The rotating colours bring out beauty but that beauty is a passing one. Memory is likened to a wall on which one writes. The design made out by a child in its game might seem insignificant to the adult, but the child\'s mind operates in its own way. Its creations might need time to be understood. A picture once seen cannot be seen in exactly the same way again : the mind\'s perception has changed. The next time we see it we will be influenced by experiences that have occurred in the meantime. The last line reinforces this idea : even if we manage to turn time back, we will never be able to see with the same eyes, because the eyes have evolved...

June 17th, 2026 08:46

Isis
Lorenz said:

Sea of tranquillity so sweet symphony ...

June 17th, 2026 06:44

Isis
arqios said:

The interaction between Mars and Venus is very interesting πŸ•ŠοΈπŸ™πŸ»

June 17th, 2026 06:34

Isis
soheil khodaparasti said:

A blend of mythology into a meditation on imagination and love. I like the personification of the moon in the first line: β€œThe moon with soft tidal hands pulls a watery blanket over sleeping shores”.

June 17th, 2026 04:58

Isis
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:

much enjoyed

June 17th, 2026 03:54

Scrambled and deleated
Goldfinch60 said:

Clever write soren.

Andy

June 17th, 2026 01:51

Scrambled and deleated
Kevin Hulme said:

Unusual, but clever. πŸ‘

June 17th, 2026 01:31

Gone
Jaayx3 said:

Your work is beautiful

June 16th, 2026 21:50

Customer service
Demar Desu said:

I wish you would go into detail in the description of what this means to you

June 16th, 2026 19:04

Poetry droppings
boot said:

Ah c\'mon...
Some like rhymes and some like stories
None diminish poet\'s glory
Write it down...spit it out
It\'s all about the author..no?

Shall we take a vote?

June 16th, 2026 15:02

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