Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Softly torn
Lorenz said:
Does the style of that old darker mind haunt your scripture ?
June 12th, 2026 04:29
Lorenz said:
Does the style of that old darker mind haunt your scripture ?
June 12th, 2026 04:29
Poetry droppings
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true but all types of poetry can be wonderful.
Andy
June 12th, 2026 01:47
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true but all types of poetry can be wonderful.
Andy
June 12th, 2026 01:47
Poetry droppings
cellinic said:
A serious and sincere, reverberating statement. My fave, my friend
June 11th, 2026 20:48
cellinic said:
A serious and sincere, reverberating statement. My fave, my friend
June 11th, 2026 20:48
Poetry droppings
Kevin Hulme said:
Must admit I\'ve never been into the \'Beat Poets\'.
Read \'On the Road\' a few years back , Couldn\'t see what the fuss was about.
June 11th, 2026 18:47
Kevin Hulme said:
Must admit I\'ve never been into the \'Beat Poets\'.
Read \'On the Road\' a few years back , Couldn\'t see what the fuss was about.
June 11th, 2026 18:47
Poetry droppings
MendedFences27 said:
I think I\'ll just throw some comments against the wall and see what sticks. Maybe, those \"word droppings\" if arranged properly, or if they contained some sort of meaning, perhaps then the author could do the work and present them as readable. (i.e. \"Portrait\' by E .E. Cummings or \"Libations\" by Amanda Gorman). Are writers (poets) not responsible for their art? Perhaps , they should paint \"by numbers\" before they besiege us with their attempted \"Mons Lisa\". - Phil A.
June 11th, 2026 15:49
MendedFences27 said:
I think I\'ll just throw some comments against the wall and see what sticks. Maybe, those \"word droppings\" if arranged properly, or if they contained some sort of meaning, perhaps then the author could do the work and present them as readable. (i.e. \"Portrait\' by E .E. Cummings or \"Libations\" by Amanda Gorman). Are writers (poets) not responsible for their art? Perhaps , they should paint \"by numbers\" before they besiege us with their attempted \"Mons Lisa\". - Phil A.
June 11th, 2026 15:49
Poetry droppings
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this gave me a good chuckle, my friend. 😄 As soon as I saw the title, I checked to make sure my poem wiped itself! 🤣 Then I realized it was a senryu. 😅 There is a wonderfully curmudgeonly energy here...part lament, part satire, and part defense of the craft you grew up loving. Well done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 11th, 2026 08:42
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this gave me a good chuckle, my friend. 😄 As soon as I saw the title, I checked to make sure my poem wiped itself! 🤣 Then I realized it was a senryu. 😅 There is a wonderfully curmudgeonly energy here...part lament, part satire, and part defense of the craft you grew up loving. Well done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 11th, 2026 08:42
Poetry droppings
Lorenz said:
A few people on this site still have something to say that doesn\'t rely on the contrived creativity of an intelligent artefact !
June 11th, 2026 07:39
Lorenz said:
A few people on this site still have something to say that doesn\'t rely on the contrived creativity of an intelligent artefact !
June 11th, 2026 07:39
Poetry droppings
Paul Bell said:
I suppose every generation formulates their own poetry.
Rap comes to mind as one of them.
Though when I have to google some poems to get the phrase right, I might think to myself, theres another poem around the corner I can read.
June 11th, 2026 06:01
Paul Bell said:
I suppose every generation formulates their own poetry.
Rap comes to mind as one of them.
Though when I have to google some poems to get the phrase right, I might think to myself, theres another poem around the corner I can read.
June 11th, 2026 06:01
Poetry droppings
David Wakeling said:
Oh I agree here. So often I have seen the non-words \"wap\" or \"wassup\". It strikes me as an excuse for not being able to write coherently.You certainly feel passionately about the issue.And rightly so.A great poem. Here here
June 11th, 2026 04:22
David Wakeling said:
Oh I agree here. So often I have seen the non-words \"wap\" or \"wassup\". It strikes me as an excuse for not being able to write coherently.You certainly feel passionately about the issue.And rightly so.A great poem. Here here
June 11th, 2026 04:22
Flock
Goldfinch60 said:
They just want to control us into their ways not the way good life is.
Andy
June 11th, 2026 01:50
Goldfinch60 said:
They just want to control us into their ways not the way good life is.
Andy
June 11th, 2026 01:50
Flock
Kevin Hulme said:
\'I\'m not a Number, I\'m a free Man\'. As Number 6 once said.
Good Write.
June 10th, 2026 18:48
Kevin Hulme said:
\'I\'m not a Number, I\'m a free Man\'. As Number 6 once said.
Good Write.
June 10th, 2026 18:48
Burnt perspectives
GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀 said:
A most powerful write delivered with important lessons.
June 10th, 2026 16:54
GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀 said:
A most powerful write delivered with important lessons.
June 10th, 2026 16:54
Flock
Paul Bell said:
When we all became mini capitalists, we unwittingly sold our soles.
The good things in life were dangled in front of us and we all jumped.
June 10th, 2026 12:05
Paul Bell said:
When we all became mini capitalists, we unwittingly sold our soles.
The good things in life were dangled in front of us and we all jumped.
June 10th, 2026 12:05
Flock
orchidee said:
Good write SB. KP\'s in the news, refusing to pay out for something!
June 10th, 2026 10:16
orchidee said:
Good write SB. KP\'s in the news, refusing to pay out for something!
June 10th, 2026 10:16
Flock
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is one heck of a poem. There is real bite in this from the opening sentence onward...angry, provocative, and completely unapologetic in the way it challenges complacency and conformity. It grabs hold and doesn\'t let go. Powerful write, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 10th, 2026 08:14
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is one heck of a poem. There is real bite in this from the opening sentence onward...angry, provocative, and completely unapologetic in the way it challenges complacency and conformity. It grabs hold and doesn\'t let go. Powerful write, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 10th, 2026 08:14
Bath in a cloud
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, you got me with this one. The imagery is rich, fluid, and immersive...it feels like stepping into a dream where water, steam, and self-discovery all occupy the same space. There is something wonderfully hypnotic about it. Great job on this, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 10th, 2026 08:05
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, you got me with this one. The imagery is rich, fluid, and immersive...it feels like stepping into a dream where water, steam, and self-discovery all occupy the same space. There is something wonderfully hypnotic about it. Great job on this, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 10th, 2026 08:05
Flock
soheil khodaparasti said:
The most painful point of the poem’s dystopian vision is the voluntary submission to bondage and the normalization of suffering.
June 10th, 2026 08:04
soheil khodaparasti said:
The most painful point of the poem’s dystopian vision is the voluntary submission to bondage and the normalization of suffering.
June 10th, 2026 08:04
Flock
RSM0812 said:
Sheep we are to keep our obedience full of silence im afraid. A fav
June 10th, 2026 07:58
RSM0812 said:
Sheep we are to keep our obedience full of silence im afraid. A fav
June 10th, 2026 07:58
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Lorenz said:
When the wool from the nations that keeps us warm is sold at Walmart ,what can we do ? Shout our outrage while running naked across the lunar rooftops ?
June 10th, 2026 07:46
Lorenz said:
When the wool from the nations that keeps us warm is sold at Walmart ,what can we do ? Shout our outrage while running naked across the lunar rooftops ?
June 10th, 2026 07:46
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