Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Gone
Goldfinch60 said:
We may all be in that place one day soren and life will be wonderful.
Andy
May 4th, 2026 01:54
Goldfinch60 said:
We may all be in that place one day soren and life will be wonderful.
Andy
May 4th, 2026 01:54
God you only gave me ten (or I\'ll never do that again)
2781 said:
Has shades of sharia law.
Coming to a town near you?
May 3rd, 2026 18:12
2781 said:
Has shades of sharia law.
Coming to a town near you?
May 3rd, 2026 18:12
Gone
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, that sense of carrying something weightless yet present really stands out… it gives the whole piece a drifting, almost untethered feeling. It stays with you. Nicely done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 3rd, 2026 16:15
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, that sense of carrying something weightless yet present really stands out… it gives the whole piece a drifting, almost untethered feeling. It stays with you. Nicely done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 3rd, 2026 16:15
Gone
Salvia.S said:
It’s a strong piece, capturing that disoriented, post-escape feeling really well. The mix of lightness and loneliness comes through clearly. Very well written!!!
May 3rd, 2026 12:57
Salvia.S said:
It’s a strong piece, capturing that disoriented, post-escape feeling really well. The mix of lightness and loneliness comes through clearly. Very well written!!!
May 3rd, 2026 12:57
Gone
Paul Bell said:
You should have given me a call, I could do with escaping.
I wonder how many people have done just that, just thought to themselves, stuff this I\'m off.
May 3rd, 2026 08:31
Paul Bell said:
You should have given me a call, I could do with escaping.
I wonder how many people have done just that, just thought to themselves, stuff this I\'m off.
May 3rd, 2026 08:31
Gone
arqios said:
There is an immediate benefit from escaping one’s past and inner conflict thereby creating a sense of real lightness, but it may also lead to disconnection, unreality, and a loss of grounded identity. It appears that it never is a win-win 🕊️🙏
May 3rd, 2026 06:13
arqios said:
There is an immediate benefit from escaping one’s past and inner conflict thereby creating a sense of real lightness, but it may also lead to disconnection, unreality, and a loss of grounded identity. It appears that it never is a win-win 🕊️🙏
May 3rd, 2026 06:13
Gone
David Wakeling said:
A fascinating journey of letting go and escaping the binds of life. A very strong message of hope here.Well done
May 3rd, 2026 06:11
David Wakeling said:
A fascinating journey of letting go and escaping the binds of life. A very strong message of hope here.Well done
May 3rd, 2026 06:11
Gone
Friendship said:
Nicely written. Your poem revolves around the act of moving on from one’s past, leaving behind physical possessions and emotional baggage. It touches upon themes of transformation, self-discovery, and the contrast between reality and illusion.
May 3rd, 2026 05:55
Friendship said:
Nicely written. Your poem revolves around the act of moving on from one’s past, leaving behind physical possessions and emotional baggage. It touches upon themes of transformation, self-discovery, and the contrast between reality and illusion.
May 3rd, 2026 05:55
Gone
Teddy.15 said:
Most beautiful, to be freed to wander without a care in the world, I did this once iny life and I\'m still on that cloud! 🌹
May 3rd, 2026 04:12
Teddy.15 said:
Most beautiful, to be freed to wander without a care in the world, I did this once iny life and I\'m still on that cloud! 🌹
May 3rd, 2026 04:12
What\'s left
Poeticdiplo said:
I wonder if your lungs
Were filled with the joy of memories
And if the smoke was sweet
As grandmas pies?
Just random thought.
May 3rd, 2026 02:06
Poeticdiplo said:
I wonder if your lungs
Were filled with the joy of memories
And if the smoke was sweet
As grandmas pies?
Just random thought.
May 3rd, 2026 02:06
God you only gave me ten (or I\'ll never do that again)
Kevin Hulme said:
Where\'s RoboCop when you need him?
Good Write.
May 2nd, 2026 19:35
Kevin Hulme said:
Where\'s RoboCop when you need him?
Good Write.
May 2nd, 2026 19:35
God you only gave me ten (or I\'ll never do that again)
Doggerel Dave said:
I would, with reservations, support a modified form of your first proposition, Soren. Anyone found in possession of a gun – amputation of trigger finger (separate debate re amputation with or without anesthetic). Exempton for farmers, I suspect , though secure storage with severe penalties if found to be inadequate.
I cannot endorse your remaining suggestions; however your regular supporters will doubtless cover my inadequacies.
May 2nd, 2026 17:40
Doggerel Dave said:
I would, with reservations, support a modified form of your first proposition, Soren. Anyone found in possession of a gun – amputation of trigger finger (separate debate re amputation with or without anesthetic). Exempton for farmers, I suspect , though secure storage with severe penalties if found to be inadequate.
I cannot endorse your remaining suggestions; however your regular supporters will doubtless cover my inadequacies.
May 2nd, 2026 17:40
God you only gave me ten (or I\'ll never do that again)
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is a powerful piece…what stands out is the relentless escalation. Each line raises the stakes, pushing the idea further and further until that closing turn hits with real weight. It’s stark, unflinching, and leaves an impression. Well written, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 2nd, 2026 11:12
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is a powerful piece…what stands out is the relentless escalation. Each line raises the stakes, pushing the idea further and further until that closing turn hits with real weight. It’s stark, unflinching, and leaves an impression. Well written, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 2nd, 2026 11:12
Spilt criticism
Durdica Porobija said:
The poem is gradually intoned with an increasingly intense nausea over the critical dissection and devaluation of emotional poetic confessions.
May 2nd, 2026 10:09
Durdica Porobija said:
The poem is gradually intoned with an increasingly intense nausea over the critical dissection and devaluation of emotional poetic confessions.
May 2nd, 2026 10:09
Spilt criticism
Durdica Porobija said:
The poem is gradually intoned with an increasingly intense nausea over the critical dissection and devaluation of emotional poetic confessions.
May 2nd, 2026 10:09
Durdica Porobija said:
The poem is gradually intoned with an increasingly intense nausea over the critical dissection and devaluation of emotional poetic confessions.
May 2nd, 2026 10:09
Decay
Durdica Porobija said:
The fall and ruin of the tree seems like the ruin of the human being, and certainly the ruin of kings. The tragedy of the fall does not refer to the mechanical parts of modern civilization. It is an antithesis that highlights the cold, soulless nature of modern civilization. That is how it seems to me.
May 2nd, 2026 09:45
Durdica Porobija said:
The fall and ruin of the tree seems like the ruin of the human being, and certainly the ruin of kings. The tragedy of the fall does not refer to the mechanical parts of modern civilization. It is an antithesis that highlights the cold, soulless nature of modern civilization. That is how it seems to me.
May 2nd, 2026 09:45
God you only gave me ten (or I\'ll never do that again)
orchidee said:
Talking about guns - KP\'s very naughty. She and I play Russian Roulette. But she leaves only ONE chamber empty, and says to me \'You go first, dear!\' lol
May 2nd, 2026 08:19
orchidee said:
Talking about guns - KP\'s very naughty. She and I play Russian Roulette. But she leaves only ONE chamber empty, and says to me \'You go first, dear!\' lol
May 2nd, 2026 08:19
God you only gave me ten (or I\'ll never do that again)
arqios said:
A world like that is entirely possible. But who shall police and enforce once everyone has been mutilated? Much food for thought in this here poem dear friend 🕊️🙏
May 2nd, 2026 07:53
arqios said:
A world like that is entirely possible. But who shall police and enforce once everyone has been mutilated? Much food for thought in this here poem dear friend 🕊️🙏
May 2nd, 2026 07:53
God you only gave me ten (or I\'ll never do that again)
Teddy.15 said:
lol in a sick world this is hilarious inside my heart my dismay for our world it\'s a very real sadness. A wonderful piece of poetry, politically speaking it\'s getting more like puppet theatre every day. 🌹
May 2nd, 2026 07:20
Teddy.15 said:
lol in a sick world this is hilarious inside my heart my dismay for our world it\'s a very real sadness. A wonderful piece of poetry, politically speaking it\'s getting more like puppet theatre every day. 🌹
May 2nd, 2026 07:20
God you only gave me ten (or I\'ll never do that again)
Paul Bell said:
You\'ve just killed off the human race outright.
Some I would gladly shoot, others, yes they should suffer.
Repeat offenders, just make them politicians.
May 2nd, 2026 07:01
Paul Bell said:
You\'ve just killed off the human race outright.
Some I would gladly shoot, others, yes they should suffer.
Repeat offenders, just make them politicians.
May 2nd, 2026 07:01
God you only gave me ten (or I\'ll never do that again)
Friendship said:
Your poem presents a provocative critique of justice and punishment, suggesting extreme, physical retributions for various forms of wrongdoing, from murder to dishonesty. It calls into question the nature of justice and societal responses to crime, proposing that the punishment should match the crime in a literal and gruesome way. Nicely written
May 2nd, 2026 06:43
Friendship said:
Your poem presents a provocative critique of justice and punishment, suggesting extreme, physical retributions for various forms of wrongdoing, from murder to dishonesty. It calls into question the nature of justice and societal responses to crime, proposing that the punishment should match the crime in a literal and gruesome way. Nicely written
May 2nd, 2026 06:43
God you only gave me ten (or I\'ll never do that again)
David Wakeling said:
Wow this certainly is old testament.Some thought provoking statements here.I remember a young nurse was murdered and the murderers were put in jail and had colour tv three meals a day.They were better off in jail.I wanted the death penalty brought back.This certainly raises some important issues here .Excellent
May 2nd, 2026 05:24
David Wakeling said:
Wow this certainly is old testament.Some thought provoking statements here.I remember a young nurse was murdered and the murderers were put in jail and had colour tv three meals a day.They were better off in jail.I wanted the death penalty brought back.This certainly raises some important issues here .Excellent
May 2nd, 2026 05:24
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