Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Magic
orchidee said:
Good write SB. KP\'s nicked me magic wand! lol. She\'s gonna change the sewage into roast dinners and scoff the lot.
August 27th, 2026 09:15
orchidee said:
Good write SB. KP\'s nicked me magic wand! lol. She\'s gonna change the sewage into roast dinners and scoff the lot.
August 27th, 2026 09:15
Magic
Jamiano said:
\"Butterflies erupt into flight\". Great imagery of communal flight.
August 27th, 2026 04:23
Jamiano said:
\"Butterflies erupt into flight\". Great imagery of communal flight.
August 27th, 2026 04:23
Magic
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
A very dream like imagery much enjoyed
August 27th, 2026 04:01
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
A very dream like imagery much enjoyed
August 27th, 2026 04:01
Magic
delusions said:
The imagery in this is genuinely haunting. “animals turn into sticks” and “butterflies erupt into flight” are such strange, beautiful images, and the whole poem feels like wandering somewhere you really shouldn’t be. Very nice
August 27th, 2026 03:56
delusions said:
The imagery in this is genuinely haunting. “animals turn into sticks” and “butterflies erupt into flight” are such strange, beautiful images, and the whole poem feels like wandering somewhere you really shouldn’t be. Very nice
August 27th, 2026 03:56
Traitor
Kevin Hulme said:
Quite a Rogues Gallery.
As for the Cause\'s? It\'s all debatable.
A good Write.
August 26th, 2026 20:35
Kevin Hulme said:
Quite a Rogues Gallery.
As for the Cause\'s? It\'s all debatable.
A good Write.
August 26th, 2026 20:35
Values
rrodriguez said:
Soren, this sounds like the Ten Commandments being reduced to a fable. What you have written carries the message of a society that has lowered God’s commands to a lesser level—something once sacred and authoritative now treated as an ancient story or artifact. I find the imagery powerful and thought-provoking. Thank you for sharing. Be blessed!
August 26th, 2026 18:50
rrodriguez said:
Soren, this sounds like the Ten Commandments being reduced to a fable. What you have written carries the message of a society that has lowered God’s commands to a lesser level—something once sacred and authoritative now treated as an ancient story or artifact. I find the imagery powerful and thought-provoking. Thank you for sharing. Be blessed!
August 26th, 2026 18:50
Traitor
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, I often wonder where moral collapse truly begins. One decision may define a life forever, but countless unseen choices usually lead toward it. This left me thinking, Soren. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 26th, 2026 15:55
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, I often wonder where moral collapse truly begins. One decision may define a life forever, but countless unseen choices usually lead toward it. This left me thinking, Soren. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 26th, 2026 15:55
You will be offended
Syd said:
Hi Sorenbarret, there\'s me worried at times that some of my writes are a bit risqué 😂
Cheese hog? I love that one, I\'ll have to pinch it. And Fugly? I\'ll have to change the name of our dog. It\'s a pug, you see, and... you get it.
The whole thing is quite unhinged, which is right up my street. I especially like the last stanza.
- Syd 🍄
August 26th, 2026 14:43
Syd said:
Hi Sorenbarret, there\'s me worried at times that some of my writes are a bit risqué 😂
Cheese hog? I love that one, I\'ll have to pinch it. And Fugly? I\'ll have to change the name of our dog. It\'s a pug, you see, and... you get it.
The whole thing is quite unhinged, which is right up my street. I especially like the last stanza.
- Syd 🍄
August 26th, 2026 14:43
Traitor
Lorenz said:
In my opinion that poor Judas did the dirty job for 30 bucks ...
August 26th, 2026 09:15
Lorenz said:
In my opinion that poor Judas did the dirty job for 30 bucks ...
August 26th, 2026 09:15
Closed door
Doggerel Dave said:
The feeling of loss as a relationship, a part of you is no more. Emptiness well expressed there, Soren.
August 26th, 2026 07:23
Doggerel Dave said:
The feeling of loss as a relationship, a part of you is no more. Emptiness well expressed there, Soren.
August 26th, 2026 07:23
Traitor
David Wakeling said:
An interesting essay on nature vs nuture and destiny.Made me think about betrayal
August 26th, 2026 06:26
David Wakeling said:
An interesting essay on nature vs nuture and destiny.Made me think about betrayal
August 26th, 2026 06:26
Traitor
David Wakeling said:
An interesting piece that raises the question of nature vs nuture,Fascinating
August 26th, 2026 06:24
David Wakeling said:
An interesting piece that raises the question of nature vs nuture,Fascinating
August 26th, 2026 06:24
Right off the shelf
cully45 said:
Short but to the point liked it a lot. Regards Owen
August 26th, 2026 05:09
cully45 said:
Short but to the point liked it a lot. Regards Owen
August 26th, 2026 05:09
Traitor
Teddy.15 said:
lol I did have a chuckle 🤭 wonderful dear sorrenbarret timeless and most amusing. 🌹
August 26th, 2026 03:26
Teddy.15 said:
lol I did have a chuckle 🤭 wonderful dear sorrenbarret timeless and most amusing. 🌹
August 26th, 2026 03:26
Closed door
Kevin Hulme said:
Bit of a lonely Ache in this . And Sad .
\'Your Name remains on your Door\' stands out for me.
Good Write.
August 25th, 2026 18:57
Kevin Hulme said:
Bit of a lonely Ache in this . And Sad .
\'Your Name remains on your Door\' stands out for me.
Good Write.
August 25th, 2026 18:57
Closed door
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is quietly devastating. The hope of reunion slowly gives way to permanent absence...and those abandoned signs of care leave everything suspended around someone who cannot return. I know that helpless ache all too well. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 25th, 2026 18:52
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is quietly devastating. The hope of reunion slowly gives way to permanent absence...and those abandoned signs of care leave everything suspended around someone who cannot return. I know that helpless ache all too well. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 25th, 2026 18:52
Closed door
soheil khodaparasti said:
A deeply haunting poem about absence, longing, and grief. The final line is especially poignant, leaving a lasting sense of loneliness and heartbreak.
August 25th, 2026 12:03
soheil khodaparasti said:
A deeply haunting poem about absence, longing, and grief. The final line is especially poignant, leaving a lasting sense of loneliness and heartbreak.
August 25th, 2026 12:03
Closed door
Lorenz said:
Everything is conveyed through a palpable mystery...
August 25th, 2026 11:30
Lorenz said:
Everything is conveyed through a palpable mystery...
August 25th, 2026 11:30
Closed door
orchidee said:
But you only saw me yesterday! lol.
Boohoo! When one door closes for me, they say \'Don\'t worry; another door will soon slam in your face!\' lol.
Can be embarrassing - I called at someone\'s home after many years. New owners said \'Oh, they died 5 years ago\'.
August 25th, 2026 10:33
orchidee said:
But you only saw me yesterday! lol.
Boohoo! When one door closes for me, they say \'Don\'t worry; another door will soon slam in your face!\' lol.
Can be embarrassing - I called at someone\'s home after many years. New owners said \'Oh, they died 5 years ago\'.
August 25th, 2026 10:33
Forgotten
cully45 said:
Thanks Soren your comments always appreciated regards Owen
August 25th, 2026 09:12
cully45 said:
Thanks Soren your comments always appreciated regards Owen
August 25th, 2026 09:12
Closed door
arqios said:
Unsent flowers have the same “shelf life” as the unjilted ones. And yet that failure to launch is testified to by their colour and fragrance. 💐🥀🕊️🙏🏻
August 25th, 2026 07:21
arqios said:
Unsent flowers have the same “shelf life” as the unjilted ones. And yet that failure to launch is testified to by their colour and fragrance. 💐🥀🕊️🙏🏻
August 25th, 2026 07:21
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