Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett



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Tom Dylan said:

A fine write. This reminded me of the scene in the Stephen Fry film about Oscar Wilde, where he was on the prison treadmill.

November 18th, 2024 03:57

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Goldfinch60 said:

May those dreams become reality soren.

Andy

November 18th, 2024 02:19

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Teddy.15 said:

Powerful and brilliant ๐ŸŒน

November 18th, 2024 02:08

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Dan Williams said:

Not sure; half full or half empty? Well done as usual.

November 18th, 2024 00:52

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Dan Williams said:

Yes and you are still you, I am still me. Almost a prophesy, certainly wise.

November 18th, 2024 00:50

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NafisaSB said:

wow- keep learning/coming against new words daily - first time i saw the word being used - and it blends beautifully with the verse.. good write, and giving us something to ponder about

November 18th, 2024 00:15

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NafisaSB said:

the eyes of the poet see a beautiful object - and so many ideas sprout forth about it - yes , like the tree we try to mold things into the shape we desire, but ultimately nature has the last laugh, and it will grow as it is destined to be.
lovely write, keep it coming

November 18th, 2024 00:11

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MR.apocalypse said:

i like your beginning such little words can provoke a lot of thought in me

November 17th, 2024 23:31

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John Prophet said:

So true. Well written.


November 17th, 2024 18:54

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Thad Wilk said:

๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿ‘
A really captivating and
interesting write! ๐Ÿ‘
Those fast or slow floors
can give one a fright! ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Thanks for sharing,
to read a delight!! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Best regards โœŒ๏ธ peace. Thad

November 17th, 2024 17:23

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Tristan Robert Lange said:

\"Intellection\"! I first read it here! Great poem my friend! ๐ŸŒน๐Ÿ‘

November 17th, 2024 17:00

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orchidee said:

Good write SB.

November 17th, 2024 08:19

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Mutley Ravishes said:

Prisoner of memory? Great write, Soren.

November 17th, 2024 06:11

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Neville said:



.......................... exemplary poetry will neva loose it\'s universal appeal .. and that\'s just me trying to think outside the box .. ๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿง๐Ÿ‘

November 17th, 2024 05:59

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2781 said:

Solomon wrote, we are caught in an evil time.

November 17th, 2024 05:58

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arqios said:

Love it! โ€œIntellectionโ€ now thatโ€™s gonna fly, perhaps not far but it will lift off for sure.

November 17th, 2024 05:57

One in all, all in one
Amit.Singh said:

https://wmmtboc2013.fpo.pt/

November 17th, 2024 04:09

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Goldfinch60 said:

So true, I used to grow bonsai many, many years ago.

Andy

November 17th, 2024 02:49

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Doggerel Dave said:

For me it is tree by name only. Different entirely. Love and admire both.
Bonsai, well maintained by an expert and with plenty of age is fascinating and right up there with high end art.
A tree, perhaps an old English oak, a majestic gum tree (eucalyptus) has power and majesty.
Your poem made me sort this out, Soren.




November 16th, 2024 23:49

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David Wakeling said:

This is a great poem. Short and sweet. The truth is though I don\'t think Bonsai is about the tree much at all. I think it allows the gardener to get away from his nagging wife for some quality time.

November 16th, 2024 20:58

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2781 said:

Sounds like my shed.

November 16th, 2024 19:28

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November 16th, 2024 19:28

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Neville said:



I have a thing about bonsai .. it is of course just another passion .. and can take over one\'s life .. deceiving little bugga\'s too, just when you think one may have died on ya .. it may spring into life again ..

November 16th, 2024 10:43

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Cassie58 said:

Lovely. A miniature tree. Just because it is small, it doesnโ€™t take away from its worth and its beauty. Some very nice things come in small packages. I love these trees. All that stunted growth producing something so visually beautiful and it can grow indoors.

November 16th, 2024 09:37

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Teddy.15 said:

I see a very special tree that brings peace yet is really hard to grow and to keep therefore defeating the peace lol I have very recently learnt how to grow orchids. Beautiful as ever dearest sorrenbarret ๐ŸŒน could also be metaphor for humans ๐Ÿ’™

November 16th, 2024 09:06

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Neilton said:

Impressed by your writing i admit !
You conveyed the emotions so well

November 16th, 2024 09:04

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orchidee said:

A fine write SB.

November 16th, 2024 07:51

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Maplespal said:

It is more than just a tree,
it remains all the images you see.
Each time you look at the tree it still be,
new visions your mind does see.

November 16th, 2024 07:17

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arqios said:

Stunted by intention pure at its core.

November 16th, 2024 07:16

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Tristan Robert Lange said:

Ah the beloved bonsai! And I am not going to lie, this gave me nostalgic memories of Pat Morita as Mr. Myagi! That aside and on its own, this pays the little tree, and the care put into it, a wonderful tribute. Well done, friend!

November 16th, 2024 07:10

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