Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Better than who?
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem masterfully exposes the profound hypocrisy in moral judgments and societal standards, shining a light on the transformative power of truth and authenticity, while questioning the dichotomy in how humanity views actions that are deemed wrong or immoral, particularly in relation to the liberating realms of sexuality and modesty, thereby embracing themes of unapologetic honesty, compassionate judgment, and the unwavering quest for consistency in societal norms regarding morality and propriety. At the end, the poet seems to challenge the reader to reconsider their own moral standards and the hypocrisy that often accompanies societal norms.
April 22nd, 2026 06:52
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem masterfully exposes the profound hypocrisy in moral judgments and societal standards, shining a light on the transformative power of truth and authenticity, while questioning the dichotomy in how humanity views actions that are deemed wrong or immoral, particularly in relation to the liberating realms of sexuality and modesty, thereby embracing themes of unapologetic honesty, compassionate judgment, and the unwavering quest for consistency in societal norms regarding morality and propriety. At the end, the poet seems to challenge the reader to reconsider their own moral standards and the hypocrisy that often accompanies societal norms.
April 22nd, 2026 06:52
Better than who?
Waiting for Silence said:
Poem raises thoughtful questions about moral inconsistency, hypocrisy, and judgment and confronting the reader with their own imperfections, encouraging self‑reflection rather than condemnation
Good one.
April 22nd, 2026 06:21
Waiting for Silence said:
Poem raises thoughtful questions about moral inconsistency, hypocrisy, and judgment and confronting the reader with their own imperfections, encouraging self‑reflection rather than condemnation
Good one.
April 22nd, 2026 06:21
Better than who?
Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏 said:
One of those poems where you force your audience into a mirror questioning their morality.
April 22nd, 2026 06:18
Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏 said:
One of those poems where you force your audience into a mirror questioning their morality.
April 22nd, 2026 06:18
Better than who?
arqios said:
A lyric beauty which just the right sting of tartness! A fave for sure dear Soren🕊️🙏🏻
April 22nd, 2026 06:08
arqios said:
A lyric beauty which just the right sting of tartness! A fave for sure dear Soren🕊️🙏🏻
April 22nd, 2026 06:08
Helios
Goldfinch60 said:
Such wonderful words soren, may Helios always be with us.
Andy
April 22nd, 2026 01:47
Goldfinch60 said:
Such wonderful words soren, may Helios always be with us.
Andy
April 22nd, 2026 01:47
Vermin
Doggerel Dave said:
Been there. hosted them.
That may just conceivably be based on experience...
Realistic write, Soren.
April 21st, 2026 20:45
Doggerel Dave said:
Been there. hosted them.
That may just conceivably be based on experience...
Realistic write, Soren.
April 21st, 2026 20:45
Helios
Abdullah123 said:
Didn\'t realise was rated 18+ until after I read it, but I don\'t regret it😭
Incredibly immersive, and quite the epitome of being poetic
April 21st, 2026 11:52
Abdullah123 said:
Didn\'t realise was rated 18+ until after I read it, but I don\'t regret it😭
Incredibly immersive, and quite the epitome of being poetic
April 21st, 2026 11:52
Vermin
Waiting for Silence said:
good one! :)
very well expressed.... real-life social behavior—people who exploit relationships, overstay welcome, and invade personal boundaries. Comparison of people to pests and parasites is clear and effective. Clearly conveys irritation and discomfort without naming anyone directly
April 21st, 2026 11:22
Waiting for Silence said:
good one! :)
very well expressed.... real-life social behavior—people who exploit relationships, overstay welcome, and invade personal boundaries. Comparison of people to pests and parasites is clear and effective. Clearly conveys irritation and discomfort without naming anyone directly
April 21st, 2026 11:22
Helios
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this feels epic right out of the gate…there’s a surge of energy and scale that just keeps building. It reads like a myth in motion. Powerful piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 21st, 2026 09:08
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this feels epic right out of the gate…there’s a surge of energy and scale that just keeps building. It reads like a myth in motion. Powerful piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 21st, 2026 09:08
Helios
orchidee said:
Good write SB. KP greets me with, similar to the poem\'s first line, that b****y sewage again! lol. I keep dishing it up. heehee.
April 21st, 2026 09:04
orchidee said:
Good write SB. KP greets me with, similar to the poem\'s first line, that b****y sewage again! lol. I keep dishing it up. heehee.
April 21st, 2026 09:04
Helios
Thomas W Case said:
Mythic and blazing—this surges with elemental force, where nature and godhood collide in fire and rebirth.
The grit is in the violence of renewal: light doesn’t arrive gently, it conquers the dark.
April 21st, 2026 08:28
Thomas W Case said:
Mythic and blazing—this surges with elemental force, where nature and godhood collide in fire and rebirth.
The grit is in the violence of renewal: light doesn’t arrive gently, it conquers the dark.
April 21st, 2026 08:28
Helios
Paul Bell said:
Pure poetry, you have surpassed yourself.
I suppose even nature must have flaws, or maybe the flaws are just the earths realignment.
If you live in a country that some idiot isn\'t bombing, and you can get into the forest see a river, it\'s only then you realise how perfect nature is.
April 21st, 2026 05:17
Paul Bell said:
Pure poetry, you have surpassed yourself.
I suppose even nature must have flaws, or maybe the flaws are just the earths realignment.
If you live in a country that some idiot isn\'t bombing, and you can get into the forest see a river, it\'s only then you realise how perfect nature is.
April 21st, 2026 05:17
Choices of when and where
NafisaSB said:
Both timing and proper directions are necessary or it will be traumatic when delivery cannot be made though items are available
This is the scenario that’s also prevalent in war zones 🤔😔
April 21st, 2026 03:19
NafisaSB said:
Both timing and proper directions are necessary or it will be traumatic when delivery cannot be made though items are available
This is the scenario that’s also prevalent in war zones 🤔😔
April 21st, 2026 03:19
Top and bottom sonnet
Sviatoslav Zhabotynskyi said:
It’s hard for people to reach each other.
April 21st, 2026 00:06
Sviatoslav Zhabotynskyi said:
It’s hard for people to reach each other.
April 21st, 2026 00:06
Vermin
Sviatoslav Zhabotynskyi said:
too much deceit, every day. I don’t even know what to do with it.
April 21st, 2026 00:02
Sviatoslav Zhabotynskyi said:
too much deceit, every day. I don’t even know what to do with it.
April 21st, 2026 00:02
Vermin
swedishme123 said:
very VERY good work as always.! it kept me interested, though all of your work does. the more I read the more I enjoy
April 20th, 2026 22:00
swedishme123 said:
very VERY good work as always.! it kept me interested, though all of your work does. the more I read the more I enjoy
April 20th, 2026 22:00
Resciprocity’s warning
boot said:
You have an excellent point...I think most people just want to post their poems...there\'s actually a lot of really good poems here that are probably unread...
April 20th, 2026 21:19
boot said:
You have an excellent point...I think most people just want to post their poems...there\'s actually a lot of really good poems here that are probably unread...
April 20th, 2026 21:19
Vermin
Kevin Hulme said:
Yes, I like this . I\'m reminded of the time Hans Christian Anderson payed Dickens a visit. Stayed for weeks until C.D. had to order him to leave. A definite fave.
April 20th, 2026 19:18
Kevin Hulme said:
Yes, I like this . I\'m reminded of the time Hans Christian Anderson payed Dickens a visit. Stayed for weeks until C.D. had to order him to leave. A definite fave.
April 20th, 2026 19:18
Perfection
jarcher54 said:
I am still working on it though!! And I bet you are too...
April 20th, 2026 10:49
jarcher54 said:
I am still working on it though!! And I bet you are too...
April 20th, 2026 10:49
Vermin
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is a wild ride…there’s a chaotic, almost playful frustration running through it that just keeps building. It feels like everything piling on at once and not letting up. That energy carries. Strong piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 20th, 2026 10:32
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is a wild ride…there’s a chaotic, almost playful frustration running through it that just keeps building. It feels like everything piling on at once and not letting up. That energy carries. Strong piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 20th, 2026 10:32
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