Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Be willing to give what you ask
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive words soren showing both sides of the coin of life.
Andy
June 30th, 2026 01:55
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive words soren showing both sides of the coin of life.
Andy
June 30th, 2026 01:55
Growing old
hzugman said:
Lovely SB. Made me think of Shakespeare\'s seven ages of man from As You Like It.
June 29th, 2026 19:32
hzugman said:
Lovely SB. Made me think of Shakespeare\'s seven ages of man from As You Like It.
June 29th, 2026 19:32
Be willing to give what you ask
Paul Bell said:
I will follow you to the end of the earth, but only because I know the earth is round.
Once upon a time when I thought you could fall over the edge of earth, I might have lied a little bit.
Man is a superior being, that\'s why we kill each other.
June 29th, 2026 16:00
Paul Bell said:
I will follow you to the end of the earth, but only because I know the earth is round.
Once upon a time when I thought you could fall over the edge of earth, I might have lied a little bit.
Man is a superior being, that\'s why we kill each other.
June 29th, 2026 16:00
Be willing to give what you ask
peto said:
I\'m not getting involved with the intellectual conversation
But I am faving this
Excellent
June 29th, 2026 15:26
peto said:
I\'m not getting involved with the intellectual conversation
But I am faving this
Excellent
June 29th, 2026 15:26
Be willing to give what you ask
peto said:
I\'m not getting involved with the intellectual conversation
But I am faving this
Excellent
June 29th, 2026 15:26
peto said:
I\'m not getting involved with the intellectual conversation
But I am faving this
Excellent
June 29th, 2026 15:26
Change
Durdica Porobija said:
The theme of the song is the passage of time. The central image of ever-changing kaleidoscopic scenes points to the uniqueness of life events. The last verse interprets the metaphor, not so much with nostalgia, but with an emphasis on happy, irreplaceable experiences full of colors and constantly new shapes. Life is wonderful - the metaphorical image conveys this, chosen well both cognitively and aesthetically.
June 29th, 2026 13:18
Durdica Porobija said:
The theme of the song is the passage of time. The central image of ever-changing kaleidoscopic scenes points to the uniqueness of life events. The last verse interprets the metaphor, not so much with nostalgia, but with an emphasis on happy, irreplaceable experiences full of colors and constantly new shapes. Life is wonderful - the metaphorical image conveys this, chosen well both cognitively and aesthetically.
June 29th, 2026 13:18
Be willing to give what you ask
soheil khodaparasti said:
Great job. Your poem questions the legitimacy of moral demands by using religious imagery and by confronting the peaker with an unspecified authority figure.
What fascinated me most was your poem’s emotional progression. By moving from accusation to challenge, it broadens the conflict beyond personal resentment and transforms it into a universal exploration of sacrifice, authority, and mutual devotion.
June 29th, 2026 11:44
soheil khodaparasti said:
Great job. Your poem questions the legitimacy of moral demands by using religious imagery and by confronting the peaker with an unspecified authority figure.
What fascinated me most was your poem’s emotional progression. By moving from accusation to challenge, it broadens the conflict beyond personal resentment and transforms it into a universal exploration of sacrifice, authority, and mutual devotion.
June 29th, 2026 11:44
Be willing to give what you ask
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this really grabbed me. The whole poem builds toward that final question, and it lands with real weight. There\'s an honesty here that challenges easy assumptions and invites genuine self-examination. Powerful write, my friend. A fave for sure.🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 29th, 2026 09:33
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this really grabbed me. The whole poem builds toward that final question, and it lands with real weight. There\'s an honesty here that challenges easy assumptions and invites genuine self-examination. Powerful write, my friend. A fave for sure.🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 29th, 2026 09:33
Be willing to give what you ask
arqios said:
A most moving and persuasive write Soren🙏🕊️
June 29th, 2026 06:51
arqios said:
A most moving and persuasive write Soren🙏🕊️
June 29th, 2026 06:51
Be willing to give what you ask
Doggerel Dave said:
Come on Soren, please explain - I don\'t follow your argument.
Enjoy the poetic flow however...
June 29th, 2026 05:00
Doggerel Dave said:
Come on Soren, please explain - I don\'t follow your argument.
Enjoy the poetic flow however...
June 29th, 2026 05:00
Be willing to give what you ask
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
good write, it only asks equality
June 29th, 2026 04:31
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
good write, it only asks equality
June 29th, 2026 04:31
Pieces
Soman Ragavan said:
\"marks that I leave in poetry will weave living textile of tomorrow...\" The writings of the poet start getting their merit upon his death. It is a strange price to pay, but that is the way it happens. Death gives clarity to others.
June 29th, 2026 02:05
Soman Ragavan said:
\"marks that I leave in poetry will weave living textile of tomorrow...\" The writings of the poet start getting their merit upon his death. It is a strange price to pay, but that is the way it happens. Death gives clarity to others.
June 29th, 2026 02:05
Pieces
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, what a thoughtful meditation. From skin and footprints to glaciers and poetry, every image builds toward the same beautiful truth...that our lives continue touching the world in ways we rarely see. That closing thought of poetry becoming the \"living textile of tomorrow\" is a wonderful finish and one I\'ll be carrying with me. Excellent write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 28th, 2026 20:01
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, what a thoughtful meditation. From skin and footprints to glaciers and poetry, every image builds toward the same beautiful truth...that our lives continue touching the world in ways we rarely see. That closing thought of poetry becoming the \"living textile of tomorrow\" is a wonderful finish and one I\'ll be carrying with me. Excellent write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 28th, 2026 20:01
Pieces
Kevin Hulme said:
A good Write. We\'ll always be here . Even when we\'re not.
June 28th, 2026 18:41
Kevin Hulme said:
A good Write. We\'ll always be here . Even when we\'re not.
June 28th, 2026 18:41
Lunacy in a bottle
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
I think I was at that party
Dreat stuff
June 28th, 2026 15:29
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
I think I was at that party
Dreat stuff
June 28th, 2026 15:29
Feelings of loss
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Because... there is no good-bye
Like... there is no Fair-well
Great thought provoking write
Thank yon
June 28th, 2026 15:26
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Because... there is no good-bye
Like... there is no Fair-well
Great thought provoking write
Thank yon
June 28th, 2026 15:26
Pieces
soheil khodaparasti said:
Great. Immortality through poetry. Your poem reminds me of Shakespeare\'s sonnets, which grant immortality through poetry; Walt Whitman, whose poetry celebrates the physical body and its connection with the earth; Shelley, whose poetry presents nature as constantly transforming; and John Keats, whose poems deal with mortality versus the enduring power of art, ...
June 28th, 2026 13:27
soheil khodaparasti said:
Great. Immortality through poetry. Your poem reminds me of Shakespeare\'s sonnets, which grant immortality through poetry; Walt Whitman, whose poetry celebrates the physical body and its connection with the earth; Shelley, whose poetry presents nature as constantly transforming; and John Keats, whose poems deal with mortality versus the enduring power of art, ...
June 28th, 2026 13:27
Pieces
Thomas W Case said:
This feels expansive in a beautiful way—like you’ve zoomed out far enough to see a life not as moments, but as traces.
What really lands is that quiet realization: we’re always leaving marks, even when we think we’re passing unnoticed.
June 28th, 2026 08:18
Thomas W Case said:
This feels expansive in a beautiful way—like you’ve zoomed out far enough to see a life not as moments, but as traces.
What really lands is that quiet realization: we’re always leaving marks, even when we think we’re passing unnoticed.
June 28th, 2026 08:18
Pieces
Friendship said:
Beautifully written. Your poem is rich in visual and tactile imagery, painting a picture of the physical remnants one leaves behind.
June 28th, 2026 06:38
Friendship said:
Beautifully written. Your poem is rich in visual and tactile imagery, painting a picture of the physical remnants one leaves behind.
June 28th, 2026 06:38
Hidden
2781 said:
Yes but the timber from those old growth trees is sometimes magnificent.
June 28th, 2026 06:06
2781 said:
Yes but the timber from those old growth trees is sometimes magnificent.
June 28th, 2026 06:06
Pieces
arqios said:
And the tapestry continues, like silkworms we produce strands of thread for the coming seasons🕊️🙏🤩
June 28th, 2026 06:05
arqios said:
And the tapestry continues, like silkworms we produce strands of thread for the coming seasons🕊️🙏🤩
June 28th, 2026 06:05
Pieces
orchidee said:
Good write SB. As long as YOU haven\'t fallen into pieces! lol.
June 28th, 2026 03:13
orchidee said:
Good write SB. As long as YOU haven\'t fallen into pieces! lol.
June 28th, 2026 03:13
Pieces
Goldfinch60 said:
Those words left will be there for eternity soren.
Andy
June 28th, 2026 01:43
Goldfinch60 said:
Those words left will be there for eternity soren.
Andy
June 28th, 2026 01:43
Hidden
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write soren and so very true about life in general.
Andy
June 28th, 2026 01:25
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write soren and so very true about life in general.
Andy
June 28th, 2026 01:25
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Kevin Hulme said:
I get an Impression of a Person growing from Child to Adulthood here. Liked it. 👍
June 27th, 2026 18:33
Kevin Hulme said:
I get an Impression of a Person growing from Child to Adulthood here. Liked it. 👍
June 27th, 2026 18:33
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