Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett



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Kevin Hulme said:

I\'m sure those Teenage Mutant Hero Turtles are Reading then as we speak.
There are many of mine I\'ve just erased. Thought not good enough. Some very long.
A good Write.

August 20th, 2026 10:01

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orchidee said:

Ahh, more recipe ideas for KP\'s meals, from you - I\'m most grateful to you! lol.

August 20th, 2026 09:47

In a breath
RSM0812 said:

Always on the edge

August 20th, 2026 06:58

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soheil khodaparasti said:

Arthur Miller, in Death of a Salesman, expresses this idea through Willy Loman’s words: “You can’t eat the orange and throw the peel away—a man is not a piece of fruit!” A poem is not merely a collection of words; it is what those words make us feel, see, and understand. Some poems need to be read again and again, each time with a fresh eye, because their meaning reveals itself gradually.

August 20th, 2026 04:48

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nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:

A natural conclusion of all things my friend

August 20th, 2026 03:33

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Butter said:

:3 this is a

August 20th, 2026 03:33

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Lorenz said:

A manifesto of composted poetry .

August 20th, 2026 03:22

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delusions said:

There is something strangely beautiful about how everything that serves its purpose eventually becomes something we refuse to look at. Even waste gets its own quiet afterlife. Nicely written

August 20th, 2026 03:15

Treasures lost
arqios said:

A gentle reminder that even the brightest wonders slip between our fingers while their touch still continues to shape us.

August 19th, 2026 20:33

Treasures lost
Kevin Hulme said:

It seems not all things in life are permanent.
How long before the Shamrock withers?
Good Write.

August 19th, 2026 18:28

Treasures lost
Tristan Robert Lange said:

What a beautifully wistful piece, Soren. Each wonder arrives brightly and disappears just as quickly, leaving only one small keepsake behind. This carries the ache of loving everything temporary…and it lingers. Excellent write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

August 19th, 2026 18:04

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Lorenz said:

Nothing is lost in the annals of folded time ...

August 19th, 2026 11:10

It really happened
cully45 said:

Thanks Soren your comments are always appreciated Regards Owen

August 19th, 2026 10:15

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soheil khodaparasti said:

The poem is beautiful in many ways, but for me, the ending is especially fascinating, as it leaves a sense of loss balanced by a small trace of hope.

August 19th, 2026 07:46

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orchidee said:

Good write SB.

August 19th, 2026 07:19

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delusions said:

Everything you touch becomes something you have to lose. The shamrock almost feels less like luck and more like evidence. Lovely my friend.

August 19th, 2026 04:28

Treasures lost
Soman Ragavan said:

It shows that in the end nothing stays with us. Possessions have a limited time. Even hard disks that are backed up disappear with time.

August 19th, 2026 04:24

Treasures lost
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:

Love and loss are partners in lifes game

August 19th, 2026 03:56

Shadows that touch
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Soren, this captures something I have always loved about transitional light...for a few moments, opposites cease competing and share the same sky. You have turned that natural wonder into a tender mythology. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

August 18th, 2026 21:39

Shadows that touch
E.J. Waling said:

Great way to paint the dawn and dusk.

August 18th, 2026 20:58

Shadows that touch
Kevin Hulme said:

Enjoyable Poem on the Two Lovers called Day and Night.
Maybe during a Total Eclipse they might sneak a kiss.

August 18th, 2026 15:57

Shadows that touch
soheil khodaparasti said:

A beautiful picture of two lovers destined to meet only between night and day, enhanced by a timeless, mythic dimension.

August 18th, 2026 09:19

Values
JBentley said:

Basic truth!

August 18th, 2026 08:23

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nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:

good write my friend

August 18th, 2026 07:21

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Thomas W Case said:

There’s a lovely mythic quality here, turning day and night into doomed lovers forever reaching for each other. The final image of Isis and Helios makes that separation feel damn ancient, forbidden, and inevitable.

August 18th, 2026 07:02

A blessing upon you
Syd said:

An excellent write Sorenbarret 👏👏👏

- Syd 🍄

August 18th, 2026 06:33

Shadows that touch
Paul Bell said:

The sun and the moon watching over us while lovers love.
They all need each other on their journey as the earth sleeps.

August 18th, 2026 06:11

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orchidee said:

Good write SB.

August 18th, 2026 04:46

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delusions said:

Very fetching. Elegant.

August 18th, 2026 03:27

A blessing upon you
Butter said:

Your words at times make my day. Reminding me of the buried hope and dreams of the wonderful souls that populate the world. :3

August 18th, 2026 01:28

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