Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
My friend
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is quite the ride. Billy’s rebellious spirit leaps off the page…each twist more outrageous than the last. The whole piece carries that mischievous energy of someone refusing to be boxed in. What a character you’ve brought to life here, I presume based off of a real person. Well done! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 7th, 2026 09:52
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is quite the ride. Billy’s rebellious spirit leaps off the page…each twist more outrageous than the last. The whole piece carries that mischievous energy of someone refusing to be boxed in. What a character you’ve brought to life here, I presume based off of a real person. Well done! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 7th, 2026 09:52
My friend
Friendship said:
Your poem is exquisitely crafted, masterfully focusing on the transformative themes of rebellion and individuality, profoundly explored through the powerful lens of personal appearance and courageous nonconformity to authority, as vividly embodied by Billy\'s distinctive hairstyle, which stands as a potent beacon of resistance to societal norms. The narrative unfolds a triumphant series of declarations between Billy and authority figures, underscoring the unyielding tension between unbridled personal autonomy and institutional control.
March 7th, 2026 08:39
Friendship said:
Your poem is exquisitely crafted, masterfully focusing on the transformative themes of rebellion and individuality, profoundly explored through the powerful lens of personal appearance and courageous nonconformity to authority, as vividly embodied by Billy\'s distinctive hairstyle, which stands as a potent beacon of resistance to societal norms. The narrative unfolds a triumphant series of declarations between Billy and authority figures, underscoring the unyielding tension between unbridled personal autonomy and institutional control.
March 7th, 2026 08:39
My friend
arqios said:
There is a Billy out there somewhere, probably in every village and town. Brings colour to life 🙏🏻🕊️
March 7th, 2026 07:10
arqios said:
There is a Billy out there somewhere, probably in every village and town. Brings colour to life 🙏🏻🕊️
March 7th, 2026 07:10
My friend
David Wakeling said:
A great story of school room hero.It is fun to rebel when you\'ve got nothing to lose.Well written saga
March 7th, 2026 04:21
David Wakeling said:
A great story of school room hero.It is fun to rebel when you\'ve got nothing to lose.Well written saga
March 7th, 2026 04:21
My friend
orchidee said:
A fine write SB. I knew a young person. Not as bad as Billy here, but at times in trouble at school. A church youth group where I was an Assistant Leader helped calm him down. He then grew to about 6ft 4 ins, got married, had children (some adopted too), but overdid things and sadly passed away aged 33.
March 7th, 2026 04:03
orchidee said:
A fine write SB. I knew a young person. Not as bad as Billy here, but at times in trouble at school. A church youth group where I was an Assistant Leader helped calm him down. He then grew to about 6ft 4 ins, got married, had children (some adopted too), but overdid things and sadly passed away aged 33.
March 7th, 2026 04:03
Light
Neville said:
on second thoughts .. I\'ll keep the space blanket for the time being .. brrrrrh talk about shiver .. ⭐⭐⭐⭐👍
March 7th, 2026 02:26
Neville said:
on second thoughts .. I\'ll keep the space blanket for the time being .. brrrrrh talk about shiver .. ⭐⭐⭐⭐👍
March 7th, 2026 02:26
Light
Kevin Hulme said:
All Gas fires or Electric now. But the Coal fire my Grandmother had was something else.
Proper Fire . Poem brought back Memories.
March 6th, 2026 19:39
Kevin Hulme said:
All Gas fires or Electric now. But the Coal fire my Grandmother had was something else.
Proper Fire . Poem brought back Memories.
March 6th, 2026 19:39
Light
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, there’s something peaceful in the way this moves from ember to flame to memory. The fire becomes more than warmth…it becomes a way of holding the day a little longer before night fully settles in. That final image says it perfectly…“it lives burning in one\'s head.” Beautifully crafted, as always, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 6th, 2026 13:25
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, there’s something peaceful in the way this moves from ember to flame to memory. The fire becomes more than warmth…it becomes a way of holding the day a little longer before night fully settles in. That final image says it perfectly…“it lives burning in one\'s head.” Beautifully crafted, as always, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 6th, 2026 13:25
Light
Friendship said:
This poem explores the transformative power of light, particularly in the context of memories, hope, and the cyclical nature of day and night. It illustrates how light—both literal and metaphorical—can illuminate our experiences and emotions, bringing warmth and life to what may feel lost or forgotten.
March 6th, 2026 08:23
Friendship said:
This poem explores the transformative power of light, particularly in the context of memories, hope, and the cyclical nature of day and night. It illustrates how light—both literal and metaphorical—can illuminate our experiences and emotions, bringing warmth and life to what may feel lost or forgotten.
March 6th, 2026 08:23
Light
David Wakeling said:
This is quite deep. I like the structure as usual.Excellent.All about darkness and hope being control by fire.A powerful piece mi amigo
March 6th, 2026 04:19
David Wakeling said:
This is quite deep. I like the structure as usual.Excellent.All about darkness and hope being control by fire.A powerful piece mi amigo
March 6th, 2026 04:19
A poet\'s journey
Syd said:
Brilliant! Absolutely brilliant 👏
Very relatable and very well written.
- Syd
March 6th, 2026 01:33
Syd said:
Brilliant! Absolutely brilliant 👏
Very relatable and very well written.
- Syd
March 6th, 2026 01:33
Fragile
Goldfinch60 said:
That star is out there for us all soren and we will all be free when we get there.
Andy
March 6th, 2026 01:27
Goldfinch60 said:
That star is out there for us all soren and we will all be free when we get there.
Andy
March 6th, 2026 01:27
Fragile
David Wakeling said:
Well said.VEry well constructed. Very pleasant to read. A summary of the Human condition god bad and lead in our ass.TAke a bow mi amigo
March 5th, 2026 18:10
David Wakeling said:
Well said.VEry well constructed. Very pleasant to read. A summary of the Human condition god bad and lead in our ass.TAke a bow mi amigo
March 5th, 2026 18:10
Fragile
Friendship said:
Your poem \"Fragile\" explores the tension between human aspirations for freedom and immortality and the inherent limitations imposed by our physical existence. The imagery of being \"prisoners\" of the world highlights the struggles of human existence, where our physical bodies, represented by the \"anchor of mass\" and \"ankle of glass,\" confine us to a mortal state. The theme revolves around the paradox of human evolution and the quest for transcendence, ultimately suggesting that despite our advancements, we remain bound by the laws of nature and the reality of entropy.
March 5th, 2026 18:09
Friendship said:
Your poem \"Fragile\" explores the tension between human aspirations for freedom and immortality and the inherent limitations imposed by our physical existence. The imagery of being \"prisoners\" of the world highlights the struggles of human existence, where our physical bodies, represented by the \"anchor of mass\" and \"ankle of glass,\" confine us to a mortal state. The theme revolves around the paradox of human evolution and the quest for transcendence, ultimately suggesting that despite our advancements, we remain bound by the laws of nature and the reality of entropy.
March 5th, 2026 18:09
Fragile
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this made me think about how often humanity imagines escape… from gravity, from limits, even from time itself. Your poem gently reminds us that fragility travels with us wherever we go. That last line stayed with me: “Though we evolve we dissolve as we reach the farthest star.” A thoughtful reflection on our place in the universe. Well done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 5th, 2026 16:01
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this made me think about how often humanity imagines escape… from gravity, from limits, even from time itself. Your poem gently reminds us that fragility travels with us wherever we go. That last line stayed with me: “Though we evolve we dissolve as we reach the farthest star.” A thoughtful reflection on our place in the universe. Well done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 5th, 2026 16:01
Fragile
Lorenz said:
we are prisonners of our own world and its illusions ;And worse still the illusions of others ...
March 5th, 2026 11:15
Lorenz said:
we are prisonners of our own world and its illusions ;And worse still the illusions of others ...
March 5th, 2026 11:15
Fragile
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
a deep write yet clear in its message enjoyed the read and a like
March 5th, 2026 10:12
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
a deep write yet clear in its message enjoyed the read and a like
March 5th, 2026 10:12
Fragile
2781 said:
Could be another case of - because we are matter, does if matter?
March 5th, 2026 08:55
2781 said:
Could be another case of - because we are matter, does if matter?
March 5th, 2026 08:55
Fragile
Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏 said:
way to capture what livings about... I can only imagine if life is being trapped then death must be freedom... when we make it in the after life Soren, let me borrow a pencil
March 5th, 2026 07:51
Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏 said:
way to capture what livings about... I can only imagine if life is being trapped then death must be freedom... when we make it in the after life Soren, let me borrow a pencil
March 5th, 2026 07:51
Forced choice
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words soren showing the troubles we see to have in this world, we were all born on the same world and should be seen as true members of that world and not be segregated.
Andy
March 5th, 2026 01:59
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words soren showing the troubles we see to have in this world, we were all born on the same world and should be seen as true members of that world and not be segregated.
Andy
March 5th, 2026 01:59
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