Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Helios
Sviatoslav Zhabotynskyi said:
A sense of closeness to everything is felt—like pure perception, sudden as an explosion. One could say a lot, but the poem is beautiful.
April 23rd, 2026 01:56
Sviatoslav Zhabotynskyi said:
A sense of closeness to everything is felt—like pure perception, sudden as an explosion. One could say a lot, but the poem is beautiful.
April 23rd, 2026 01:56
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Sviatoslav Zhabotynskyi said:
I think the matter lies in the eye that looks, not in the creation.
April 23rd, 2026 01:52
Sviatoslav Zhabotynskyi said:
I think the matter lies in the eye that looks, not in the creation.
April 23rd, 2026 01:52
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Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words soren, questioning the morality of day to day life.
Andy
April 23rd, 2026 01:21
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words soren, questioning the morality of day to day life.
Andy
April 23rd, 2026 01:21
Helios
Marek said:
This poem in its entirety I could read with my mind\'s eye. It was very intriguing and left me wishing it was longer. Great work!
April 22nd, 2026 22:11
Marek said:
This poem in its entirety I could read with my mind\'s eye. It was very intriguing and left me wishing it was longer. Great work!
April 22nd, 2026 22:11
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NinjaGirl said:
Well written, and interesting thoughts--for me it\'s about intent.
April 22nd, 2026 20:05
NinjaGirl said:
Well written, and interesting thoughts--for me it\'s about intent.
April 22nd, 2026 20:05
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Mutley Ravishes said:
\"Release Man from all condemnation,\" said a wise man. Very difficult!
April 22nd, 2026 18:46
Mutley Ravishes said:
\"Release Man from all condemnation,\" said a wise man. Very difficult!
April 22nd, 2026 18:46
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Kevin Hulme said:
People in glass Houses etc. A lot of our Human Foibles within those lines.
A Fave.
April 22nd, 2026 18:25
Kevin Hulme said:
People in glass Houses etc. A lot of our Human Foibles within those lines.
A Fave.
April 22nd, 2026 18:25
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Lorenz said:
I was searching in the mountain for the blue bird !
I didn\'t steal the orange from the vendor ! Gilbert Becaud . (The orange )
April 22nd, 2026 11:15
Lorenz said:
I was searching in the mountain for the blue bird !
I didn\'t steal the orange from the vendor ! Gilbert Becaud . (The orange )
April 22nd, 2026 11:15
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orchidee said:
Good write SB. Just don\'t let me see KP in all her botox glory! lol.
April 22nd, 2026 09:59
orchidee said:
Good write SB. Just don\'t let me see KP in all her botox glory! lol.
April 22nd, 2026 09:59
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Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this carries a thoughtful, probing energy…like you’re walking through questions we don’t always want to sit with. That progression really stayed with me, how it builds from the small into something bigger. I’ve found myself in that same space, questioning where those lines come from. This lands as reflective and challenging. Strong write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 22nd, 2026 09:22
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this carries a thoughtful, probing energy…like you’re walking through questions we don’t always want to sit with. That progression really stayed with me, how it builds from the small into something bigger. I’ve found myself in that same space, questioning where those lines come from. This lands as reflective and challenging. Strong write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 22nd, 2026 09:22
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Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem masterfully exposes the profound hypocrisy in moral judgments and societal standards, shining a light on the transformative power of truth and authenticity, while questioning the dichotomy in how humanity views actions that are deemed wrong or immoral, particularly in relation to the liberating realms of sexuality and modesty, thereby embracing themes of unapologetic honesty, compassionate judgment, and the unwavering quest for consistency in societal norms regarding morality and propriety. At the end, the poet seems to challenge the reader to reconsider their own moral standards and the hypocrisy that often accompanies societal norms.
April 22nd, 2026 06:52
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem masterfully exposes the profound hypocrisy in moral judgments and societal standards, shining a light on the transformative power of truth and authenticity, while questioning the dichotomy in how humanity views actions that are deemed wrong or immoral, particularly in relation to the liberating realms of sexuality and modesty, thereby embracing themes of unapologetic honesty, compassionate judgment, and the unwavering quest for consistency in societal norms regarding morality and propriety. At the end, the poet seems to challenge the reader to reconsider their own moral standards and the hypocrisy that often accompanies societal norms.
April 22nd, 2026 06:52
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Waiting for Silence said:
Poem raises thoughtful questions about moral inconsistency, hypocrisy, and judgment and confronting the reader with their own imperfections, encouraging self‑reflection rather than condemnation
Good one.
April 22nd, 2026 06:21
Waiting for Silence said:
Poem raises thoughtful questions about moral inconsistency, hypocrisy, and judgment and confronting the reader with their own imperfections, encouraging self‑reflection rather than condemnation
Good one.
April 22nd, 2026 06:21
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Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏 said:
One of those poems where you force your audience into a mirror questioning their morality.
April 22nd, 2026 06:18
Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏 said:
One of those poems where you force your audience into a mirror questioning their morality.
April 22nd, 2026 06:18
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arqios said:
A lyric beauty which just the right sting of tartness! A fave for sure dear Soren🕊️🙏🏻
April 22nd, 2026 06:08
arqios said:
A lyric beauty which just the right sting of tartness! A fave for sure dear Soren🕊️🙏🏻
April 22nd, 2026 06:08
Helios
Goldfinch60 said:
Such wonderful words soren, may Helios always be with us.
Andy
April 22nd, 2026 01:47
Goldfinch60 said:
Such wonderful words soren, may Helios always be with us.
Andy
April 22nd, 2026 01:47
Vermin
Doggerel Dave said:
Been there. hosted them.
That may just conceivably be based on experience...
Realistic write, Soren.
April 21st, 2026 20:45
Doggerel Dave said:
Been there. hosted them.
That may just conceivably be based on experience...
Realistic write, Soren.
April 21st, 2026 20:45
Helios
Abdullah123 said:
Didn\'t realise was rated 18+ until after I read it, but I don\'t regret it😭
Incredibly immersive, and quite the epitome of being poetic
April 21st, 2026 11:52
Abdullah123 said:
Didn\'t realise was rated 18+ until after I read it, but I don\'t regret it😭
Incredibly immersive, and quite the epitome of being poetic
April 21st, 2026 11:52
Vermin
Waiting for Silence said:
good one! :)
very well expressed.... real-life social behavior—people who exploit relationships, overstay welcome, and invade personal boundaries. Comparison of people to pests and parasites is clear and effective. Clearly conveys irritation and discomfort without naming anyone directly
April 21st, 2026 11:22
Waiting for Silence said:
good one! :)
very well expressed.... real-life social behavior—people who exploit relationships, overstay welcome, and invade personal boundaries. Comparison of people to pests and parasites is clear and effective. Clearly conveys irritation and discomfort without naming anyone directly
April 21st, 2026 11:22
Helios
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this feels epic right out of the gate…there’s a surge of energy and scale that just keeps building. It reads like a myth in motion. Powerful piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 21st, 2026 09:08
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this feels epic right out of the gate…there’s a surge of energy and scale that just keeps building. It reads like a myth in motion. Powerful piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 21st, 2026 09:08
Helios
orchidee said:
Good write SB. KP greets me with, similar to the poem\'s first line, that b****y sewage again! lol. I keep dishing it up. heehee.
April 21st, 2026 09:04
orchidee said:
Good write SB. KP greets me with, similar to the poem\'s first line, that b****y sewage again! lol. I keep dishing it up. heehee.
April 21st, 2026 09:04
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