Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Pools
Paul Bell said:
The river never asks questions, or portions blame, it just moves the memory on that little bit futher out to sea..
Water is tranquil though, and it does soothe.
May 6th, 2026 04:47
Paul Bell said:
The river never asks questions, or portions blame, it just moves the memory on that little bit futher out to sea..
Water is tranquil though, and it does soothe.
May 6th, 2026 04:47
Pools
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
the flow of the river nicely put, good write my friend
May 6th, 2026 04:32
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
the flow of the river nicely put, good write my friend
May 6th, 2026 04:32
Pools
Teddy.15 said:
Time past and present. Evolution of a soul yet the river stays the same, I find this to be most elegant dear sorrenbarret 🌹
May 6th, 2026 04:10
Teddy.15 said:
Time past and present. Evolution of a soul yet the river stays the same, I find this to be most elegant dear sorrenbarret 🌹
May 6th, 2026 04:10
A hand full and an eight second ride
Goldfinch60 said:
Eight seconds is a long time to stay on that bronco soren. LOL
Andy
May 6th, 2026 01:45
Goldfinch60 said:
Eight seconds is a long time to stay on that bronco soren. LOL
Andy
May 6th, 2026 01:45
A hand full and an eight second ride
Kevin Hulme said:
Sounds like a handful.
Is the 8 seconds Rule for a Mechanical Bull or a real Bull ?
Good Write.
May 5th, 2026 19:16
Kevin Hulme said:
Sounds like a handful.
Is the 8 seconds Rule for a Mechanical Bull or a real Bull ?
Good Write.
May 5th, 2026 19:16
A hand full and an eight second ride
arqios said:
One of many, a growing breed of veritable bulls. Perhaps they need to bring the mark down to 5 seconds. 🕊️🙏🙃
May 5th, 2026 19:03
arqios said:
One of many, a growing breed of veritable bulls. Perhaps they need to bring the mark down to 5 seconds. 🕊️🙏🙃
May 5th, 2026 19:03
A hand full and an eight second ride
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, that image of her ambitions casting shadows on the sun…powerful. It carries that sense of scale…like she’s larger than anything around her. Strong piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 5th, 2026 10:16
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, that image of her ambitions casting shadows on the sun…powerful. It carries that sense of scale…like she’s larger than anything around her. Strong piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 5th, 2026 10:16
A hand full and an eight second ride
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
great write, much enjoyed
May 5th, 2026 09:01
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
great write, much enjoyed
May 5th, 2026 09:01
A hand full and an eight second ride
Friendship said:
This is a very complex poem. On one hand, you\'re talking about a bull; on the other hand, you\'re describing the characteristics of a human female. This poem could be read in many different ways, but these are the 2 ways I got it.
This poem explores the complexities of a passionate and dynamic woman who embodies strength, ambition, and independence. The poet seems to admire her qualities but also recognizes the challenges she poses in a relationship, suggesting a mix of awe and the inevitability of failure in trying to keep up with her. The poet explores the dynamics of attraction and the difficulties of relating to someone who embodies such strength and independence, reflecting on broader themes of love and self-awareness. A skillfully crafted poem, however, the bull\'s persistent nature makes it highly resistant to safeguarding; caution advises steering clear of its path, for unprotected exposure to its obstinacy would be ill-advised.
May 5th, 2026 08:47
Friendship said:
This is a very complex poem. On one hand, you\'re talking about a bull; on the other hand, you\'re describing the characteristics of a human female. This poem could be read in many different ways, but these are the 2 ways I got it.
This poem explores the complexities of a passionate and dynamic woman who embodies strength, ambition, and independence. The poet seems to admire her qualities but also recognizes the challenges she poses in a relationship, suggesting a mix of awe and the inevitability of failure in trying to keep up with her. The poet explores the dynamics of attraction and the difficulties of relating to someone who embodies such strength and independence, reflecting on broader themes of love and self-awareness. A skillfully crafted poem, however, the bull\'s persistent nature makes it highly resistant to safeguarding; caution advises steering clear of its path, for unprotected exposure to its obstinacy would be ill-advised.
May 5th, 2026 08:47
A hand full and an eight second ride
Thomas W Case said:
She’s written like force more than person—myth energy breaking through human skin, and you don’t flinch from it.
The ending lands well, but you might sharpen the restraint in a few lines so the power doesn’t blur into excess.
May 5th, 2026 07:33
Thomas W Case said:
She’s written like force more than person—myth energy breaking through human skin, and you don’t flinch from it.
The ending lands well, but you might sharpen the restraint in a few lines so the power doesn’t blur into excess.
May 5th, 2026 07:33
A hand full and an eight second ride
David Wakeling said:
Sounds like an amazing woman.But sometimes there is too much to cope with.Very interesting poem that can be taken many different ways
May 5th, 2026 06:51
David Wakeling said:
Sounds like an amazing woman.But sometimes there is too much to cope with.Very interesting poem that can be taken many different ways
May 5th, 2026 06:51
A hand full and an eight second ride
Lorenz said:
All this is pretty exhausting for an old wingless Mercury native like me...
May 5th, 2026 06:35
Lorenz said:
All this is pretty exhausting for an old wingless Mercury native like me...
May 5th, 2026 06:35
A hand full and an eight second ride
orchidee said:
I thought this was about when ya met KP! Not that I\'m jealous. I just say \'poor you! lol.
Or that it was about when you took a bus ride for one stop, of about eight seconds. lol.
May 5th, 2026 04:33
orchidee said:
I thought this was about when ya met KP! Not that I\'m jealous. I just say \'poor you! lol.
Or that it was about when you took a bus ride for one stop, of about eight seconds. lol.
May 5th, 2026 04:33
A hand full and an eight second ride
Neville said:
Well now you put it that way, I can both see and feel exactly what you mean .. Neville
May 5th, 2026 04:27
Neville said:
Well now you put it that way, I can both see and feel exactly what you mean .. Neville
May 5th, 2026 04:27
A hand full and an eight second ride
Salvia.S said:
Too much woman, too good a poem. Loved it!!
May 5th, 2026 03:59
Salvia.S said:
Too much woman, too good a poem. Loved it!!
May 5th, 2026 03:59
After the fact
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words showing the errors in life soren.
Andy
May 5th, 2026 01:23
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words showing the errors in life soren.
Andy
May 5th, 2026 01:23
Gone
NafisaSB said:
leaving behind the baggage of the past, and moving forward courageously with only the memories embedded in your mind - this is a bold and brave step in the right direction - bravo !
May 4th, 2026 23:29
NafisaSB said:
leaving behind the baggage of the past, and moving forward courageously with only the memories embedded in your mind - this is a bold and brave step in the right direction - bravo !
May 4th, 2026 23:29
After the fact
Kevin Hulme said:
We can look back on History and say \'What if\'.
I remember reading once that when the Titanic was getting Ready, it\'s Propeller or Screw was damaged, so they got one from another Ship.
If only there wasn\'t another one handy. A few more days could have made all the difference.
A good Write.
May 4th, 2026 18:42
Kevin Hulme said:
We can look back on History and say \'What if\'.
I remember reading once that when the Titanic was getting Ready, it\'s Propeller or Screw was damaged, so they got one from another Ship.
If only there wasn\'t another one handy. A few more days could have made all the difference.
A good Write.
May 4th, 2026 18:42
After the fact
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this carries a real weight…layered contradictions stacking up until it feels almost impossible to untangle. And that place between yesterday and what’s coming…yeah, that’s a hard space to stand in. Strong piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 4th, 2026 12:42
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this carries a real weight…layered contradictions stacking up until it feels almost impossible to untangle. And that place between yesterday and what’s coming…yeah, that’s a hard space to stand in. Strong piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 4th, 2026 12:42
Resciprocity’s warning
mylastwrites said:
I loved this. The play on words was fantastic. Great write.
May 4th, 2026 12:12
mylastwrites said:
I loved this. The play on words was fantastic. Great write.
May 4th, 2026 12:12
After the fact
Salvia.S said:
Brutal list of everything done too late. Watering grass in the rain, gun fired now disarm. That line \'how do you unknot a snarl with both ends fixed \' is perfect. Clean and merciless. Nicely written!!
May 4th, 2026 09:20
Salvia.S said:
Brutal list of everything done too late. Watering grass in the rain, gun fired now disarm. That line \'how do you unknot a snarl with both ends fixed \' is perfect. Clean and merciless. Nicely written!!
May 4th, 2026 09:20
After the fact
Friendship said:
Nicely said. Your poem explores themes of time, consequence, and the struggle to reconcile past actions with present realities. It reflects on the inevitability of change and the challenges posed by memories and regrets.
May 4th, 2026 07:36
Friendship said:
Nicely said. Your poem explores themes of time, consequence, and the struggle to reconcile past actions with present realities. It reflects on the inevitability of change and the challenges posed by memories and regrets.
May 4th, 2026 07:36
After the fact
GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀 said:
So much in this poem based on facts of the world we live in. Well done my friend
May 4th, 2026 07:34
GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀 said:
So much in this poem based on facts of the world we live in. Well done my friend
May 4th, 2026 07:34
After the fact
arqios said:
The unknotting seems a Gordian dilemma, keep the Damocles sword away and engage that physiotherapist of life🙏🏻🙏🏻
May 4th, 2026 07:22
arqios said:
The unknotting seems a Gordian dilemma, keep the Damocles sword away and engage that physiotherapist of life🙏🏻🙏🏻
May 4th, 2026 07:22
After the fact
David Wakeling said:
Its too late to shut the gate after the horse has bolted.Agreat list of examples of too little too late.Pretty much what all Politicians do. An interesting poem
May 4th, 2026 06:49
David Wakeling said:
Its too late to shut the gate after the horse has bolted.Agreat list of examples of too little too late.Pretty much what all Politicians do. An interesting poem
May 4th, 2026 06:49
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