Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Blood money
Goldfinch60 said:
Such little things can create huge problems soren.
Andy
June 2nd, 2026 01:47
Goldfinch60 said:
Such little things can create huge problems soren.
Andy
June 2nd, 2026 01:47
Blood money
Kevin Hulme said:
The Leaflet you get in a Box of Pills that say : \'Side Effects\' is like \'War and Peace\'.
I\'m on some at the moment and are giving me Stomach ache. I\'m like John Hurt in \'Alien\'.
Well written.
June 1st, 2026 20:39
Kevin Hulme said:
The Leaflet you get in a Box of Pills that say : \'Side Effects\' is like \'War and Peace\'.
I\'m on some at the moment and are giving me Stomach ache. I\'m like John Hurt in \'Alien\'.
Well written.
June 1st, 2026 20:39
Blood money
Friendship said:
Well written; the truth was said. Your poem discusses the commercialization of health care, emphasizing the negative consequences of pharmaceuticals. It reflects on the widespread use of medications that may cause more harm than good, illustrating a sense of betrayal between healthcare providers and patients.
June 1st, 2026 18:19
Friendship said:
Well written; the truth was said. Your poem discusses the commercialization of health care, emphasizing the negative consequences of pharmaceuticals. It reflects on the widespread use of medications that may cause more harm than good, illustrating a sense of betrayal between healthcare providers and patients.
June 1st, 2026 18:19
Blood money
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this has some serious bite. The relentless rhythm gives it the feeling of an indictment...one charge after another, each building on the last. Whether one agrees with every conclusion or not, the frustration and distrust come through loud and clear. Powerful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 1st, 2026 17:54
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this has some serious bite. The relentless rhythm gives it the feeling of an indictment...one charge after another, each building on the last. Whether one agrees with every conclusion or not, the frustration and distrust come through loud and clear. Powerful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 1st, 2026 17:54
Archetype of man
Zelda Vanrooyen said:
Wowww the words and the message it conveys..well written
June 1st, 2026 13:15
Zelda Vanrooyen said:
Wowww the words and the message it conveys..well written
June 1st, 2026 13:15
Little one
NafisaSB said:
Can imagine the little one’s plight and fright- you have described his trauma so amazingly
June 1st, 2026 10:02
NafisaSB said:
Can imagine the little one’s plight and fright- you have described his trauma so amazingly
June 1st, 2026 10:02
Blood money
David Wakeling said:
This raises a problems with the medical profession.What ever medicine they give has side effects.Often the side effects are worse than the ailment.this is so cleverly done in the poem. I admire the internal rhyming.You have truly become a master at that skill.Well done amigo
June 1st, 2026 05:44
David Wakeling said:
This raises a problems with the medical profession.What ever medicine they give has side effects.Often the side effects are worse than the ailment.this is so cleverly done in the poem. I admire the internal rhyming.You have truly become a master at that skill.Well done amigo
June 1st, 2026 05:44
Blood money
arqios said:
Ingeniously braided together, Soren. Most thoroughly enjoyed🕊️🙏
June 1st, 2026 05:09
arqios said:
Ingeniously braided together, Soren. Most thoroughly enjoyed🕊️🙏
June 1st, 2026 05:09
Better than who?
Durdica Porobija said:
The poem is reflective, as indicated by a series of rhetorical questions. A rhetorical question is a stylistic figure of thought. In addition, these questions are accumulated. Accumulation is also a stylistic figure that develops the proliferation of discourse, analytical details in your poem, all in order to shatter the imagined image of one\'s own goodness as opposed to the evil of other people. It is elaborated and a biblical reference: Do not judge, or you too will be judged!
June 1st, 2026 02:42
Durdica Porobija said:
The poem is reflective, as indicated by a series of rhetorical questions. A rhetorical question is a stylistic figure of thought. In addition, these questions are accumulated. Accumulation is also a stylistic figure that develops the proliferation of discourse, analytical details in your poem, all in order to shatter the imagined image of one\'s own goodness as opposed to the evil of other people. It is elaborated and a biblical reference: Do not judge, or you too will be judged!
June 1st, 2026 02:42
Archetype of man
Goldfinch60 said:
So many out there like this soren. Fine words.
Andy
June 1st, 2026 01:52
Goldfinch60 said:
So many out there like this soren. Fine words.
Andy
June 1st, 2026 01:52
Archetype of man
Friendship said:
Well said; your poem revolves around the seven deadly sins, personified in a character bloated with pride and entitlement. The imagery evokes a sense of grotesque excess, contrasting the character\'s self-perception with his morally repugnant actions.
May 31st, 2026 19:30
Friendship said:
Well said; your poem revolves around the seven deadly sins, personified in a character bloated with pride and entitlement. The imagery evokes a sense of grotesque excess, contrasting the character\'s self-perception with his morally repugnant actions.
May 31st, 2026 19:30
Archetype of man
Kevin Hulme said:
Had an Image of Jabba the Hut.
Can\'t argue with your Sentiments.
A good one.
May 31st, 2026 18:48
Kevin Hulme said:
Had an Image of Jabba the Hut.
Can\'t argue with your Sentiments.
A good one.
May 31st, 2026 18:48
Archetype of man
orchidee said:
Oh dear! I can\'t think very cryptically at present - when did I ever?! lol. But some personal matter requiring my thoughts just now.
Though I don\'t use \'copy and paste\' for my often \'good write\' / \'fine write\' comment.
May 31st, 2026 11:38
orchidee said:
Oh dear! I can\'t think very cryptically at present - when did I ever?! lol. But some personal matter requiring my thoughts just now.
Though I don\'t use \'copy and paste\' for my often \'good write\' / \'fine write\' comment.
May 31st, 2026 11:38
Archetype of man
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, it was the stolen stool of nature that really caught me. Such a brilliant image. The figure isn\'t even standing on their own achievement...they\'ve appropriated what was already there and claimed ownership over it. That lands with real force. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 31st, 2026 10:54
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, it was the stolen stool of nature that really caught me. Such a brilliant image. The figure isn\'t even standing on their own achievement...they\'ve appropriated what was already there and claimed ownership over it. That lands with real force. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 31st, 2026 10:54
Archetype of man
Paul Bell said:
Coming to a town near you, a man of the people, or at least that\'s what it says on the can.
Would you buy a used car off this guy, service record included.
The world it seems is lead by these people, and they don\'t seem to die out either.
May 31st, 2026 07:36
Paul Bell said:
Coming to a town near you, a man of the people, or at least that\'s what it says on the can.
Would you buy a used car off this guy, service record included.
The world it seems is lead by these people, and they don\'t seem to die out either.
May 31st, 2026 07:36
Archetype of man
arqios said:
Reminiscent of the 7 deadly sins, ironically seen as the hero by many and magnified in a mirror reflection by self. Something like that. 🕊️🙏
May 31st, 2026 06:58
arqios said:
Reminiscent of the 7 deadly sins, ironically seen as the hero by many and magnified in a mirror reflection by self. Something like that. 🕊️🙏
May 31st, 2026 06:58
Archetype of man
David Wakeling said:
Wow that is certainly one of the archetypes.Probably not his finest hour but accurate.An interesting read.Well done
May 31st, 2026 05:17
David Wakeling said:
Wow that is certainly one of the archetypes.Probably not his finest hour but accurate.An interesting read.Well done
May 31st, 2026 05:17
Archetype of man
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
I know a few like that, good write
May 31st, 2026 03:30
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
I know a few like that, good write
May 31st, 2026 03:30
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