Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Poetry droppings
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this gave me a good chuckle, my friend. 😄 As soon as I saw the title, I checked to make sure my poem wiped itself! 🤣 Then I realized it was a senryu. 😅 There is a wonderfully curmudgeonly energy here...part lament, part satire, and part defense of the craft you grew up loving. Well done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 11th, 2026 08:42
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this gave me a good chuckle, my friend. 😄 As soon as I saw the title, I checked to make sure my poem wiped itself! 🤣 Then I realized it was a senryu. 😅 There is a wonderfully curmudgeonly energy here...part lament, part satire, and part defense of the craft you grew up loving. Well done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 11th, 2026 08:42
Poetry droppings
Lorenz said:
A few people on this site still have something to say that doesn\'t rely on the contrived creativity of an intelligent artefact !
June 11th, 2026 07:39
Lorenz said:
A few people on this site still have something to say that doesn\'t rely on the contrived creativity of an intelligent artefact !
June 11th, 2026 07:39
Poetry droppings
Paul Bell said:
I suppose every generation formulates their own poetry.
Rap comes to mind as one of them.
Though when I have to google some poems to get the phrase right, I might think to myself, theres another poem around the corner I can read.
June 11th, 2026 06:01
Paul Bell said:
I suppose every generation formulates their own poetry.
Rap comes to mind as one of them.
Though when I have to google some poems to get the phrase right, I might think to myself, theres another poem around the corner I can read.
June 11th, 2026 06:01
Poetry droppings
David Wakeling said:
Oh I agree here. So often I have seen the non-words \"wap\" or \"wassup\". It strikes me as an excuse for not being able to write coherently.You certainly feel passionately about the issue.And rightly so.A great poem. Here here
June 11th, 2026 04:22
David Wakeling said:
Oh I agree here. So often I have seen the non-words \"wap\" or \"wassup\". It strikes me as an excuse for not being able to write coherently.You certainly feel passionately about the issue.And rightly so.A great poem. Here here
June 11th, 2026 04:22
Flock
Goldfinch60 said:
They just want to control us into their ways not the way good life is.
Andy
June 11th, 2026 01:50
Goldfinch60 said:
They just want to control us into their ways not the way good life is.
Andy
June 11th, 2026 01:50
Flock
Kevin Hulme said:
\'I\'m not a Number, I\'m a free Man\'. As Number 6 once said.
Good Write.
June 10th, 2026 18:48
Kevin Hulme said:
\'I\'m not a Number, I\'m a free Man\'. As Number 6 once said.
Good Write.
June 10th, 2026 18:48
Burnt perspectives
GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀 said:
A most powerful write delivered with important lessons.
June 10th, 2026 16:54
GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀 said:
A most powerful write delivered with important lessons.
June 10th, 2026 16:54
Flock
Paul Bell said:
When we all became mini capitalists, we unwittingly sold our soles.
The good things in life were dangled in front of us and we all jumped.
June 10th, 2026 12:05
Paul Bell said:
When we all became mini capitalists, we unwittingly sold our soles.
The good things in life were dangled in front of us and we all jumped.
June 10th, 2026 12:05
Flock
orchidee said:
Good write SB. KP\'s in the news, refusing to pay out for something!
June 10th, 2026 10:16
orchidee said:
Good write SB. KP\'s in the news, refusing to pay out for something!
June 10th, 2026 10:16
Flock
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is one heck of a poem. There is real bite in this from the opening sentence onward...angry, provocative, and completely unapologetic in the way it challenges complacency and conformity. It grabs hold and doesn\'t let go. Powerful write, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 10th, 2026 08:14
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is one heck of a poem. There is real bite in this from the opening sentence onward...angry, provocative, and completely unapologetic in the way it challenges complacency and conformity. It grabs hold and doesn\'t let go. Powerful write, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 10th, 2026 08:14
Bath in a cloud
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, you got me with this one. The imagery is rich, fluid, and immersive...it feels like stepping into a dream where water, steam, and self-discovery all occupy the same space. There is something wonderfully hypnotic about it. Great job on this, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 10th, 2026 08:05
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, you got me with this one. The imagery is rich, fluid, and immersive...it feels like stepping into a dream where water, steam, and self-discovery all occupy the same space. There is something wonderfully hypnotic about it. Great job on this, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 10th, 2026 08:05
Flock
soheil khodaparasti said:
The most painful point of the poem’s dystopian vision is the voluntary submission to bondage and the normalization of suffering.
June 10th, 2026 08:04
soheil khodaparasti said:
The most painful point of the poem’s dystopian vision is the voluntary submission to bondage and the normalization of suffering.
June 10th, 2026 08:04
Flock
RSM0812 said:
Sheep we are to keep our obedience full of silence im afraid. A fav
June 10th, 2026 07:58
RSM0812 said:
Sheep we are to keep our obedience full of silence im afraid. A fav
June 10th, 2026 07:58
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Lorenz said:
When the wool from the nations that keeps us warm is sold at Walmart ,what can we do ? Shout our outrage while running naked across the lunar rooftops ?
June 10th, 2026 07:46
Lorenz said:
When the wool from the nations that keeps us warm is sold at Walmart ,what can we do ? Shout our outrage while running naked across the lunar rooftops ?
June 10th, 2026 07:46
Flock
David Wakeling said:
This has so much to consider.We sell ourselves to bondage.Life certainly feels that way at times. Retreating like sheep when the wolves are at the door.An amazing piece here compadre
June 10th, 2026 06:14
David Wakeling said:
This has so much to consider.We sell ourselves to bondage.Life certainly feels that way at times. Retreating like sheep when the wolves are at the door.An amazing piece here compadre
June 10th, 2026 06:14
Bath in a cloud
Kevin Hulme said:
Never been in a Turkish Bath. Probably never been in a Bath for that matter. But reading Playboy years back was quite Hot.
June 9th, 2026 18:50
Kevin Hulme said:
Never been in a Turkish Bath. Probably never been in a Bath for that matter. But reading Playboy years back was quite Hot.
June 9th, 2026 18:50
Bath in a cloud
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a vivid, almost tactile intensity in this—like weather becoming a body, and the body becoming weather in return.
And what lands most is that movement from obscurity into clarity… as if the fog isn’t just hiding things, but gently preparing them to be seen.
June 9th, 2026 18:10
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a vivid, almost tactile intensity in this—like weather becoming a body, and the body becoming weather in return.
And what lands most is that movement from obscurity into clarity… as if the fog isn’t just hiding things, but gently preparing them to be seen.
June 9th, 2026 18:10
Bath in a cloud
Paul Bell said:
Tried the Turkish bath once, where after sweating the impurities out, one was then advised to jump into a freezing pool.
Don\'t know what one was the worst.
Naked people are not nice to watch, beats me why they have nudists beaches.
June 9th, 2026 14:35
Paul Bell said:
Tried the Turkish bath once, where after sweating the impurities out, one was then advised to jump into a freezing pool.
Don\'t know what one was the worst.
Naked people are not nice to watch, beats me why they have nudists beaches.
June 9th, 2026 14:35
Look closer
Durdica Porobija said:
This poem, based on chiasmus and antitheses, is very playful. And it certainly shows that distances are significantly closer than we think. Sort of.
June 9th, 2026 13:44
Durdica Porobija said:
This poem, based on chiasmus and antitheses, is very playful. And it certainly shows that distances are significantly closer than we think. Sort of.
June 9th, 2026 13:44
Look closer
Durdica Porobija said:
This song, based on chiasm and antithesis, is very playful. Moreover, it shows that absolute opposites are closer than we think, that one arises from the other. Something like that.
June 9th, 2026 13:41
Durdica Porobija said:
This song, based on chiasm and antithesis, is very playful. Moreover, it shows that absolute opposites are closer than we think, that one arises from the other. Something like that.
June 9th, 2026 13:41
Bath in a cloud
Neville said:
what\'s not to like .. I\'ve got a date with a sauna later myself & I\'m gonna leave her squeaky clean .. Neville
June 9th, 2026 12:52
Neville said:
what\'s not to like .. I\'ve got a date with a sauna later myself & I\'m gonna leave her squeaky clean .. Neville
June 9th, 2026 12:52
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