Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Within
Paul Bell said:
This could be god saying, play by the rules, I\'ll look after you.
Don\'t play by the rules, you perish.
The earth is a great place, it provides for us, sadly we don\'t look after it, so if people perish it might just be a warning to try harder.
November 27th, 2025 09:14
Paul Bell said:
This could be god saying, play by the rules, I\'ll look after you.
Don\'t play by the rules, you perish.
The earth is a great place, it provides for us, sadly we don\'t look after it, so if people perish it might just be a warning to try harder.
November 27th, 2025 09:14
Within
Paul Bell said:
This could be god saying, play by the rules, I\'ll look after you.
Don\'t play by the rules, you perish.
The earth is a great place, it provides for us, sadly we don\'t look after it, so if people perish it might just be a warning to try harder.
November 27th, 2025 09:14
Paul Bell said:
This could be god saying, play by the rules, I\'ll look after you.
Don\'t play by the rules, you perish.
The earth is a great place, it provides for us, sadly we don\'t look after it, so if people perish it might just be a warning to try harder.
November 27th, 2025 09:14
Within
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren… the way you braid breath, power, and ruin… it’s stunning. You caught the divine in every element without flinching from the cost. This one lingers and is a personal fave For me, it speaks to the reality of God\'s omniscience far better than most. I am personally panentheist: God is both in everything, but also transcends everything. This poem speaks to God within, which is as important to me as God outside. For all those reasons and a more, a personal fave.🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 27th, 2025 07:30
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren… the way you braid breath, power, and ruin… it’s stunning. You caught the divine in every element without flinching from the cost. This one lingers and is a personal fave For me, it speaks to the reality of God\'s omniscience far better than most. I am personally panentheist: God is both in everything, but also transcends everything. This poem speaks to God within, which is as important to me as God outside. For all those reasons and a more, a personal fave.🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 27th, 2025 07:30
Within
Friendship said:
Your poem explores the omnipresence of God in nature and the cycle of life, death, and rebirth. It portrays God as a force inherent in natural elements, suggesting a deep connection between the divine and the world around us. Yet the poet aims to evoke a sense of reverence for nature and a deeper understanding of the holy, encouraging readers to find the sacred in their surroundings and to reflect on the interconnectedness of life and death.
November 27th, 2025 06:53
Friendship said:
Your poem explores the omnipresence of God in nature and the cycle of life, death, and rebirth. It portrays God as a force inherent in natural elements, suggesting a deep connection between the divine and the world around us. Yet the poet aims to evoke a sense of reverence for nature and a deeper understanding of the holy, encouraging readers to find the sacred in their surroundings and to reflect on the interconnectedness of life and death.
November 27th, 2025 06:53
Within
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Wow- \'She purifies and consumes from crumbling tombs to birthing wombs\' what a line!!!
November 27th, 2025 04:49
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Wow- \'She purifies and consumes from crumbling tombs to birthing wombs\' what a line!!!
November 27th, 2025 04:49
Within
Teddy.15 said:
Yes, indeed. Happy thanksgiving 🦃 my dear sorrenbarret 🌹
November 27th, 2025 04:09
Teddy.15 said:
Yes, indeed. Happy thanksgiving 🦃 my dear sorrenbarret 🌹
November 27th, 2025 04:09
Within
orchidee said:
Good write SB. KP was breathing but had bad breath. It\'s the sewage I been feeding her. lol.
November 27th, 2025 03:29
orchidee said:
Good write SB. KP was breathing but had bad breath. It\'s the sewage I been feeding her. lol.
November 27th, 2025 03:29
America
Goldfinch60 said:
It sees to be like this throughout the world soren. Maybe one day people will realise that bringing goodness and love to the world is the way to go.
Andy
November 27th, 2025 02:20
Goldfinch60 said:
It sees to be like this throughout the world soren. Maybe one day people will realise that bringing goodness and love to the world is the way to go.
Andy
November 27th, 2025 02:20
America
NinjaGirl said:
I\'d be more hopeless about the country if I had known it had been peachy all along, but I know there has always been issues, and probably always will be.
November 26th, 2025 20:22
NinjaGirl said:
I\'d be more hopeless about the country if I had known it had been peachy all along, but I know there has always been issues, and probably always will be.
November 26th, 2025 20:22
America
Kevin Hulme said:
\'Hell in a Handcart \' I think the expression is .
And the U.K. not far behind.
A Raw Poem that packs a Punch.
Good Write.
November 26th, 2025 20:18
Kevin Hulme said:
\'Hell in a Handcart \' I think the expression is .
And the U.K. not far behind.
A Raw Poem that packs a Punch.
Good Write.
November 26th, 2025 20:18
America
Doggerel Dave said:
Not like you to get political, Soren - something wrong?
November 26th, 2025 18:59
Doggerel Dave said:
Not like you to get political, Soren - something wrong?
November 26th, 2025 18:59
America
arqios said:
Reminds me of the moot Boomer\'s apology for the inheritance of liability and uncertainty, of which this observant poem has directed our thoughts to. A tinge of sadness and realistic resolve.
November 26th, 2025 18:48
arqios said:
Reminds me of the moot Boomer\'s apology for the inheritance of liability and uncertainty, of which this observant poem has directed our thoughts to. A tinge of sadness and realistic resolve.
November 26th, 2025 18:48
America
Joseph M Marion said:
Over the years this is very true of exactly what happened to our country very well written I love this
November 26th, 2025 14:17
Joseph M Marion said:
Over the years this is very true of exactly what happened to our country very well written I love this
November 26th, 2025 14:17
America
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, you blend prophecy, satire, and lament in a way only you carry… the imagery is unflinching and the despair honest. It reads like someone standing in the ruins, still speaking. Well done, Soren. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 26th, 2025 11:22
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, you blend prophecy, satire, and lament in a way only you carry… the imagery is unflinching and the despair honest. It reads like someone standing in the ruins, still speaking. Well done, Soren. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 26th, 2025 11:22
America
Friendship said:
This poem revolves around the disillusionment and decay of the American dream, reflecting a sense of loss, corruption, and hopelessness. The poet explores themes of greed, technology, environmental degradation, and critiques of leadership and societal values. The imagery you painted was of a nation in decline, grappling with the consequences of unchecked desire and moral decay. Yet this poem serves as a lament for the lost ideals of America and a call to awareness regarding the moral and ethical decline in society. It seeks to provoke thought and reflection on the state of the nation and the consequences of its actions. Overall, this poem encapsulates a profound critique of modern America, utilizing various literary devices and structural choices to convey its themes effectively.
November 26th, 2025 09:30
Friendship said:
This poem revolves around the disillusionment and decay of the American dream, reflecting a sense of loss, corruption, and hopelessness. The poet explores themes of greed, technology, environmental degradation, and critiques of leadership and societal values. The imagery you painted was of a nation in decline, grappling with the consequences of unchecked desire and moral decay. Yet this poem serves as a lament for the lost ideals of America and a call to awareness regarding the moral and ethical decline in society. It seeks to provoke thought and reflection on the state of the nation and the consequences of its actions. Overall, this poem encapsulates a profound critique of modern America, utilizing various literary devices and structural choices to convey its themes effectively.
November 26th, 2025 09:30
America
orchidee said:
You got that turkey in for tomorrow?! heehee. Nope, not THAT \'turkey\' - that dangerous clown, I mean.
November 26th, 2025 09:03
orchidee said:
You got that turkey in for tomorrow?! heehee. Nope, not THAT \'turkey\' - that dangerous clown, I mean.
November 26th, 2025 09:03
America
Lorenz said:
America is this planet where the worst of the weird or the best of the beast are possible...
November 26th, 2025 07:14
Lorenz said:
America is this planet where the worst of the weird or the best of the beast are possible...
November 26th, 2025 07:14
America
Paul Bell said:
America wanted change, and change they got.
One good thing with tornados, they eventually blow out.
Britain doesn\'t fare any better, we have a dip stick in power who thinks he\'s the best thing since sliced bread.
November 26th, 2025 05:39
Paul Bell said:
America wanted change, and change they got.
One good thing with tornados, they eventually blow out.
Britain doesn\'t fare any better, we have a dip stick in power who thinks he\'s the best thing since sliced bread.
November 26th, 2025 05:39
America
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
very well put, America is now unrecognisable to what it was
November 26th, 2025 04:34
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
very well put, America is now unrecognisable to what it was
November 26th, 2025 04:34
Empty
Aman 12 said:
the emptiness after nurturing is haunting but inevitable.
November 26th, 2025 04:28
Aman 12 said:
the emptiness after nurturing is haunting but inevitable.
November 26th, 2025 04:28
America
orchidee said:
Good write SB. If only it was as easy as some guy changing his rug / barnet / dodgy wig on his head! You know the guy.
November 26th, 2025 03:52
orchidee said:
Good write SB. If only it was as easy as some guy changing his rug / barnet / dodgy wig on his head! You know the guy.
November 26th, 2025 03:52
There is no love
Goldfinch60 said:
True words in our modern day society soren but there are still many who treat others with respect and true love in our world.
Andy
November 26th, 2025 02:22
Goldfinch60 said:
True words in our modern day society soren but there are still many who treat others with respect and true love in our world.
Andy
November 26th, 2025 02:22
There is no love
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend… the metaphors cut deep… the priest, the teacher, the poet, the doctor… you weave a full reckoning with what it means to live in a world built on exchange. It’s bold and unsparing. Love this piece tons! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 25th, 2025 23:06
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend… the metaphors cut deep… the priest, the teacher, the poet, the doctor… you weave a full reckoning with what it means to live in a world built on exchange. It’s bold and unsparing. Love this piece tons! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 25th, 2025 23:06
Sleep
Keyara S Trotman said:
Dearest Soren, this is so sleek, shaky, as for the picture you gave and your words of choosing. My favorite is the start when you
“A drowsy fog covers a lazy sun\'s eye
that dreams in dim shadows of a closed sky
Rolling rain paints in transparent tears of pain
nature\'s slumber, that upon awakening leaves no stain”
Lovely write, I enjoyed it so much. It’s as if you’ve gotten the ocean quite sprung 🥂❤️
November 25th, 2025 11:48
Keyara S Trotman said:
Dearest Soren, this is so sleek, shaky, as for the picture you gave and your words of choosing. My favorite is the start when you
“A drowsy fog covers a lazy sun\'s eye
that dreams in dim shadows of a closed sky
Rolling rain paints in transparent tears of pain
nature\'s slumber, that upon awakening leaves no stain”
Lovely write, I enjoyed it so much. It’s as if you’ve gotten the ocean quite sprung 🥂❤️
November 25th, 2025 11:48
There is no love
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Without a shade of hesitation I hit the fave. This a mirror where our hypocrisy reflects in all its glory. A fantastic work. Please give us more.
November 25th, 2025 10:16
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Without a shade of hesitation I hit the fave. This a mirror where our hypocrisy reflects in all its glory. A fantastic work. Please give us more.
November 25th, 2025 10:16
There is no love
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Woah you wrote of love too, nice to read of a different perspective.
I thought only women were prostitutes, but priests are males so am wondering.
I would think they are more molesters if i recall a news video from Europe..
And gah what\'s naked education??
Fantastic poem, awesomely rhymed wow! Kudos!
November 25th, 2025 09:50
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Woah you wrote of love too, nice to read of a different perspective.
I thought only women were prostitutes, but priests are males so am wondering.
I would think they are more molesters if i recall a news video from Europe..
And gah what\'s naked education??
Fantastic poem, awesomely rhymed wow! Kudos!
November 25th, 2025 09:50
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