Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Guilt by association
orchidee said:
Good write SB. KP prepared a game of Russian Roulette for me but she only left one chamber of the gun EMPYTY. She did it on purpose. She said \'You go first, dear!\' lol. Dunno why she complains - I give her protein of apples with worms in. heehee.
December 30th, 2025 04:58
orchidee said:
Good write SB. KP prepared a game of Russian Roulette for me but she only left one chamber of the gun EMPYTY. She did it on purpose. She said \'You go first, dear!\' lol. Dunno why she complains - I give her protein of apples with worms in. heehee.
December 30th, 2025 04:58
Guilt by association
Friendship said:
Well said. Your poem revolves around the concept of \"guilt by association,\" exploring how individuals can be judged or held accountable for the actions or characteristics of those they are connected with. It questions the fairness of such judgments and emphasizes the complexity of relationships and perceptions.
December 30th, 2025 04:50
Friendship said:
Well said. Your poem revolves around the concept of \"guilt by association,\" exploring how individuals can be judged or held accountable for the actions or characteristics of those they are connected with. It questions the fairness of such judgments and emphasizes the complexity of relationships and perceptions.
December 30th, 2025 04:50
Guilt by association
Katie B. said:
Love \"Guilt by association, people\'s interpretation.\" True words spoken. Another great write with a powerful message. Always a pleasure!
-Katie
December 30th, 2025 03:53
Katie B. said:
Love \"Guilt by association, people\'s interpretation.\" True words spoken. Another great write with a powerful message. Always a pleasure!
-Katie
December 30th, 2025 03:53
What we are left
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words soren, life is built inmany ways.
Andy
December 30th, 2025 02:48
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words soren, life is built inmany ways.
Andy
December 30th, 2025 02:48
What we are left
Kevin Hulme said:
I Love it when the Initials of the Builders are found in Old Buildings. Or Graffiti for Centuries Past. A good Write.
December 29th, 2025 21:16
Kevin Hulme said:
I Love it when the Initials of the Builders are found in Old Buildings. Or Graffiti for Centuries Past. A good Write.
December 29th, 2025 21:16
What we are left
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is a quiet tribute to labor and lineage. You trace creation from tree to shelter to inheritance, and by the end the gratitude is implied rather than demanded. That restraint gives the poem its strength. Thoughtful and steady work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 29th, 2025 14:57
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is a quiet tribute to labor and lineage. You trace creation from tree to shelter to inheritance, and by the end the gratitude is implied rather than demanded. That restraint gives the poem its strength. Thoughtful and steady work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 29th, 2025 14:57
What we are left
arqios said:
Our efforts however seemingly insignificant are tactile and allows for a better future like learning from an acting on past history. Thanks for putting the mind on that track🙏🏻🕊️
December 29th, 2025 09:31
arqios said:
Our efforts however seemingly insignificant are tactile and allows for a better future like learning from an acting on past history. Thanks for putting the mind on that track🙏🏻🕊️
December 29th, 2025 09:31
What we are left
Katie B. said:
I really like this one SB! Well done. I always appreciate what you have to share.
December 29th, 2025 08:39
Katie B. said:
I really like this one SB! Well done. I always appreciate what you have to share.
December 29th, 2025 08:39
What we are left
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem explores the theme of labor and legacy, highlighting the connection between the physical act of building (specifically with wood) and the memories and lives that are entwined with that labor. It reflects on how each generation leaves its mark through hard work and the creation of spaces that carry the weight of history.
December 29th, 2025 08:20
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem explores the theme of labor and legacy, highlighting the connection between the physical act of building (specifically with wood) and the memories and lives that are entwined with that labor. It reflects on how each generation leaves its mark through hard work and the creation of spaces that carry the weight of history.
December 29th, 2025 08:20
Eden had no fences until man came
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
great write
December 29th, 2025 05:01
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
great write
December 29th, 2025 05:01
What we are left
Teddy.15 said:
So very beautifully crafted, you are a fine carpenter of poetry my dear sorrenbarret 🌹
December 29th, 2025 04:00
Teddy.15 said:
So very beautifully crafted, you are a fine carpenter of poetry my dear sorrenbarret 🌹
December 29th, 2025 04:00
What we are left
orchidee said:
Good write SB. Yes, I leave KP in a log cabin for months, and throw away the key! lol.
December 29th, 2025 03:29
orchidee said:
Good write SB. Yes, I leave KP in a log cabin for months, and throw away the key! lol.
December 29th, 2025 03:29
Eden had no fences until man came
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderfully very true words Soren, the earth belongs to us all and we should treat it with respect.
Andy
December 29th, 2025 02:46
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderfully very true words Soren, the earth belongs to us all and we should treat it with respect.
Andy
December 29th, 2025 02:46
Eden had no fences until man came
Katie B. said:
The more things change the more they stay the same. I appreciate your work.
December 28th, 2025 08:10
Katie B. said:
The more things change the more they stay the same. I appreciate your work.
December 28th, 2025 08:10
Eden had no fences until man came
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is direct, uncompromising, and necessary. You weave ancient story into modern violence and arrive at a truth that feels almost too obvious…and yet still ignored. The refusal to sanctify borders or greed gives this real moral weight. Strong work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 28th, 2025 07:57
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is direct, uncompromising, and necessary. You weave ancient story into modern violence and arrive at a truth that feels almost too obvious…and yet still ignored. The refusal to sanctify borders or greed gives this real moral weight. Strong work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 28th, 2025 07:57
Eden had no fences until man came
Friendship said:
Your poem revolves around the concept of ownership, specifically the human tendency to claim land and resources, which leads to conflict and suffering. It critiques the notion of property and borders, suggesting that land, like air, should be shared by all rather than owned by individuals or nations. The poem draws connections between biblical narratives and modern conflicts, illustrating a long-standing pattern of violence and jealousy over territorial claims.
December 28th, 2025 05:32
Friendship said:
Your poem revolves around the concept of ownership, specifically the human tendency to claim land and resources, which leads to conflict and suffering. It critiques the notion of property and borders, suggesting that land, like air, should be shared by all rather than owned by individuals or nations. The poem draws connections between biblical narratives and modern conflicts, illustrating a long-standing pattern of violence and jealousy over territorial claims.
December 28th, 2025 05:32
Eden had no fences until man came
Teddy.15 said:
Supremacy is on the rise thanks to a certain outrageous crazy leader and some very naive voters 😢
December 28th, 2025 04:40
Teddy.15 said:
Supremacy is on the rise thanks to a certain outrageous crazy leader and some very naive voters 😢
December 28th, 2025 04:40
Merry Trumpmess
Teddy.15 said:
Kudos, from the other side of the Pond, I seriously cannot believe we are all a part of his show. 🌹
December 28th, 2025 04:26
Teddy.15 said:
Kudos, from the other side of the Pond, I seriously cannot believe we are all a part of his show. 🌹
December 28th, 2025 04:26
Eden had no fences until man came
orchidee said:
Good write SB. I give KP maggoty apples. lol.
December 28th, 2025 03:24
orchidee said:
Good write SB. I give KP maggoty apples. lol.
December 28th, 2025 03:24
Dark passion
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words soren, just showing the fine line in life.
Andy
December 28th, 2025 02:43
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words soren, just showing the fine line in life.
Andy
December 28th, 2025 02:43
Dark passion
Thomas W Case said:
Dark, raw, and unflinching — this pulls you straight into the shadowed edges of experience. The imagery is haunting, yet strangely intimate. Powerful work.
December 27th, 2025 18:34
Thomas W Case said:
Dark, raw, and unflinching — this pulls you straight into the shadowed edges of experience. The imagery is haunting, yet strangely intimate. Powerful work.
December 27th, 2025 18:34
Dark passion
MendedFences27 said:
Making \"love\" to the \"dark shadow\" of \"Life\" \"each breath\" \"between being and death\". Such a dark concept, I wasn\'t sure if it was real. I question the choice but accept it as a way to continue existence. A dark presentation of a chosen existence filled with sexual innuendo and suspense. I loved the woven in rhymes. - Phil A.
December 27th, 2025 15:54
MendedFences27 said:
Making \"love\" to the \"dark shadow\" of \"Life\" \"each breath\" \"between being and death\". Such a dark concept, I wasn\'t sure if it was real. I question the choice but accept it as a way to continue existence. A dark presentation of a chosen existence filled with sexual innuendo and suspense. I loved the woven in rhymes. - Phil A.
December 27th, 2025 15:54
Cold truth
Aloo Denish Obiero said:
The most touching poem I’ve read this week. This is a masterpiece, skillfully and emotionally crafted. Sorrow and pain, joy and happiness, are not exclusive to human, but universal for all life. I\'m reminded of a fundamental scientific truth: the cell is the basic unit of life.
December 27th, 2025 12:50
Aloo Denish Obiero said:
The most touching poem I’ve read this week. This is a masterpiece, skillfully and emotionally crafted. Sorrow and pain, joy and happiness, are not exclusive to human, but universal for all life. I\'m reminded of a fundamental scientific truth: the cell is the basic unit of life.
December 27th, 2025 12:50
Dark passion
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is a fearless meditation on desire entangled with death. You refuse metaphor as a shield and let the imagery do its unsettling work. The result is visceral, uncomfortable, and honest in a way that lingers long after the last line. Strong, strong work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 27th, 2025 09:58
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is a fearless meditation on desire entangled with death. You refuse metaphor as a shield and let the imagery do its unsettling work. The result is visceral, uncomfortable, and honest in a way that lingers long after the last line. Strong, strong work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 27th, 2025 09:58
Dark passion
orchidee said:
Good write SB. Ahhh, so you\'ve spent a bit of time with KP? heehee. I won\'t be jealous - I can\'t get rid of her! lol.
December 27th, 2025 06:18
orchidee said:
Good write SB. Ahhh, so you\'ve spent a bit of time with KP? heehee. I won\'t be jealous - I can\'t get rid of her! lol.
December 27th, 2025 06:18
Dark passion
arqios said:
Life begins in a kind of brightness, but time inevitably scours that early clarity. All the while, the earth waits with its steady, unarguable finality. Set against that stillness, our existence becomes a brief flare that is intense, vivid, and astonishing precisely because it burns for so little time. In that contrast between our momentary blaze and the long quiet that follows, human experience finds its sharpness and its strange beauty.
December 27th, 2025 06:10
arqios said:
Life begins in a kind of brightness, but time inevitably scours that early clarity. All the while, the earth waits with its steady, unarguable finality. Set against that stillness, our existence becomes a brief flare that is intense, vivid, and astonishing precisely because it burns for so little time. In that contrast between our momentary blaze and the long quiet that follows, human experience finds its sharpness and its strange beauty.
December 27th, 2025 06:10
Dark passion
Friendship said:
Your poem masterfully captures the profound dance between life and death, revealing a captivating bond with mortality that inspires and fascinates. It presents death as a mystical companion, highlighting a deep yet complex connection that sparks both wonder and reverence. This dynamic seems to orbit around the themes of love, passion, and the transience of life. The intriguing charm of the unknown and the inevitable destiny of mortality are woven together, portraying death not as something to be dreaded but as something to be welcomed and understood.
December 27th, 2025 05:47
Friendship said:
Your poem masterfully captures the profound dance between life and death, revealing a captivating bond with mortality that inspires and fascinates. It presents death as a mystical companion, highlighting a deep yet complex connection that sparks both wonder and reverence. This dynamic seems to orbit around the themes of love, passion, and the transience of life. The intriguing charm of the unknown and the inevitable destiny of mortality are woven together, portraying death not as something to be dreaded but as something to be welcomed and understood.
December 27th, 2025 05:47
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