Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett



Don\'t mix them up
whats write for me said:

Surreal similarities, good read and thought provoking.

September 16th, 2025 21:51

Suicide an twa
Tristan Robert Lange said:

This is dark and devastating, my friend…passion mistaken for compassion, love bound in the same thrust of the blade. It reads like a dreadful ballad, and it stays with you. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️Very well done, Soren!

September 16th, 2025 15:23

Suicide an twa
NinjaGirl said:

Reminds me of Romeo and Juliet, a love story never to be resolved... Well done, dear friend.

September 16th, 2025 09:32

Suicide an twa
RSM0812 said:

The rhyme scheme of this is complicated and artistic in style. It beckons sadness yet companionship. I enjoyed, very much.

September 16th, 2025 09:24

Suicide an twa
Kevin Hulme said:

Loves a strange old bird. The Intensity can be frightening. Good one.

September 16th, 2025 08:30

Suicide an twa
Friendship said:

Well written, the poem explores the theme of love as an intense, often destructive force that can transcend the physical realm, leading to a tragic union in death. It suggests that the strength of their emotional bond drives the lovers to take extreme measures to remain together, viewing death as a means of escaping a world they deem profane. Yet the poet addresses the topic of suicide in the context of a romantic relationship, highlighting how love can lead individuals to make irreversible decisions. It reflects on the pain of separation and the desire for eternal unity, even at the cost of life. The complexities of love and the pain of separation can lead to desperate actions.

September 16th, 2025 08:24

Flowering tree
arqios said:

That’s probably why it’s arguably the best time of year🕊🙏🏻

September 16th, 2025 08:13

Fallen honor
Keyara S Trotman said:

It’s the “ Shit on on our statues” 😂😂😂😂 overall beautifully written and the background is giving

September 16th, 2025 08:11

Suicide an twa
Teddy.15 said:

As you well know, one of my favourite subjects, and yes I can never make head not tail of it either because each soul has their own definition 🌹 wonderful dearest sorrenbarret 🌹

September 16th, 2025 07:54

Suicide an twa
rebellion_in_sanity said:

It hits like a teain in full speed. Displaces thoughts, yet slows down one to immerse him into a contemplative silence.

September 16th, 2025 07:46

Suicide an twa
Demar Desu said:

Interesting choice in font

September 16th, 2025 07:11

Suicide an twa
TommyDingo said:

Brilliant poem as always! I think myself that love is like a rashomond effect in that it means different things to different people depending on your perspective to the reader this love may same intense but to others including the characters you have wrote it will be understandable!

Great write!

September 16th, 2025 06:27

Suicide an twa
orchidee said:

Good write SB. A dark joke - Suicide? Ooh no, it\'ll be bad for me health!\' Heehee.

September 16th, 2025 05:59

Suicide an twa
Paul Bell said:

Love sure can be toxic, and yet the word love doesn\'t convey this.
Probably why the end is eternal. Like it.

September 16th, 2025 04:49

Night spells
William Hromada said:

We seem complicated to others, but aren\'t we so simple in expression?

September 16th, 2025 04:37

Lost paper thoughts
William Hromada said:

It seems so much is lost in time.

September 16th, 2025 04:32

Lost paper thoughts
Tom Dylan said:

A fine write and just the perfect title.

September 16th, 2025 02:04

Fallen honor
Goldfinch60 said:

True words soren.

Andy

September 16th, 2025 01:22

Waves against a lighthouse
NafisaSB said:

beautiful sentimental and well constructed message. throws light on the feelings shared - fantastic

September 16th, 2025 00:35

Fallen honor
NinjaGirl said:

Was not expecting that last line...but it\'s true! What do we care about, really? Well done.

September 15th, 2025 21:51

Fallen honor
Keeter C said:

Interesting.
Is it so in a spirit realm?
Or just in the world of matter?

September 15th, 2025 17:45

Fallen honor
Tristan Robert Lange said:

There is so much shit on this statue everything is starting to look a greenish-white. LOL! What a fantastic poem, Soren! Fantastic! Wow! 🤩 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

September 15th, 2025 12:53

Lost paper thoughts
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Soren, this lands heavy—the idea of memory’s assassination by fire is devastating. Each line feels like ash still smoldering. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛ Very well done, my friend!

September 15th, 2025 12:12

Fallen honor
rebellion_in_sanity said:

An absolute fave

September 15th, 2025 09:45

Why?
William Hromada said:

I have been to France with nude beaches. It’s a shame we hide!

September 15th, 2025 09:35

Read
rebellion_in_sanity said:

Wow! This one is brutal and completely necessary. Respect and lots of it🙏

September 15th, 2025 09:26

Fallen honor
Kevin Hulme said:

Reminds me of that scene in the Mel Brooks film \'High Anxiety\' with \'The Birds\' spoof.
Well said.


September 15th, 2025 08:13

Fallen honor
orchidee said:

As long as the pidgins don\'t s**t on us! Erm, it\'s a theme in some poets writings lately - the appearance of that stuff which we mustn\'t let hit the fan. Or if it does, be sure to be in the opposite direction to it. Oh, it\'s daft! lol.

September 15th, 2025 07:32

Fallen honor
Friendship said:

Your poem \"Fallen Honor\" explores the notion that true recognition and honor are often overshadowed by the influence of power and politics. It suggests that achievements—whether in poetry or other fields—are often compromised by the societal and cultural forces that prioritize status over genuine merit.

September 15th, 2025 07:27

Fallen honor
arqios said:

Still searching for the best poop cleaner or an effective poop umbrella! Most definitely a Fave 🤩🕊️🙏🏻

September 15th, 2025 06:01

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