Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Quiet suffering
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a powerful extended metaphor, Soren! The silent stream absorbs every downpour until its clarity is buried and its restrained suffering becomes destructive force. It speaks painfully to how relentless blame can transform the very person expected to endure it quietly. Excellent poem, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 21st, 2026 16:33
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a powerful extended metaphor, Soren! The silent stream absorbs every downpour until its clarity is buried and its restrained suffering becomes destructive force. It speaks painfully to how relentless blame can transform the very person expected to endure it quietly. Excellent poem, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 21st, 2026 16:33
Quiet suffering
Neville said:
water much like fire is a force to be reckoned with .. a good friend but you wouldn\'t want it for an enemy ..
August 21st, 2026 13:43
Neville said:
water much like fire is a force to be reckoned with .. a good friend but you wouldn\'t want it for an enemy ..
August 21st, 2026 13:43
Quiet suffering
orchidee said:
Good write SB.
Erm, I thought you was gonna write about my marriage to KP, with that title. Though I hardly ever see her in person - only on the telly, in papers, magazines, at the Old Trout pub, and a hundred etc\'s. lol.
August 21st, 2026 07:42
orchidee said:
Good write SB.
Erm, I thought you was gonna write about my marriage to KP, with that title. Though I hardly ever see her in person - only on the telly, in papers, magazines, at the Old Trout pub, and a hundred etc\'s. lol.
August 21st, 2026 07:42
Quiet suffering
Paul Bell said:
Yes, if nature isn\'t burning us alive, she\'s drowning us, which tells me she\'s had enough.
Something has to give, and with a force like nature, it doesn\'t do to annoy the great woman.
August 21st, 2026 06:34
Paul Bell said:
Yes, if nature isn\'t burning us alive, she\'s drowning us, which tells me she\'s had enough.
Something has to give, and with a force like nature, it doesn\'t do to annoy the great woman.
August 21st, 2026 06:34
Quiet suffering
Lorenz said:
when everything has calmed down all that remains is a fleeting remorse for what once was...
August 21st, 2026 06:01
Lorenz said:
when everything has calmed down all that remains is a fleeting remorse for what once was...
August 21st, 2026 06:01
Quiet suffering
delusions said:
The river almost feels less like water and more like something remembering what it was supposed to be. Lovely, my friend.
August 21st, 2026 03:54
delusions said:
The river almost feels less like water and more like something remembering what it was supposed to be. Lovely, my friend.
August 21st, 2026 03:54
Quiet suffering
soheil khodaparasti said:
A powerful flood as a metaphor for blame and destruction.
The greatest tragedy is not the turmoil itself, but the lasting damage it leaves behind.
August 21st, 2026 03:29
soheil khodaparasti said:
A powerful flood as a metaphor for blame and destruction.
The greatest tragedy is not the turmoil itself, but the lasting damage it leaves behind.
August 21st, 2026 03:29
Out of style
NafisaSB said:
truer words were never spoken so eloquently- agree with you here
August 21st, 2026 00:49
NafisaSB said:
truer words were never spoken so eloquently- agree with you here
August 21st, 2026 00:49
Forgotten
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, I’ve written a few pieces that probably belonged in the plumbing rather than a collection! 🤣 Sometimes artistic discernment simply means knowing when to pull the handle. Loved this, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 20th, 2026 20:46
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, I’ve written a few pieces that probably belonged in the plumbing rather than a collection! 🤣 Sometimes artistic discernment simply means knowing when to pull the handle. Loved this, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 20th, 2026 20:46
Forgotten
Doggerel Dave said:
It\' the mental exercise which counts at the time, that\'s all.
Simply written.
August 20th, 2026 17:46
Doggerel Dave said:
It\' the mental exercise which counts at the time, that\'s all.
Simply written.
August 20th, 2026 17:46
Forgotten
Teddy.15 said:
Do you mean mine in particular? 🤣 Oh this gave me a chuckle dear sorrenbarret 🌹
August 20th, 2026 17:19
Teddy.15 said:
Do you mean mine in particular? 🤣 Oh this gave me a chuckle dear sorrenbarret 🌹
August 20th, 2026 17:19
Forgotten
Kevin Hulme said:
I\'m sure those Teenage Mutant Hero Turtles are Reading then as we speak.
There are many of mine I\'ve just erased. Thought not good enough. Some very long.
A good Write.
August 20th, 2026 10:01
Kevin Hulme said:
I\'m sure those Teenage Mutant Hero Turtles are Reading then as we speak.
There are many of mine I\'ve just erased. Thought not good enough. Some very long.
A good Write.
August 20th, 2026 10:01
Forgotten
orchidee said:
Ahh, more recipe ideas for KP\'s meals, from you - I\'m most grateful to you! lol.
August 20th, 2026 09:47
orchidee said:
Ahh, more recipe ideas for KP\'s meals, from you - I\'m most grateful to you! lol.
August 20th, 2026 09:47
Forgotten
soheil khodaparasti said:
Arthur Miller, in Death of a Salesman, expresses this idea through Willy Loman’s words: “You can’t eat the orange and throw the peel away—a man is not a piece of fruit!” A poem is not merely a collection of words; it is what those words make us feel, see, and understand. Some poems need to be read again and again, each time with a fresh eye, because their meaning reveals itself gradually.
August 20th, 2026 04:48
soheil khodaparasti said:
Arthur Miller, in Death of a Salesman, expresses this idea through Willy Loman’s words: “You can’t eat the orange and throw the peel away—a man is not a piece of fruit!” A poem is not merely a collection of words; it is what those words make us feel, see, and understand. Some poems need to be read again and again, each time with a fresh eye, because their meaning reveals itself gradually.
August 20th, 2026 04:48
Forgotten
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
A natural conclusion of all things my friend
August 20th, 2026 03:33
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
A natural conclusion of all things my friend
August 20th, 2026 03:33
Forgotten
delusions said:
There is something strangely beautiful about how everything that serves its purpose eventually becomes something we refuse to look at. Even waste gets its own quiet afterlife. Nicely written
August 20th, 2026 03:15
delusions said:
There is something strangely beautiful about how everything that serves its purpose eventually becomes something we refuse to look at. Even waste gets its own quiet afterlife. Nicely written
August 20th, 2026 03:15
Treasures lost
arqios said:
A gentle reminder that even the brightest wonders slip between our fingers while their touch still continues to shape us.
August 19th, 2026 20:33
arqios said:
A gentle reminder that even the brightest wonders slip between our fingers while their touch still continues to shape us.
August 19th, 2026 20:33
Treasures lost
Kevin Hulme said:
It seems not all things in life are permanent.
How long before the Shamrock withers?
Good Write.
August 19th, 2026 18:28
Kevin Hulme said:
It seems not all things in life are permanent.
How long before the Shamrock withers?
Good Write.
August 19th, 2026 18:28
Treasures lost
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a beautifully wistful piece, Soren. Each wonder arrives brightly and disappears just as quickly, leaving only one small keepsake behind. This carries the ache of loving everything temporary…and it lingers. Excellent write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 19th, 2026 18:04
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a beautifully wistful piece, Soren. Each wonder arrives brightly and disappears just as quickly, leaving only one small keepsake behind. This carries the ache of loving everything temporary…and it lingers. Excellent write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 19th, 2026 18:04
It really happened
cully45 said:
Thanks Soren your comments are always appreciated Regards Owen
August 19th, 2026 10:15
cully45 said:
Thanks Soren your comments are always appreciated Regards Owen
August 19th, 2026 10:15
Treasures lost
soheil khodaparasti said:
The poem is beautiful in many ways, but for me, the ending is especially fascinating, as it leaves a sense of loss balanced by a small trace of hope.
August 19th, 2026 07:46
soheil khodaparasti said:
The poem is beautiful in many ways, but for me, the ending is especially fascinating, as it leaves a sense of loss balanced by a small trace of hope.
August 19th, 2026 07:46
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