Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Would it be different
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is one heck of a poem. The questions move between humor, intimacy, mortality, and moral consequence...revealing an entire web of lives transformed simply because one person existed. Outstanding work, Soren. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 28th, 2026 20:54
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is one heck of a poem. The questions move between humor, intimacy, mortality, and moral consequence...revealing an entire web of lives transformed simply because one person existed. Outstanding work, Soren. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 28th, 2026 20:54
Would it be different
Kevin Hulme said:
This is a Subject that I constantly muse over.
Many years ago My Nephew who was aged 6, died of a Tumour. The Following year my Sister give birth to a Girl, Who is now Married and has Family of her own. And I often think of the Girl who never married my Nephew . And the Children who weren\'t born. And If my Niece wasn\'t born: her Husband would be Married to someone else. And of course the Children would be different. When I was a Baby: I nearly died in a Accident. So you wouldn\'t be reading this. All the Songs Buddy Holly never wrote. Interesting stuff. And you described it well. A fave.
July 28th, 2026 18:58
Kevin Hulme said:
This is a Subject that I constantly muse over.
Many years ago My Nephew who was aged 6, died of a Tumour. The Following year my Sister give birth to a Girl, Who is now Married and has Family of her own. And I often think of the Girl who never married my Nephew . And the Children who weren\'t born. And If my Niece wasn\'t born: her Husband would be Married to someone else. And of course the Children would be different. When I was a Baby: I nearly died in a Accident. So you wouldn\'t be reading this. All the Songs Buddy Holly never wrote. Interesting stuff. And you described it well. A fave.
July 28th, 2026 18:58
State of mind
JENNY M GUERRIER said:
Positive state of mind is the perfect balm for cancer patients. I know, because I have been there. Well done.
July 28th, 2026 17:28
JENNY M GUERRIER said:
Positive state of mind is the perfect balm for cancer patients. I know, because I have been there. Well done.
July 28th, 2026 17:28
Would it be different
Teddy.15 said:
So wonderful, inspiring waking up the muse with such questions of reflection. Isn\'t it all so damn fascinating. 🌹
July 28th, 2026 16:52
Teddy.15 said:
So wonderful, inspiring waking up the muse with such questions of reflection. Isn\'t it all so damn fascinating. 🌹
July 28th, 2026 16:52
Would it be different
arqios said:
Our life, even in its smallest motions, has altered countless other lives in ways we may never fully see.
July 28th, 2026 16:05
arqios said:
Our life, even in its smallest motions, has altered countless other lives in ways we may never fully see.
July 28th, 2026 16:05
Would it be different
Friendship said:
This poem explores the existential question of identity and the impact of an individual\'s existence on the world around them. It contemplates the potential consequences of never having been born, reflecting on how one person\'s life affects others and the broader fabric of society. Yet the poet includes themes of existence, legacy, interconnectedness, and the ripple effects of individual actions. A very interesting poem.
July 28th, 2026 14:45
Friendship said:
This poem explores the existential question of identity and the impact of an individual\'s existence on the world around them. It contemplates the potential consequences of never having been born, reflecting on how one person\'s life affects others and the broader fabric of society. Yet the poet includes themes of existence, legacy, interconnectedness, and the ripple effects of individual actions. A very interesting poem.
July 28th, 2026 14:45
Would it be different
Neville said:
Since you directly ask a series of impossible question, it seems only fair not to try and answer it indirectly .. Suffice to suggest the most succinct probability is therefore, most likely to be maybe .. Neville 😎👍
July 28th, 2026 11:29
Neville said:
Since you directly ask a series of impossible question, it seems only fair not to try and answer it indirectly .. Suffice to suggest the most succinct probability is therefore, most likely to be maybe .. Neville 😎👍
July 28th, 2026 11:29
Would it be different
orchidee said:
Good write SB. There\'s a line in a comedy film: \'It don\'t matter that you can\'t remember where you were born; it\'s bad enough that it happened!\' lol. Bit like KP. heehee.
July 28th, 2026 10:01
orchidee said:
Good write SB. There\'s a line in a comedy film: \'It don\'t matter that you can\'t remember where you were born; it\'s bad enough that it happened!\' lol. Bit like KP. heehee.
July 28th, 2026 10:01
Would it be different
Thomas W Case said:
This poem carries a deep and haunting reflection on existence, gently tracing the unseen ripples one life leaves behind. There’s a quiet power in your questions, a sense that even the smallest presence holds meaning beyond what we can ever fully know.
July 28th, 2026 08:22
Thomas W Case said:
This poem carries a deep and haunting reflection on existence, gently tracing the unseen ripples one life leaves behind. There’s a quiet power in your questions, a sense that even the smallest presence holds meaning beyond what we can ever fully know.
July 28th, 2026 08:22
Would it be different
Lorenz said:
A text shaped like a mirror reflecting the infinity of the self ...
July 28th, 2026 07:47
Lorenz said:
A text shaped like a mirror reflecting the infinity of the self ...
July 28th, 2026 07:47
Would it be different
David Wakeling said:
The ultimate question explored very well here.We can look at it two ways.We are lucky to be alive given the infinite alternative possibilities involved or we are left to wonder what would happen if we were never born.I like to think that life is a mess and it really doesn\'t matter because it all ends up messed up anyway.Great and clever poem mi amigo.Certainly made me think.
July 28th, 2026 06:57
David Wakeling said:
The ultimate question explored very well here.We can look at it two ways.We are lucky to be alive given the infinite alternative possibilities involved or we are left to wonder what would happen if we were never born.I like to think that life is a mess and it really doesn\'t matter because it all ends up messed up anyway.Great and clever poem mi amigo.Certainly made me think.
July 28th, 2026 06:57
Would it be different
Demar Desu said:
What spark such a poem to post today? They say art reflects life Soren! I hope you’re doing well and I’m glad your mother pushed you out! Great poem
July 28th, 2026 06:35
Demar Desu said:
What spark such a poem to post today? They say art reflects life Soren! I hope you’re doing well and I’m glad your mother pushed you out! Great poem
July 28th, 2026 06:35
Change
cully45 said:
Thanks Soren your comments are much appreciated. Regards Owen
July 28th, 2026 06:26
cully45 said:
Thanks Soren your comments are much appreciated. Regards Owen
July 28th, 2026 06:26
Would it be different
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
One question spawns so many others my friend
July 28th, 2026 03:25
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
One question spawns so many others my friend
July 28th, 2026 03:25
State of mind
Goldfinch60 said:
The wonder of Nature can relax us all soren.
Andy
July 28th, 2026 01:47
Goldfinch60 said:
The wonder of Nature can relax us all soren.
Andy
July 28th, 2026 01:47
State of mind
Kevin Hulme said:
A fine Poem on the Contrast of Mind and Body.
👍
July 27th, 2026 17:59
Kevin Hulme said:
A fine Poem on the Contrast of Mind and Body.
👍
July 27th, 2026 17:59
State of mind
Paul Bell said:
There\'s a realisation here that the end is soon, but also an acceptence of the situation.
The mind is moving into peace mode, and hopefully the end is a good one.
July 27th, 2026 15:38
Paul Bell said:
There\'s a realisation here that the end is soon, but also an acceptence of the situation.
The mind is moving into peace mode, and hopefully the end is a good one.
July 27th, 2026 15:38
State of mind
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this really moved me. The body is under siege, but the spirit refuses to surrender its sanctuary...a devastating reminder that illness never possesses the whole person. One hell of a powerful poem, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 27th, 2026 09:07
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this really moved me. The body is under siege, but the spirit refuses to surrender its sanctuary...a devastating reminder that illness never possesses the whole person. One hell of a powerful poem, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 27th, 2026 09:07
State of mind
orchidee said:
Good write SB but I feel woozy at the first two lines. A horrific disease to have. Yet finding peace, pleasantness, etc in the last two lines.
July 27th, 2026 08:13
orchidee said:
Good write SB but I feel woozy at the first two lines. A horrific disease to have. Yet finding peace, pleasantness, etc in the last two lines.
July 27th, 2026 08:13
State of mind
Friendship said:
The imagery you painted for me is of physical decay, which contrasts sharply with the serene mental landscapes, suggesting that even in dire circumstances, one can find solace and beauty.
July 27th, 2026 07:07
Friendship said:
The imagery you painted for me is of physical decay, which contrasts sharply with the serene mental landscapes, suggesting that even in dire circumstances, one can find solace and beauty.
July 27th, 2026 07:07
State of mind
David Wakeling said:
A very clever piece of optimism in the state of harsh reality. The mind has the amazing ability to adapt and survive.Enjoyable to read
July 27th, 2026 06:54
David Wakeling said:
A very clever piece of optimism in the state of harsh reality. The mind has the amazing ability to adapt and survive.Enjoyable to read
July 27th, 2026 06:54
State of mind
arqios said:
the state of the body reads like a metaphoric inversion of the state of mind. It could most possibly that the body is symbolic of suffering and the mind is the true condition hence the self is not where suffering occurs, but where renewal continues and lives on. 🙏🕊️
July 27th, 2026 05:08
arqios said:
the state of the body reads like a metaphoric inversion of the state of mind. It could most possibly that the body is symbolic of suffering and the mind is the true condition hence the self is not where suffering occurs, but where renewal continues and lives on. 🙏🕊️
July 27th, 2026 05:08
State of mind
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
a no nonsense write my friend, much enjoyed
July 27th, 2026 04:21
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
a no nonsense write my friend, much enjoyed
July 27th, 2026 04:21
Too much
Dan Williams said:
I see in this another of the all too common human deficits, disregard for genuine heroics.
July 27th, 2026 01:37
Dan Williams said:
I see in this another of the all too common human deficits, disregard for genuine heroics.
July 27th, 2026 01:37
Too much
Goldfinch60 said:
Giving to others can sometime have a drawback as well soren but it must still be done.
Andy
July 27th, 2026 01:05
Goldfinch60 said:
Giving to others can sometime have a drawback as well soren but it must still be done.
Andy
July 27th, 2026 01:05
Too much
Teddy.15 said:
My dear Sorrenbarret, darkly beautiful my friend. I know a woman like this. 💜
July 26th, 2026 23:53
Teddy.15 said:
My dear Sorrenbarret, darkly beautiful my friend. I know a woman like this. 💜
July 26th, 2026 23:53
Too much
James Michael said:
A common mistake amongst writers is to misspell losing as loosing. No worries, an interesting write overall.
I do hate myself for being a jerk! ChatGPT said that I am.
July 26th, 2026 19:44
James Michael said:
A common mistake amongst writers is to misspell losing as loosing. No worries, an interesting write overall.
I do hate myself for being a jerk! ChatGPT said that I am.
July 26th, 2026 19:44
Too much
David Wakeling said:
This is quite sad but a tale of loosing yourself in the needs of others.A common tale but tragic.I like the clever rhyme and the cadence is impeccable as usual compadre..
July 26th, 2026 19:33
David Wakeling said:
This is quite sad but a tale of loosing yourself in the needs of others.A common tale but tragic.I like the clever rhyme and the cadence is impeccable as usual compadre..
July 26th, 2026 19:33
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