Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Dust
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this reads like memory weatherโฆleaves scattering, voices thinning, old companions dissolving into dusk. Beautiful and heavy, my friend. Well done. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
November 13th, 2025 15:11
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this reads like memory weatherโฆleaves scattering, voices thinning, old companions dissolving into dusk. Beautiful and heavy, my friend. Well done. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
November 13th, 2025 15:11
Lost music of the forest
Kevin Hulme said:
I really like this . Mother Nature Crying out for all the Wrongs we\'ve caused: Who knows.
A fine Poem.
November 13th, 2025 14:44
Kevin Hulme said:
I really like this . Mother Nature Crying out for all the Wrongs we\'ve caused: Who knows.
A fine Poem.
November 13th, 2025 14:44
Dust
orchidee said:
Good write SB. I wish KP would disappear, but she never does. Well, only to go to the botox clinic. heehee.
November 13th, 2025 14:43
orchidee said:
Good write SB. I wish KP would disappear, but she never does. Well, only to go to the botox clinic. heehee.
November 13th, 2025 14:43
Dust
NinjaGirl said:
There have been and will be many...one day I should like to reunite and wonder what happened to them all. I love the imagery and rhyme!
November 13th, 2025 14:28
NinjaGirl said:
There have been and will be many...one day I should like to reunite and wonder what happened to them all. I love the imagery and rhyme!
November 13th, 2025 14:28
Awakening
hacklec said:
Well done. Maybe the wonderful imagery you create here will help me remember my dreams! Keep dreaming.
November 13th, 2025 14:27
hacklec said:
Well done. Maybe the wonderful imagery you create here will help me remember my dreams! Keep dreaming.
November 13th, 2025 14:27
Dust
Neilton said:
Since im in a really emotional state right now you poem made me cry.But that just shows the talent it takes to make somebody cry with your words.Amazing poem.
November 13th, 2025 12:21
Neilton said:
Since im in a really emotional state right now you poem made me cry.But that just shows the talent it takes to make somebody cry with your words.Amazing poem.
November 13th, 2025 12:21
Dust
Paul Bell said:
When you count your friends on one hand, you know the day is dawning.
Check your time clock, the conductor shouted, time is moving on.
Where did the years go.
November 13th, 2025 10:21
Paul Bell said:
When you count your friends on one hand, you know the day is dawning.
Check your time clock, the conductor shouted, time is moving on.
Where did the years go.
November 13th, 2025 10:21
Dust
Teddy.15 said:
Withered away with time, ah my dear sorrenbarret this one hits hard, you have overseas friends, not quite the same I know. I guess the older we get the more we see in loss and all. ๐
November 13th, 2025 05:29
Teddy.15 said:
Withered away with time, ah my dear sorrenbarret this one hits hard, you have overseas friends, not quite the same I know. I guess the older we get the more we see in loss and all. ๐
November 13th, 2025 05:29
Dust
Michael Edwards said:
A super yet so very sad write - superbly drafted.
November 13th, 2025 03:56
Michael Edwards said:
A super yet so very sad write - superbly drafted.
November 13th, 2025 03:56
Deep slumber
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful words soren, may those dreams become reality.
Andy
November 13th, 2025 02:12
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful words soren, may those dreams become reality.
Andy
November 13th, 2025 02:12
Deep slumber
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is a gorgeous descent into the subconscious...melting time, stitched memories, and the fog of waking. Luminous work, my friend. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
November 12th, 2025 21:06
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is a gorgeous descent into the subconscious...melting time, stitched memories, and the fog of waking. Luminous work, my friend. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
November 12th, 2025 21:06
Deep slumber
Teddy.15 said:
A famous spin on life and death and all that\'s inside this sandwich of life. ๐น
November 12th, 2025 14:13
Teddy.15 said:
A famous spin on life and death and all that\'s inside this sandwich of life. ๐น
November 12th, 2025 14:13
Deep slumber
orchidee said:
A fine write SB.
BOO! I shout. Now why did I have to come along and wake ya up there?! lol.
November 12th, 2025 10:10
orchidee said:
A fine write SB.
BOO! I shout. Now why did I have to come along and wake ya up there?! lol.
November 12th, 2025 10:10
Deep slumber
arqios said:
I feel how it captures the strange comfort of sleep, of time bending, memories mending, and dreams slipping away just as they begin. Thoroughly enjoyed, Soren ๐๏ธ๐
November 12th, 2025 07:55
arqios said:
I feel how it captures the strange comfort of sleep, of time bending, memories mending, and dreams slipping away just as they begin. Thoroughly enjoyed, Soren ๐๏ธ๐
November 12th, 2025 07:55
Spinoza\'s god
Keyara S Trotman said:
Are there any times that youโve classified your poems? If you were to put this under a category what would it be?
This is definitely a great way of words expressing the sea. Lovely my dear Soren ๐ฅ๐
November 12th, 2025 06:55
Keyara S Trotman said:
Are there any times that youโve classified your poems? If you were to put this under a category what would it be?
This is definitely a great way of words expressing the sea. Lovely my dear Soren ๐ฅ๐
November 12th, 2025 06:55
Solo climbing
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Just beautiful. Lines like all fear in stone encase or errors you can\'t erase carry a heavy existential theme but with surprising simplicity. Great work
November 12th, 2025 04:34
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Just beautiful. Lines like all fear in stone encase or errors you can\'t erase carry a heavy existential theme but with surprising simplicity. Great work
November 12th, 2025 04:34
Deep slumber
Lorenz said:
Here is a dreamlike world that is very familiar to me....
November 12th, 2025 04:27
Lorenz said:
Here is a dreamlike world that is very familiar to me....
November 12th, 2025 04:27
Spinoza\'s god
Kevin Hulme said:
I read of Spinoza\'s View of \'God\' after reading your Poem: and you captured his Philosophy very well . A good Write.
November 11th, 2025 20:08
Kevin Hulme said:
I read of Spinoza\'s View of \'God\' after reading your Poem: and you captured his Philosophy very well . A good Write.
November 11th, 2025 20:08
Spinoza\'s god
Neville said:
The way you have so masterfully captured our unique oneness is not beyond me .. because I feel so much a part of it .. Still, I sincerely hope you get my drift through this brain fog of mine .. and as I anxiously wait to hop on board one of the next incoming waves .. Take care and write on while I\'m taking a break ๐โญโญโญโญโญ๐
November 11th, 2025 11:35
Neville said:
The way you have so masterfully captured our unique oneness is not beyond me .. because I feel so much a part of it .. Still, I sincerely hope you get my drift through this brain fog of mine .. and as I anxiously wait to hop on board one of the next incoming waves .. Take care and write on while I\'m taking a break ๐โญโญโญโญโญ๐
November 11th, 2025 11:35
Spinoza\'s god
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Reading this, Soren, I felt that deep calm of dissolving into something larger. Youโve written the purest form of belonging. That line...โAs each wave falls another beginsโ...embodies the whole poem for me. Life and spirit, rising and returning, perfectly said, my friend. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
November 11th, 2025 09:32
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Reading this, Soren, I felt that deep calm of dissolving into something larger. Youโve written the purest form of belonging. That line...โAs each wave falls another beginsโ...embodies the whole poem for me. Life and spirit, rising and returning, perfectly said, my friend. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
November 11th, 2025 09:32
Glow
NafisaSB said:
I hope you never suffer from writerโs block; but continue to write and share some beautiful poems ๐
November 11th, 2025 08:41
NafisaSB said:
I hope you never suffer from writerโs block; but continue to write and share some beautiful poems ๐
November 11th, 2025 08:41
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