Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
I knew the man
Sviatoslav Zhabotynskyi said:
This is a very heavy poem. It reminded me of Emperor Nero, who burned people.
April 15th, 2026 00:07
Sviatoslav Zhabotynskyi said:
This is a very heavy poem. It reminded me of Emperor Nero, who burned people.
April 15th, 2026 00:07
White, blue, black
Sviatoslav Zhabotynskyi said:
The depths—whether of the sky or the water—always bring peace.
April 15th, 2026 00:02
Sviatoslav Zhabotynskyi said:
The depths—whether of the sky or the water—always bring peace.
April 15th, 2026 00:02
Another day
Sviatoslav Zhabotynskyi said:
Someone said that life begins when you no longer have energy. Maybe that is the real party.
April 14th, 2026 23:59
Sviatoslav Zhabotynskyi said:
Someone said that life begins when you no longer have energy. Maybe that is the real party.
April 14th, 2026 23:59
Wasps
Sviatoslav Zhabotynskyi said:
In such cases, the main thing is to hold on.
April 14th, 2026 23:55
Sviatoslav Zhabotynskyi said:
In such cases, the main thing is to hold on.
April 14th, 2026 23:55
Degrees
Sviatoslav Zhabotynskyi said:
Simple things also possess glue. Just need a heart.
April 14th, 2026 23:51
Sviatoslav Zhabotynskyi said:
Simple things also possess glue. Just need a heart.
April 14th, 2026 23:51
Choices of when and where
Kevin Hulme said:
The Idea of frustration in other areas of life comes through in this. Important decisions being held up.
Good one.
April 14th, 2026 18:38
Kevin Hulme said:
The Idea of frustration in other areas of life comes through in this. Important decisions being held up.
Good one.
April 14th, 2026 18:38
Choices of when and where
Ellen Marsell said:
The one-way road is a symbol of time and fate. It permits no return, offers no alternatives, and leaves no room to stop. Powerful writing!
April 14th, 2026 14:12
Ellen Marsell said:
The one-way road is a symbol of time and fate. It permits no return, offers no alternatives, and leaves no room to stop. Powerful writing!
April 14th, 2026 14:12
Choices of when and where
MendedFences27 said:
Sounds like a tough job. Easy to get lost I suppose.
April 14th, 2026 11:49
MendedFences27 said:
Sounds like a tough job. Easy to get lost I suppose.
April 14th, 2026 11:49
Choices of when and where
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Great title for this poem. Soren…that lack of direction…no signs, no timing…that’s what really drives this. It keeps everything unsettled in a way that lands. Well done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 14th, 2026 09:02
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Great title for this poem. Soren…that lack of direction…no signs, no timing…that’s what really drives this. It keeps everything unsettled in a way that lands. Well done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 14th, 2026 09:02
Choices of when and where
orchidee said:
Good write SB.
Meanwhile, KP will never starve - plenty of sewage around! heehee.
April 14th, 2026 08:09
orchidee said:
Good write SB.
Meanwhile, KP will never starve - plenty of sewage around! heehee.
April 14th, 2026 08:09
Choices of when and where
Friendship said:
You painted, the pressures of making choices and fulfilling responsibilities, with a sense of uncertainty. nicely done Soren
April 14th, 2026 07:38
Friendship said:
You painted, the pressures of making choices and fulfilling responsibilities, with a sense of uncertainty. nicely done Soren
April 14th, 2026 07:38
Choices of when and where
Thomas W Case said:
Gritty and urgent—pressure building with no clear way out.
The tension rides hard, duty pushing forward against the unknown.
April 14th, 2026 07:15
Thomas W Case said:
Gritty and urgent—pressure building with no clear way out.
The tension rides hard, duty pushing forward against the unknown.
April 14th, 2026 07:15
Choices of when and where
Katie B. said:
To me, this is life. We are on one path, we don\'t know where we are going and no one gives us directions. We are on our own to figure out the destination and it\'s important we get there in a timely manner.
April 14th, 2026 06:27
Katie B. said:
To me, this is life. We are on one path, we don\'t know where we are going and no one gives us directions. We are on our own to figure out the destination and it\'s important we get there in a timely manner.
April 14th, 2026 06:27
Choices of when and where
Abdullah123 said:
Great write. If you could just tell me where to go exactly, it would save me some brainpower wouldn\'t it?
April 14th, 2026 04:56
Abdullah123 said:
Great write. If you could just tell me where to go exactly, it would save me some brainpower wouldn\'t it?
April 14th, 2026 04:56
Choices of when and where
Lorenz said:
In a timely fashion somewhere in the fishbowl .
April 14th, 2026 04:43
Lorenz said:
In a timely fashion somewhere in the fishbowl .
April 14th, 2026 04:43
Choices of when and where
Priya Tomar said:
The poem describes sense of uncertainty....
Nicely done .
April 14th, 2026 04:18
Priya Tomar said:
The poem describes sense of uncertainty....
Nicely done .
April 14th, 2026 04:18
Choices of when and where
Teddy.15 said:
Kudos, on the emotion and the trauma 🌹
April 14th, 2026 04:08
Teddy.15 said:
Kudos, on the emotion and the trauma 🌹
April 14th, 2026 04:08
Levels
Goldfinch60 said:
The rules of life will always change soren but they will always eventually change for the better.
Andy
April 14th, 2026 01:17
Goldfinch60 said:
The rules of life will always change soren but they will always eventually change for the better.
Andy
April 14th, 2026 01:17
Rebellion
Sviatoslav Zhabotynskyi said:
Good poem, you do this very well. It feels close to me.
April 14th, 2026 00:23
Sviatoslav Zhabotynskyi said:
Good poem, you do this very well. It feels close to me.
April 14th, 2026 00:23
Levels
thinkerbell said:
A great meditation on the complexity of the human mind
April 14th, 2026 00:19
thinkerbell said:
A great meditation on the complexity of the human mind
April 14th, 2026 00:19
Sensations
Sviatoslav Zhabotynskyi said:
It feels like there is something alive and true in this rough atmosphere.
April 14th, 2026 00:18
Sviatoslav Zhabotynskyi said:
It feels like there is something alive and true in this rough atmosphere.
April 14th, 2026 00:18
Resciprocity’s warning
Sviatoslav Zhabotynskyi said:
This is very good fire-starting.
April 14th, 2026 00:12
Sviatoslav Zhabotynskyi said:
This is very good fire-starting.
April 14th, 2026 00:12
Levels
cellinic said:
This is really very brilliant, sensible and emotional. A fave, my friend.
April 13th, 2026 19:25
cellinic said:
This is really very brilliant, sensible and emotional. A fave, my friend.
April 13th, 2026 19:25
Levels
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren… I’ve wrestled with that space where things don’t divide cleanly…where everything blends and resists definition. This brings that feeling through clearly. Well written, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 13th, 2026 08:39
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren… I’ve wrestled with that space where things don’t divide cleanly…where everything blends and resists definition. This brings that feeling through clearly. Well written, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 13th, 2026 08:39
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