Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Fox in the henhouse
cully45 said:
Short and to the point. Enjoyed it. Regards Owen
October 13th, 2026 12:26
cully45 said:
Short and to the point. Enjoyed it. Regards Owen
October 13th, 2026 12:26
Life\'s seasons
orchidee said:
Good write SB. Ahh, seasons. I thought \'That\'s a lot to be doing in one day\'. Though I could just about fit all that into the extra one second we had one year. lol.
October 13th, 2026 09:37
orchidee said:
Good write SB. Ahh, seasons. I thought \'That\'s a lot to be doing in one day\'. Though I could just about fit all that into the extra one second we had one year. lol.
October 13th, 2026 09:37
Life\'s seasons
Lorenz said:
When the last-second angel appears ,the panorama of an entire life flashes before your eyes...
October 13th, 2026 09:22
Lorenz said:
When the last-second angel appears ,the panorama of an entire life flashes before your eyes...
October 13th, 2026 09:22
Life\'s seasons
Friendship said:
Wow, this is a powerful poem about life\'s journey. Your poem explores the passage of time and the interplay of memory and nostalgia, reflecting on life\'s beauty and bittersweetness. You painted the highlights of cherished moments from childhood to adulthood, the joy of family and love, and the inevitable decline that comes with aging and loss.
October 13th, 2026 08:21
Friendship said:
Wow, this is a powerful poem about life\'s journey. Your poem explores the passage of time and the interplay of memory and nostalgia, reflecting on life\'s beauty and bittersweetness. You painted the highlights of cherished moments from childhood to adulthood, the joy of family and love, and the inevitable decline that comes with aging and loss.
October 13th, 2026 08:21
Life\'s seasons
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a damn sweeping tenderness here, because the poem gathers an entire life through its smells, sounds, seasons, family rituals, first loves, losses, and the slow realization that the world you once knew has quietly disappeared. The final image of your father’s face emerging in the mirror is the keeper for me, because it brings all that childhood wonder and accumulated grief into one unavoidable moment where time stops being a memory and becomes the face looking back at you.
October 13th, 2026 08:15
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a damn sweeping tenderness here, because the poem gathers an entire life through its smells, sounds, seasons, family rituals, first loves, losses, and the slow realization that the world you once knew has quietly disappeared. The final image of your father’s face emerging in the mirror is the keeper for me, because it brings all that childhood wonder and accumulated grief into one unavoidable moment where time stops being a memory and becomes the face looking back at you.
October 13th, 2026 08:15
A heart of steel
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Soren,
What an interesting and most unusual passage of poetry. To build and destroy and destroy to build. Who wields the ax to sever or to build, in who\'s hands be it for the ax is just a tool like money, to prosper or wreak havoc. Another very intresting poem from you, my good fellow.
Wishing you much happiness,
Tony.
October 13th, 2026 07:19
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Soren,
What an interesting and most unusual passage of poetry. To build and destroy and destroy to build. Who wields the ax to sever or to build, in who\'s hands be it for the ax is just a tool like money, to prosper or wreak havoc. Another very intresting poem from you, my good fellow.
Wishing you much happiness,
Tony.
October 13th, 2026 07:19
Life\'s seasons
Tony Grannell said:
Dear, Soren,
Delightful and cheerful ramblings of a life well spent, full of adventure and a love of nature. Very kind of you to share a glimpse into your history and the world around you way back then. Thank you very much; a most enjoyable read, my friend.
Fond regards,
Tony.
October 13th, 2026 06:53
Tony Grannell said:
Dear, Soren,
Delightful and cheerful ramblings of a life well spent, full of adventure and a love of nature. Very kind of you to share a glimpse into your history and the world around you way back then. Thank you very much; a most enjoyable read, my friend.
Fond regards,
Tony.
October 13th, 2026 06:53
Life\'s seasons
arqios said:
The seasons are a rich tapestry! And the mason jars remind me of when I learned pickling and making jams and preserves.
October 13th, 2026 05:56
arqios said:
The seasons are a rich tapestry! And the mason jars remind me of when I learned pickling and making jams and preserves.
October 13th, 2026 05:56
Life\'s seasons
Teddy.15 said:
Such a stunning piece of poetry, life\'s season\'s memories and all. Here in Italy our older generations still keep some marvellous traditions and still pass them down. 🌹
October 13th, 2026 04:53
Teddy.15 said:
Such a stunning piece of poetry, life\'s season\'s memories and all. Here in Italy our older generations still keep some marvellous traditions and still pass them down. 🌹
October 13th, 2026 04:53
Life\'s seasons
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Lifes journey poetically spoken my friend
October 13th, 2026 03:41
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Lifes journey poetically spoken my friend
October 13th, 2026 03:41
Life\'s seasons
Paul Bell said:
Epic write. A Mason jar sounds like a posh jam jar in Britain.
I like the trip through life; it brings back the same memories.
The last bit, though, is that dreaded realisation that those years are well behind you and time seems to go quicker.
Feeling nostalgic now.
October 13th, 2026 03:24
Paul Bell said:
Epic write. A Mason jar sounds like a posh jam jar in Britain.
I like the trip through life; it brings back the same memories.
The last bit, though, is that dreaded realisation that those years are well behind you and time seems to go quicker.
Feeling nostalgic now.
October 13th, 2026 03:24
A heart of steel
boot said:
Very cool soren...I like the subject and how you separate the sword from the wielders
October 13th, 2026 02:52
boot said:
Very cool soren...I like the subject and how you separate the sword from the wielders
October 13th, 2026 02:52
A heart of steel
Dan Williams said:
The ax being borrowed alone speaks volumes; the imagery of your description just spills out of this work. \"Hand grip of wood, cuts their brothers where they stood\" is, well, brilliant.
October 12th, 2026 21:00
Dan Williams said:
The ax being borrowed alone speaks volumes; the imagery of your description just spills out of this work. \"Hand grip of wood, cuts their brothers where they stood\" is, well, brilliant.
October 12th, 2026 21:00
Dark sonnet
Dan Williams said:
You so accurately describe the helplessness I sometimes feel. \"On memory’s wall delusions I scrawl, now that you are gone\" in particular but the two-line ending offers some small relief. Nice work, as usual.
October 12th, 2026 20:55
Dan Williams said:
You so accurately describe the helplessness I sometimes feel. \"On memory’s wall delusions I scrawl, now that you are gone\" in particular but the two-line ending offers some small relief. Nice work, as usual.
October 12th, 2026 20:55
A heart of steel
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Damn, Soren! We humans really are a peculiar species. We\'ll destroy something magnificent, congratulate ourselves on our ingenuity, and then wonder why the world is falling apart around us. And somehow we\'ll probably invent another machine to fix it! LOL! Powerful writing, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏
October 12th, 2026 19:34
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Damn, Soren! We humans really are a peculiar species. We\'ll destroy something magnificent, congratulate ourselves on our ingenuity, and then wonder why the world is falling apart around us. And somehow we\'ll probably invent another machine to fix it! LOL! Powerful writing, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏
October 12th, 2026 19:34
A heart of steel
Kevin Hulme said:
War . What is it good for? As the Song says.
Good Write.
October 12th, 2026 18:58
Kevin Hulme said:
War . What is it good for? As the Song says.
Good Write.
October 12th, 2026 18:58
A heart of steel
Paul Bell said:
The irony of the tree providing its own death.
Yet to think, no trees, no us, they\'re that important.
Conservation I suppose is the answer, and in a way, Brazil is probably the most important country in the world for this. No rain forest, no us.
October 12th, 2026 06:06
Paul Bell said:
The irony of the tree providing its own death.
Yet to think, no trees, no us, they\'re that important.
Conservation I suppose is the answer, and in a way, Brazil is probably the most important country in the world for this. No rain forest, no us.
October 12th, 2026 06:06
A heart of steel
sorenbarrett said:
As most of my work a metaphor drawn from real experience. War passed down from generation to generation cuts deep to displace our brothers that we discount as another species so as to rob their land and build our homes even convincing them to aid us against their own kind.
October 12th, 2026 06:05
sorenbarrett said:
As most of my work a metaphor drawn from real experience. War passed down from generation to generation cuts deep to displace our brothers that we discount as another species so as to rob their land and build our homes even convincing them to aid us against their own kind.
October 12th, 2026 06:05
There just ain\'t no pleasing some people
Neville said:
I\'m gonna sit on the fence .. I get the distinct feeling to sit, stand or lay otherwise might be somewhat painful .. this is one of them Ouchie\'s isn\'t it Squire ..
October 12th, 2026 04:29
Neville said:
I\'m gonna sit on the fence .. I get the distinct feeling to sit, stand or lay otherwise might be somewhat painful .. this is one of them Ouchie\'s isn\'t it Squire ..
October 12th, 2026 04:29
Dark sonnet
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Damn, Soren…that ending hurts. Sometimes I wish loving someone came with an undo button. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 11th, 2026 22:58
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Damn, Soren…that ending hurts. Sometimes I wish loving someone came with an undo button. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 11th, 2026 22:58
Dark sonnet
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Soren,
Unrequited love can not alone psychlogically but physically break a man down. Tear stains on the attempted poem and a twisted stomach in the sleepless nights of an aching heart. A mad man scribbling away in the illusion of a love poem. Another excellent poem from your massively expanding portfolio. Very well done, my friend.
Wishing you all the very best,
Tony.
October 11th, 2026 16:33
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Soren,
Unrequited love can not alone psychlogically but physically break a man down. Tear stains on the attempted poem and a twisted stomach in the sleepless nights of an aching heart. A mad man scribbling away in the illusion of a love poem. Another excellent poem from your massively expanding portfolio. Very well done, my friend.
Wishing you all the very best,
Tony.
October 11th, 2026 16:33
Dark sonnet
Kevin Hulme said:
Ahh Love in all it\'s many Colours.
Good Write.
October 11th, 2026 15:15
Kevin Hulme said:
Ahh Love in all it\'s many Colours.
Good Write.
October 11th, 2026 15:15
There just ain\'t no pleasing some people
NafisaSB said:
Some people are never grateful, satisfied or happy with what they have and always find the grass greener on the other side - beautifully depicted 👌
October 11th, 2026 13:03
NafisaSB said:
Some people are never grateful, satisfied or happy with what they have and always find the grass greener on the other side - beautifully depicted 👌
October 11th, 2026 13:03
Fox in the henhouse
NafisaSB said:
Indeed why blame the culprit when he yields to temptation when offered the chance by yourself 🤔🤐
October 11th, 2026 12:55
NafisaSB said:
Indeed why blame the culprit when he yields to temptation when offered the chance by yourself 🤔🤐
October 11th, 2026 12:55
Fox in the henhouse
Durdica Porobija said:
The poem is a moral allegory; it calls for responsibility and the bold acceptance of the consequences of one’s own decisions and choices. It features an interesting blend of discourses—maxims, riddles, and even fables. It is highly astute and evocative.
October 11th, 2026 12:38
Durdica Porobija said:
The poem is a moral allegory; it calls for responsibility and the bold acceptance of the consequences of one’s own decisions and choices. It features an interesting blend of discourses—maxims, riddles, and even fables. It is highly astute and evocative.
October 11th, 2026 12:38
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