Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Be willing to give what you ask
DLewis88 said:
It\'s well written. You did a amazing job.
July 3rd, 2026 10:29
DLewis88 said:
It\'s well written. You did a amazing job.
July 3rd, 2026 10:29
Whisps of love
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, what a poignant piece. I love how the image of smoke evolves into a meditation on time, memory, and relationships. By the end, the discarded cigarette may be gone, but its lingering scent becomes the perfect metaphor for the traces some experiences leave behind. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 3rd, 2026 08:47
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, what a poignant piece. I love how the image of smoke evolves into a meditation on time, memory, and relationships. By the end, the discarded cigarette may be gone, but its lingering scent becomes the perfect metaphor for the traces some experiences leave behind. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 3rd, 2026 08:47
Conditional
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, what a thoughtful piece. I love how you build the poem around fire as both possibility and responsibility. The imagery is simple, yet it carries a deeper reflection on the care we should give our words. Wonderfully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 3rd, 2026 08:32
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, what a thoughtful piece. I love how you build the poem around fire as both possibility and responsibility. The imagery is simple, yet it carries a deeper reflection on the care we should give our words. Wonderfully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 3rd, 2026 08:32
Whisps of love
Paul Bell said:
Never try and rekindle a failed relationship.
Men for some reason are more guilty than this than women.
Smoke your cigarette, and who knows, when the smoke clears, a new woman might be waiting.
July 3rd, 2026 07:11
Paul Bell said:
Never try and rekindle a failed relationship.
Men for some reason are more guilty than this than women.
Smoke your cigarette, and who knows, when the smoke clears, a new woman might be waiting.
July 3rd, 2026 07:11
Conditional
cellinic said:
A nice and deep write. One is to agree with most of thoughts expressed in this piece of work, I presume, my friend...
July 2nd, 2026 23:44
cellinic said:
A nice and deep write. One is to agree with most of thoughts expressed in this piece of work, I presume, my friend...
July 2nd, 2026 23:44
Conditional
Paul Bell said:
What a great analogy.
Wet wood will surely kill off any spark, and a plank to the head will render any guy senseless.
Still, we are triers.
July 2nd, 2026 12:03
Paul Bell said:
What a great analogy.
Wet wood will surely kill off any spark, and a plank to the head will render any guy senseless.
Still, we are triers.
July 2nd, 2026 12:03
Conditional
Kevin Hulme said:
If the Will is there: then anything is Possible.
Well Said.
July 2nd, 2026 09:41
Kevin Hulme said:
If the Will is there: then anything is Possible.
Well Said.
July 2nd, 2026 09:41
Taken
soheil khodaparasti said:
Thank you so much for your kind words. I am very pleased that my words reflected the spirit of your poem. It was a privilege to read your work, and I sincerely appreciate your gracious response.
Using virgin as an adjective to modify loaf, followed by oblivious of sacramental rights, suggests that the loaf is far more than simply a loaf of bread. The word defloured also works as a clever pun on deflower, whose meaning of depriving someone of virginity is reinforced by the image of the virgin loaf. These are just a few of the many suggestive and thought-provoking layers woven throughout your poem.
July 2nd, 2026 09:22
soheil khodaparasti said:
Thank you so much for your kind words. I am very pleased that my words reflected the spirit of your poem. It was a privilege to read your work, and I sincerely appreciate your gracious response.
Using virgin as an adjective to modify loaf, followed by oblivious of sacramental rights, suggests that the loaf is far more than simply a loaf of bread. The word defloured also works as a clever pun on deflower, whose meaning of depriving someone of virginity is reinforced by the image of the virgin loaf. These are just a few of the many suggestive and thought-provoking layers woven throughout your poem.
July 2nd, 2026 09:22
Taken
soheil khodaparasti said:
By illustrating that what is wrongly taken can never truly nourish but instead destroys the one who consumes it, you lead the reader to the deeper realization that stolen pleasures may satisfy for a moment but ultimately corrupt the soul of the one who takes them. Beautifully expressed.
July 2nd, 2026 08:57
soheil khodaparasti said:
By illustrating that what is wrongly taken can never truly nourish but instead destroys the one who consumes it, you lead the reader to the deeper realization that stolen pleasures may satisfy for a moment but ultimately corrupt the soul of the one who takes them. Beautifully expressed.
July 2nd, 2026 08:57
Conditional
Salvia.S said:
Love the grammatical wordplay that actually means something, about the wasted potential. Wet wood should burn, could burn, but without heat it won\'t. So you spurn it. Ruthless, but honest.
July 2nd, 2026 08:02
Salvia.S said:
Love the grammatical wordplay that actually means something, about the wasted potential. Wet wood should burn, could burn, but without heat it won\'t. So you spurn it. Ruthless, but honest.
July 2nd, 2026 08:02
Conditional
arqios said:
Here is a rhyme that unconditionally relays the conditional. 🙏🕊️
July 2nd, 2026 05:44
arqios said:
Here is a rhyme that unconditionally relays the conditional. 🙏🕊️
July 2nd, 2026 05:44
Conditional
Teddy.15 said:
Feed the flames of passion, that\'s how I hear this, without passion we are left with ashes or soggy wood good for nothing. Love this 🌹
July 2nd, 2026 03:35
Teddy.15 said:
Feed the flames of passion, that\'s how I hear this, without passion we are left with ashes or soggy wood good for nothing. Love this 🌹
July 2nd, 2026 03:35
Taken
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is a powerful and unsettling piece. The progression from theft to consequence unfolds with an almost biblical intensity, leaving a strong impression by the final lines. Thought-provoking write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 1st, 2026 22:49
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is a powerful and unsettling piece. The progression from theft to consequence unfolds with an almost biblical intensity, leaving a strong impression by the final lines. Thought-provoking write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 1st, 2026 22:49
Taken
Kevin Hulme said:
I\'ve Been in a Supermarket and seen People just shoving Items down their Shirts. And Walking out. It\'s in the News here alot as it\'s an Epidemic. A good Write.
July 1st, 2026 19:29
Kevin Hulme said:
I\'ve Been in a Supermarket and seen People just shoving Items down their Shirts. And Walking out. It\'s in the News here alot as it\'s an Epidemic. A good Write.
July 1st, 2026 19:29
Taken
arqios said:
Here, if you left something on the sidewalk it would have been swept away within the hour. 🙏🏻🕊️
July 1st, 2026 08:06
arqios said:
Here, if you left something on the sidewalk it would have been swept away within the hour. 🙏🏻🕊️
July 1st, 2026 08:06
Taken
Teddy.15 said:
A wonderful poem, your poem speaks to me as greed and it\'s everywhere 🌹
July 1st, 2026 07:43
Teddy.15 said:
A wonderful poem, your poem speaks to me as greed and it\'s everywhere 🌹
July 1st, 2026 07:43
Pieces
Dan Williams said:
Many kinds of glaciers leave many kinds of marks. Echoes of thought can realistically be dispersed by breezes. A flake of skin, a fallen hair, fingerprints are all evidence of this. Nice.
July 1st, 2026 02:52
Dan Williams said:
Many kinds of glaciers leave many kinds of marks. Echoes of thought can realistically be dispersed by breezes. A flake of skin, a fallen hair, fingerprints are all evidence of this. Nice.
July 1st, 2026 02:52
Taken
orchidee said:
Good write SB. I steal sewage for KP\'s dinners but no one complains! lol.
July 1st, 2026 02:27
orchidee said:
Good write SB. I steal sewage for KP\'s dinners but no one complains! lol.
July 1st, 2026 02:27
Touch
Soman Ragavan said:
Spells out the ravages age wreaks on the body. \"Broken fragments of truth\" : thus, even truth can be broken and served in parts... \"living stone...\" : while everything goes well, we don\'t notice the stone. When everyone is gone, we feel the coldness and silence of the stone...
June 30th, 2026 22:17
Soman Ragavan said:
Spells out the ravages age wreaks on the body. \"Broken fragments of truth\" : thus, even truth can be broken and served in parts... \"living stone...\" : while everything goes well, we don\'t notice the stone. When everyone is gone, we feel the coldness and silence of the stone...
June 30th, 2026 22:17
Touch
Kevin Hulme said:
A good Write. The Past and the Present. Two different Animals.
June 30th, 2026 18:19
Kevin Hulme said:
A good Write. The Past and the Present. Two different Animals.
June 30th, 2026 18:19
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