Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Brush painted
Lorenz said:
I think I hear a movement from the pastoral symphony ...
July 11th, 2026 10:08
Lorenz said:
I think I hear a movement from the pastoral symphony ...
July 11th, 2026 10:08
Brush painted
orchidee said:
Good write SB. A bit like chalk and cheese? e.g. KP and me. lol.
July 11th, 2026 09:29
orchidee said:
Good write SB. A bit like chalk and cheese? e.g. KP and me. lol.
July 11th, 2026 09:29
Brush painted
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, I love the reminder that some of the most beautiful things happen where order and wildness meet. Nature has a way of ignoring the boundaries we try to give it. Wonderful read. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
July 11th, 2026 08:03
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, I love the reminder that some of the most beautiful things happen where order and wildness meet. Nature has a way of ignoring the boundaries we try to give it. Wonderful read. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
July 11th, 2026 08:03
Out of sight
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, what a touching piece. The passage of twenty-five years makes the rediscovery of that ticket all the more powerful, and the ending carries such quiet heartbreak. Sometimes the smallest keepsakes hold the biggest stories. Wonderful write, my friend. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
July 11th, 2026 07:32
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, what a touching piece. The passage of twenty-five years makes the rediscovery of that ticket all the more powerful, and the ending carries such quiet heartbreak. Sometimes the smallest keepsakes hold the biggest stories. Wonderful write, my friend. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
July 11th, 2026 07:32
Brush painted
arqios said:
The complementary sides is where opposites meet, something beautiful, fragile, and enduring can be born. ποΈπ
July 11th, 2026 07:05
arqios said:
The complementary sides is where opposites meet, something beautiful, fragile, and enduring can be born. ποΈπ
July 11th, 2026 07:05
Out of sight
mylastwrites said:
The past is never far away from reminding us of loss. Very nicely done.
July 10th, 2026 21:57
mylastwrites said:
The past is never far away from reminding us of loss. Very nicely done.
July 10th, 2026 21:57
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Kevin Hulme said:
It\'s amazing the Objects you find at the back of a Drawer that revives old Memories.
Nice one.
July 10th, 2026 18:13
Kevin Hulme said:
It\'s amazing the Objects you find at the back of a Drawer that revives old Memories.
Nice one.
July 10th, 2026 18:13
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GenXer Sharon ππ said:
Nostalgiaβ¦ great write βοΈ my friend
July 10th, 2026 14:14
GenXer Sharon ππ said:
Nostalgiaβ¦ great write βοΈ my friend
July 10th, 2026 14:14
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Anna Wakey29 said:
Beautiful. I loved that it was short - the reason being is that the snappy length really added a certain weight and unconscious relatability to that awful snap-like realisation when you come across something that triggers such powerful memories and feelings. Well done
July 10th, 2026 12:18
Anna Wakey29 said:
Beautiful. I loved that it was short - the reason being is that the snappy length really added a certain weight and unconscious relatability to that awful snap-like realisation when you come across something that triggers such powerful memories and feelings. Well done
July 10th, 2026 12:18
The collector
falcon_mn said:
Thank you very much for your comment and for recognizing the potential in this poem.
Thanks!
July 10th, 2026 12:16
falcon_mn said:
Thank you very much for your comment and for recognizing the potential in this poem.
Thanks!
July 10th, 2026 12:16
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Syd said:
Hi Sorenbarret, it\'s funny how certain things can take you back. For me it\'s usually music that triggers memories. An enjoyable and relatable piece.
Well written - Syd π
July 10th, 2026 10:57
Syd said:
Hi Sorenbarret, it\'s funny how certain things can take you back. For me it\'s usually music that triggers memories. An enjoyable and relatable piece.
Well written - Syd π
July 10th, 2026 10:57
Out of sight
arqios said:
I have such used tickets lying around in places hidden from daily view! Some in actual albums to accompany old photos and such. πποΈ
July 10th, 2026 06:13
arqios said:
I have such used tickets lying around in places hidden from daily view! Some in actual albums to accompany old photos and such. πποΈ
July 10th, 2026 06:13
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Paul Bell said:
Good or bad, how quickly can an object instantly take us back to that moment.
One thing I intentionally never do, is return to places that have impacted my life.
You know right off that particular period has gone and the visit just spoils that moment in time.
July 10th, 2026 05:25
Paul Bell said:
Good or bad, how quickly can an object instantly take us back to that moment.
One thing I intentionally never do, is return to places that have impacted my life.
You know right off that particular period has gone and the visit just spoils that moment in time.
July 10th, 2026 05:25
Out of sight
soheil khodaparasti said:
Beautifully crafted. An ordinary object becomes a vessel for decades of forgotten emotion, a deeply relatable experience. It is a touching meditation on how grief can lie dormant for years, waiting for the smallest forgotten object to bring it rushing back. The emotion feels authentic and earned rather than sentimental.
July 10th, 2026 04:10
soheil khodaparasti said:
Beautifully crafted. An ordinary object becomes a vessel for decades of forgotten emotion, a deeply relatable experience. It is a touching meditation on how grief can lie dormant for years, waiting for the smallest forgotten object to bring it rushing back. The emotion feels authentic and earned rather than sentimental.
July 10th, 2026 04:10
Out of sight
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
a reminder of the past, good write
July 10th, 2026 04:03
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
a reminder of the past, good write
July 10th, 2026 04:03
One and the same
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good words soren. When we regenerate may be to love for all.
Andy
July 10th, 2026 01:12
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good words soren. When we regenerate may be to love for all.
Andy
July 10th, 2026 01:12
One and the same
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, what a thoughtful piece. I especially loved the metaphors throughout...the opposing poles, the meeting at the center, and especially \"We are all waves that nature saves.\" They give the poem a beautiful sense that we\'re all part of something far greater than ourselves. Really enjoyed this, my friend. πΉπ€ππ―οΈ
July 9th, 2026 22:52
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, what a thoughtful piece. I especially loved the metaphors throughout...the opposing poles, the meeting at the center, and especially \"We are all waves that nature saves.\" They give the poem a beautiful sense that we\'re all part of something far greater than ourselves. Really enjoyed this, my friend. πΉπ€ππ―οΈ
July 9th, 2026 22:52
One and the same
Lorenz said:
Nothing is lost .Everything is transformed .We are all part of the carbon cycle .
July 9th, 2026 08:19
Lorenz said:
Nothing is lost .Everything is transformed .We are all part of the carbon cycle .
July 9th, 2026 08:19
One and the same
soheil khodaparasti said:
If you put the first and last lines together, βFire and water, air and earth we were all one before our birth then return to dust β¦ As the living turn to dust and steel becomes rust all subject to regeneration,β then you arrive at the conclusion that nothing exists in isolation and that all life is part of nature\'s ongoing process of renewal.
July 9th, 2026 06:27
soheil khodaparasti said:
If you put the first and last lines together, βFire and water, air and earth we were all one before our birth then return to dust β¦ As the living turn to dust and steel becomes rust all subject to regeneration,β then you arrive at the conclusion that nothing exists in isolation and that all life is part of nature\'s ongoing process of renewal.
July 9th, 2026 06:27
One and the same
cellinic said:
Well-done, beautifully penned, with reserved emotions and reverberating ideas...
July 9th, 2026 05:58
cellinic said:
Well-done, beautifully penned, with reserved emotions and reverberating ideas...
July 9th, 2026 05:58
One and the same
Paul Bell said:
Got it in one.
Doesn\'t nature do a great job, giving us life for a time, and replacing us when our time is up.
July 9th, 2026 05:54
Paul Bell said:
Got it in one.
Doesn\'t nature do a great job, giving us life for a time, and replacing us when our time is up.
July 9th, 2026 05:54
One and the same
Teddy.15 said:
There are not enough stars in the universe to show my heartfelt gratitude towards these magnificent words in this magnificent poem. Kudos my dear sorrenbarret πΉ
July 9th, 2026 04:36
Teddy.15 said:
There are not enough stars in the universe to show my heartfelt gratitude towards these magnificent words in this magnificent poem. Kudos my dear sorrenbarret πΉ
July 9th, 2026 04:36
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