Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
The shape of a tree
Syd said:
True perfection is Imperfect. Nicely written.
- Syd
May 27th, 2026 16:58
Syd said:
True perfection is Imperfect. Nicely written.
- Syd
May 27th, 2026 16:58
Night\'s bedroom
mohammad ali said:
So beautifully described, dear, as usual! I\'m sure you\'re a master of poetry.
May 27th, 2026 14:12
mohammad ali said:
So beautifully described, dear, as usual! I\'m sure you\'re a master of poetry.
May 27th, 2026 14:12
Development
Joseph M Marion said:
I love the way you manipulate words very beautifully written
May 27th, 2026 10:49
Joseph M Marion said:
I love the way you manipulate words very beautifully written
May 27th, 2026 10:49
The shape of a tree
Lorenz said:
A riddle combining a Rubik\'s cube inside a maze and a puzzle of an imaginary geography...
I have the whole night ahead of me ...
May 27th, 2026 10:15
Lorenz said:
A riddle combining a Rubik\'s cube inside a maze and a puzzle of an imaginary geography...
I have the whole night ahead of me ...
May 27th, 2026 10:15
Little one
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, what a heartbreaking piece. The quiet vulnerability of the little finch wandering alone through a world full of unseen danger really lingers with me. “He pecks at specks getting just air” is such a painfully vivid moment...small, fragile, and lost. The darkness closing in at the end feels inevitable without ever becoming overdone. Powerful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 27th, 2026 10:02
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, what a heartbreaking piece. The quiet vulnerability of the little finch wandering alone through a world full of unseen danger really lingers with me. “He pecks at specks getting just air” is such a painfully vivid moment...small, fragile, and lost. The darkness closing in at the end feels inevitable without ever becoming overdone. Powerful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 27th, 2026 10:02
The shape of a tree
David Wakeling said:
This is deep and filled with metaphors that ask the question is are individual wishes greater than the community needs.Its a tricky question well posed here.Excellent mi amigo
May 27th, 2026 07:22
David Wakeling said:
This is deep and filled with metaphors that ask the question is are individual wishes greater than the community needs.Its a tricky question well posed here.Excellent mi amigo
May 27th, 2026 07:22
The shape of a tree
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
love the last line my friend
May 27th, 2026 04:07
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
love the last line my friend
May 27th, 2026 04:07
Little one
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words soren, I had a young Goldfinch in my garden a few days ago feeding on the bird feeder, it was wonderful to watch.
Andy
May 27th, 2026 01:44
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words soren, I had a young Goldfinch in my garden a few days ago feeding on the bird feeder, it was wonderful to watch.
Andy
May 27th, 2026 01:44
The chase
Waiting for Silence said:
Harsh predator-prey dynamic, rich in sound and urgency. Good one
May 26th, 2026 23:35
Waiting for Silence said:
Harsh predator-prey dynamic, rich in sound and urgency. Good one
May 26th, 2026 23:35
Little one
Waiting for Silence said:
A beautifully poem that captures innocence, vulnerability, and the quiet tragedy of nature with clear and emotional imagery. Nice Write!
May 26th, 2026 23:33
Waiting for Silence said:
A beautifully poem that captures innocence, vulnerability, and the quiet tragedy of nature with clear and emotional imagery. Nice Write!
May 26th, 2026 23:33
Little one
Kevin Hulme said:
That wouldn\'t be one of Disney\'s better Films.
A good Write.
May 26th, 2026 19:34
Kevin Hulme said:
That wouldn\'t be one of Disney\'s better Films.
A good Write.
May 26th, 2026 19:34
Little one
soheil khodaparasti said:
A touching and haunting poem that beautifully captures the fragility of a lost fledgling, reflecting the universal human experience of feeling helplessly lost and desperately in need of protection. The vivid imagery and growing sense of danger create a deeply sad and powerful ending — a very well-written piece.
May 26th, 2026 14:28
soheil khodaparasti said:
A touching and haunting poem that beautifully captures the fragility of a lost fledgling, reflecting the universal human experience of feeling helplessly lost and desperately in need of protection. The vivid imagery and growing sense of danger create a deeply sad and powerful ending — a very well-written piece.
May 26th, 2026 14:28
Little one
Neville said:
Ouch, it seems there was more than just little old me that neva saw that coming .. 👍
May 26th, 2026 13:01
Neville said:
Ouch, it seems there was more than just little old me that neva saw that coming .. 👍
May 26th, 2026 13:01
Little one
Paul Bell said:
Nature and the life she provides, or doesn\'t in some cases.
We see nature at work, but we probably don\'t see the darkside of it.
The finch won\'t survive without its mother, but maybe feed another.
That\'s nature in the raw, unassuming, moving on.
May 26th, 2026 11:44
Paul Bell said:
Nature and the life she provides, or doesn\'t in some cases.
We see nature at work, but we probably don\'t see the darkside of it.
The finch won\'t survive without its mother, but maybe feed another.
That\'s nature in the raw, unassuming, moving on.
May 26th, 2026 11:44
Little one
Lorenz said:
Nature is just in its ruthless way.Only humans no longer respect its laws .
May 26th, 2026 09:27
Lorenz said:
Nature is just in its ruthless way.Only humans no longer respect its laws .
May 26th, 2026 09:27
Little one
Katie B. said:
The swallow of a cruel world. We can often be oblivious, naively expecting the best out of our fellow man. Well written and thoughtfully crafted.
May 26th, 2026 08:59
Katie B. said:
The swallow of a cruel world. We can often be oblivious, naively expecting the best out of our fellow man. Well written and thoughtfully crafted.
May 26th, 2026 08:59
Little one
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a tender ache in this—the smallness of that finch against a world that doesn’t pause for him.
And that ending lands quiet and cold… nature moving on, even when something fragile disappears into it.
May 26th, 2026 07:15
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a tender ache in this—the smallness of that finch against a world that doesn’t pause for him.
And that ending lands quiet and cold… nature moving on, even when something fragile disappears into it.
May 26th, 2026 07:15
Little one
arqios said:
The state and condition that reverse anthropomorphisation elevates is stunning. 🙏🕊️
May 26th, 2026 06:20
arqios said:
The state and condition that reverse anthropomorphisation elevates is stunning. 🙏🕊️
May 26th, 2026 06:20
Little one
David Wakeling said:
I think this is clever.It can be taken as a simple but sad story of a lost bird.Or as a statement about the human condition.We are all lost birds swallowed byt he dark.Very poetic mi amigo
May 26th, 2026 03:13
David Wakeling said:
I think this is clever.It can be taken as a simple but sad story of a lost bird.Or as a statement about the human condition.We are all lost birds swallowed byt he dark.Very poetic mi amigo
May 26th, 2026 03:13
The chase
Goldfinch60 said:
I hope they did not catch him soren. Good words.
Andy
May 26th, 2026 01:44
Goldfinch60 said:
I hope they did not catch him soren. Good words.
Andy
May 26th, 2026 01:44
The chase
Kevin Hulme said:
If the Hare was chased by \'The Tortoise\' it would have been the same result. So it couldn\'t win.
Good Write here.
May 25th, 2026 19:21
Kevin Hulme said:
If the Hare was chased by \'The Tortoise\' it would have been the same result. So it couldn\'t win.
Good Write here.
May 25th, 2026 19:21
The chase
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, wow…this one runs on pure sound and momentum, my friend. The rhyme and internal rhythm feel almost breathless…like the chase itself never slows long enough to think. There’s something primal and unsettling woven through the whole thing. Powerful write and a fave for the sound and momentum of it. Just wow. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 25th, 2026 15:30
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, wow…this one runs on pure sound and momentum, my friend. The rhyme and internal rhythm feel almost breathless…like the chase itself never slows long enough to think. There’s something primal and unsettling woven through the whole thing. Powerful write and a fave for the sound and momentum of it. Just wow. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 25th, 2026 15:30
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