Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett



Brush painted
Kevin Hulme said:

An interesting Image of a Portrait is formed by your description. Nice one.

July 11th, 2026 19:49

Did you know it\'s all true
Jyoti Verma said:

Exactly! Just because man has the power to express ,can\'t say that man is the best, nature is more beautiful and more expressive,other firms of life have more interesting ways to express,more adventurous ways to survive and tgrive

July 11th, 2026 15:21

Development
JENNY M GUERRIER said:

You have a gift for turning everyday strugglesโ€”especially those of motherhood โ€”into reflective verse.

July 11th, 2026 12:02

Man
Durdica Porobija said:

The poem is full of obvious truth, exposing the lie in which we live, distant from nature and tenderness.

July 11th, 2026 11:50

Brush painted
Lorenz said:

I think I hear a movement from the pastoral symphony ...

July 11th, 2026 10:08

Brush painted
orchidee said:

Good write SB. A bit like chalk and cheese? e.g. KP and me. lol.

July 11th, 2026 09:29

Brush painted
Tristan Robert Lange said:

My friend, I love the reminder that some of the most beautiful things happen where order and wildness meet. Nature has a way of ignoring the boundaries we try to give it. Wonderful read. ๐ŸŒน๐Ÿ–ค๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ•ฏ๏ธ๐Ÿฆโ€โฌ›

July 11th, 2026 08:03

Out of sight
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Soren, what a touching piece. The passage of twenty-five years makes the rediscovery of that ticket all the more powerful, and the ending carries such quiet heartbreak. Sometimes the smallest keepsakes hold the biggest stories. Wonderful write, my friend. ๐ŸŒน๐Ÿ–ค๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ•ฏ๏ธ๐Ÿฆโ€โฌ›

July 11th, 2026 07:32

Brush painted
arqios said:

The complementary sides is where opposites meet, something beautiful, fragile, and enduring can be born. ๐Ÿ•Š๏ธ๐Ÿ™

July 11th, 2026 07:05

Brush painted
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:

flows so well

July 11th, 2026 04:45

Out of sight
mylastwrites said:

The past is never far away from reminding us of loss. Very nicely done.

July 10th, 2026 21:57

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July 10th, 2026 21:56

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Kevin Hulme said:

It\'s amazing the Objects you find at the back of a Drawer that revives old Memories.
Nice one.

July 10th, 2026 18:13

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GenXer Sharon ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ€ said:

Nostalgiaโ€ฆ great write โœ๏ธ my friend

July 10th, 2026 14:14

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orchidee said:

A fine write SB.

July 10th, 2026 12:44

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Anna Wakey29 said:

Beautiful. I loved that it was short - the reason being is that the snappy length really added a certain weight and unconscious relatability to that awful snap-like realisation when you come across something that triggers such powerful memories and feelings. Well done

July 10th, 2026 12:18

The collector
falcon_mn said:

Thank you very much for your comment and for recognizing the potential in this poem.
Thanks!

July 10th, 2026 12:16

Out of sight
Syd said:

Hi Sorenbarret, it\'s funny how certain things can take you back. For me it\'s usually music that triggers memories. An enjoyable and relatable piece.

Well written - Syd ๐Ÿ„



July 10th, 2026 10:57

Out of sight
Demar Desu said:

Masterpiece

July 10th, 2026 07:26

Out of sight
arqios said:

I have such used tickets lying around in places hidden from daily view! Some in actual albums to accompany old photos and such. ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ•Š๏ธ

July 10th, 2026 06:13

Out of sight
Paul Bell said:

Good or bad, how quickly can an object instantly take us back to that moment.
One thing I intentionally never do, is return to places that have impacted my life.
You know right off that particular period has gone and the visit just spoils that moment in time.

July 10th, 2026 05:25

Out of sight
soheil khodaparasti said:

Beautifully crafted. An ordinary object becomes a vessel for decades of forgotten emotion, a deeply relatable experience. It is a touching meditation on how grief can lie dormant for years, waiting for the smallest forgotten object to bring it rushing back. The emotion feels authentic and earned rather than sentimental.

July 10th, 2026 04:10

Out of sight
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:

a reminder of the past, good write

July 10th, 2026 04:03

One and the same
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good words soren. When we regenerate may be to love for all.

Andy

July 10th, 2026 01:12

One and the same
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Soren, what a thoughtful piece. I especially loved the metaphors throughout...the opposing poles, the meeting at the center, and especially \"We are all waves that nature saves.\" They give the poem a beautiful sense that we\'re all part of something far greater than ourselves. Really enjoyed this, my friend. ๐ŸŒน๐Ÿ–ค๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ•ฏ๏ธ

July 9th, 2026 22:52

One and the same
Kevin Hulme said:

The Cycle of life. A fine, thoughtful read.

July 9th, 2026 18:26

One and the same
orchidee said:

Good write Dust, erm, SB. lol.

July 9th, 2026 11:44

His father\'s chair
gray0328 said:

Very Good work Soren

July 9th, 2026 10:35

One and the same
Lorenz said:

Nothing is lost .Everything is transformed .We are all part of the carbon cycle .

July 9th, 2026 08:19

One and the same
soheil khodaparasti said:

If you put the first and last lines together, โ€œFire and water, air and earth we were all one before our birth then return to dust โ€ฆ As the living turn to dust and steel becomes rust all subject to regeneration,โ€ then you arrive at the conclusion that nothing exists in isolation and that all life is part of nature\'s ongoing process of renewal.

July 9th, 2026 06:27

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