Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Betrayal
Lorenz said:
Oblivion passes and tosses these betrayals into the shredder of memory and they are recycled into poetry ...
August 8th, 2026 04:34
Lorenz said:
Oblivion passes and tosses these betrayals into the shredder of memory and they are recycled into poetry ...
August 8th, 2026 04:34
Corrosion
Doggerel Dave said:
Should have got in earlier, but now it has already been said: \'painterly\' fits perfectly.
August 7th, 2026 19:26
Doggerel Dave said:
Should have got in earlier, but now it has already been said: \'painterly\' fits perfectly.
August 7th, 2026 19:26
Corrosion
Kevin Hulme said:
A fine discriptive write. An Impressionist Painting in Words.
August 7th, 2026 18:27
Kevin Hulme said:
A fine discriptive write. An Impressionist Painting in Words.
August 7th, 2026 18:27
Corrosion
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Damn, Soren...what a beautifully painted piece. Everything feels textured and tactile, from that corroded evening through the dunes and into the intimacy of night. By the end, darkness isn’t emptiness at all...it’s a revelation. Absolutely loved this, my friend! And they are clearly giving you cooler font choices than me! 🤣 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 7th, 2026 08:34
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Damn, Soren...what a beautifully painted piece. Everything feels textured and tactile, from that corroded evening through the dunes and into the intimacy of night. By the end, darkness isn’t emptiness at all...it’s a revelation. Absolutely loved this, my friend! And they are clearly giving you cooler font choices than me! 🤣 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 7th, 2026 08:34
Corrosion
Paul Bell said:
Two views on the contrasting day as the earth turns.
Maybe a woman walking in and out of someones life.
Tomorrow brings a different view.
August 7th, 2026 05:34
Paul Bell said:
Two views on the contrasting day as the earth turns.
Maybe a woman walking in and out of someones life.
Tomorrow brings a different view.
August 7th, 2026 05:34
Corrosion
soheil khodaparasti said:
Such a profound paradox: daylight reveals what is visible, while night reveals what is hidden.
August 7th, 2026 03:47
soheil khodaparasti said:
Such a profound paradox: daylight reveals what is visible, while night reveals what is hidden.
August 7th, 2026 03:47
It really happened
Goldfinch60 said:
Great fun write soren but unfortunately is so true nowadays.
Andy
August 7th, 2026 01:03
Goldfinch60 said:
Great fun write soren but unfortunately is so true nowadays.
Andy
August 7th, 2026 01:03
It really happened
mylastwrites said:
Nice write. Made me smile. Thanks for sharing.
August 6th, 2026 17:13
mylastwrites said:
Nice write. Made me smile. Thanks for sharing.
August 6th, 2026 17:13
It really happened
Kevin Hulme said:
An enjoyable Read. Nice Rhythm to it.
The reverse happened back in the Eighties.
My Mother died November 6th 1988.
One year later : November 6th, she got Mail saying she had to do Jury Service..
Couldn\'t make it up.
August 6th, 2026 16:06
Kevin Hulme said:
An enjoyable Read. Nice Rhythm to it.
The reverse happened back in the Eighties.
My Mother died November 6th 1988.
One year later : November 6th, she got Mail saying she had to do Jury Service..
Couldn\'t make it up.
August 6th, 2026 16:06
It really happened
Akshadha_Joshi1310 said:
Great work I really had fun reading it you sure have a way with words 🙃
August 6th, 2026 14:42
Akshadha_Joshi1310 said:
Great work I really had fun reading it you sure have a way with words 🙃
August 6th, 2026 14:42
It really happened
Paul Bell said:
It seems in this world proving you are dead is tricky.
Now, trying to prove you\'re not dead seems even trickier.
This is usually when the help desk phone the police on you for impersonating a dead person.
August 6th, 2026 14:34
Paul Bell said:
It seems in this world proving you are dead is tricky.
Now, trying to prove you\'re not dead seems even trickier.
This is usually when the help desk phone the police on you for impersonating a dead person.
August 6th, 2026 14:34
It really happened
Doggerel Dave said:
Unsure of the time frame here; are you able to blame this on AI, or was this older and the work of a bored seat polishing pen pusher?
Entertaining write, Soren.
August 6th, 2026 09:03
Doggerel Dave said:
Unsure of the time frame here; are you able to blame this on AI, or was this older and the work of a bored seat polishing pen pusher?
Entertaining write, Soren.
August 6th, 2026 09:03
It really happened
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this had me laughing! I felt the frustration of getting trapped inside a system whose records carry more authority than the living person disputing them. That deliciously dark payoff lands perfectly. And I believe the title! Of course it really happened! Of course! Excellent work, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 6th, 2026 08:12
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this had me laughing! I felt the frustration of getting trapped inside a system whose records carry more authority than the living person disputing them. That deliciously dark payoff lands perfectly. And I believe the title! Of course it really happened! Of course! Excellent work, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 6th, 2026 08:12
It really happened
Lorenz said:
Knowing that you\'ve already died that\'s a once-in a-life time experience ...
August 6th, 2026 04:27
Lorenz said:
Knowing that you\'ve already died that\'s a once-in a-life time experience ...
August 6th, 2026 04:27
It really happened
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Good write friend much enjoyed
August 6th, 2026 03:35
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Good write friend much enjoyed
August 6th, 2026 03:35
It really happened
soheil khodaparasti said:
This carries the atmosphere of No Country for Old Men—a world where ordinary conversations reveal unsettling truths, shaped by Cormac McCarthy\'s stark realism and the deeper existential concerns that echo through William Butler Yeats.
August 6th, 2026 02:40
soheil khodaparasti said:
This carries the atmosphere of No Country for Old Men—a world where ordinary conversations reveal unsettling truths, shaped by Cormac McCarthy\'s stark realism and the deeper existential concerns that echo through William Butler Yeats.
August 6th, 2026 02:40
Freedom
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this really made me stop and think…I like how you contrast freedom and love with the ways people try to possess them. There’s a quiet philosophical thread running through both stanzas that lingers after the read. Beautiful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 5th, 2026 22:55
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this really made me stop and think…I like how you contrast freedom and love with the ways people try to possess them. There’s a quiet philosophical thread running through both stanzas that lingers after the read. Beautiful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 5th, 2026 22:55
Freedom
Kevin Hulme said:
Fine Poem on Freedom and Love.
Last Stanza reminds me of that great Cole Porter Song: \'Love for Sale\'. The Manhattan Transfer did a fine Rendition. A fave.
August 5th, 2026 16:28
Kevin Hulme said:
Fine Poem on Freedom and Love.
Last Stanza reminds me of that great Cole Porter Song: \'Love for Sale\'. The Manhattan Transfer did a fine Rendition. A fave.
August 5th, 2026 16:28
Freedom
peto said:
Always enjoy reading from your pen soren
\"But it\'s sister passion \" is a stunning line
August 5th, 2026 11:30
peto said:
Always enjoy reading from your pen soren
\"But it\'s sister passion \" is a stunning line
August 5th, 2026 11:30
State of mind
DLewis88 said:
It\'s wonderful. You did a great job on the writing.
August 5th, 2026 09:51
DLewis88 said:
It\'s wonderful. You did a great job on the writing.
August 5th, 2026 09:51
Freedom
Paul Bell said:
What price is passion if love ebbs away.
What price is freedom if you open your mouth to loud.
What you think you have, in reality you don\'t.
August 5th, 2026 09:01
Paul Bell said:
What price is passion if love ebbs away.
What price is freedom if you open your mouth to loud.
What you think you have, in reality you don\'t.
August 5th, 2026 09:01
Freedom
Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS said:
Often, we mistake desire for love, though there are as many kinds of love as there are boundless hearts.
A thought-provoking poem, especially in an age where everything is monetized and bartered...
August 5th, 2026 08:36
Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS said:
Often, we mistake desire for love, though there are as many kinds of love as there are boundless hearts.
A thought-provoking poem, especially in an age where everything is monetized and bartered...
August 5th, 2026 08:36
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