Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
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Mirela said:
I like the way you expressed letting of the old to make way for the new
June 4th, 2026 08:57
Mirela said:
I like the way you expressed letting of the old to make way for the new
June 4th, 2026 08:57
Different shades of love
mohammad ali said:
Always beautifully composed, especially about nature, which is my ever favorite issue, dear! Really wonderful!
June 4th, 2026 04:57
mohammad ali said:
Always beautifully composed, especially about nature, which is my ever favorite issue, dear! Really wonderful!
June 4th, 2026 04:57
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David Wakeling said:
This raises some interesting points. There can be no master without loss.Some thoughtful phrases here
June 4th, 2026 04:55
David Wakeling said:
This raises some interesting points. There can be no master without loss.Some thoughtful phrases here
June 4th, 2026 04:55
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Paul Bell said:
Bring Oedipus into the 21st century, and the social workers and Police are waiting for him.
In contrast to, Lao Tzu, who would be like, calm it it down man, have a smoke.
Screw Jesus into the cross, you still feel the pain.
June 4th, 2026 04:52
Paul Bell said:
Bring Oedipus into the 21st century, and the social workers and Police are waiting for him.
In contrast to, Lao Tzu, who would be like, calm it it down man, have a smoke.
Screw Jesus into the cross, you still feel the pain.
June 4th, 2026 04:52
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Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words soren, I have sung some of those songs.
Andy
June 4th, 2026 00:45
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words soren, I have sung some of those songs.
Andy
June 4th, 2026 00:45
Feelings of loss
antra.coree said:
Some goodbyes feel more painful than dying...
June 3rd, 2026 21:49
antra.coree said:
Some goodbyes feel more painful than dying...
June 3rd, 2026 21:49
Gingerbread men
antra.coree said:
So true one mistake is enough to forget 100 good things
June 3rd, 2026 21:45
antra.coree said:
So true one mistake is enough to forget 100 good things
June 3rd, 2026 21:45
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Kevin Hulme said:
What gets me is \'Small Print\'. You need a Microscope to read it . Or in a Supermarket and the Advent comes over the Speaker . And when they get to the Small Print they talk really fast .
You can\'t catch it. Good Write.
June 3rd, 2026 19:56
Kevin Hulme said:
What gets me is \'Small Print\'. You need a Microscope to read it . Or in a Supermarket and the Advent comes over the Speaker . And when they get to the Small Print they talk really fast .
You can\'t catch it. Good Write.
June 3rd, 2026 19:56
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Paul Bell said:
The iconic, smoke gerts in your eyes I\'m sure was used in a heating advert here.
If I had saved all my lottery contributions, I would be Calefornian dreaming today.
Nostalgia, wasted on the young.
June 3rd, 2026 09:39
Paul Bell said:
The iconic, smoke gerts in your eyes I\'m sure was used in a heating advert here.
If I had saved all my lottery contributions, I would be Calefornian dreaming today.
Nostalgia, wasted on the young.
June 3rd, 2026 09:39
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Friendship said:
A powerful poem. Your poem reflects on themes of disillusionment, the fleeting nature of dreams, and the irony of human experience, particularly concerning consumerism and the search for meaning. It juxtaposes the idealism of “winning lottery tickets” and “sunshine promises” with the harsh realities represented by “no return policy” and “going out of business sales.” Your imagery evokes nostalgia and loss, suggesting that while dreams are alluring, they often lead to disappointment and confusion.
June 3rd, 2026 07:35
Friendship said:
A powerful poem. Your poem reflects on themes of disillusionment, the fleeting nature of dreams, and the irony of human experience, particularly concerning consumerism and the search for meaning. It juxtaposes the idealism of “winning lottery tickets” and “sunshine promises” with the harsh realities represented by “no return policy” and “going out of business sales.” Your imagery evokes nostalgia and loss, suggesting that while dreams are alluring, they often lead to disappointment and confusion.
June 3rd, 2026 07:35
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Waiting for Silence said:
I like how the poem plays with opposites—it feels almost like you’re reminding us how everything in life is connected. Good Write!!
June 3rd, 2026 06:33
Waiting for Silence said:
I like how the poem plays with opposites—it feels almost like you’re reminding us how everything in life is connected. Good Write!!
June 3rd, 2026 06:33
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Soman Ragavan said:
A poem packed with many hidden meanings to be uncovered. Nice write.
June 3rd, 2026 05:15
Soman Ragavan said:
A poem packed with many hidden meanings to be uncovered. Nice write.
June 3rd, 2026 05:15
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David Wakeling said:
This was an enjoyable read .I loved the platters singing,Mack the night and Blue Moon is still one of my favourite songs.The ending is a little sad but all good things come to an end.Great journey here
June 3rd, 2026 04:45
David Wakeling said:
This was an enjoyable read .I loved the platters singing,Mack the night and Blue Moon is still one of my favourite songs.The ending is a little sad but all good things come to an end.Great journey here
June 3rd, 2026 04:45
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JAINESH.D said:
The imagery in this piece is wonderfully vivid. Framing the wind as a plow carving through the .field of sky. instantly sets a grand, turbulent stage. What resonates most, however, is the striking contrast between the grand scale of nature and the intimate vulnerability of the leaf. The line \'clings with umbilical stem\' perfectly captures that visceral, instinctual resistance to change and the anxiety of being replaced. A beautifully poignant meditation on transitions.
June 2nd, 2026 22:47
JAINESH.D said:
The imagery in this piece is wonderfully vivid. Framing the wind as a plow carving through the .field of sky. instantly sets a grand, turbulent stage. What resonates most, however, is the striking contrast between the grand scale of nature and the intimate vulnerability of the leaf. The line \'clings with umbilical stem\' perfectly captures that visceral, instinctual resistance to change and the anxiety of being replaced. A beautifully poignant meditation on transitions.
June 2nd, 2026 22:47
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Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this hit me hard. I love how the poem refuses to let anything stand alone...every quality carries its counterpart within it. The repeated structure gives it the feel of a philosophical chant, inviting the reader to look beyond easy categories and closer at the tensions that shape our lives. Thought-provoking and elegantly crafted, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 2nd, 2026 21:32
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this hit me hard. I love how the poem refuses to let anything stand alone...every quality carries its counterpart within it. The repeated structure gives it the feel of a philosophical chant, inviting the reader to look beyond easy categories and closer at the tensions that shape our lives. Thought-provoking and elegantly crafted, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 2nd, 2026 21:32
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antra.coree said:
So true, if we search for bad in good their will be
If we search darkness in light there will be!
Nicely done 👍🏻
June 2nd, 2026 19:59
antra.coree said:
So true, if we search for bad in good their will be
If we search darkness in light there will be!
Nicely done 👍🏻
June 2nd, 2026 19:59
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Lorenz said:
A fascinating step into the realm of the pataphysical dualism !
June 2nd, 2026 09:20
Lorenz said:
A fascinating step into the realm of the pataphysical dualism !
June 2nd, 2026 09:20
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David Wakeling said:
Wow this certainly does make for some wonderful word play.Lots to think about here.I always admire the internal and initial rhyme.Well done compadre
June 2nd, 2026 06:53
David Wakeling said:
Wow this certainly does make for some wonderful word play.Lots to think about here.I always admire the internal and initial rhyme.Well done compadre
June 2nd, 2026 06:53
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Friendship said:
Your writing had me thinking. I may not have understood it, but here\'s my take. Your poem explores the duality and interconnectedness of opposites in life. The poet suggests that courage can emerge from fear, strength from weakness, light from darkness, and right from wrong. The central idea is that opposites are not merely distinct but interdependent and often coexist in complex relationships. I noticed a similarity between your poem and something I wrote yesterday; it was quite thought-provoking. Your work has its merits, and I\'m grateful for the share.
June 2nd, 2026 06:46
Friendship said:
Your writing had me thinking. I may not have understood it, but here\'s my take. Your poem explores the duality and interconnectedness of opposites in life. The poet suggests that courage can emerge from fear, strength from weakness, light from darkness, and right from wrong. The central idea is that opposites are not merely distinct but interdependent and often coexist in complex relationships. I noticed a similarity between your poem and something I wrote yesterday; it was quite thought-provoking. Your work has its merits, and I\'m grateful for the share.
June 2nd, 2026 06:46
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