Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Shades
cellinic said:
A very nice, deep, and really a multifaceted write) Rather emotional and sincere...
January 8th, 2026 11:51
cellinic said:
A very nice, deep, and really a multifaceted write) Rather emotional and sincere...
January 8th, 2026 11:51
Shades
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Excellent, my friend! I relate to how landscapes change while still feeling familiar. The past doesn’t disappear, it just rearranges itself. This captures that quiet disorientation well. Wonderful job on this! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 8th, 2026 09:41
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Excellent, my friend! I relate to how landscapes change while still feeling familiar. The past doesn’t disappear, it just rearranges itself. This captures that quiet disorientation well. Wonderful job on this! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 8th, 2026 09:41
Shades
Lorenz said:
Atmosphere in melancholic tones as if time did not want to die...
January 8th, 2026 08:22
Lorenz said:
Atmosphere in melancholic tones as if time did not want to die...
January 8th, 2026 08:22
Where is Santa? Does God know?
Andrew Deaton said:
I really like this poem. So strong in it\'s deceit.
January 8th, 2026 05:39
Andrew Deaton said:
I really like this poem. So strong in it\'s deceit.
January 8th, 2026 05:39
Shades
Paul Bell said:
I suppose in a way, life and death, natures way.
Storm Goretti hits Britain today, we\'ll all be perishing weeds at the end of it.
Is it sunny in Brazil by any chance.
January 8th, 2026 04:43
Paul Bell said:
I suppose in a way, life and death, natures way.
Storm Goretti hits Britain today, we\'ll all be perishing weeds at the end of it.
Is it sunny in Brazil by any chance.
January 8th, 2026 04:43
Shades
orchidee said:
Good write SB. I\'m growing some seeds that will sprout to weeds to feed to KP! lol. How can I thank you enough for helping me with recipes for her?! lol.
January 8th, 2026 03:38
orchidee said:
Good write SB. I\'m growing some seeds that will sprout to weeds to feed to KP! lol. How can I thank you enough for helping me with recipes for her?! lol.
January 8th, 2026 03:38
Perfection
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true Soren, hopefully one day that perfect poem will come out of us.
Andy
January 8th, 2026 02:41
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true Soren, hopefully one day that perfect poem will come out of us.
Andy
January 8th, 2026 02:41
Perfection
Kevin Hulme said:
So true. It\'s really hard to get a Feeling or Emotion into the Correct Words .
That\'s why the Great Poets are so good.
A fine Poem.
January 7th, 2026 18:57
Kevin Hulme said:
So true. It\'s really hard to get a Feeling or Emotion into the Correct Words .
That\'s why the Great Poets are so good.
A fine Poem.
January 7th, 2026 18:57
Perfection
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this feels quietly true. It names that ache every writer knows, the gap between what burns inside and what survives the page. It lands with calm honesty. Well done, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
January 7th, 2026 09:22
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this feels quietly true. It names that ache every writer knows, the gap between what burns inside and what survives the page. It lands with calm honesty. Well done, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
January 7th, 2026 09:22
Perfection
Allie561 said:
Wow! You never cease to amaze me with how well your words flow and connect. You opened up a window to see into each one of us and spilled the secrets! You also captured how it’s much easier to write poetry down instead of speaking it, how true it is that when we try the words disappear. Another amazing read, and a great way to start off my morning!
January 7th, 2026 09:15
Allie561 said:
Wow! You never cease to amaze me with how well your words flow and connect. You opened up a window to see into each one of us and spilled the secrets! You also captured how it’s much easier to write poetry down instead of speaking it, how true it is that when we try the words disappear. Another amazing read, and a great way to start off my morning!
January 7th, 2026 09:15
Perfection
Friendship said:
Your poem revolves around the notion that true perfection exists within individuals but remains unexpressed in written form. The poet suggests that the essence of creativity and passion cannot be fully captured through words on paper.
January 7th, 2026 07:09
Friendship said:
Your poem revolves around the notion that true perfection exists within individuals but remains unexpressed in written form. The poet suggests that the essence of creativity and passion cannot be fully captured through words on paper.
January 7th, 2026 07:09
Perfection
Paul Bell said:
Yes, the perfect poem came at four this morning, and I should have written it down, but decided I would remember it.
Now, like the Titanic it has gone in stages.
January 7th, 2026 05:13
Paul Bell said:
Yes, the perfect poem came at four this morning, and I should have written it down, but decided I would remember it.
Now, like the Titanic it has gone in stages.
January 7th, 2026 05:13
Perfection
orchidee said:
Ohh, we knows only you and I are perfect! heehee. I read a bit - If you happen to find the \'perfect\' church\', don\'t join it - you\'ll spoil it!\' lol.
And now that perfect poem....... it might be a \'silent\' one\' heehee. No words in it.
January 7th, 2026 03:18
orchidee said:
Ohh, we knows only you and I are perfect! heehee. I read a bit - If you happen to find the \'perfect\' church\', don\'t join it - you\'ll spoil it!\' lol.
And now that perfect poem....... it might be a \'silent\' one\' heehee. No words in it.
January 7th, 2026 03:18
Where is Santa? Does God know?
Kevin Hulme said:
Maybe he is a Sham. But the Easter Bunny...
January 6th, 2026 20:01
Kevin Hulme said:
Maybe he is a Sham. But the Easter Bunny...
January 6th, 2026 20:01
Where is Santa? Does God know?
arqios said:
And the moon is nowhere either🙏🏻🕊️
January 6th, 2026 16:42
arqios said:
And the moon is nowhere either🙏🏻🕊️
January 6th, 2026 16:42
Guilt by association
NinjaGirl said:
A very good warning. Not only is your reputation affected by who you hang out with, you are as well, as you become like those you spend time with.
January 6th, 2026 13:41
NinjaGirl said:
A very good warning. Not only is your reputation affected by who you hang out with, you are as well, as you become like those you spend time with.
January 6th, 2026 13:41
Where is Santa? Does God know?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! Powerful, my friend! This confronts guilt and loss head-on. It’s stark, honest, and deeply unsettling in the way it needs to be. Well done!🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 6th, 2026 13:36
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! Powerful, my friend! This confronts guilt and loss head-on. It’s stark, honest, and deeply unsettling in the way it needs to be. Well done!🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 6th, 2026 13:36
Hazard
NinjaGirl said:
And being a poet certainly means being naked! But they say the pen is mightier than the sword, so when critics aim I suppose we continue.
January 6th, 2026 13:04
NinjaGirl said:
And being a poet certainly means being naked! But they say the pen is mightier than the sword, so when critics aim I suppose we continue.
January 6th, 2026 13:04
Love your enemies
NinjaGirl said:
One day I wish to be as loving and forgiving as this poem! How often I have wept in my own anger and longed for the peace of forgiveness. Very very beautiful and well done.
January 6th, 2026 12:59
NinjaGirl said:
One day I wish to be as loving and forgiving as this poem! How often I have wept in my own anger and longed for the peace of forgiveness. Very very beautiful and well done.
January 6th, 2026 12:59
What we hold inside
NinjaGirl said:
I quite like this metaphor and the imagery with it! Definite favorite!
January 6th, 2026 12:56
NinjaGirl said:
I quite like this metaphor and the imagery with it! Definite favorite!
January 6th, 2026 12:56
Where is Santa? Does God know?
NinjaGirl said:
As a child I once mixed up \"Santa\" and \"Satan\" because they have the same letters...I find as a child we get Santa and as adults we deal with Satan!
January 6th, 2026 12:43
NinjaGirl said:
As a child I once mixed up \"Santa\" and \"Satan\" because they have the same letters...I find as a child we get Santa and as adults we deal with Satan!
January 6th, 2026 12:43
Where is Santa? Does God know?
Elaine P. said:
Soren,
I found out from my friends and received confirmation from my parents. It was sad, but I don\'t recall any trauma. I live to tell the tale.
Perdita
January 6th, 2026 08:55
Elaine P. said:
Soren,
I found out from my friends and received confirmation from my parents. It was sad, but I don\'t recall any trauma. I live to tell the tale.
Perdita
January 6th, 2026 08:55
Where is Santa? Does God know?
Thomas W Case said:
Hard-hitting and unflinching. I like how you capture the weight of loss and guilt with no sugarcoating. The final line—‘you put out the sun’—lands like a punch. Raw, honest, and unforgettable.
January 6th, 2026 08:00
Thomas W Case said:
Hard-hitting and unflinching. I like how you capture the weight of loss and guilt with no sugarcoating. The final line—‘you put out the sun’—lands like a punch. Raw, honest, and unforgettable.
January 6th, 2026 08:00
Where is Santa? Does God know?
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
What we tend to believe as innocent children. When we grow we know better. Great write
January 6th, 2026 07:34
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
What we tend to believe as innocent children. When we grow we know better. Great write
January 6th, 2026 07:34
Where is Santa? Does God know?
Friendship said:
Your poem explores the loss of innocence and the harsh realities of adulthood, juxtaposing the hopeful imagination of childhood with the sobering experiences of life. It conveys a sense of despair and mourning for dreams that have been shattered.
January 6th, 2026 06:19
Friendship said:
Your poem explores the loss of innocence and the harsh realities of adulthood, juxtaposing the hopeful imagination of childhood with the sobering experiences of life. It conveys a sense of despair and mourning for dreams that have been shattered.
January 6th, 2026 06:19
Where is Santa? Does God know?
Paul Bell said:
You appreciate Santa more after the tree and decorations are taking down and the house looks bare.
Wonder if he\'s in the Bahamas with his feet up.
January 6th, 2026 05:07
Paul Bell said:
You appreciate Santa more after the tree and decorations are taking down and the house looks bare.
Wonder if he\'s in the Bahamas with his feet up.
January 6th, 2026 05:07
Where is Santa? Does God know?
Dominic Windram said:
Great stuff...it\'s very much like putting out the sun from a child\'s perspective!
January 6th, 2026 04:09
Dominic Windram said:
Great stuff...it\'s very much like putting out the sun from a child\'s perspective!
January 6th, 2026 04:09
Where is Santa? Does God know?
orchidee said:
He\'s gone back to bed for another year! lol.
January 6th, 2026 03:12
orchidee said:
He\'s gone back to bed for another year! lol.
January 6th, 2026 03:12
What we hold inside
Goldfinch60 said:
Emotions bring everything to our lives soren.
Andy
January 6th, 2026 02:03
Goldfinch60 said:
Emotions bring everything to our lives soren.
Andy
January 6th, 2026 02:03
« Return to the profile of sorenbarrett
