Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Outlived
arqios said:
Oh, there was a time, but no longer. I feel that, both in a physical and metaphorical level. 🙏🏻🕊️
May 29th, 2026 07:23
arqios said:
Oh, there was a time, but no longer. I feel that, both in a physical and metaphorical level. 🙏🏻🕊️
May 29th, 2026 07:23
Outlived
Paul Bell said:
The cat that no longer gets the cream.
We all know how that feels, and reminiscing doesn\'t bring the cream either.
Where did the time go to.
May 29th, 2026 06:31
Paul Bell said:
The cat that no longer gets the cream.
We all know how that feels, and reminiscing doesn\'t bring the cream either.
Where did the time go to.
May 29th, 2026 06:31
Outlived
David Wakeling said:
Oh I know the feeling.Not able to do the things I did many years ago, For me this is a metaphor for aging. WE certainly can\'t do the same things now as we did years ago but it there is an inevitability to the end
May 29th, 2026 05:09
David Wakeling said:
Oh I know the feeling.Not able to do the things I did many years ago, For me this is a metaphor for aging. WE certainly can\'t do the same things now as we did years ago but it there is an inevitability to the end
May 29th, 2026 05:09
Outlived
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
I have seen a few such cats, and people, good write
May 29th, 2026 03:43
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
I have seen a few such cats, and people, good write
May 29th, 2026 03:43
Renewal
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this feels vast and elemental. The whole poem moves like a tide between creation and dissolution, dawn and dusk, life and death. There’s something almost mythic in the way the natural world becomes a living ritual here. Beautiful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 28th, 2026 20:37
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this feels vast and elemental. The whole poem moves like a tide between creation and dissolution, dawn and dusk, life and death. There’s something almost mythic in the way the natural world becomes a living ritual here. Beautiful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 28th, 2026 20:37
Renewal
Kevin Hulme said:
Very descriptive as always. A Painting by Turner came to mind. Good Write .
May 28th, 2026 18:33
Kevin Hulme said:
Very descriptive as always. A Painting by Turner came to mind. Good Write .
May 28th, 2026 18:33
Renewal
Paul Bell said:
Record tempertures in Britain, some are now praying for dewdrops.
Seemingly we can\'t live without the rain in a country that prays for the sun.
May 28th, 2026 08:04
Paul Bell said:
Record tempertures in Britain, some are now praying for dewdrops.
Seemingly we can\'t live without the rain in a country that prays for the sun.
May 28th, 2026 08:04
Renewal
arqios said:
This reading left me enjoying the thought of endings and losses being part of a natural cycle that from darkness comes rebirth and new beginnings.🕊️🙏
May 28th, 2026 07:00
arqios said:
This reading left me enjoying the thought of endings and losses being part of a natural cycle that from darkness comes rebirth and new beginnings.🕊️🙏
May 28th, 2026 07:00
Renewal
Lorenz said:
A watercolorist who captures the ever-changing nuances of words over time and seasons...
May 28th, 2026 04:38
Lorenz said:
A watercolorist who captures the ever-changing nuances of words over time and seasons...
May 28th, 2026 04:38
Renewal
David Wakeling said:
Very powerful images here. From tides and ocean waves to sacrificial blood. Sounds like my 21st.Just kidding.A wonderfully poetic piece.Enjoyable
May 28th, 2026 04:37
David Wakeling said:
Very powerful images here. From tides and ocean waves to sacrificial blood. Sounds like my 21st.Just kidding.A wonderfully poetic piece.Enjoyable
May 28th, 2026 04:37
The shape of a tree
Goldfinch60 said:
There are many puzzles in life soren, hopefully we can solve most of them.
Andy
May 28th, 2026 01:26
Goldfinch60 said:
There are many puzzles in life soren, hopefully we can solve most of them.
Andy
May 28th, 2026 01:26
The shape of a tree
Syd said:
True perfection is Imperfect. Nicely written.
- Syd
May 27th, 2026 16:58
Syd said:
True perfection is Imperfect. Nicely written.
- Syd
May 27th, 2026 16:58
Night\'s bedroom
mohammad ali said:
So beautifully described, dear, as usual! I\'m sure you\'re a master of poetry.
May 27th, 2026 14:12
mohammad ali said:
So beautifully described, dear, as usual! I\'m sure you\'re a master of poetry.
May 27th, 2026 14:12
Development
Joseph M Marion said:
I love the way you manipulate words very beautifully written
May 27th, 2026 10:49
Joseph M Marion said:
I love the way you manipulate words very beautifully written
May 27th, 2026 10:49
The shape of a tree
Lorenz said:
A riddle combining a Rubik\'s cube inside a maze and a puzzle of an imaginary geography...
I have the whole night ahead of me ...
May 27th, 2026 10:15
Lorenz said:
A riddle combining a Rubik\'s cube inside a maze and a puzzle of an imaginary geography...
I have the whole night ahead of me ...
May 27th, 2026 10:15
Little one
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, what a heartbreaking piece. The quiet vulnerability of the little finch wandering alone through a world full of unseen danger really lingers with me. “He pecks at specks getting just air” is such a painfully vivid moment...small, fragile, and lost. The darkness closing in at the end feels inevitable without ever becoming overdone. Powerful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 27th, 2026 10:02
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, what a heartbreaking piece. The quiet vulnerability of the little finch wandering alone through a world full of unseen danger really lingers with me. “He pecks at specks getting just air” is such a painfully vivid moment...small, fragile, and lost. The darkness closing in at the end feels inevitable without ever becoming overdone. Powerful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 27th, 2026 10:02
The shape of a tree
David Wakeling said:
This is deep and filled with metaphors that ask the question is are individual wishes greater than the community needs.Its a tricky question well posed here.Excellent mi amigo
May 27th, 2026 07:22
David Wakeling said:
This is deep and filled with metaphors that ask the question is are individual wishes greater than the community needs.Its a tricky question well posed here.Excellent mi amigo
May 27th, 2026 07:22
The shape of a tree
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
love the last line my friend
May 27th, 2026 04:07
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
love the last line my friend
May 27th, 2026 04:07
Little one
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words soren, I had a young Goldfinch in my garden a few days ago feeding on the bird feeder, it was wonderful to watch.
Andy
May 27th, 2026 01:44
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words soren, I had a young Goldfinch in my garden a few days ago feeding on the bird feeder, it was wonderful to watch.
Andy
May 27th, 2026 01:44
The chase
Waiting for Silence said:
Harsh predator-prey dynamic, rich in sound and urgency. Good one
May 26th, 2026 23:35
Waiting for Silence said:
Harsh predator-prey dynamic, rich in sound and urgency. Good one
May 26th, 2026 23:35
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