Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett



Bouquet
Kevin Hulme said:

A Romance gone sour. A good Story told in a few lines. Enjoyed.

July 19th, 2026 18:56

Pending storm
peto said:

Sometimes soren
You write at a different level
Superb

July 19th, 2026 16:37

Bouquet
hzugman said:

Very touching. Well done.

July 19th, 2026 12:40

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Friendship said:

nicely written

July 19th, 2026 12:35

Bouquet
Thomas W Case said:

Love how you thread romance through decayβ€”those cut flowers feel like vows that knew their own ending.
There’s a quiet sting here, like beauty remembering it was always on borrowed time.

July 19th, 2026 06:58

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Tristan Robert Lange said:

Soren, this hit hard...an entire relationship blooming and dying in four lines. Beautifully tragic, my friend. πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸ™πŸ•―οΈπŸ¦β€β¬›

July 19th, 2026 06:57

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Teddy.15 said:

Apt for a quite normal marriage 🀣 with all the ugliness in-between sometimes we forget to keep loves sparks alive! Super write 🌹

July 19th, 2026 05:35

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arqios said:

To my estimation a cut rose has less a chance, all things considered, than one that stays as nature intended attached to its vine. And the metaphor works splendid in intimate human relations. πŸ™πŸ•ŠοΈ

July 19th, 2026 05:29

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nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:

the symbol of love, and divorce, well done friend

July 19th, 2026 03:43

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soheil khodaparasti said:

Such a strong metaphor to convey the changing meaning of love through the changing symbolism of the rose. This is the story of many romances that fade over time.

July 19th, 2026 02:58

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orchidee said:

Good write SB. The time has dozed with me and KP. It was never awake anyway, for any passion! lol.

July 19th, 2026 01:52

Bouquet
Goldfinch60 said:

That passion will never leave my life soren.

Andy

July 19th, 2026 01:04

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Goldfinch60 said:

Good fun write soren. I hope the storm calms down into beauty and love.

Andy

July 19th, 2026 00:58

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Kevin Hulme said:

Like it . And the Mice throw themselves in the Traps. A fave.

July 18th, 2026 18:43

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Doggerel Dave said:

Don\'t believe a word of it, Soren. Found it very entertaining, notwithstanding..

July 18th, 2026 18:28

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Teddy.15 said:

LoL πŸ˜‚ fabulous. 🌹 Ere if I was her I might swing for you with me handbag πŸ‘œ lol 🀣

July 18th, 2026 15:36

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Tristan Robert Lange said:

Haha, Soren, what a setup! The tension rises through every approaching sign until the entire natural disaster walks through the door. I did not see that turn coming...absolutely hilarious, my friend! πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸ™πŸ•―οΈ

July 18th, 2026 09:28

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orchidee said:

Good write SB. lol.

July 18th, 2026 08:54

Floods and leaks
Syd said:

I love the way leaking pipes become leaking time Sorenbarret.

Nicely written - Syd πŸ„

July 18th, 2026 06:59

Pending storm
Paul Bell said:

I reckon if you\'ve been married for thirty years, at least twenty of those years were waiting for her to get ready.
The other ten were spent shopping. Is hurricane actually strong enough, maybe nuclear explosion. Okay she\'s ready need to go.


July 18th, 2026 06:38

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arqios said:

A that tempest I know do wellπŸ•ŠοΈπŸ™πŸ»

July 18th, 2026 04:56

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Mutley Ravishes said:

Lol! Love it, Soren. Can you write some more of these?!

July 18th, 2026 04:23

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nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:

A definite fav

July 18th, 2026 03:44

Man
The Great Kateri said:

The new normal, but why easily accepted? Perhaps because of the \"ease\"?
wonderfully worded, sorren.

July 18th, 2026 03:14

Floods and leaks
Kevin Hulme said:

Time and Tide wait... etc. \'Leaks of ticking dreams\'. Exactly. Good Poem.

July 17th, 2026 18:18

Floods and leaks
orchidee said:

Good write SB. I bought KP a dodgy clock. It only goes tick, never tock! lol.

July 17th, 2026 09:08

Floods and leaks
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Soren, what a haunting piece! Time becomes an unstoppable force slowly overtaking everything we hoped would remain. Powerful write, my friend. πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸ™πŸ•―οΈπŸ¦β€β¬›

July 17th, 2026 08:28

Floods and leaks
arqios said:

Much like erosion to the point of an avalanche πŸ•ŠοΈπŸ™πŸ»

July 17th, 2026 07:23

Floods and leaks
Soman Ragavan said:

The hourglass symbolises time going by. The hourglass bursting is the end of the existence. Thus, the nightmare.

July 17th, 2026 04:17

Floods and leaks
Teddy.15 said:

I\'ve always had a dream to renovate an old villa, here in my area there are many, but it would surely take blood sweat and tears and then time, time has its own plans. What a wonderful poem. 🌹

July 17th, 2026 04:10

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