Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Isis
Kevin Hulme said:
\'Dreaming mind expands out of reach\'. So true.
Isn\'t Mars the God of War? So Hopefully Venus will sort him out. I liked this. A good Write.
June 17th, 2026 18:43
Kevin Hulme said:
\'Dreaming mind expands out of reach\'. So true.
Isn\'t Mars the God of War? So Hopefully Venus will sort him out. I liked this. A good Write.
June 17th, 2026 18:43
Isis
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, what I enjoyed most here is the way the natural world becomes almost mythic. The moon, the sea, the breeze, the stars, Venus, and Mars all play their part in a nocturnal symphony of romance and possibility. The imagery is rich without feeling overworked, and the closing contrast between love and conflict provides a fitting culmination. Beautifully crafted, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 17th, 2026 11:49
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, what I enjoyed most here is the way the natural world becomes almost mythic. The moon, the sea, the breeze, the stars, Venus, and Mars all play their part in a nocturnal symphony of romance and possibility. The imagery is rich without feeling overworked, and the closing contrast between love and conflict provides a fitting culmination. Beautifully crafted, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 17th, 2026 11:49
Different shades of love
Joseph M Marion said:
Beautiful way to describe nature and its fight. Very good well written thank you my friend for being my friend
June 17th, 2026 10:36
Joseph M Marion said:
Beautiful way to describe nature and its fight. Very good well written thank you my friend for being my friend
June 17th, 2026 10:36
Isis
Soman Ragavan said:
It has been said that a man cannot a river twice : by the second time, it is not the same man and it is not the same river... This ties back to the ideas in the poem : when you look again, the vision will never be quite the same again...
June 17th, 2026 08:50
Soman Ragavan said:
It has been said that a man cannot a river twice : by the second time, it is not the same man and it is not the same river... This ties back to the ideas in the poem : when you look again, the vision will never be quite the same again...
June 17th, 2026 08:50
Change
Soman Ragavan said:
The poet\'s eye sees patterns and designs that others miss. The rotating colours bring out beauty but that beauty is a passing one. Memory is likened to a wall on which one writes. The design made out by a child in its game might seem insignificant to the adult, but the child\'s mind operates in its own way. Its creations might need time to be understood. A picture once seen cannot be seen in exactly the same way again : the mind\'s perception has changed. The next time we see it we will be influenced by experiences that have occurred in the meantime. The last line reinforces this idea : even if we manage to turn time back, we will never be able to see with the same eyes, because the eyes have evolved...
June 17th, 2026 08:46
Soman Ragavan said:
The poet\'s eye sees patterns and designs that others miss. The rotating colours bring out beauty but that beauty is a passing one. Memory is likened to a wall on which one writes. The design made out by a child in its game might seem insignificant to the adult, but the child\'s mind operates in its own way. Its creations might need time to be understood. A picture once seen cannot be seen in exactly the same way again : the mind\'s perception has changed. The next time we see it we will be influenced by experiences that have occurred in the meantime. The last line reinforces this idea : even if we manage to turn time back, we will never be able to see with the same eyes, because the eyes have evolved...
June 17th, 2026 08:46
Isis
arqios said:
The interaction between Mars and Venus is very interesting 🕊️🙏🏻
June 17th, 2026 06:34
arqios said:
The interaction between Mars and Venus is very interesting 🕊️🙏🏻
June 17th, 2026 06:34
Isis
soheil khodaparasti said:
A blend of mythology into a meditation on imagination and love. I like the personification of the moon in the first line: “The moon with soft tidal hands pulls a watery blanket over sleeping shores”.
June 17th, 2026 04:58
soheil khodaparasti said:
A blend of mythology into a meditation on imagination and love. I like the personification of the moon in the first line: “The moon with soft tidal hands pulls a watery blanket over sleeping shores”.
June 17th, 2026 04:58
Customer service
Demar Desu said:
I wish you would go into detail in the description of what this means to you
June 16th, 2026 19:04
Demar Desu said:
I wish you would go into detail in the description of what this means to you
June 16th, 2026 19:04
Poetry droppings
boot said:
Ah c\'mon...
Some like rhymes and some like stories
None diminish poet\'s glory
Write it down...spit it out
It\'s all about the author..no?
Shall we take a vote?
June 16th, 2026 15:02
boot said:
Ah c\'mon...
Some like rhymes and some like stories
None diminish poet\'s glory
Write it down...spit it out
It\'s all about the author..no?
Shall we take a vote?
June 16th, 2026 15:02
The shape of a tree
boot said:
That\'s why Venus can\'t say the kernals chicken is finger likkin good
June 16th, 2026 14:48
boot said:
That\'s why Venus can\'t say the kernals chicken is finger likkin good
June 16th, 2026 14:48
Different shades of love
boot said:
Cool...that tree has enough branches anyway
June 16th, 2026 14:31
boot said:
Cool...that tree has enough branches anyway
June 16th, 2026 14:31
Scrambled and deleated
Teddy.15 said:
American politics, come to think of it world politics 🤣
June 16th, 2026 10:53
Teddy.15 said:
American politics, come to think of it world politics 🤣
June 16th, 2026 10:53
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Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, what I enjoyed most here is the playful exploration of sound and meaning. The shifting words feel almost kaleidoscopic...one slight turn and something familiar becomes something entirely different. By the end, I was equal parts amused, intrigued, and suspicious that language may be up to something behind our backs. Wonderfully done, my friend. A fave for more than one reason. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 16th, 2026 09:22
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, what I enjoyed most here is the playful exploration of sound and meaning. The shifting words feel almost kaleidoscopic...one slight turn and something familiar becomes something entirely different. By the end, I was equal parts amused, intrigued, and suspicious that language may be up to something behind our backs. Wonderfully done, my friend. A fave for more than one reason. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 16th, 2026 09:22
Excuses
mohammad ali said:
Wonderful dear Soren! So much beautifully composed of meaningful keys to usual excuses, of a fascinating rhythm and tone!
June 16th, 2026 08:02
mohammad ali said:
Wonderful dear Soren! So much beautifully composed of meaningful keys to usual excuses, of a fascinating rhythm and tone!
June 16th, 2026 08:02
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orchidee said:
Good write SB. The words in KP\'s name can be broken down into \'old trout\' - probably! lol.
June 16th, 2026 07:40
orchidee said:
Good write SB. The words in KP\'s name can be broken down into \'old trout\' - probably! lol.
June 16th, 2026 07:40
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Friendship said:
Well, play with words. Your poem explores themes of confusion, contradiction, and the complexity of existence. It hints at the struggles of communication and understanding in life, suggesting that clarity is often obscured by chaos. Overall, the poet seeks to engage the reader in contemplating the nature of truth, the absurdity of life, and the ways we navigate our emotions and relationships through language. It encourages a deeper reflection on how we express and perceive meaning in a chaotic world.
June 16th, 2026 07:31
Friendship said:
Well, play with words. Your poem explores themes of confusion, contradiction, and the complexity of existence. It hints at the struggles of communication and understanding in life, suggesting that clarity is often obscured by chaos. Overall, the poet seeks to engage the reader in contemplating the nature of truth, the absurdity of life, and the ways we navigate our emotions and relationships through language. It encourages a deeper reflection on how we express and perceive meaning in a chaotic world.
June 16th, 2026 07:31
Scrambled and deleated
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
a well thought out piece, much enjoyed
June 16th, 2026 06:58
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
a well thought out piece, much enjoyed
June 16th, 2026 06:58
Emotion
Soman Ragavan said:
\"a tongue\'s error\" : indeed, the tongue is one of the most dangerous weapons we have. Plus, what is said flies beyond recall.
June 16th, 2026 04:44
Soman Ragavan said:
\"a tongue\'s error\" : indeed, the tongue is one of the most dangerous weapons we have. Plus, what is said flies beyond recall.
June 16th, 2026 04:44
Change
Kevin Hulme said:
The Old Flow of Time. Once seen never repeated.
Good Write.
June 15th, 2026 18:22
Kevin Hulme said:
The Old Flow of Time. Once seen never repeated.
Good Write.
June 15th, 2026 18:22
Tree and the lily
spilleronsheet said:
We complaint like push and pull…and loosing it, we crib to have it again….wonderfully penned dear
June 15th, 2026 16:16
spilleronsheet said:
We complaint like push and pull…and loosing it, we crib to have it again….wonderfully penned dear
June 15th, 2026 16:16
Change
Teddy.15 said:
So very clever and full of wisdom as your poems always are. 🌹
June 15th, 2026 14:28
Teddy.15 said:
So very clever and full of wisdom as your poems always are. 🌹
June 15th, 2026 14:28
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