Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Out of sight
arqios said:
I have such used tickets lying around in places hidden from daily view! Some in actual albums to accompany old photos and such. 🙏🕊️
July 10th, 2026 06:13
arqios said:
I have such used tickets lying around in places hidden from daily view! Some in actual albums to accompany old photos and such. 🙏🕊️
July 10th, 2026 06:13
Out of sight
Paul Bell said:
Good or bad, how quickly can an object instantly take us back to that moment.
One thing I intentionally never do, is return to places that have impacted my life.
You know right off that particular period has gone and the visit just spoils that moment in time.
July 10th, 2026 05:25
Paul Bell said:
Good or bad, how quickly can an object instantly take us back to that moment.
One thing I intentionally never do, is return to places that have impacted my life.
You know right off that particular period has gone and the visit just spoils that moment in time.
July 10th, 2026 05:25
Out of sight
soheil khodaparasti said:
Beautifully crafted. An ordinary object becomes a vessel for decades of forgotten emotion, a deeply relatable experience. It is a touching meditation on how grief can lie dormant for years, waiting for the smallest forgotten object to bring it rushing back. The emotion feels authentic and earned rather than sentimental.
July 10th, 2026 04:10
soheil khodaparasti said:
Beautifully crafted. An ordinary object becomes a vessel for decades of forgotten emotion, a deeply relatable experience. It is a touching meditation on how grief can lie dormant for years, waiting for the smallest forgotten object to bring it rushing back. The emotion feels authentic and earned rather than sentimental.
July 10th, 2026 04:10
Out of sight
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
a reminder of the past, good write
July 10th, 2026 04:03
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
a reminder of the past, good write
July 10th, 2026 04:03
One and the same
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good words soren. When we regenerate may be to love for all.
Andy
July 10th, 2026 01:12
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good words soren. When we regenerate may be to love for all.
Andy
July 10th, 2026 01:12
One and the same
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, what a thoughtful piece. I especially loved the metaphors throughout...the opposing poles, the meeting at the center, and especially \"We are all waves that nature saves.\" They give the poem a beautiful sense that we\'re all part of something far greater than ourselves. Really enjoyed this, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
July 9th, 2026 22:52
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, what a thoughtful piece. I especially loved the metaphors throughout...the opposing poles, the meeting at the center, and especially \"We are all waves that nature saves.\" They give the poem a beautiful sense that we\'re all part of something far greater than ourselves. Really enjoyed this, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
July 9th, 2026 22:52
One and the same
Lorenz said:
Nothing is lost .Everything is transformed .We are all part of the carbon cycle .
July 9th, 2026 08:19
Lorenz said:
Nothing is lost .Everything is transformed .We are all part of the carbon cycle .
July 9th, 2026 08:19
One and the same
soheil khodaparasti said:
If you put the first and last lines together, “Fire and water, air and earth we were all one before our birth then return to dust … As the living turn to dust and steel becomes rust all subject to regeneration,” then you arrive at the conclusion that nothing exists in isolation and that all life is part of nature\'s ongoing process of renewal.
July 9th, 2026 06:27
soheil khodaparasti said:
If you put the first and last lines together, “Fire and water, air and earth we were all one before our birth then return to dust … As the living turn to dust and steel becomes rust all subject to regeneration,” then you arrive at the conclusion that nothing exists in isolation and that all life is part of nature\'s ongoing process of renewal.
July 9th, 2026 06:27
One and the same
cellinic said:
Well-done, beautifully penned, with reserved emotions and reverberating ideas...
July 9th, 2026 05:58
cellinic said:
Well-done, beautifully penned, with reserved emotions and reverberating ideas...
July 9th, 2026 05:58
One and the same
Paul Bell said:
Got it in one.
Doesn\'t nature do a great job, giving us life for a time, and replacing us when our time is up.
July 9th, 2026 05:54
Paul Bell said:
Got it in one.
Doesn\'t nature do a great job, giving us life for a time, and replacing us when our time is up.
July 9th, 2026 05:54
One and the same
Teddy.15 said:
There are not enough stars in the universe to show my heartfelt gratitude towards these magnificent words in this magnificent poem. Kudos my dear sorrenbarret 🌹
July 9th, 2026 04:36
Teddy.15 said:
There are not enough stars in the universe to show my heartfelt gratitude towards these magnificent words in this magnificent poem. Kudos my dear sorrenbarret 🌹
July 9th, 2026 04:36
His father\'s chair
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, I’ve stood in that exact spot before…not literally, but that feeling of being small in a role you’re meant to grow into, unsure if you’ll ever measure up to what came before you. You put words to it so well. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 8th, 2026 19:24
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, I’ve stood in that exact spot before…not literally, but that feeling of being small in a role you’re meant to grow into, unsure if you’ll ever measure up to what came before you. You put words to it so well. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 8th, 2026 19:24
His father\'s chair
Kevin Hulme said:
Maybe the Chair is a Metaphor for his Father.
Interesting Read.
July 8th, 2026 18:36
Kevin Hulme said:
Maybe the Chair is a Metaphor for his Father.
Interesting Read.
July 8th, 2026 18:36
Leak
JENNY M GUERRIER said:
Reminds me of my house in Haiti after one of the hurricanes. well done.
July 8th, 2026 13:15
JENNY M GUERRIER said:
Reminds me of my house in Haiti after one of the hurricanes. well done.
July 8th, 2026 13:15
His father\'s chair
Lorenz said:
I smashed that cursed empty chair to pieces ...
July 8th, 2026 13:01
Lorenz said:
I smashed that cursed empty chair to pieces ...
July 8th, 2026 13:01
His father\'s chair
Paul Bell said:
They do say the sins of the father are to be laid upon the children.
Would throw that chair out, set up a media room with a chair you can put a can of beer in.
Fathers, who would have them.
July 8th, 2026 11:37
Paul Bell said:
They do say the sins of the father are to be laid upon the children.
Would throw that chair out, set up a media room with a chair you can put a can of beer in.
Fathers, who would have them.
July 8th, 2026 11:37
His father\'s chair
arqios said:
As we all have our share of this inheritance and legacy of sorts. And we all do with it and navigate that handed down adulthood in our unique ways. For myself, I may have wanted it to turn out differently but in his last years, having him affirm the grown up that I\'d become was quite settling and validating.
July 8th, 2026 06:58
arqios said:
As we all have our share of this inheritance and legacy of sorts. And we all do with it and navigate that handed down adulthood in our unique ways. For myself, I may have wanted it to turn out differently but in his last years, having him affirm the grown up that I\'d become was quite settling and validating.
July 8th, 2026 06:58
His father\'s chair
soheil khodaparasti said:
The boy inherits not only his father\'s place but also the marks of his past. The phrase \"wounds that would heal with scars\" beautifully conveys the idea that while pain fades, its effects remain.
July 8th, 2026 04:57
soheil khodaparasti said:
The boy inherits not only his father\'s place but also the marks of his past. The phrase \"wounds that would heal with scars\" beautifully conveys the idea that while pain fades, its effects remain.
July 8th, 2026 04:57
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