Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Drunken lullabies
Doggerel Dave said:
Could become an anthem for AA, Soren.
The above within your poem highlighting \'home a wrecker\' and the correct point in comments re self motivation cover all I wanted to contribute.
Poem shot straight and true.
July 2nd, 2024 18:28
Doggerel Dave said:
Could become an anthem for AA, Soren.
The above within your poem highlighting \'home a wrecker\' and the correct point in comments re self motivation cover all I wanted to contribute.
Poem shot straight and true.
July 2nd, 2024 18:28
Drunken lullabies
peto said:
As a recovering alkie I applaud this message
When the singing stops the problems are only too evident
July 2nd, 2024 14:15
peto said:
As a recovering alkie I applaud this message
When the singing stops the problems are only too evident
July 2nd, 2024 14:15
Drunken lullabies
Teddy.15 said:
With a very seriously powerful end, alcoholism can wreck lives for sure. So very poetic, unfortunately one can only be helped if they agree to help themselves. 🌹
July 2nd, 2024 11:23
Teddy.15 said:
With a very seriously powerful end, alcoholism can wreck lives for sure. So very poetic, unfortunately one can only be helped if they agree to help themselves. 🌹
July 2nd, 2024 11:23
Time\'s price
Teddy.15 said:
Oh I just love this and what a piece of Truth
New years can not be cooked boiled or baked
No matter how many pretty coats we put upon time it will forever be moving and changing
🌹
July 1st, 2024 15:23
Teddy.15 said:
Oh I just love this and what a piece of Truth
New years can not be cooked boiled or baked
No matter how many pretty coats we put upon time it will forever be moving and changing
🌹
July 1st, 2024 15:23
Time\'s price
orchidee said:
And also - what is the price of fish these days?\' as the saying goes! lol.
July 1st, 2024 08:48
orchidee said:
And also - what is the price of fish these days?\' as the saying goes! lol.
July 1st, 2024 08:48
Alive
NafisaSB said:
lovely message there - need to remind self to look around and observe the beauty around us
July 1st, 2024 07:45
NafisaSB said:
lovely message there - need to remind self to look around and observe the beauty around us
July 1st, 2024 07:45
Smoke signals
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous metaphor. Thoroughly enjoyed this.
June 30th, 2024 12:26
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous metaphor. Thoroughly enjoyed this.
June 30th, 2024 12:26
Smoke signals
Teddy.15 said:
Ah, your last lines made me chuckle 🤭 wonderful imagery, a poem can be interpreted in which ever way the reader may see it. That\'s why I simply love poetry. 🌹
June 30th, 2024 09:03
Teddy.15 said:
Ah, your last lines made me chuckle 🤭 wonderful imagery, a poem can be interpreted in which ever way the reader may see it. That\'s why I simply love poetry. 🌹
June 30th, 2024 09:03
Innocence of a poet
Dan Williams said:
\"Doily in a spiderweb spun\" is just as imagery evoking as can be. Nice work.
June 30th, 2024 01:10
Dan Williams said:
\"Doily in a spiderweb spun\" is just as imagery evoking as can be. Nice work.
June 30th, 2024 01:10
Innocence of a poet
Mason Vollman said:
If a poets innocent, I ain\'t no poet. lol.
June 29th, 2024 13:58
Mason Vollman said:
If a poets innocent, I ain\'t no poet. lol.
June 29th, 2024 13:58
Innocence of a poet
Teddy.15 said:
From the eyes of a child, how very beautiful, the things I remember as a child if I revisit after a very long time, they are completely different, simply because my mind and indeed eyes are wider ❤️ This is beautiful. 🌹
June 29th, 2024 09:11
Teddy.15 said:
From the eyes of a child, how very beautiful, the things I remember as a child if I revisit after a very long time, they are completely different, simply because my mind and indeed eyes are wider ❤️ This is beautiful. 🌹
June 29th, 2024 09:11
Innocence of a poet
Cassie58 said:
Let that inner child out. Beautiful stanzas. I love the innocence of little children. You say it so well here sorenbarrett. Have a glorious Saturday.
June 29th, 2024 05:25
Cassie58 said:
Let that inner child out. Beautiful stanzas. I love the innocence of little children. You say it so well here sorenbarrett. Have a glorious Saturday.
June 29th, 2024 05:25
Arising
Teddy.15 said:
Well this is simply glorious with a stunning vision of grace and serenity, I\'d climb those stairs happily when the time is right. Ah I am such a lover of Angels, beautiful poetic art dearest sorrenbarret 🌹
June 28th, 2024 04:40
Teddy.15 said:
Well this is simply glorious with a stunning vision of grace and serenity, I\'d climb those stairs happily when the time is right. Ah I am such a lover of Angels, beautiful poetic art dearest sorrenbarret 🌹
June 28th, 2024 04:40
Orphan
Teddy.15 said:
So very powerful, even when we do have a mother and father it simply doesn\'t mean all our dreams come true and we feel safe or.indeed have a home, a wonderful piece of inspiring reflection dear sorrenbarret 🌹 kudos my friend.
June 27th, 2024 14:58
Teddy.15 said:
So very powerful, even when we do have a mother and father it simply doesn\'t mean all our dreams come true and we feel safe or.indeed have a home, a wonderful piece of inspiring reflection dear sorrenbarret 🌹 kudos my friend.
June 27th, 2024 14:58
Eyes of a child
Teddy.15 said:
From the eyes of a child indeed, what a stunning vision of simple innocence and happiness without rules. 🌹
June 27th, 2024 14:54
Teddy.15 said:
From the eyes of a child indeed, what a stunning vision of simple innocence and happiness without rules. 🌹
June 27th, 2024 14:54
Eyes of a child
Goldfinch60 said:
That masterpiece will never be finished within our minds soren.
Andy
June 27th, 2024 01:22
Goldfinch60 said:
That masterpiece will never be finished within our minds soren.
Andy
June 27th, 2024 01:22
Eyes of a child
Doggerel Dave said:
A child observes, begins to interpret, acquires language attempts to marry the two (well some do, at least0and then describe has, for me, much resonance in this poem, Soren.
June 26th, 2024 07:38
Doggerel Dave said:
A child observes, begins to interpret, acquires language attempts to marry the two (well some do, at least0and then describe has, for me, much resonance in this poem, Soren.
June 26th, 2024 07:38
Eyes of a child
orchidee said:
Good write SB.
But why is that gal in the video wearing a pair of curtains?! lol.
June 26th, 2024 07:35
orchidee said:
Good write SB.
But why is that gal in the video wearing a pair of curtains?! lol.
June 26th, 2024 07:35
The immortal
Goldfinch60 said:
I too have plants like this and they have moved with me but still remain alive. Immortality is certainly with us.
One of them is over fifty years old and is now with my daughter.
Andy
June 26th, 2024 01:14
Goldfinch60 said:
I too have plants like this and they have moved with me but still remain alive. Immortality is certainly with us.
One of them is over fifty years old and is now with my daughter.
Andy
June 26th, 2024 01:14
The immortal
Teddy.15 said:
So mysterious, once again I thought you were writing about marriage. 🤣 Hey sorrenbarret you gave me the shivers, but may I ask what it\'s called? You have my mind so curious. Now it could also be as your title suggests however I\'m asking, even if I look silly. 🌹
June 25th, 2024 14:22
Teddy.15 said:
So mysterious, once again I thought you were writing about marriage. 🤣 Hey sorrenbarret you gave me the shivers, but may I ask what it\'s called? You have my mind so curious. Now it could also be as your title suggests however I\'m asking, even if I look silly. 🌹
June 25th, 2024 14:22
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