Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Gingerbread men
Alex Arnot said:
My only regret in reading this is that I\'m a day late! Great metaphor and extremely cleverly written!
May 18th, 2026 13:56
Alex Arnot said:
My only regret in reading this is that I\'m a day late! Great metaphor and extremely cleverly written!
May 18th, 2026 13:56
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Katie B. said:
Beautiful thought provoking write of how marks leave behind memories. Well written!
May 18th, 2026 11:23
Katie B. said:
Beautiful thought provoking write of how marks leave behind memories. Well written!
May 18th, 2026 11:23
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Friendship said:
Nicely done. The imagery you painted of a worn floor serves as a canvas for the memories and experiences of those who have walked upon it. Your poem reflects on the interplay between physical space and emotional history, revealing how the mundane can hold profound significance. that every mark and scuff tells a story, capturing moments of joy, sorrow, love, and conflict.
May 18th, 2026 10:50
Friendship said:
Nicely done. The imagery you painted of a worn floor serves as a canvas for the memories and experiences of those who have walked upon it. Your poem reflects on the interplay between physical space and emotional history, revealing how the mundane can hold profound significance. that every mark and scuff tells a story, capturing moments of joy, sorrow, love, and conflict.
May 18th, 2026 10:50
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Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this makes me think about how places absorb us over time whether we notice it or not. Floors, walls, furniture…they quietly carry evidence of our living long after the moments themselves have passed. There’s something deeply human in that realization. Excellent piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 18th, 2026 09:38
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this makes me think about how places absorb us over time whether we notice it or not. Floors, walls, furniture…they quietly carry evidence of our living long after the moments themselves have passed. There’s something deeply human in that realization. Excellent piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 18th, 2026 09:38
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arqios said:
The scuffs and damage record the history of decades; our lives written out in the environments that we live in. 🙏🏻🕊️
May 18th, 2026 06:26
arqios said:
The scuffs and damage record the history of decades; our lives written out in the environments that we live in. 🙏🏻🕊️
May 18th, 2026 06:26
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David Wakeling said:
The evidence of time passing.I see a church floor at Christmas but there is a lot more in this Excellent
May 18th, 2026 02:58
David Wakeling said:
The evidence of time passing.I see a church floor at Christmas but there is a lot more in this Excellent
May 18th, 2026 02:58
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orchidee said:
Good write SB. KP gives me some verbal \'hieroglyphics\' cos I keep dishing up sewage for her! lol.
May 18th, 2026 02:17
orchidee said:
Good write SB. KP gives me some verbal \'hieroglyphics\' cos I keep dishing up sewage for her! lol.
May 18th, 2026 02:17
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nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Marks left upon time and places, much enjoyed
May 18th, 2026 02:11
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Marks left upon time and places, much enjoyed
May 18th, 2026 02:11
Gingerbread men
Goldfinch60 said:
One day humanity will used the correct recipe soren and love will rule the world.
Andy
May 18th, 2026 01:29
Goldfinch60 said:
One day humanity will used the correct recipe soren and love will rule the world.
Andy
May 18th, 2026 01:29
Unrepented
Waiting for Silence said:
Loved how honestly this piece reflects on our inner struggles while still feeling deeply human and relatable.
May 17th, 2026 23:56
Waiting for Silence said:
Loved how honestly this piece reflects on our inner struggles while still feeling deeply human and relatable.
May 17th, 2026 23:56
Gingerbread men
Waiting for Silence said:
Creative metaphor that powerfully reflects on human nature and transformation. Good one
May 17th, 2026 23:55
Waiting for Silence said:
Creative metaphor that powerfully reflects on human nature and transformation. Good one
May 17th, 2026 23:55
Gingerbread men
Kevin Hulme said:
Yes . Something went wrong in Heaven\'s Kitchen that day.
Good way of putting things.
May 17th, 2026 18:43
Kevin Hulme said:
Yes . Something went wrong in Heaven\'s Kitchen that day.
Good way of putting things.
May 17th, 2026 18:43
Gingerbread men
GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀 said:
A catastrophe; for salt to be mistaken for sugar. It also is a powerful message of being mindful of who you let in your life.
May 17th, 2026 16:49
GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀 said:
A catastrophe; for salt to be mistaken for sugar. It also is a powerful message of being mindful of who you let in your life.
May 17th, 2026 16:49
Is this the best you got?
Hadeed musa said:
I just want to say one thing
OH MY GOD !!!
May 17th, 2026 14:11
Hadeed musa said:
I just want to say one thing
OH MY GOD !!!
May 17th, 2026 14:11
Gingerbread men
Teddy.15 said:
You have me doubting Adam and Eve maybe it was just play dough with salt and sugar after all 🤣 I love salt my husband loves sugar. 🌹
May 17th, 2026 13:32
Teddy.15 said:
You have me doubting Adam and Eve maybe it was just play dough with salt and sugar after all 🤣 I love salt my husband loves sugar. 🌹
May 17th, 2026 13:32
Gingerbread men
orchidee said:
Good write SB. Ahh, good another recipe idea for KP - gingerbread men made with sewage. Thank you muchly. lol.
May 17th, 2026 12:18
orchidee said:
Good write SB. Ahh, good another recipe idea for KP - gingerbread men made with sewage. Thank you muchly. lol.
May 17th, 2026 12:18
Gingerbread men
Friendship said:
I am retracting my prior comment and would like to formally apologize for my misguided interpretation of your poem. It is a commendable piece of writing, and I should have provided a more thoughtful response. Your poem explores the idea of human flaws and the consequences of mistakes, particularly in the context of creation. Your suggestion that a seemingly small error can lead to significant problems, both in baking and in life, where misplacing love with hate can result in negative outcomes. It prompts contemplation on the nature of human flaws and the unexpected results that can arise from seemingly small mistakes.
May 17th, 2026 11:39
Friendship said:
I am retracting my prior comment and would like to formally apologize for my misguided interpretation of your poem. It is a commendable piece of writing, and I should have provided a more thoughtful response. Your poem explores the idea of human flaws and the consequences of mistakes, particularly in the context of creation. Your suggestion that a seemingly small error can lead to significant problems, both in baking and in life, where misplacing love with hate can result in negative outcomes. It prompts contemplation on the nature of human flaws and the unexpected results that can arise from seemingly small mistakes.
May 17th, 2026 11:39
Gingerbread men
Lorenz said:
Because of a mix-up of ingredients the divine baker created the strawmen...
May 17th, 2026 10:18
Lorenz said:
Because of a mix-up of ingredients the divine baker created the strawmen...
May 17th, 2026 10:18
Gingerbread men
Thomas W Case said:
You’re laying it out like a bad batch no one wants to admit they’re eating,
Sweet on the surface, but there’s something off underneath that keeps repeating.
May 17th, 2026 08:57
Thomas W Case said:
You’re laying it out like a bad batch no one wants to admit they’re eating,
Sweet on the surface, but there’s something off underneath that keeps repeating.
May 17th, 2026 08:57
Gingerbread men
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, I really enjoyed how this balances humor, rhythm, and philosophical commentary together. Beneath the playful rhyme structure there’s a genuinely dark meditation on human decline and moral distortion. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 17th, 2026 08:04
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, I really enjoyed how this balances humor, rhythm, and philosophical commentary together. Beneath the playful rhyme structure there’s a genuinely dark meditation on human decline and moral distortion. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 17th, 2026 08:04
Gingerbread men
David Wakeling said:
This is a very interesting view of the human condition.As if all the wholesome ingredients that we prefer were replaced with vile opposites.I must confess that I share the view point of the poem some times.VEry clever piece.I like the internal rhymes.Excellent
May 17th, 2026 05:47
David Wakeling said:
This is a very interesting view of the human condition.As if all the wholesome ingredients that we prefer were replaced with vile opposites.I must confess that I share the view point of the poem some times.VEry clever piece.I like the internal rhymes.Excellent
May 17th, 2026 05:47
Night\'s bedroom
Goldfinch60 said:
But those shade can be pulled soren and the light will come back.
Andy
May 17th, 2026 01:21
Goldfinch60 said:
But those shade can be pulled soren and the light will come back.
Andy
May 17th, 2026 01:21
Pools
NafisaSB said:
beautifully expressed - once you stir, a lot of both wanted and unwanted memories pop up, to be replaced later by new ones..
May 16th, 2026 23:47
NafisaSB said:
beautifully expressed - once you stir, a lot of both wanted and unwanted memories pop up, to be replaced later by new ones..
May 16th, 2026 23:47
Night\'s bedroom
Soman Ragavan said:
\"Grass cries...\" This must be out of joy. We will notice how resilient grass is. Even after prolonged drought, when all grass has disappeared, new grass will sprout up again. That is a wonder. It played dead but arose again from its ashes...
May 16th, 2026 20:31
Soman Ragavan said:
\"Grass cries...\" This must be out of joy. We will notice how resilient grass is. Even after prolonged drought, when all grass has disappeared, new grass will sprout up again. That is a wonder. It played dead but arose again from its ashes...
May 16th, 2026 20:31
Night\'s bedroom
Kevin Hulme said:
Even a Rainy day has some beauty in it . Especially the sound of Rain on the Trees, and the misty fields.
Liked it.
May 16th, 2026 18:31
Kevin Hulme said:
Even a Rainy day has some beauty in it . Especially the sound of Rain on the Trees, and the misty fields.
Liked it.
May 16th, 2026 18:31
Night\'s bedroom
mylastwrites said:
Beautiful imagery with your word palette. A wonderful write. Thanks for sharing.
May 16th, 2026 14:44
mylastwrites said:
Beautiful imagery with your word palette. A wonderful write. Thanks for sharing.
May 16th, 2026 14:44
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