Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Eternal
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this carries a gentle melancholy that lingers. The fogged windows, the fading candle, and the final image of shadows seeping through eyelids all weave together naturally. It feels like looking back without trying to rewrite what was. Thoughtful and moving, my dear friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 1st, 2026 08:31
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this carries a gentle melancholy that lingers. The fogged windows, the fading candle, and the final image of shadows seeping through eyelids all weave together naturally. It feels like looking back without trying to rewrite what was. Thoughtful and moving, my dear friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 1st, 2026 08:31
Eternal
Poetic Licence said:
This is a bit of a heart tugger, alot of sadness in those reflective words, I felt it was written with a very caring hand and from a heart that still loves and remembers, well penned.
March 1st, 2026 07:06
Poetic Licence said:
This is a bit of a heart tugger, alot of sadness in those reflective words, I felt it was written with a very caring hand and from a heart that still loves and remembers, well penned.
March 1st, 2026 07:06
Eternal
Paul Bell said:
Time makes no difference it seems, and at night when the mind is lucid, it just replays making it worse.
Forever it seems is what makes humans search for meaning.
You can see why people go back searching for lost loves.
March 1st, 2026 06:45
Paul Bell said:
Time makes no difference it seems, and at night when the mind is lucid, it just replays making it worse.
Forever it seems is what makes humans search for meaning.
You can see why people go back searching for lost loves.
March 1st, 2026 06:45
Us
Poetic Licence said:
A practiced that is still practiced today in some parts literally, for other part\'s of the world man has many way of devouring the week and poor. It is in our DNA to do what we need to in order to survive, but there must be another DNA in us, because the devouring of the week and poor these days, is not done out of need it is done out of greed. All that was needed to finish this write was a bottle of Chianti!!!, enjoyed the read
March 1st, 2026 06:34
Poetic Licence said:
A practiced that is still practiced today in some parts literally, for other part\'s of the world man has many way of devouring the week and poor. It is in our DNA to do what we need to in order to survive, but there must be another DNA in us, because the devouring of the week and poor these days, is not done out of need it is done out of greed. All that was needed to finish this write was a bottle of Chianti!!!, enjoyed the read
March 1st, 2026 06:34
Eternal
Teddy.15 said:
Thank you for this my dear sorrenbarret, I am indeed seeing shadows. 🌹
March 1st, 2026 06:02
Teddy.15 said:
Thank you for this my dear sorrenbarret, I am indeed seeing shadows. 🌹
March 1st, 2026 06:02
Eternal
David Wakeling said:
For me this is a sad break up of a relationship whether that relationship is with a person or Life itself. I enjoy the rhyme but it certainly is a deep reflection.Excellent
March 1st, 2026 05:03
David Wakeling said:
For me this is a sad break up of a relationship whether that relationship is with a person or Life itself. I enjoy the rhyme but it certainly is a deep reflection.Excellent
March 1st, 2026 05:03
Eternal
Mutley Ravishes said:
I felt this one, Soren, even though I`ve had the good fortune of never losing something/someone I thought would be \"forever.\" Well, the magic of childhood upped and left, however I think that can be found again.
March 1st, 2026 04:01
Mutley Ravishes said:
I felt this one, Soren, even though I`ve had the good fortune of never losing something/someone I thought would be \"forever.\" Well, the magic of childhood upped and left, however I think that can be found again.
March 1st, 2026 04:01
Us
NafisaSB said:
this shows how desperation can lead man to sink to such unimaginable horror, and the means taken to ensure personal survival...sad but true depiction of the truth
March 1st, 2026 00:24
NafisaSB said:
this shows how desperation can lead man to sink to such unimaginable horror, and the means taken to ensure personal survival...sad but true depiction of the truth
March 1st, 2026 00:24
Ghost
Dan Williams said:
You as usual explain things much better than I. I am at the one-year anniversary of losing the dearest of friend this helps. Thank you.
February 28th, 2026 22:23
Dan Williams said:
You as usual explain things much better than I. I am at the one-year anniversary of losing the dearest of friend this helps. Thank you.
February 28th, 2026 22:23
Us
Dan Williams said:
I just watched a documentary that validates everything you present here so elegantly. As I have said many times before, we humans are a sorry lot.
February 28th, 2026 22:20
Dan Williams said:
I just watched a documentary that validates everything you present here so elegantly. As I have said many times before, we humans are a sorry lot.
February 28th, 2026 22:20
Ghost
Kevin Hulme said:
A very fine Poem. So relatable to someone who misses a loved one. A fave.
February 28th, 2026 20:32
Kevin Hulme said:
A very fine Poem. So relatable to someone who misses a loved one. A fave.
February 28th, 2026 20:32
Us
hzugman said:
In truth, at the very bottom we want to survive. Survival in the big picture means passing on genes. It\'s only in surplus that kindness can itself survive.
February 28th, 2026 14:24
hzugman said:
In truth, at the very bottom we want to survive. Survival in the big picture means passing on genes. It\'s only in surplus that kindness can itself survive.
February 28th, 2026 14:24
Us
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is brutal… and even more so knowing it’s grounded in archaeological reality. It doesn’t soften anything. The cadence drives the violence forward without apology, and that makes the confrontation sharper. It lands hard. My kind of poetry, friend. Well done! A fave. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 28th, 2026 12:23
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soren, this is brutal… and even more so knowing it’s grounded in archaeological reality. It doesn’t soften anything. The cadence drives the violence forward without apology, and that makes the confrontation sharper. It lands hard. My kind of poetry, friend. Well done! A fave. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 28th, 2026 12:23
Us
Friendship said:
This poem revolves around the dark and brutal aspects of human survival and evolution, highlighting themes of violence, cannibalism, and the primal instincts that shaped humanity. The poet delves into the savage realities of early human existence, focusing on the conflict between our ancestors and the Neanderthals, along with the moral complexities of survival that sometimes led to extreme actions, such as cannibalism. Yet on the other hand, the poet invites readers to confront the unsettling truths about human nature and the lengths to which people have gone to endure.
February 28th, 2026 09:35
Friendship said:
This poem revolves around the dark and brutal aspects of human survival and evolution, highlighting themes of violence, cannibalism, and the primal instincts that shaped humanity. The poet delves into the savage realities of early human existence, focusing on the conflict between our ancestors and the Neanderthals, along with the moral complexities of survival that sometimes led to extreme actions, such as cannibalism. Yet on the other hand, the poet invites readers to confront the unsettling truths about human nature and the lengths to which people have gone to endure.
February 28th, 2026 09:35
Us
Paul Bell said:
Yes I would say you were correct, though even in the animal kingdom it happens.
Weapons make the man, as the news today tell you. Man for all his great conquests and achievements still harbours the Neandertal man mentality which will never abate it seems.
February 28th, 2026 07:00
Paul Bell said:
Yes I would say you were correct, though even in the animal kingdom it happens.
Weapons make the man, as the news today tell you. Man for all his great conquests and achievements still harbours the Neandertal man mentality which will never abate it seems.
February 28th, 2026 07:00
Us
David Wakeling said:
I\'m not surprised they were cannibals.You only have to look at the average Bank Manager to know they feast on their own kind.A well constructed poem with an important message
February 28th, 2026 05:21
David Wakeling said:
I\'m not surprised they were cannibals.You only have to look at the average Bank Manager to know they feast on their own kind.A well constructed poem with an important message
February 28th, 2026 05:21
Us
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
yes all true, mankind likes to avoid our history, enjoyed the read
February 28th, 2026 03:54
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
yes all true, mankind likes to avoid our history, enjoyed the read
February 28th, 2026 03:54
Us
Doggerel Dave said:
So could we not be better than that these days?
Usual enriched write, Soren, but to what end?
February 28th, 2026 03:50
Doggerel Dave said:
So could we not be better than that these days?
Usual enriched write, Soren, but to what end?
February 28th, 2026 03:50
Us
Teddy.15 said:
The darkest of dark poetry readings and so fabulously executed. Of Man I\'m not a fan some days! 🌹
February 28th, 2026 03:37
Teddy.15 said:
The darkest of dark poetry readings and so fabulously executed. Of Man I\'m not a fan some days! 🌹
February 28th, 2026 03:37
The great illusion
Aman 12 said:
political lament written like a curse...\'The world is not in need of leaders..it has more than a bakery has crumbs. what\'s lacking is a functioning conscience.
February 28th, 2026 03:01
Aman 12 said:
political lament written like a curse...\'The world is not in need of leaders..it has more than a bakery has crumbs. what\'s lacking is a functioning conscience.
February 28th, 2026 03:01
Ghost
Aman 12 said:
\'Every living thing takes on your form” grief expressed in such a mature and subtle way,
February 28th, 2026 02:49
Aman 12 said:
\'Every living thing takes on your form” grief expressed in such a mature and subtle way,
February 28th, 2026 02:49
Ghost
Poetic Licence said:
Has a very personal and loving feel in those words, someone of importance who has passed is still seen and felt in all that surrounds them, very nicely written.
February 27th, 2026 16:58
Poetic Licence said:
Has a very personal and loving feel in those words, someone of importance who has passed is still seen and felt in all that surrounds them, very nicely written.
February 27th, 2026 16:58
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