Comments received on poems by anabasova
Perfectly white
Parisab said:
Sometimes opposites make of the best pairing in poetry and relationships-nice write…
August 27th, 2024 12:55
Parisab said:
Sometimes opposites make of the best pairing in poetry and relationships-nice write…
August 27th, 2024 12:55
What is the cost of a broken heart?
Mase ♪ said:
I dont know if the cost is free, or alot.
Good write!
August 13th, 2024 20:29
Mase ♪ said:
I dont know if the cost is free, or alot.
Good write!
August 13th, 2024 20:29
What is the cost of a broken heart?
sorenbarrett said:
The cost of a broken heart is an instalment plan of increasing interest that accrues faster than the principle paid. A very nice write that ends with that great line.
August 13th, 2024 19:31
sorenbarrett said:
The cost of a broken heart is an instalment plan of increasing interest that accrues faster than the principle paid. A very nice write that ends with that great line.
August 13th, 2024 19:31
Poets
sorenbarrett said:
I liked this poem it talks of the difference between a poet and the rest of the world and it speaks to the heart.
August 12th, 2024 14:48
sorenbarrett said:
I liked this poem it talks of the difference between a poet and the rest of the world and it speaks to the heart.
August 12th, 2024 14:48
Never laugh in your face
sorenbarrett said:
Clear and to the point a statement of taking your back. Well done
July 26th, 2024 20:45
sorenbarrett said:
Clear and to the point a statement of taking your back. Well done
July 26th, 2024 20:45
Impossible to prepare
Cassie58 said:
There is a strong message in your poem. Nothing gained, nothing ventured. There are times when we need to find our courage. Enjoyed the read. Thank you.
December 17th, 2023 01:02
Cassie58 said:
There is a strong message in your poem. Nothing gained, nothing ventured. There are times when we need to find our courage. Enjoyed the read. Thank you.
December 17th, 2023 01:02
Things I want to remember
Pop64 said:
This piece shares those memories of loved ones so vividly through the mirror image reflecting back. Quite original and just lovely.
August 29th, 2023 14:14
Pop64 said:
This piece shares those memories of loved ones so vividly through the mirror image reflecting back. Quite original and just lovely.
August 29th, 2023 14:14
Things I want to remember
Garth Rakumakoe said:
This poem says it all, and personifies all the things we admire about our kin, things we want to take with us, about them, everywhere we go. Well written!
August 28th, 2023 05:44
Garth Rakumakoe said:
This poem says it all, and personifies all the things we admire about our kin, things we want to take with us, about them, everywhere we go. Well written!
August 28th, 2023 05:44
Things I want to remember
L. B. Mek said:
we are curated
by the souls, we allow
to sculpt our heart\'s...
(a lovely read, thanks for sharing)
August 28th, 2023 04:30
L. B. Mek said:
we are curated
by the souls, we allow
to sculpt our heart\'s...
(a lovely read, thanks for sharing)
August 28th, 2023 04:30
I bet
L. B. Mek said:
reads like a poetic life mantra
thanks for sharing, wish you
all the best
July 31st, 2023 05:02
L. B. Mek said:
reads like a poetic life mantra
thanks for sharing, wish you
all the best
July 31st, 2023 05:02
Body
Soman Ragavan said:
My comments on the poem \"Body” by anabasova
You say the body never betrays you. It is the opposite, I am afraid. It has been said “Body language cannot lie.” Whatever our mind wants to put forward can be blocked by our body. Body language is what is used to detect accurately what goes on in the person’s mind. The contradiction between the words and the body language appear clearly. The mind has plenty of things to hide ; it puts forth the messages that are in our favour and hides those that will do us harm. The body does not care : it will just say plainly what is going on in the mind. So, the body stomps the mind. We all think that the mind controls the body : in reality, the body has power that overrides the mind. The way you fidget, you wring your hands, you shift from the right foot to the left, you glance across, you avoid eye contact, you shake, etc., all this betrays your deep thinking, the real you at that moment….
“Truth is always bitter.”
From the Indian television serial : “Kyunki saas bi khabi bahu thi” (“For the mother-in-law was once a daughter-in-law”). (Full acknowledgements are made to the rights-holders)
But then, everybody has their own “truth.”
Soman Ragavan. 15 June, 2023. //
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June 14th, 2023 23:01
Soman Ragavan said:
My comments on the poem \"Body” by anabasova
You say the body never betrays you. It is the opposite, I am afraid. It has been said “Body language cannot lie.” Whatever our mind wants to put forward can be blocked by our body. Body language is what is used to detect accurately what goes on in the person’s mind. The contradiction between the words and the body language appear clearly. The mind has plenty of things to hide ; it puts forth the messages that are in our favour and hides those that will do us harm. The body does not care : it will just say plainly what is going on in the mind. So, the body stomps the mind. We all think that the mind controls the body : in reality, the body has power that overrides the mind. The way you fidget, you wring your hands, you shift from the right foot to the left, you glance across, you avoid eye contact, you shake, etc., all this betrays your deep thinking, the real you at that moment….
“Truth is always bitter.”
From the Indian television serial : “Kyunki saas bi khabi bahu thi” (“For the mother-in-law was once a daughter-in-law”). (Full acknowledgements are made to the rights-holders)
But then, everybody has their own “truth.”
Soman Ragavan. 15 June, 2023. //
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June 14th, 2023 23:01
Find me
Soman Ragavan said:
My comments on the poem \"Find me” by Anabasova
You are going through mental turmoil. Thoughts and emotions are working against you, but you resolve to fight back. You are right in fighting back. You rightly say that a blank mind is more scary than pains. With a blank mind you lose anchor points that help you move along, in spite of problems coming your way. However, you remain lucid because you know you will navigate through all this. The tunnel must end at some point : then there will be light there. “Hope springs eternal in the human breast.” John Keats (1795-1821).
Best wishes, friend. May things work out well for you soon. Soman Ragavan. 4 June, 2023. //
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June 4th, 2023 02:22
Soman Ragavan said:
My comments on the poem \"Find me” by Anabasova
You are going through mental turmoil. Thoughts and emotions are working against you, but you resolve to fight back. You are right in fighting back. You rightly say that a blank mind is more scary than pains. With a blank mind you lose anchor points that help you move along, in spite of problems coming your way. However, you remain lucid because you know you will navigate through all this. The tunnel must end at some point : then there will be light there. “Hope springs eternal in the human breast.” John Keats (1795-1821).
Best wishes, friend. May things work out well for you soon. Soman Ragavan. 4 June, 2023. //
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June 4th, 2023 02:22
Find me
David Wakeling said:
I read this twice but nothing is explained so I couldn\'t understand it
June 4th, 2023 00:00
David Wakeling said:
I read this twice but nothing is explained so I couldn\'t understand it
June 4th, 2023 00:00
A human
sasherington said:
I like it! Is it a free verse poem? Have any inspiration?
April 21st, 2023 19:33
sasherington said:
I like it! Is it a free verse poem? Have any inspiration?
April 21st, 2023 19:33
Home
Mello said:
What a beautiful expression of mutual understanding and respect! It\'s important to set personal boundaries and know where you stand, but it\'s equally important to have someone who understands and respects those boundaries
April 5th, 2023 17:11
Mello said:
What a beautiful expression of mutual understanding and respect! It\'s important to set personal boundaries and know where you stand, but it\'s equally important to have someone who understands and respects those boundaries
April 5th, 2023 17:11
The right way
scarletttt said:
really good concept...i want to see this as a longer poem! i can definitely envision the type of relationship you are trying to portray, and this would be so great if you took this idea and turned it into an entire narrative using figurative language. (which you have really good command over!)
by the way, i have a poem w a similar concept up right now, its called \"the confectionary of a lover\". i\'d love if you took a second to read it and lmk what you think :)
March 25th, 2023 19:48
scarletttt said:
really good concept...i want to see this as a longer poem! i can definitely envision the type of relationship you are trying to portray, and this would be so great if you took this idea and turned it into an entire narrative using figurative language. (which you have really good command over!)
by the way, i have a poem w a similar concept up right now, its called \"the confectionary of a lover\". i\'d love if you took a second to read it and lmk what you think :)
March 25th, 2023 19:48
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