Comments received on poems by Black hole
Rainbow
L. B. Mek said:
a poetic expression of the diverse palette
that those gifted relationships in our lives, represent
even, in their absence..
love the gentleness in your wording
thanks for sharing
March 15th, 2022 05:36
L. B. Mek said:
a poetic expression of the diverse palette
that those gifted relationships in our lives, represent
even, in their absence..
love the gentleness in your wording
thanks for sharing
March 15th, 2022 05:36
Black hole
Blackstar said:
Hmm, how interesting your perception of blackhole is nothingness.
I hope you are feeling better these days. After all we know things can come out of black holes do at least there is that.
March 8th, 2022 21:59
Blackstar said:
Hmm, how interesting your perception of blackhole is nothingness.
I hope you are feeling better these days. After all we know things can come out of black holes do at least there is that.
March 8th, 2022 21:59
Nothingness
Blackstar said:
I\'m too something, anything, to fathom nothing... the only nothing I could u
Conceive would be a thing. My head hurts now and I need Tylenol.
Forgive the humour, nice write... cute Zelda pic
March 8th, 2022 21:55
Blackstar said:
I\'m too something, anything, to fathom nothing... the only nothing I could u
Conceive would be a thing. My head hurts now and I need Tylenol.
Forgive the humour, nice write... cute Zelda pic
March 8th, 2022 21:55
Nothingness
Christina8 said:
A very sad and poignant write. The last line says it all. \"Accepting the pain can be difficult but eventually makes you stronger than ever\". Great job!
March 8th, 2022 20:36
Christina8 said:
A very sad and poignant write. The last line says it all. \"Accepting the pain can be difficult but eventually makes you stronger than ever\". Great job!
March 8th, 2022 20:36
Mirror of love
L. B. Mek said:
tried my best to follow and hopefully
I\'ve gleaned the theme of your message
but sadly, a lot was lost in translation..
still I thank you! for choosing to share
your poetic passion with us
February 14th, 2022 04:50
L. B. Mek said:
tried my best to follow and hopefully
I\'ve gleaned the theme of your message
but sadly, a lot was lost in translation..
still I thank you! for choosing to share
your poetic passion with us
February 14th, 2022 04:50
Clouds
L. B. Mek said:
\'Catching clouds
So many possibilities and *breathtakingly beautiful
at the same time
Giving joy to a youthful life\'
(good metaphor, like the nature imagery
thanks for sharing)
February 7th, 2022 05:31
L. B. Mek said:
\'Catching clouds
So many possibilities and *breathtakingly beautiful
at the same time
Giving joy to a youthful life\'
(good metaphor, like the nature imagery
thanks for sharing)
February 7th, 2022 05:31
World, not The world
L. B. Mek said:
an intriguing read, thanks for sharing
\'*Too small to realise
A version we want to belike
Impossible but tryable
See more
Stars, planets, galaxy\'s
Endless counting
World, not The world
So much beauty outside our eyes\'
January 31st, 2022 05:31
L. B. Mek said:
an intriguing read, thanks for sharing
\'*Too small to realise
A version we want to belike
Impossible but tryable
See more
Stars, planets, galaxy\'s
Endless counting
World, not The world
So much beauty outside our eyes\'
January 31st, 2022 05:31
Life
L. B. Mek said:
this is wonderful, but perhaps there\'s an opportunity
to use poetry form or flow
to help cement your train metaphor, in place
of repeating the word itself (train)
like maybe using repetitive onomatopoeic words
to tap into relatable train sounds
like those metal on metal, \'clickety-clack\'
or those woosh chugging exhales, when doors open and close, etc
it may add a layer to your depiction,
(but what do I know, you write the way that suits you best!
these words are just my 2 cents)
thank you! for choosing to share
such a wonderful read..
(below
is my feeble attempt at using subtly linked word sounds
to replicate that train track, repetitive tone to your poetry\'s flow;
please, forgive me
if you find my rewording is rude
or just far from your intension for this poem
I promise, I meant no disrespect)
\'Life is like a train, A train that rumbles-on
till it hits that finite stop,
Rushing through beautiful landscapes
Some days last longer, than those lost to nights
burrowing through our tunnels of regret,\'
January 21st, 2022 05:24
L. B. Mek said:
this is wonderful, but perhaps there\'s an opportunity
to use poetry form or flow
to help cement your train metaphor, in place
of repeating the word itself (train)
like maybe using repetitive onomatopoeic words
to tap into relatable train sounds
like those metal on metal, \'clickety-clack\'
or those woosh chugging exhales, when doors open and close, etc
it may add a layer to your depiction,
(but what do I know, you write the way that suits you best!
these words are just my 2 cents)
thank you! for choosing to share
such a wonderful read..
(below
is my feeble attempt at using subtly linked word sounds
to replicate that train track, repetitive tone to your poetry\'s flow;
please, forgive me
if you find my rewording is rude
or just far from your intension for this poem
I promise, I meant no disrespect)
\'Life is like a train, A train that rumbles-on
till it hits that finite stop,
Rushing through beautiful landscapes
Some days last longer, than those lost to nights
burrowing through our tunnels of regret,\'
January 21st, 2022 05:24
Tale
Buzz Bray said:
\"Things like me
Things that make life beautiful \"
You see that you are part of the beauty of life.
Acceptance is major to finding happiness in an imperfect world.
Keep writing and seeking!
January 18th, 2022 21:47
Buzz Bray said:
\"Things like me
Things that make life beautiful \"
You see that you are part of the beauty of life.
Acceptance is major to finding happiness in an imperfect world.
Keep writing and seeking!
January 18th, 2022 21:47
