Comments received on poems by Aias
If only
Abby1234 said:
Relatable. Totally understand and totally the way I feel. Although I\'m not 15 yet. LOL
May 2nd, 2023 09:18
Abby1234 said:
Relatable. Totally understand and totally the way I feel. Although I\'m not 15 yet. LOL
May 2nd, 2023 09:18
Have you?
Rocky Lagou said:
Powerful! Definitely relatable and I can sense this apathetic pov your describing. ✨
March 4th, 2022 09:24
Rocky Lagou said:
Powerful! Definitely relatable and I can sense this apathetic pov your describing. ✨
March 4th, 2022 09:24
Then nothing
Rocky Lagou said:
Well done! You described a sense of despair and gloom very well and the wall analogy was well utilized. Well done and hope you feel happier soon! 💖
March 3rd, 2022 10:27
Rocky Lagou said:
Well done! You described a sense of despair and gloom very well and the wall analogy was well utilized. Well done and hope you feel happier soon! 💖
March 3rd, 2022 10:27
Earthly Vessel
Desertwind said:
Yes , one day we\'ll have to face , the reality of it all . A nice poem.
March 1st, 2022 01:35
Desertwind said:
Yes , one day we\'ll have to face , the reality of it all . A nice poem.
March 1st, 2022 01:35
The boy on the roof
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow I felt this! Self-war and chaos in the mind. I love the images you painted and the way you expressed this feeling. The world is corrupt and full of hate but we must pave a way for light to begin to shine! 💖
February 28th, 2022 11:32
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow I felt this! Self-war and chaos in the mind. I love the images you painted and the way you expressed this feeling. The world is corrupt and full of hate but we must pave a way for light to begin to shine! 💖
February 28th, 2022 11:32
The boy on the roof
L. B. Mek said:
indeed, far too often
it all begins from within
this is such a lovely message, of prevailing
to overcome our own, self-defeating
mindsets..
thanks for sharing!
February 28th, 2022 06:45
L. B. Mek said:
indeed, far too often
it all begins from within
this is such a lovely message, of prevailing
to overcome our own, self-defeating
mindsets..
thanks for sharing!
February 28th, 2022 06:45
Barefoot
Bella Shepard said:
I love the imagery of the connection to Mother Earth. Your poem reminds me so much of the John Muir quote \"And into the forest I go, to lose my mind and find my soul\". You\'ve put that experience into words. Thank you!
February 23rd, 2022 07:32
Bella Shepard said:
I love the imagery of the connection to Mother Earth. Your poem reminds me so much of the John Muir quote \"And into the forest I go, to lose my mind and find my soul\". You\'ve put that experience into words. Thank you!
February 23rd, 2022 07:32
Whispers
Bragee said:
The sun
The light
Always shines bright when we keep our heads to the sky!
February 20th, 2022 12:13
Bragee said:
The sun
The light
Always shines bright when we keep our heads to the sky!
February 20th, 2022 12:13
Whispers
Bragee said:
The sun
The light
Always shines bright when we keep our heads to the sky!
February 20th, 2022 12:13
Bragee said:
The sun
The light
Always shines bright when we keep our heads to the sky!
February 20th, 2022 12:13
WHITE ROOM
L. B. Mek said:
being strong enough
to seek the help we need
is a huge factor
in curating, the trajectory of our lives...
(good for you! thanks for sharing)
\'you won’t see them often
for wherever the crowd is
they
are not.
those odd ones, not
many
but from them
come
the few
good paintings
the few
good symphonies
the few
good books
and other
works.
and from the
best of the
strange ones
perhaps
nothing.
they are
their own
paintings
their own
books
their own
music
their own
work.)
from \'The strongest of the strange ones\'
by Charles Bukowski
( http://www.avocadosweet.com/the-strongest-of-the-strange-ones-by-charles-bukowski/ )
February 17th, 2022 04:50
L. B. Mek said:
being strong enough
to seek the help we need
is a huge factor
in curating, the trajectory of our lives...
(good for you! thanks for sharing)
\'you won’t see them often
for wherever the crowd is
they
are not.
those odd ones, not
many
but from them
come
the few
good paintings
the few
good symphonies
the few
good books
and other
works.
and from the
best of the
strange ones
perhaps
nothing.
they are
their own
paintings
their own
books
their own
music
their own
work.)
from \'The strongest of the strange ones\'
by Charles Bukowski
( http://www.avocadosweet.com/the-strongest-of-the-strange-ones-by-charles-bukowski/ )
February 17th, 2022 04:50
FRIENDS
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow this was glorious! I love the passion you wrote this with! Friendship is vital for self-development! 💖🌈💖
February 16th, 2022 10:54
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow this was glorious! I love the passion you wrote this with! Friendship is vital for self-development! 💖🌈💖
February 16th, 2022 10:54
Dawn
Paul Bell said:
Great poem, some just struggle till they can\'t struggle no more.
February 13th, 2022 06:45
Paul Bell said:
Great poem, some just struggle till they can\'t struggle no more.
February 13th, 2022 06:45
