Comments received on poems by Jane Clemons
Yellow
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
I love this ! It made me smile .. great use of words ! 🙂
March 22nd, 2022 03:00
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
I love this ! It made me smile .. great use of words ! 🙂
March 22nd, 2022 03:00
Sticks and Stones
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Really like how you have expressed yourself in this ! Good poem . Words can truly hurt if used in the wrong way !
March 22nd, 2022 02:57
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Really like how you have expressed yourself in this ! Good poem . Words can truly hurt if used in the wrong way !
March 22nd, 2022 02:57
Sticks and Stones
Jane Clemons said:
Thank you for affirming my pain over a person who I entrusted with my heart. Hope my message of the pain that I felt triumphed over any bitterness that came through in the read. Your comment was exquisite...I always appreciate your comments and admire your work ! Thank you. I have much to learn
February 25th, 2022 05:24
Jane Clemons said:
Thank you for affirming my pain over a person who I entrusted with my heart. Hope my message of the pain that I felt triumphed over any bitterness that came through in the read. Your comment was exquisite...I always appreciate your comments and admire your work ! Thank you. I have much to learn
February 25th, 2022 05:24
Sticks and Stones
L. B. Mek said:
\'I\'m going to let her pick up the slack\'
perfect mindset! and a wonderful read
of self affirmation of worth! thanks for sharing...
(if those we intrust with our heart
deem it so easily, squanderable
then, however hard
we must learn the true fact
they\'re part of the rubbish
bringing a stink, in-to our lives
and must therefore be taken out
on good riddance, collection days
while we move on, wrap
all our hurt, in those black bags
of forget and move-on
to the feel of a lighter life
and nature\'s smell of Spring, beginnings
as many times as it takes...!)
February 25th, 2022 05:00
L. B. Mek said:
\'I\'m going to let her pick up the slack\'
perfect mindset! and a wonderful read
of self affirmation of worth! thanks for sharing...
(if those we intrust with our heart
deem it so easily, squanderable
then, however hard
we must learn the true fact
they\'re part of the rubbish
bringing a stink, in-to our lives
and must therefore be taken out
on good riddance, collection days
while we move on, wrap
all our hurt, in those black bags
of forget and move-on
to the feel of a lighter life
and nature\'s smell of Spring, beginnings
as many times as it takes...!)
February 25th, 2022 05:00
Yellow
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow the imagery was really vivid in this poem! I enjoyed your artistic use of certain words and the neologisms that you incorporated like \"yellow-on-yellow.\" It real helps to portray your message and I adored this Yellow World that you painted. Bravo! 💛💛💛
February 23rd, 2022 09:43
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow the imagery was really vivid in this poem! I enjoyed your artistic use of certain words and the neologisms that you incorporated like \"yellow-on-yellow.\" It real helps to portray your message and I adored this Yellow World that you painted. Bravo! 💛💛💛
February 23rd, 2022 09:43
Craving My Lover
Fay Slimm. said:
Worded with undiluted expression of addiction experience this read really touches the heart Jane - - - an incentive indeed for those determined to reach the same freedom. Thank you for sharing it.
February 23rd, 2022 03:55
Fay Slimm. said:
Worded with undiluted expression of addiction experience this read really touches the heart Jane - - - an incentive indeed for those determined to reach the same freedom. Thank you for sharing it.
February 23rd, 2022 03:55
In The Northwoods
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah such apt imagery that will linger long in readers\' minds Jane and those precious moments will stay forever in your memory book of wonderful times spent with young loved ones. A read to remember and thank you for sharing it.
February 23rd, 2022 03:29
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah such apt imagery that will linger long in readers\' minds Jane and those precious moments will stay forever in your memory book of wonderful times spent with young loved ones. A read to remember and thank you for sharing it.
February 23rd, 2022 03:29
Yellow
Fay Slimm. said:
Delighted to have caught your verse of all things yellow and poemed with such linguistic ability has left me watching for that happy shade as my today begins. Thanking you Jane for the smile the read gave me and looking forward to reading more of your work here on MPS.
February 23rd, 2022 03:18
Fay Slimm. said:
Delighted to have caught your verse of all things yellow and poemed with such linguistic ability has left me watching for that happy shade as my today begins. Thanking you Jane for the smile the read gave me and looking forward to reading more of your work here on MPS.
February 23rd, 2022 03:18
Before You Went Away
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow. I also posted about loss today, seems like we were connected. I totally understand how loss can affect a person\'s mental state and emotions. I hope you\'ve had time to recover from the loss. You are loved! 💖
February 22nd, 2022 12:05
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow. I also posted about loss today, seems like we were connected. I totally understand how loss can affect a person\'s mental state and emotions. I hope you\'ve had time to recover from the loss. You are loved! 💖
February 22nd, 2022 12:05
Before You Went Away
Dove said:
It\'s a beautiful poem! Heartfelt ! I know what its like to lose a friend.. Though it wasn\'t of old age... Best to u
February 22nd, 2022 11:20
Dove said:
It\'s a beautiful poem! Heartfelt ! I know what its like to lose a friend.. Though it wasn\'t of old age... Best to u
February 22nd, 2022 11:20
Before You Went Away
L. B. Mek said:
a beautiful elegy, thanks for sharing
may she rest in peace
February 22nd, 2022 06:09
L. B. Mek said:
a beautiful elegy, thanks for sharing
may she rest in peace
February 22nd, 2022 06:09
In The Northwoods
L. B. Mek said:
how wonderfully wholesome, a lovely read
thanks for sharing
February 21st, 2022 06:21
L. B. Mek said:
how wonderfully wholesome, a lovely read
thanks for sharing
February 21st, 2022 06:21
Craving My Lover
Bragee said:
Glad you were able to break that addiction and be able to share this.
February 20th, 2022 12:10
Bragee said:
Glad you were able to break that addiction and be able to share this.
February 20th, 2022 12:10
Craving My Lover
Paul Bell said:
Addiction sure is a one-sided affair.
Glad you\'re still here to tell the story.
February 20th, 2022 09:18
Paul Bell said:
Addiction sure is a one-sided affair.
Glad you\'re still here to tell the story.
February 20th, 2022 09:18
