Comments received on poems by marrianna
A NIGHTINGALE\'S LAMENT
marrianna said:
Please, I look forward to receiving any comments or advice.
October 7th, 2022 03:13
marrianna said:
Please, I look forward to receiving any comments or advice.
October 7th, 2022 03:13
ROMEO and JULIET TWO TURTLE DOVES
L. B. Mek said:
not sure i understood it all
(but that\'s my problem..)
well written, a good read
thanks for sharing
June 17th, 2022 04:44
L. B. Mek said:
not sure i understood it all
(but that\'s my problem..)
well written, a good read
thanks for sharing
June 17th, 2022 04:44
The Ottoman A story that rhymes
L. B. Mek said:
dear gifted Poet
you write, like a Spring breeze
sings, to our cheeks..
what a brilliant reading experience
your lines flow, effortlessly
and ever-so, eloquently!
thank you! for choosing to share
your unquestionable talent!
(\'I tipped toed around not making a sound unable to believe the things that I found\'
maybe:
*tiptoeing, I approach not making a sound, unable to believe the things I found*)
Please
forgive me, I mean no disrespect
simply ignore
my overopinionated foolishness
if you deem my suggestion, rude
in any way
May 17th, 2022 06:09
L. B. Mek said:
dear gifted Poet
you write, like a Spring breeze
sings, to our cheeks..
what a brilliant reading experience
your lines flow, effortlessly
and ever-so, eloquently!
thank you! for choosing to share
your unquestionable talent!
(\'I tipped toed around not making a sound unable to believe the things that I found\'
maybe:
*tiptoeing, I approach not making a sound, unable to believe the things I found*)
Please
forgive me, I mean no disrespect
simply ignore
my overopinionated foolishness
if you deem my suggestion, rude
in any way
May 17th, 2022 06:09
An adventure with a Dragon Fly
Distant View said:
A delightful poem! Inventive, with good imagery and a compelling rhythm! I like this very much!
May 4th, 2022 07:20
Distant View said:
A delightful poem! Inventive, with good imagery and a compelling rhythm! I like this very much!
May 4th, 2022 07:20
THE LANGUAGE OF WAR
Dahlia said:
excellently expressed and very true
may peace soon come to the brothers and sisters of Ukraine....
thank you for this poem, Marriana...
March 24th, 2022 14:18
Dahlia said:
excellently expressed and very true
may peace soon come to the brothers and sisters of Ukraine....
thank you for this poem, Marriana...
March 24th, 2022 14:18
My Rose Coloured Spectacles
Doggerel Dave said:
Light and bright - escapist of course, but non the worse for that.
March 9th, 2022 18:53
Doggerel Dave said:
Light and bright - escapist of course, but non the worse for that.
March 9th, 2022 18:53
JUST ONE FLOWER
Rocky Lagou said:
Very gracious Marrianna! Eloquent and the imagery and execution was great! Modernization brings setbacks to our world and we must be prudent about our actions! Great job! 💖
March 2nd, 2022 09:08
Rocky Lagou said:
Very gracious Marrianna! Eloquent and the imagery and execution was great! Modernization brings setbacks to our world and we must be prudent about our actions! Great job! 💖
March 2nd, 2022 09:08
NATURE\'S KALEIDOSCOPE h
Rocky Lagou said:
Una marvilla de palabras! I\'m also a fellow bilingual (assuming since your from Spain you speak Spanish too) and this was a lovely piece! I felt your emotion and the motivation this poem possessed! 💖
February 28th, 2022 11:42
Rocky Lagou said:
Una marvilla de palabras! I\'m also a fellow bilingual (assuming since your from Spain you speak Spanish too) and this was a lovely piece! I felt your emotion and the motivation this poem possessed! 💖
February 28th, 2022 11:42
NATURE\'S KALEIDOSCOPE h
L. B. Mek said:
an important message and timely..
thanks for sharing
February 28th, 2022 06:58
L. B. Mek said:
an important message and timely..
thanks for sharing
February 28th, 2022 06:58
NATURE\'S KALEIDOSCOPE h
marrianna said:
Enjoy reading my poetry. I live in Malaga. Spain.
February 28th, 2022 04:16
marrianna said:
Enjoy reading my poetry. I live in Malaga. Spain.
February 28th, 2022 04:16
TREES
marrianna said:
Thank you Bella i am a retired lady and I live in Malaga, Spain. I love writing poetry especially nature and the environment and climate change. I look forward to sending more of my poetry.
February 27th, 2022 04:09
marrianna said:
Thank you Bella i am a retired lady and I live in Malaga, Spain. I love writing poetry especially nature and the environment and climate change. I look forward to sending more of my poetry.
February 27th, 2022 04:09
TREES
Bella Shepard said:
Your imagery is breathtaking. I\'m a tree hugger and a nature lover, and you\'ve put into words everything I feel when I walk among the trees. Thank you!
February 23rd, 2022 07:23
Bella Shepard said:
Your imagery is breathtaking. I\'m a tree hugger and a nature lover, and you\'ve put into words everything I feel when I walk among the trees. Thank you!
February 23rd, 2022 07:23
